some of my newer stuff
feedbacks on these pls
kinda weird, reminds me of the stuff you see in art museums
it all kinda falls apart as soon as you show your hand at how well you draw representationally. which is to say not particularly great. i'd say give this stuff a break and draw from life.
they're well-executed, just boring. I feel like I've seen this particular contemporary style (elements of basquiat and twombly, along with collage-esque elements a la pop art and rauschenberg) like a zillion times. galleries might still eat it up though, so good luck.
>>2409246
thanks!
![latest[2].png](https://i.imgur.com/NPF8u1Q.png "latest[2].png")
>>2409199
Bold and brash and belongs in the trash.
>>2409321
This
most look like you got a big piece of paper to do a bunch of studies on, then you did half of one and got bored and splattered it with random shit, stepped back, said "eh" and called it a day
also, what is with all these people thinking they're special enough to make their own threads for their own very super special art? if it doesn't speak volumes to entitlement culture, i don't know what does. pick one of the many preexisting threads to ask for a critique on your bullshit art and sage goes in all the fields
>>2409206
i like this one
i want more narrative suggestion in your pieces, which is a rare desire for me.
dig the diptych thing
>>2409695
this is a person who can't into emotion
i bet you don't understand jazz either, pleb
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>>2409725
i actually like jazz. i actually really like contemporary jazz, jazz fusion, etc.
what i don't like is lazy, entitled artists who throw random shit around and expect everyone else to feeeeeeeeeeel something about it
What are the sizes of these pieces?
>>2409211
who are you ?
i think i have seen this before
It's interesting. I like it.
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>>2409209
Juxtaposing two opposing elements is what makes a composition dramatic, and from that, interesting. It looks like you're trying to contrast, among other things but mainly, "contained/neat/representational" with "expressive/loose/sloppy", but the drama is lost on difference between your level of skill in rendering the representational elements of the composition and the sloppy elements not being great enough.
tl;dr You're not good enough to make sloppy drawings and get away with it, yet
>>2409247
agree. first on the left.
i could say these are fake trombly
potential, work on execusion
