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It's been a good few days since the last one was up, so here's a chance to post some (hopefully new or old-enough-to-be-fresh) content.
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putting up a few sequences
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I'm not really certain if this qualifies as "western" art or not, but it feels more /d/ than /aco/.
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Sad to see these threads seem to be withering here.
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>>6617572
/aco/ is actually just /d/ for western art. it was created just to solve the "problem" of western content on /d/. It doesn't sound like it from the board description, but /d/ generals make up the bulk of the board.
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What's the rule on kisekae stuff in these threads?
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>>6618106
Will you get banned or deleted for posting it? No. Do we want to see the same 20-30 that have been posted here time and again? Also no.

But then, damn well everything else is a repost too, so...
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>>6618018

That's why I'm creating a board on another chan ;)
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>>6618018
Not /d/ generals. Dickgirls.

Which just proves it's exactly western /d/.
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>>6618609
TG threads on /aco/ are more alive than they are on /d/, so I'm calling bullshit.
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Hey, I don't suppose anyone would happen to remember a particular forced feminization story?

It was about a guy who at first worked as a whore+companion to older divorced or widowed women, and he had only one testicle, very little facial hair due to 1/8 native ancestry, and this Hispanic henchwoman who beat him up had called him puta and he contemplated the choice-dilemma between "puta", "puto" and a nonexisting word for a non-gay male prostitute.

I can't seem to find it, whatever I try.
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>>6619102
That's just because there's far more western tg content than eastern. Granted most of it is shit.
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Anyone writefags doing any interesting TG stuff?
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>>6619208
I'm getting to it, practising my general world-design and writing skills, and wrapping my head around the issue involved in such stories.
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>>6619208

I've got 3 or 4 in the pipeline, but I write slow and most of my stuff dies part way.

I'm trying to move out of my usual niches (either wish-fulfilment happy end TG or gentle femdom/light corruption TG - think sexy bond villains), so I'm actually working on a prompt from the bimbo general thread on /aco/.

I'd flag it as consensual TG, consensual temporary bimbofication, preg and happy end.
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OC friends.
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>>6619559
sauce?
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>>6619636
It looks like To-Love-Ru to me.
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>>6619636
Noucome, episode 2
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>>6619208
I started to write this but I sort of hate it and am probably gonna abandon it. Maybe somebody can get something out of it.

http://pastebin.com/pWCQMNVd
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>>6619208
I'm working on a short story now. It'll be 4 or 5 chapters long. I'm almost done, but I want to wait until it's finished before fully revising and releasing it.

Two words: Robot tits.
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>>6619970
>http://pastebin.com/pWCQMNVd

My only real criticism would be that you repeat some words a few too many times ("core", "sag", etc.). Otherwise, this was a pretty awesomely done sequence, and there's a lot of different places you can go with the premise.

You're being too self-critical. I don't think you should give up on it.
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>>6620006
Thanks, man, appreciate the feedback. This is still "first draft" stuff so I know if I finished it I'd be going back and changing up some of my repetitive words, that's a huge issue I have.

I haven't totally given up on it yet, as much as I'm tempted to. It'd be a one off almost surely, so at least I wouldn't have to set up other stories. I'm just getting pretty into elastic stuff, and with my TG writing I figured it was a good crossover of the two. Large insertions and body shifting would be in this. Just gotta find time and motivation.

Appreciate it again, keep doing you. Big fan.
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>>6619636
To Love Ru Darkness episode 5 anon-kun
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>>6620054
So like... is the mc supposed to 'be' elastigirl? Or just really stretchy? Please don't write another tg superhero story.
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>>6619208
I've been writing some stuff on tfgamessite, I go by JoeForest - some of my work is pretty /d/, but it's all tg
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>>6620125
Yeah it's that he sort of becomes her clone and lives in the same universe as a double when he has the ring on. That's the part that I'm not great about. I was gonna make it a whole alternate "this is definitely supposed to be EG but it's just a different name/look" thing, but I figured just to flesh out the story at first it would be easier to just write him becoming her, and changing it later. I wanted a tg into a stretchy girl. It made sense.
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>>6619548
>reality warping via speaking

this is exactly my fetish, my dick is thankful.
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Moar tg? plz
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>>6620943
you know that commercial was made by some fedora lord. Because of how he gave the girl a mountain dew.
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This is my new fetish
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>>6621239
actually it was made by a woman
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>>6621462
of course it was
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>>6621239

what else would he have given her? it was an ad for mountain dew...
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>>6620943
>that small orgasmic gasp she gives when she's completely transformed
I watched this commercial over and over again
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Anyone got any good tg JAV recommendations?
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>>6618018
Wrong, wrong, wrong. /aco/ was created because /co/ begged the new owner for a western alternative to /h/, for rule 34 and stuff. Thus the 'co' part. Unfortunately, the mods, having realized that they had a justification for enforcing the no-gaijin rule, decided to split /d/ and piss off both /d/ and the people who asked for the new board in the first place.
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>>6623266
Fucking this. Dubs don't lie.
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Hello, everyone. The first two chapters of my next story, Turnabout Intruder or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Sexbomb, are up!

http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3050

The three remaining chapters will be posted Monday, Wednesday, and Friday respectively. This is probably closer to "Because They're Girls" than "Uplifted" in tone, but I hope you guys enjoy it.
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>>6623974
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>>6623974
I already hate the main character. Perpetual victim. Gunna keep reading for potential sexiness tho
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>>6624329
Agree. MC has proven really unlikable, and is killing my interest.
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>>6625066
Worse than that for me. He's such a complete shit that I'm not even interested in seeing him mindwiped and replaced with someone who's not a shit.
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>>6624884
translation?
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>>6623266
Listen to this faggot. He is clearly a supreme internet historian. Congratulations on your ultimate knowledge of 4chan history. Hope to see you at the 10 year loser reunion in your mothers basement. I hear they will be serving pizza bagels.
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>>6623974
Sorry, but you've crammed together a few too many "this guy is a tool" cliches so hard they distract from the story.

Ultimately this kind of writing has to lean toward viewer/reader self insert wether we like it or not, because that is what your main readership will be doing even unconsciously.

It's also why your uplifted series was fantastic
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>>6620943
>>6622344
Again, my obsession with this commercial can lead to some nice things.

https://giphy.com/gifs/J3VloAfsEYPm
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>>6620943
This was like my first fap to TG material after finding out that my fetish was named "TG"

I feel so fucking ashamed
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>>6625518
>Ultimately this kind of writing has to lean toward viewer/reader self insert
Not really. That's your preference, not everyone's.
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>>6625870
Its actually the best live action tg in my opinion dude.
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>>6625518
I don't enjoy personality death in TG. The entire reason I enjoy this fetish is the idea of getting to experience being female. So yeah self insertion is important.

>>6623974

The writing is good, but the MC is so insufferable that it's taxing to read. The fleamarket scene was so cringeworthy I almost stopped reading.

I'm sorry devo your work is usually really good, but I think you may want to change some bits of it to make it more appealing. I really like the ideas and setting, being placed in a hot robot body is awesome, the whiney fuckboi character is not.
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>>6625066
>>6625143
>>6625518
>>6625897

"It's stylistically designed to be that way and you can't undo that, but we can diminish the effects of it." - George Lucas

All fair criticism definitely, though Kenny's pathetic, whiny nature is very much the point of the character and the story as a whole. However, the good news is that the brunt of it is long since done with past the first chapter.

Chapter 3 is a shootout in a Roaring Twenties speakeasy. Even if you can't stand the main character so far, I'd recommend giving that a try and seeing how you like it from there.
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The Raws for a new To-Love Ru OVA with TG in it are out. Go nuts

http://www.nyaa.se/?page=view&tid=772052
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>>6625870
>>6625874
There was a good skit on YouTube years ago. Called Game Over or something that had a guy turn into Lara Croft.

Unfortunately I can't find it anymore. Anyone else remember it?
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>i will never be a strong beautiful woman and give birth to my children

>instead trapped in worthless male body only useful as sperm faucet and for dying in wars

feels bad man. oh well. back to fapping to hentais
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>>6626370

watch out for being trans anon
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What does TG stand for?
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>>6626917
Top Gun. Great movie, started me on my "great balls of fire" fetish.
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>>6626919
Get off to Danger Zone every. single. time.
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>>6621462
>>6621513
Wasn't Ranma 1/2 written by a girl too?
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>>6619208
I've started on a few short stories, but can't manage to wrap them up.
I'm relatively new to fiction writing; how much do you have to practice before you get to a pace faster than "glacial"?
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I'm trying to find a comic that had a female righteous fighter being caught by a group of orcs. The orc shaman ended up using some magic to body swap the orcs with the woman.

I don't remember the name of it, and I can't locate it again. Anyone able to help?
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>>6627122
Wrong link. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B49clKbicFoAOTJGbUtnekUyN2M/view?pref=2&pli=1
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>>6627115
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/694876/31d71adfdd/
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>>6627122
>>6627124
I liked it, but the sound design is way, wayy too dramatic for it. With all the forboding music and moans of pain, it's all very uncanny-valley, especially since the lips don't quite match up with the sounds coming out of him/her. The bone-cracking sounds also make it seem like it was a very traumatic experience, despite the smile at the end, which makes it seem like it wasn't as big of a deal.

Deserves some reconsideration on some elements, but is otherwise pretty good.
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>>6626341
It was by Mako, he/she(I don't know anymore) pulled all the videos from his/her channel a few months ago.
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>>6619208
I mean, it's not very /d/ but I'm working on a concept someone posted a while back about a guy who can possess machinery getting trapped in the body of a cyborg girl. I'm not anywhere near the TG itself though, so it'll be a while before it gets posted here.
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>>6627435
I remember that!
Had this idea a while back...
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>>6617514
>tfw into reverse-traps and tomboys
>tfw the first transitory pic there is basically max unf for me

noice
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>>6627435
>>6627440
Well, I have the rough draft of the first chapter and I guess it's probably someone's fetish, kind of sort of so I'll post it for now. Probably won't post any more until I have some more meat to it.
http://pastebin.com/nQf5Xp1A
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>>6626945
Yes, Takahashi Rumiko is the artist/author of Ranma 1/2. Oddly enough, I think more TG non-hentai manga are written by women than men...
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>>6619208
/lit/izen here. I can take requests, but I'll need a bit to fulfill them.
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>>6627643
A small group of technologically-minded demon NEETs attempt to make a semi-ameteur sex tape by cursing a man with increasing femininity upon arousal, such that full TG happens upon an extended period of being horny and sending a lackey demonette in to ethereally set-up/railroad him into either A.) getting railed by his best friend or B.) getting pulled into a yuri relationship by his best bi female friend

As you can see, plenty of opportunity to build on and make the story how you would like it.
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>>6619208
I'm working on some stuff, but I'm way too slow. I have a problem where I get to the part I find most exciting, get a good wank, then never finish.

But I want to keep going because there's not enough guys turning into horny MILFs content.
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>>6627643
A guy getting turned into a chick then getting knocked up by a futa. I'm hard just thinking about it.
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>>6627764
Oh yeah. I wish that guy would come back.

I was the one who asked permission to do a story in his world. My story went way the hell off the rails, though, and I'm not sure whether I should finish it. I mean, this is /d/, so I could probably get away with it, but I really don't think it matches the tone of the original anymore.
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>>6617989

Omg, vore/unbirth, TG, and transformation? This is literally all of my fetishes in one! Are there more like this?
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>>6627299
man that sucks
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Why does Pokemon girl TG make my dick hard?
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>>6628778
Viagra overdose. See a doctor.
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>>6627529
I think it's more 50/50.
If the story focuses on the emotional complexities of it all, then that's probably written by a gal...
But there's a lot of them that are just shallow ecchi comedies obviously written by a guy.
Then again, my all-time fave TG story (Family Compo) was written by a guy who was most famous for creating characters in the hyper-masculine anime/manga fighting genre. So, who can really tell?
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>>6627435
>>6627440

I swear I've read a long story about that on fictionmania before.
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hey guys i was able to find of some of the new sapphirefoxx videos; Grandmother Paradox 1, Stealing from Sis 1-5 Anniversary and Awakening 3.
If anyone wants em please let me know of any site I could quickly upload and dump em.
They're all pretty shit to be honest and if anyone wants to post those new one shots I'd greatly appreciate.
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>>6629222
apologies, I forgot to mention that I also found Grandmother paradox 2, & Awakening 2 and 4
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>>6629222

Did he ever continue stealing from sis past chapter 11?
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>>6629195
Probably the story Gulliver's Planet.

Least, that's what it reminded me of.
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>>6619208
I've been dwelling on making a full blown Comic for awhile now. But it's a giant time commitment that I likely won't be able to pull off till Summer Break unfortunately. I /might/ bite the bullet and turn it into a written story however.

Synopsis for my idea is that a mountain god gets sick of depressed people jumping off it's cliffsides and resurrects the latest suicide victim as a girl. "Don't worry, they only ever sacrificed Virgin's to me in my glory days so the body is good as new. You basically upgraded from an old Ford to a Porsche! Except instead of paying off a loan of cash you are going to get people to stop committing suicide off my dang mountain."

If it turns into a short story, solution will be Sex (duh). If it turns into a longer story, the solution will still be Sex; except it will involve more slapstick and the Human and God will fall in love.
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>>6629329
>getting person who tried to commit suicide to convince other people not to commit suicide

although I hear people who jump immediately regret it.
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>tfw you will never be turned into a qt grill
why even live
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Turnabout Intruder Chapter 3 is up!

http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3050
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>hanging out with normie friends friends from highschool
>they're talking about girls and all i can do is pretend im interested when all im actually into is dudes turning into fucking girls and getting banged

end this suffering
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>>6629666
They all have a secret desire they aren't telling you. Speculate on what they are to pass the time, but don't prod them personally about it if you don't want to reveal your own tg stuff. When I got a girlfriend it was easier for me to say "I would love to be able to change into a girl and experience that orgasm" and when put like that, with an intimate partner (AFTER GETTING TO KNOW EACHOTHER PERSONALLY AND SEXUALLY) it sounds sensible.
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>>6620210
Any updates for SLUT academy coming soon?
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>>6620943
This will never not be erotic for me. After discovering he could superboost his car, he pretended to look off to the side and then hit his friend with it. Seeing the hair and not being impressed he hit it again. Now with tits, his friend says "Not cool." But that doesnt stop him from transforming him all the way into a woman who is no longer concerned with being male. He never tries to get his friend back either, he just straight up turns his friend into his girlfriend. Fuck me.
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>>6620210
Oh man, huge fan.
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>>6629764
Not everyone is into /d/ my friend. Don't spent too much time on 4chan.

>>6629666
I never had a problem with girls in real like and my fetish. This is kind of strange for me to be honest. Never had an interest for other normal girls?
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>>6626319
THANK

YOU
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>>6629967
I never said they all had a /d/ desire. Just that they all have some secret thing unless they're like, boring and weird. It's human nature to desire something taboo.
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>>6627440
This is relevant to my interests.
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>>6629361
>although I hear people who jump immediately regret it.
Probably not for long, though.
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>>6626319
Hope this gets translated soon-ish. I can figure out what's going on pretty easily, but it's annoying not knowing what the fuck anyone's saying. Thanks, though.
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>>6630237
I'm hoping for a translation of the Shinyuu to Seitenkango sequel.
I want more cute romance.
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>>6630245
Cute is always preferable to lewd stuff. I was a fan of that manga, didn't know that they made a sequel. Dunno if it's just me, but the ex-guy in that manga always reminded me a little of Kamina, design-wise.

I'm only halfway through watching the TLR video, and the sex scenes are awkward as fuck. Even moreso because the dude keeps making weird as fuck noises. Sounds like a cross between retarded laughter and someone trying to sneeze.
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>>6630262
check Eroe's pixiv. There's also an alternate story where Souji gets genderswapped after Kyou turns back a third of a way through the original story.
That one isn't translated either.
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Can't remember the name of a story in Fictionmania, basically these two friends go into a magical shop, one of them tries a mask of some girl on, and then transforms into her (I remember her being Canadian), then she goes out with his/her friend.
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I have some
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>>6630424
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>>6630276
Suddenly he has eyes!
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>>6630424
>>6630426

Futashit os not allowed. Remove this shit.
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>>6630435
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>>6630438
This is a tg thread, not a futa thread.
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>>6630440
It has lways being the case. There is 15 futa threads right now tyou can post, but Here is just pênis turning into vaginas.
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>>6630450
>>6630443
you're abolutely right, I'd mistaken this for a TF thread

my apologies, I'll delete them as soon as I can figure out how to reveal the post options
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>>6630457
well there's a deleting cooldown so I'll get the last two later

first time I post in a year and I fuck it up
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>>6630221
Plenty of people survive the fall, and live to regret their decisions.
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>>6630677
Not surprising, if they couldn't even die right.
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>>6629252

Yep, that's it. I just reread it. Damn, that's a good story. Is there anything else like it??
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>TFW clothes changing to match the new body is my favorite part of TG.

I want to slap any artists who leave the woman in her former selves clothes.
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>>6630979
Clothes transformation hits me so right I'm not sure if I'm more turned on by the gender swap or the clothes
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>>6630983
>>6630979
My african brothers. Clothes reshaping and changing style to fit the victim's new gender and identity can add a lot to a gender swap.
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>>6629133
Remix Heart was interesting in that both its writer and its illustrator were women and it had a fair bit of fanservice. Though it did focus on the protagonist's feelings about her transformation and its effects on her identity as well.
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>tfw you're so starved for content you muster up the will to draw your own damn wank material
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I just want a g/f who can role play or really acts like she was once a boy. How the heck do you find some one like that?
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>>6631261
Date a trap, instead.
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I remember there being one of a guy who gets kidnapped and put on a chemical that makes him sluttier and more feminine until he craves cock, anyone know what I'm talking about?
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>>6628778
Is that meant to be ash?
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>>6619208
I just put a story on fictionmania. Focuses more on crossdressing though
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>>6627124
This is good. Have any more?
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>>6627124
Did you use a program for this?
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>>6631463
What story?
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>>6630426
Why do futafags have to ruin fucking everything. Beside take that western garbage to /aco/
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>>6631060

I'm started wanking to shitty captions to get by.
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>>6631053
Now that page definitely makes it sound interesting.
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>>6627124
Jesus. They need to fire the SFX person. It's just generic porn sounds and breaking twigs. Getting a Foley artist would make this like 5x better.
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>>6621419
welcome to the squad, mate.
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>>6631797
Yeah, Mai starts by being uncomfortable living as a girl, but then gradually adapts to it over the course of a few months and starts enjoying it. She suffers an identity crisis when she realizes that she's not only physically a girl but that she has also been mentally affected by her transformation.
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>>6631060
God damn do I know that feel. I can't draw so I gotta write short stories and captions that I can fap to while writing. Maybe once I grow some balls and learn how to take criticism I'll start posting them here or taking requests. I'm probably not any good but I'd like to get better.
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>>6627440
http://pastebin.com/G25i9RZC
My shot at this.
Thoughts so far?
Usually I write CYOA smut.
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>>6631966
OP, of the prompt, and I adore this.
Any hint at what LASS stands for?
In my head, I was thinking voice of Eddie from Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (the Martin Freeman one) mixed in with GLaDOS logic and Baymax efficiency, but a "feminine" AI makes a bit more sense although on the nose.
Anxiously hoping for continuation!

also it's my birthday so it felt like a present
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>>6631966
I'm thinking about starting up the /d/ CYOA thread again, got any new OC? Otherwise it's just going to be a lot of reposts.
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>>6631985
Well I'll probably write a bit here and there. I still have ideas for scenes. I do like feedback. Also LASS for the moment is Latest Adaptive Service System. But I may change this.
>>6632005
I meant more like the choose your own adventure stories with multiple branching paths. The site I post on uses the Addventure code. I would love a /d/ hosted Addventure site or something similar.
Basically Addventure is a program that lets a site have a crowd written CYOA story with branching paths.
Pretty old but it works. I'm sure there are newer versions out there.
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>>6632018
Ahh, my apologies for my quick asumption..
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>>6632031
Nah it's cool. Same term with different meanings.
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>>6631966

Oohhhh... this is good! More please!!!
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http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3050

Chapter 4 of Turnabout Intruder is up. Things get lewd, if you're into that sort of thing.

>>6631966
You've got a good start going, but there's something off with the tenses. It seems to alternate between past tense ("Sam looked at the mechanic on the computer and walked over.") and present tense ( "'I can hear.' Sam says") between sentences, which made some parts a bit confusing to read.

Keep going, though, dude, I definitely want to see where you take this.
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>>6632475
Yeah. I haven't been paying to close attention to the finer grammar points. That was written all in one go. I'll probably write another bit or two before I go back and work it over at that level.
Right now I'm only paying enough attention to it to try and avoid forgetting a word or avoiding a one sentence run on paragraph.
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>>6620210
I have been patiently awaiting the next update to SLUT Academy.
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>>6631966
Moar?
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I'm trying to remember that one video game character from a japanese rpg/fighter or such who becomes a girl just before the main story starts. Can anyone think of it? I was thinking it was sengoku rance or sengoku basara but I think I'm totally wrong now.
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>>6629491
is this from something or just an independent image?>
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I think it's based on an anime, but I don't know which off the top of my head.
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>>6634115
And done.
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>>6633336
Working on it. Wanted to get to the first change before posting at least.
Back story and introductions are my biggest fetish. Can't even watch a porno unless it has at least a 3 page prologue.

But I'll post something later today. Then write another part before going back and doing edits. Then move on from there
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>>6634354
Amen.
Writing an r63 smutfic, and I'm 1500 words in and only now am I getting to lewdness:
and even that's just an awkward attempt at foreplay before more talking.
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>>6629225
Yeah, Sam finished it. It's been over a year I think.
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>>6629222
sure post em what the hell, i need to see if he actually imrprov or keeps doing the same animation over and over
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>>6634393

Does anyone have the post 11 parts saved?
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>>6634373
>>6634354
>>6633336
>>6632475
>>6632152
>>6631985
http://pastebin.com/V3HU0caf
Next part
Feedback, thoughts, lewd comments about robo-hips.
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>>6635039
I just read that and I thought it was great. I don't really have any feedback right now, but I was wondering if you know where you're planning on taking the story already or if you're just winging it on a per-update basis.
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Still waiting in great anticipation for this
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>>6635258
Anthology? So there is more than just that one story?

Though Kiyomi is a sweetie.
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>>6635308
No. Colored version is coming out soon.
Though I guess since the creator lurks around here, maybe if we ask nicely, he'll make a second part?
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>>6635318
Well, the rest doesn't have to be that same cast. I don't think Kiyomi and Toshiaki are viable for more than maybe one extra chapter, anyhow, as once the transformation is complete she's just an ordinary girl who reallllly enjoys sex.

But that title page suggests that it's going to be a package with more than one thing in it. If I'm reading the credits in the lower right properly, he's got like 7 different artists involved. If the writing and art is of similar quality, 100-ish pages of full color porn stories might actually tempt me.
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>>6635223
I have a general roadmap planned out already and various events I plan on adding. Right now it like 80% planned and 20% of the top of my head. The further I get though it'll probably be more spontaneous since I've only got a vague idea of what I'll write
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And Turnabout Intruder is done.

http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3050

I'm not super happy with how it turned out, but feedback on the whole thing would be incredibly helpful.
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>>6635258
Source? Googlefu was weak
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>>6635258
sauce pls
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>>6636143
I would, but... we are being carefully watched here
So I'll give the official link
http://www.dlsite.com/ecchi-eng/work/=/product_id/RE157629
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>>6635308
Found some concept sketches of Kiyomi
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>>6636220
Where's image related from?
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>>6631597
use VLC or MPV.
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>>6619208
new writefag here, i started selling TG erotica on Amazon earlier this year. here is the first story i wrote, Cross Dress Crisis. It's about a dude who transforms into a girl, but everyone still thinks he's a guy. His life changes so that he's always been a cross dressing girl and he has to deal with it, then sex happens. http://pastebin.com/CWCvKGvR
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>>6637021
Kinda zoned out through part of it there, but all in all it's a nice story with a happy ending.
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>>6637021
Cute.
I would have enjoyed it more if Rebecca was a trap rather than a dickgirl, but that's my tastes.
Reverse trap/trap romance is underrated.
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>>6637021
How does selling TG erotica work for you on Amazon? What are sales like? What's the process?

From one writefag to another, I'm curious.
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>>6637395
This please. I too like writing smut and if I could make a few bucks from it all the better.
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>>6635039

This is getting good. Keep it coming!
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>>6635258
Can I get a link to the English translation? All I can find is the Chinese one
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>>6637439
Nope. It's already been explained why in this thread.
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>>6627124
So it's Gynethrope again, but indoors.
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>>6637422
>>6637395
Not him, but I'm pretty sure you just sell it like any other self-published ebook. Just mark it as "adult material" or whatever.

Also, trap/reverse trap is the best thing ever and writefag guy missed a golden opportunity.
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>>6638042
>trap/reverse trap
Biggest fetish of mine would be to be dressed up as a girl and made to go on a date, but unbeknownst to me the person I am going on a date with is a reverse trap
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>>6637782
I've read it in English once, it doesn't need to be in color
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I'm gonna make some shitty webms from this. if I miss something feel free to request one.
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>>6638156
>>6638161
>>6638171
what, exactly does this have to do with TG?
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>>6638173
One of the characters is a transformed male.

But then, aside from being familiar with the series, there's no way anyone could fucking tell that from those videos.
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>>6638173
Orange haired girl getting molested in these is the male MC.
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>>6638156
>>6638161
>>6638171
>>6638177
What series is this?
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>>6638180
To-love ru darkness.
Recently released OVA.
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>>6638180
The first webm is replying to a post with series name in it. and a torrent of the episode these are from.
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>>6638186
That's it. I wasn't going to make one for the part when he reverts back to being make. but if someone wants me to I will.
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>>6626551
more trouble than its worth
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>>6638171
why is she being molested by spurdo?
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>wanted to write a relatively short TG story
>it's turned into War & Peace
>no signs of ending any time soon

Son of a bitch...
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>>6638319
As a fellow writefag, I can tell you that most of your readers are going to expect smut. Feel free to write a 10,000+ word epic but readers are either going to ignore it and get to the sexy stuff or just not read it altogether. Plus, writing erotica is just more fun.
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>>6638377
As a reader I can confirm this.
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>>6638377

This is pretty much what everyone tells me when I flirt with the idea of writing fiction commissions.

>"Yeah sure you can do that but most if not all of what you write is going to be fetish smut."
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>>6638265

It certainly has some difficulties, and of course it's not for everyone, but the people who do it tend to really like it. It might not be as much trouble as you think. (Blah blah blah this isn't the thread to discuss the details in, don't want to hijack the thread, etc.)

Either way though, jeez. "Only useful for being a sperm faucet and for dying in wars?" You should probably work through those feelings even if you want to keep on shooting out sperm.
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>>6638377
>tfw I'm one of the few readers who actually greatly prefers 10,000 word stories with plot over generic "AND THEN THERE WAS SEXYTIMES" smut
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>>6638641
I feel the same way anon. It's not a good feeling
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>>6638377
I'll read a 10,000 word epic, but the writing had better be good enough.
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Something that I thought was cool was in the story "A Leg Man".

The spell seems to have an acceptance effect where everyone can recognize that the person's body has been magically altered but also just accepts it as a normal condition that happens to people sometimes.
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>>6638766
Yeah, "pissed off a wizard" is pretty much the same as catching the flu. You can't really do anything to stop it except stay the hell away from the poor fuckers who have it in case they're contagious.
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>>6638377
>>6638693
>>6638641
>10,000 word epic

10,000 words is nothing. I'm at 87,000 words right now. It's really getting out of hand, but I hate diving straight into the sex without having some setup first.

Besides, the setup itself can be hotter than the sex parts. My main sub-fetish for TG/63 stuff revolves around the transformed character getting dressed and wearing feminine outfits, so I spend a ton of time describing that stuff when I'm writing. I like it when other writers do that. I'm doing it too in the hopes that the audience digs that aspect of the story as much as I do.
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>>6639081
It goes without saying. But at the end of the day make sure you're writing for yourself more than anyone else.
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>>6639217
Stop asking for paid content for free
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>>6638519

It's definitely worth the trouble. If anything else I regret taking the decision with 23 instead of with 15
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>>6638519
different person - but yeah it helps working trough those things.
Honestly I think there's quite a few people like that on both genders, who wouldn't mind the switch if it was really something simple and complete (aka a clone body is grown and you're swapped in or something), but the weak, half assed tran switch isn't nearly as appealing.
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>>6638048
oh fuck
my dick
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>>6637044
>>6637395
thanks, sorry though, I'm not into traps.

>>6637395
>>6637422
pretty much what others said, it's really simple once you get your account set up. Put it in the Erotica category and automatically sets it up as 18+ material.

Sales are small, but I just started and haven't gotten into a regular rhythm of new releases, there's only so much available time for writing smut, you know. Plus, I don't really advertise or belong to any online communities. This is the first I've ever said anything to anyone about it.
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>>6638519
My life actually improved alot and I get more action that i ever wouldve gotten had I not transitioned.
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>>6639438
full transition?
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>>6639252

Seconded, though I would like to know if anyone here has seen any of Starshift's premium stuff. Is it worth the subscription?
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>>6630677
This is like the most literal incarnation of survivorship bias. Obviously you hear that, because people who don't regret just try again instead of telling stories about they regretted it.
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>>6639097
>make sure you're writing for yourself more than anyone else.

That's the plan... unless someone commissions me (unlikely) to crank out something specific.
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Writefag here. I'm at that point where I have so many ideas for stories that I can't narrow it down to just one. Give me some story ideas and in a bit I'll make a strawpoll to vote on which one I do
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>>6640132
Write a story about you getting a career. You'll have to be creative.
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Wrote the "Theseus Cruiseship" screencap earlier, and have other ideas...
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>>6640180
>insulting someone offering to make content
Literally the worse.
I hope all you sex ends up in the missionary position with someone off the opposite sex.
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>>6639453
I just take mones and grew my hair out and im really happy with my results ill probably go for ffs and thatd be as far as i go
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sauce please!
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>>6640393
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/895359/1aeb5ea46c/
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There was this hentai about this blue haired guy turning into a girl and getting fucked at a maid cafe. I lost the link. Link please?
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>>6640428
Never mind. Found it
Link for those who want it
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/506727/2348c795db/
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>>6638194
pls
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>>6640393

Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=931420

there is a another good one with a little deamon lord turning into an adult horny succubus

also: all pixiv files with "master1200" a resized.
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>>6639438
Pretty much anyone who wants to have sex with men can get lots of action. Don't need to transition to get stuffed with dicks.
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>>6640132
>Give me some story ideas

A world setting where existance of magic is common knowledge but actually encountering it is uncommon.

Magic gender changing anti-rape STD runs rampant.

STD was originally intended to punish rapists but people have long since figured out many of the technical requirements that the spell considers to be rape. They game the system to setup consentual scenarios to cure themselves. Getting 'raped' gives 50% chance of being cured and 100% chance to spread the disease.

Main character gets infected and sets out on a quest to get raped and get his dick back.
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>>6640132

Wolbachia makes the species jump to humans.

Wolbachia is a real parasite that is commonly found in insects around the world and is basically everywhere. For those species that are vulnerable to it, it turns the males into females. Any male that has sex with one of these transformed catches wolbachia too. Natural females are immune, but can still act as carriers.

As an added bonus, the former males often experience pathenogenesis. Spontaneous pregnancy, rather than from having sex. They only have female children.

So the story would follow the outbreak or a group of people who are watching the pandemic as it unfolds on the news until it eventually reaches their area and one by one they become infected. How they deal with it, how they react, and so on.

No one would probably know about the pregnancy part of it until some months after the first transformations, since the pregnancy is neither instant or faster than normal.
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Does anyone have the image set of sasuke from Naruto turning into hinata after hinata goes missing from a mission and than ends up permanently becoming hinata it's fucking weird but I can't find it anywhere saw it in one of these threads.
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>>6637021
Well, I came during the part where Rebecca fucked Kyle from behind. Nice work.
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>>6633579
>fighter
Mai from Blazblue?
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>>6635039
http://pastebin.com/WhPSUn99
Small update.
I'm going to write up till the next time Sam needs to charge. Then I'll be going back to do edits and I'll post everything up to that point
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