Posting a comic I wrote and drew in which a teenage mutant with sexually-based powers rapes and enslaves the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe.
I posted part of this here before but didn't get to finish.
Any and all feedback welcome. Let me know what you think!
Starting with the Asgardian goddess of love and desire... The mighty Enchantress.
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Hey, it's Self Insert Mind Control Rape Guy again! How ya doin', Self Insert Mind Control Rape Guy?
>>220961
when's the next darkseid part and who will it be
>>220963
great, how are you?
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working on it now. it'll feature Zatanna and Black Canary
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Nice
Would love to see Stargirl and Mera
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Mera is a great suggestion I'll try to get her in
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Any plans for more submission agenda
Maybe with the new ms marvel
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I need to finish the Jean Grey chapter, and then make a final chapter finishing the whole story off. The Ms Marvel chapter will stay as is, most likely.
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After that will darkseid become you main project or will you do something new
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well yeah i have to finish the darkseid story there are probably 2-3 more chapters there
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sounds like you're pretty familiar with my work. any favorite chapters? pages? moments?
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Been a big fan since i first saw, i love anytime the women are dragged down like the whores they are
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what was the first you saw? do you remember? that pretty much describes all my work lol
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Emma
Get a little more violent, i like seeing superhero women hurt
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ah well Emma's the best place to start, obviously. if i remember correctly he slaps her around a little bit to show her her place.
>>221051
next up: the scarlet witch
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AWESOME
it's obvious the main character is you...but AWESOME
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i like to think the main character is whoever's reading it
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any particular likes or dislikes?
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Thank you.
>>220948
You're going to love that new Jessica Jones show, huh?
>>220948
when you gonna do Kristen Ritter lookin Jessica Jones m8?
>>220948
Make more bimbofication art please
>>220948
how much harder would it be to have the pages colored? It's really hard for me to get into black and white porn for some reason.
>>221325
It's a huge time commitment, which is why I usually only color my covers.
Moving on with Miss Mary Jane Watson
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>250â–¶
It's actually a really really good show
>>221263
don't hold your breath. though she is lovely
Read these a while ago, cool to see you're still making more.
>>221393
And now, Felicia Hardy, the Black Cat.
Keep those comments comin!
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thanks, any particular likes or dislikes?
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It appeals to my fetishes and it's got characters I fap to so no complaints.
Last one I remember was the Mockingbird one, you finish any other ones since then?
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no finished chapters, no. currently plotting out the next chapter, which will be the last in the series
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Alright. Keep up the good work, man.
That Enchantress one was some good shit.
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thanks. any favorite panels or pages?
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nice, thanks
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Nigga, didn't you learn yo lesson the last time you dragged yo raggedy ass shit comic in here?
You ain't here for no actual criticism, don't bullshit us boy.
The drawing's pretty good, if a bit sketchy.
The words however, should be a bit better lined up and spaced.
Haven't started reading the story yet, will toss in on that once I have
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Thanks, let me know! Will post more when I have time.
http://benchleyfan01.imgur.com
http://mcstories.com/Authors/Pegasus.html
http://writer-pegasus.livejournal.com/
http://pegasus.wwoec.com/
[email protected]
draw your self insert getting pegged and dominated by Wonder Woman pls and thanks
You willingly avoided checking yourself.
Now you're getting a shreking.
Congrats buddy, you're a rockstar.
I've read some of your stuff before and I was thinking about it throughout the Jessica Jones netflix show whenever Kilgrave used his powers on women lel
>>221625
>The drawing's pretty good, if a bit sketchy.
Because it's fucking traced from hentai. How new is everyone in this thread? This faggot is infamous for swiping shit.
Damn nice. Hot stuff OP love that Blck Cat cover image
>>220948
nice work
is there also a thread with your previous comics?
>>220948
I like when the protagonist grabs the women's hair. I like this particular series because I prefer "fucked into submission" scenarii to more violent ones.
Your comics are awesome. Thanks for putting in so much work.
You've asked for comments in the thread so I'll give you my humble opinion on things that stood out for me.
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My favorite part is the hairpulling and having them swallowing enormous amounts of cum.
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The way he is playing with tits also gets of off hard.
>>220980
She is probably the most delicious woman you have drawn for my taste. She has also an especially great facial expression in the topmost panel.
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My favorite facial expression in your comics is in this image. In the panel where she cries out "IUUUUUU".
Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to having many more great faps.
>>222713
This, but have him wear a dress as well.
>>223305
well, new enough to only ever hear you asshats whinging about his dastardly ways. Proof or fuck off.
>>223890
actually... you know what. I don't care. Even if he did 'steal art' he added something to it that made it even better so I don't mind if he traced or whatever it is you people are accusing him of.
>>223776
Wow. These are great, specific comments. More like this please
>>220948
What I think? Your drawings are bullshit
Real inspired stuff though is here:
>>223691
Real nice art Op, your anatomy is pretty sound an you've exaggerated features nicely without them looking gross
Pursuing art really ruined my ability to fap to drawings but I can really get behind this. Would love to see more position variation
Maybe some of the girls on top?
>all this boo hoo I can't do art so I'll get mad at people who can
Post some fucking proof of tracing or fuck off
>>223894
Nice samefag OP
Is this him posting though? It could be, but the Scarlet Witch and Black Cat files have Imgur filenames, so anyone could have posted them here from Imgur.
This shit is so disgusting.
I remember reading the original on the Grey Archive, back in the day.
Is this the same story, or modified? Have you edited out the incest sub-plot? Will the running theme with Redheads be prevalent?
Tits are too big.
Try drawing them more accurate to their comic proportions
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It's a modified version of the original story. I've edited out the incest subplot, yes. And since I haven't yet drawn the Jean Grey chapter, the running redhead theme is somewhat lacking right now too.
Next chapter: Black Widow & She-Hulk
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Femanon here. I came so hard to these. Mmm thanks
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Really? which pages/panels did it for you?
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>didn't even keep the domino mask on
Clearly you missed the greater theme of her being publicly unmasked and her identity destroyed and crushed.
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and that's great and all, but you still failed to make her recognizable among any of the other characters you've done visually
like I said you didn't even play on the cat theme which would have been pretty simple to do with even an ear band or buttplug. Hell, even pawprint pasties.
In your OP you wanted to know what we thought, and I'm just saying that one had a few missed opportunities.
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Fair enough. You could be right. Perhaps when I ink it I'll add her eyemask.
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>Tigra
I want it so damn bad; she already has a sexdrive on par with She-Hulk plus some.
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Good page
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What about that page in particular appeals to you?
your she-hulk doesn't even look close to she-hulk mate
rest of the stuff is ok though and your writing has improved a bit
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In what way has my writing improved, would you say?
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And that's the end of that chapter, as Black Widow surrenders her free will and accepts her new life as a fuckslave for her young Master, and She-Hulk enters a life of depraved abuse as the drug-addled slut of a group of street thugs.
Thoughts?
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How about Scarlet Witch and the black spider tattoo? Unless it was mentioned in an earlier chapter, that plot seems to have gone, too
Hey what's up dude? I was just thinking about this comic while watching Jessica Jones and wishing there was quality Killgrave mindrape porn. Good stuff, glad to see you're still doing it. Haven't read this in like three years so idk what you've added but only thing I really wish you did was show the Jubilee scene.
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Can't remember this moonspeak gobbldygook, but I remember the name Senshin being presented last time.
>>220948
Holy shit, man. Are you so starved for attention? You could at least pretend that you are just some random schmuck who just happens to like this garbage. When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?
>>226393
Seconded. Get over yourself OP.
the outstandingly insufferable MC, samebody/face all the "marvel" woman have (making them unidentifiable) and the shotty writing in a story driven narrative really hamper what could otherwise be a pretty enjoyable thing.
>>220948
the guyb with this power is doing right
is there anymore of these comics somewhere?
they are great.
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ok nvm i checked the links upthere
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Shit, if I'd done all this, I'd be sharing it and trying to get feedback too. And I don't see why he should have to hide the fact that it's him.
>When you are the only one who ever posts this crap then maybe it's just bad, you know?
I think it's pretty hot. I do feel like it's a bit predictable / repetitive and wish that he'd kill just one of the women to ratchet up the tension (and not some minor character who was obviously just there for that purpose), but then I'm very cognizant of boundaries and things tend to feel hemmed in and contrived to me when I see a niche that something won't go beyond. Still, I can't expect everybody to share my eccentricities, and overall it does hit pretty close to my sweet spot.
>>227959
Only time you ever see this shit it's shilled by the author himself. He did it on /b/, he did it on /co/ and god knows where else. It's just stinks of utter desperation.
I like your stuff. The scenes are believable in a rapey sort of way, so the dialog doesn't detract from the story. I still want to hit the guy over the head with a brick, but hey that's just a testament to the writing.
Keep up the good work.
>>220948
Cool Izayoi Seishin traces, brah. Almost as good at tracing like The Pitt.
>>228691
Pit traces? Where the fuck did he found hentai with so shitty anatomy?
>>228591
Thanks! What makes you dislike the peotagonist?
I've always loved these. Some great fapbait. Enchantress is my favorite one.
Nice to see you're still working on them. Keep up the good work!
Oh hey it's this guy.
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*Shrug* I don't care. The comics are hot regardless of whether they're traced or whatever. You don't need to be Michelangelo to wake something hot.
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He won't learn shit if he won't stop tracing.
>>230883
who cares? it's not about the art man. so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters. Which is why I first found this guy on story sites where there WEREN'T any pics to go with them.
>>230956
The guy who wrote the story and one who draws it are two different people Which is kind of funny given how the main character is quite obviously a self-insert.
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>The guy who wrote the story and one who draws it are two different people.
Wait, really?
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>it's not about the art man.
It's a comic. Comics are a visual medium. Therefore, yes, the art actually is pretty important.
>so long as it's up to a certain standard, the content is all that matters.
Too bad the content is kinda shit as well.
>>220948
Are you 13?
>>230972
Yup. Fact that the guy couldn't came up with this shitty plot himself but needed to base it on some old, bloated fanfic tells you everything you need to know about him.
>>231350
Huh, I always figured it was the same guy, merely now moving from written stories to drawn ones.
>>231350
I was disagreeing with you guys up until the black widow thing. How he detained her just pissed me off.
Art is fappable.
Story and dialogue is shit-tier power fantasy.
Waste of a decent art imo.
>Everybody in here shitting on this mentally prepubescent page-tracing hack of an OP's awful comic.
Warms my heart.
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>Not liking rape and humiliation
Reeeeeeeeeeeere
>>231350
So what? What have you done lately, artistically speaking? You don't need to create some literary masterpiece to validate your existence. Most of us do very little in our lives that is really exceptional, but that doesn't make us pathetic. Maybe your standards are too high.
Besides, it's not like we mock movies that are based on books for being unoriginal. And sure, the drawings do seem to be based on the images shown in this thread, which maybe means the guy isn't greatest, most original artist in the world, but the comic is still pretty hot, and he's done a good job of repurposing stuff. Artists often use models to get their proportions right, and if you lack that option, you might have to rely on other art. Also, hip hop blatantly steals portions of other songs and most people don't have a problem with that, so what's the difference here? Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as the Beatles to have merit.
>>231941
Dude. You take this shitty rape comic quite personal.
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>Your band doesn't have to be as talented as Pink Floyd or as groundbreaking as The Beatles to have merit.
You're right. But now imagine somebody covering Dark Side of the Moon, note for note instrumentally, and then changing all the lyrics to a shitty superheroine rape fantasy. That has little merit.
Art great less sound effect dialogue
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I'm bothered by a general trend that discounts the artistic contributions of the vast majority of the population because they aren't as good as the best professional-quality stuff. I really don't feel that kind of thinking is good for the human condition. I'd be really fucking pleased with myself if I made this "shitty rape comic" and I suspect that most of the people mocking it have never done anything artistic as ambitious as it is. It takes a lot of effort to do shit.
>>231941
No, I don't suppose people do get mad about those things, because even the ERAGON movie wasn't just made up of scenes blatantly ripped from LoTR, with Eragon himself absent/dead and instead having the story lead by some overpowered literally nobody who spent the runtime being invincible and banging elves or whatever.
Sampling of a song in another son is usually just to accent or compliment the piece. If these fucking things shared particular stylistic choices like the shape of faces or background style, that would be one thing. But this is literally building all of his shit by tracing Iyazoi.
Nigga noooo, don't defend this shit.
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I haven't seen Eragon, but I'm lead to believe that the book is a mashup of Star Wars and LotR. Regardless, you're comparing a one hundred million dollar movie with thousands of people involved to fap pictures some dude drew.
>>232010
Probably has something to do with the fact that:
-this is self insert self masturbatory bullshit
-it's rape, which is one of two or three fetishes it is objectively awful to have
-this guy lifts frames from established artists who honed their crafts and drew their stuff with a singular vision that often was not rape based, and changes them to rape.
Nobody gets upset at the guy drawing glorified stick figures because he sucks at drawing, because at least that motherfucker is giving it his whole effort.
Rape fetish is nice but the art theft ruins it.
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So its a parody then? Because those are common and I don't see people go 'Oh Rucka you're such a terrible person copying all the music'. He may not be an artist but he does present the content (even if it is repetitive as fuck) in a more visual way, which seeing as most people here can't read books helps them fap to their shitty superhero mind control porn.
>>232807
Perhaps I should say releasing that rape based cover/remake as a completely original release with no credit to the people who wrote the music, even going as far as actively trying to pass it off as your own original content.
I Just realized that this comic makes for some top level bait. I sure as hell got butt bothered by it.
Not that I don't think this current OP is being completely unironic, but for future reference, it bears remembering.
>>223890
It's quite obviously traced. I've seen these styles before in hentai, he uses pencil of all things, and you can't see any faint character frames and shit you would expect of someone drawing the human form from scratch.
>>221095
I personally like my boobs of a more realistic size. The ones you drew aren't bad, but are too big for my taste.
This is odd. I can usually get off to mindcontrol and rape fetish porn, but mixing that with a selfinsert just makes it disgusting to me. And then there's the tracing.
