Rate my art

>>2547323
I r8 as 0/8 b8

>>2547323
your sailor moon picture looks so much better

>>2547323
filters and bloom/10
disguising incomplete art with that. What would have loomis said if he was alive

>>2547389
auch

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>>2547323
why does her belly button look like a knife wound?

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>>2547323
You could gain a lot by improving your control over saturation, as well as cool/warm hues. Your picture is caught in this "awkward" color zone where your yellow starts cooling from being too close to green, and it makes your "warm" yellow materials (gold, fire, hair) look fake because of the temperature issue.

You also want to avoid bleeding your saturation and values all over the picture. Even in busy compositions, creating one or two focus areas helps the viewer not get confused as to what's going on, and what's supposed to be important in the piece (the girl's face is, the random flames everywhere aren't).

I would also drop the picture-wide chromatic aberration as it only serves to make the picture blurry. It works well to accentuate controlled, intense value contrasts (such as a single primary light or _one_ fireball) but gives you nothing good when the whole picture is bathed in it.

>>2547894
anime: not even once

>>2547323
garbage taste, even by weeb standards
whole thing looks off, layers of errors
what the fuck is that scarf
what the fuck is that bellybutton
what the fuck are those filters