I don't really come to /ic a lot, but I had some canvas and oils so I made this off of a whim only using palette knives.
Thoughts?
It would look a lot nicer if you used the darker paint make out the forms. Right now it's a bit of a mess to look at, but you can make out that it's waves and cliffs if you try. Otherwise it looks like random paint.
So don't consider it finished yet.
Generally people here don't start new threads for critiques, but instead go to a drawing thread or a beginner thread.
>>2428123
while it was loading, from top to bot, and it was showing the top half, it was nice to look at. so I would say using a knife for objects far away, and for light colors is actually good
the bottom half is where I would say it needs some details, ad another layer of objects. this time with something better for details, maybe a smaller knife if that's your thing
tldr: I like the top half, not the bottom one
you should be ashamed of yourself to be so proud of showing this around these parts of town
>>2428140
How's this?
>>2429081
Much better and more balanced.
>>2429081
the wave looks like a white version of donald trump's hair piece. that mostly has to do with the uniform curve of your strokes. You could do better.
