https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YADTocvDHm0

is the tiled logo in the background a watermark? Or is it meant to be there?

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>>257287
If it's just a watermark then that's fine, but if it's meant to be there, remove that shit, it makes it too cluttered.

That top blue splash looks out of place, I feel like the logo should be completely between the white and blue sides and the blue at the top distracts it a little.

The outline of the test needs to be smoothed out, you can see all the hard lines rather than it being a smooth curve.

The dot of the i is a little unclear, looking at the blue negative space it makes it look like the dot of the i isn't there and there is just a blue squiggle where it should be, I see what was meant to have been done there, continuing the cream line from the outside to form the i in one smooth line but I don't think it works.

Other then that I like it, I think the colours work well together and I dig the old milk bar feel to the text used and such.