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I'm trying to improve my style by using finer lines. And
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I'm trying to improve my style by using finer lines. And this was my first real attempt on clothing based on a sample.

Do you like it?
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>>2499684
Nice :D
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>>2499692
Thanks so much! ^^
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It's garbage. Read the sticky, don't make a seperate thread for your shit but post it in the beginner thread.
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>>2499700
Sorry, I thought this board was about critique so it should be appropriate to create an own thread.
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>>2499684

Lines are nice, rest, like perspective (see torso broadening too much, especially on shoulders) or proportions is off and needs focus. Also pose is not very dynamic.
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>>2499703
We have generals for things like this so the front page doesn't go to shit. Delete your thread and come join us! >>2498305
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>>2499692
dont do this to him man LMAO
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>>2499716
I thought he is leaning back on his right side.
Maybe I should post the version without jacket, too...
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>>2499722
I'd like to, but how do I delete it? The "delete post" underneath this thread doesn't work for me -> blank page in return.
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>>2499728
Next to your post number there is a dropdown arrow, go delete -> post (not file).
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>>2499736
>Error: You cannot delete a post this old.

I guess it's up to a mod.
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>>2499740
How old might you be?
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>>2499684
No i do not like it. Try practicing basic human anatomy before trying out stylized stuff or trying to mix human and animals
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>>2499684
This reminds me of my sphincter throbbing after hours of homo sex
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>>2499684

This is /ic/ mate, not /postyourshit/
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>>2502405
>mate

OI WOTCHA GUVNAH I SEE U FREQUENT THE 4CHINNY DOODLYBOARDS AS WELL MATE WHATS THE DEAL WITH ALL THE BLOODY YANKS EH?
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