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Please rip on me so I can improve 2016-02-09 11:15:18Post No. 2388806
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Please rip on me so I can improve Anonymous 2016-02-09 11:15:18 Post No. 2388806 [Report]

How can I improve this (other than making it darker, I only had a basic 2h-6b graphite set)? What did I do wrong/right?

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Anonymous 2016-02-09 11:20:59 Post No.2388812
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>>2388806
Clearer image

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Anonymous 2016-02-09 17:08:52 Post No.2389070
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>>2388812
proportions nad measurements are off. if you want to practice shading/rendering, try tracing. Nothing wrong with that if you're using it as a tool to learn.

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Anonymous 2016-02-09 18:07:44 Post No.2389132
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Anonymous 2016-02-09 18:07:44 Post No.2389132 [Report]

do it more

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Anonymous 2016-02-09 18:20:32 Post No.2389152
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>>2388806

Why did you render this if the drawing was off? Couldn't you see that the drawing wasn't right? Anyway good job I guess if you just want to be a human photocopier. Get a mirror and draw yourself if you want to learn.

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Anonymous 2016-02-09 19:03:57 Post No.2389231
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Anonymous 2016-02-09 19:03:57 Post No.2389231 [Report]

>>2388806
you're doing fine just keep drawing.

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