Chapter 36-40 edited script:
http://pastebin.com/0HeG9i6z
I'm sorry it took so long, but this was a long chapter. 70 pages, and there were a couple of areas where things were rewritten for the volume. Since this chapter is so important to the developing relationship between Chinatsu and Tatara, I had to take extra care to make sure the editing preserved what was going on in the script.
With this, all of volume 8's script has been edited. Thanks a lot to Dancefag for translating this series, and to Editor-Oniisama and Danceguy. I'll start on the rest of 40 sometime next week.
Tatara is the series' town bicycle.
>>135302906
Bumping the thread so it doesn't die while I'm reading through the text.
Thanks a lot. You do more than I.
>>135302906
Thanks, but you forgot the remaining pages from the chapter 40
>>135306748
the volume end in the middle of the chapter 40: http://raw.senmanga.com/Ballroom-E-Youkoso/40/12
the chapter 35-40 is going to be ~80 pages long
>>135303224
Fujoshi leave nothing untainted, do they?
>>135302906
143
>As long as we hold the eyes of the judges...
I'd prefer not to repeat the word 'hold' here. It was just used in the previous sentence
146
>The next-
[“On” is unnecessary here and breaks up the flow of Akira’s thoughts, slowing them down.]
No actual complain with this except that I believe these to be Tatara's thoughts. As long as they aren't edited further into something weird, all is fine.
160
>Agreed!! (You don’t have to get it.)
分かってるじゃない！
is a statement like "don't talk yourself down like that, you do get it!" She's being positive here.
163
VW is finals only.
167
>You still haven’t told your parents about your dancing right?
Either drop your from "your dancing" or change it to "you dancing"
174
It's good to have some spunk!
>Well, that is definitely how it feels!
tThe original is a japanese saying so literal translation will be a bit strange. A very literal translation would go like
>"They wouldn't be they without this" sort of feeling
177
>On this floor, Fujita and Hiyama’s impressive movements are surprisingly honest.
honestly surprising
Stripping the good and bad about the dance.
>They’re stripping out the good and bad of dance.
I wonder how many dancers in Japan are able to perform in such a natural unbalance.
These are meant as the same sentence, as in, "if we ignored the actual level of dance, how many in Japan could dance like this."
180
Whatever!
>I get it!
知るか
is more akin to "fuck it. I don't care anymore"
186
Both of them
>Which is the rider, which is the horse?
[More wordplay between the kanji and furigana, Gaju is wondering who’s in control here.]
I think it's more like the horse and the rider are both equally faulty for going wild
188
>Show me that face!!
"those faces!!" He's speaking in plural
196
Unity
>Of unity
>In unison
I feel like there really should be only one word here, but that probably depends on how well this page can be cleaned
Some notes of various importance.
>>135302906
>I'll start on the rest of 40 sometime next week
oh didn't see this. Alright. I will probably release the chapter in 3/4 days. I will make a v2 next week.
