Looking to improve my resume. Wut do?
Also, any suggestions for fields to look into given my experience and education?
>>1083266
>clearly this desperate and trying this hard
Into the trash it goes. You shouldn't need to promote yourself so hard, m8
>>1083283
What about it seems desperate rather than just explaining my experience?
>>1083293
When I am reviewing CVs if it's full of crap like "negotiated multiple trade union.." "successfully managed" "zero incidents or infractions" "championed" I basically give up. This person is promoting so hard it's painful, and it implies that they are compensating for something. Sure, putting in a few of those things is okay, but it shouldn't be your whole fucking resume. Describe your concrete duties and skills gained, and if you have strong experience then it will speak for itself. You shouldn't have to cram it down our throats.
>>1083300
What if a major part of my job was negotiating union contracts, ensuring that we had zero infractions, etc.?
>>1083326
It's more about the language surrounding how you describe it. You come across as a typical business school graduate trying to self-promote. My favourite thing I've seen on a resume is "top 2% of more than 2000 entrants in internationally acclaimed trading competition". Yours reads a little like that. If those are your duties, sure. But my point is that you want them to naturally go "shit, this guy actually has impressive credentials". If they're having to go "well I guess I will believe him that his credentials are impressive" then you've already lost. It's a subtle difference, but matters a lot
applying for grad jobs soon
what info should i include from my contacts?
i'm assuming two is enough, getting them both from my current place of employment
Kill yourself wagecuck !!!
>>1083345
>what info should i include from my contacts?
I generally don't put references on a resume. Just have a list prepared and bring the list to the interview.
>>1083266
You formatting is fucking shit.
Fix that first.
The dates should be something like 08/2016 or March 2016, rather than 8/2016. Also your indentation is utter shit line, make everything look more natural.
>>1083437
So what exactly should I do with the indentation?
>>1083266
>Barnes-Jewish hospital
>>/out/
>>1083489
>>/pol/
>>1083266
KILL URSELF WAGEKUK
>>1083547
>WAGEKUK
I own my own business, which I'm selling.
>>1083266
you are a great and incredibly successful guy, anon. I am not being sarcastic. good job.
>>1083580
Thanks anon. Hopefully the places that I apply to think the same
