I write a fantasy story. A protagonist has a crush on a Queen,

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2016-02-11 03:32:08 Post No. 16793121
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:32:08 Post No. 16793121 [Report]

I write a fantasy story. A protagonist has a crush on a Queen, but it is no relationship planned . Should I remove it? Currently it is rather unnecessary.

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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:33:45 Post No.16793131
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:33:45 Post No.16793131 [Report]

It's your story anon. If you can't make this decisions yourself, your story will fall apart

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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:34:01 Post No.16793132
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:34:01 Post No.16793132 [Report]

Read Le Morte d'Arthur

It's been done

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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:35:13 Post No.16793139
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:35:13 Post No.16793139 [Report]

>>16793121
>A protagonist has a crush on a Queen, but it is no relationship planned

Sounds alot like life... Sometimes crushes don't work out...

You writing fables, because that's a hell of a moral at the end of the story.

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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:40:30 Post No.16793157
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 03:40:30 Post No.16793157 [Report]

>>16793121
>Currently it is rather unnecessary.
then either plan ahead and make it necessary or remove it.

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Anonymous 2016-02-11 04:56:44 Post No.16793411
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Anonymous 2016-02-11 04:56:44 Post No.16793411 [Report]

>>16793139
What for a "hell of a moral"?