First time experimenting with Illustrator, any feedback on how it looks? suggestions?

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2016-01-15 00:29:20Post No. 251659
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 00:29:20 Post No. 251659 [Report]

First time experimenting with Illustrator, any feedback on how it looks? suggestions?

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Anonymous 2016-01-15 00:34:44 Post No.251660
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 00:34:44 Post No.251660 [Report]

>>251659
Change the font, such a disgusting thing should not even exist...

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Anonymous 2016-01-15 01:58:13 Post No.251671
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 01:58:13 Post No.251671 [Report]

Yes change the font to cosmic-sans

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Anonymous 2016-01-15 03:19:04 Post No.251687
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 03:19:04 Post No.251687 [Report]

>>251671
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 16:48:16 Post No.251804
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 16:48:16 Post No.251804 [Report]

Color-wise this looks really not up-to-par, so maybe look into that

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Anonymous 2016-01-15 19:21:58 Post No.251818
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Anonymous 2016-01-15 19:21:58 Post No.251818 [Report]

>>251659
Looks like clip art desu

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Anonymous 2016-01-16 03:05:29 Post No.251865
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Anonymous 2016-01-16 03:05:29 Post No.251865 [Report]

>>251659
your color choices are JUST tier but since it's your first piece I'll let it slide

keep experimenting with the pen tool and focus on making things that are gradually more complex (complex does not equal better, but if you're starting it's best to get experience with it)

look up pieces on behance or pinterest or some shit and study their color choices

use adobe color to help you pick colors if you're struggling