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/ic/ i need help point out what's wrong with my master piece
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/ic/ i need help

point out what's wrong with my master piece
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try working with reference
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The abdominal area looks really lumpy
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the sternocleidomastoid muscle on the neck isn't attached right. it should join at the collarbone
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why is everything but the thighs lean? the thighs are flabby and without definition
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more arm referenc for you
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>>2421924

It needs loomis.
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abdominal muscles aren't balls, more like cuts of steak.
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try not to make the belly button a slit
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One way to help decrease the bulbousness of your abs is to highlight them less like balloons and more like planes.
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thanks guys
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Even a small shadow on the thigh can help show it's muscle and not fat. All you need to do is suggest definition
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more thigh for you
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>>2421924
something tells me you are not the artist and just looking for ways to bash him
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>>2422621
OP pic was made by a dev on /vg/'s agdg that makes 4k/mo on Patreon (with a 3d porn game) OP is probably some insecure dev making a game that one cares about, he linked this thread on that general an all. Just another day on /agdg/, ego fights there are worse than on /ic/.
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>>2421981
Would you, /ic/? I totally would. I would let her rape the fuck out of me.
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>>2422658
No body cares.
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>>2422660
>being low test beta numale
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>>2422757
>not letting a chick rape you makes you low test beta
that being said, I would
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>>2421925
roid body
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