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Rate my poems 2016-05-26 19:34:55 Post No. 2537323
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Rate my poems Anonymous 2016-05-26 19:34:55 Post No. 2537323 [Report]
Rate my poems
I made two poems all by myself, both are based on real stories


Utopia is coming to town

Today im high
I dont know why
My heart pumps happiness
But some things are still crappyness
I want to change the world
Make it a better place for you and your wife
Your children and your future grand children
The only thing that is necessary
Is to do something functionary
We need to gas the kikes and remove the kebab
Together lets make a better world for you and me
For Gandhi and for the homeless children
For Jesus who died for our sinful nature
Lets share this message of peace and love
Because soon it will all be fun
Childhood memories

I look outside my window
I see happy children playing outside
I smile because it's been a while since I saw that
Everything in this world seems so bad lately
I enjoy this special moment
I look again and I see something awful
A group of muslims rape the children
I become numb again
I become numb because I see this discrimination
This invasion and genocide of my people
I feel the rage start inside of me
My blood pumps furiously in my body
My face turns red
I hear loud screaming
I look outside again and I feel relief
The muslims were driven over by a tank
Thank you Trump
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 19:39:30 Post No.2537333
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 19:39:30 Post No.2537333 [Report]
Wow. A poem made of /pol/ memes. My kids would love it. In fact, the first sentence my daughter ever said to me was: "this is an illustration board, fuck off to /lit/"
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 19:41:42 Post No.2537339
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 19:41:42 Post No.2537339 [Report]
>>2537333
Whoever said art can only be leftwing was wrong, am i right?
I mean if this isn't art, i don't know what art is ;)
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 20:50:07 Post No.2537418
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Anonymous 2016-05-26 20:50:07 Post No.2537418 [Report]
>>2537339
while poem can be art, this board is named wrong, it's focus is illustration, with very little traditional sculpting
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