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>>270358
It looks like a face.
>>270358
i dig it, what's it for?
looks a bit facey though, yeah. and the S seems a bit off to me compared to the rest of the font
>>270386
Internet coffee company that will probably fail in six weeks. Really interested in the face, though. What do you think could reduce that?
>>270452
Lose the 'eyes' on top of each column and it should be gone.
>>270358
Good but the top just needs to be a a dome. Yours is good but turk palaces/mosques go up in layers. try that
>>270465
this.
plus: the line width should match that of your font. did you cut off the lower two corners on the T? wouldn't do that. ever.
also, it's a bit too narrowly tracked, so that the TA pair looks tight. i know that reworking that might also lead to a rework of the size relation of type and picture mark.
is the "TM" really necessary? always looks odd and redundant to me and breaks the balance. but if you need it, align it with the cap height (not the one of the S!).
>>270358
Your own logo probably needs more work than the one you're presenting here
Don't worry about the face they're just Making the user perception too significant in that regard, it only adds if anything cause it is clearly a mosque at a glance. Personally I would work on the S, keep the bottom left going bit like it is but I hate the way the sharp edge on the top going right breaks into the negative space of the U.
Whats wrong with it having a hidden face?
>>270358
Looks like a guy with a boner giving double middle fingers.
Pretty nice but if I were you I'd do that.
