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/co/co/'s Bizarre Adventure - The Gangs all here Edition


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Past threads: http://pastebin.com/xw1QLXDc

YOU SHOULD READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)

>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands


>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/TXVavPMR

>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8/edit?usp=sharing

>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0/edit?usp=sharing
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - http://pastebin.com/k6abNX8f
5 - http://pastebin.com/eqPVKMgJ
6 - http://pastebin.com/jUsLRrx1
7 - http://pastebin.com/gq9SjBtj
8 - http://pastebin.com/KqiBUwav

>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/

>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA&usp=sharing

>Vocaroofag's Dialogue
http://pastebin.com/ctG7NsC6

>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL0rToV4jvAVAnamBNW_KGUrKXvhTM7n0E

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7

>M.E. LeTerally's Over Heaven: Chapters 1-3
http://pastebin.com/4mfBbVxS

MAIN TOPIC: Hammering out remaining part 3 fights
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Jojo needs a board to contain the autism ala /mlp/
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>>81219813
>Stand suggestions are welcome. When making a Stand:
1) Read the pastebin/docs to check that there isn't a similar ability already. In fact, try not to have something that mirrors a Stand in JoJo either.

2) Make sure the power isn't too close to what a character can already do in their comic/show.

3) Give it a song/album/band name. Normally it shouldn't directly reference its powers. Instead, pick something based on it loosely reflecting the Stand through the lyrics, feeling, or history.

4) Include the parts it could be in and reasons why it's a fit for them. Please refer to the pastebins to see what each part is about.
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Plucky [Fortunate Son]
Enjoy.
Also when i draw this comic this stand is gonna be a bitch to draw everytime.
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>>81219974
>Also when i draw this comic this stand is gonna be a bitch to draw everytime.
Then it's a successful design.
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Doing gods work man. Say anyway i can contact you privately.
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>>81219843
You can say the same thing about [Never Ever].

>>81219974
Gureto-daze!
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Speaking as a jopjo fan;

The more I keep seeing all this the more I feel like Daffy should be Tom's partner.

I would like to see a full blown Looney Tunes take on it and see where Bugs would fit into all of this.
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>>81220321
Sorry bro it's all set it stone, It's Tomtaro vs Daffy Brando.
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>>81220321
or we could destroy part 8 and have them fuse
and make him inteligent, nihilistic and have a wicked sense of humor
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>>81220390
if anyone's fusing in part 8, it's going to be [[spoiler: the AU analogues of an Ed and Freaky Fred]]
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>>81220390
>>81220629
Part 8 needs a /a/ and /v/ representative as villains
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>>81220629
>>81220686

Wasn't part 8 about webcomics?

Unless I was wrong and we revamped part 6 heavily, there was no Universal Reboot in our work.
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>>81220686
Well Tails is the BroJo in part 8. And Strongbad WAS in a vidya.
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>>81220737
That's kind of why I suggested that Part 7 be taking place at the same time as Part 1, but in a completely different location.
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Part 6 may have no reboot, but the surviving party gets pulled into a new universe.
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Reposting this becauze i hate my life this is the best thing i have made ever


Stand Name : [Backstreet's Back]

Stand Master: Chuckie "Chuckster" Finster

Apperance: Brown small teddy bear that Chuckie carries around, he calls it "his wawa"

Abilities: Whenever someone steps or touches a "crack" [ Backstreet's Back ] will apear behind them and engage in battle, it usally tries to break the opponents back. [ Backstreet's Back ] can return to the side of the STAND USER if he steps on crack

[ Backstreet's Back ] has a second ability called [ Never Gone ] that allows the STAND USER to travel between cracks following the rules sated for [ Backstreet's Back ]

Power: A
Speed: B
Range: B
Durability: E
Precision: C
Potential: C

I think we lack the good old ORAORAORAORAORAORA-like stands that make JoJo so famous and i also believe Chuckie would be great for a starring role on part 7
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postin my fights, already in the doc but for easier viewing and response

>Tom scouts Yosemite's place from across the street. it's an elaborate mansion, with security walking around the place.
>"Not bad, Sam. Plenty of guards, but you can't watch every corner." Tom taps the corner of a signpost, vanishing
>Tom reappears in Sam's office. It's big and loud, well furbished with his giant cowboy hat hanging up on the wall by a pair of old classic six-shooters. "Hey, shorty. Let's chat."
>Sam sits up from a seat that's way to big for him, smiling as he walks around the desk
>"You've been makin' a lot of noise around these parts. Last I hears it, you were the fellah what done in my boys?"
>"The creep with the shadows, the army man, and the blonde brat. Yea, they almost gave me blisters on my knuckles. Now what brings you around here? Why are you messing with the folks around here?"
>Sam paces around the room, Tom watching him carefully. "Me? Why son, I'm just tryin' to to bring a little flavor to this dull little town! It's a nice place! Would make a nice little summer home for the likes of me!"
>"But you... you're the type that likes to cause a whole messa trouble, ain'tcha? I can't have your types nosin' around in my business."
>Tom: "Business, eh? I got nothing to do with your business, short stack..."
>Tom turns furiously and raises a fist at Sam. "Cuz you made this personal when you went after my girl!!"
>Sam holds his hands at his sides, summoning his six-shooters. "Let's you and me dance, 「Mary Lou!」"
>Sam fires into Tom's chest, only enough to make the cat wince almost casually, but Sam rockets away from his reach.
>Sam is sitting on the floor, both guns levels at Tom as the cat's 「Stand」 comes into view
>"Looks like we got ourselves an old-fashioned 「Stand」 off, boy!"

(probably a good spot for chapter break)
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>>81221382
>「One More Time」 lashes out at Sam this time, but Sam shoots his "launcher" pistol again and rockets out of the way, balancing on the head of a large stuff (like taxidermy) bear
>"Yer a fellah who lets his fists do the talkin. I can respect that. But if yer just a one trick pony, then YOU'RE the smallfry in the world of Stands."
>Tom: "Too bad for you then, cuz I'm packing more than one." Tom touches a corner of the room, warping into the one behind Sam and giving him a kick to the head. Sam goes flying towards the ground from the blow, but he uses his launcher again to cushion the blow and land on his feet
>Sam raises his guns to him again, Tom not thinking clearly to question why. Sam fires at him repeatedly Tom charging through and not noticing that the bullets don't hurt, just vanish inside of him
>he decks Sam again, who stumbles but rockets himself away, firing his launcher repeatedly to bounce around in zig zags before he lands behind his desk again, back in his seat
>Sam: "I knew ya talked with your fists, but you think with em too, ya dunderhead?"
>Tom still at the ready and mad. "Don't need to think fast to beat you, you crazy old coot. Not with those little peashooters you're packin'."
>Sam: "Haw haw! If you think that's all I've been doin', you're stupider than ya look!"
>panel shows an x-ray with Sam's (extra) cartooney revolvers shooting a bullet through a person (possibly a see-through Tom) and leaving black powder inside
>Sam: "Y'see, Mary Lou's pistols work different as can be. The left gives off a big ol' blast of pressure. Don't hurt much, but kicks like a mule to knock me fer a loop."
"Th'other shoots straight through the other feller, but it leaves the gunpowder inside of 'em."
>Tom looks shocked while Sam grins
>"With that hot head o' yours, ain'tcha noticed that little itchy feelin' inside o' yer gut?"
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>>81221420
>Sam levels his gun on Tom again. "And with all that shot in ya, think of how little pressure it'd need to blast ya to Kingdom Come!"
>Sam fires, Tom dives aside but Sam keeps launching and ricocheting around the room. He finally rebounds enough to blast Tom in the back, smoke coming from Tom's ears, coat and mouth, and likely some blood with it
>"Ker-BLOOEY!!"
>Tom falls to his knees, choking and holding his gut
>Sam: "Leave it to a stray to bring his dukes to a gunfight!"
>Tom thinking: "Damn! I can't take another hit like that, or that guy will turn me more dynamite than I already am."
>Tom touches the corner of the desk, suddenly vanishing away
>Sam: "I seen yer trick enough times now, ya dern cat. You hide in the corner like a yellah bellied coward."
>Tom appears out of the corner of the room, ready to strike when Sam raises his gun towards him
>"And there's only so many corners in the room."
>Tom raises his arms protectively, but the gun passes through him again. Tom vanishes back to retreat again, holding his stomach but still standing.
>Tom thinking: "He can't finish me off yet, though. He needs time to set himself up. One doesn't hurt at all, and one does next to nothin', but they're bad news when they're put together."
Tom cringes painfully. "But I can't catch him off guard in this close quarters. And if I can't stop him, I'm done for. And if I can't walk away from this... who will...?"
>flashback shows a vision of his girl
>Tom gets a determined look on his face. He stands up straight as One More Time grins its maniacal grin and raises its trumpet as if to play
>Tom: "Why don't you put down those guns, Tex, and face me like a man?"
>OMT starts playing his trumpet, musical notes spiraling across the room into Sam's ears
>Sam: "Haw! When I've got you ready to blast yer own head off? You must think I'm a joke. Ha HAWHAW! AHEEHEE! Hee... hoo hooo... huhhh...."
>Sam's laugh trails off as his hands go lax and drops his guns, his Stand vanishing
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>>81221442
>Sam: "You... you ain't just whistlin' Dixie..."
>Tom looks surprised that it worked, and looks up at his grinning Stand
>Tom: "One trick pony, huh? What other sneaky tricks you got?"
>OMT grins senselessly and plays again
Tom: "That tune... 「IS YOU IS OR IS YOU AIN'T MY BABY」..."
>Tom smirks and charges in, pounding Sam's twice across the face.
>Sam shakes off the spell and draws one of his guns, but OMT smacks it out of his hands with its trumpet
>Sam summons the other desperately, but Tom kicks this one away himself
>Tom winds up a punch while One More Time twirls its trumpet showily
>both punch Sam in the face at the same time, with OMT clutching its trumpet like a set of brass knuckles
>Sam goes flying through the office wall, lying limply in the wreckage
>Sam's lip and nose bleed, looking up at Tom dizzily and weakly
>"Wha... what in tarnation'd ya do to me?"
>Tom: "Same thing I'm doing to you now. Play it again, slim."
>OMT plays his sweet jazz again, rolling into Sam's ears
>Sam: "That, tat music... right purdy, too. Like the angels would play..."
>Tom: "No angels where you're going, cowpoke. But before you go, I don't think you're the top of this food chain. This doesn't stop with you. So tell give you one simple Request..."
>Tom grabs his collar. "Where's your man in charge?"
>Sam: "I... me... we had a headquarters. Up there'n Peach... Creek."
>Tom shoves him callously aside to die as he grabs the phone from Sam's desk. "Hey, Butch. Get the boys together. Someone done messed with my girl. ...yea. Tell 'em we're goin' ta war over this."
>ends in Tom driving off with his pals (presumably those two or three other random cats that appear in the cartoons) into the night
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and some more for vs Snoopy

>le team arriving at Fantasy Island
>beats the rest of the bosses, fairly driven and confident by now
>near the edge of the city, ending up in a large open parking lot before an office building
>standing on top of a van is Snoopy. he wordlessly snaps off a stiff salute to them
>Tom: "There's that mangy mutt..."
>Johnny: "Yea, but where's his Stand?"
>Eddy: "We're not waitin' to find out. Scrap 'em, Double D!"
>Edd summons 「Safety Dance」, but before he can gather any scrap, a hail of gunfire hits the ground around them. 「Aces In Exile」is flying remotely overhead on his classic doghouse, peppering them with machine gun fire
>Tom: "Damn! Get down!"
>group scatters as Tom and Johnny get into a tall office building's doorway. Eddy and Edd duck behind cars, Ed under a hotdog cart. the bullets fly wildly off-target, hitting random walls and spaces around their hiding places
>Edd: "Well, fortunately, the sheer range of his Stand seems to trade off for its lack of any practical accuracy."
>Eddy: "Bingo! We wait for it to dive in, then we give 'em the old one-two."
>the doghouse plane swoops down, skidding to a stop as Snoopy himself jumps onboard. A pilot's steering wheel appears in front of him
>Johnny: "Now that don't look good..."

>Snoopy grits his teeth and wheels a tight circle around the parking lot, blasting machine gun fire in a neat ring. Tom and Johnny run into the office doors, and all the team is targeted by far more accurate and deadly shots
>Edd warps the car they're hiding behind into a makeshift barrier on wheels, launching it straight at Snoopy and Aces in Exile
>the thing rams into his plane, making it spiral wildly
>Eddy: "We got em! He's nothin' without that plane!"
>Snoopy struggles to pilot it, but keeps a cool demeanor as he spins out of control. He suddenly grabs his Stand and leaps off of the doghouse. he lands on top of Ed's hotdog cart and sets Aces on top of it
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>>81221584
>Ed suddenly reached out through the center of the cart and pops into view holding Snoopy around the waist. Hotdogs and hot water run off him comically
>"I got 'em, Eddy!"
>Snoopy sneers back at him, more annoyed than afraid, and pulls on a ketchup bottle like a lever. the hot dog cart hums like an engine and starts to take off
>Edd: "Uh... Eddy... I think he has more than one plane..."
>Snoopy's new "plane" hotdog cart shoots into the air, Ed falling back out the hole he was poking in from. He loops back around, large gun barrels appearing at the side and firing exploding hotdogs down at Ed like bullets
>Ed: "Waaah! Eddy! Mom always said hotdogs were bad for me but I didn't believe her!!"
>Edd: "I've got your back, Ed!"
>Edd creates a basic turret out of car parts, but as he lines up his shot, Snoopy suddenly u-turns his plane and pounds his fist down on the mustard, which pelts Edd with machine gun fire. everyone's "Oh shit!" face
>Eddy: "DOUBLE D!!" Grabs him and hauls him down an alley. Snoopy's face remains unchanged as he loops back around a few stories up, but Ed looks furious
>Ed waves a hand sharply to one side, Spoon sending Snoopy's attention suddenly to his side
>lets Snoopy crash right into the side of a building, spraying glass and rubble
>Ed ignores him and runs to his bros as Snoopy freefalls. Ed stands in front of the alley and throws out his arms, Spoon doing the same
>Eddy hurries to try to patch up Edd, who doesn't look good. "That's it, Ed. Just keep his eyes off us."
>Snoopy grabs and shoves Aces onto a large pane of glass. Steers it like a fighter jet to get back into the air and looking around. He seems to look all over and not spy the Eds, despite Ed in relatively plain sight, but shrugs
>happens to look up and see Tom and Johnny, with Monkey Business lifting and throwing a desk at him as soon as he looks
>Snoopy dodges around it easily as Johnny and Tom duck around a corner
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>>81221604
>Johnny: "Don't worry. That big ol' thing can't even fit down these halls. We sneak around, catch 'em off guard, then we nail him good."
>Tom: "Nail him how? You're nothing but close range, and One More Time needs to have contact with him to get me anywhere, and that mutt won't sit down!"
>Johnny peeks back around the corner. "We'll think on our... ohhhh, mama."
>Snoopy has converted a large copy machine into his plane, riding it as a perfect fit down the hall
>Tom goes to turn a corner, but touches it before he does, vanishing from sight. Snoopy keeps chasing Johnny, dodging and ducking around bullets before he reaches a window.
>Johnny jumps out through it, Snoopy going to chase him when Tom materializes out of a corner beside the window, One More Time sucking up a big lung full of air until its chest puffs out
>Snoopy raises his eyebrows with a "yikes" expression before the blast of musical waves knocks Aces and him silly, spiraling wildly out of control over the horizon and into the sea. Tom, meanwhile, has reaches out and grabbed Johhny's hand (or Monkey Business, whichever looks cooler)
>Johnny: "Nice save, little man. Nothin' like a little airsickness to put down a pilot."
>Tom: "Yea, yea. Let's get back to the boys We've got a duck to pluck..."
>starting back down the steps, more engine noises are heard
>Tom: "Are you kiddin' me? What, did he hit a seagull to ride back at us?"
>Johnny raises an eyebrow out the window. "Noooot exactly."
>Bluto's training ship flies overhead, casting a huge shadow over their battlefield. Closeup shows Snoopy piloting the ship, Aces in Exile on top of the cockpit
>Tom: "Ohhh, mama."
Johnny: "You said it."
>massive bombardment of the ship's even further enhanced artillary, everyone taking cover from explosions and debris
>stops firing to scour the damages, spotting Tom and Johnny hunkered down near a window couching and waving away smoke
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>>81221623
>Snoopy grins and divebombs them, but then suddenly looks to his side. he spots Ed and Spoon pointing the same direct
>Snoopy winces as he rams the whole ship into the side of the building, rattled but it's basically unharmed because it's a fucking battleship
>turns to pull back out, but the engine struggles, and he looks back to see Johnny and Monkey Business gripping the front of the ship to hold it in place
>"Don't move now. You're at just the right angle and everythin'. Tom! Corner 'em!"
>Tom appears in the cockpit behind Snoopy, who turns around just to get clocked in the face
>Snoopy goes out like a light. Aces In Exile vanishes. The boat comes crashing down as Tom watches it fall with his dad. They share a small fist bump

>team regroups on the ground in front of the battleship, Edd bandaged up around the chest so he looks stable, but wincing constantly
>Tom: "You boys gonna be okay?"
>Eddy: "Eventually. Not as quick as you might like, though, Tommy."
>Edd (woozily): "If someone finds all of my blood... tell it to come home."
>Tom shrugs. "Well that's the worm, the pilot... I think that's every pawn the duck's got left. We're in the home stretch."
>Tom gives a sideways glance at Johnny, who frowns a bit. Tom looks at Ed, who pouts like a puppy
>Tom: "...so you guys have earned a rest. Take five. We'll be back in no time."
>the Eds give him a smile and kneel by Edd as the father and son walk away towards Daffy's elaborate home
>Johnny:"You're gettin' soft on me, pussy cat. You know we're gonna need everything we can throw at this looney tune"
>Tom: "Don't count on it, old man. I just owe them for sticking out their necks for me. Besides, it's just the one psycho. We've scrapped with him what, ten times by now? I think we can do this..."
>"One More time." Both fighters march up to the castle, Stands summoned in a badass strut
TO BE CONTINUED
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>>81221382
>>81221420
>>81221442
>>81221465
>>81221584
>>81221604
>>81221623
>>81221687
Sandcastles, this is brilliant.
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>>81221742
little longwinded, but yea, I'm proud of it, and super interested in this project

I've had my fair share at writing fight scenes and scripts for comics over time
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Reposting stand concept, please rate:

Name: 「THE KILLING MOON」
Appearance: Rabbit-like humanoid with what appears to be a turbofan engine in its abdomen
Abilities: The Killing Moon is a remote-controlled stand can alter the force of gravity between two objects. This includes increasing, decreasing, or inverting their attraction. At any given time, only two objects may be altered, and the effects immediately wear off when released. However, objects still retain any momentum gained from the alteration of gravity.

For example, The Killing Moon may greatly invert the attraction between a nail and a wall. The nail will go flying away from the wall at great speeds and if released will continue to fly like a bullet due to inertia. It may also decrease the attraction between an an object and the earth to slow its fall, or vastly increase attraction between two objects to crush anything in between. The Killing Moon cannot alter its users gravity.
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Coming in hot
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>>81219813
Don't mean to derail, but the Part 4 doc was created last thread and wasn't added to the OP.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw/edit

I added a list of unassigned characters to the list of possible Scam Victims for the early section of the Part before the Lonely Hearts Club comes into play. Since most anons are just waiting for the writefriends to finish up Part 3 they discuss these for the time being so at least some progress will be made while we wait.

>>81221382
>>81221584
You the MVP Sandcastles.

>>81222290
This guy too.
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Should which Part should Plankton be in? I think his Stand should let him swap timelines with a member of the protagonist party, which is suitably weird enough for Part 5
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>>81222536
Sorry, i couldn't find the doc link, i saw it mentioned but i was rushing to get a thread up before it was archived, i never browse /co/ that often so i was unsure how fast the board moved.
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>>81222710
Its cool, I'll put it in the Abilities doc for easy reference when its time for the next thread to go up.
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>>81221687
I personally think each of Daffy's inner circle should end up dead, even though the gang doesn't really kill, it's the only people who are loyal to Daffy without being under his Stand's influence. Doesn't have to be direct kills though, for example, Tom could DOOT DOOT Snoopy through the cockpit of the boat and send him hurtling towards the giant propellers spinning on the boat's wings and then cut away as Tom grimaces.
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>>81222732
oh yea, meant to imply Snoops was dead from crashing a giant warship with him in the middle of it into the ground, not that the random punch out was his end
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>>81222655
>Don't Stop
>Plankton's Stand allows him to fast forward or reverse a person's train of thought. For example, if a person is thinking "I will walk forward" Don't Stop will speed up their thoughts to think they have just finished walking to their destination and are now thinking of what they will do once they arrived there. As for reversing it, suppose that same person arrived at their destination, Don't Stop will reverse their thoughts to make them go back to thinking their previous thought, thus they will think of walking again.
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update on my character

>character: Jan Mouse
she is a innocent rock singer that wanted to achieve fame and fortune so she made a literal deal with the devil gaining the superior skill in singing while obtaining her stand with one catch, kill any stand user in sight (work in progress)

>stand:「BLACK MAGIC」from the famed band slayer
>appearance: a dark humanoid figure, mostly shadow like and demonic in nature punch ghost. his speed both in flying and punches can break the sound barrier making explosive sounds. the stands strength comes from the users effort into singing and how she does it during combat

>abilities
Sub-bility 1: stand is able to repair the damaged body of the user in heaviest cases the stand user having severed limbs or even vitals ala head cut off
Sub-bility 2: Stand is able to shroud itself on the user and make the user invisible and disappear out of exsistance in her own dimension for only minutes at a time
Main Ability:「RAINING BLOOD」The user can cut herself and and have her stand manipulate her own blood to form as objects and/or be used as projectiles or bombs. with sheer force it can decimate any living being leaving destruction in her path. blood is recyclable as stand has blood levitation powers in close proximity

kinda fixed up my character. i dont know where shes gonna end up but i feel like we need more obscure characters in here
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>>81222923
this is actually kinda badass
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>>81222793
For some reason I'm picturing [Don't Stop] as a Sperm Whale...with Muscular arms...that is wearing an exact replica of Jotaros attire from Part 3.

From a distance it looks like a guy with a MASSIVE pomp (Really the front of the whales head) with a body that tapers to a point on the ground ("Hey! I'm down here!")
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>>81222290
I love the art shifting
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Another idea for a Spongebob character that we could carry over is Mr Krabs with his Stand [Leather Rebel] that lets him manipulate the weight of objects...can you say "Guess the weight of this crab."?

But seriously Mr Krabs would be a perfect scammer fight for the Conman Coalition.
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This is one of the most autistic things I've seen /co/ do since mlp. Nice job, faggots.
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>>81223120
>Complaining about original content being created
Fuck off shitter, go back to one of your many SU threads
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>>81223120
>decides to come to a thread he hates just to shitpost
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Anon in last thread did his take on Night Prowler, I like it more than my take on it, so I re-drew it. Also trying out the binary pen
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Reposting from last thread:

>about Candace (no i's)
It just works.

To clarify, it works similar to Telence D'Arby's Atum, though instead of a binary "yes or no" method, it can also distinguish individual parts of the body, and can see heat emanating from inanimate objects. Candace can see these signatures with normal eyesight, though she wears shades to distinguish them easier, and she's got a lot of backup shades in case the one she's wearing breaks.

And you don't realize how big of a waifu she is in general, not just on /co/. Redheaded big sisters tend to be this.

>>81222290
>>81223366
>>81221382
Keep 'em up boys
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dunno if yall can use this or not but ill post it and see what yall think.


Coraline
「Grass Is Greener」

Appearance: no idea. maybe something like a doll that changes shape depending on who it's watching.

Ability: The user can place her stand inside of any building and watch their every move, the range of the stand is dependent on the size of the building. Anyone who sleeps in the building will be able to enter the stand's "Dream World" where if they choose to stay the user's soul is eaten, if the user has a stand and their soul is eaten, the stand becomes tied to the building its apart of unless the owner of 「Grass Is Greener」 gives it a new owner

Stats:
Power: C
Speed: D
Precision: E
Durability: A
Range: C
Developmental Potential: B

the idea is something that Coraline would work along side Madame Foster capturing Stands and giving them to her.
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Which other battles still need to be elaborated? There are Marvin's and Lowly's alright, and who else?
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>>81223889
Marvin's probably the highest priority along with Skrawl, but we have an anon working on the latter.

Others that probably need a bit more elaboration:

>Ed Boys VS Clifford where they recruit him

>What happens to them in Porky's Memory Trap

As far as I can tell other fights like VS Simon & VS Marty are lacking only in comparison to the amazing writeups done by sandcastles and co, so those are of lower priority imo. They probably do need to be elaborated on at some point, but I think we should focus on getting at least something down for important stuff like Marvin & Clifford's recruitment before moving on to the other fights.
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>>81223889
Skrawl's, and Daffy's entrance has four different versions, so we need to brainstorm a bit and pick the best one.

For Clifford, I think one of the Eds (Ed, most likely) does something to win his affection, like offering a disgusting-looking but actually delicious snack.
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>>81224073
We talked about using the greentext version written by one of the writefriends since it was the most developed but I never got around to editing it. I've done it now but tried to incorporate some concepts from the other suggestions, take a look and see if it works, edit as necessary.
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>>81219813
So why is there a jojo general on /co/.
I thought jojo was /a/ material.
I am honestly curious since I don't go to /co/ that much.
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>>81224302
not a jojo general necessarily, but rather making a jojo-esqe thing/series with /co/-type characters
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>>81220981
>Backstory is him traveling through cracks, hoping that the next back he breaks will bring his dead mother back.
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quick thought I wantewd to drop in here before I sleep

The reason Fred was kicked from the Lonely Hearts Club is that it was called Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club prior

Fred killed Sgt. Pepper and the club was renamed
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I dunno where it could fit in or how it could fit in, but I would really love if there was a fight between Baloo from Tailspin and T-Bone and Razor from Swat Katz. A high in the sky Stand battle. I think it would be fucking awesome.
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>>81222290
Niceu. Although part of me wants the name to be something like Jojo Punchghost. Forgive me if that's too cheesy, though.
>>81223366
As the guy who drew the original, niceu work! Glad people liked my design.
>>81224195
Works for me.
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Is part 4 going to have an equivalent of "Let's Go Out for Italian"? Those 4 chapters were GOAT.
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>>81224302
It was only a thinly veiled JoJo general for the first couple of threads. It's mostly some weird crossover project now.
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I was thinking of giving Jazz's [Super Freak] some sort of ACT 2 where it turns into the Ecto-Skeleton from DP, which would retain previous abilites as well as granting new ones such as the ability to forcibly [peel] out stands from their users and then proceed to beat them to an ectoplasmic pulp.

Or it could be instead given to Danny Fenton's [Quiet Riot] since I thought it being a small face would be too lame for a stand that allows his actions to affect stands just as much as normal people. This stems from experience visiting /a/ JoJo threads where non-suit worn stands (e.g. Sky High and Chocolate Disco) would often end up on many anons' list as their least favorite stands.

What do you guys think?
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>>81224746
>in the establishing shot of the city we see a newspaper in the ground
>a close up reveals a pictures of Sgt Pepper from the PPG Beat Alls episode
>"Beloved Police Chief Found Dead"
>also reports the death of student Tadashi Hamada
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>>81225363
I can dig it, I'm not too much of a fan of Stands that are just objects either.

>>81225374
Tossing this into the doc under Zum's proposed intro

PPG a lock for Part 4 minor characters? They've already got Stands laid out in the doc
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>>81225477
Fuck me I realized the small face thingy was a reference to Quiet Riot's Bang Your Head with the metal mask, and a mask-based stand (Blackmore's [Catch the Rainbow]) was actually quite popular.

I still don't know how it would look good when Danny FENTON (no ghost powers) attempts to go toe-to-toe against punchghosts with just a mask though.
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>>81225508
I guess I can kind of see it happening, and now that I think about it some of the effect of the Stand's concept would be lost if he has a suit on. It seems like the whole idea behind the ability was to have an otherwise normal looking human punching punchghosts.

That said we would still need to find a part for Danny to show up, should I put him down as a suggested minor stand user in Part 4?
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>>81225567
don't.
We already got filled up with serial killers, and the protag count is already almost impossible to keep up with.
I'd say part 5, but that's already been a dumping ground for stands. But its the best place.
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>>81225567
>>81225612
The official reviewfag said he doesn't like it when a stand simply gives its user increased powers without any other unique abilities, and the person-with-stand affecting stands part is technically already covered by Scary Monsters.

And about putting him in part 4 or 5, the problem is that we don't know how long is the time-skip between those parts and Waifu Ocean, since Jazz is Danny's older sister. Maybe this can be solved by making either Danny younger or Jazz substantially older by their respective parts.
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>>81225636
So?
Fucking put it in anyways, if the other anon makes a good case for it.

I understand that reviewfag gets some say in this, but fuck it dude, his word alone shouldn't be law.
Also why are you using a tripcode?
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>>81225675
>tripcode
A tripcode is when there are random numbers beside the name. Otherwise, this is simply just a name. I chose this name because it is the stand of my favorite minor JoJo villain.
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>>81222290
>Anthony Burch
You're a man among children, Anon.
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>>81225612
Point taken but I would like to mention that the first half of Part 4 has nothing to do with Serial Killers and needs a couple of chumps to be one-off, would-be victims for the Conman Coalition's attempts to win the bet. People like Gumball, Professor Pyg, the PPG, and maybe one or two more. I'm not really anticipating any of these opponents to show up after the Serial Killer plot kicks into gear.

Regarding the seemingly huge amount of protagonists, the idea seems to be that the focus is just on EEnE, Stan and Scrooge (and Gadget until he dies) with everyone else only appearing in a minor capacity. Jay, Silent Bob, Penny, Gogo, Hiro, Shaggy or Scooby probably won't get the same amount of attention as the main heroes is what I'm saying.

Gadget in particular needs to have bumbled into quite a few Stand battles before he dies. Two or three before he gets his stand and one or two afterwards, just so he gets enough focus before getting taken out by Fred at the halfway point.

>>81225636
I was thinking 6 took place only a little while after 5, with Dora getting caught smuggling Jawbreakers after the Red Guy's operation gets taken down. If this is the case there shouldn't be any issue if Danny is in 5.
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>>81225675
>his word shouldn't be law
Fucking thank you. If enough anons like it and make it work fuck my biases. And for what it's worth 5 would probably be best just because it would be confusing as fuck to have some guy just punching stands when normal rules say he shouldn't be able to.
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>>81225834
>don't know who that is
>look him up
>he framed a fucking tweet
Sometimes I hate humanity.
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>>81225735
alrighty.
Why do you namefag then?
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>>81222290
I love it , keep it up.

Could you upload all the previous pages?
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>>81222290
Danke family
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>>81225885
Guess that's settled then. Danny Fenton for part 5 going [Quiet Riot]?

>>81226525
Beatsu me-da.
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>>81225363
Danny in his ghost form reminds me of Pannacotta Fugo for a reason.
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I've been following this project for a while, so I thought I should try and contribute. The post got a little too large so I’ll do it in two parts.
Part 1

Stand Name : [Soap] by Melanie Martinez

Stand user: Kuffy "Mr. Bubbles" the Clown, from Thomas and friends

Appearance: A colorful bubble gun with a clown face that materialize in Kuffy's hand.

Abilities: When Kuffy pulls the trigger, [Soap] shoots out tiny soap bubbles that are as tough as regular balloons. Kuffy controls the speed and the movement of the bubbles.
[Soap] can only shoot tiny bubbles, however they can increase in size by floating into each other and combining
Larger bubbles are more difficult to pop than smaller ones, however it cannot split up again.

A bubble's speed and agility is measured by the quantity of the bubbles, every new bubble [Soap] makes decreases the speed of all existing bubbles. This continues until the maximum amount of bubbles are made, then the earliest bubbles will disappear when new ones are made.
Larger bubbles counts as more than one bubble, this means that the larger the bubble, the slower it gets.

If an object touches two bubbles which are pushing against each other, the object will get engulfed by the new larger bubble. This of course depends on the object's size. If it is bigger than the new bubble, then the bubble will just get stuck on the object and can't move.
Engulfed objects may be carried by the bubbles.
The inside of [Soap]'s bubbles are airtight and cannot be destroyed from the inside.
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>>81227067

Part 2

[Soap] also has some other secondary abilities:

When a bubble is popped, either by an enemy, object or by Kuffy's own volition, the ability [Why do I always spill?] gets into effect. This leaves a very sticky soap-like fluid that functions like glue. This fluid will begin to disappear just like the bubbles if Kuffy creates more than the maximum amount.

The two other stand abilities are [Let me under your skin,] and [Threw a Toaster].

When an object is inside a bubble or has a bubble stuck on them, Kuffy may start [Let me under your skin.] The bubble will then begin to “eat” the surface of the object. The devouring speed is measured by the compared sizes of the bubble and the object.
The bubble may “eat” the object until there is nothing left, and will increase in size by eating. This means Kuffy can, with a bit of work, increase the size of his bubbles without having them combining.

Although the stand [Soap] doesn’t weight anything in Kuffy’s hand, it is actually very heavy and will do much damage if you’re hit by it.
This is the ability [Threw a Toaster,] and let’s Kuffy fight with [Soap] as a melee weapon. He can also throw it, and then materialize it in his hand anew.
However If Kuffy dematerialize [Soap,] every bubble that has been made will disappear.

I was thinking of Kuffy being a villain either in part 5 or part 6, what do you guys think?
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We should probably cut the Cucaracha references in the Tom's Girl section. It's a little bit too much.
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>>81227341
Agreed. It's laying it on way too thick.
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Alright, so because I'm not that much help when it comes to detailed writeups I've tried to lay out some groundwork for Part 4 in the doc. Its mostly for the first section with the Conman Coalition bet that establishes the city as being loaded with Stand Users as well as the Jawbreakers.

Basically it goes like this:

>A couple of minor Stand User battles to establish the relationships between the main cast
>Gogo and Hiro fight where EEnE find out about Stand Jawbreakers
>Mini-Arc where they kill Kevin and Gadget gets his Stand
>The Disney Princess Gala
>Gadget getting murdered by Fred

I would have kept going up until the ending, but its gotten late where I am and I need to go to bed. The Pastebin RAWs have a lot of conflicting ideas and concepts for how the Part should be structured, but I felt that the plan we go with should be one that allows for Gadget to have at least some interaction with the other protagonists so that they give a shit enough to pick up where he left off when he gets killed by Fred.

That said, feel free to make whatever alterations you all feel are necessary, this is a group effort first and foremost and I'll work with whatever plan the majority of anons approve of.

Thanks for all the hard work as always, chat with you all again in a couple of hours.
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>>81219813

Homer Simpson [Political Powers]
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>>81228104
>Kevin
Which one?
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>>81228104
thank you family.
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One quick thing I'm confused on, is LeTerally Daffy's birth name or a name he takes on to distance himself from his past? Same with Porky, is his real name Porky or Scatman? I'm thinking the original names should be what they were called when they were kids.
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Alright. I've been thinking. Since Bionicle got a few movies, comics, even cartoons. So, why shouldn't they be included on our little Cruise.

Stand User: Takanuva (Free Stand. Itself's user.)
Stand Name: [CRYOSHELL] (Band name)
Stand appearance: Takanuva, Tahu Mata, Wenua(Metru), Matoro(Mahri), Gresh(Glatorians), Gali(Okoto), Hewkii(Inika). One Bionicle at a time.

Ability: Stand is able to summon "masks" of its' other forms and able to merge or change between forms. Activating the other forms triggers a timer. After timer stops, the current form disappears into a mask, summoning original form, Takanuva or the parts of other forms merged with current form disappear.
Forms and songs:
Takanuva: [CRYOSHELL]
Tahu: [CLOSER TO THE TRUTH]
Wenua: [BREAKOUT]
Matoro: [CREEPING IN MY SOUL]
Gresh: [GRAVITY HURTS]
Gali: [FALLING]
Second Ability: By combining all of its' forms, it is able to become [MATA NUI]. Mata Nui is a general powerhouse, utilizing elemental strikes and its' own parts as weapons. However the form is very unstable, and it manages to hold for 3 hours. After that, the whole stand recharges, leaving only Takanuva's mask behind. Recharge is going on for 3 days.
Sorry if my grammar is bad. Also tell me if it's OP or not.
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>>81223889
I was planning to tackle Lowly today or tomorrow, and had Marty on my to do list

the Eds and Clifford sounds pretty open ended, so was considering taking a swing at it to see what people thing. was going for them fighting it and not hurting it that much, and it being more of "it wanted a friend" than "it likes to eat people." Ed also feels like he's the key to the befriending, purely by his personality
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>>81229923
Fuck. Forgot to add Hewkii: [NO MORE WORDS]
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>>81220981

I look at Chuckie and immediately I think he could pass for Alessi.
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>>81226688
not my work, just saved his stuff cuz it's great

all you artists made me make a fucking folder for this, you asses!
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>>81229951
My idea for Marvin pretty much depends on Ed and Clifford being close as it currently stands (heh), so Ed being the key to befriending the big red goof is fine by me.
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Any confirmation on whether or not Big Skeleton (from the BBC Cartoon "Funnybones") and his stand [ENJOY YOURSELF] are going to be added?
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So, switching gears a little bot, since we have Protag for part 7 (Cliff and Jane/Driver 8), we should start specifying the story a little bit so we have an idea of what's going on with it when we get there.

What we know is
>Mr. Nobody, the president if the United states, has began a cross country wacky race, the reward being the wishing star
>behind the scemes, the race is a plot to bring the prices of Superman's supernaturally charged corpse to him for some reason
>Cliff is in the race to get the wishing star to wish his stand away
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>>81230580
Cliff and Jane? Driver 8?
what about mojo jojo? this isnt on the pastebins
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>>81230720
New development. Pastebinfag has been out because of family emergencies, so they aren't quite up to date.
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>>81230759
Well then, fill me in anon, how do you expect to get hot opinions otherwise?
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>>81230580
Some ideas I had:
>country is called the United States of Nowhere
>Chameleon is either an agent of the President or a foreign spy trying to uncover the true meaning of the race
>Pym is at first neutral, only entering the race to further his research of 「SPACE」
>After fusing with a corpse part, he is captured by President Nobody and forced to work for him. This could lead to his fiance, Janet, trying to save him
>There should probably be one or two characters who primary use 「SPACE」, at least until they get a corpse part. I was thinking of writing up some character ideas later.
>The visions of Superman people see has him resembling Superman Prime
>Fusing with multiple corpse parts could lead to awakening a "Superman Stand" that comes in different stages, each named after a song in the Concerto for a Rainy Day
>fusing with the whole corpse, only possible when one is sure in their identity and heroism, is called 「MR. BLUE SKY」and acts like the Superman Thought Robot
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>>81219813
It's a nice picture, the characters look nice but it's not that much drawn like Arika jojo style.

It's not like Tails get trolled bad quality of art.
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>>81230899
Early part 7 the best.
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bumpity-bump bump.
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>>81230899
Part 4 was best when it was being silly. It had a tendency to swing back and forth wildly though.
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So uh..

What are Freaky Fred's stand abilities? I don't think we've given him any yet.
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>>81219813
The plot summaries/character list is terribly out of date. Also, here's what was suggested for fighting game stages in the last thread.
>Courage's House
>CN City
>Angel Island
>Daffy's Villa
>Superjail
>Suzie's Cell
>The Cruise Ship (featuring Bluto, Carmen, and Lowly)
>The Oval Office of Nobody (featuring TOM)
>The Pillarmen's hibernation area
>Kuzco's Palace
>The Culdesac
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>>81230580
Well, I for sure want Tempo and Sam & Max as party members, so here's a small idea if how I would want that to go down.
>Cliff fights Sam & Max, as they're generally raising hell and really in he and Hane's way
>they get their assessment kicked, and Cliff eventually talks them into joining up with them
>a either the next fight or the fight after that is with Tempo, who is an agent if the president
>she talks about how Nobody talked her into helping him (although who she's talking about isn't shown besides a few hints), and she fights Jane and Driver 8
>Jane wins after making Tempo panic by using Crazy Jane On God to find out about her past, and strike at vital emotional points (the exact same insecurities that Nobody manipulated he woth, no less)
>similarly to Sam and Max, Jane offers her hand and Tempo accepts
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Holy crap this is an amazing crossovers series I mean I hope they're illustrators out there like artist drawing the stands and stuff.
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>>81225206
That sounds fun, but still a bit suprised that people here and the mods don't mind it.
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>>81233119
Probably because it's cartoon characters in a cartoon setting only based around an anime concept. It promotes the discussion of cartoons and their characters a lot more than it does for anime. That's my guess.
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>>81233119
/a/ hates us. Most people just kind of ignore us since we're usually smart enough to keep it to our own thread.
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>>81230885
Hows this for an idea: When someone fuses with the whole corpse, they obtain the power of [MR. BLUE SKY] and become the center of all love and kindness in the world, preventing attacks from ever reaching simply because the attackers, or even the weapons they use to attack refuse to strike against Superman. The only way to bypass the love is to use [space] or [stretch] to overcome the gulf of kindness Superman's corpse projects.
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So we're pretty much done with part 3, is that correct?

Should we start working on Part 4 now?
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>>81230899
Asking me to draw in Araki's artstyle, let along transition a number of cartoon characters into such, is asking a bit much for my level of artistic ability.
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>>81219813
can you stop running the joke into the ground now
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>>81234351
____________________No._________________________
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If we don't have a Stand called [The Walrus Was Paul] in Part 5 I won't know where to put my face.
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>>81234589
I was going to suggest 「I AM THE WALRUS」as a Stand that causes the target to appear to speak random gibberish to everyone but themselves and the user. It would have the added effect of having the target think everyone was named Paul.
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>>81233980
Final fight is still up in the air. Last I checked there are still FOUR different versions of how Daffy's villa plays out.

That's kind of a big deal.
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>>81235545
Looks like we actually settled on a slightly modified version of the greentext.

Also whoever added that minor fight with Snoopy on the way to the Mystic Ruins, that was a nice touch.
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>>81235662
Well I have a suggestion for their first encounter with Lowly.

After Lowly gets off the cruise ship and heads into the crowded dock, this can happen:

>Tom decides he's going after him and maybe with some help from Clifford (might not work since he can't really move around a dock that well) they find him before he gets away.
>Lowly then crushes a word like "breathing" causing everyone on the crowded dock to asphyxiate
>Lowly is about to kill Tom
>But then a plane propeller is heard over head
>Lowly looks up in rage, then settles into that smile
>"We'll settle this later."
>He makes his escape, cursing the beagle

It serves to establish that Snoopy is higher up the pecking order too.
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>>81225508
>>81225363
Wait, people are actually bringing up my Quiet Riot? I thought that got lost in the old threads an no one noticed.
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So I was watching THAT scene from Book Revue and I finally looked up some of the words. Turns out a samovar is something you use for tea, not an instrument, and a balalaika is a guitarlike instrument, not something you sit on. In short, Daffy was talking out of his ass and didn't know shit. I think we need to work his ignorance of the actual culture in somehow, could work to show how disconnected he is from reality.
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Things that need to be worked on in part 4 from my knowledge

>Freaky Fred's stand
>How Scrooge and Stan discover their stand powers
>Daffy's effect on Toontown or whatever
>Fights with members of the murderer society
>Freaky Fred fight.
>Various minor stand fights
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>>81237017
>Fred's stand is good so far. It can turn anything it can touch into a vibrating razor blade, in the same way KQ turns things into bombs.
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>>81237069
Didn't meant o quote.
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These two should totally be in either Part 5 or 6. Not even heroes or villains, just an obstacle the protags have to get through.

I dunno about specific powers, but I had an idea of The Mad Hatter having a Stand that trapped people in a tea party, and only the March Hare's Stand can get you out, but you have to somehow convince him.

I dunno. If done right, I feel like these two could be a lot of fun.
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>>81228290

From EEnE
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>>81222011
I could see this being the Stand of Alice from the Disney film.
Which reminds me, are there any female characters we can use that won't automatically go to Part 6?
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>>81221584
>>81221604
>>81221623
>>81221687
>tfw I'm the one who suggested Snoopy
It may be the only thing I've contributed to this project, but it's something
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So Mr. Morris and his stand [CAR WASH] are going in part 5, correct?
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>>81237105
Just came up with a couple stands for these two.

[Hotel California]
The Mad Hatter's stand causes its victims' lower brains to take control of their upper brains. Reflexes and base urges overpower all training and reason. Even when its victims actively say "We need to get out of here," their bodies just keep on ignoring them. Mad Hatter uses it to make people join his tea party and keep eating and drinking and frolicking as long as he wants.

[Time in a Bottle]
The March Hare's stand steals time from its victims' future lifespan and transfers it into bottles, or teapots as the case may be. This time may be poured out and given to anyone who drinks the time. He works in tandem with the Mad Hatter's stand to slowly steal time from the party guests to keep the him and Hatter hosting their party forever... thought they do need to cycle out guests when they stay past their expiration date.

It feels like they would fit as almost a roadside distraction for the racers in Part 7, were it not more comics-based.
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>>81237747
Not to burst your bubble but there is already a stand called [Hotel California] in the doc which is Madame Foster's stand.
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>>81222923
can someone give me a review on her?
critism needed
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07i6cr8tYE8
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>>81237839
[Margaritaville] would work then, I suppose.
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>>81237659
>tfw I'm the one who suggested the name [Aces in Exile] for his stand
I feel you man.
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>>81237934
fucking amazing
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>>81237934
>Anticuada y anacrónica anciana con olor a formol con discípula de matusalén
Holy shit
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>>81237934
>>81238000
>>81238297
Principle GoodVib(ration)es should be a Part 5 villain that the protagonists team up with Billy, Mandy, and Erwin to defeat.
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Whoever put the Lowly fight in the doc, nicely done. That was some good shit.
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>>81230341

This.

I like it.
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Trent Lane
「FREAKIN' FRIENDS」
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=husIwFEaFqc&list=RDhusIwFEaFqc#t=21
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>>81236121
Danny Phantom too handsome, man.

I'd love to see him in Pannacotta Fugo's clothes.
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>>81226688
http://imgur.com/a/EtEAh
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>>81239333
I seriously hope Muriel doesn't die
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>>81239438
I seriously hope you don't read the pastebin then,
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>>81239438
Well...
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Here is a stand idea I had after someone requested this stand in the last thread. Sorry its kinda complicated.

1/2

**Stand**: [NIGHT ON BALD MOUNTAIN]

**User**: Maleficent

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLCuL-K39eQ

**Appearance**: A muscular shadowy deamon, covered in writhing misty energy, [NOBM] has a crows head with large banded horns, feathery protrusions flowing from its body and gigantic bat wings.

**Power**: [Fall From Grace]

This ability summons the souls of the dead , from any area the users shadow falls over, as ephemeral ghosts surrounded by fog, weak individually, but coming together to form a gigantic roaring river of misty ectoplasam. Usually these can only be seen by stand users, but they are visible at midnight, or all night on a full moon.

These spirits can change and affect the physical world, warping things into gigantic and evil versions of themselves: a firepit into a volcanoes mouth, a town into a ghost town, a rosebush into a forest of thorns, the user into a gigantic dragon, a house into a gothic castle. However the degree and speed of the change is tied to the number of ghosts summoned.
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>>81239481
>>81239577
Yeah, I already knew that
I was seriously hoping that if I hoped enough things would change
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>>81239577
Aw man, now I want to think up Stands for Felix and Calhoun.
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So I'm here to finally deliver the damn Skrawl fight, as promised. Also have a quick scene with Lowly and Snoopy, will post that after the Skrawl fight.
>after Jafar goes blooey [FRIEND LIKE ME] retreats back to its lamp, quipping “Well that was fun Al, but it’s time for me to take a snooze! Later!”
>Aladdin explains Genie’s recharge thing to the party when they show confusion
>Tom shrugs. “Still a neat trick that blue guy does with the wishes, daddy-o. Say… you wouldn’t happen to be up for a vacation, would ya?”
>Aladdin is stunned. “Vacation? I’m not sure what-“
>”We’re on the road lookin’ for a crumb with powers just as freaky as that guy we just fought. We could use you and your friend in the lamp.”
>Aladdin hesitates. “But what about Jasmine?”
>”The chick will understand. This guy’s powers got to my girl, think about what you’d do if that dame you like so much had something nasty happen to her. C’mon, you in or out?”
>Johnny stops Tom and tells Aladdin it’s his choice before pulling his son aside
>the two argue about Tom trying to recruit Aladdin even though he has no real reason to join in the fight. Johnny thinks it’s wrong for Tom to involve others in his vendetta against the duck when said others don’t know the full picture, and Tom thinks it’s stupid to let such a powerful stand user stay unprotected where Daffy can find and potentially Cucaracha him
>Johnny begrudgingly admits Tom has a point and the two return to Aladdin
>Aladdin feels like he can’t abandon Jasmine and refuses
>Tom tries to elaborate but Johnny stops him
>Johnny only asks that Aladdin help the party out until Bluto returns, explains that the feds are after Eddy thanks to Jafar
>Aladdin agrees to do that much at least since they helped him figure out the genie thing, which should let him patch things up with Jasmine
>he begins to lead the party back towards Agrabah
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>>81239722
>before Tom can say anything Johnny stops him. When Al’s out of earshot Johnny explains that this way they can be close to Aladdin until they have to go, and they can set things up so he’ll be well protected when they’re gone
>Johnny also explains that if Aladdin isn’t fully prepared for what’s ahead of them he may flake in a moment of truth
>Tom gets fed up with his dad, even though privately he acknowledges some of his points, and just refuses to talk to him
>Ed makes a quip about how well the two are getting along
>cut to a few hours later. The sun is rising on the travelers, who have been up all night
>Aladdin decides to talk to Tom. “So. What’s with you and the duck?”
>”Told you. He got to my girl. She thinks she’s him or something.”
>”Huh. So that’s why you’re doing all this?”
>”Yeah. She’s what I got, and I ain’t letting this jackass take her without a fight.”
>”That’s it? You’re all traveling the world, even killing people, over one girl?”
>”The dame’s just my story. The old man says the duck may be up to something, so he’s been tracking him. The three morons over there are doing it to get even or whatever. Thinking about changing your mind?”
>”I’m sorry, Tom. It still sounds like this is between you guys and him. No offense, but there’s no way I can see you being a [hero], and I’m not going to throw everything away for your petty revenge.”
>Eddy groans, interrupting the conversation. “Hey Al, is it too much to ask for your Genie to make us less tired?”
>”I told you he’s recharging. Nothing I can do.”
>”Yeah, well when we get back to the city…”
>Tom snaps. ”You won’t be able to go in because you went out to lunch and made a wish with the guy you were supposed to be wary of, Jack!”
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>>81239742
>Eddy gets defensive, which leads to a massive argument. Aladdin stays out as much as he can, Tom’s pissed that the Eds fucked over their chances of having a comfortable stay in Agrabah, Edd is mad at Eddy for always dragging everyone into his shit, Ed is staring at a rock that kind of looks like a bird, Eddy is trying to justify himself by saying he didn’t know about the monkey’s paw thing, and Johnny is pissed at the Eds but is also trying to play peacemaker, which only makes Tom more pissed off at him for taking the Eds’ side
>Tom finally shouts at Eddy, “I didn’t ask for you to come, Jack! You’ve done nothing but ruin my vibe and drag me into deeper and deeper shit, and I’m sick of havin’ to babysit you because you’re a goddamn dunce!”
>suddenly they hear laughter
>”Oh, such drama! All these titans, battling amongst themselves! I have such a weakness for dramatic moments!”
>the party turns and sees Skrawl, who is hamming it up with his little speech
>”The pathos! The raw emotions! Ah, such beautiful music to my ears! Just like the music that played when I was but a boy in my native village, the music of the violins!”
>everyone is confused, but Tom realizes he’s connected to Daffy thanks to the village reference
>Johnny: “Uh… who’s the three legged clown?”
>”I think he’s with the duck old man.”
>”That explains the flamboyance.”
>Skrawl introduces himself dramatically and claims he’s here just to talk to Aladdin
>Tom tries to dissuade Aladdin from talking to him, but Aladdin wants to listen
>”Well you see, I told myself that there was a strapping young man who would be a great help in my plan, and I wanted to offer a position in my organization.”
>”Don’t listen to this crumb, Al. He’s bad news.”
>”Hold on, Tom. What’s your organization?”
>Skrawl claims he/Daffy is trying to create a better world where no one will ever fight again. Aladdin doesn’t quite buy it
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>>81239788
>Aladdin tells Skrawl about Jafar and says he mentioned a Beagle. He asks if Skrawl and the Beagle are related
>Skrawl hesitates long enough that Aladdin realizes the two are connected. Tom gets sick of Skrawl’s shit and sends out OMT
>”Oh, a big bad wolf coming to blow me away? So cliché, honestly, it’s just a tad… lame.”
>OMT suddenly becomes a caricature of itself. It blows a few warm up notes but they sound pathetic and gently plop to the ground
>Skrawl laughs and reveals NILLILI MAMBO
>”Perhaps a demonstration of what I can do will convince you to join me, street boy. Sit tight for a second, street boy, while I show you what I can do.”
>Skrawl makes the entire eligible surrounding area and everything in it except himself and Aladdin lame. Everyone reacts in fear and panic to their strange new bodies.
>Skrawl laughs and sends Nillili out to attack OMT. It rears up a punch, pauses, twitches violently, and releases a powerful punch that sends our favorite jazz wolf sailing
>everyone else sends out their derpified stands
>Edd tries to create something, but realizes that there no junk in the middle of the desert and Safety Dance might as well be building stuff out of Lego anyway
>Ed tries to distract Skrawl, but Spoon only ends up distracting itself and starts staring at the bird rock
>Eddy tries to get Skrawl to [GIVE] him something, but Skrawl refuses. The stand shrugs with cartoony arms and disappears
>Johnny’s stand acts like an actual gorilla and starts doing gorilla things. Johnny makes a comment about it being stupider than the Orangutan King
>Tom grimaces, nursing the jaw that was hurt when OMT got a nice sock to the face, and looks back towards where his stand sailed off to
>it’s returning to him by teleporting slowly (I’m thinking it enters the corner and then inches along the line between that corner and the destination like a worm) through the shittily drawn landscape, which is full of corners
>Tom gets an idea
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Since the doc still lists Jafar's Stand as Arabian Nights, I'd like to bring up the old suggestion of renaming it Black Hole Sun.
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>>81239602

2/2

**Base Stats**
Power:B
Speed:B
Range:E
Durability: B
Precision: C
Potential: A

**Secondary Ability**: [Maleficents Frustration]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48NGuXs3nAc

[NOBM] is affected by the things and events in the outside world, which forcefully change its form.

[Good] things which do not share affinity with Maleficent cause [Diminuendo], shrinking [NOBM] into a form called [Adagio], a small physically powerful crow that can be seen by even non stand users, gaining unlimited range but losing access to [Fall From Grace]. Its claws are razor sharp.

**Adagio Stats**
Power:A
Speed:B
Range:A
Durability: A
Precision: C
Potential: E

[Evil] things that Maleficent shares an affinity with cause [NOBM] to grow into a gigantic mountain sized daemon, casting a miles long shadow even at night, that can physically grab the souls of the dead, compressing and combining them into physical creatures under Maleficent's control. In this form [NOBM] becomes shadowy and ephemeral, physical objects passing straight through it and it snaps back to Maleficent's side, but its power to control the souls of the dead grows immense.

**Allegro Stats**
Power:E
Speed:B
Range:E
Durability: A (ephemeral, burned by the light of lanterns and electric light)
Precision: C
Potential: E

Examples:

[Crescendo]: Night, bad weather, pain, suffering, irony, emotional sadism, dead trees, the fullness of the moon, fire and gaslight. Most powerful: emotional sadism and the full moon.

[Diminuendo]: Sunlight, the light from aurora, church bells, prayer, hymns, lantern and electric light, true love. Most powerful- The light from an aurora and true love.
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>>81239822
>he recalls OMT and has it teleport towards Skrawl
>Skrawl laughs and makes the sand OMT is traveling through normal sand. The still lame OMT pops out and hovers over the normal patch of sand, confused. Nillili does the twitch thing and punches OMT again, but it seems to not hit as hard as before
>Skrawl gloats because he’s a dick
>Tom curses now that his strategy is fucked up, but wonders why OMT didn’t go sailing again
>Skrawl turns to Aladdin and asks him if he would like to reconsider his loyalties
>Aladdin refuses, saying that even if Tom and co. don’t seem like the most reputable fellows Skrawl seems worse
>Skrawl gets angry and lamifies Aladdin, saying that he doesn’t need him, just the lamp
>while this has been going on the others have coordinated their efforts and move to bum rush Skrawl himself, hoping that they can take him out without their shitty stands and Nillili won’t be able to get them all
>it goes poorly. Even when Aladdin gets in on it, Skrawl himself can evade the heroes easily since they’ve been slowed down by the lamifying and his stand hits so hard that they all go sailing
>Nillili gets a really good hit in on Eddy and he falls to the ground hard. He gets up slowly but is too dazed to move beyond that, and Nillili rears itself into a position where it can smash Eddy’s head with a twitchy punch
>Tom barges in, pushes Eddy out of the way, and takes the hit for Eddy. Aladdin notices
>Tom goes flying and lands in the sand patch Skrawl made normal. Nillili moves in to punch him again, but Tom notices that its movements are definitely way slower than they were when the sand was lame
>Tom grins, dodges Nillili’s punch, and starts having OMT teleport through the sand again
>Skrawl keeps turning the sand OMT teleports through normal, and OMT keeps jumping to another lame patch
>eventually most of the sand is normal. Skrawl gloats that OMT has nowhere left to go and has Nillili rev up another punch
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>>81239848
>OMT manages to block the hit now that Nillili’s been slowed down and its punches don’t hit as hard
>”What!?”
>Aladdin makes use of the distraction and punches Skrawl in the face. The shock causes everything to go back to normal
>Nillili turns to check on its master, which allows OMT to whack it in the face with its trumpet
>Skrawl gets up and spits. “You have made a terrible mistake, street boy. I know about you and your lamp, and one way or another I will have it.”
>”You can’t have that lamp, but try this on instead.”
>Skrawl looks over and OMT DOOT DOOTs him. As Skrawl lays dying, Tom grabs him and demands to know who the Beagle is
>”Oh… he’s a friend of mine… you’ll meet him soon…”
>Tom tries to get more, but Skrawl just mutters something about a yellow bird and dies
>Tom curses that every fucking lead they get seems to go cold
>Johnny says at least shit worked out. He asks Aladdin if he’s okay
>”Yeah… and I think I’m going to join you guys.”
>everyone is stunned. Aladdin explains that if guys as dangerous as Skrawl are running around, he feels like he should help stop them since Friend Like Me is so powerful that both sides want to recruit him
>after making sure Tom hasn’t bullied him into it, Johnny shrugs and accepts the proposal
>everyone starts to head out
>Aladdin stops Tom
>Tom nods. “Glad you’re coming along. Thought you didn’t want to help someone who wasn’t a [hero] though.”
>”I thought that, yes. But the way you saved that Eddy guy, even though you seem to hate him made me think otherwise. I think there may be a [hero] inside you, Tom. You just have to let him out.”
>Tom smirks and walks off. “I ain’t no hero, Al. Now c’mon, you’re the only one who knows the way back and I need a siesta.”
>Aladdin shakes his head and follows the heroes, now part of the party
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>>81239831
Woops, [Crescendo] are the evil things that increases [Night On Bald Mountain]'s size and [Fall From Grace]'s command of the souls of the dead.

Kind of obvious but I forgot to actually mention it.
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>>81239889
And here's the Lowly/Snoopy thing. Not entirely sure if we want to include it but I think it's cool enough to be at least worth sharing.
>Daffy has just sent out Marvin on border patrol or whatever to deal with the heroes if they get too close to the villa
>he orders Lowly and Snoopy to ready themselves in case Marvin fucks up (and Daffy is convinced he will) and storms out, followed by Porky
>Snoopy and Lowly are alone. Lowly smirks and begins to twist around Snoopy, who stands as still as a statue
>"I'm so glad that between us, I get the first shot at them. I'm sure it hurts your pride that he lets me get a chance to attack before you, doesn't it?"
>Snoopy remains motionless and uncaring
>"Oh, well. You know, I have a few special words I plan to use on you someday. Like Red and Baron."
>Snoopy's fingers twitch almost imperceptibly but he remains otherwise still
>"Ha. Say, do you know where my special book is?"
>Snoopy offers Lowly a dictionary with a page bookmarked
>"Oh, goody. What's this? A special word, just for me?"
>Lowly turns to the bookmarked page. It's full of words that start with P. The word "plane" has been crossed out
>Lowly glares at Snoopy, still with the faux-cheerful smile. "One day I will get you alone in an empty room and no one will ever find the body."
>Lowly slithers off. Snoopy simply adjusts his tie and walks away
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>>81221382
>>81221420
>>81221442
>>81221465

Would be interesting if Marvin mentioned Yosemite during his fight with the guys, by saying that it was him that sent Yosemite to investigate Strickland because he was tired of doing Daffy's petty missions. He could also say he regrets sending Yosemite after learning he died during that mission, but that is depending if the writefags will portray Marvin as sympathetic toward his comrades or just plain ruthless and caring only for himself.
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Alright, actual Part 4 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oBk4RDa3xWw
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>>81237659
>>81237977
I'm the one who suggested the ruse cruise ship.

Seeing it used the way it has been is great.

>>81239824
I suggested NOTHING LIKE A FRIEND, but I don't think anyone noticed.

>>81239889
Those must be some sharp notes OMT is DOOT DOOTing for them to kill a guy.
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>>81239221
Well my original idea for Quiet Riot wasn't that the user wore a mask like Catch The Rainbow, but like, a little face would appear on their hand, and whatever actions they did, the face would transfer along their actions to fill it with :"Stand-ness".

Also Quiet Riot ACT 2 idea was that the face would also project a Stand arms so it could be transfered to surfaces to do things (like transferring ACT 2 to a car and it runs over the enemies stand)
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>>81240769
The idea is that the notes take the place of Star Platinum's ORAORAs. We've been a bit back and forth on whether One More Time kills people with the notes or just by bashing them in the face with the trumpet, but I tend to lean towards the former because it looks cooler.

As for the Arabian Nights rename, I like Nothing Like a Friend. Keeps the same theme as Friend Like Me, down to being from the movie, and fits better than Arabian Nights.
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>>81240514
But that's wrong
http://youtu.be/HgzGwKwLmgM
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Okay guys I just had the most autistic idea ever. What if in part 5, Obi-Wan Kenobi appears as a minor character based on his auralnauts incarnation.
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>>81240950
I was talking about the CoCo version.
But fuck, that should be the real Part 4 anime ED
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>>81240130
Love it, Snoopy is one cool motherfucker.
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>>81240927
I've also been under the impression that OMT plays its trumpet and musical notes pummel the enemy.

One thing I want to bring up that's been bothering me though is how does IS YOU IS work on people who have been La Cucaracha'd if Daffy's personality hates jazz?

He usually uses it on enemies on Daffy's side after he's beaten the shit out of them and they're almost dead, so does that loosen Daffy's grip on them enough for their original personalities to make a judgment on how pleasant it sounds to them?
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>>81229923
Dang It! I was gonna do this!

I kind of like this idea, because masks were the coolest part of Bionicle and because I like the fact that you used all those Cryoshell songs, but Snow White sort of has that whole mask thing going on with her Stand already. Also, a single character with multiple Stands that all have different powers is maybe just a little OP as well as against typical Jojo rules.

I might as well post my own idea for Takanuva at this point, though I don't think its that much better than Chaos'.

>Takanuva
>[CAUGHT UP IN A DREAM]
>Appearance: A mechanical crab
>Vehicle: [GRAVITY HURTS] (The Ussanui)
>Abilities: [CAUGHT UP IN A DREAM] can 'roll up' basic elements into [Spheres] which the Stand can launch at high speeds. These [Spheres] unravel/explode into their composite element when they hit something. For example, the Stand can roll up light into a [Sphere] and it will burst into a blinding flash upon contact with a target, a [Sphere] of earth with explode into a mass of dirt, a [Sphere] of ice would create a glacier .etc. The desired element must be present in order for [CAUGHT UP IN A DREAM] to roll it into a [Sphere] for use, and they can be knocked off course if struck at the right timing and angle.

I was going to suggest him for Part 7 due to the identity theme and because he has a cool vehicle. Instead of just giving him mask powers I thought I'd have his Stand based around the sport they play in the movie and his pet crab. Its only a little less OP than Chaos' suggestion, but there is less clash with Snow White and its also a single Stand.

If people don't particularly like my idea or Chaos' feel free to reject this character suggestion because we're walking on a bit of a slippery slope if we are going to start including any character that has a comic/cartoon made of them. Where exactly do we draw the line?
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Maybe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RqQn2ADZE1A
or
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sexoN2XEG90 could be the ED for Part 6.
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>>81241313
Since it's about waifus I would suggest this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9O6e7cgkeqw
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>>81241198
Bonkle's story was mostly told via books and online stories, so as much as I love it I'm thinking maybe we should leave it out just to be safe. That said, I wouldn't mind having Takanuva's mask hanging up in Mr. Nobody's office or in Shirley's tent or something similar just as a fun background gag.
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>>81240130
Snoopy a best
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>all the implications in this thread that this won't be the part 4 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wwx8Voq373A
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>>81241607
I want to believe
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vn1pf0Xi3nU
Jabberjaw should totally be in this
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>>81241414
Agreed. Only characters whose stories were primarily told through Cartoons and Comics sounds like a good criteria to have, let's go with that.
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>>81241095
i was talking about the CoCo version also
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>>81241837
Oh.
That works too.
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>>81239722
>>81239742
>>81239788
>>81239822
>>81239848
>>81239889
>>81240130
digging the Skrawl fight. Gives tension to Aladdin joining and showing Tom go off the rails pissed off while still helping his friends is a big plus.

since EDs are being poked around, I only thought of these two.

>ED 1:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xIx_HbmRnQY
>ED 2:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4YV5jSuv_S0
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>>81240130
I hope Snoopy continues to be the "I think all of you guys are fucking dumbasses" of Part 3.
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>>81242015
i think the ED's should be more pop or rock oriented

something about your ED 2 just doesnt sit right
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>>81240892
I don't think a face manifesting in the middle of a punch would sound great for Danny. to be desu.
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>>81241414
Bummer, not that anon but little kid me loved the shit out of MNOLG (not the grindfest that was the sequel, the original) and those templar studios flash stuff they had up to Metru Nui.

We could arguably count those as web cartoons, but that's probably stretching it.
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>>81241155
What I was thinking was that La Cucaracha's first Act isn't as powerful as Act 2, so its victims are sort of a mix between Daffy's persona and their own personas. They hate Jazz, but there is still a part of them in there that wouldn't mind it if it was good enough, unlike Daffy who would hate it no matter what.

You're right that Tom seems to only use it on people who are almost dead/as a last resort after the time it failed during the Marty Fight though, so your idea for the explanation works just as well.
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Is Ace Ventura a character?
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>>81243020
Read the pastebins before you post
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>>81242694
Tom's girl went nuts when jazz started playing and she was under the effect of act 1, so that's what got me thinking why none of the other guys under the effect of act 1 reacted in a similar manner when jazz was played.

I guess it's a moot enough point if we'll go with my explanation that act 1's effects loosen when a victim is dying.
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>>81243301
So no
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>>81243696
Maybe make it a way to check if they're getting tailed or something.

Sorta like how Jonathan noticed Straits became a vampire.
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>Final battle between Tom and Daffy
STANDING HERE I REALIZE/spoiler]
THAT YOU'RE JUST LIKE ME
TRYING TO MAKE HISTORY
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>>81244242
That's a good idea, all Tom has to do to see if someone is legit or not is play some smooth jazz and watch how they react.
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>>81243696
Jerry also starts to go nuts at the Jazz Lounge they usually hang out at, that should probably be the first thing to tip Tom off that something is wrong with him.
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>>81238394
Having to many guises of the same show are kinda boring, more so if the villain is from the same show
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>>81244310
I don't know about that. When I think of Looney Tunes and final battles, I think of something like this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=li8ZqVGzDXQ
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>>81244445
The only point where IS YOU IS gets used on someone who was under Daffy's influence who wasn't dying is Sam during his fight with Tom, but Sam was part of the organization, so he was still mostly himself is the explanation we can go with there if it's an issue.
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>>81224041
Ed is known to carry doggie biscuits on his person.
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What is this cancer and how can i join it?
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>>81245275
Read the fucking pastebin.
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So the acquirements of a /co/co/ character is wacky costume with silly pose?
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>>81245473
no.

just give them a stand that's named after a song/album/band and give it a unique power that fits the character. boom.
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Here's a sample of sandcastles story.
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>>81245637
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>>81245707
Forgot this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KNqFhJ6-n0
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>>81245637
I dont know if to read this as a manga or as a comic
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I have something I'd like to bring up for part 7.
Since that part is all about capes and super heroes, is there any way Chemical X can also be involved with it? Like a power booster that lesser heroes want to get their hands on to strengthen their identities?

They have to take detours from the race to get pieces of Superman's corpse, but what if there were other things along the way as well and they're hard choices for what to go after.

>>81245637
Nice!
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>>81245863
Oh shoot Should i do this in manga or comic style?
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>>81246015
depends on what everyone wants.

i'd be fine with either.
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>>81246015
Do it in comic style, this is /co/co/ after all.

Or at least that's my say, whichever you're more comfortable with is what you should go with.
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>>81245637
Fucking fantastic
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>>81246015
Do it in comic style
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>>81245637
This is pretty fucking amazing.
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Tell me what you guises think

Part 1/2

Lilo and Stitch have somehow "fused" but in the way that only one can exist fisically, the other one must become a [ Stand ]. They participate on the MoSBR to wish for them to be apart once again.

Stand : [ Aloha Oe ] & [ Devil in Disguise ]

[ Aloha Oe ] appears to be a white-eyed beautiful hawaiian female goddess covered from the waist down whit leafs ( hidding her non-existant legs ), she carries around a blue wooden mask of something resembling a devil.

[ Aloha Oe ] has the ability to take pictures of what is infrot of her, she does this whit a big flash that come out of her eyes. Once she takes a picture everything that it shows must remain still until another picture is taken or the fisical copy of the photograf is broken.
If someone moves while under the effect of [ Aloha Oe ] her second ability [ Don't Leave Me Now ] activates, this ability transports you to the realm of the photograph where anything that happens to its fisical form will also happen to you. This ability ends if the user wills it or if she is defeated.
Things that aren't on the picture cannot walk into its scene.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyIJ2vMIuDg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ewI09bumFLo
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>>81247335
Part 2/2

[ Devil in Disguise ] looks like a green-eyed blue four-armed beast whit a wooden mask of a beatiful woman hanging as a necklace

[ Devil in Disguise ] is a simple Stand in the way that it doesn't have a mayor ability but compensates for that whit elevated base stats. It has high durability being overly fluffy, it can also lift objects three thousnd times his size.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emjLXdsj6xA

Stats:
[ Aloha Oe ]

Power: E
Speed: B
Range: B
Durability: E
Precision: B
Potential: B

[ Devil in Disguise ]

Power: A
Speed: A
Range: D
Durability: A
Precision: A
Potential: D

I think they would be perfect for part 7 since the theme is identity, having 2 characters who already knew who they where chasing to go back and maybe learning that not all they knew about each other was rigth.
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>>81247464
I don't think every single character for Part 7 necessarily as to fit the identity theme. A lot of the characters for other parts technically don't fi their themes.
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>>81247335
>>81247464
Crazy Jane already has the "two characters switching between stand and user" thing, plus we need to focus a bit more on comics characters.
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>>81219813
>/co/ thinks this is good artwork
>consistently
>they have the balls to call this jojo related when all they have is posing and wacky drawings
>2 things Japan creams themselves over as clichés
>it doesn't even look good
take this low quality shit to >>>/b/
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>>81221442

Is there an instance where Tom wins after someone figures out One More Time sort of like Sam here, but instead of vanishing behind a corner he simply walks behind it and waits for the opponent to turn their back to see where he has gone? For that matter, does OMT appear when Tom vanishes behind a corner?

Also is there an instance of someone being able to make a corner for him to move to? IE: Double D makes a perfect 90 degree corner out of scrap so that Tom can vanish behind it or pop out of it in an emergency save?
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>>81247729
>>81247795
>Crazy Jane already has the "two characters switching between stand and user" thing
Well then, fuck me in the ass if the original jojo had all totally diferent stands that dont use similar base concept

I TRIED SO HARD
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>>81248129
Dude you asked for our opinion and we gave it. In any case after Part 3 I can't think of a single instance where two stands in the same part used the exact same type of ability and functionality.
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>>81248546
"Similar base concept" is not the same as "exact type of ability and functionality", there are no stands exactly alike except for [ The World ] and [ Star Platinum ] but there are similar stands like :

[ Bad Company ] and [ Harvest ]
[ White Album ] and [ Oasis ]
[ Stone Free ] and [ Oh! Lonesome Me ]
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>>81247991
>is there an instance of someone being able to make a corner for him to move to? IE: Double D makes a perfect 90 degree corner out of scrap so that Tom can vanish behind it or pop out of it in an emergency save?

Yes, that happens in one of the fights.
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I really want to believe that the first parts of superman corpse they find are his balls
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Obelix
Stand name- ichigeki hichuu
Appearance- a menhir humanoid with a boar head and a sack full of roman soldier helmets.
Abilities- "Can't eat on an empty stomach"- Ichigeki pulls a roasted boat out of its sack which will rejuvenate and cause obelix's fatigue to vanish.
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>>81248850
I guess you have a point there. Part of me feels that this situation is a bit different from those combinations you've mentioned but I really can't pin down why exactly, so just consider my complaint similar concepts unfounded.

The other thing is I'm not sure why this 'Stand Switching' concept necessarily needs to be applied to Lilo & Stitch exactly, it makes sense for Crazy Jane because she has a split-personality problem in the comics.

Honestly I like the some aspects of the concept (the camera thing mainly) but I feel like the fact that they got fused together somehow is an unnecessary addition so they have a reason to be in Part 7, which really should be getting more comic suggestions than cartoon suggestions. Lilo & Stitch would probably be better off as extras in a separate part with or without the 'Stand Switching' factor, but that's just what I think.
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>>81249330
*boar
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>>81249330
>>81249367
>roasted boat
high in fiber, of course
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>>81249163
I'd be pretty beside myself if this were the case. It could be the first corpse part encountered. The protag would find it in the open and feel oddly drawn to it, taking it for good luck or something. Upon monitoring the race, President Nobody will notice it and become very wary of the protag, starting their rivalry. He'd start to send men after them to retrieve it.
>Did you think the president would let you flaunt that around without consequence?
>Hell are you talking about?
>You wield one of many mystical body parts the President has his eyes on to complete his goal. Hand the Sacred Scrotum over.
>What are you talking about this little charm I found on the road? Look pal, I don't have time for your politics. Get out my way or I'll-SCROTUM?!

>>81249330
Newspapers comics are unfortunately taken and barred from this project.
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>>81248991

Also a huge jojofag: this shit is straight up deviant-art tier autismo hijinks bordering on CWC level.
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>>81249706
Not newspaper comics, just stuff from Borf Star out of respect.
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>>81249706
Ah, oops. Sorry bout that
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>>81249792
Are any of the asterix characters in that?
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>>81249864
I don't think so, it's just standard sunday funnies stuff.
Also, Heathcliff.
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>>81249792
I think it's generally newspaper comics since the b0rf Star series essentially uses that as a medium. Only newspaper character we have is Snoopy who's from a series with a cartoon. That and he's dead in b0rfStar verse.
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>>81249927
Was asterix a newspaper comic? He also had a few animated movies if that helps.
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>>81249927
Yeah. Sunday Funnies is the proper term for what I said here>>81249927 My mistake.
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>>81249962
>replied to myself twice.
meant >>81249920 is correct.
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>>81249990
So asterix would be in a grey area at least?
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>>81249958
Borf tends to stick to stuff that's usually in the mainstream papers (plus Paper Towns for some reason) so I think Asterix and Obelix would be fine.
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>>81250010
Thanks
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>>81249330
For some reason I see them as participating in the wacky races part.
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>>81249792
Can Calvin be in? I really liked the Stand ideas that were discussed a while back.
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>>81250117
Nah, he's in Borf too.
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>>81250117
Calzone is in b0rf Star.

This really should be in some required reading section of the OP.
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6bPsulei-FMumMvZs1EyopxZrccDaFEl
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>>81250117
>>81250164
He also has a stand in that.
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It'd be a shame if we didn't reference the Fist of the b0rf Star somehow.
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>>81250632
Not sure where it would go.
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>>81250632
>You're stand connects you with him in a way none of us understand yet.
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>>81250632
>>81250730
Or better yet.
>Lasaga is love
>Lasaga is life
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>>81250632
Daffy vs Tom.

COME ON THOMAS.

I REELY WANT TO KNOW WHO YOU ARE!
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>>81251133
You can't kill me, Ton.
What would OUR mother think?
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>>81250632
>Tom's warned that his gf has been doing some crazy shit before confronting him
>It's not true! My girl would never do that! She cares about this world too much. She went to Sea World when she was a little girl.
>Tom defeats his girlfriend and holds her in his arms, fists clenched.
>LeTerally, you sick, demented, Rubber Ducky
>You twisted a poor girl's soul

>>81251133
FUCKING THIS. IT'S PERFECT BECAUSE OF THE LITERALLY ME ASPECT. Will Tom lose his sense of self to La Cucaracha's spell or will he prevail One More Time?!

FIND OUT NEXT TIME, ON THE NEXT DRAGON BALL Z!!!
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>>81251133
M.E. kills off John
>you're right, Porky. I can't hurt a defenseless man.
>But luckily, you're not a man!

>You're scum!
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>>81251427
>Noooooooooooo
>NooOOO
>Rest in Pepperoni
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>>81250632
>If it's a feit you want
>It's a Freight you'll get
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>>81251365
>>81251351

Make the "What would OUR mother think?" line Daffy's attempt to mind-fuck Tom.

WE know that Amelia is Tom's mom, and that she had no other sons. But Tom's memories get fucked by {Cucaracha].

He sees visions of Daffy there in his past.... But then instead of Daffy and him. It becomes just Daffy.

"Look back Thomas. I was always there."
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>>81245637
holy shit, that's super flattering and awesome
so I wrote up Lowly vs the gang's showdown. I have Tom vs the Men At Work, but probably easiest to post that all as one stream since it leads right into the fight with Afromania


>Lowly is waiting, wrapped around a fountain statue of Daffy
>"So you made it! I thought the random extras were going to take you down for me. But honestly, thank you for saving the opportunity for myself."
>"I've been looking forward to our FIGHT." The word bubble for Fight appears over his head, Lowly's stand appearing over it to crush the word in its claw

>Tom: "There is is again. That every part of me is yelling to attack, but I won't budge."
Johnny: "That's his Stand... it's taking the words right out of our noggins."
>Lowly: "Clever! But figuring out my Stand still won't move you an inch, my friends." Lowly starts to slither towards them
>Lowly pauses as he sees Edd reach into his pocket, scowling. "Now what are you...?"
>dramatic closeup as Edd pulls out a small book marked "Acme Handy Pocket Thesaurus."
>Lowly looks furious as Edd recites. "We may not be able to "fight," but we could certainly battle, attack, or contest you!"
>the team starts to move a bit, realizing that they can. Lowly recoils back by the fountain as they do, gritting his teeth
>"Fine! Play dirty, why don't you!?"
>Eddy: "Dirty!? You're the punk who's trying to paralyze us! Doesn't get any dirtier than a worm!"
>Edd: "And when the entire world's at stake, there's no such thing as playing dirty."
>Ed: "I'm always dirty cuz I do not bathe!"
>Johnny gives Ed a weird look, but not for reasons the reader might think
>Lowly, getting annoyed: "Fine! Let me be specific for you crafty little rats to understand the rules. There will be no ATTACKING or even APPROACHING me!"
>the bubbles appear, Wild Mountain Honey throwing away FIGHT to crush them instead. The gang freezes up again, and Lowly snatches away the thesaurus from Edd
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>>81251687
>Johnny: "It's like I thought... he can only hold so many words."
>Aladdin muttering quietly: "Guys, that's it. I've still got my wishes. We can wish to speak every language in the world. If he only has two hands, he can't crush the word for 'attack' in English, French and German."
>Tom: "Do it. I don't like this snake of a worm any-"
>Aladdin is suddenly wrapped around the throat, Lowly grinning sadistically as he squeezes and there's a sharp cracking SFX. "That's enough of that!"
>the gang stares in horror
>Lowly lets the lamp drop, standing over it since the group can't Approach him. "Now let's be perfectly clear, my clever little toys; I will not tolerate any STRATEGIZING either."
>Honey throws away Approaching to crush Strategizing and Attacking
>Johnny takes a step towards him. "Big mistake, ya little nightcrawler. Ol' Johnny ain't the sharpest bulb in the box, but I been in enough fights to know you don't gotta Attack to win a melee."
>Lowly sweats, not sure if Johnny can really hit him with his use of words. "MELEE, you say?" Lowly grins, and Attack is discarded to crush Melee and Strategize instead.
>Johnny freezes stiffly in place, gritting his teeth angrily while Lowly grins.
>"Buddy... you got me good..."
>Lowly circles to inspect them closely. "Perfect. I hope you're all comfortable. Too bad about your Arabian friend, because I like to take my time. Now, should I rip you all apart piece by piece... or simply steal the words of how to breathe from you..."
>Johnny smirks. Behind Lowly, Ed shakes the cobwebs out of his head and raises a fist
>"Listen here, stretch. Ain't no Bravo livin' or gone that knows the meaning of the word 'surrender'... but I know a fella who don't know the meaning of a whole lotta words."
>Ed punches Lowly in the head, sending him flying to the ground. Lowly is hurt and angry. "What!? You idiot! I said to stop!"
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>>81251765
>Ed: "Nuh uh! You said no mealing!" Stomps on Lowly's foot, getting a shout of pain from the worm before it scrambles away
>"Are you really that thick! Fine! Let me be perfectly clear on this for you! No PUNCHING! No KICKING! Understand!?"
>Crunch, crunch, Ed stops in his tracks
>Tom: "Now those are some rules I can play by..."
>Lowly looks up, only to get a headbutt from Tom.
>Nose bleeding, Lowly staggers back, but gets an overhead smash from One More Time's trumpet
>"Aghh! You bunch of idiots! Wild Mountain Honey! No ATTACKS!" His stand does not respond, still holding Punch and Kick.
>Tom: "Looks like that's the problem with breaking things. Once they're broken, you can't break them again. Take bones, for example..."
>Lowly looks truly afraid for the first time. "I... I've used up all my best words!"
>Lowly crawls pathetically over to grab the thesaurus. "Uh... er... scrap! Scuffle! Spar!" Honey is throwing away and crushing words as Lowly rattles them off desperately, but Tom keeps advancing
>Tom: "You're not worth fighting or scrapping or whatever. So how about some music instead?"
>One More Time sucks up a bunch of air before he toots out a massive note, blasting Lowly into a crater in the ground as a demolished and bloody wreck. Might explode into gore depending how far we feel like going with the comic

>Tom steps past the crater casually and picks up the lamp, looking back at Aladdin's corpse.
>Tom: "Sorry, old pal. Rest easy knowing the bastard got what was coming to him."
>the group hangs their heads. Johnny grabs a tarp or tablecloth nearby to toss over his body for a shred of dignity. "Losin' friends don't get any easier, fellahs. All the more reason for us to get a move on if we don't want to lose any more."
>Tom picks up and pockets the lamp. "Yea... it's just that he was a decent guy. Loads more decent than me. I ain't never had a friend like him."
>team walks away from his body to move on with their fight marathon
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>>81251806
>"Yea... it's just that he was a decent guy. Loads more decent than me. I ain't never had a friend like him."
Why must you do this to my emotions anon?
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also something that came up while trying to write the Eds "vs" Clifford: what does his stand look like? the booru doesn't have anything and the doc has a busted link
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>>81251765
>>81251687
I didn't come here for these feels

Also niceu family.
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>>81251842
The post number in the doc leads me to this image.

Also,

Edd: "Is that a doggie treat?" as Ed just pulls one out.
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>>81251806
This is top notch stuff, but how does Daffy get his hands on the lamp afterwards? He does need it to get Carolina in the Morning and set up the entire final battle.
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>>81252018
I think Snoopy would be the man on top of retrieving it. I feel he should try to doublecross Daffy at the end once it's retrieved only to find himself willingly handing it over, awestruck that La Cucaracha has finally taken him captive as well. He's just way too cool and collected to really be ok with Daffy's bullshit.
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>>81252018
He gets it when Porky distracts everyone with his stand's powers. It's also how Daffy's there to murder him.
>>81252122
Snoopy's with Daffy because that's where he wants to be. If he wanted to double cross the duck he would've done it by now, considering he's powerful enough to kill Lowly, who almost killed Daffy.
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>>81252018
That part is covered in the doc already.

Daffy swipes it himself while they're all traped in their memories thanks to Porky.
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>>81251995
yea, clearly I'm just shit at links

>>81252018
believe he gains it during the madness of Porky's stand


so yea, next on my to do list is the Tom vs Eds/Afro fight and Eds vs Clifford. got bits of those written up.
>>81237017
I'll look into some of the club's abilities and see what I can do with those scenes. we thinking of one-on-one fights with them, or team-ups like in Pt 3?

I also look forward to working on Stan, but does Loadsamoney still have a barrier ability, or just the cash conversion/maybe control?
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>>81252290
The link did nothing in the doc because it wasn't a link, the archives are just very easy to find things in when you have the post number.

Also, does Secret Squirrel get involved with anything after his fight with Tom?
If there's nothing else with him in part 3, then should he have some role in part 4? Like a guy the Eds can call for info?
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>>81252290
>afromania fight next
As the guy who came up with Afromania I'm pumped.
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>>81252415
I think he mostly works to introduce the Interpol unfortunately. The introduction of the Interpol will serve to introduce Gadget and some important key plot points in Part 4. Maybe Secret could show up to help near the final stretch, possibly with agents to fight off hoards of Daffy Clones that will be waiting for them. Like Stroheim and the Nazis.
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>>81252290
LOADSAMONEY's powerset is the cash conversion and control.

We gave it a redesign a few threads ago.
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>>81252415
Secret's main goal after his fight is leading the party to Daffy's island and getting the feds off Eddy's back. Important, but doesn't get much focus on panel. We pretty much agreed he'd be there for Gadget's funeral, so it would be nice if Eddy thanked him for clearing his name there.
>>81251687
>>81251765
>>81251806
Figured this was you when I saw it added in the doc. Good shit Sandy.

Marvin's one of my favorite Looney Tunes so I call dibs on his fight. Will hammer it out some point tomorrow, after Sandman posts how vs. Clifford goes down.
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Reposting Obelix's stand be cause the wording in the last one was terrible.
>Obelix
>Stand- "One shot sneak attack"
> Appearance- a large, humanoid menhir golem with the head of boar.
Carries a large slingshot and a bag full of roman soldier helmets, which it uses as ammo.
>ability- " Can't fight on an empty stomach", launches a roast boar that rejuvanates Obelix and anyone else who partakes in the meal.

>Asterix
>Stand- " you got a friend in me"
> Appearance- A small humanoid made in the shape of Getafix/Panoramix made out of the Magic potion with a cauldron on its head as a helmet.
>ability- " our friendship will never die", creates an impermeable shield around a person, but can only shield one and leaves Asterix ungaurded.
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Is Scrooge like Stan in which he discovers his stand early on in the story and has to learn to use it's powers or does he already have some control over his stand?
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>>81252669
Obelix's song
http://youtu.be/La3XDXJr0cQ
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>>81252689
Scrooge was a glob trotting badass in his youth, he could've developed one on his own without the use of those special jawbreakers.
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>>81252689
I felt Stan and Scrooge would be familiar with their abilities when Eddy and the gang meet them for the first time. They then proceed to walk all over the Conmen, prompting their rivalry.
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>>81252689
I think he's had it for a while, but doesn't like using it unless some jackass has it coming so he's not as proficient with it as he could be. The rumors of the dime being lucky come from it being the stand.
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>>81252734
We could have a back-story scene where Scrooge is cornered by a bunch of gangsters. This prompts the stand to come out and defend Scrooge from the gangsters. Cue montage of Scrooge learning the stand's abilities and powers.

I figure it would be a nice way to flesh out Scrooge a bit more and possibly develop relationships with Stan and the Eds.
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>>81252561
Marvin's all yours. I don't know nearly enough about him yet to touch him

now let's see if I butcher Cliff's character, what there is of it

>>81252785
could be a nice scene either before the bet takes place or when Scrooge and Stan are trying to size eachother up later (maybe harmless sparring?) as they swap stories
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>>81252882
He's literally just a big, friendly dog. Not much to mess up, family.
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>>81251806
>>81251765
>>81251687
Mn, this may just be bias as the guy who originally suggested Lowly, but I don't feel like the fight really does him any justice. I mean we work on all this build up to have him as this intimidating, nutjob, and he doesn't really do anything besides get them spooked for a second and then killing Aladdin, besides that he's pretty much just getting kicked around and made a fool of. Again, probably bias, and I know it's not 1:1, but people were connecting Lowly to Vanilla Ice in terms of character type and Vanilla gave Polnareff and Iggy a hell of a fight. With this Lowly doesn't even injure anyone besides Aladdin before he gets his shit kicked in.

Again, probably bias, I just feel it doesn't do justice to the build up a lot of people have worked on, least of all using Wild Mountain Honey to it's full potential.
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>>81253061
I agree. I thought he'd show up with little to say, staring at them menacingly, piercing unto their soul. The minute the cast questions his presence, he strikes. I figured he'd be the silent type, surprising them with every crippling blow he lays at them with his stand. Essentially catching them off guard and rubbing it in by offing Aladdin.
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>>81253281
Exactly. The way I envisioned a fight with Lowly, despite having a barely combat oriented Stand, and being on his own, it's still incredibly one sided as he practically toys around with the group using a Stand that attacks in more terrifying ways than just straight up physical damage. But for his Stand to be figured out literally right out the gate and then countered completely by using a thesaurus and Ed and then him getting shit stomped makes him seem less of a major, end game villain and more of a road bump. Sure he kills Aladdin, but other than that it's just so underwhelming for the third to last villain of the part, whose hyped up as some dangerous nut job.
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>>81253061
>>81253281
>>81253389
What if one of the words Lowly crushes right off the bat is STAND, and he starts toying with them until Johnny starts using some of his old STYLE moves. It's be like in Part 3 where Joseph uses Hamon a once or twice.
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>>81253281
Snoopy ended up taking over the silent warrior thing, and Lowly became more of a taunting sadist. Although looking at it again, I will admit it's a bit anticlimactic after all the Lowly wank we had. It feels fine for the end of the fight, but it needs more of Lowly being threatening. Randomly slipping around someone's neck and acting like he's going to do what he did to Aladdin again before slipping away and having his stand punch his victim in the gut, shit like that. Everyone should be so fucking terrified of what's happening it takes them time to figure something out, and in the meantime Lowly just has his stand beat the shit out of them.
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>>81253413
That can work, but Johnny quickly realizes his old moves just aren't up to snuff as Lowly tears apart his efforts with ease, just like in one of the older ideas where Lowly actually kills Johnny off, but without him doing so. If everyone else is happy with the fight sandcastles wrote, I won't make a fuss, It just feels insulting to his character (in this project that is) to get manhandled so easily.
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>>81220981
>>81247335
We need to save theses ideas to use in the future
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>>81222923
she needs to have a catchphrase

>FINISHED FINISHED FINISHED
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>>81253437
Exactly. Crushing the words doesn't leave Wild Mountain Honey defenseless, it still has it's fists, so theres no reason Lowly wouldn't be pummeling them with his Stand as he's fucking with the words. Since I first suggested Lowly, I always envisioned his eventual fight to be a tactics-heavy fight, where the gang would have to pull out all the stops to survive, since Lowly is an expert at just slaughtering people.

Also as a side note, I feel that his dialogue should sound more sadistically friendly, like his actual character is, rather than just a flat sadist.
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>>81253493
I log every suggestion that gets popular support into the Abilities googledoc at the end of the thread after Reviewfag gives his feedback.
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>>81253546
>"Why hello, Tom! And hello to all your friends, too! Lovely day, isn't it? Golly, I can hardly STAND it..."
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>>81219813
So I finished reading Diamond is Unbreakable. It's amazing how well it fits with Ed Edd & Eddy,
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>>81245637
Excellent work, as always.
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>>81253737
Best Villain.
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>>81253737
>>81253780
TWO MORE DAYS
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>>81253672
>>81253437
oh by all means, keep, retool and steal what you need from my take on it. I wasn't paying much attention to the Lowly hype train, just making him a jolly unstable ass who was really good at crippling people on sight and then tormenting them
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Since most of the staff are here, reposting this:

Should we develop character bios? They were a small but integral part of canon JoJo and I don't see why they shouldn't be added here:

Age
Birthdates
Zodiac Signs - both Chinese (animal and element) and western
Gender
Height & Weight
Blood Type
Nationality
Hair & Eye Color
Favorites (movies, songs, bands, etc.)
Occupation & Hobbies
etc.

Post your ideas.
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>>81254813
Most of that can be retrieved from Wikis
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Based on the suggestion from last thread regarding the use of "Danny Lane" for the identity of Danny The Street in Part 4. If anyone else cares to take a crack at it, I'm sure it'd turn out better and I'd thank you for it. This is too good an idea to settle for my humble skills.
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>>81253737
>>81253780
>>81254019
Duwang
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>>81256549
AI AI AI EEEEEE
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>>81223703
This resonates with me for some reason.
I really like the stand name too.
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>>81255573
>at the end of the story all the characters hold a memorial to their fallen comrades near where Danny was
>"Final Chapter: The Long and Winding Road"
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>>81223703
>>81257907
Seconding. I like the idea a lot too.
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>>81223703
>if they choose to stay the user's soul is eaten
>>81257907
>>81258605
should correct that to "the user eats their soul" and "if the victim has a Stand", just for clarity's sake.
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I know that Reviewfag will be posing his own reviews in a couple of posts, but I figure since I've got time and we have quite a few well received ideas I'd throw in my own two-cents

>>81220981
This is not too bad, I think he'd fit better in Part 5 because of how innately absurd the back-breaking aspect is. Also, we need more comic book characters in Part 7, not so much cartoon characters.

>>81222011
A little similar to Max's Stand, but just different enough to be distinct. If we don't find a user I expect this to end up in Madame Foster's [Hotel California] though.

>>81222923
I think this is a good update, should be interesting in Part 5 or 6

>>81223703
I wasn't feeling this at first, but thinking about Coraline trying to help a lonely old woman get more company in her big empty house warmed me up to the idea. I would cut out the part about the Stand being able to give out absorbed stands to other owners though. Maybe make it such that [Grass Is Greener] can trap stands in itself, but they will dissipate if released when their original owner's soul has been taken unless the place where they are released in is a location that can trap Stands ([Hotel California] basically)

>>81227067
I like it, could see this dude being a Prison Guard in 6 or fighting with Mr Morris in 5

>>81237747
Both these abilities are great, I think they'd be good as 'corpse part guardians' too. I'll leave other anons to decide if we should have them in 7 instead of other comic characters

cont.
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>>81259459

>>81239602
Definitely complicated enough for Jojo, might be good as another obstacle in Part 7, but again, comic characters.

>>81247335
There were some criticisms about being too similar to Crazy Jane, but after thinking about it I realized that there is one critical difference that can make this idea distinct from the kind of 'switching between stand and user' that Jane does. Basically Crazy Jane and Driver 8 share the same body, but Lilo & Stitch do not. Like let's say Lilo gets caught in a trap while Stitch is the Stand, they could switch positions so that Lilo becomes ethereal in Stand form to escape, so there's this extra 'bonus' to their condition so its not exactly the same as Crazy Jane's. That said I think some elaboration about why/how they have been combined together is in order should we decide to include them.

>>81252669
Obelix's Stand is similar to Chowder's except without the cooking aspect, but I think it being a punchghost with a small bonus works for his character. I think more could be done to make Asterix's Stand a bit more distinct though. That said I wouldn't mind them being in Part 7 as racers.
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>>81247335
I had an idea for a Stand for Lilo or Stitch, so I might as well post it now.

>「ALL SHOOK UP」
>Appearance: A tall humanoid figure that resembles Lilo's doll Scrump wearing a Hawaiian dress
>Ability: When activated, it 「shakes」a 5-10m area around the user. This causes people, animals, plants, and objects to be shaken to pieces and randomly reassembled, depending on where their parts land. So a person could find their head on a dog, or a dog could find their legs on a rake.
>whoever the user is would be more mischievous then antagonistic, and after being defeated could potentially help the protagonists in some fashion.
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>>81253413
>>81253479
If he crushes the word stand, wouldn't they all have to crawl to move around too?
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>Coyote Man (from Animal Man)
>[Clean Clean] (Buggles song)
>Clean Clean takes the form of a robotic humanoid figure cocered in pipes and obscured by a thick mist that constantly surrounds it
>Clean Clean has the power to cause an thing that enters it's fog to undergo a strange curse where everything is that much deadlier. If a bee swarm draws near, someone would develop an allergy. Getting cut by a rusty blade will almost always result in fast acting tetanus.
>strangely, Coyote Man seems to constantly be under the effect of hid stand, and always seems to be revived after being killed
I intend for Coyote Man to be a minor villain in part 7, probably as another independent racer who wants to use the wishing star to wish for a death he will not revive from, or perhaps as one of Nobodies agents who was manipulated by Nobody info chasing the protags.
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I vote we call Bluto's ship the Bilge Rat Barge.
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>>81252561
>>81252415
He's mostly going to be in Part 4's "epilogue", Gadget's funeral.

Although we pretty much agreed that Gadget would mention him from time to time as a friendly rival at work.
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>>81258180
I love it. In that case, maybe Gadget should look like a spirit image in >>81255573.
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>>81253479
I'd prefer this. Even in Part 3, before reader demand made Araki bring Avdol back, Joseph was going to be the one his with Alessi's Stand and turned back into Part 2 JoJo, making hamon useful one final time.

Also the Lowly fight was pretty underwhelming. Was this the guy who caught Carmen Sandiego and almost killed Daffy
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>>81261237
Yeah, we all agree it could use a little work. Lowly's fighting style works off confusion and using his false politeness to fuck with people. It should take work just to figure out what the fuck is happening, having everyone figure it out right off the bat nerfs him to the point of being non-threatening.
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>>81261393
>>81261237
We could buff Wild Mountain Honey so that instead of used words being blocked, they have a recharge time. Tim or whoever is fighting Lowly thinks that they got him in a j, then he revealed that one of the more powerful words he used has finished it's cooldown.
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>>81261393
As I recall Tom and the gang don't actually manage to figure out what Lowly's Stand does during their first encounter, so the beginning of the fight really should be them figuring out how his power works. That said, I can't really think of a way they could given how difficult it would be to remember that you've forgotten a word when it seems like the concept relating to it never existed in the first place.
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>>81232433
Well I think we should also have something dynamic, how about the Batcave? We can have a lot of moving sprites there.
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>>81232433
I wonder if would be possible to have more gimmicky stages, or stages wis stranger terrain (like platforms and shit).

Like the cruise ship has Lowly in the backround, and every once in a while he crushes a word, or the cul-de-sac has Ramshackle Man in the backround creating missiles that blow up on stage.
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>>81239333
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>>81254813
>>81255015
>Favorites (movies, songs, bands, etc.)
I think it could be fun but also really hard to decide this, lets try it, but one character at a time
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How would you feel about Sora from Kingdom Hearts? The final boss, Ansem, literally has a stand.
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>>81263069
Kingdom Hearts is in no way /co/-related, while it may draw some it's source materiel from things we are using, the lore it has just doesn't fit with what we are trying to achieve.
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Could someone give a Stand to Anne Gwish? You are searching for more comic book characters for part 7 so i thought she could fit.

I have an idea for a stand but i dont know if it would be funny enough, also it is pretty similar to Mr. Nobody.

[ Banned Forever ] looks like a smiling robotic female dressed like a cheer leader, making her a oposite of Anne Gwish

The ability of [ Banned Forever ] activates everytime Anne Gwish says or does something that hurts her oponent, let it be emotionally or fisically. [ Banned Forever ] gives the oponent dark dresses , goth makeup and long black wigs, one for everytime Anne Gwish hurts his enemy. Once the enemy character looks excatly like Anne Gwish the enemy is [ Banned ] from being on the same [ Panel ] that Anne Gwish is thus making it a controler of [ Space ]

I dont know
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>>81263069
I gotta be honest, the only way I see a /v/ character entering the coco universe is if the supposed character has a known cartoon or comic.
Thats just my input, im just a dude that draws.
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>>81263312
Well...Then what about Sonic? His comic was big wasn't it? but maybe not Sonic itself, a side character or Eggman i don't know
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>>81263420
Tails already features in Part 8 as a BroJo/ex-protag.
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>>81263312
>>81263420
so... everyone's going to ignore Knuckles being a major player in part 2?
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>>81263798
Like whit Jojo, nobody watched part 2
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>>81263798
Or the fact that he appears again in Part 3 and his involvement leads up to Lowly's appearance?
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>>81263587
Not anymore he doesn't.
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>>81263798
Ignoring Knuckles happens in universe and now it happens on the meta. Pottery.
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>>81264286
When did that happen?
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I'm surprised Dennis the Menace isn't in this, and no, I am not referring to that blonde american twerp, I'm talking about the spiky-haired brit from the beano
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>>81263312
>>81263420
>>81263798
>>81263587
Like >>81264049 and >>81263798 said, Knuckles is in. We've even discussed him as part of the Angel Island ensemble for Part 3 just a thread or two ago.
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>>81265390
Updated bins when
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>>81265690
Parts 1, 2, and 3 have evolved beyond bins and into docs.

I'm pretty sure there's a doc for part 4 which we need to work on the outline of.
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>>81264286
Explain
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>>81266305
Yeah, last I checked it was just the Gadget intro and some greentext.
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>>81266927
People seem to like pic related as Part 8's protag instead, with Beartato and Reginald as duo BroJos.
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>>81267147
Looking at it, it looks like the PPG are being set up to be in part 4? I'd rather the mayor of Townsville be in it than the PPG.

He could be a total red herring, everyone thinks he must be involved with the Lonely Hearts Club, but he's just dumb as a brick and too gullible for anyone to want him out of office.
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>>81259459
>I would cut out the part about the Stand being able to give out absorbed stands to other owners though. Maybe make it such that [Grass Is Greener] can trap stands in itself, but they will dissipate if released when their original owner's soul has been taken unless the place where they are released in is a location that can trap Stands ([Hotel California] basically)
this works much better than what i was thinking, go for it.
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Bampu.
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Bump.

Should we start work on part 4's character development now?
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Where is reviewfag
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>>81251806
After Tom blasts him, that's when Lowly should just start punching using his stand.

Maybe 「WILD MOUNTAIN HONEY」should have a secret ability, or a hidden power that has a really bad effect on Lowly.

Like, Lowly can use a word to buff himself at the cost of forgetting that word, so he doesn't like using it.
If he uses the word "attack" on himself he becomes unbelievably more powerful, but afterwards he forgets the concept of "attack". If he used a word like "heal" on himself, he'd heal instantly, but his body would forget how to heal afterwards.

So as he's in the crater, dying, he uses his last ditch effort

If they can make him forget enough words, he can go simple and can be killed by irony. Or maybe that's not how irony works.
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Reminder that if you haven't read the manga or watched the anime, you should do so right now.

It'll help you understand the project and the concept and powers of stands a bit more. Also Jojo in general is a good read and watch.
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>>81269945
Here, but I don't review until we pass at least the 400 mark. Helps me get most of the suggestions in one go.
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>>81247335
>>81247464
I think they would be better for part 8 but add more of a twist like: The more time one of them is in Stand mode the harder it gets to switch, thus making their story about finding a solution before one of them becomes a Stand FOREVER, and sad things like they bein unable of huggin eachother and the like.

Also what >>81259497 said about them switching to solve problems sounds cool
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Does part 7 allow cartoon characters or is it restricted to comics?
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>>81270539
It's heavily heavily recommended that comics characters are added.
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>>81270539
It's both but we're trying to lean more towards comics since that's when they'll get their time to shine.
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>>81260647
Everybody on the floor must act like worms and engage on the most epic breakdancing battle of their life
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>>81270589
Alrighty, thanks family.
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Silly question. About to start to draw Rolf's gang from part 5to the best of my abilities, can someone tell me the members of his gang? Specifically the characters, stands, and from which cartoon they are
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>>81222923
Her sub ability 1 and main ability sounds menacing as shit. I would love to see her in action. An added with her ability 2 I'm getting slight vibes of killer queen and d4c all together
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>>81270953
But. Biiig reminder that I draw like shit. So, if stupid me will not forget about the drawing, it will take a week... Hopefully. And even then it will look like shit. But hey, I said that I would draw it, I will. However shitty it may be.
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>>81271515
That which you seek lies in the doc. Keep it in mind, as we may add some other characters in.
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>>81271630
Then tell me at least this: who the hell are Rolf and Jimmy?
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>>81271787
I think they're the ones from Ed Edd n Eddy
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>>81271787
>Jimmy

I said doc, not pastebin, drawfriend. But >>81271858 is right.
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>>81270625
Johnny starts using his style to counter Lowly's attacks forcing him to release the word stand so she can crush another word.
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>>81271787
You might want to hold off a bit until we finalize the roster. Jimmy's been cut thanks to EEnE already having a fuckton of representation.
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>>81271858
Many thanks. I'll go ahead and continue my drawing shitfest. May almighty Bob Ross be with me.
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>>81271787
>>81271858
>>81271887

Hasn't Jimmy been cut?
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>>81271937
>>81271933
Okay. I will do it partly, having potential members. Toph, Rolf, Dexter, Handsome Squidward, Dexter, Taffy.
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>>81271982
Sounds radical.
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>>81272007
Keep in mind that it will be shitty. Oh well, I hope that I will be able to draw at least their faces and stands...
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>>81272096
At this stage we'll take the art we can get, honestly.
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I get throwing out stand suggestions is essentially just bloating up these threads but I'm pretty set on getting Flintheart Glomgold into Part 4 because of the Scrooge rivalry.

Flintheart Glomgold
Stand: Poison/ Snakecharmer (Rage Against the Machine song)/ Union of the Snake (Duran Duran) (don't really have a set in stone name right now)
Appearance: A combination of a humanoid stand and a king cobra. It has a torso and arms with long fingers, and its head is surrounded by a hood similar to a king cobra’s with ornate designs to intimidate foes. The top of this hood has the face of a snake, but is only for decoration. It does not have legs, however its torso trails off like a snake’s
Ability: Can use it’s fingers to create a trail of toxic slime that irritates skin and is sticky to the touch. The stand only has a limited amount of this slime, and needs time to recharge once it’s used quite a lot of slime. The slime can be spread around by spraying water. This toxic slime is flammable, but the stand itself cannot ignite it, Glomgold needs to ignite it himself. Once ignited, the slime produces toxic fumes. This toxin will not kill if treated effectively and quickly, but if left untreated for several hours, can lead to death. It can get into an ora ora ora, but is pretty slow. It’s most effective way of kill is constricting a target and slowly squeezing the life out of them. Its abilities gives Glomgold the methods of killing a single target, and burning the body in a toxic mess.

Stats
Power: B
Speed: D
Precision: A
Durability: A
Range: C
Developmental Potential: C

Flintheart would make a great Lonely Hearts club member because of his natural rivalry with Scrooge. Having a well-known enemy gives Scrooge a reason to fight the Lonely Hearts club and join with the Eds and Stan. Glomgold would also want to kill/ abuse other rich toons in his efforts to become the richest duck in the world.
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>>81273284
forgot to add that I know Slugbait is a stand that also uses slime, but I'm pretty confident it's characteristics are different enough, and fits a villain's stand.
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is 「OVER THE RAINBOW」 still unassinged to an owner? If so might i suggest giving it to Mabel Pines? It fits her character type pretty well.
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>>81259459

>Both these abilities are great, I think they'd be good as 'corpse part guardians' too. I'll leave other anons to decide if we should have them in 7 instead of other comic characters

To be fair, Batman does have a villain called Mad Hatter, who also happens to be an expert in mind control.
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>>81273808
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Me back. Here is the early draft, because I must sleep now.
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Okay. Can't use the camera for shit. Sorry if I break your eyes.
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>>81274464
>>81274520
Hell man, better than anything I would offer. If you finish it and scan it, I know there's at least one anon lurking around who would clean it up.
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>>81274602
Thanks. Will try and finish it tomorrow. Hail Russian Spring holidays.
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>>81267749
Y not both?

>>81273525
We might as well at this point since Dipper has a Stand, still no agreement of which part they should be in though.

>>81273808
Son of a bitch I totally forgot about that, and now that I've checked there's a character called the March Hare too. Let's use 'em then.
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>>81262007
>I got a bad feeling about this

Well since this is based of jojo, and how dogs fare in the series......
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quick drawing of Afromania, to those wondering, the kanji in the picture is the result of me putting "da" into google translate
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>>81275579
Looks nice, man. Really nice.
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>>81255573
Gadget here looks like what would happen if Tezuka did a Columbo comic.
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>>81219813
Okay so since so many people have been coming in here and getting [DAZED AND CONFUSED] by reading the outdated Plot Summaries Pastebin, I bit the bullet and tried to make a new one.

http://pastebin.com/DLpUUc7j

Since the googledocs are WAY too big for me to include everything, I just added some details to Part 7 & 8 as well as removed Jimmy and Johnny 2x4 from 5. If you're reading this Pastebinfag I apologize if i'm stepping on your toes by doing this, but I thought it needed to be done.
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>>81276153

By the way, [PET SEMATARY]'s description needs to be updated. In a few threads ago, it was decided that it should be human-sized and have Smithers' head.
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>>81276249
On it.

>>81270454
I only just realized this while creating the new Pastebin, but having them be in Part 8 has a built in explanation for why they are fused together if we have some kind of Wall Eyes equivalent. We'd be able to incorporate the Beartato + Reginald = Harrison idea too. I was thinking of making a suggestion for Chris-Chan that allowed him to fuse any two individual characters into a horrible amalgamation with varying results, so that's one way we could utilize those ideas.
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>>81276514
It might be too much to ask
But since some people aren't too familiar with some characters
Could you please specify what cartoon are they from?
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>>81276153
Wasn't Giffany a major protag in part 6? And Gaz as well.
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>>81276591
I second this motion
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>>81237747
>>81237972
>>81273808
>>81275298
Alright then.

Mad Hatter
Stand: [Margaritaville]
Appearance: A teapot in the shape of a brain with a dormouse's head in between the lid and the teapot itself. Rotating arrows circle the sides of the teapot.
Ability: [Margaritaville] causes the target's lower brain to take control of its upper brain, making impulses and reflexes overpower reason and training. If the subject has a strong desire to eat, drink, sleep, or any other base functions, they will immediately begin to do so. Victims can try to resist, but the stronger their own desires, the harder the fight will be. This could potentially be a double-edged sword because a victim with a strong desire to fight will be a troublesome guest. [Margaritaville] has little offensive capability however, and relies on using its victims own strengths against them.

Stats
Power: E
Speed: C
Precision: B
Durability: C
Range: B
Development Potential: C
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>>81276591
I usually try to do that with most of the characters that get added to the googledoc, but I admit I've been getting a bit lazy about it recently. I'll look through it again for characters I missed.

Unless of course you were referring to the Pastebin, to which I say I don't think its necessa-

>>81276707
Fuck.

I'll make a new one immediately
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Where are the main disney characters at? only seen Scrooge McDuck
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>>81276741
March Hare

Stand: [Time in a Bottle]
Appearance: A white rabbit with pocket watches for eyes and a large bottle on its back.
Ability: [Time in a Bottle] can drain the future lifespan of its target and distill it into a liquid. The liquid can then be drunk by any other person, adding the stolen time onto their own lifespan. This process is slow, and requires the victims to be in short range, so it works well on either unsuspecting victims who cannot see stands, or stand users who have been pacified by [Margaritaville]. Despite the draining aspect of [Time in a Bottle] working slowly, the stand itself is very agile, and while it is fairly weak physically, it is difficult to attack directly.

Stats
Power: D
Speed: A
Precision: C
Durability: C
Range: D
Development Potential: C
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>>81274464
Nice job mate, if you need help with that art my ears are perked. Also quick question im willing to start drawing the comic favorably part 5 or 2 ive started doing sketches of SCastles story (hope someone keeping track of that).
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>>81276755
>to which I say I don't think its necessary
It is necessary
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>>81276920

Donald is slotted to appear as an ally in Part 5, and Goofy will appear as an ally in Part 7.

Not sure about Mickey but Oswald was picked to appear as a minor villain Part 7.
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>>81275579
>kanji

That's katakana you baka gaijin.
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>>81277055
Goofy and Oswald may appear in Part 7, very little about it is by any means set in stone.
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>>81270130
>>81271915
>>81251806
OK, so maybe Wild Mountain Honey has a second power, "Your end is the means" (placeholder).

>One More Time sucks up a bunch of air before he toots out a massive note, blasting Lowly into a crater in the ground as a demolished and bloody wreck.
>Tom and his group think the fight is over, but as they approach Lowly's broken body the can hear him weakly laughing
>"I didn't think anyone but the Beagle would ever make me resort to this... Heal."
>Wild Mountain Honey appears behind Lowly again and crushes the word "heal"
>All of Lowly's injuries instantly mend themselves
>Wild Mountain Honey's second ability "Your End is the Means" is now active
>Any words currently being crushed by Wild Mountain Honey will buff Lowly at the cost of him forgetting the concept of the word after they are released
>Wild Mountain Honey uses its other hand to crush the word "attack" which is now crush-able again since its target has changed
>Lowly now has a massive increase in attack power
>His stand starts throwing punches, blasting buildings to dust
>Lowly is staying back a ways
>Johnny tries using some of his old Bounce Back style to deflect the blows
>Damaging the stand isn't working since Lowly just heals from the impacts
>They need to hit Lowly so hard there's no way for him to heal from it
>Ed uses Spoon to divert attention while Tom and Johnny get into position
>Johnny starts posing in several complicated forms to make sure the power he'll return is more than he gets hit with
>Tom starts DOOT DOOTing at Lowly trying to make the roof collapse on him to trap him forcing Lowly to call back his stand to defend himself
>Johnny is ready while Tom enrages him to attack and Ed uses spoon to redirect Lowly's attention towards Johnny who poses just right and sends a monster of an attack back at Lowly blowing him in half
>He can't heal from this, he's still alive though since he's a worm, he can't summon his stand anymore
>Tom finishes him by stomping him

?
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>>81276707
>>81277034
I hang my head in shame.

Because I'm such a colossal fuckup, is there anything else that is absolutely critical missing from the first Pastebin I posted? I don't want to have to make a third one

Link here for easy access: http://pastebin.com/DLpUUc7j
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>>81276707
Gaz wasn't really decided on.
Most people were talking about Jacknife and Tiffany, with the possibility of Toki joining (although Muderface got a bit more on him)
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>>81277235
We should move Xavier to part 5. He fits that theme better.
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>>81277235
I just want to be able to know where each character is from
Seriously, who the fuck are the "Cereal Trio"?
Pic related is all I got from Google search
Also make sure that you're not forgetting any character
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>>81277055
>>81277094
I think Donald and Oswald should be moved to 5, personally. Helps keep Part 7's theme intact while helping to give Part 5 more desperately needed clarification.

Goofy can even keep his car, he just drives it straight into stand battles.
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>>81277491
Count Chocula, Booberry and Frankenberry, I think.
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>>81277375
I remember there was division on whether Jacknife should be a full fledged part of the protag team or a reccuring ally that crosses paths with them so often he might as well be. I think the latter would suit Jacknife's character more personally.

>>81277491
You're absolutely right and I'm in the process of editing the Pastebin so its more clear. Pic related are the Cereal trio btw.

The thing is there are so many characters in the googledoc and its difficult to remember which ones got the most support sometimes. The pastebin is taken by most visitors comprise everything that has been set in stone so far so I'm hesitant to add new characters to it unless I'm sure that they got a lot of backing in previous threads.
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>>81277759
Yeah, I think Jacknife is currently a "technical party member".
He's like the time Weather Report almost killed Pucci but then a car ran him over, or when Jotaro punched Pucci into the door in character format. Just doing his own thing during fihts and raising hell.
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>>81277759
then what about a pastin about posible characters to have until we reach each part
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>>81277759
Just don't forget where each character is from
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>>81278087
That's essentially what the Abilities googledoc is.

>>81278131
Okay I've finished noting down where every character listed in the Pastebin is from. I'm going to wait a while more before posting it in case there are any more characters that aren't in the one I posted earlier other than Gaz & Giffany that people think should be added in. Remember, the Pastebin is meant to give newcomers/returning participants a concise overview of the different Parts of this project and shouldn't contain characters that we are unsure will be present in the final products.
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At some point, Double D needs to construct something that launches missiles and fails to destroy its target.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5ya-xLnQxs8
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>>81270136
People who haven't read JoJo but insist on contributing into a JoJo project fucking anger me familia.
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>>81277062
i'm so sorry, i don't know shit about japanese
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>>81275506
Courage is the only CoCo who has a definitive happy ending tho.
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>>81278769
>courage lives happily ever after with lydia
>johnny dies fighting an egotistical madman
>tom is left without his waifu
>ed boys probably make it out with big bucks
>i don't think we've established an ending to va
>or waifu ocean
>or the other ones
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Where's the review fag? Didn't he say he'd show up at 400 posts?
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>>81276755
You also need to put Homestar as Part 8's JoJo.
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>>81219813
Is Sam Jackson /co/co/?
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>>81279278
No, but Nick Fury could be.
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>>81278693
It's ok anon. Just know that you're bound to trigger many weebs like myself, so make sure not to make that kind of mistake ever again. I'm here to help whenever possible. Cheers.
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Actually, would Marvin's fight even be that long? His ability's fairly straight forward.

I want to write it, but I just wanted to make sure it's not some multi-layered fight.
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>>81278914
I thought Tom's girl lived.

He doesn't kill her, his whole motivation for taking down Daffy is to undo what her did to her.
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>>81281242
I could have sworn she dies at one point, which adds to the conflict of who to bring back with Friend Like Me's last wish, but maybe that's from an earlier draft or something.
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>>81278914
Someone suggested that Warden getting defeated in Waifu Ocean causes his Stand to essentially make AU versions of everyone within the prison, but they're returned to the normal universe just in time for the Man of Steel race.
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>>81281323
Pretty sure that was actually the original plan, at least that was in the...I think the Part 3 pastebin?

Maybe it was in the doc before.
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>>81278914
>>81281328
Waifu Ocean ends with a few party member deaths, and the survivors are regurgitaded into a new universe created when Pure Imagination collapses. They see alternate versions of the fallen, and the announcement of the Wacky Race appears somehow.
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>>81281323
It was.
A lotta changes have happened lately. I can't say all of them are good.

She should really stay dead.
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>>81281530
>>81281392
Anon who drafted the original outline for Part 3 here, what happened was I couldn't figure out how to incorporate Tom's Waifu dying into the story since the original proposal for the scene would have required her to be with Tom and company while they are on their globe-trotting adventure to stop Daffy (because in that draft Tom is the one that kills her). But really there is no reason why they would do that since she would be a La Cucaracha'd liability better off staying at the hospital back at CN City under the watch of Strickland Propane.

Unless of course you guys want her to get killed by Top Cat or Cyborg Dale, but I highly doubt that would be satisfying in any way.
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>>81281530
The way her death was written was way too melodramatic. Curious what else you think isn't as good, though.
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>>81281323
In an early draft, but that was dropped a while ago, like over a week ago.

Why do you guys keep looking at the pastebins once a part has a doc? Things start changing fast once stuff gets put into a doc.

Tom's girl dying just didn't fit anywhere in the story once things started being put together.
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>>81281619
If we establish Johnny and Tom's relationship a bit better pre/post-fight I think it'd still have the same impact.

Not like father/son bonding or whatever. Minor scenes like Joseph commenting on his plane crashes, etc.
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>>81281522
We're not doing a universe reboot. I've seen enough discussion about how we're not doing that to know this.

I did see a suggestion that the events of part 7 should take place around the same year as part 1 though.
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>>81281806
It's not a reboot, the Pure Imagination universe is "besides" the original. It didn't replace it, they both exist at the same time. Two universes in the same multiverse, split when PI was destroyed.
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>>81281709
I'm guessing you are referring to the scene where he chooses to resurrect Aladdin instead of his Father. That seems to be the idea, developing Tom's relationship with Johnny I mean, there are a few snippets of interaction scattered about throughout the doc related to that.

>>81281806
What I was thinking was that they get spat out into the original universe, but Pure Imagination has altered it slightly so the characters aren't who they were originally. Like Dora is just an ordinary girl on a camping trip instead of a wanted Jawbreaker smuggler. So the ending would just have her waking up in her campsite with all the surviving characters, turning on the radio and listening to TOM hyping up the race.
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So chapter 8 is supposed to be comic characters?
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>>81282188
Part 7, ideally.

Part 8 is dedicated to online stuff. Web animation, web comics, etc.

Also, obligatory READ THE PASTEBIN/DOC YA FUCKIN' NERD
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>>81278948
I'm here. Let's get crackin'.
>>81220981
If this is based off that one comic you are one cold motherfucker. I like it, though.
>>81222923
Still edgy but that's admittedly bias talking. I might cut the "breaks the sound barrier" thing (it can still be fast but the blood thing is pretty potent, just nerf the speed a bit to keep it from being too OP) and nerf sub ability 1 a bit and I'll call it good.
>>81223703
Go with Doc's addition about how the captured stands are trapped inside the stand and can be released later and I'm sold.
>>81227067
At first I thought it had too many powers but looking it over again all the powers do make sense together. Make him a guard in Superjail where all the guards are kinda OP anyway and I'm hip.
>>81237747
I dig it, although Hatter's name would need changing. I know there's different suggestions for these characters later, but if 7's an alternate universe we could always have both and have the cartoon versions be distractions during the scam part of part 4. Hell, they might even be killers.
>>81239602
Interesting. Complicated as fuck but I like it, she'd make a good killer in 4 just on account of being fucking Maleficent with goddamn Chernabog as her stand.
>>81247335 and >>81247464
You'd have to come up with a way to explain how they fused, and if they inhabited the same body it would be too close to Crazy Jane. That said, if you go with what Doc suggested about one being physical and the other being ethereal I'm good with both your concepts.
>>81252669
Going with this one since it's the revised one. Obelix has a weird power but I like it. Asterix's stand feels too simple, shield is a good starting point but we can get crazier with it.
>>81263300
The idea of a stand that makes use of space is actually pretty cool, but I'm not a fan of the way you've implemented it. Good base concept, but this one needs work.
>>81273284
The stand itself is okay... but does it really fit the character? I'll leave it to the jury.
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>>81282502
It was revised here, but thanks.
>>81276741
>>81276948
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>>81282220
Speaking of pastebins here is the updated one for Plot Summaries and Character List

http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx

Hopefully I didn't miss anything this time...
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>>81277098
Any thoughts to this addition?

Too much Johnny?
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>>81282502
>>81276741
I dig it. Plus I like that song and I think it fits the power, so that's a plus too.
>>81276948
Oh, you just reposted the ideas from earlier. Derp. Still a good duo, though.
>>81282552
Yeah, just noticed. That's the trouble with doing reviews by scrolling down through the whole thread.
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>>81282644
No worries, thanks for the reviews.
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>>81282567

Nice work there.
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>>81282502
Part 7 as an alternate universe seems to be somewhat of an unpopular idea though. Maybe Comic! March Hare's Stand could be dressed like Cartoon! March Hare as a compromise.

>>81282853
Thanks, hopefully it will better inform newcomers to the threads about what the project's all about.
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>>81282941
It is? My bad, I'm too focused on 3 to keep everything with 6 and 7 straight.
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>>81282502
About Lilo & Stitch, what do you think about what >>81270454 and >>81276514 said about their plot story?
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>>81283199
I'm hip. Plus the suggested Chris Chan power is gold if pulled off correctly.
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>>81282502
how about these
>>81259819
>>81260686
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>>81283442
That Lilo power is terrifying. I like it, but I'm not sure if we should give it to Stitch or keep it for another character. As for the Coyote, it's simple but pretty threatening. I can dig it.
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>>81282567
Is there a list of every Co Co yet?
For example, part 1 was Cowardly Courage, part 2 was Colossally Cool, part 4 is the Conmen Coalition, but I couldn't find any of the others,
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>>81283735
Courage, Johnny Bravo, Tom, EEnE, Plucky Duck, then after that I have no idea.

So what happens to Clifford on Fantasy Island?
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>>81283735
It was mentioned that Dora could get arrested for being an illegal immigrant under the alias of 'Consuela Conzales'.
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>>81283735
>>81283799
Part 6 is Dora, part 7 is Cliff Steele, Part 8 iskind of all over the place right now.
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>>81283735
I think Part 3 has the pet name given to Tom by his girl being 'Cocoa' and another anon mentioned Dora's. No idea what Plucky or Robotman have though

>>81283860
Some people want Tails Gets Trolled, other people want Homestar Runner. Reginald and Beartato as the brojos seem to be popular regardless though.
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I have a suggestion for a minor thing in part 2: Every time a stand or a concept is being explained, the text box the explanation text is in should be binocular shaped to indicate it's Nigel narrating it using AFRICA.

>>81283824
Man, this is nice.

I hope you stick around.
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>>81281215
I like what's in the doc for it right now.
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>>81283824
Amazing. But don't Woodstock have a design? I love the piloting element you went with but I'm sure Woodstock's design doesn't work with that. I don't even know where the fuck that design is. I'm going to browse the past threads and drop a fuck ton of shit on that booru soon. I haven't updated it in a fuck long time. Soon we'll have all the references we need. Nothing will be forgotten.
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>>81284105
Just asking because the Part 3 doc is asking for some more detail
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>>81284203
Woodstock is just Woodstock in everything we've discussed about ACES IN EXILE.

Just a yellow bird Snoopy can place on top of anything that isn't bolted down to turn it into a fighter plane in functionality.
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>>81284252
53 minutes ago a lot more detail about that fight was added to the doc.

Marty and Skrawl fights have been fleshed out and added already, so the things that need doing are now updated to reflect that.
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>>81284280
It's original design was a Woodstock shaped Weather vane.
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>>81283824
Based.
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>>81284280
Pretty positive this design has been thrown around for Aces in Exile. Maybe I missed discussion where people decided to drop it but I'm more than certain this has been the accepted design for it. I'm pretty down for regular Woodstock however.
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>>81284504
It didn't gain much traction then since I've always seen it discussed and described as just being Woodstock.
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>>81284373
Oh, whoops. I never refreshed the doc.
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>>81284504
>>81284540
I've always seen it as Woodstock, just far more "standy' and robotic.
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>>81283327
Well you asked for it.

>Chris-Chan Chandler
>「WEIRD SCIENCE」or 「EVERYTHING IS AWESOME」
>Appearance: The one true original electric hedgehog Pokemon except made out of interlocking yellow bricks.
>Abilities: 「WEIRD SCIENCE」can generate bolts of electricity that transform non-living things they hit into tiny multicolored bricks which can then be reassembled into crude, blocky constructs when hit by another bolt of lightning from the Stand. The constructs retain their mismatched rainbow coloration and are easily broken, but stepping on any of the bricks causes intense pain.
>「IT'S MY CREATION」: A unique effect of 「WEIRD SCIENCE」that not even its user is fully aware of. If a bolt of lightning generated by the stand passes through exactly two living entities in a straight line they are fused together into an amalgamation of both with mixed results.

Didn't think that just the fusing was enough to make Chris Major Villain threatening so the main ability is a reference to his other famous hobby. Not sure if its different enough from original Jojo's Baby Face, but I picture Chris using it in a much less practical and efficient manner where he just makes crappy weapons and armor from bricks and all his constructs look like shit compared to what Baby Face is capable of doing.

Feel free to suggest a better main ability for Chris, but I stand by my idea for Chris to be the Wall-Eyes of Part 8 and creating LiloStitch and Harrison on purpose or by accident with his combining powers.
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>>81283824
God damn but that's cool. I'm loving this work man.
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>>81284540
Well yeah that's what the design is based on so it's easier to just refer to it as Woodstock. It was brought up last thread as well.

>>81181502
>>81181545
>>81183747
>>81184881
>>81185203
>>81185347

General idea being it would look like some form of medal or pendant perched on his suit.
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>>81283824
Good shit
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>>81284854
Having it be like a pin when inactive is interesting, but the problem is when it's own auto pilot, how does hood ornament Woodstock fire the gun?

I like it just being Woodstock when active.
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>>81285191
That's a pretty great incorporation of both Now it has an Active and Passive Form.
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>>81284854
>>81285191
>>81285237
How about a more stand-looking (marionette-robot mashup) take on Woodstock for the active form of the stand?
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>>81282502
For >>81222923

It's kinda edgy on purpose and with jojo it would be hilarious and ridiculous.from her source she does make a deal with satan to be a pawn. I can loosen the speed a bit but is there a way to keep the sub ability a little intact? Maybe put some limit or restriction?
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>>81285405
It really comes down to what the drawfags are gonna draw, and I really don't want to discourage PipSQK over this.
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>>81285427
Fair point. Yeah, just put a reasonable limit on that first sub-ability. Having no limit makes it OP, especially with the rest of the powers it has. Do that and you're good in my book.
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>>81284769
i second the motion of Wall eyes Chandler. Also, do we have any outline of part 8, besides the pastebin?
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>>81285492
Well lucky for you, I can recreate the stand so what the vote should i recreate a more small and marionette looking woodstock or should i go weather vane woodstock?
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>>81285689
Marionette looking one I'd say so he can actually work the gun.
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>>81285710
>>81285689
Ok Great i'll make em look similiar to Guido Mista's Stand [Sex Pistol]
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>>81285577
Part 8 has had the least amount of development so far, mostly because that part hasn't even been finished in canon Jojo. What little discussion there was implied that /co/co/'s Part 8 would be the one that would be the most far removed from the original source material, but nobody has really given any suggestions for what exactly it should be about yet beyond having Ethan as the big bad and [Loss] playing a major role.
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>>81285813
All I'm saying is 36 Stardusts on mars.
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>>81285813
Increasing amounts of (non-humorous) self-awareness have created cracks in the toon reality?
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We're gonna need a new thread in a bit.

Nearing bump limit, which will send us quickly to page 10
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Thought of a stand that Homestar could use, though I guess it could work for anyone.

>[Synchronicity]
>Allows the user to reshape objects while retaining their original properties.
>For example, the user could form a metal nail into a small metal ball, but if you threw the ball at someone, it would still pierce like a nail would.
>This only works with inanimate objects, but there is no limit to the size of an object it can affect.

>Its upgraded form is [Synchronicity II] which can also amplify the properties of an object.
>A soft pillow will become softer, a sharp sword will become sharper, a hard surface will become harder, so long as the object had that property to begin with.
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>>81286430
Right now it looks like it takes about an hour and a half to go to the bottom of page 10 from time of last bump.

One of the things I'd like to talk about is the Lowly fight.
I also think it's a little underwhelming as is, and I've tried to suggest a way to make it more upscale, but I don't think anyone cares for for what I tried to bring to the table and someone wants more complex shit that I have no grasp for.
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>>81267478
just came up with this on the way home, before I start posting massive doc updates into the thread.

Stand: [Hi-Five City] (Aquabats)
Appearance: pic related. A pair of crummy or homemade-looking arms. these manifest in addition to Homestar's actual "arms," effectively granting his four functional arms

Ability: Homestar's arms, while appearing of poor quality, can function and attack as effectively as his actual "arms" and "hands" (that makes two visible, two invisible, but the visible ones are his Stand's)

if Homestar can see any creature with at least one hand or similar limb, Homestar can call to "Gimme five!" or simply "High five!" If Homestar raises his hand, the target is thereby forced to give Homestar a hi five or do nothing. the target cannot perform ANY physical actions unless they are to approach Homestar and delivering a hi five

once their palms or other limbs connect, the target can do whatever they wish until it is invoked again (possible cooldown time here). Homestar can act however he wishes and the Stand's power is not broken so long as he keeps at least one hand raised

the Stand's effect is only interrupted if Homestar lowers his hand or if he directly attacks the target. Homestar could use his Stand to distract an opponent, forcing them to lower their guard, but after he kicks, punches them or the like, they are instantly freed of the ability's affects until they are targeted by another attempt

its functions could include buying time, stunning a foe permanently who may not know what a hi five is, or, say, calling for a hi five when an enemy is escaping in an airplane...
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>>81286494
Yours was this: >>81277098 right?

I think this is good, but I also feel that there needs to be something before what sandcastles did for the fight as well, a segment that shows the gang figuring out how Lowly's Stand functions so he lives up to the mystery we placed around him in his first appearance. A lot of anons pointed out that the fact that Tom and co seemed to instantly know how Lowly's Stand works despite there being no indication they did previously is another factor about the fight that makes Lowly seem lame.
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So what will be the musical themes for each part?
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>>81284504
this one was the agreed Stand

No idea where the controversy comes from. probably newfriends.
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>>81286630
This is pretty funny if a little similar to what Dora does with [BOOTS]'s [WHERE WOULD I BE] ability, but I think >>81286438 is more interesting and versatile if we are looking at Homestar in the CoCo role. I'll leave it up to the majority to decide which one would be better though.
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>>81286827
Yeah, I was weirded out people thought otherwise but the idea of the Passive and Active modes is pretty cool and works both designs in.
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>Tom and his gang arrive in Peach Creek. they walk the streets, nobody in particular in sight besides a crude stand with a crude sign labelling it "Men At Work Lemonade Stand"
>the Eds sit with hands folded and grinning eagerly
>Eddy: "Howdy, boys. Thirsty?"
>Tom: "Go suck on a lemon yourselves. We've got business in town."
>Eddy: "Suit yourself! It's fresh and sweet. You there! You look like a man of taste!" Eddy points to one of Tom's friends, who scrutinizes the stand and then fishes into his pocket
>Other cat: "Ah, I had a stand like this when I was a kid. Here ya go."
>passes off the coin and the small cup
>Eddy: "Extra sugar with that? Just a buck more."
>Tom: "A buck? Now you're just nuts, shrimp."
>Other Cat: "Yea, sure. Here ya go."
>Tom double-takes at his buddy as he forks over a dollar
>Eddy pulls out a small box of various ingredients and goods from behind the counter. "How's about a little umbrella? Slice of lemon? Genuine Ed, Edd and Eddy's lemonade stand napkin, on sale special for 50 bucks, just for you!"
>smashcut of the Eds smiling with a pile of cash on their counter, and Tom's friend carrying all the useless junk
>Tom looks at Eddy, seeing Eddy is wearing [MONEY FOR NOTHING] on his finger
>"What's that on your finger, cousin?"
>Eddy: "Finger!? What finger!?"
>Another Cat: "Hey, Tom, whatcha lookin..." Starts to stare, but then looks away quickly. "Never mind..."
>Tom looks up again, this time seeing Spoon towering over Ed and pointing away from the lemonade stand
>Tom: "Boys, these kids are trying to pull a fast one on us!"
>Tom's gang pulls out pipes or guns, or puts up their dukes, ready for a scrap as Tom summons [ONE MORE TIME]
>Eddy: "They're onto us! Men At Work! Let 'em have it!"
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>>81245637
>>81283824
Last comment for the night:
Keep in mind these two pages are sketch once i'm done sketch out the TomCo vs Snoopy fight it'll be enhanced for display later in complete.

Also [Ace In Exile] Design will be finished tomorrow hopefully earlier than i usually post so stay tuned.
Also apologizes to original [Ace In Exile] designer shoulda look at booru before sketch out the scenes...
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>>81286972
>Edd summons Safety Dance, and a bunch of trash and a dumpster from the alley behind them jumbles together into a crudely face-shaped object. A fishing pole and a roll of measuring tape shoots out like tentacles, grabbing some of Tom's boys and tossing them into its mouth
>Other Cat: "Tom! What the heck was that!?"
>Spoon swings a massive claw, sending Tom and his boys flying back
>Cat Buddy: "Agh! It's like a tornado's hittin' us!"
>Tom lands more gracefully than the rest. "That's right. It's just like fighting Jerry. My guys can't see Stands. They're fighting blind right now."
>Eddy points his doorknob finger at Tom's friend he conned
>Eddy: "Hey, fuzzy! Do me a solid and grab your bud there!"
>Tom: "What are you on, man? He's not-"
>Tom's buddy grabs him from behind. "Sorry, Tom. I owe these guys a favor... I think..."
>Tom growls and manages to reach out and touch the corner of a house, zipping along its wall to appear close to the Eds
>Eddy: "Hey, give us a break here, buddy! We're just doin' our jobs!"
>Tom: "I ain't givin' you the time of day, chump! That's what your Stand does, isn't it? The more you take, the more you can do to them."
Eddy: "Take!? I don't take anything! I'm all about giving. Like GIVE EM HELL, me's!"
>Ed waves his hand dramatically away. "Spoon says look over there, Mr. Cat!"
>Tom suddenly looks away from the fight, enough for Safety Dance's dumpster monster to wrap its coils around him
>Edd: "I got him!" Starts to reel him in, but One More Time swings his trumpet, snapping the cheap materials.
>Tom: "You can build it however you want, but your junk is still just junk!"
>Tom charges as Ed points up this time
>Ed: "Look at the pretty clouds!"
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>>81287012
>Tom looks up, but keeps charging and lets One More Time lash out, knocking over the lemonade stand and the Men At Work all in one big swipe
>Tom stands over them as the boys put their guards back up, scowling at them
>"I know you chumps aren't the ones in charge of something this big. So let me just ask: who's behind all this?"
>Edd and Eddy together: "It was my idea!" Both pause. "What!? No it wasn't! It was me!
> Eddy: “I’m telling you this whole scam was MY idea!”
>Edd: "Well why don't I just go to the junkyard base and let ME settle it?"
> Ed: “It was a funny duck man!”
> Edd & Eddy: “SHUT UP ED!”
>Tom shakes his head and turns away in disgust, the three Eds comically wrestling around in the background (Ed bear hugging Eddy from behind, Eddy pulling on Edd's hat while Edd is kicking clumsily up at them)
>Tom: "However many of you there are, you're all numbskulls..”
>Tom goes to the dumpster to open the lid, watching his guys climb out. “Come on, boys! Show’s over here. We’re heading to the junkyard!"
>Tom and his crew head up the hill towards the junkyard. A large but crude sort of clubhouse pokes out over the fence, made out of sheet metal, boards, and 2x4's used for support beams
>Tom's crew share glances before one steps forward
>"Hey, Tom, listen. Me and the boy's we've been thinking. You handled yourself real good back there, as usual. But they made us look like a buncha chumps. We don't even know what the heck that mumbo jumbo they pulled was. I mean, invisible hands? Robot dumpsters? Scramblin' our brains? We're not cut out for takin' that on."
>"You're the bigshot here, Tom. We're out of our league. We think it'd be better if we packed up and went home."
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>>81287061
>Tom turns to them angrily and they all flinch. >"What!? You're turning your backs on me!? Every time I saved each of your sorry skins, and this is how you pay me back!?"
>Spokescat: "Tommy, listen! You know we always got your back! But this time, we're holdin' you back, jack! And I mean that literally, in the last fight!"
>Tom stares them down angrily, but sticks his hands in his pockets and turns away from them
>"Fine. Be that way. Go run home to be with your gals and your mamas before you go back to 'em in a box."
>the group looks hurt, but does leave while Tom marches ahead
>Tom kicks open the gates to the junkyard, finding various heaps of trash and Marty, complete with his rainbow afro and polka dots, lounging in a lawn chair with sunglasses on and a glass of lemonade
>Marty: "About time I showed up! Did you get the..."
>Marty actually looks up, seeing Tom and lowering his sunglasses
>"Cat..."
>Tom: "I'm looking for a fellah who calls himself 'Me' a lot. Ring any bells?"
>Marty scowls back and flips down his sunglasses. "Sounds like lots of people to me."
>Tom: "Oh yea? I had some boys tell me to come looking here. So here's funny question... where'd you get the lemonade?"
>Marty scowls and sits up, still holding his glass. He stands up and suddenly throws it at Tom
>Tom summons OMT, ready to deflect it, but he sees Marty's stand manifest behind him. "Afromania!"
>a big colorful orb hovers behind him, and then shoots through the glass, turning it into a perfect sphere as Afromania rockets past Tom's head
>Tom: "Another flashy stand user. Sure seems like you fit the bill."
>Marty: "Who're you to talk? That jazzy Stand belongs here in the junkyard, not me!"
>Tom: "Then maybe you'd prefer a dirge...AGH!"
>the lemonade glass orb suddenly turns and smashes into One More Time's head. The stand jerks but keeps grinning, but Tom winces in pain
>Tom touches his head and comes back with blood on his fingers. "It hit my Stand, but it still hurt me..."
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>>81287097
>Afromania floats around back to Marty, who dances in place in delight
>Marty: "Nice job on the new recruits, whiskers! But it's time you dealt with a REAL Stand user!"
>Tom: "I've taken down worse than some fruitcake clown. Those little bubbles all you've got?"
>Marty: "Come on and find out!"
>Marty shoots his Stand at Tom like a cannonball, but OMT lashes out and bats it away like a tennis ball using its trumpet. The orb flies aside, bouncing around like wild and phasing through random junk heaps, scrapped cars, dumpsters, etc. while turning them into more sphere
>Tom: "Bad news, jack. Your Stand's a lightweight."
>Marty: "That's what you think! Thanks for all the ammo, sucker!"
>the balls all start to float up, one shooting at Tom
>he rolls out of the way, reaching out instinctively but freezing
>Tom thinking: "So that was his plan!"
>pulls back to show Tom is in the open, surrounded by variously sized orbs, some floating and some of the ground
>"I'm surrounded by circular shapes... so none of them have any corners!"
>the orbs bombard him. OMT deflects one while Tom dodges another, but the rest pummel him relentlessly in the body and face, one cracking into his arm at a nasty angle
>Marty: "Ha! Where's all that big talk now, kitty cat!? If all you've got is corners..."
>wicked and awkward Jojo closeup
>"You'll need to be a better rounded fighter..."
>Tom has his arms up to desperately block the spheres. "The boys were right. This is way out of their league. One last trick up my sleeve..."
Tom leaps back from one more blast of the orbs, throwing out his hand
>"IS YOU IS OR IS YOU AIN'T MY BABY?"
>visibly warped and drunkenly spiraling notes come out of OMT's trumet
>Marty pretends to clean out his ear
>"Ehh? What's this jazz trash? I was always more of a rock and roll guy myself."
>Tom looks shocked when it does nothing to the zebra
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>>81287135
>"He's barely even listening! Not like Sam..."
>Tom pictures his crew leaving
>"Is it because my mind's still on them that..."
>suddenly reels like he's been sucker punched in the gut, showing some impact on his stomach
>"-it backfired!"
>Tom goes to his knees, shaking and holding himself up. OMT hovers over him, trumpet at the ready but surrounded by even more spheres. They pummel him and OMT from all sides
>"You've been makin' a lot of trouble for me, Tom! Lotta noise, too! You think I like hearin' your cheesy one-liners and empty threats every time we meet up like this? Well I'm done playing with you!"
>"You're garbage, Tom. It's like I said. Burying you in the junk yard will leave you right where you belong..."
>"[SPOON]!"
>"What? where?!" Marty looks away, looking right at a barrage of forks, rocks, and soda cans flying at him
>Marty is blown away, skidding to a stop on all fours across the battlefield and looking up to see the Men At Work at the junkyard's entrance looking annoyed
>Eddy: "Hey, polka dots. There's no free jobs from the Men At Work."
>Marty: "What!? Why aren't you me!? What's going on!?"
>Tom shakily gets back up as the trio step up to his defense
>Tom: "Nice save. Just don't go saying I owe you later."
>Eddy: "We'll talk later. For now... men! Let's get to work!"
>Marty launches his orbs at them, but a bulldozer randomly pulls in front of them to cut them off
>Edd: "You were right you know, Thomas... 'junk' is just 'junk."
>Edd poses while behind him, scrap metal starts piling up near one of the compactors, forming a gigantic snake with the crusher for the mouth
>Edd: "But when the world is filled with 'junk,' the right mind can make some dangerous things."
>the scrap snake starts wrecking the spheres left and right, even sucking up the remains of them to add to its body
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>>81287180
>Marty sends Afromania after it, but Spoon intercepts and grabs it in its massive claws
>Ed: "Alright! Free jawbreaker!"
>Spoon bites into Afromania with its big jaws, cracking its surface.
>Marty lets out a pained scream and grabs his arm as it emits similar cracking noises
>Tom watches the mayhem go down and looks down at Eddy
>Tom: "Not much in a fight, slick?"
>Eddy: "I'm more of a supervisor. A face man. Still, you'd be surprised what someone can give you in a fight..."
>Marty shoots more projectile spheres at Spoon, but he points away and Marty's view and the balls fly to Eddy's feet, letting him pick them up harmlessly
>Eddy: "Especially when my man can grab anybody's attention. Thanks a million, spots! Speaking of, I think that gives you the opening you need."
>Tom seems the Eds and their Stands all have the orbs and Afromania busy. he charges up and decks Marty in the face, sending him staggering back
>Marty doesn't like what he sees, so he runs, back into the scrap house, dismissing his Stand and everything changing back into normal
>Marty fiddles with a few nobs on a screen. "I've got to know about this!"
>They chase him into a room where they see him converse with a shadowy figure on a monitor
>"The cat! He got in with those Men At Work guys! He's looking for Me!"
>the screen winks out as they enter and Tom grabs Marty
>>"WHO WAS THAT JUST NOW?"
>"I-it was me..."
>"CUT THE JIVE! WE'RE NOT LETTING YOU GO UNTIL YOU GIVE US INFORMATION!"
>"I'm telling you that was LITERALLY ME!!!"
>Eddy steps up, arms folded before he waves to Edd
>"Double D? Show him how we get payback from cheapskates."
>Tom looks at them, then callously shoves Marty backward
>the compactor snake crashes through the ceiling, crushing or swallowing Marty whole
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>>81287215
>Tom leaves the junkyard with the [MEN AT WORK]
>Tom: "So why are you guys done working for this guy? How'd you snap out of whatever he's been doing to people?"
>Edd holds up a label gun. "Well you've seen my Stand in action, Safety Dance. This is a secondary ability, [THIS IS IT]. Anything I label remains whatever it truly is and does."

>Flashback
>Edd and Eddy are LeTerally at each other’s throats, choking eachother
>Eddy: “It was MY Idea!”
>Edd: “No it was MINE!”
>Ed: "It was the funny duck man!"
>Eddy: "Wait... huh... Double Dee! Quick!"
>"Already on it, Eddy!" Producing his label gun

>back to the present, where Edd pulls out his shirt, showing the label along the edge
>"Normally it's to help keep things organized and hold my creations together, but with all the confusion about who was who going on... well, it just made sense."
>Tom: "So what about the lunkhead? Why was he thinking straight?"
>Tom thumbs at Ed, who walks along dopily with his Stand still out
>Eddy: "Well, you've seen him work. When he's not breaking something, he can control peoples' attention for a second or two. Make them look where or away from wherever he wants. He just... gets bored and does it to himself sometimes."
>Ed reaches up and casually hi-fives Spoon with a dimwitted chuckle
>Edd: "We worry what that might be doing to his head sometimes."
Eddy: "But man, how did we forget about a duck in a zoot suit?!"
Edd: "That's so unlike me to forget something like that..."
>Tom grabs Edd and Eddy by the back of their collars to hold them back
>Tom: "Glad to have you back from the land of the looney, but I got a lot of questions for you cats. And I know some bigwigs who are gonna want to hear the answers too. My pal Topcat will want to be around to hear you birds sing."
>Eddy: "Really now? Did you hear that, Double D!? Reward money!" Grabbing Edd by the collar in excitement
>Tom looks a bit dumbfounded. "... but I didn't..."
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I'll make the new thread soon. I'll put up the link once it hits page 9/10.
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>>81286720
Yeah, that part was me.

Is there anyway to puts some hints to Lowly's power in a fight that happens before his on the island? Maybe Snoopy tips them off just because he'd rather they kill Lowly and be done with him.

There's no reason why Tom's group wouldn't be trying to get info on all the guy's in Daffy's gang from enemies they've already beaten.

Maybe Eddy can use his stand to make someone GIVE him information?
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>>81287423
Remember to add these

>Updated Plot Summaries Pastebin
http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx

>Part 4 googledoc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw/edit
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>>81287423
Don't forget the part 4 google doc >>81222536
in the OP.

That'll probably play a big role next thread unless we spend most of it hammering out these part 3 details.
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>>81287434
They could interrogate Marvin maybe? I remember one anon suggesting that he isn't that loyal to the Duck himself.
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>>81287447
>Tempo and Sam/Max in minor allies
I thought they were party members?
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>>81287447
>>81287470
Got it.
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>>81286799
Part 1: Monster Mash
Part 2: Walking on Sunshine
Part 3: Two Tickets to Paradise
Part 4: Money
Part 5: The Windmills of Your Mind
Part 6: California Girls
Part 7: Mustang Sally
Part 8: Flowers on the Wall
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>>81287494
I had an idea that the heroes don't ever actually see Lowly crush a word until some point where Johnny whips out his style and Lowly's forced to abandon a word to compensate. Then one of them sees the dictionary and things go from there.
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>>81287447
The Telephone Avatar appears to be missing from part 5.
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>>81219813
kinda wondering why doctor barber was not involved.
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>>81287570
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sEKh6RpoYT0
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New thread?
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>>81287547
Are they? I wasn't sure if we were going to have a full fledged 'party' like in the other Parts since 7 is structured like a race. I had this impression that if there was a 'party' per say it would Cliff & Jane sharing a car and Mojo tagging along in his own vehicle as their mentor. We can hash out the details when Part 7 discussion comes around I guess.

>>81287613
I decided not to add every single character from the googledoc into the pastebin because that would make it too cluttered and only focused on the ones anons absolutely needed to know were confirmed for specific parts (i.e. CoCos, Major Villains and Party Members). Telephone Avatar is still in the googledoc and will be brought up again once Part 5 discussion rolls around.
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>>81287774
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OY8TA6RwkZk
This one, actually.
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>>81287494
>>81287434
I wrote the scene after the one where the guys encounter Lowly and his Stand in action when he kills Bluto and Carmen anyway. assumed it came up then
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New thread up, boys.

>>81287900
>>81287900
>>81287900
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>>81287888
I was under the impression Bluto wasn't killed because then they couldn't work the ship to get to Fantasy Island.

Bluto just had the shit beat out of him.

I don't even know what word Lowly crushes to make them all freeze when they first meet him.
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>>81287919
We're not on Page 10.
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>>81287979
I erased time.
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>>81219813
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tp4p4kRzRng
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