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FRANCE I NEED HALP!!I'm trying to teach myself French by writing songs, If


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FRANCE I NEED HALP!!

I'm trying to teach myself French by writing songs,
If any of you could vet my wording/ phrasing suggests better versions I would be greatful.
http://youtu.be/2iRsYJIYB8s

Lyrics

Marché pendant des heures
Walked for hours
Sous le soleil
Underneath the sun
A je te une pierre, dans la rivière
Threw a rock, in the river
Jen fis in vœu
I made a wish

Je veux revivre ma vie passée
I want to relive my past life
Nous ferons ce nouveau
We'll do this again
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S'il vous plaît, les gens beaux de France, entendre mon appel
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is this bait
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sadly, this is sincere
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>>51980452
the picture of Stalin is for my own amusement, I can see how that may seem bait-esque; je suis un communiste
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is it total merde??
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>>51981403
Oui, Bon
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>>51981403
Use google translate, even it is better than you
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>A je te une pierre
What are you trying to mean ?
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>>51982635
:,(
Maintenant je vais coucher et mourir
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>>51982758
"A jeté"
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>>51980056
>Marché pendant des heures
Marcher
>Walked for hours
>Sous le soleil
>Underneath the sun
J'ai jeté une pierre, dans la rivière
>Threw a rock, in the river
J'ai fait un vœu
>I made a wish
>Je veux revivre ma vie passée
>I want to relive my past life
>Nous ferons ce nouveau
Nous le ferons encore / Nous ferons encore ça
>We'll do this again

It sucks desu but i don't blame the artist, i blame society
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>>51982758
I typo'd
should read
*a jeté une pierre dans la rivière

Threw a rock in the river
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>>51982963
thanks anon. I'll correct it.
Really appreciate how nous ferons encore ça, very nice
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is at least the pronunciation decent in the song??!
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>>51983443

what u mean senpai?
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>>51983486
Est-ce que la prononciation est potable dans la chanson ?
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>>51980056
I like your voice but you don't pronounce words correctly. Don't worry my english is worse.
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>>51983781
haha merci beaucoup, I have a French friend that lives in my building I usually work with, I'll see if she can help with that; I still have a loooong way. Wanted to try anon and see how it goes.
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