>>2289574
1. Resize image
2. Stop drawing in your notebook
3. Learn to draw
4. Fundamentals
5. Be over 18
6. Don't come back before you have completed all the steps above

>>2289592
But .... what's wrong with it?

learn to draw a circle, maybe, lol. draw something that hasnt been drawn a million times by middle schoolers everywhere. also, invest in a sketchbook, no one wants too see those lines. learn to draw faces on people first. also dont use your fucking saliva to shade with a bic pen... kek

The sun is okay but the moon ruins it.

>>2289725
creepier looking moon than the iPhone emoji

>>2289574
Yeah too bad for the lips, good thing you pointed that out, cause everything else is amazing.

>>2289711
I'm left handed, which can be tough when using pen because smudges ensue

>I fucked up the lip

No, you fucked up literally everything. You should have never pressed the "Post" button.

Maybe I'm blind or something. I can't see that much being wrong with it.

>>2289840
buy/make your own smudge guard (half glove thing that prevents smudging)

>>2290118
>You should have never picked up a pencil

Fix'd.

>>2291525
its not done in pencil faggot

>>2291531

Quite obviously done with an ink pencil you mongoloid.

>>2291581
>ink pencil
Bait is strong in this one

>>2291581
>ink pencil
kys

>>2289574
U need moar ractice. Learn to cross hatch well. I suggest going to myseums and study anatomy drawings that use cross hatching. The moon does not look like hes looking at the sun.

>>2289574
Also use the sun as a light source .