My first drawn on Illustrator

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My first drawn on Illustrator 2016-03-28 14:11:09Post No. 2461368
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My first drawn on Illustrator Anonymous 2016-03-28 14:11:09 Post No. 2461368 [Report]

I just finished my first vector illustration. I'm not studying art or something, just bored. I know I'm not good on drawing, so I accept comments to improve.
What do u think about it?

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Anonymous 2016-03-28 14:13:46 Post No.2461373
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Anonymous 2016-03-28 14:13:46 Post No.2461373 [Report]

Don't know why colours change when I upload the pic. I'm a fuckin' newfag.

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Anonymous 2016-03-28 14:16:30 Post No.2461378
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Anonymous 2016-03-28 14:16:30 Post No.2461378 [Report]

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Fixed

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Anonymous 2016-03-28 15:43:56 Post No.2461507
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Anonymous 2016-03-28 15:43:56 Post No.2461507 [Report]

>>2461471

Stop bumping, /ic/ is a slow as fuck board. As for your piece, there is not much to say and I'm going to give it to you straight: it's bad.

The composition is shit, colours are shit, the typesetting is shit, the font is shit, your shapes are shit. If you really want to improve and not just asspats, work on developing a feeling for what is aesthetically pleasing and maybe learn to draw.

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Anonymous 2016-03-28 16:45:32 Post No.2461610
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Anonymous 2016-03-28 16:45:32 Post No.2461610 [Report]

Please post in the correct thread instead of making your own. Your just taking up space