brazilian ghetto super hero

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brazilian ghetto super hero 2016-04-13 14:55:00 Post No. 2484917
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brazilian ghetto super hero Anonymous 2016-04-13 14:55:00 Post No. 2484917 [Report]

I'm doing a comic about a brazilian super hero and my mom never really gets what the hell is happening in my pics and she's the only person who I can ask about aside from internet people (and noone on facebook or deviant art cares about my art)

maybe people from 4chan will say something about it...

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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:19:24 Post No.2484954
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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:19:24 Post No.2484954 [Report]

>>2484917
It just doesn't look appealing, mainly because you break a lot of fundamental rules.
You have to learn the rules, before you break them.
Even if you would only fix the perspective, it would help so much.

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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:19:39 Post No.2484955
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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:19:39 Post No.2484955 [Report]

>>2484917
How old are you?

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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:27:39 Post No.2484961
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Anonymous 2016-04-13 16:27:39 Post No.2484961 [Report]

>>2484917
Terrible compositions is your problem it seems.

It's not your only problem, but it's one of the worst

For one thing, you should decide what is the essential "thing" the panel is about, and put clear focus on that, and eliminate other things that aren't needed.

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Anonymous 2016-04-13 17:00:08 Post No.2484988
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Anonymous 2016-04-13 17:00:08 Post No.2484988 [Report]

any links on courses where I can fix the perspective?

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Anonymous 2016-04-14 05:32:40 Post No.2485799
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>>2484988
This book, right here, is what you need.