>>2315185
Try having some panels where the background is white too

>>2315259
i agree with that, i think its very easy to look at and tell what everything is supposed to be. your lines could be more round and fluid, but i think you are off to a good start

>>2316038
>>2315259

tnx for the feed back guys;much appreciated
i tried executing your suggestions in my practice. i dont know if i improved.lol

first time posting here so i had trouble navigating back here

i cant seem to post a reply with a pic without it the captcha expiring :/

so ill just use imgur

http://imgur.com/sYZCErd

>>2315185
maybe you should learn how to draw first ;D

>>2318471
I had another pic there before ur comment. Link only, cant reply a pic. Y?!

First pic with the wolf thing was made without line art so yea

>>2315185
Yeah it looks quite good, everything is simplified and that is great - the biggest mistake people do when drawing in black na white is trying to make drawings overcomplicated while they dont really have enough skills to make it look nice so everything is just a mess. In the second page you've linked imho his face is a bit too detailed, but that red sigil-thing looks really good anyway. Other critique I have is not linked to black and white, so I will omit it (some things in your art looks wonky but hey you will learn :) )
Good luck <:

>>2318157
that looks good!! i dont know what kind of story you plan to tell with this but i could imagine (and kind of see you now) you using simple vs more detailed/realistic panels in an interesting and dynamic way