Hi, I recently launched a website and presented it on this /lit/ post : >>>/lit/7795466
They gave me confusing feedback on the logo. What do you think.
>>260811
I don't hate it but it needs some final details for example the kerning on the N the beta shouldn't be that high and the yellow is too energetic reminds me of capcom.
first things that comes to mind is a noodle soup brand. I have no idea what nessir is. Upon reading the /lit/ thread, I realized it's a share text site.
I'd suggest using a more "literary" font, with less energetic colors.
I don't understand the name, but here's a suggestion
>>260848
the beta shouldn't be that low..
>>260851
it's supposed to be on the same line like a text document. that's my reasoning
>>260855
something like this
>>260862
beta being on top seems wrong, right on 4chan though
>>260848
This is nice, but it does seem to lack some balance.
Then again, it's kinda irrelevant really... Since the beta, I assume, wouldn't be part of the logo in the end.
>>260862
Hey, Thanks for all your comments, and the logo proposal.
I understand that the logo stands too energetic but it should, since the concept of my website isn't the same with the classical way we see litterature.
Users have only 5 minutes to write into a story. The website is all about stories that people begin, and others continue those stories. But as every user has only 5 minutes per story, that is quite energetic.
I mean there is a movement thing going on.
Thats why I don't really like this one. I need a better idea.
Check out nessir.com to understand the concept, maybe you can than help me even better. Thanks a lot for your time.
