Girls und Panzer und /ak/
also little girls on combat drugs
Dumping the first chapter of Youjo Senki
proofreading would be appreciated as always
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Page 4 is empty
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>>141261427
oh boy, back right on time
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>666
Okay, let me try to help here:
>>141261452
>little girl
'A little girl' would be better
>>141261600
>the empire has declared a proclamation of war
Redundant. Go for either "declared war" or "issued a proclamation"
>border violations of
"border violations by" makes more sense in this context, although you'd have to confirm with SwissCan't read the runes myself.
>successively
would replace with "with all haste" at the end of the sentence.
>>141261644
>given out a one-sided advice
replace advice by 'ultimatum'
>the threats of no matter how many people
Threats; no matter how many people utther them
>the empires foes
the empire's foes
>>141261732
This picture is unclear. If I understand it correctly, he's urging the other guy to tender his resignation. so I'd replace the whole text from the last two panels with:
'Indeed. Hence, instead of forcing a "bad conduct discharge" on our faithful employees, allowing them to resign of their own volition would be better for them, don't you agree?'
>>141261770
>minutely
as required of me
>>141261814
first panel. 'After that, I should be on track to succeed our department manager'
'Life was supposed to be a fairly smooth ride' (to keep with the train images)
'Emphasis was on'
'I suppose people who are about to be restructured...'
>>141261889
1) I miraculously survived and I'm being treated by a doctor. This would mean I recieved some brain damage
2) it's a possibility...
3) It's a possibility
>bunch of humanity
'A bunch of humans' or 'A big part of humanity'
Will conntinue in a minute
>>141263908
and done,
as soon as someone looked over it I'll upload it somewhere
I want to make Tanya into a woman
>>141263856
>Offense of DIsobey
"Offense of Insubordination"
>>141263995
Thanks for looking over it
>"Emphasis was on"
I think it is okay with "emphasis on was"
>"I suppose people who are about to be restructured..."
I think it is ok as it is, too. Since he not only refers to the people who are about to be restructured, but generally the people which companies can let go easily (if that makes sense)
Gah, this pseudo-religious gibberish is making my head hurt.
>>141261926
>this worlds reason
this world's rationality
>if god should
However, if god should
>the consequence is that
Therefore
>case closed
Quod erat demonstrandum.for maximum fedora
And drop the 'as' in the last sentence.
>>141261982
>humanities
humanity's (2 times)
>societies
society's
>>141262017
>neither
'none has' makes sense here.
>worlds
world's
>commandements
"Thou" istead of "You" for maximum effect
>believes
'beliefs' or 'religion' or 'faith'
>>141262054
>I'm ought
I ought
>This is turning into a bad situation
This situation is getting sour
>>141262086
>frank
premature
>proven scientifically
scientifically proven
>>141262192
>A certain place
I'd go with "somewhere"
>>141262237
>you existence X
your existence, X
>>141262281
devils
devil's
>>141262342
>to it
to military service
>warrent
warrant
Be back in a minute
>>141264802
>your existence, X
not a typo, since "Existence X" is what he's calling god
Okay, let's see
>>141262382
>requesting
Would replace by 'report'.
>>141262424
>which won't give
Would write as "which doesn't give"
>>141262467
>was presented to me with
would write as "has presented me with"
>>141262493
>on rear line stand-by
on rear line stand-by duty
>>141262532
>border to
border with
>>141262566
>with regime change
with a change of regime
>>141262606
>this is the bill for it
Weird phrase. "Too steep a price!" or maybe "Look at the blood we have to pay for that!"
>>141262656
>Our possible actions are to
What we can do is
>expand disorder
run interference
>>141262692
>wavelenght
wavelength
>>141262737
I struggle to make sense of this page, especially the middle panel.
>>141262789
>potential
'assets' or 'units' would make more sense.
>>141262825
>interfierences
intereferences
>judging as
'identified as' would make more sense.
>>141262907
>irratiation
irradiationI suppose?
>sorcerers
sorcerers'
>>141262952
>scale
'size' makes more sense
>>141263001
>this guys
these guys
>scale
'size', again
>>141263039
>yourself
myself
>strenght
strength
>If you want me to go and die then do so clearly
If you want me to get myself killed, why don't you just say so?
>fucks
fuck'sWhat an unladylike vocabulary!
Con't
Holy shit this really needs a lot of QC
I want a threesome with Tanya and Shizuka!
>>141263078
>this has been perfectly settled as the worst
This is the worst possible situation! A set-up!
>>141263115
>conversing
converting
>>141263226
>then there is when
then it happened that
>being on
while on
>>141263283
>huh
huh?
>believes
'beliefs' (or alternatively 'believers')
>>141263319
>even with having said
'even if I am a' or 'even being a'
>world history of my previous world
'my previous world's history' is less awkward
>the everyone
everyone
>deserting
I'd put 'desertion'
>>141263562
>break
"break off" or "break away"
>>141263666
I'd put "gotcha!" or even "Checkmate!" since it was her plan all along to lure them in, but it's up to you.
>>141263856
>the offence of disobey
the offence of wilful disobedience (or 'mutiny', or 'insubordination')
That's it from me.
>>141266634
>I'd put "gotcha!" or even "Checkmate!" since it was her plan all along to lure them in, but it's up to you.
Well, this was the verb she used
http://jisho.org/search/つかまえる
in the past tense.
>>141263666
>666
Tanya confirmed for the Rhine Devil
>>141266573
I want to have a foursome with Miho, Saki and Yoshika!
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>>141264802
thanks, I got the mistakes noted
>>141262737
If i'm honest, I don't quite understand this page either
>>141267894
Glad I could help.
>>141262737
Maybe LN translation may help with this
>Multiple Mage observers were flying alone without concealing their positions. Based on the periodic encrypted signals they sent, they must be making reports of their observations and was using special, encrypted frequencies.
>“They are flying alone? They’re really looking down on us.”
>“That might be so, but their defensive line is very strong.”
>Anson knew that of course. An air defence network that was properly set up, with air units and Mages ready to intercept. Security was so tight, it could make a grown man cry. It was clear that the Empire only allowed their support units to fly alone because they judged their defence network to be sturdy enough.
>“*Sigh* I really don’t want to rack my brains and fight the enemy normally. I would have fled with my family if I had known earlier.”
>“Colonel Suez, those Empire fellows probably have the opposite reaction from us, and are tilting their heads from confusion. They must be wondering if it is alright to fight such an easy war.”
>“Indeed, let us pray they have dropped their guard.”
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>>141262737
----------------------
>that means a bulky warning line
that means a tough defensive line
>geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy uprightly
geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy normally
>Lieutenant colonel Sue, it's the bunch of the empire who are puzzled on the contrary. (Asking themselves) if it's OK if war is this easy and stuff
Lieutenant Colonel Sue, on the contrary maybe the Empire are confused if it's okay to fight such an easy war.
>Let them anticipate the things they've neglected to the utmost then
Let us pray they have dropped their guard
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Maybe now this page is much clearer to understand
>>141268706
looks good, I'll put it in
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>>141245520
>Milspec shit is usually hardened against interference, no? Then again those little shits can probably get into every nook and cranny.
Human brain is even more hardened against interference. If the theory is "they can affet electrical impulses", the result is consistent.
>>141263360
>that face
Wrong drugs?
![Girls_und_Panzer_-_04_-_Captain_Does_Her_Best!_[720p]_[13CDA505].mkv_snapshot_20.24_[2016.05.08_05.26.04].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/g5SvEO1.jpg "Girls_und_Panzer_-_04_-_Captain_Does_Her_Best!_[720p]_[13CDA505].mkv_snapshot_20.24_[2016.05.08_05.26.04].jpg")
Mako a cool
>>141274110
I want to give her a push
![Girls_und_Panzer_-_07_-_Up_Next_Is_Anzio!_[720p]_[0C8ED201].mkv_snapshot_04.33_[2016.05.04_05.53.56].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/JZHdJ3v.jpg "Girls_und_Panzer_-_07_-_Up_Next_Is_Anzio!_[720p]_[0C8ED201].mkv_snapshot_04.33_[2016.05.04_05.53.56].jpg")
>>141274137
no bully
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>>141274339
Yes bully. Bully with dick.
>>141274847
My nigga
Why is this allowed?
>>141275207
Because it's great fap material
>>141275207
That's bullshit.
Saori is straight.
>>141275782
Any port in a storm, man.
Sexual bullying is the best way for girls to become good tankers.
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>>141268706
>>141268166
>geez, this isn't something to wage war against the enemy normally
changed it to
'Geez, you shouldn't have to fight the enemy normally in such a situation'
maybe works better
>>141276780
>you shouldn't
change to 'we'
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>>141276942
alright, also I changed
'I should've brought my family along and make a run for it'
to
'I should've took my family and made a run for it'
>>141279777
I wonder what PzIV-san did before ending up on Ōarai.
He started as an Ausf. D so he either served in Poland or France. Maybe he fought together with 38(t)-san. He might even have met Lee-san or B1-san on the battlefield.
What about his original crew? Are they alive? If they are, do they know their old friend is teaching girls how to be good women?
>>141280853
>B1-san
Tank ova says so
>original crew alive
age makes it very doubtful
>see this
What do?
>>141281785
Ask how much to repair my car
>>141281785
Suukantsu
>>141281824
4 kisses per hour.
>>141281950
Who had the brilliant idea of giving Saki a long skirt in the anime?
I want to buy him a beer.
>>141281979
Do I have to kiss all of them or can I skip center-left and give an extra kiss to far-right?
>>141282067
Don't be mean to Nakajima, anon.
She needs to be compensated for her work too.
>>141281785
Glare at Hosinos chest and wish for x-ray vision.
![[Underwater-Mahjong] Saki - 01 [v2][CB375B6F].mkv_snapshot_09.05_[2016.05.09_01.37.46].png](https://i.imgur.com/dZH1wIW.png "[Underwater-Mahjong] Saki - 01 [v2][CB375B6F].mkv_snapshot_09.05_[2016.05.09_01.37.46].png")
>>141282054
>Saki
>long skirt
nigga what
>>141282283
What the hell?
I remember her wearing a skirt that almost went down to her knees.
![[Underwater-Mahjong] Saki - 01 [v2][CB375B6F].mkv_snapshot_13.45_[2016.05.09_01.53.36].png](https://i.imgur.com/Bv0v5Co.png "[Underwater-Mahjong] Saki - 01 [v2][CB375B6F].mkv_snapshot_13.45_[2016.05.09_01.53.36].png")
>>141282525
The president and her megane friend have ones like this.
>>141281979
And where do I kiss them?
>>141283160
Wherever they want you too.
What would YOU do for a Trumpeter 1/16 Tiger II, /a/?
>>141284656
>>141284656
Break into Yukari's house, make love to her, and take it with me.
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>>141281979
4 pats per hour?
>>141281785
Take them for a ride on the ride we just repaired.
>>141263460
I know, right?
I may be at work, but I still have time to read some glorious reich loli action.
>>141284783
Darjeeling please stop posting your husbandou in these threads
So I'm going for now,
I have the things fixed that were pointed out
I'll provide the link to the MEGA folder tomorrow.
Also do I need to make /ak/ endpage, or is there some copypasta version?
>>141285443
You can copy paste from the wiki or just make a plain one with the logo and the website.
If I was at home, I'd post one of mine, but maybe I'll do it later tonight. Also remember that we do have a wiki page for it, so if you need a place to host links you can do it there.
>>141262086
>neither magic nor miracles can be proven scientifically
Oh, that explains the prototype magic orb built by a scientist and team of engineers. Cute.
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>>141284783
Still posting this fat fuck.
>inb4 problem memeshit reaction.
>>141287703
>>141287187
Yayoi is such a good girl
To bad she's a shit cure
>>141261452
>I repeat
Triggered my autism right there
>>141281785
brown leo is best pon
bumping so I have time to post once I've read it
You think they'd ever do an anime with boy and airplanes set in this universe? I kind of want it.
>>141261889
>I was having a butterfly dream and am oversleeping
Hadn't read the LN last thread so I said nothing, but in the LN at least this is a reference to the philosopher Zhuangzi's famous Butterfly Dream, wherein he dreamt he was a butterfly, then woke up and wondered whether he was Zhuangzi and had dreamt of being a butterfly, or he was a butterfly and was currently dreaming of being Zhuangzi.
It might be better to translate it as
>It could be that my previous life was all just a dream, and only now have I awoken
or something like that. Then again I haven't seen the raws.
>>141282283
>>141282525
She actually does
In Saki Zenkoku-hen
Originally Mako's, and Saki borrows it from her
>>141262281
>besto-
>wed with
It's your first time typesettingif I remember correctly from last thread, so it's understandable, but that looks really clunky. "wed" is not a strong enough syllable to separate from "besto-" (I'm tempted to say it's not a separate syllable at all), and in general putting the second halves of words next to complete words should be avoided if at all possible. It would be better to write it as
>was be-
>stowed
Or, even better, resizing the font so that
>bestowed
would fit.
They're just minor details, but typesetting can really make or break your scanlation. I could go into more detail criticizing the typesetting if you want.
>>141262342
it seems the other anon missed some things, so:
>a officer cadet
an officer cadet
>and send to war
and was sent to war
>>141262467
the other anon missed this, so:
>a change for success
a chance for success
>>141263516
>Dat Nanto Seikan
Brutal
>>141281785
As a 12A, I'd give them a stern look for failing to salute at the presence of a passing officer and most likely give them a negative scolding for failing to arrive on time for the maitenance check of the BFV squad under my command
>>141291260
Please do, I'm trying to get better after all.
I'm not at home atm, so can't really respond regulary, but I'll make notes
>>141263283
>was ought to
ought to
>humanism
probably "kindness" would be better?
>rock-ish
"radical", maybe?
>>141263319
>100'000 (500'000, etc.)
100,000
>peace breathy
peace treaty
>the blind believe
the blind belief
>humanism
I think I'd go with "altruism", or "human kindness" or something like that
>>141263360
>exiting
exciting (I'm guessing that's a typo at least)
>>141263856
>student, when the
student, and when the
>disobeyed against her orders
disobeyed her orders
>to act out as commander
to act as commander
>>141264014
>onmious
ominous
Maho is my wife.
What's its name?
>>141294827
She calls him "daddy"
>>141293159
You can also just cache or read the thread when it archives, I do that whenever ProofreaderAnon gave me suggestions and stuff.
Speaking of him...
Anyone know where he is? I'm about 1/3 the way done with a chapter, but it'd be nice to have him on call if need be.
Erika
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>>141261427
Just got into the LN two days ago, and finished the first two chapters. The manga looks real good, thanks anon
>>141293159
Actually, on second thought, it's kind of late and I can't really do as I promised (I apologize)
Instead I'll drop a couple of links here that really helped me.
http://prettyanonymo.us/index.php/scanlation-resources/anonblacks-typesetting-guide/
This is a really helpful guide, I mean seriously. If there's something that this guide actually doesn't cover, you might be able to find something here:
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=6dfacaa37731bc89d4d0041edbc7b5cd&showtopic=68725
Some of the best typesetting is in eromanga, I have no idea why.
Have they sold a BD box yet of the entire series yet? I'd get it.
>>141295511
Thanks, I'll look into it when I get home, also I will go over the chapter and change things accordingly, it will just take some time
>>141296143
I dont think so. They still sell the BDs of the series separately. I think that'd be a good move after the movie BD sales die down and sell a box for 300 bucks or something. That and announce season 2.
>>141263078
>the grudge will become great in the future, so it's best if I get to return that
I'd suggest something like "I can return the favor later, but only if I get through this".
>So right now there's nothing else but to devote myself to make the best out of the current conditions
Maybe "Right now I can only focus on making the best of the current situation"?
Also I'd really suggest adding punctuation.
Prequel when?
Is the app a fun game or just a p2w mobage?
>>141294827
The real question is: What will be his name and his fate after history team got a hold of it?
>>141297769
This makes me want to perform sexual violence on SaemonzaEspecially now that my dog just died.[/spoiler[
>>141297728
Yes
>>141298248
yes wut
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>>141261926
>yaoi hands
>>141285172
I only now got what is really going on in last panel.
>/ak/
Wake me up when Marginal Operation gets updatedThanks for dump OP
>>141298284
Made for rape
>>141293027
>wants civilians to salute military personal
Back to basic with you
>>141298766
Made for marriage. To me.
>>141299103
Its quite amazing how they turned her from the total bitch she was in the manga into one of the most likeable girls of GuP in the series.
>>141299283
>manga
>ever mattering
Anchovy was always a goddess.
>>141299318
>>141299283
Manga was just an advertisement for the anime. So it is a wash. It kind of pisses me off the manga is the main image on GuP's wiki page.
>>141299401
Anchovy>Pepperoni>>Carpaccio
>>141299430
It has at least one highlight, the scene where Erwin and Yukari are in the B1 and drive Aya mad while going all history.
>>141299469
Carpacchio is taken anyway.
>>141299559
anyone hatin' on this is a moron and his opinions are shit. End of history.
>>141295410
>>141299103
Carpaccio, pls
>>141299978
My wife.
>>141299559
>>141299963
I'm going to marry Yukari, and Erwin will be best man.
>>141299980
More like Pepperoni pls. Carpacchio is all over Taka-chan.
>>141300221
No.
I'm Going to marry Yukari. You can have any other guppie but she's mine.
This one is mine.
>>141300399
I understand how you feel, Yukari is incredibly cute and lovely.
I'm sure you're a wonderful person, and you would make a loving husbando, but my love for her is too strong. I'm definitely going to marry Yukari.
>>141300399
>>141300552
Her dad will kill you
>>141300552
My love for her is like a truck.
If there were two Yukaris I'd let you have the other one but there's only one and I will fight you to the death for her hand in marriage.
No offense to you of course.
>>141301108
What color panties are they wearing?
>>141301232
>Implying that they're wearing any
>>141301364
If they arent, i really want to enter that tank after they leave it after a match. The smell must be intoxicating,
>>141300887
I doubt that. I would, of course, ask for his permission first. I'm not an animal.
>>141301060
A reasonable request.
Pistols at dawn.
>>141298578
Movie when?
>>141301451
I'd rather engage in fisticuffs.
I refuse to kill someone with such good taste in a less honorable way.
>>141301869
18 days
>>141301913
BDs: 25th
Rip: hopefully the day after
subs: soon :^)
>>141301232
>>141301913
Very well, I accept.
I wish you the best of luck, and that we may have an honourable match.
>>141302273
Didn't someone calculate the distance between the tanks in that scene?
>>141302558
In a way we would both be winners since death is preferable to living without Yukari.
>>141302788
we're *shown* the distances in overhead shots, and are a wee bit less than a tank-width betwen each tank. Of course, they use Anime perspective to make the jump look huge. Some Anon once calculated that, acording to that perspective, she would be jumping around 6 meters betwen each tank, but then again,
>2016
>trusting "Anime perspective"
I mean, c'mon! Acording to Anime perspective, Heidi's swing back in the Alpes had a length of some 20 meters (as actually calculated by scientists worldwideteather)
>>141303224
>Heidi's swing back in the Alpes
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5hKi1VlE94A
0' 28'' to 0' 41''.
Simple pendulum. Oscillation period of 9 seconds. 20.25 meters.
Not to mention, geometry shows the sing is hanging from 150 meters high.
>>141302861
Know that if I were to die, I will accept your marriage to Yukari.
However, I refuse to die.
>>141303442
>>141303224
Calculated by Spanish scientists. Proof that my countrymen scientists are a bunch of frikis.
Also of interest, Captain Tsubasa's physics as calculated by SCIENCE!
http://www.lawebdefisica.com/humor/oliver/
TL;DR of Spanish text:
-Japan's gravity seems to be 1/100 g (5 meter jumps in 10 seconds)
-football field seems to be 1500 meters (based upon range at which the goals start to be over the horizont, compared with Earth's curvature)
-given that size, and given time in flight, the ball is usually kicked at roughlt 1080 Km/h
-given he's able to stop a ball travelling at that speed and be displaced 3 meters, one of the goalies weights 272 Kg
In short:
>Después de lo visto a lo largo de estas líneas, lo único que uno puede hacer es buscar la dirección de los estudios que realizaron la mítica serie de anime, con la intención de preguntarle que es lo que fuman, por que mola.
I'll leave translating that as an execrise for the reader
So, yep
>Anime perspective
Fuck yeah.
>>141303731
>Earth's curvature
Correction: compared with the curvature of a tiny Japan with the calculated gravity, which seems to be upon a planet of only 64.8 Km
Why are the springs on the Panzer IV behind the wheels?
Seems like it would limit travel a lot.
>>141302011
May 27th not 25th.
>>141301232
Maho wears plain black and Erika wears white with black lace and bows.
>>141304282
Where else would you put them?
Movie where?
>>141304811
Somewhere where they're not a cunt hair from scraping against the tracks.
>>141304282
>Seems
>>141304282
And did they?
Onee-chan;_;
>>141307745
Chapter 11 when?
>>141307873
I'd like more to see the chapters before translated.
>>141307873
>>141308470
How many raw chapters are out?
>>141309399
15 or 16. New one any moment from now.
>>141309399
The untranslated raw ones are chapter 11-16. Chapter 17 raws will hopefully be out courtesy of swiss Momo this week.
>>141309502
>>141309702
Translations when?
>>141309787
We can only just wait for Momo to continue translations on it.
>>141298786
>civillians
>Implying theyhaven't already graduated and aren't 91H or 94A
Is this uploaded yet?
![[DmonHiro] Girls Und Panzer 06 - Reaching The Climax Of Our First Match! (BD, 720p) [A934AC79].mkv_snapshot_22.05_[2016.05.02_10.14.10].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/ztwhtls.jpg "[DmonHiro] Girls Und Panzer 06 - Reaching The Climax Of Our First Match! (BD, 720p) [A934AC79].mkv_snapshot_22.05_[2016.05.02_10.14.10].jpg")
>>141312666
>Always losing in the past
>Got beaten up by no-name school in practice match
>Lost in the first round against Anzio before they even use their P40
>Not even in the movie
Being Maginot is suffering.
>>141313298
>Losing to Anzio
Literally how
Can they even penetrate the B-2 with anything they have?
>>141313434
They have Semovente which like a little brother of StuG III
>>141263666
> 666 is always the best girl
>>141313985
I want to give Yuzu my injection
>>141298753
Picked by another group, they're on chapter 10.
>>141313423
Close your shirt, you're not pretty enough for me to want to see you naked.
>>141315491
>>141312216
Nope
>>141315546
How jokes on you, I wear level IIIa on me and an M1 Vietnam era helmet when I'm working in the fields
>>141315546
I feel like this image gets posted in response to my posts more than anyone else's.
Maybe it's just because I find Anchovy to be so fun to bully.
>>141300496
I will fight you for the Finn.
>>141315994
>fighting over mongolians
>>141316146
What can I say, I fight for love.
>>141316146
>Not waning to restart the Finnish Khanate
It's like you don't want to make Finland great again
>>141315812
What about Alise?
>>141316242
She was bullied enough by Adonai by bringing her into existence
>When she sees the dick
>>141316146
Y-yeah. Who would ever waste their time on ruling mongols?
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