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Critique my logo for 'Vaen Media'


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Critique my logo for 'Vaen Media'
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Can you explain your logo? What does it say about this company?
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>>250700
I'm not sure I like the imagery.

An up arrow for power or superior, yet contained. And media as in music and video?
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You're better off with a word mark based on >>250702 and >>250718's comments
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It's too ambiguous
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I see a pencil, but somebody out there is going to see a buttplug.

One route worth considering might be to cut the top shape entirely, and make a V and/or A out of the negative space in the E.
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please allow me to read "vaen media"
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>>250700
I like the style of type face used, the E and the N work well together. I think the negative space arrow shape that the A forms could be utilised more with the shaft travelling down the centre of the E and maybe even carrying it down through the N as well.

One big gripe I have with it is that if the company is 'Vaen' the V gets lost in this logo, if I were to see this logo without knowing the name of the company I would read it as AEN or even CEN at a stretch, but I don't see VAEN in it.
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It is completely unreadable
It does not convey anything about the company
It is too simple to convey anything significant
It is too complex to have an immediate response or leave a lasting impression
The inconsistent widths are pissing me off
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>>250884
>The inconsistent widths are pissing me off

That's the major problem here indeed.
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>>250884
Bang on there mate
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Really depends on what Vaen Media is.
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Never comment on any design unless you know the brief.

What's the brief??? Then we comment.
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>>250753
Anything can be a buttplug if you try hard enough...
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None of the corners are rounded but the top & the widths are inconsistent
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>>250700
Sorry OP but it sucks, it's totally illegible and incoherent. Only the top symbol would be much better and simple logo
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Makes you look like a shitty edgelord. Go with a wordmark, because as is its an indecipherable mess. And yes, it looks like a buttplug.
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>>252163
this.

Fix these, and you got yourself a logo.
Fix the character width inconsistency too ("A" is much too wide in comparison to "EN").
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>>250700
Looks strangely foreign and implies to me nothing about what you do.
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