feedback please

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>>2301123

>>2301123
Nice broken neck

It seems to be undone, yet :)

>>2301123
eyes are really flat, that blue aura around the whole figure with the blue tint only being on the left side feels weird, look at that neck closely from the chin to the bottom of the neck wayyy too long

>>2301123
It's good comic-tier art.

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>>2301124
got em'

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>>2301124

>>2301123
love the background, eyes need more detail

>>2301123
It's a bit hard to tell whats going on at a glance, and I'm still a bit unsure because on further inspection I think maybe smoke is coming out of his mouth and nose?
Since this is an illustration the first fast fix I'd do on this before worrying about anatomy or any other thing is just make sure to separate the man, the smoke and the skull in terms of value range. it also wouldnt hurt to clean up those edges.

>>2301123
I love it. It looks really good. Very natural and confident strokes, lines and colors