I just finished my novel.
The final line is trite, sentimental garbage.
Help!
She needs more defined knees.
>>7643041
>The final line is trite, sentimental garbage.
Just call it New Sincerity
>>7643041
>needs help with last line
>doesn't post last line
>mfw
>>7643041
Cut it
Replace all the nouns with adjectives and make all punctuation exclamation points.
Make your title the last line of the book.
