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Can someone please help me with my Cover Letter?
It's for a warehouse supervisor.
I'm like half done.
What else should I add/change?
pls halp
It sounds a bit as if you were supplicating.
Try to use less "I" do it more unpersonal. And I personally don't like this sentence: "Please consider..."
Good luck man
Write more about what you've done previously in relation to what you can bring to the role and don't say things like "Please consider" or "I believe ___". Instead put something like "I appreciate your consideration" and "(Preexisting knowledge in X) to apply to the role of Y"
My bad work experience aside, this landed me a job in big ticket sales and I wasn't short of interviews.
>delivery/food shop job was actually worth talking about because I was there for about 4 years
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>Mfw I said don't use "I believe" and I used it myself
What I meant was in relation specifically to the supervisory role since I assume you haven't been in management previously and saying you believe X skill will help you doesn't sound as good as just saying X skill will help you if that makes sense.
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