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story Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:37:50 Post No. 2344809 [Report]

i made this story a bit ago, looking for criticism and an idea of what i should work on next assuming i do well with these kinds of stories its horror/suspense i tried to go for physiological horror

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/52802631-where-am-i

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:38:54 Post No.2344811
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:38:54 Post No.2344811 [Report]

its the first thing i have really done and shared with people

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:39:10 Post No.2344812
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:39:10 Post No.2344812 [Report]

>>2344809
>-where-am-i

The wrong board

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:41:59 Post No.2344814
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:41:59 Post No.2344814 [Report]

should be able to click on the title for the story

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:43:20 Post No.2344815
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:43:20 Post No.2344815 [Report]

>>2344812
>>>2344809 (OP)
>>-where-am-i
>The wrong board

what board should I go to then faggot?

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:49:22 Post No.2344819
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:49:22 Post No.2344819 [Report]

>>2344815
LOL

>what board should I go to then faggot?

>>>/lit/

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:52:04 Post No.2344823
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:52:04 Post No.2344823 [Report]

oh shit, sorry kinda new here

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:52:13 Post No.2344824
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:52:13 Post No.2344824 [Report]

>>2344809
Get your shit together

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:53:27 Post No.2344825
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:53:27 Post No.2344825 [Report]

>>2344823
lol

>kinda new here

sure buddy

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:54:43 Post No.2344827
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 11:54:43 Post No.2344827 [Report]

i do admit to lingering around the random section but outside of that i haven't really explored much

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Anonymous 2016-01-10 12:40:02 Post No.2344853
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Anonymous 2016-01-10 12:40:02 Post No.2344853 [Report]

>>2344809
like the other guy said, get your shit together. You keep referencing your characters actions in random tenses.

We all have to get beat up a lot before we learn to fight. this is an early defeat, go back to the drawing board