Someboby can fix my draw?
i don't know
TwT
>>2488487
the only thing i can prescribe to you is a handgun.
>>2488487
>a handgun
What?
Why?
>>2488487
TwT
>>2488493
Are you thick in the head gurl?
>>2488487
learn bone and muscle anatomy
>>2488487
Sorry about people being rude here. They ruin the /ic/ experience a bit, but for future reference, it's expected of you to post your work or questions in existing threads if you want polite critique or advice.
There's a lot a lot to fix in your drawing, at least not in any concrete way that makes sense. It looks like there wasn't a whole lot of construction or measuring, and it's just a guesswork of an outline. Like >>2488503 said, you should study anatomy. To make figures that look nice, stylized or not, they have to begin as three-dimensional shapes, or else you're essentially just going to get flat, probably strangely empty looking (or bizarrely incorrect) products like you posted.
It's a hard stage to start to comprehend, but keep going and you'll be really happy with the results when you get there.
>>2488511
How?
>>2488525
Perfect
>>2488524
http://lmgtfy.com/?q=art+anatomy
>>2488487
I tried.
Plus this.
>>2488521
Look at some figure drawings and study up on anatomy. Drawing with Force is a personal favorite. Draw with more line weight, give some thick and thin lines rather than doing everything thin.
My cover-over drawing has a ton of mistakes just it's just to help you visualize to see "Oh, that would be nicer'.
>>2488521
Thanks, i try, the anatomy is some hard.
>>2488530
Thanks anon!
it helps me a lot!
>>2488521
>>2488544
Oops. Wrong topic and on mobile so i can't delete my post. Oh well!
R8 my drawing IC. I drew it on my Galaxy Note 4
>>2488570
Thanks, it looks pretty
You need to be 18 or over to post here
>>2488570
>R8 my Galaxy Note 4 IC. I drew this drawing on it.
>>2488588
That's exactly what I said. If you had dyslexia.
>>2488590
>That's exactly what I said. If you had dyslexia.
>>2488594
Lol, underage PLS go.
>>2488596
it's shit, lurk more .
uwu
>>2488549
nice. Is this your work?
>>2489190
Hi newfriend.
>>2489190
>>2489205
kek
And the other draw....
>>2489293
Alright, so, good news, the drawing looks a lot better. Looks kinda cool. Honest. Keep going.
Bad news is, you're going to aggravate people by continuing to post outside the beginner/draw/alternative/question threads. Especially if you made more than one thread just for yourself and are posting in both of them.
The best we can do for you from here is refer you to the sticky and politely ask that you be considerate when deciding where to post. Stay around and enjoy the dynamic of the board a little more before posting or you'll attract troll answers like a lot of people in this thread gave.
>>2489293
You have a good base, anon.
Study Loomis, all the other books in the sticky, and lurk /ic/ for about a year and you'll make some absolutely solid progress.
>>2489320
Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry
next time i post my stuff in the correct threads, thanks
>>2489344
i want study all those stuff, really
>>2489344
are these EM gist ?
>>2489395
Google leads me here
http://aztcfireflower.deviantart.com/gallery/
