I just finished my novel. The final line is trite, sentimental

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2016-01-31 03:37:59 Post No. 7643041
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 03:37:59 Post No. 7643041 [Report]

I just finished my novel.

The final line is trite, sentimental garbage.

Help!

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 03:38:57 Post No.7643043
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 03:38:57 Post No.7643043 [Report]

She needs more defined knees.

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 03:43:31 Post No.7643054
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 03:43:31 Post No.7643054 [Report]

>>7643041
>The final line is trite, sentimental garbage.
Just call it New Sincerity

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 04:59:25 Post No.7643244
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>>7643041
>needs help with last line
>doesn't post last line
>mfw

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:03:48 Post No.7643260
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:03:48 Post No.7643260 [Report]

>>7643041
Cut it

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:32:00 Post No.7643329
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:32:00 Post No.7643329 [Report]

Replace all the nouns with adjectives and make all punctuation exclamation points.

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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:33:59 Post No.7643337
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Anonymous 2016-01-31 05:33:59 Post No.7643337 [Report]

Make your title the last line of the book.