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It's not that great, but I'm curious: what's your
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It's not that great, but I'm curious: what's your opinion on this drawing?
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Wow I really like this, you look talented :D
I can't even draw a stickfigure
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>>2324948
Really? I'm only 14...
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>>2324947

Depends, are you in high school already? Or are you still waiting for the hell that is 8th grade to be over?

I'll just say that if you haven't gone to a high school homecoming yet, it's mediocre. If you are in or past high school, read the sticky and work hard at it.
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Wow! Thats really really really good! You're going places kid!
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(Just to clarify: I'm a proud furfag.)
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>>2324952
I'm in grade 14
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>>2324951
>>2324959
Damn! You look very talented for your age, I know a cousin that can draw but whatever desu XD
do u make commisions? you're better than many artists here!!
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>>2324952
Oops, bad English attacks again! I meant to say that I'm in year 14
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>>2324968
WOW! Haha no problem it happens X3
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>>2324952
I'll do it
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>>2324947
shit/10
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>>2324989
Post your art.
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>>2324989
What did I do wrong? Just tell me and I'll try to solve the problem in future projecta
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>>2324999
Don't sweat. This is a rough place for quality critiques.

Depending on your aims, it's pretty good.

I'm assuming you're going for a sense of realism inside a cartoonish landscape. On that note, the atmosphere is there, but the visual weight needs more focus on what the image is trying to convey. You also might bring the guy up a bit in line with perspective and bring more value into the foreground.
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>>2324947
The picture is good, though I find the horizontal lines in the sky a bit harsh. Perhaps if you had shaded it using circular strokes they may have blended better and produced fluffier clouds; perhaps a little smudging then erasing with a knead-able eraser might also help. The vertical lines is the grass look good though, as does the mountain and figure.
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>>2325112
cont.. also a little more variation in contrast between the mountain, sky and grass would add punch.
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