Zootopia Thread: Keeping Up With The Comf Edition
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found this on /i/
Damn, that place is dead
How do you deal with liking dudes?
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>>2883762
>>2883762
Oh my god, I chuckled.
Uh, OP. There is a new Pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T
Posting here, in case if it'd get missed at the bottom of the prior thread:
>>2883023
>>2883188
Thanks for the feedback; sorry about the delayed response, my roommate was doing the census and needed me to help him with details that regarded me.
I'll be looking at putting it on AO3 eventually. I do have an active account, but the FFN one became active first, so it got dibs at the time.
I'm not sure I'll rewrite much of what's been done, but I may go back sometime and clean up what wasn't working.
Otherwise I'll definitely try to keep your advice in mind for further installments.
>Because I think you've got a crap ton of talent, here's a book I'm reading right now. I think you'll get a lot from it: Self Editing for Fiction Writers
A crap ton?
Aww! You're making me blush.
And I will look into getting a copy of that book.
Thanks again for the crits and advice, I really appreciate it.
>>2883696
Is Zig Zag classic furry?
>>2883800
>>2883800
>>2883800
>>2883800
Everyone make note of this for the next thread
>>2880029
have the timeline of them being gay pic?
>>2883349
Well its pretty irrelevant in my day to day life. Its not like I can imagine myself dating anyone straight or gay in the forseeable future.
Otherwise Ive accepted it just by not making it a big deal. I don't feel the need to broadcast it to the world.
>>2883805
>2015
Wow, his (her?) art hasn't changed a single bit.
Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
This updated today so It's gettin shilled TO-DAY
https://archiveofourown.org/works/6682150/chapters/15662737
>Short Tails by Clunkbot
>Chapter 7: Cops and dreamers
>Summary: A fox and a bunny cross paths in dreams.
As always, good with critiques, criticisms etc
>>2883802
>Aww! You're making me blush.
I'm 100$ serious. I think you've got talent. Things flow for you. I think cutting your teeth on FF is good for you. Like i said, i've got SHIT human skills, so I'm in awe with any scenewriting of any kind. Yours is aces.
>>2883349
you marry one
>writing fic about Judy's awoo only getting her caught and gang raped
>can't decide what to name all the wolves
writers block suuucks.
>>2883833
eric schwartz is a man
>>2883528
>Trying to think of some way to contribute to the whole thread.
bringing topics is always a nice way to contribute, some times i just drop random things
i speculate and see if someone else think it could happen/how would it go
>>2883544
>Oh yeah, I forgot the movie poster
i want to take to print the movie poster
found it at a res of 7200 x5480
also thought the only diffrence for the target one was the box having different cover art
>>2883646
>I mean i Would, but I've literally only been drawing lines and boxes for study.
the artist here will usually give you pointer on how to draw, hope to see some of your drawing soon
i mean just look at pic related, i did that shit and someone liked it, it should feel you with confidence
>>2883754
>I'm doing the writing for you Anons as well
post you stuff man i want to read
>>2883822
>I wish I hadn't brought this up.
i'm sorry for bringing you back bad thoughts, anon. wasnt my intention.
oh man I love this program
>>2883847
>A dog
>In Zootopia
HERESY
HEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEESY
>>2883850
I dunno the man behind the art, I just remember fapping to his stuff fucking years ago. I stayed out of the fandom stuff (is that the right word?) and just looked at the porn.
>>2883588
Hey man, Clunky here. THANK YOU!
Sorry, just saw it by cruisan the old thread
>>2883833
I find consistency to be a good thing in art. Eric Schwartz is the artist, and he's maintained a consistent style for the past 20 years for Sabrina Online. He still hasn't lost his touch when drawing porn, that's for sure.
>>2883822
Man dude, that's rough. You don't have to finish if if your uncomfortable. I hope you work everything out with her. That's not the kinda trust that should be broken by things like that.
>>2883814
Thanks senpai a lam, if anyone has any more fics for me to add let me know.
>>2883871
Also, can I please get your name/artists handle and a source you'd like? I'd really like to give you proper credit
>>2883883
I'm not saying the art is bad, I'm just saying it doesn't seem like there's been much improvement on his style.
I dunno, maybe that's just me.
>>2883839
Hey Clunky, guess what I did.
>>2883847
>those shoe abominations
What the hell am I looking at.
>>2883800
>BB: (makes binary brush look like shit)
I have no clue what this means.
Also, it kinda looks like this is listed under my name http://imgur.com/a/n5YT3
though it's not mine
>>2883803
Aye aye
Judeonanon, the one who's writing a fic, if your here contact me.
>>2883784
>Marion
>>2883848
The first two are Gary and Larry
So the rest are clearly Harry, Barry, Lenny and Jerry
Hey guys, glad to see its super comfy.
Read through the past threads. Thanks for all the well wishes and positive comments.
Also, thanks to everyone who posted the story while I was gone-- would have sucked it people wanted to read it and couldn't find it.
Always looking for comments and criticism: that's how you become a better writer.
How about some comfy tunes?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UhDztJ9UY-c
>>2883917
Foot fetish footwear
The artist is a pawfag.
>>2883922
Yeah, it even says it's Visiti.
>>2883848
You'd so better provide a link to this when it's done!
>>2883839
I also did this
>>2883349
Depends. I like dicks and I would love a cute bf, but I still have standards. I don't like every single guy i see just like I don't like every girl i see. Thinking like that keeps me comfortable with the fact I like dicks.
>>2883883
>Shelia Vixen
>It's a scent fic
These get the dong up but I can't imagine things going so smoothly in everyday life. Shitty high school boys intentionally marking random girls without permission. Other stuff
>>2883788
all OK until that last line, the fuck man?
>>2883822
If you still wanna talk about it, I'm pretty sure we are all ears.
Don't worry about being a downer.
But if you don't wanna talk about it more, thats okay too.
>>2883933
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3MQi0CfC_X8
Surf rock is comfy, right?
Probably not. Oh well, posting it anyways.
>>2883946
What, Reception Inception?
colored
>>2883856
>>I'm doing the writing for you Anons as well
>post you stuff man i want to read
Y'have already: I'm Stu Fox.
And yes, I am going to re-write part of it to make Bogo less of an asshole.
>>2883825
>>2883922
Sorry BB, the old guy had that on there, took it off.
>>2883836
Even after this weekend doesn't know who Zoot is..
Hold on, this garbage seems off. What's going on here.
>>2883966
Holy shit that looks really nice.
You know now that I'm looking at this pic colored, I'm starting to realize that whatever game they're playing is pretty fucked up.
>>2883956
The only comfy surf rock IMO is Pet Sounds
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hShKWIL7VXQ
>>2883960
And hearth and home. Think there was a 3rd one linked but I've got the tabs open on the computer
>>2883982
no problem, and thanks!
>>2883976
Heh, this is pretty good
>>2883976
And while we're at it, have the Weaver pic.
>>2883883
>That time Schwartz and Naylor did a collab
>>2883986
What do you mean, fampai?
>>2883966
fucking nice
>>2884010
Is there more?
>>2884013
That's Zoot, Clunky.
>>2884010
Holy fuck, tell me more
>>2884010
Kek, I'm sure I have stuff from this era on old zip disks somewhere.
>>2884013
Community freaking collaboration, Clunky, that's what it's all about.
Does anyone else have requests?
>>2884030
Does Zoot have a tumblr, or just want me to say: "Art by Zoot"?
>>2883966
Woah bud, that's really good
What's, uh, what's that first symbol supposed to represent in your signature?
>http://akapost.tumblr.com/
Oh
>>2884037
I love you man. Thank you. Just so I'm sure: You're Zoot, right?
>>2883975
>Y'have already: I'm Stu Fox.
yup read your stuff it was good, when do you expect to drop the rewrite, i'm eager already
>>2884033
>Sabrina and Zigzag
UNF
>>2883985
>Not calling everyone anon
I'm not going to rant here, not now
>>2883966
Holy fuck, I thought that was official art.
Want bad fanfics? There's a babyfur fic with Finnick and Gideon and I'm pretty sure Nick's gonna get in on the action later. There's only two chapters right now and no action, but you can feel the autism creeping up.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11936901/1/Mulligan
And then there's this abomination.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11837465/1/Finnick-s-day
>>2884010
>Jay Naylor
Eh, I cant fap to his stuff anymore after learning he's a literal nazi. Even I have my /pol/ limits.
>>2884010
Wow, naylor used to be trash
should i buy the fox dildo on bad dragon
>>2884097
yes
>>2884088
He is?
>>2884072
>Official art
>Finnick holding a beer
>>2884097
Nah. Save your money and invest in more practical things.
>>2884058
I want to get started this week, but I'm having major construction done on my condo, so not sure if I'm going to be able to work around the noise.
Never have water damage in property you own.
>>2884097
>should you
No
>will you
Yes
Post images of you going all the way to the base
>>2884097
When there's a sale, or if you see one for a lower price in the adoptions (no, they're not preused, just premade) since shipping costs are a thing.
>>2883839
>I'm 100$ serious. I think you've got talent. Things flow for you. I think cutting your teeth on FF is good for you. Like i said, i've got SHIT human skills, so I'm in awe with any scenewriting of any kind. Yours is aces.
Well thanks again, Clunk.
I wish there was some advice I could give in return, but as we established, I'm still learning.
I wanted to draw lewd Judeon but sis came to my room... and will sleep here...
>>2884097
Do you want Nick's knot in your ass?
>>2884097
Buy the XL flared horse.
It doubles as a house defense weapon.
>>2884019
Theres no salt.
>>2884072
>that doujin
>>2884063
It's a shame they never fucked in his porn. In fact, I've never seen any decent porn of them going at it.
>>2884108
Yea, there's a pic floating around somewhere of him in his basement, circa 2005-06 and he's wearing kkk gear, has neo-nazi paraphernalia on his walls, whole 9
>>2884120
>but as we established, I'm still learning.
I'm learning too man. I just treat this like a hobby.
WE CAN LEARN TOGETHER
THAT'S THE MAGIC OF LEARNING
>>2884111
artists put a lot of mature crap in their concept art all the time since its not actually part of the final product
>>2884042
I barely started my tumblr. but its rpzoot.tumblr.com
but you can say whatever you want, as long as Zoot is capitalized
>>2884129
Sabrina is a cunt that wont put out for Zigzag
>>2884114
>Never have water damage in property you own.
too late for that, mexico cinderblock houses.. it ain't good
i know the pain
>>2884126
The salt has been replaced by delicious sweets.
Mmm, tieramisu. Delicious.
>>2884121
Thank you anon's sister. Doing god's work.
i fucked up my first reply
>>2884097
>should i buy the fox dildo on bad dragon
do you lan to review it here? then yes.
>>2884126
Compared to the last two nights things are relatively bearable and non cringey.
>>2884121
at least you weren't drawing incest, that couyld have been awkward
>>2884121
Based sister.
>>2884128
Original Western doujins are the best
tho this is the only one I know of lel
>>2884211
>at least you weren't drawing incest, that couyld have been awkward
That's really kind of a shit thing to say right now, anon.
>>2884212
Cant find the one I'm referring to, but here's after a quick google search
>>2884097
Yes
Post a review and you taking Nick's knot when you get it
>>2884030
Who is this anon that knows me?
Do you want me to draw something for you ? I'm bored
>>2884251
Seems legit!
>>2884251
He looks way better than expected for a furry smut artist.
>>2884262
Draw Gazelle, please. Lewd Gazelle if you're up for it.
>>2884097
There comes a point in every Furry's life when they face this choice. Do they buy the one toy that totally, undeniably implies they're pansexual/xenophilic?
The answer is often yes. Yours may be yes.
I recommend buying on the small side for Bad Dragon insertables.
>>2884241
>That's really kind of a shit thing to say right now, anon.
it is, it was funny on my head, i dunno what to tell you
>>2884056
Yes, I am Zoot. How are you?
>>2884262
FACESITTING
>>2884285
Good! I'm just making sure it's you so I can get the credit's correct.
How u doin man.
>>2884285
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bd2qsC-PuJQ
>>2884313
>not this version
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OIM2dV9R7fA
>>2884212
Yeah I heard that more, though I wouldn't be surprised if he was also a bit of a nazi.
>>2884135
No shit?
Like wizards and flow?
Anyway, I guess if there was any advice I would give another writer, it would be to personal feel or emote the mood of the scene or character you're writing.
Pic related; I probably look like this half the time I'm writing.
>>2884262
>>2884302
>Ah theres the salt. Delicious.
Guaranteed replies. Works every time.
>>2884262
the movie had nick take a comparably large bite out of a piece of tiny cake. can you draw nick taking a tiny bite out of a very large cake
>>2884251
He's also a CWC tier edgelord
>>2884309
Doing good, just drawing a very lewd gazelle. Thanks for giving me such cool things to draw.
>>2884390
>it would be to personal feel or
>personal feel
>personal
Hm.
Second piece of advice; reread sentences before hitting 'Post'.
>>2884355
i have no way to correct my failure sempai.
>>2884413
Different anon here
I ain't even mad, that little exchange made me laugh for some reason
>>2884421
But he draws god tier ass
>>2884412
>>2884097
If you're asking, you're either looking for attention or an excuse. These replies are both. Get out that credit card and keep us informed.
>>2884447
Thats his only advantage over CWC
>>2884421
> YER
I can forgive the rest of that /pol/ shit, but transposing "Southron pride tawlk" is inexcusable.
>>2883717
If you honestly can't tell from first glance who I am just on how I get this image alone, then you might need glasses.
Anyway, here's your Bogo.
>>2884478
Sup Batanon. Good to see you're still around.
>>2884478
Bats?
Is that you, Batanon?
>>2884421
What? Fisk?
Oh no, he's a very balanced and real character.
Sure, he was molested by a girl at a young age, fucked his sister, has an open marriage where he gets to fuck other women while his wife stays faithful, and after being a hero in Afghanistan he joins an elite CIA-esque organization.
But he's perfectly well written and believable. Yup.
But seriously, I don't think i would've given his comic the time of day if it wasn't for Something Awful doing a write up on him years ago.
>>2884468
He draws everything better.
Actually makes money.
Probably got laid like once.
>>2884421
I think he's mellowed out over the years. He used to be a huge pile of closeted drama, but now he just draws asses, foreskin, and a lot of cuckholding watersports and keeps his personal shit lower key.
>>2880029
Some Japanfag here?
>>2884521
only sqrl can translate runic
>>2884521
>>2884493
>>2884498
>called out so easily
>pic related.
Zootopia /trash/ - Face sitting
>>2884499
He's like the anti-Rapp.
>>2884499
>fucked his sister
Plot twist: He was GOING to fuck his sister until Naylor's collaborator pulled out of the project and intimated it really weirded them out the siblings would be fucking. So instead it was subducted into dreams and LINGERING infatuation.
But, you know, what else do you expect from a 12-year-old with a solid neoconservative opinion on the Vietnam war circa 1980-something?
>>2884550
I told you I could recognize most of the drawfags in here.
>>2884212
Last I heard, he is, tho I'm not surprised that he's a huge racist.
I remember hearing that he chased away more than half of his fanbase that followed him to Original Life with a year long "storyline" about how kids who don't share muffins with everyone and a bunch of them dressing up as superheroes to try to stop it.
>>2884499
Honestly, sometimes I can't tell who what the shittier storytelling ability: Naylor or Palcomix.
>>2884550
It's cuz of pencil-on-paper, and I think you draw super heavily from reference images (not that that's a bad thing.)
Also the very slight yellow light.
>>2884561
well the first anon is still getting replies so I guess he's winning.
>>2884521
I'm collecting a shitload of art, when I'm done I'll separate then in Korean and Japanese, and hopefully we can find a fan willing to translate in batch. I can ghetto-edit if need be.
>>2884421
This is JayNaylor? For a second I thought this might be from Jack considering the E D G E.
>>2884561
Okay
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4d7Wp9kKjA
>>2883758
Anon, please continue, I'm interested.
I might have had a similar experiance.
>>2884569
Well that was what we were testing wasn't it? Congrats. Your prize is a shitty bogo.
>>2884573
Yeah I haven't seen many other people on pencil, and the few who are use programs to make it look more digital. Honestly I only used a reference image for this one and one of the first other things I draw. Yellow light would probably be my lightbulb.
>>2884571
>Honestly, sometimes I can't tell who what the shittier storytelling ability: Naylor or Palcomix.
I'll say Naylor, because Palcomix at least can fall back on the argument that storytelling isn't that necessary for porn.
>>2884617
Damn, I really should have picked that one.
>>2884589
Nope, though if its any consolation, he and Hopkins used to be good friends and did cross art.
Okay I like some e-gossip and all but this is getting dangerously ED. Time to post some Zootopia.
>>2884631
>>2884628
You're the one who proposed a contest, m8. No need to get testy.
>>2884641
>>2884631
I haven't seen a Naylor comic in forever, but I remember them always being about a human girl fucking an animal dude behind a her human boyfriend's back.
>>2883966
>Disney artbook level of quality
>>2883939
Seconding that vote for a link to this.
requesting Nick licking Finnick's feet
>>2884641
Those scissors seem alarming
>>2884421
First thought was Jack when I saw this
>>2884651
>>2884637
Ya fucked up.
>>2884648
Not being testy. Just saying congrats. Not much else to say.
>>2884673
Nah, he just cut the flowers from the grass behind him.
is donk around? wondering if he's seen the new page
>>2884675
To be fair, Jack has borrowed Frisk for a few comics before.
>>2884653
Why isnt it the other way around?
>>2884592
> i helped your faps
if we are being honest this threads are some time torture make me want to fap but so far i been edging for 2 weeks
this threads can't break me.
>>2884676
>>2884673
Yeah they're really superfluous for the joke.
Schedule change for Hunted. Updating Thursdays now.
[spoiler]<3[/spoiler]
>>2884673
fear from the weaverlope
>>2884676
You know, I kinda like the idea that at some point Judy gets depressed after a bad case and takes up smoking.
But eventually she gets her enthusiasm and idealism back but can't quite kick the habit.
So basically I'm just saying I would like some excuse to have Judy as she is normally except as a smoker.
Has this been colored yet?
I wonder if any Zootopians have ANY pets. Maybe insects or pidgeons?
Might as well ask again. Does someone know of a way to integrate file tags into Windows? Like the Tabbles utility, but, well, integrated.
>>2884702
>>2884702
The posing was what gave it the weird vibe, I think.
>>2884731
They've said that pets don't exist in Zootopiaworld.
Whatever at this point it's in me so I'm gonna finish the story.
I was staying over for Winter Break. We were both drunk and in the hot tub. I started talking about girls, eventually we started talking about sex, discussion got a little explicit, and at some point I realized she was sitting really close to me. She started touching my leg and I didn't complain. We played this weird kind of awkward footsie for a while.
Eventually she started rubbing my thigh and I was rubbing hers, and she'd keep rubbing higher until her fingers were brushing over my dick through my suit. I made some sort of joke about how she should knock it off and she asked if it was a problem and I just said "I dunno". A few minutes later and she's rubbing exclusively over my dick.
I'm 18 at the time btw. Dad's in absentia.
So a few more times I sort of "joke" tell her to stop/ask what she's doing and every time she asks sort of playfully if I really want her to stop and every time I can't really say yes. I'm horny and drunk and not thinking straight. You're not even supposed to be in a jacuzzi when you're drunk, it dehydrates you really fast and you get drunk faster and I think you can pass out/die. This was a bad idea all the way through.
So at some point I kind of shift in my seat and I guess she took that as her opportunity to finally go under my suit. Her fingers slip down and for a while she just rubs her palm against me but then she grips it and suddenly I'm getting a handjob.
This came out being way more blow-by-blow than I intended and kind of feels like I'm writing a smut fic and that wasn't really my intention at all. But I dunno. This is how it happened.
Anyway I don't finish but she does it for a while and now she's really close to me, like pressed against me. She says I should go inside with her and I do. I follow her back to the bedroom and we're both wearing towels but dripping all over the floor.
tbc
>>2884731
judy's got nick. that counts for something
>>2884755
Not even pet rocks?
>>2884725
I actually was thinking of an idea where Nick sort of takes over as the super serious cop and gets really into it after a few years, enough where it would affect his personality. Judy would still be Judy, but maybe more subdued and worried for Nick.
I'm debating if that's enough of a premise to give writefagging for Zootopia a shot.
>>2884725
Cigarette smoke has several components in its smoke, the result of which acts like an MAOI. If she has any difficulty with anxiety, well ...
She could get hooked after a casual stop at the cigar bar, or just walking through the Bull Pen. You know, the one where half the officers smoke despite the 'No Smoking" signs all over.
>>2884742
>>2884725
I don't smoke but for some reason I like the idea of smoking. I'll admit it makes a character look cooler and more in command.
>>2884777
Checked
And go for it, I'd read it
>>2884771
I could see why they don't. IF all sorts of species are sentient, wouldn't it be weird to subjugate another species because it looks or speaks differently from you? Hell, even if it's only a little sapient, what's the difference between it and your Gorilla neighbour down the street?
They may avoid pets because it reminds them of dark moments in their history, including prisoners held to "court jesting" for fun.
>>2884770
On a leash, even.
>>2884777
How about Nick is basically Max Payne because Judy died in an accident or something?
>>2884777
It's a good framework to hang a story from.
>>2884767
whuuuh where's the first part of this story?
>>2884770
Anyone got a compilation of those greentexts where Nick is collared and muzzled and Judy treats him like a pet?
archiveanon here. I'm burned out. I don't think I can keep up capping or whatever, and I don't think anyone cares anyway. I'm reposting text that takes image space. I'm gonna let go and try to enjoy threads again rather than stressing myself with them.
I really like you guys and am glad there's so many creative people around coming up with new ideas n shit. Goodnight.
>>2884777
Might need to flesh it out a bit before you start writing, but its a start
>>2884804
Same here. Not that everyone needs to smoke. Actually I could see Nick as being a nonsmoker and teetotaler. Either because hes a recovering alcoholic or hes just seen enough lives ruined by alcohol and shit during his time as a conman that he doesn't want to risk it.
>>2884807
I'll try to come up with some kind of good story ideas for it. I used to like writing longform stuff, so it'd probably be a decently sized story. You may hear from me in the future.
>>2884804
>>2884819
training took time, tho.
>>2884831
first part is included in the post i made
>>2884767
I don't know why I followed her, I guess I was horny and not in my right mind. So now we're fooling around on her bed. Her top comes off. My suit comes off. She continues what she was doing and things get way intense. I touch her too. It's feeling really weird but I'm too drunk or stupid to stop so whatever.
I'm sitting there trying to not think about how this is my own mom and I'm actually getting close to finishing. I tell her to stop and she does, looks at me really weirdly. I say I'm close, I guess she thought I meant stop all together because the weird expression goes away and she's touching me again, and she's sitting so close her body's rubbing against mine. She leans in and tells me she's going to swallow me. I almost lose my boner but don't.
tbc
>>2884779
That could actually be kinda funny. She could try to hide it from Nick but eventually he can just smell it on her and shes like "I didn't mean for this to happen, it just did"
>>2884840
>>2884832
archiveanon had a few of those. can't provide myself
but have a pic i like
........
>>2884845
ugh, I'm just not into femdom.
:/
>>2884868
You spamming images we've all seen already is not doing anything positive for the thread.
>>2884801
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoDh_gHDvkk
The superior choice.
>>2884853
shit dude, that's intense. I had my babysitter bathe me rather intently when I was seven.
It has altered my life somewhat
>>2884907
how about
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LGd--QsJrxQ
>>2884893
For (You)
>>2884889
that's alright, it isn't for everyone.
>>2884700
I am going to break you, come on, what is the picture that can push you over the edge?
>>2884824
Someone is already doing a fic on FFN where Nick becomes basically the punisher.
Im sure itll be terrible.
I don't mind fics where either Nick or Judy die, but theres gotta be a happy ending for the other one or else its just too much for me.
Like The Unimaginable. Nick kills Judy under the effects of nighthowlers, but they get Bellwether and although Nick is super depressed, eventually Bonnie shows up and helps convince him hes not to blame.
I hope that fic updates. Its not at a bad place to end, but I'd like to see more. Maybe Nick visitng Judy's grave.
>>2884911
I'm sorry to hear that. I hope not too much trauma.
>>2884879
How about Nick is slowly becoming affected by the fucked up shit he see's on the force and is forced to either see a shrink or take a vacation? Maybe he could go to bunnyburrow with Judy or maybe go and visit his mother.
>>2884893
You got something better to post, then post it. It's not like I'm stopping you.
>>2884879
Nah, I'm all for NickxJudy stuff. As long as its not too sappy.
And with the sound of how your story might go, it could be good for Judy to serve as an anchor to Nick.
>It's a "Nick is forced to play witness to Judy's slow decline into drug addiction after a night of experimentation as his attempts to save her fail" episode
>>2884942
By spamming the thread you're pushing faster towards the image cap and interrupting other posters.
>>2884918
Someone should teach Judy about biology
>>2884767
Using an image from a traumatizing incest comic for a traumatizing incest story is very appropriate
Also godspeed to you man. Hope you're dealing with this decently enough.
I'm seriously digging the femdom vibe of the pron. Despite it being furry degeneracy
>Tfw still bi / predominatly gay
>Tfw still want bf
>Tfw okay with being dominated by girl
>>2884915
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GKzsktuqwyU
>>2884955
>It's a Nick enters an eating contest and wins from all the other contestants having massive heartattacks on the spot and goes through a mortality crisis episode
>>2884955
>It's a Nick has to spend an entire week in the hospital watching his father slowly degrade and die in front of his eyes episode
>>2884972
Did this update since Nick walked out on his mom?
>>2885000
Nope. Haven't seen Visiti around in a week either.
>>2884992
The part where that nurse drugged and took advantage of him when he was broken and hysterical in the bar was a bit tasteless imo
>>2884958
A single person posting pics can interrupt conversations? Next thing I know, you gonna accuse me of sagebombing or something. And hitting the image cap is a moot point. It'll be reached regardless.
>It's a "Nick and Judy share their first kiss and since foxes mate for life it's actually Nick's first ever kiss and he accidentally bites her tongue off" episode
>>2884922
>I am going to break you
well there is an offer and also funny cause i'm also this faggot
>>2884918
>>2884845
you have seen two of my fethises clearly
you can try but i been reading smut and watching pic for 2 weeks, i doubt you are able too, i'm literally edging myself so throw the best you got
>>2884935
I was thinking more along the lines of "Oh shit, Judy could die while in the line of duty, I better be the very best so I can protect her." Maybe frame it with a shootout gone wrong and one of the officers getting killed off.
That might be too edgy though.
>>2884950
It wouldn't be fluff. I don't want it to be one of those stories with two unrequited loves. That's if I go down the shipping route, which honestly might be a good route to take for this. Just not as a main plot element.
My only hang up about this is I've never done a crime thriller before, so I don't know how good I'd do that that. I guess we'll have to see.
>>2884978
femdom is pretty sweet in my opinion and pred/prey is a sexy power dynamic...
Story idea. Nick finds out his dad is alive/in town.
His dad was a mafia hitman for Mr big which is why Mr big didn't kill Nick a long time ago.
>>2884935
Shrink idea has already been done
>>2884853
So at this point she goes down on me. I last maybe ten seconds more if that. She spits into her towel and smiles at me like I'm her lover and suddenly I'm sick to my stomach. I get up and go back to my bathroom without saying anything else. I get dressed and sneak out. I go for my car but I'm still drunk and I don't want to drive, so I just go to this nearby warehouse shack I used to smoke in and basically passed out there.
I woke up there many hours later mostly sober. The fact I'm in the shed confirms my reality. My phone ringer was off and my mom called like 30 times. I listen to some of the messages. First they're sort of innocent, not addressing what happened. Then it's apologetic and worried, trying to explain or say sorry for what happened. Then they're genuinely fearful and worried, because she doesn't know where I am and she's worried I hurt myself or god knows what.
tbc
>>2884972
Actually it was seeing your comic of Mrs. Wilde sitting and weeping in the darkness, abandoned by her son after she attempted reconciliation, which caused me to reach out to her again. So go figure.
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