A visual novel adaptation of the christmas story 'A Tsundere Carol' created by an anon some years ago.
Current progress:
>Sprite artist on board
>Basic layout sorted for ADV
>Original script coded in
>Royalty free music sourced and ready to be implemented
Still to do:
>Add some context to the script in places to make up for the change in structure
>Make the GUI look prettier
>Add in some cool effects
>Ensure the game matches the feeling of the comic as much as possible
Sounds like generic shit. Good job.
>>118146958
>Doesn't know what Tsundere Carol is
young_frankenstein_cant_believe_this_retard.xml
Spriteless still but cute
I don't really mean to nitpickall right, I do, but the original story did have 'Christmas' in the title
>>118146984
>made by someone from /a/
>tsundere in the title
>VN
Sounds like shit to me.
>>118147126
>he wasn't here for the threads
too busy eating christmas dinner with your alcoholic mother and absent father?
>>118147107
Shit. You're right. I'll put Christmas in the title I guess
>>118147143
Well, apparently it's from around 2011. I was definitely here back then, but I don't remember this shit.
>>118147184
well I guess you missed out then anon
>>118147126
>made by someone from /a/
That's not a bad thing, look at Katawa shoujo.
>>118147341
>KS
>good
>>118147341
>katawa shoujo
>not a bad thing
>>118148444
He didn't say KS was good, you dingdong.
Anyone got the screencaps of the original posts? I looked on the archive but keep finding 404s.
>>118148615
I believe Stalker linked it to mediafire.
Well this is cool and all, but the character designs are boring as hell. But I'm just bias against blonde/pigtails/loli designs. I know this is supposed to be a self insert but does the MC have to be so dull as well? All I ask is to please at least give her a real personality and not a carbon cut out of every tundere ever. Have some reasoning behind her tsun ways and make her a more rounded person with a actual reason fo taking a liking to the MC other that a lame childhood friend scenario.
>>118148817
Confirmed for not being here 3 years ago.
It's basically a tribute to A Christmas Carol. You don't look at the art. It's the story that counts.
That thread was made epic because of the ghosts, especially the Ghost of Christmas Yet-to-Come.
>>118148817
>Taking a joke comic on Christmas so seriously
The whole thing was filled with /a/ jokes anyway. It's literally just something fun for the board to enjoy, not a serious work of art.
>>118146934
>A Tsundere Carol VN
>created by an anon some years ago.
Wait, what? I'm interested. Keep me posted, OP.
>>118150705
I think they meant the story was from a couple of years ago. I never heard anything about a VN being made of it.
>>118146934
She doesn't have the star ahoge. Fix that.
>>118146934
>Christmas carol with a tsundere
>/a/'s creation
I'm sold. Will add this to my list to check up on.
>>118148817
The art seem sub-par, as one should expect from amateur works. But you are a huge faggot to not like twintails and loli design.
Does it has lewd?
for anyone saying dumb stuff about character art/generic story/lack of H-scenes, check the original story on the archives.
>>118151048
I know the original story, I'm wondering if this will add more things or will be as short as the original story.
>>118150773
Waiting on the designs from the sprite artist before I bother to adapt the pixel art.
>>118151075
I literally decided to do this yesterday and I want to get it out on Christmas, so I won't be changing much from the original storyline. There won't be any CGs really, other than what I can do in photoshop adapting backgrounds, effects and sprites etc. I will be adding some small bits in to help connect scenes and pad things out, but it's mostly going to be the original story. It was just a nice idea to do something for /a/ on Christmas within a tight deadline.
>>118151135
You're a cool guy. Ignore the grinches in this thread and do your thing.
>>118151135
That's pretty good, you put this much effor for us, I'm moved. I was just asking.
You made me remember when I was part of the project of LoliConvict.
>>118151135
>I literally decided
>literally
>>118151239
>I'm autistic
If you can't help being an autist that's fine, just stop shitposting.
>>118151224
Whatever happened to that?
>>118151351
It died, we can't have nice things.
>>118150773
Like I said, still waiting to see what the sprite artist comes up with but added a star ahoge
>>118146934
Looking forward to it, good luck OP
But who was PHONE?
>>118152760
2spooky.
>>118146934
I'm confident that this projectwill once again die by the end of the year.
>>118155954
Good thing it's out on Christmas then
Can't wait to see Kubo.
>>118148615
http://www.mediafire.com/download/5r4tqw9avckhjtv/Carol.rar
>>118157118
Best fucking part.
OP, where the fuck is my star-shaped ahoge?
>>118159780
Can I nitpick and ask for a five-edged star?
>>118159847
That might be a bit harder to do with sprite art though.
>>118159890
can confirm. quite difficult
>>118159890
>>118160194
A thousand hours in photoshop
>>118160461
>photoshop
You realize the point of the sprite right?
>>118160461
>Can't into pixel art
Fucking failure
>>118161284
Yes, I do.
But I don't have any sprite program.
>>118161407
Can you?
>>118146934
Hoping you can get it out by Christmas.
Thanks for your work.
>>118161533
>If you can't do it you can't criticize it
You can't fucking do it and yet you complain that it's not difficult with your ebin photoshop skills
>>118161407
>>118161573
>>118161533
Something like this or what?
>>118162872
Upper-right looks great.
>>118162872
All of those don't seem to replace the previous one's impact. Maybe it's the size.
>>118163043
I think it's the color.
But having hair with a different color on the top of one's head sure looks strange.
>>118162953
>>118163043
>>118164279
I was about to say, the colour could be playing a factor.
>>118164463
I think those 3 of the last column are the best.
Good luck choosing only one.
