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post the rest guys. I don't have it
>>47540898
You can download it from the pastebin and then post it.
Alternatively it's been posted right here in the previous thread: >>47539517
Going to Re-post the poll from the last thread about what to do next. Still here if anyone has anything to ask.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10357044
Asked in the previous thread, but figured I need some more ideas. For my seven sins/virtues cyoa, I need some power ideas for both humility and charity and part two will commence.
In addition, the HUD cyoa is still going on, it's just delayed a bit to make room for others (such as the color and four horsemen cyoa.)
Any ideas? all except for lewd ideas will be considered.
>>47540898
Prince
High energy room
Terresa
Pancakes
Crystal Ring
Shield Shards
Replenishing Bracer
Goldberg automaton (For being a crystal knight)
Princess Vivian
Zoey
Reginald
Combat, Defense, Healing Magic, Force Magic, Dark Magic
Crystal Knight
Defeat The overlord
Help test new magic
Join the fight
First. i'm gonna train my ass off until so overpowered
Second. Testing the new magic, making me more stronger than before
Third. I'm gonna remove my crystal related items (because it's useless to fight overlord) and just use my force magic to cut off overlord's head (or make a tiny needle and just stab it in the eyes) and fight them. Yeah i fight dirty. But that's the only way
Fourth. Using the money from reginald and steel from avian, i will use it to reinforce my troops and told reginald to invest in war related business. And then Join the fight.
Fith. Go on an adventure and seek legendary items and immortality.
What cyoas that are in development to be hyped for? What are you working on Anon?
>>47540920
For the final "big drive set", is there any particular kind of Traveller that hasn't been done yet?
>>47540943
Maybe transport to fantasy world or reincarnated to a fantasy world ones. I always hype for that. Especially if the players are overpowered beings
>>47540943
As I mentioned in >>47540921 , several.
>>47540943
I'm currently working on a Persona CYOA with a Point-Buy system and customization.
From the looks of it right now, it's gonna be pretty big.
>>47540944
Well what I want to do is a big brain storm thing to figure that out, have people throw out ideas. There are things that haven't been done, I just need them pointed out.
>>47540943
As always, I'm hype for your CYOA <3
Won't you pretty please tell what it's about?
>>47541136
>>47541154
I have a page labeled new page 3 for this, but it says the file size is too big, so I dunno.
>>47541162
>>47541179
Alright, quickly compressed it real quick. Hopefully it doesn't look too bad.
>>47541202
And that's all.
>>47540943
I'm sure this cyoa will be finished one day.Just let me pretend, anon!
>>47541136
I can't wait for the update.
shit, posted this in the wrong thread
>>47541456
>>47541456
>Shield Volcano
>Runny
>Plain
Boring, but comfy.
>>47541499
>>47541467
Aw shit, there was a part 2.
>Control, Avatar
>Camera Shy
I can be comfy in Avatar form, and I won't explode as much, unless some asshole shoots a picture.
>>47541456
>>47541467
>can't be the little girl volcano.
Shit/10
I need lots of intelligence and learning skills by tomorrow. Help me out here, cyoag.
>>47541598
I made this just for you
Exam CYOA:
Pick one
>stay up all night shitposting or playing video games
>down some melatonin, read a book for one to two hours before going to bed, and try your hardest to sleep
>>47540943
I'll post a pic of my wip if you post one first.
>>47541598
I present to you the forbidden tool of knowledge that can increase your intelligence and improve your learning skills.
Use it wisely, mortal.
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Conduit
>>47541646
>>47541657
Thanks. I should have never picked Gender Studies this semester. It's pretty wrecking.
>>47541678
>>47541689
>>47541456
>>47541467
>Shield Volcano
>Bubbly
>City (Paris)
>Avatar
>Sexy
>tfw nobody knows you're a volcano
>>47541688
What's worse is that it's not actual knowledge, it's just indoctrination and misinformation, it's actually worth less than nothing.
>>47541809
Like this post?
>>47541809
Regardless whether or not it's misinformation or not, it doesn't provide skills for jobs, which is far more important.
>>47541249
Wait, there's gonna be an update?
>>47541828
But it does
It gets you a job in teaching gender studies.
>>47541824
Butthurt detected
>>47541828
Eh, less that, more a complete overflow of the market that gender studies and liberal arts as a whole takes from, along with the low quality graduates kind of burning out the area. The whole situation is a long convoluted mess that takes a while to understand.
>>47541828
I wouldn't even say that it doesn't provide skills, it just sure as hell doesn't provide enough to justify 4 years of college
>>47541927
and a lot of this too
>>47540898
>read this for the first time today
>girls can't love girls
What is this horseshit? Its not like I am the next in line for the throne and need kids to keep the line going.
>>47541890
>crack a joke
>lol omg ur so butthurt!
I'll put up a trigger warning next time.
I made a new thing.
>>47540943
>>47541646
Anon, please, don't be like that! I really want to see what you're making. It only seems fair when you're asking others to post.
>>47542307
page 2
>>47542307
And page 3
>>47542268
homephilia is a sin
>>47542365
>can't sin in CYOAs
Better just shut down the general.
>>47542268
Keep reading, it's pretty obvious there are lesbians.
>>47542365
It's spelled hemophilia you silly.
>>47542393
Neck yourself.
>>47542307
Faction: Shadowy Order
Weapon: Crowley's Shroud
Skills: Arithmancy, Transmutation
Mission: Assassinate the Demon King, Maintaining Power
Extra Ability: Empowerment
I take over the Order after completing my mission, open a portal to a small isolated part of hell to keep our magic and I craft a magic state.
This cyoa needs companions.
>>47542407
>Keep reading, it's pretty obvious there are lesbians.
I must have missed it. I kind of read the forbidden love part and after that just skimmed the girls. I did not touch the retainers. Still having to only entertain the guys section when there are a lot of top tier girls to choose from kinda ruins the CYOA for me.
>>47542421
>This cyoa needs companions.
I know but I'm not very good at writing character bios.
>>47540854
Anyone got the latest version of stardust?
>>47540898
Updated Witchy Princess build.
>Princess
Obvious choice.
>Study Room
Good for studying magic.
>Diana
Teach me to be inspiring and work on looks.
>Vinian Toast
Yummy!
>Spirit Dye
Great for witches.
>Midnight Sarcophagus
Good for witches.
>Alchemy Starter Kit
Good for witches.
>Stone King Dessian
Can teach me ancient secrets that might be helpful for magic and stuff and is good husband for me.
>Pouf
Seems nice and can teach me about alchemy.
>Suice
Fellow witch and forbidden love interest.
>Dark Magic
Good for witches.
>Charisma
Not exactly my thing, but as Princess might be good to be able to give good speeches when I must.
>Fashion
Do magic and look spectacular while doing it!
>Regal Hobbies
So I can be a better Princess.
>Reaper Witch
What I've been preparing for all this time!
>Help Test New Magic
Want to learn all the newest spells.
>Destroy a Dark Spirit
That's like literally my job!
>>47542268
Author said some Reaper Witches are les cuz they live isolated in the woods with just each other. So I have Suice as love interest and a husband (since I have to) who I can work with.
>>47542456
Different anon here, companions and a little more worldbuilidng would take this CYOA to the next level
>>47542307
>>47542324
>>47542342
>The Tainted
>Arcanist Bow
>Demonic Healing
>Dark Sustenance
>Malignant Caster: assuagism
>Inhuman Speed
>Royal Guard
>Return to Light
I had to fall into the depths of the abyss to find my way back into the light.
I assume my purification will take place during an attack on the King, which means my "betrayal" might be enough to turn the tables on him.
>>47542342
>>47542324
>>47542307
I am First Paladin of the Order, wielding my sword and magic to slay the demons and protect our people.
Order
Attaxia the Rune Blade
Assuagism
Escort Mission
Maintaining Power
Empowerment
>>47542307
Order
Graymere Codex
Arithmancy
Transmutation
Maintaining power
Empowerment
>>47542461
INobody?
>>47542983
I think this is the most recent, but I might be wrong.
>>47542461
Well I have this...
>>47543092
My favorite CYOA
>>47543032
Thanks
Best Virtue?
>>47541136
>CYOA is titled in big gold allcaps letters across the top
> DREAM PRINCE
>saved as "dreamrealm#.jpg"
I don't fucking understand you people sometimes.
>>47540943
>What cyoas are you hyped for?
That one cyoa Italics is making set in the Dusk City world.
>>47543235
>>47543251
So what if it's at the top of every page? He can't save it as dream prince, that's gay.
>>47543252
So long as I can become a cute cat girl sold off to a lovely boy to be his qt3.14 loving housewife, I'll be more than happy.
Even if he turns out to be a Cthulu in disguise.
>>47542307
>Order
>Graymere Codex
>Arithmancy
>Transmutation
>Stop the Juggernaut Squad
>Empowerment
WIZAAAARD!
Juggernauts should be easy - get rid of any nearby wizards, "juggernaut.gravity *= -1", get them to stop for any amount of time (or jump, or change direction, or just pull funky physics shit), then go home and have fun.
>>47542456
What >>47542592 said. As far as bios go, I think Chrysanthemum and Azalea lack information on their likes and dislikes.
>>47542444
Oh, you can try to court the girls. It's just that your sister won't introduce you. It might not be easy, but you can definitely do it.
>>47542490
No he didn't. He said it would be easier to get away with it as one, not that some of them are.
>>47540921
>you are guaranteed to kill yourself
Which cyoa did this guy use?
>>47543842
Well nothing to get away with if none of them are les.
>>47544070
He never said any of them were attempting to 'get away with it', just that if you wanted to it'd be easier as one.
>>47544102
It takes two to tango anon.
>>47544625
You're a special kind of stupid aren't you?
>>47542307
>Order
>Shroud
>Arithmancy
>Empowerment
Temperature is just a number after all
>>47540898
Did he ever say anything about what the king was like?
>>47542307
>Tainted
>Earthshatter
>Infernal Juggernaut
>Demonic Healing
>Inhuman Speed
>Sabotage
>Deeper into Darkness: Juggernaut
I am a colossus.
>>47544640
He said Suice was the only character who might be les cuz witches live out alone with only other witches so some might be les.
>>47542342
Wouldn't Sabotage not work with Juggernaut? I mean you're not really infiltrating in that case, you're just attacking it.
Honestly neither of the Tainted Missions seem like they fit for someone that chose Juggernaut option.
>>47542307
>Resistance
>TH-50 Specter Plasmabolt Sniper Rifle
>Sniper, Anti-Magic Combat
>Assassinate the Demon King
>Ultimate Human
Who needs magic when you are the apex predator? I'll disrupt the demons' magical processes and take out the King before they know I'm there.
>>47542268
just found CYOAs, which are the ones a beginner really needs to see?
>>47545557
Stardust
>>47545564
I've looked through the pdf here >>47543032
Any more?
>>47542342
>>47542324
>>47542307
Origin: Tainted
Weapon: Occult armcannon
Traits: Inhuman speed
Dark sustenance
Domination
Malignant caster (Arithamancy)
Mission: Royal guard
Reward: Return to light
while it weighed heavily to gain more power. it meant nothing if i was bound to only serve people i didnt want to serve.
>>47544750
There's not a section about the king, but the entry on Power Seekers explains him a tad bit. Or did you mean of Verend? That king is more mysterious.
>>47542268
What you do in public & what you do in private are two separate things. And even then, if you're willing to put up with what ensues, you have what relationships you want in public.
>>47542444
Yeah, what >>47543778 said. It's possible, but your sister isn't going to try to hook you up unless you ask.
>>47544102
I was trying to be as implicit as possible so that your imagination can fill in the blanks there. But as far as "easy to get away with," no one is going to question the private lives of people that can kill souls. That's like asking for trouble.
>>47545631
Chemist
>>47545557
Depends on what you prefer. You have varied lengths, varied genres.
My favorite CYOAs are rather large and often power fantasies, which take some time reading and making builds for.
>>47545631
Rollin'
>>47545649
So I just got a 9 but nothing seems to have changed yet. Does this CYOA take a while to have an effect?
>>47545557
Whichever ones make you think, I'd say. For instance, I prefer this one.
>>47545557
Any of them that have content that appeals to you? Not all CYOAs are the same after all.
But I guess as for the popular ones, people will mention Conduit, Traveller's Tale, Magical Realm, Quiet, Space Refugee, maybe Power Armor and Monster Hunter, it all depends on what you like. So just look and see what there is.
>>47545641
>What you do in public & what you do in private are two separate things. And even then, if you're willing to put up with what ensues, you have what relationships you want in public.
Eh it just seemed like something that was unnecessary. I know there are always ways to go around it but it was just something you could have left out and left all the guys and girls open up to you. But its your CYOA and you are in charge so no big deal. I can work around it as you said anyway.
>>47545661
I like the options and setting in stardust and the op pdf. But the first one I saw was about being stuck in a basement and I really like those too. I have a short attention span so unless a long one is really good I will get bored reading it.
>>47545666
Congrats Satan.
>>47545557
This one is and always will be my favorite
https://63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html
There is an image version as well but that is easier to use.
>>47545689
Welcome to royalty. Your life isn't just your own.
>>47545666
>satan is a cheater
who'da thunk
>>47545669
Ok, 27 pages is a bit m-
>>47545679
Oh.
How do people find the time to write so much? I've only glimpsed at each but these must have taken months of hard labor.
>>47545709
The fuck kind of URL is that?
>>47545667
How much do you know about chemistry?
>>47545731
A google drive one apparently.
>>47545731
The kind you chose.
>>47545737
It was my first choice of major actually, though I switched because of shitty grades.
>>47545728
Highlander is the equivalent of a fourth century Irish monk. He's just alone getting wiped somewhere and writing. It also has an image version. The best part?We're not done yet.
>>47545755
No, how much do you know right now.
>>47545693
You're not really laying a preference, but that's fine. I suggest you begin by looking at the most popular CYOAs. (In no particular order)
>Stardust
>Towergirls
>Domain Master
>Monster Hunter
>Overlord
>Power Armour
>Space Refugee
I envy you, anon.
>>47545728
>>47545679
I wouldn't recommend Travelers Tale, Magical Realm or Conduit as a beginner CYOA.
>>47545728
(27 Pages)
Oh wow. I didn't even realize it was this long. That does sound pretty long. I guess if you get into it then it won't seem like much.
But yeah, Traveller's Tale is crazy long. But it does get brought up often so many people like it.
>>47545781
A bit I guess? No more than I knew yesterday, which was slightly less than someone who did chemistry for a year at college should know.
>>47545631
Onion Knight.
>>47545728
Traveller's Tale still isn't done, and there's an image version that'll have to be updated at some point as well.
You have to be very motivated, but it's easier if you enjoy the content you're making. That's how it is with anything you create. Shorter CYOAs still get made, of course.
>>47545813
Yesss... Finally something nice happens to me.
>>47545728
Sometimes the spirit of Writefaggotry possesses you to create art.
>>47545679
Don't forget the image version, senpai.
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
What is objectively the best Waifu/Become a girl CYOA
>>47545820
>item page stuck on with the powers
Didn't the creator say he wasn't happy with the items part? He thought it wasn't up to the standard of the previous part and suggested he wasn't going to update it.
>>47545844
>Waifu
Subjective
>Become a girl CYOA
Slut Life
>>47545852
please post this 'Subjective' cyoa of which you speak so i can see the waifus
>>47545852
>>Become a girl CYOA
>Slut Life
That's more about becoming a sex object than a girl.
>>47545867
Same thing.
>>47545803
>many people like it.
What's your definition of "many"?
I'd say it's more like a very small group who love talking about it.
>>47545844
It's obviously >>47545631, dummy!also rolling.
>>47545864
Not that guy but I like this one
>>47545864
Best Waifus are Star Dust Waifus in my opinion.
>>47545848
Nah, I am gonna update it, if I feel something could be better why wouldn't I update it?
>>47545880
>0
I guess that makes up for forgetting to say Chemist.
>>47545884
Here's the box
>>47545867
First >>47545873
And second you can do either. You want options and that has options.
>>47545888
Oh, I meant regarding Artifex
>>47545901
Huh.
>>47545887
I like Space Refugee more because alien pussy, but Stardusts are pretty decent for humans.
>>47545906
It only has mechanical options, and it isn't really geared for that sort of thing. It is principally a fetish CYOA.
>>47545923
My bad man, it was just awful coincidental.
>>47545876
That may be more accurate. What do I know. As far as I can tell it gets talked about a lot and I don't think I've heard much criticism of it.
>>47545876
Eh, considering the amount of people who have voted in previous polls about what to do next (the current one is already up to over 22), it wouldn't surprise me if there were a decent amount of people who like it. Sure they could just be people voting to vote, but I think there's a not-negligible group who does like it. And it's being updated, so why not.
>>47545631
I want Geo-mancer to be my incestuous tsundere identical twin lover.
>>47545952
it's shit! i don't like it!
>>47545940
>It only has mechanical options
Well what do you want exactly?
>>47545975
>>47545975
HEH
>>47545987
There's mechanics and there's fluff. While no CYOA is exclusively one but not the other, some do focus strongly.
Who's your favorite?Update when?
>>47545971
In fairness given the formats I've received builds in, and from the wide variety of places I've received builds from, Traveller might have a bit of cult appeal, not large widespread appeal like spess refuge but it's actually a surprisingly large number.
>>47545979
Oh, well, there we go. Now it's just another CYOA. Not to be callous, but why does it get brought up so often? It seems to get more "screentime" than others. Is it because its still being worked on?
>>47546064
Cyoa authors have a history of promising the sky and then disappearing (cough cough somebody beginning with S). Highlander has slowly, consistently worked on improving his CYOA and taking suggestions from us.
>>47546089
Scientist? Or Star Dust anon? I'm still waiting on things from both of them.
>>47545641
Hey, Royal Revival creator?
First of all, good job.
Second, can you give me your appraisal of this build; >>47540815 ? I feel like I didn't get the points system completely.
>>47546122
What are they working on right now?
>>47545631
Priest
>>47546064
Aye m8. Still working on the CYOA and the image version, which in fairness should be done by this September if my schedule stops spanking me for a few weeks. Also want to compile some of the writefaggotry sent into me because the surprising amount of stuff I got deserves its own PDF. Maybe focus on setting up something like the magical realm setup website before I start working on the Traveller games.
>>47546129
>good job
Thanks!
>appraisal
Well, I feel sorry for poor Victor. Your occupation is fine with your skills, but you might have wanted to have some sort of "things went wrong" skill like stealth for when things go wrong. I suppose the music box from the storeroom can help with that. Though, if you wanted "mostly useless and dependent princess," you might have been better off with the Live occupation. Such synchs well with the goal of giving morale. I've described it before, but morale is more valuable than it sounds. All-in-all, it's a good build. I don't think you messed up with any points.
>>47545797
Wow! I want those lenses. Not sure about the shade of blue for hair though. I'd go with powder blue.
>>47545971
>Angel -10pts
>Grace (Free)
>Magic Affinityx4 -6pts (1 Free and discounts cuz Angel)
>Flight (Free once I get wings)
>Lifespanx2 -2pts (1 Free and discount cuz Angel)
>Exceptional Appearance -2pts
>Vitality -2pts
>Regeneration -2pts
>Low Magic Fantasy Setting
My plan is to explore and learn about the world while growing my magic powers. I can eventually get wings and heal and protect people and smite too. I think since low magic setting I can become most powerful sorceress around and get followers and try to ascend to Goddesshood of beauty and light.
>>47546053
I like Traveler, but it's a bit long.
>>47545797
>tfw your CYOA will never be "one of the essentials."
>>47546241
I think Traveller will be a lot more digestible when it's in image form
Does anyone of the one cyoa were you choose to be the bodyguard, general, or spymaster of a kingdom and a noble?
>>47545631
Knight
>>47546208
>traveler games
>>47546267
everyone has their own set. like, I wouldn't put towergirls, monster hunter or space refugee in there. and the lack of battlemage or magical realm baffles me. my favorite is dark god but I know that's not a common favorite.
>>47546267
Which one is that?
>>47546208
Sounds neat. Do you get a lot of writing from others? More importantly, what is it about? I looked into it a while ago and couldn't figure out what the lore behind it was or what my goal was. Is it supposed to be open ended?Again, not to be rude. I do like the more in depth CYOAs. This one might just have a bit too much depth for me.
>>47546319
>>47546321
Lots. My MO of just producing a bunch of stuff leaves the CYOAs doomed to be forgotten.
>>47546274
Yeah, sure. It's a pretty above-average CYOA.
>>47546366
ah, the spadesy method, where you make a tonne and deliberately obscure who made them then expect recognition
>>47546271
Well that's the plan, at the moment the Image version is lacking lore, has all sorts of errors and is missing the mystery box, hopefully this will be the last major update needed and we can have a 'finished' Traveller soon.
>>47546310
Text based adventure games friend. First one is going to be a test game, working out systems, schemes, writers and programming, a more simple game mixing tradition /cyoa/ stuff with concepts found here. The next one- will be based after the cyoa in full. And that's gonna be fun.
>>47546358
I've got about two fifty pages at the moment of builds and write faggotry sent into me that I've been putting into the 'player builds' if you could call them that, and aye, I suppose it is sort of open ended, at least for a time.
>>47541231
stop getting my hopes up you ass.
>>47546267
Why not? If you keep at it...
>>47546380
No, I put a tiny signature in the corner of them all the time & have them all collectively grouped in a google drive.
>>47546241
You know as an Angel it says you don't need Exceptional Appearance because you basically count as having it for free.
>>47546378
>>47546401
>>47546428
Thanks friend
>>47541467
>>47541456
>Stratovolcano
>Bubbly Lava
>Mountains
>Perks: Worshipped, Control, Sexy
>Drawbacks: People Pleaser, bitches keep fucking with my snow.
gonna hang out with my volcanobros Lassen and Shasta.
>>47546433
I'd rank a lot of yours pretty high myself, but I think making top x lists is a bit futile. For me a least a lot of things crowd for the same spots.
>>47545716
I never asked for this.
>>47546380
>expect recognition
Sort of, he wanted replies but he didn't namefag. Spadesy was the name in the waifu CYOA so it stuck. It's not hard to see which are his because he loved putting gradients on all his backgrounds.
>>47542307
>order
>graymere codex
>arithmacy and elementalism
>maintaining power
>empowerment
>become god
>>47546433
Well, Beri, you're a fine creator but I feel that you have never made anything in a serious nature. Generally you make silly/cartoony projects, which are fun, but just don't stick.
>>47546433
Unfortunately people who prefer CYOAs about giant slimegirl battle maids don't have a strong voice around here. I appreciate your style though.
>>47542307
>Faction: Magical Order
>Weapon: Graymere Codex
>Schools: Elementalism, Illusion
>Mission: Escort Refugees
>Special: Empowerment
>>47546520
I disagree, CYOA don't need to be serious dark and brooding to have staying power.
>>47546627
Are there any light hearted ones which are 'essentials'?
>>47545631
Time Mage. Worst case scenario I have to fight a pantsless Time Wizard, and that sounds like a suitably amusing way to die.
>>47546241
>Not sure about the shade of blue for hair though.
She's cosplaying a specific character.
>>47546639
See >>47546496
I don't believe in such lists.
>>47546496
thanks!
>>47546520
Yeah, that's exactly what I meant in >>47546267 . My personality just isn't suited for the kinds of things that stay popular. >>47540898 is about as serious as I can get.
>>47546548
I have never once made a CYOA featuring all those things together. Maybe I should. Thanks, though.
>>47546047
Super soldier anon has the best tits, but otherwise Beri is the best.
>>47546720
>Super soldier anon
>not the Scientist
To each their own, I guess.
>>47545631
samurai
>>47543490
Where's the last part? You know, with the planets and stuff?
>>47546780
Bigger is better anon.
At least in my humble opinion.
>>47546761
I have never heard of most of these new authors. How come SDA and bliss appear on both, too?
>>47546047
Apart from Beri is everyone on here ded?
>>47546047
Spessrefuge is probably only my second favorite but Spessrefuge Guy is by far the sexiest one here. It's still a very good CYOA too so it's not like I'm *only* picking her for her body.
requesting the blood cyoa.
>>47546983
Well I fucked up the dice. Let's go with the post number and excuse me while I go spend time with my lovely waifu.
>>47547016
It was posted in the last treat
>>47546928
You either leave halfway through a Cyoa or live long enough to become a bitter shit poster
>>47546433
Revival is one of my favorites, for whatever that's worth. I really liked all the worldbuilding in there. Headpats all day for that one, senpai.
>>47547059
Thanks!
>>47546686
Well I really like yours. They may not generate a ton of discussion, but the writing style always puts a smile on both mine and my girlfriend's face. She's not normally big on CYOAs more than a page, but she really likes the way you present each choice as a little narrative.
>>47547107
Also thanks!
>>47546520
That's why I like beri's cyoas though
That and the fact that he's so prolific, it gives me a chance to forget the cruel and harsh reality and read/pick an animu waifu once every few weeks.
>>47546241
Which card was this? I loved it but the name escapes me for some reason.
>>47546898
Popular and active.
>>47546863
I'm willing to bet the scientist is taller than SSAnon.
>>47547233
More like gay and dumb
>>47547256
>>47546448
Yeah, but I want to be exceptional even by Angel standards.
>>47546649
Oh ic.
>>47547172
Emancipation Angel.
Who's going to the ball?
>>47547242
If I have to choose between slightly taller or biggest boobs, I'm gonna choose boobs every time.
>>47547339
It's Jinx from League of Legends. Somewhat like Harley Quinn without the joker.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0nlJuwO0GDs
>>47546241
Your point totals are all wrong fucktard. You could at least check your build before posting your cringe worthy sueshit
>>47547347
If you have to ask you can't come.
>>47547347
Sienna
Badass warrior woman who doesn't even really want to be there means she'll be hella cute in a dress. Plus her arm's cool and I'm totally down if she wants revenge on the Prince directly or just wants to be there to taunt him. Sounds like it'll be a fun party either way.
>katana
Ah fuck. Maybe she's not weebshit.
>>47547578
She doesn't care about you and is going to get you into trouble once people know your partner murdered the prince.
>>47547588
I knew you were trouble when you walked in...
>>47547347
Annabelle, no decision.
>>47547588
>She doesn't care about you
None of them care about you personally. The central point of the CYOA is that there isn't already someone you have a deep emotional connection with. And woah hey, now that I'm mixed up in her crazy revenge scheme suddenly we're both invested in each other. Sounds like a fun plot hook to me.
>>47547473
If she's much taller than SSA, her boobs will be absolutely bigger.
>>47547649
Exactly, that's why they're awful. But she's the most awful.
>>47541136
>Asian/Pirate
>Ancient Ruins, Lscivious Enhancement. Magical land enhancement
>Martial (Scimitar)
>Mystical
>Navigator
>Sailor
>Lover
>Merchant-trader
>Bard (singing)
>Easily distracted
>Baleful Beacon, Valyrie Venture
>Amazing armament and flight are part of the same badass scimitar.
>Also Capacetic conveyance & personal palace
>Anastasia Davenport
>Gwendolyn Bennet
>Ashanti Willowsong
>>47547690
If you think people not personally caring about you is awful, boy do I have some bad new about the more than 7 billion people on this planet...
>>47547725
Oh no, that just makes them terrible dates.
>>47547497
I see. I know League of Legends is popular, but I never got into it. Looks like a neat character though and she's doing good job cosplaying as her.
>>47547523
*double checks points frantically*
The points are right..... Don't forget all the stuff Angels get discounts on.
>>47545641
Hey Beri is that you? How are you doing? So I'm curious are you working on any new CYOA's? I know you finished Royal Revival pretty recently so I'm not pushing you. I'm just curious on what you plan for your next CYOA.
>>47545631
Samurai
>>47547755
>Hey wanna go to this party
>Wow how awful
Man what. You do know that it's possible to have a good time with someone you don't have a deep romantic connect with, right? I mean maybe you won't. Oh no. But is there any reason in the world not to try?
>>47547347
None. I can't be asked to go.
>>47547897
Even if the Internet went down?
>>47547872
>Random people that don't care about or like you taking advantage of you to go to a fancy party.
>Anon is okay with this.
>>47547854
I don't normally like to mention what I'm working on until it is done in case something causes me to stop working on it. I am currently working on something, though. It's the sort that I can just expand upon easily midway without it feeling incomplete, so I might go ahead and post what I have sometime soon.
>>47547588
She deserves her revenge.
>>47547993
Violence is never the answer.
>>47547993
And you don't deserve to be drawn and quartered by the king, but that's what will happen if you take her.
Rolled 18, 57, 71, 75 = 221 (4d100)
testing
>>47548045
It didn't work :(
>>47548014
It is if you got ganged up on and permanently maimed by some thug prince.
>>47548022
Since this is in a magical setting and my background isn't made clear I'm going to assume I'm a godtier mage renown for my skills. I'll survive one way or another.
>>47547347
I give both my tickets to Vivien and Sienna because screw going to some ball full of fops and bootlickers.
>>47548092
> Implying you aren't awaited in Valhalla, shiny and chrome.
>>47548092
You should turn the other cheek. If you combat violence with violence you just perpetuate the suffering.
>>47547347
Well the fact I have an invitation to the ball must mean I have some kind of status to get it.
This means Sienna is out. Can't have my date murder a Prince and not expect me to get into trouble for it.
Vivien while sounding kind of cute is also out. All I can see her doing is annoying the Emperor and causing problems.
Ethernea out, I'm sure bringing a succubus along to a ball would be basically seen as pretty scandalous.
Beatrice is out. I feel like she's almost more likely to start a fight than Sienna.
Melissa or Annabelle I guess? Probably Melissa. Annabelle sounds like she just wants to go to the party to repeat what happened with her mother.
>>47547937
Especially if the internet went down. I want to be a NNEET (noble not in education employment or training). These crazy kids need to get off my lawn and leave me alone.
>>47547347
Ethemia.
She's probably the most prestigious one to take, and can put in a good word for Vivien and 'persuade' someone's nephew to wander into a particular building after the party.
Annabelle was a very close second, and I really feel bad for stiffing her. Maybe I could take her, and Ethemia could sneak in as a waitress or something.
>>47548133
I'm not a violent person, but sometimes it's needed to fight bad guys and for just revenge.
>>47548246
I don't think a succubus would be prestigious. If anything it would look bad on you.
>>47548284
Revenge begets more revenge, until there are no more eyes to take. It'll destroy you and everything you love.
