Can I get your thoughts on this piece I'm working on? I challenged myself to redraw something that I drew in high school and I wanted someone else to take a look and critique my perspective, poses, etc.
>>2337640
close up
>>2337640
>>2337640
another close up
>>2337640
original piece that I drew in high school
>>2337640
your process bugs me
try to work on the whole piece at the same time.
>>2337934
It's the only way I can get any work done. I can't stay in a single area for too long without getting sick of it. It's a bad habit and I'm trying to work on it though.
>>2337934
This. It's detrimental to your value grouping. Which, ya know, will make or break a b&w piece.
>>2338055
>I can't stay in a single area for too long without getting sick of it
but that's exactly what you are doing, and what im suggesting you not do.
>>2338222
Ah, gotcha. I misread that. I'll start laying down tone evenly across the piece then.
>>2337645
very flat, no depth. Your values are off. think foreground/mid ground/background.
>>2337640
This is pretty cool man, got a tumblr?
>>2337645
Elephant looks hilarious in this one, the hell were you thinking man.
How did you have the confidence to draw something like this?
I'm in HS right now (i'm 18), and I'm at that point where I can't draw a single thing because I'm too aware of how bad my skill level is
>>2340088
retard that piece is old. they're redoing it. they're posting the original for comparison. ffs man
