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Anyone got the newest version of this?
>>47340440
Did the creator of the cyoa create any other additional stuff like that?
>>47340722
Aside from these rules here, no. He had a falling out with his girlfriend (or so the story goes) and kinda stopped posting. Funny situation, actually, only reason we know about it is because his girlfriend was posting on /co/ using his namecode. Someone else is bound to have the screencap of the posts.
>>47340557
>>47340797
I thought I saw him once after it, but I don't remember it that well.
>>47340887
How do you fuck up with a girl that bad. I mean sure, she won't make a good whichever princess, but you have to know that giving her shit about it and worse, talking shit about it, is gonna get you tossed out.
>>47340887
That's the one. Man, that shit gets funnierand saddereverytime I read it.
>I thought I saw him once after it, but I don't remember it that well.
He might have stopped by to drop those last versions
>>47340390
>>47340411
>>47340390
but after that...
Traveller 1.06 aka still no mechs and spess opera edition
>>47340684
>>47340887
If you give that much of a shit about your roleplay autism I don't know why you wouldn't just say to her face that you don't think it would fit cause she isn't white.
Why would she care if you don't want her to dress up as some disney character? Unless she is also autistic that is.
>>47340887
Wow, that guy's a bit of a douche.
>>47340993
> Still no mechs
GET IN THE MANLET EVA ANON.
>>47340963
No idea, but looking through the archive he did come back, and supposedly they were still together. He didn't do too much afterwards though before vanishing forever.
>>47340980
Yeah but she forgave him eventually so it's not that sad.
As for your CYOA:
Architecture
Intro Bio Intro Chem
Physio Intro Engineering Intro Dance
Nanotech Intro Math Intro Psych
Intro PE
Robotics Club
Explore Campus
Study
Robotics Club
Locked Scroll
>>47340993
When are the new origins coming, or the new skills? Hubworld's I care less about.
>>47341174
Highlander's working on it, but I imagine he'll want to finish the last of the player builds, at least the ones due this weekend.
>>47340993
We've had a mech option for ages anon.
Fellow anons, I am working on a cyoa revolving around energy and need ideas for the following sources:
Solar
Social (being around others energizes you)
Momentum (any force that acts upon you, from a base ball hitting you falling down the stairs energizes you)
Any Ideas?
>>47341346
>>47341346
Those sound like ideas to me so I'm not really sure what you're looking for. Ideas for how to use these energy sources? Ideas for how to cost/balance them against each other?
>>47340499
I'll concede that your interpretation is no less valid than mine and admittedly, it does make a bit more sense in the context of the cyoa.
However, it strikes me as a great deal of trouble to go through. Unless you have a massive hard on for shapeshiftingwhich there's certainly nothing wrong with, of courseyou're wasting 2 minor spells and one major spell for very little reward.
Take into account, of course, that should the mimic get got, you die as well, and that should someone stumble across/find your body, there's little chance a mimic psyche can plan a proper escape, and all it really takes is a simple glass jar to get you.
Furthermore, judging by later updates, the author intended for spellcraft to be tied to your body rather than your consciousness. You'd be nothing more than a basic mimic while swapped.
>>47341028
Thank you, anon, it's much appreciated.
>>47340557
Elf Slave, Wat Do. Save her from the horsecocks, so I can do all the raping myself. I don't want her all stretched out. Make her my pocket healer, fuck her to sleep every night and wake her up with my cock every day. Aside from that, I'll have fun fantasy adventures, and then maybe I'll return or maybe I won't.
>>47341318
If you speak of the Large Drones, they're just about the size of a car. I'm looking for Mobile Suits or Armored Core, not VOTOMS or ED-209.
In the other hand, maybe I should just buy a frigate or the INS ship and call it a mech (or simply consider that in this multiuniverse mechs are useless and silly idea and forget it).
By the way, going through the items now I noticed the lack of camping gear. I mean, even Harry Potter had those neat tents!
>>47341368
I'm looking for potential powers for them, so how to use them would be it.
>>47340557
Elf Slave, Wat Do. Save her from the horse cocks and have her teach me healing magic. I'll leave her in the nearest Elven forest/city/town and go learn sorcery.
>>47341501
I'm talking about the Collosi you know the most expensive thing in the entire CYOA.
>>47341473
You are me. I can't wait to be filling that 6-month-pregnant slut with hot cum.
>>47341612
To be honest, I always ignored it because of the lack of description, like the effective difference between Passover Module and Stasis Guard (both send you to a safe static dimension until someone takes you out of it) and Adokori.
>>47340557
You fuckers never fail to give that brain-dead whore attention. Yet you wonder why those sorts keep coming back.
>>47340963
Their Autisms clashed.
Sadly she did not like dressing as a Disney Princess he could like.
>>47341735
>>47341612
Those things are like ten feet tall.
>>47340993
>What is Power Armour
>>47341471
The author said that swapped forms were sympathetic in respect to force, not injury. So if your mimic body got cut in half, the same force would be applied to the fog mimic - just ruffling it a bit and letting you swap back into it alive.
I solved that particular weakness by taking the Private Study (a good power otherwise) and just leaving the mimic at home while I went out.
Also, the two editions are different in lots of subtle ways. For example, spells were actually tied to your mind in the original version.
>>47341885
Source? In the pic it looks about the size of a human but there's not a lot to figure out scale.
>>47341916
As I said, I want something big, not a T51b. Pic related.
Admittedly, I think currently it's a bit out of the scope of the CYOA. Maybe someday when Highlander adds a Gundam-like world?
to the stars and beyond
>>47342265
Well in that case suggest it to him, he's adding two fan suggested hub worlds and origins, saying nothing of his stated ideology on suggestion, critique, and the dozens of fucker's he's added to the CYOA just because people made builds.
>>47341916
Not only Power Armor, but the Keldar Biological Suit and possibly Collosi?
>>47342265
Relative to everything else on the equipment chart, it would be wildly expensive, especially considering how much the personal ships go for. Then consider how much the mecha crowd would cry for futher customization of mechs and add-ons when he finally caves and adds one definitive option. Just be creative, purchase a combination of the above listings, and have some engineering knowledge.
>>47341553
>Faction
Grand Celestial Fleet (925/650)
>Background
Denizen
>Skills
Leadership II (15)
Piloting III (20)
Combat I (10)
Engineering II (25)
Programming I (15)
Science I (10)
>Bioengineering
Improvement Package III (30)
Body Customization (10)
Facedancer (50)
Stealth I (25)
>Cyclic Powers (100)
Telescription (20)
Remote Viewing (25)
Deepsight (25)
>Items
Terminal (5)
Mechanic's Tools (5)
Hovercase (5)
Handscanner (25)
Exosuit (Skin) (60)
Lasblade (5)
-Collapsible (5)
Vaser (20)
-Extended Battery (5)
>Spacecraft
Frigate (400)
>Propulsion
Fusion Engine (50)
FTL Capability (30)
>Weapons
Cyclic CIWS (30)
Cyclic CIWS (30)
Xaser (55)
Xaser (55)
>Utilities
Enhanced Arrays (25)
Grade-3 AI (75)
Galley (30)
Luxury Fittings (30)
Cargo Bay (5)
Fuel Havester (30)
Infirmary (35)
Factory Module (65)
>Drones
Drone Hangar (15)
Superior AI (15)
Mining Arm (10)
Flak Gun (10)
Flak Gun (10)
Laser (10)
Guided Missiles (30)
>Companions
Vkkerhn
Lauha
Equarus
Uriephrr
Aleksandra
Felt like there were a lot of points available in this adventure until I realised that a lot of the ship upgrades were locked by vessel tier and realized I wanted to buy up from my Luxury vessel into a Frigate. Still, definitely a lot of options at hand. Kind of interesting that the different backgrounds were so similar, mechanically speaking. I was thinking that the Denizen bonus was pretty underwhelming until I went back and looked at the point values of the other backgrounds. They're all worth *25-30 which is how many I got out of the Denizen bonus and there's room to get more.
Built my ship around self-sufficiency mostly, figuring that we'd spend a lot of time there Firefly-ing around the dying universe and having adventures. It was a toss-up between Cyclic Chambers and a Fusion Engine + Fuel Harvester for my power source. The cyclic powers in general are definitely game-breaking and having an infinite, if low-power, power source is very useful.
>>47341805
Here's your (You).
>>47336994
You can do it like the Father In Law CYOA and have a mystery box that turns you into the option you picked.
It's been nearly a month since I broke up with my gf and I'm starting to regret it thanks to my blue balls.
Quick, post hyper-detailed waifu CYOAs so I can have a quick fap and clear my head with thoughts of how much better I can hypotheticakly get than her.
>>47340557
Muscle wizard. Hands down. Kickass beard is icing on the cake.
>>47342551
>Relative to everything else on the equipment chart, it would be wildly expensive, especially considering how much the personal ships go for. Then consider how much the mecha crowd would cry for futher customization of mechs and add-ons when he finally caves and adds one definitive option. Just be creative, purchase a combination of the above listings, and have some engineering knowledge.
Valid point and expressed a fear of mine perfectly (the part about the customization requests). Given the nature of the CYOA I might as well say my character came from Star Dust or Power Armor CYOA worlds.
>>47342470
Last time I saw him around he said he was working on adding some piloting skills and vehicles for the net version, we will see. In the other hand I might make a list of items that I think is poorly described (eg Collosi) and ask him about them.
>>47342677
This is a trap.
You've never had a girlfriend.
>>47342715
>I Cast Fist
I cast Broken Arm.
>>47342822You're right, I'm a lesbian in a bible belt town
>>47342849
At least your family isn'tShiite fellow dyke.
>>47342881Stay strong bud, my best wishes are heading your way
>>47342849Bless your heart
It must be rough. Hang in there, anon.
>>47342881
My wishes for your future involve a decapitation.
>>47343007
Thanksgiving is on it's way, so yeah probably.
>>47343007
Funny, my wishes for you are the same.
>>47343040
So rude anon, I'm not the one that deserves it like them.
>>47343058
>shitposting that isn't even amusing
Enjoy your ban.
>>47343058
Sure you do.
>>47343007
>>47343040
My wishes for both of you involvelaser raptors, killer nazi arcade machines, and being bitten by a cobra while being struck by lightning, thus learning kung fu from a strange vision/dream/trip after your mentor is killed by a kung fu master.
>>47343071
Calling random posts shitposting and announcing your reports is more likely to catch a ban desu.
>>47343071
>ban
>>47343007
I'm at a point where I'm used to that at this point. Which is cool I guess. Better then Alzheimers.
>>47340993
>forgetting the image version again
Senpai, don't do this to me.
Image Version: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
>>47341553
Faction: Sequential Remnant (+975)
Drawback: Xerephim kill order (+1025)
Background: Drone
Skills: Piloting T3 (1005)
Combat T3 (975)
Engineering T3 (940)
Programming T3 (905)
Science T3 (865)
Upgrades: Limbs (860)
Anti-gravity (835)
Plasma drive (800)
Composite armor (780)
Resilient circuitry (755)
Dissipation field (725)
Gravitic field (690)
Regenerative shell (670)
Incorporation shell (620)
Rebuild Cells (545)
Collapsible (515)
Items: NEET Terminal (510)
Mechanics tools (495)
Handscanner (475)
Waser Wifle, collapsible (450)
Ship: TorchShip (0)
Fuel harvester (free)
Fusion engine (450)
"Zeus" Particle cannon (400)
"Pluto" Xaser (335)
"Ragnarok" Fusion missiles (235)
Extended sensors (210)
Infirmary (175)
Factory module (110)
Drone hanger (95)
Self repair (85)
Mining arm (75)
x4 Red/Blue Lasers (35)
x3 Soviet Flak guns (5)
x1 "Schwerer Gustav" Cannon
Companions: Gallatine as science officer
Hanac as redshirt officer
Ziind-urur as mantle-piece
Irihn-tael as dick-ass ninja
With our powers combined WE ARE!
GONNA LEG IT BOYS!
woop woop woop woop!
>>47343108
>telling someone to enjoy a ban
>the same as reporting them
lel
>>47340557
If only To the stars included bare-bottom spanking of Angel ;_;
>>47343187
I 'm a little surprised by the choices. I though To The Stars would be more popular. And I didn't think the people who chose Elf Slave would save her either.
>>47342715
My personal fave.
did rapture academy ever get finished?
>>47343437
No.
>>47343469
Thats unfortunate I wanted to see how the investigation results turned out.
>>47340557
Really? You wasted time making a cyoa to start shit about another cyoa poster. What are you mega-autist-stalkerboy.
>>47343437
So many unfinished cyoas.
>>47343437
I'm fairly certain it was already done. It was said they'd post it after the majority of builds were made. Between the asspain that ensued I doubt it'll ever be posted. Probably out of spite. All the same, I suppose.
Sequentilal Remnant:4 items free: 975
Neohologram
T2 piloting:965
T3 combat:935
T2 Engineering:930
T3 Programming:895
T3 Science:855
Projection Stability 3:805
Dynamic Inertials:780
Improved volumetrics:750
Photon Binding:700
Dore Durability 2:680
Nanoform core:580
improved batteries:550
Proofed circuits:510
Em harvester:470
Cyclic Powers:370
Telekinesis:355
Autokinesis:330
Deepsight:305
Matter reflection:250
Morphtool
Handscanner
Particle Beam
Terminal
[free]
Yacht:0*
Black Hole+FTL:395
Mines:355
laser:315
Enhanced Arrays:290
Sensor platforms240
Grade 3 AI (ship is mai waifu):165
luxury
saferoom:125
drone sling:115
self repair:105
mining arm:95
superior ai:80
desperation strike:50
Guided missiles+laser+flakgun:0
yiul-vah
aruyn
aleksandra
ansetha
Alternatively, I'd be fine just hopping on somebody else's better ship, The Remanant is begginning to move once more after all. Anybody need a companion?
>>47343575
Man I hope the author at least posts what he had planned out for the investigations. It's not like the mess had much to do with the author himself or the content of the adventure. Mostly it was about the nature of heroic fantasy and the author's admitted failure in that regard. That's a very fixable situation but I can understand the author having the wind taken out of him pretty harshly.
Still, I'm looking forward to it and I know a few other people who are as well.
>>47343618
For >>47341553
Brb, taking self offline.
>>47340993
Whenever Highlander awakes from his slumber, I have a question: have you had to cut out any builds for being too similar, or another reason?
>>47343495
I didn't make it, but I don't see the problem. Anything that comes to mind is fair game for a cyoa. Why you think that's out of bounds is anybody's guess.
>>47343824
Besides, it's not really starting anything with that person; all that shit is already done. Now we just get to laugh at it, as part of history.
>>47340557
Obviously I have to either choose little girl or elf slave. Of course if I go the elf route and then save her it makes one wonder "where's the punishment" since that would play out almost exactly like one of her builds, but I never really cared anyway.
So on one I get to be a 10/10 chick with an even hotter elf partner, but I have to risk getting myself horsefucked saving her, then I have to deal with all the inherent downsides of a fantasy world. In the end I'm not sure if I would want to stay or go back, depends on the world, but it's nice to have the option.
If I take "the little girl" I get everything easy. Obviously I'd stay in the little girl world. I assume I still grow up normally, I don't want to be the LITTLE girl forever. Downside is no guaranteed 10/10 body and no possibility of magic.
>>47343846
I dunno, it just seems kind of weird obsessed to me. I thought it was a neat idea for a CYOA too but I lost interest once I realized it was some sort of weird revenge fantasy against one person. Plus, as an adventure in general, I would've found it more enjoyable if it'd been more than "Pick a band end".
The setup was good. Just a bit wasted on being a pretty one-dimensional thing.
>>47344014
To each their own. To me, it's good for a laugh, which is more than enough justification for a CYOA.That and it's nothing personal; having someone as a fuckslave just makes me hard.
>>47344127
>Spoiler
Oh, me too anon. Me too. I'd just prefer it if they were, y'know, mine and not some person I don't care about.
wasnt there an EXALTED power armor remake/extension being made?
>>47340557
Well I'm not a rapist, and doing lumbar jack and changing someone's body for just shitposting seems extreme. So it's either making her a maid which isn't that serious. Or To the Stars. I think to the stars is better because with space travel we can make colonies and decrease over population and humanity can expand, also we might find aliens and trade with them. Maybe we can find the cure to cancer from buying it from an alien? Also I'd be rich and famous for inventing FTL.
What cyoas allow me to build a harem?
>>47345003
It's temporary for her no matter what you chose, and nobody has to get raped assuming you can escape the centaurs with her.
>>47345185
Dream Prince
Controller (the mind control one)
MCCYOA
Dungeon Meister
No, John
>>47345185
About half.
>>47345349
I thought she has to stay, as a manly lumbar jack even after this is over? As for the elf slave thing, still if I'm in a fantasy world I'd like to enjoy the hot elf, and she might just be bitchy in general. So I think I'd just drop her off at the nearest elf village and then go on my way. Also even if all of it was better, getting into space would be much better for all of humanity. Also if you are rich and famous you can get way better pussy than a bitchy high elf that Angle would be.
>>47345185
Pokemon Personified -> >>47345360
>>47340557
10/10 greatest CYOA ever forged by neckbeard kind.
Elf Slave, What Do, as taking her along you implys she has to stick around if you choose to stay. I'll find immorality somehow so she has to stay forever the slave of a man.
>>47341346
Electricity (and other elements)
Calorie intake (got balence diet to power)
Anti-social (powers are sapped the more you're around people)
Alcohol / Drugs
Lewd?
Idk turtles or some shit
>>47345647
Maybe I should have specified I only needed powers for the sources mentioned. With that said, the first two are already done, and I am not doing lewd.
>>47345680
My bad dawg here's some ideas
For sociol energy I think the best direction to go would be luck manipulation, something that allows for the achievement of more munde goals, or go full on mind control psychic dodads.
Solar is easy if you're feeling lazy, just copy and paste superman or Apollo (who's basically gay superman) the alternative would be plasma/radtion powers
And for the other one you could always go the route of the kinetic brick
>>47340557
Man maybe I'm in the minority but I've never really minded angel. I mean sure every now and then she'll post a build that will trigger the creators PTSD from when he was stabbed by a lesbian in the great shitposting war of '06. And that argument will end up ruining a thread, but I personally don't think it's anywhere nearly as bad as the fetish wars shitposters.
Idk to each there own I suppose.
>>47343618
I (>>47342563) could take you on board instead of Lauha if you can keep that Remnant mumbo jumbo to a minimum and promise to keep your i/o port out of the ship's AI. Inter-crew romances are never a good idea.
>>47345923
I personally wasn't there, but I say live and let live. Everyone has their own brand of happiness and autism.
What are some of your favorite cyoas made? What cyoa is your favorite due to lore? What cyoa is your favorite due to build-ability?
>>47340873
Pt 1/2 Pretty cliche picks, but hey. I had fun. Been a while since I last messed with this one. Thanks for posting it again.
Area increase 5 [9]
Population Increase 2 [4]
Protection [3]
Attitude Adjustment [1] - Compassionate peoples
Culture and Customs [2] - heavy emphasis on music, art, science, and technology. There is no hatred of other races or ethnicity.
Pretty population [2]
population longevity [3] - resistant to disease and illnesses. Eternal youth.
Metahuman population [3] and Magical upgrade 5 [10] - everyone possesses the ability to manipulate reality through magic. They all hold the same potential for the craft. While they start off weak, there is no limit to their growth. This reality bending can be used for anything. They will be able to sculpt the world around them in any way they wish. With enough time spent developing their craft, mountains can rise and fall without so much as a glance at the landscape. Islands can raise from the oceans, rivers and canyons appearing instantly. The creation of their own, personal, worlds is also possible with enough time. So long as the lives of the people are not harmed, all is well. If they would be harmed, either directly or indirectly, the magic fails.
aesthetics [2]
Public education [1]
university [2]
Diplomatic [2]
Wealthy [2]
Industrial [3]
Mystical [4]
Infrastructure [3]
Sanitation [1]
Secure [1]
Healthy [1]
Music affinity [1]
theater affinity [1]
art affinity [1]
literature affinity [1]
nature affinity [1]
fertile soil [1]
Rich land [2]
exceptional materials [3]
fauna & flora 3 [5]
>>47346073
pt 2/2
Spirits [2] - spirits wander the lands searching for authors, artists, musicians, or anyone else searching to hone their craft. The spirits act as a muse for these individuals and help further advance their skills. Spirits of nature exist as well. Magic gathers in the land itself, imbuing it with consciousness. These manifestations of nature are able to freely move, interact, and communicate with the world around them. They are able to improve their magic with time and have the same limitless potential all inhabitants of this planet share.
Afterlife [3] - Those who choose to move on from the confines of their current life will be allowed to rest in a paradise custom made for them. If they ever wish to return, they will be offered the option of reincarnation. All of their memories and magical abilities are reset. They receive a mark on their spirit after each successful reincarnation. These marks may be exchanged for more influence over the construction of their post-life resting oasis.
Theme [4] - So long as an individual gives it their best, anything is possible. Some possibilities may take longer than others but if they continue to believe and give it their all it will eventually occur. Shounen tier friendship bullshit, only applied to everything.
Immortality [2]
Spirit Walk [3]
Tongues [1]
Peak condition [2]
Blessing [2]
Awareness [2]
Friendship [1]
familiar [3]
>>47345185
Saved. I haven't saved a picture in over a year.
>>47341346
Start with the most raw "Dump X energy into you/the environment" powers
>Solar: Flare
Spend energy, receive light. Anywhere from nightlight to permanent blindness (for everyone else), depending on how much energy you use.
>Social: Party Time
You can turn any group of people onto a wild, extroverted, fun-loving crowd. The amount of energy required increases the more people you have to affect and how far from partying they are: anything beyond a bored train car would be a net loss.
>Kinetic Energy: Juggernaut
You can infuse yourself and other things with stored acceleration, making them go faster. This is roughly 1/10 as efficient as storing energy, but let's you have super speed, super strength, and super... throwing, but none of the secondary powers like durability (beyond that granted by the source), reflexes, or accuracy.
And then you can move on to the slightly more conceptual things, like Solar being good with plants, Social being able to influence social trends and specific relationships, and Kinetic having a knack for motion - including dancing and fighting.
>>47346384
Let me tempt you once more.
>>47345447
>>47345479
I was hoping the second paragraph would make it clear that she's supposed to be returned to heaven as an angel after 6 months.
>>47346724
You have a good heart.
>>47346776
Damn. If I go with to the stars and beyond! can I get everyone to think that society at large to think women are inferior in someway ? Or at least get people to think she tried to steal credit for 'my' invention? I mean, honestly I'm looking for immortalized shame here, not a quick shaming.
>>47346860
You can't mentally destroy an Angel so completely in six months that she never recovers? Anon, her shame will live longer than your descendants.
>>47346927
I misspoke. I was hoping to achieve something that broke her again and again everyday.
Okay If I post one more WIP after this I legitimately want one of you guys to kidney punch me.
After posting the companions page last time I got a lot of (rightful) complaints about clashing art styles, shity resolution, shitty background, and some other stuff that's kinda hard to sum up in a short post.
I've gone through and redone a shit ton of the art and for once in my life am happy with how they look (though that could be the alcohol talking), and I plan on splitting this image into to two once I finish writing and adding decent background art so I don't have to fight the upload limit and compress it.
Anyways I wanna make extra super sure that it doesn't look like shit so here it is.
Please feel free to distribute headpats/throatpunches/criticism at your own discretion.
>>47347011
Headpats given
>>47347011
Looks good so far. The words are the most important part for me though senpai.
>>47347011
Ok so, small gripe. That Uzuza companion on the far right. If you have to use an image of an established character from something. Go back to Korra. As much as I like Musashi, the image was better.
>>47347011
>>47347100
Korra's pic was better.
>>47347011
Throatpunch at the ready, in case you post another like a moron.
Overall, looks fine. Seeing characters from other series that I know in here triggers my autism, but it's not that big of a deal.Here's a headpat with the other hand.
>>47347011
I can read everything clearly and each character looks both interesting and in good resolution. Excited for the flavor text and quite happy about your effort, box wine senpai.
>>47346988
The way I see it, To The Stars and Elf Slave are the most damaging to her. She can be a maid for 6 months and get spanked a few times. It'll be humiliating, but I figure she'd get over it. Being an epitome-of-manhood lumberjack seems like it'd be much more upsetting to her, but again she'd probably eventually get over it.
On the other-hand, To The Stars will set mankind permanently on a different path, and a man will be given credit for that pretty much forever. So that could continually piss her off all the way up in heaven for who knows how long. Elf Slave is temporary, more like Little Girl and Lumberjack. But it'd be way more traumatizing. An immortal misandryst angel that's obsessed with purity might stew over that for millenia, or even be permanently emotionally scarred.
>>47340557
Muscle wizard all the way
>>47347149
Elf Slave is the worst choice because odds are that Anon will pick it for yuri adventures with a cute elf instead of a punishment. I mean, that's what I'd do.
>>47347011
>Trap-Catcher
>Swaps out Darius for Darius
Blind picks:
(Riot) Kengen
Chandara
Silene
Hana
Angry Smoking Man from Ej Har
>>47340887
>"I won't entertain her delusions", said the cyoa author
Decided to improve something I made a while ago.
>>47347100
If im honest I dont even know how Musashi is
>>47347107
I guess Ill change it back desu I was just trying to add more non-human options
>>47347052
>>47347068
>>47347111
>>47347133
>>47347309
Thanks for the kind words everyone!
>>47347209
It has high potential long term damage. But yeah, it's at the discretion of the punisher. Stars is good because it actually does something good for humanity as a whole while also tormenting Angel for many years to come. But if you want to be a musclewizard or the little girl, this could be your only chance.
>>47340557
Shitty OC incoming
>>47347359
My problem with To the Stars is that I don't want to wrong her, like, in a societal sense. I don't mind wronging her personally, but stealing the credit doesn't sit right with me.
Like, if she's hurt by the memories of rape and use, that actually happened. But if she's hurt by my fame? I didn't actually achieve anything, she did it. In a way, that's some comfort to her.
>>47347350
IJN Musashi, second of the Yamato-class Battleships.
Pretty sure "Yamato-class Battleship" wasn't really what you were going for with non-human options, haha.deploying headpats
>>47347011
Looks good. Did have a hard time loading so making it two files is appreciated. Maybe make a joke about Dax being reincarnated (startrek ref). I assume each of the school specific companions correlates with one of the schools specialties (like at Ej Har one companion is a blood mage, another a necromancer, another an assassin, and another a dark arts user).
Also don't know if you have made any changes to the first pages yet but I wanted to mention that I found the course rules a tad confusing. We get ten classes but only one of them from the school specialties (advise this be in huge font on the academy course page). But it also states that we can take a course up to three times to master it. So can we take our special class three times? I read it to be yes you can but it could be clarified. Also given the exclusivity of the academy special courses I think most builds will take their exclusive class three times even with an otherwise generalist build. Becoming a master in a rare field (the others are more easily improved in the field relatively speaking) is too good to pass up. Don't know if this is a concern but it is something to keep in mind.
>>47347387
>Outsiders (3)
>Aliens (6)
>Demons (9)
>Robots (12)
>Undead (15)
>Power armour (8)
>Survivor (free)
>Strong (4)
>BERZERKER (0)
>THE WITCH (FREE)
I WILL PUNCH ALL ENEMIES TO DEATH THERE ARE NONE TO OPPOSE THE ALMIGHTY FIST
>>47340557
To the stars is the objectively best choice. If angel is a real scientist, she'll care more about the advancement of knowledge than petty things like credit.
>>47347556
mind if I ask why you chose the witch?
>>47347387
Enemies: Mutants + Undead + Aliens
Upgrades: All four base equipment upgrades
Perks: Healslut
Companion: Old Man
>>47347592
Doesn't Angel work for a pharmaceutical company?
>>47347611
She has a larger range of abilities and can act as a support or utility.
Which I think will be required with the range of enemies I am going to be encountering.
As each other companions seems more specialised for specific enemies.
>>47347645
pretty good reasons there
>>47347592
>implying stars is objectively the best choice
>not muscle wizard
Who needs FTL travel when you can defeat gods across the multiverse in contests of strength and have them tweak reality in exchange for your winning.
>>47347630
I think you're right. Amd, because I feel bad for taking all of the credit, I will use my fame and fortune to start a scholarship for all the young boys who want to work in the pharmaceutical industry.
>>47347387
>Enemies
Aliens
Robots (+3 points)
>Free Perk
Survivor
>Gear
Shotgun
>Companion
Paladin waifu
>>47340557
Hold on, this is new, right?
Either way, I am ALL for bullying her.
It's amazing, anon.
The Little Girl would've been my pick if I were a trap.
A maid ha to do everything for her Master, right?
Elf Slave is great, too. Just hanging out with Angel, having her wear a magical collar that makes her painfully aroused when she tries to run away, forcing her to beg me, a MAN, to put his MAN PENIS inside her.
The risk of her being raped by centaurs is a bit too great.
Fuck, they're all great, but I have to say
>The Little Girl
And encourage my big brother to do more than spank her if she doesn't learn her lesson>inb4 I'm being cucked by my brother
That would imply I wanted to fuck Angel
>>47347618
>heal slut
>old man
Hmmmm
>>47347556
>Hiding inside a tin can
>>47347387
>All enemies (15)
>Theme song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9OBf8f55tU (16)
Strong I (free)
Strong II (10)
Survivor (6)
Berzerker (2)
War Bow (0)
The Slayer (free)
GO HARD OR GO HOME COMRADE.
>>47347689
>i will never hatefuck Angel and force her to carry my son to term
Why live?
>>47347011
Oh hey, you included both the kobold and monstergirls, one of which is a lamia.
I'm already loving it.
>>47347775
were the you guy who wanted the kobold bro?
>>47346724
>visible, huge-ass nipples
Why do artists ruin pictures like that?
Anybody got the slave market CYOA?
>>47347796
Yup! Can you post the first page again? I can't remember which school is which.
>>47347756
Yeah, reading through the threads I realized you can impregnate her, and you won't have to be a father.
Dammit anon, I have to swap back to Elf Slave.
Be a 10/10 hot, manly, masculine, muscular man, fucking/raping the shit out of Angel, conditioning her to love it, getting her addicted to manly juiced.
Definitely getting a harem and changing her collar so, when she has lesbian thoughts, she gets uncontrollable aroused for dick. She'll have to sit in the corner, watching her beautiful husband dicking the shit out of her girl friends, unable to participate because she can't not think of girl parts, which would trigger her collar.
Please, dear Lailah, can we please extend my time so she'll stay with me until I die?
Think about how much being a grand-grand-grand-....-grand-mother would hurt her? Think about all those babies she'll have with a MAN, about all that MAN juice she's had inside her.
Think about breaking her mind for good, having her realize girls aren't for fucking, they are for seducing and giving to your husband, and watching him fuck them.I have to go return some video tapes now.
What are some oc coming to hype for?
>>47347817
>>47347930
>>47347939
>>47347930
>>47347939
>>47347957
Thanks, Anon!
>>47344127
Because in general stuff like that just causes a storm of shitposts and that just gets old real fast.
>>47347977
np, other Anon
>>47347823
sure thing friend
>>47340887
>you're the one that ones all those costumes
>>47348228
owns*
Bliss, please tell me Kingdom Diplomacy is ready to be posted today.
It's 10:20 am, my day is already shit and it will only get worse.
>>47348419
No.
>>47340557
Man that's more than a bit extreme. Leave the poor woman alone. Shitposting does not justify this.
>>47347387
Kill evil
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NiyaUEzLIyU (1)
Enemies:
Demons (4)
Aliens (7)
Undead (10)
Outsiders (13)
Robots (16)
Mutants (19)
Pistols:
Upgrade 1 (18)
Upgrade 2 (16)
Symbiosuit:
Upgrade 1 (15)
Upgrade 2 (13)
Items:
Vibroblade (9)
Wingpack (6)
Perks:
Bolt X 2 (0)
Companions:
The witch (0)
All enemies for FUN, just having symbiosuit because I don't want power armor, I'll use the pistols for anyone far away, and the vibroblade for anyone close. I wanted amorphous, but I'm happy with super fast reflexes and speed. The witch is the party caster, and helps me survive the outsiders, because if they're a thousandth as powerful as I think they are, it's going to be a tough fight.
>>47340557
Elf Slave, then learn time magic and make her relive the six months over and over for eternity.
>>47348609
You really think you can master "groundhog day" in 6 months? Besides, you'd have to do it with her for that to work.
>>47348641
In a high fantasy world full of magic? Sure why not, Hell I could probably outsource for some mages to create a literal time bubble/room where time "Stands still"
>>47340557
>implying this is not a test given to me by the Lord to see how I would punish a relatively harmless angel
I choose to be merciful. I will befriend Angelanon, teach her how shitposting can hurt people all across the world and guids her towards seeking forgiveness.Pic related
>>47348434
Dick
Well, looks like i have to drink the pain away tonight
Are there any cyoas that are outright depressing/suffering in setting/lore/characters even when making your builds?
How do you feel about a cyoa filled with suffering? How do you feel about suffering daughterus?
>>47341028
12 Arcana
Pacifist (13 Arcana)
Arcane Encryption (12 Arcana)
Genesis (7 Arcana)
Magna Anima (5 Arcana)
Restoration (3 Arcana)
Whisper Charm (2 Arcana)
(With permanency)
Homeward (1 Arcana)
Wards (0 Arcana)
It's not infallible, but then again, very few things are. I think it reaches a decent balance risk - reward-wise.
My goal here is to simply outlive everyone. With that purpose in mind, my first week is going to be the most vulnerable. Wards+Homeward is hopefully going to be enough. Pacifist is a bit of a double edged sword in the early stages as, on the one hand, if I'm found by chance, people might decide I'm no threat and, as such, either leave me be or save me for later; and, on the other hand, if someone who's actively being a dick finds me, I'm pretty much screwed.
Said first week is going to be spent finding a handful of loyal allies/minions and amassing a size-able amount of dosh, both of which Whisper Charm and Restoration should be able to provide. Once this is done, I'll fly halfway around the world to set a Homeward beacon.
By now, my first floating island should be coming into existence, inconspicuously, on ground level, in some remote area or other.
My next 40-80 years are going to be spent deep underground, my allies being my only true means of interacting with the world. Using Restoration, I'll amass a massive fortune, most of which will be spent on life extension research.
Any attack on my location will be swiftly averted by the use of Wards+Homeward, followed by a brief period of vulnerability.
Again, the purpose here is to simply outlive everyone for that sweet, sweet immortality. I think it's perfectly achievable.
>>47349196
Why do you keep making these fucking posts?
>>47341996
> The author said that swapped forms were sympathetic in respect to force, not injury. So if your mimic body got cut in half, the same force would be applied to the fog mimic
Energy attacks kinda fuck you, though, in that case. Heat, electricity, etc.
Depending on how much of itself the ghostform can stand losing, you could get got pretty quickly.
> just ruffling it a bit and letting you swap back into it alive.
Can't really swap back unless you also take dispel. Also, even if you do survive, you could get stuck in ghostform for up to a month which is a bit shit.
>I solved that particular weakness by taking the Private Study (a good power otherwise) and just leaving the mimic at home while I went out.
I'm curious, anon, what were your other spells for this build?
>For example, spells were actually tied to your mind in the original version.
Is this WoG?
>>47349198
..continued:
Now, by the time this is achieved, it's a good bet overpopulation is going to be even more of an issue than it is now. The ability to simply create new real estate and farmable land out of thin air is going to be unbelievably sought after.
The ability to cure any ailment is certainly no slouch when it comes to amassing fortune and influence, but I feel Genesis is going to be my bread and butter here.
At this point, my path is more or less clear. Restoration and Genesis, aided by Whisper Charm and the sizeable levels of healthy paranoia I've acquired over the decades are going to make amassing ridiculous levels of influence trivial.
I shall usher in a new age of peace and progress. Humanity will touch the starswith me as its supreme god-emperor
I realize this is really, rather old and the author's moved on for a while now, but if there's interest I would be more than happy to provide some feedback on the cyoa itself.
All you need do is summon Autismo the Great and Powerful.
>>47348534
Kill Evil Rising: Revengeance
>>47340557
Elf slave wat do, but offer myself to the centaurs instead of my elf
>>47343575
Wait a minute, I've been lurking these threads for a week waiting for the last page to be posted and now you're suddenly telling me that some faggot threw enough of an autistic fit to scare the author out of ever posting again?
Goddamn, I hate you guys sometimes.
>>47349701
Nope. The author said he wanted to redo the thing and would refrain from posting thw box until the new version was finished.
>>47347387
https://youtu.be/uf47DQj_2Gg +1
All enemies +16
Companion x3 +4
Berserker 0
>>47347011
Hmm, just going off the images, Lunestier's students look terrible. I'm seeing
>Generic soldiergirl
>Fat looking noble prick
>Generic studentgirl
>Skimpy anime princess
Doesn't really engage me off the bat.
>>47348992
Wasn't there gonna be an expansion for this?
>>47349196
Like I want to protect and save them.
>>47349725
I hope to god you can be a male and save the girls from rape.
Being Anti-Rape Man! would be awesome in a school full of it.
>>47349732
>>47347387
Waaaaaah I am retarded
Second attempt:
h
Theme https://youtu.be/uf47DQj_2Gg [Open] +1
All enemies +16
Companion x3 +4
All companions (Slayer, Witch, Old man, Paladin)
Free perk Berserker
Shotgun
Pistol Upgrade 1
>>47340557
Wait... you mean i can obtain a free Jojo body with
the respective strength level and at the end of
the 6 month period i get to keep going
on bizzare avventures?? LUMBERJACK all the way baby!
+Manly beard!
>>47343402
Why wouldn't we save her? Would you give up the chance to break in an 11/10 elf girl so a bunch of ungrateful horses could have the fun instead?
>>47349818
He'd have to change the whole setting though. You can't expect anon to take on the entire multiverse.
>>47347470
Yo man sorry for the late reply to clarify in the current version you have just 10 class points to spend as you see fit. The original version was supposed to be 9 points plus 1 free point in a school specific class, these classes wern't so much specializations as they were just extra class options.
To the other question yes and no. Some definitely represent a certain class while others have a personal reason or goal for attending the school that they do.
>>47343402
>And I didn't think the people who chose Elf Slave would save her either.
I don't understand the hate for AngelAnon. I just find and found the way you people to behave ridiculous.
>>47349996
Are you really only working on it when drunk?
>>47350039
Page layout and proffreading no, writing and planning yes
>>47350250
>not being able to proofread drunk
You just gotta concentrate on the words and make sure they're right, that's all.
>>47343098
Am I the only one who was disappointed by that when it finally came out? I mean, it was okay but not amazeballs, I guess because it was so short the trailer had all the good stuff?
>>47348419
No pressure. But I'll do my best!
It might not be the perfect CYOA, but I always make a second version at least. Perhaps maybe a third. So yeah, expect it some time this evening.
>>47345185
Harem Creator's
>>47350531
I'm genuinly anxious to see how you tackled being a Baron/noble. I usually don't like being a (relative) mook but I did love the setting of Kingdom Crusher.
>Mages in Eclan are a bunch of terrible jerks who refuse to help their country despite it losing a war because 'muh morals'.
What a bunch of assholes. I think I know exactly what I'm going to do post-war. Can you say "Start a Royal Mage College with better funding to attract all the young students who AREN'T completely selfish sociopaths and actually care what happens to their friends, family, and the nation they inhabit"? Because that's exactly what's going to happen. Hopefully it ends up being popular enough to completely undercut the Mage's Guild until the entire organization dissolves.
>>47350594
It's mostly a title, but being a Noble is required for certain rewards. Independent characters cannot be a Noble.
>>47350664
I can see as to why they adopt that stance though, and it's stated that you could do whatever you need to do on your own time. They're just not under the palm of the crown.
>>47350664
Do you honestly blame an independent organization of mages for wanting to stay neutral in wars between kingdoms.
The mages of Eclan might not be at your beck and call but I assume the same applies to the mages of Verend.
>>47350712
Their stance is actively sabotaging the country. And yes, I can do what I want to in my limited free time. Limited free time. That doesn't make it acceptable that they completely undermine how mages can help their country into these extremely limited time windows while they selfishly work for their own ends the majority of the time.
>>47350716
Yes I can, because the guild in Eclan is made up of Eclan citizens. Citizens who refuse to help their country. This makes them horrible people.
A group like this shouldn't be monopolizing mages and magical education.
>>47350531
so you telling me >>47348434 is a cockmunching liar?
Honestly, it would really be appreciated. I'll post some OC if it would help you out? I just want at least one thing today to go right, to be good.Didn't even go to the gym as I had planned, thanks to an event. I feel bad, and I could go now, but I know it would be such a shitty session I don't feel like it.
I just want to get comfy and watch that superhero anime but there isn't a new episode until Sunday.
>>47350803
He is. But no problem, I can work on it right now and finish up the last things. Just need to write a couple of stuff, put in payment options and done. It'll take a couple of hours.
>>47350716
this desu
I don't remember the power level of mages in that cyoa, but if mages can create nukes and shit I would definitely disallow them from going to war - no matter which side they'd fight for
>>47350737
>an independent, peaceful organization focused on research shouldn't monopolize mages
>I SHOULD MONOPOLIZE MAGES AS LVING MAGICAL ARTILLERY FOR MY BLOODY WAR
Meh, at least you'll be upsetting mages across the world so it's not like they'd tolerate your shit for long.
>>47350737
>Their stance is actively sabotaging the country.
Sure, you can argue that, but it can also be argued it isn't their job. That it makes the crown look weak and desperate to press for the aid of an otherwise peaceful group of savants.
>"It is typically our responsibility as the royal family to tend to these matters though, either ourselves or through retainers."
Who's to say at the end of the day how many of them are actually helping or not? Probably less than more but those that care will and have probably helped. Under your pretense everyone that isn't helping should be shackled and forced to fight. You sounds like Verendian scum.
>>47345803
The first part of social sounds good, yet "psychic dodads" is all a part of the radiation powerset.
Solar is too overpowered for my cyoa, I'm afraid. I will consider the last one, though.
>>47346723
Solar sounds good, Social sounds good, and Kinetic sounds good. I'll implement those.
>>47350900
>An independent organization of citizens that refuses to help the country in its time of need.
This is more accurate to the situation. It's completely selfish of them. And no, I don't plan to monopolize mages. I'm not a tyrant, and with my weird situation I doubt I'll end up being the one chosen as successor so I'll probably never wield authority as Queen, so no, I don't have any plans to impose laws on them. Rather, I'll try my best to convince my father and siblings to help me set up a mage college that isn't made up of radical neutrals. It will be through hard work and dedication that my organization hopefully becomes more popular. It's competition, not monopolization.
>>47350904
It can be argued that a citizen has a duty to help their nation. And I don't see how the crown is weak if people in their country are involved in the war effort. That's a ridiculous stance.
>Those that care will have probably helped.
Barely. Their free time is extremely limited by the organization. They specifically act in a way that prevents their members from offering any significant help.
And who said anything about force? Taking a moral stance isn't taking a stance of control. That I think they're horrible people for actively refusing to help doesn't mean that I intend to make it so they HAVE to help. Notice how I've pointed out that I want to found my own mage's organization, not actually take legal steps against theirs.
There is something wrong when all the magic users in the kingdom are controlled by a group that refuses to help in a war that'll destroy the kingdom.
>>47350831
Looking forward to it. I already know it'll be great.
>>47349818
Only if you minmax like hell.
>>47350951
>Barely. Their free time is extremely limited by the organization. They specifically act in a way that prevents their members from offering any significant help.
No, not really.
>"Though, mages do get somewhat frequent breaks incase you want to go on an enchanting spree to help outfit our soldiers or go on the occasional adventure or fight in battles in your free time."
At face value no one can make them fight but they may do whatever on their own time. Pretty much everything else you said is addressed by that. I know you'll do whatever so I'll just stop replying now.
>>47351132
The text then goes on to say:
>A mage's job is primarily boring research.
The implication being that the majority of their time is dedicated to the organization.They're monopolizing all the magical education to their own ends.
At face value, the organization saps up most of the time of its members, giving them limited free time where they can do as they will. Considering what's going on in the country, deciding that it's more important that you force your members into serving you rather than being able to dedicate themselves to helping the war if that's what they wish is very shortsighted and selfish.
I've noticed that you seem a bit bothered by what I'm saying though, so I have to wonder why? Is there something inherently offensive about wanting to start my own magical college because of how unhelpful this one is?
>>47351188
Not him but I think it is unwise to try and draw members away from an established organization that spans all kingdoms while you're also in the middle of a war.
Last thing you want is for the leaders of the Mages Guild (or whatever it's called) to get a vested interest in the annexation of your kingdom.
>>47351274
>while you're also in the middle of a war
I agree. That's why I'm not doing this until the war is over. I'm not going to have the free time to set something like this up while I'm busy fighting off Verend, anyway. This whole thing is just what I plan to do once we win.
>>47351188
>because of how unhelpful this one is?
what happens when every other Kingdom does like you, and the next war is filled with mages, too?
Think of all the destruction you will be single-handedly responsible for.
>>47351320
Well anon, the CYOA goes outs of its way to point out that mages are falling out of favor for pure military applications because of how taxing big magic is. A wizard trying to cook off big spells runs out of energy extremely quickly and becomes a sitting duck. So I don't think this a nuke scenario at all.
>>47350664
>>47350951
>>47351188
New guy here.
The way I see it, the mages guild intend to remain neutral because, as other anons pointed out, they are a multinational organization and taking sides would tarnish their reputation worldwide, perhaps literally fatally in the more oppressive regimes.
They don't seem to have a monopoly on magic as a whole, you can get trained in magic without joining them, but they do seem to have the best educational resources and thus would hoard the best mages.
It is your story, though, and if you want to poach the local chapter of the Mages guild because they wouldn't support in you war, that is a reasonable and historically-evident response to the situation (look at Emperor Barbarossa and his anti-pope)
It might not be the best thing to do, but it would make for a great story nontheless.
>>47350664
>Not just getting the Reaper Witches to join your side of the war instead.
>>47351350
So you want to take a bunch of guys, who aren't fit for combat and who just want to learn, and force them to go die in your war?
Gee, I can't believe anyone wouldn't want to do that!
>>47349222
But how much of that actually destroys a gas of indeterminite composition? fire -> hot mist, ice -> maaaybe liquid, chemicals/electricity-> whothefuckknows. The only real weaknesses I can see are raw antimatter to the face, black holes, and other things you only saw in Physics class like heating so much the protons and neutrons dissociate into plasma - Ghost form wasn't balanced for sustained use. Also, I planned to avoid getting into fights, and just use immortality to live comfy forever and maybe explore a bit.
Word of God said that if one body dies, you swap back before the death 'sticks'. I think this was intended to prevent killing the swappee in your body to keep theirs (using any Form to avoid dying), but it makes turning into something immune to guns, swapping with another wizard and shooting yourself in the head a viable assassination tactic. And, you know, astral projection lite.
Besides, getting stuck in Ghostform for a bit is less shitty than dying.
I took spell storing (and were there some spell duplicators?) specifically to deal with these sort of problems, but the rest of my build was just whatever spells looked like they'd support the core theme.Also, I'm arguing solely based off memory - I haven't even looked at the PDF as my phone doesn't have in-browser viewing. If I forget a spell's name, that's why.
Yeah, a lot of the details like the lifespan of various monsters and the mechanics of bodyswap and Ghostform were replies to in thread, but never put the CYOA. Pretty sure he made a lot of the changes between the two versions specifically to prevent my drawbackless immortality combo.
>>47351419
I think it'd be even sillier to try and get the semi-religious organization of soul killers to join a war
>>47351356
We don't really know the context under which you can learn magic. As far as we know, you could just be getting a tutor from the Mage's Guild
>>47351426
Why do you think violence is the only way to help a war? Do you not know about healing, transportation, construction, information, etc? I can go on. There are a billion ways in which magic can help a war that doesn't involve any killing at all.
>>47351426
Also what's with this shit about 'force'? I've said about five times that there wouldn't be any force involved, yet you keep harping on it.
Did that tank girl CYOA ever get put up? Was here a week or two ago.
Eclan has sole access the crystals. Whether it's technology, magic or alchemy if you're not centering your improvements around those crystals, you're an idiot.
>>47351440
>context
Well, you're right, all it says is that our mentor/BFF does most of the training. Where the author leaves gaps, though, is where players start filling in, and if you feel it makes a better story if the Mage's guild selfishly hoards the magic, then go right ahead and make a build based on it.
>>47351483
I think it's pretty well implied since other than enchantment you can only learn magic from people who aren't your siblings (those classes are all the black ones), and how the only job that involves non-enchantment magic at all forces you to join this guild. There are gaps, but I feel like you're overstating how much of this is my assumptions.
>>47351504
Zoey can teach you magic even though she is a fulltime nanny. She was obviously trained at some point but there is no implication of her still being attached to "the Mages guild".
>>47351504
All of it is assumptions. Maybe reasonable assumptions but please admit you're just making shit up.
We all use our own assumptions when making decisions and posting builds for CYOAs. There's no way not to, and that's fine. But especially in an adventure like Royal Revival that does a great job at implying a world far larger than is described in its pages there's so much stuff we just cannot know. So we think about the context of the world we imagine it to be. Where it crosses a line is when you take your guesses, however well supported by the text, and start moralizing about it and saying it's the only possible interpretation. You simply do not know that's the case.
>>47351464
>you
There are more than two guys who disagree with your idea.
>>47351504
Becoming a mage is just the occupation of "join mage's guild & study / research new magic." It is the only occupation centered on magic, but that doesn't mean you can't be a crystal knight & throw fireballs around. The tutor you get for magic is, in all likely hood, a mage's guild scholar. That's because your tutor, no matter the class, is at/near the top in their field. The most knowledgeable mages are not the ones that spend their time fighting, but the ones that devote it to research.
>>47351541
Zoey is the rare exception of being more preferable than any other tutor alternatives. She is not affiliated with the mage's guild.
>>47351478
That's why I also took Crystal Mastery.
>>47351541
Zoey is some kind of wonderteacher. She's like a singularity of education. This girl can teach you how to do everything your siblings can do, even the stuff that's explicitly called out as being rare, difficult, or a fluke of their personality.
>>47351549
Not all of it, as pointed out, black classes are not taught by your siblings and the guild is the only job involving magic.
>>47351555
English doesn't have a proper second person plural.
>>47351576
You can be a crystal knight and throw fireballs around because you were educated by a mage's guild scholar. That doesn't mean that this group isn't monopolizing magical education, just that as someone rich and important you can hire a teacher from there to use their free time.
Just pointing out that alchemy is the superior form of magic.
>>47351621
Alchemy takes a ton of time and money for the same effect as magic.
>>47351504
>>47351599
>black classes
So what? maybe our siblings each have comprehensive magical educations, and simply don't specialize except for the enchantress. Maybe we learn our magic from a giant one-eyed newt in the basement. Who knows?
>>47351599
>English doesn't have a proper second person plural.
That I can agree with.
I cannot agree with all these assumptions you make.
>>47351599
>>47351657
>English doesn't have a proper second person plural.
Y'all need a little southern loving.
>>47351657
That's fine, that's the foundation of discussion and everything. For that conversation line, I just wanted to stress again that my plans don't involve forcing anyone to fight or into anything really. My goal is to offer a college that can train mages for military and crown use, not ONLY for that. It's more about offering more freedom and choice in regards to role and career, instead of it being a case of 'you MUST spend all your time researching for us'.
>>47351671
I'm Southern, but you know that's not proper English. My accent is going to kill my sister, seriously.
>>47351692
I don't know it may make her want to fuck you.
Sorry that was a bad joke.
>>47351728
People who find Southern accents attractive are crazy.
Regardless I don't think you're going to need a lot to make Teresa want to fuck you.
When do we prefer 3D pics of waifus over 2D pics of waifus?
>>47351764
Never.
first level spells
magic missle, hammerspace, empathy and slicing ray
second level spells
wall of stone and chaos creation
third level spells
doomball
>>47340557
I never will understand the problem everyone has with Angel. There are weirder magical realms than hers around.
Anyway, Little Girl. Angel gets to be a maid to a little girls' party for a few months, and as long as she's good no men will be involved so that's fine. Then afterwards I'll stay on and grow up in this nicer world and eventually maybe find a big strong boyfriend...
Hey, this butler. Is he hot? I figure as I gradually blossom into a red hot bit of jailbait I'll really be able to drive him to distraction...
>>47351764
I wouldn't mind at all if a CYOA used photos instead of art but you're going to get plenty of fuckers going REEEEEE over the prospect of '3D'.
Do what you feel like. I mean, you may not get any grief at all. That hypnosis CYOA used photos and I never saw anyone bitch about it.
>>47351692
>My goal is to offer a college that can train mages for military and crown use, not ONLY for that
and I repeat my original point: That's an act of war.
Based on what you say (I can't be bothered to read a 9 page cyoa just to argue), the only mage association is a multi-kingdommed one that focuses on learning and keeps neutral.
If I were the King of a Kingdom, and suddenly my neighbor starts a privately funded mage association that only allows those of his kingdom to study in, and "encourages" them to fight in wars on your side, I'd be scared, and forced to start my own mage association.
You're beginning the Cold War.
>>47351883
Then I have to say, I wonder how Zang gets along, since he explicitly leads a force of Fire Mages in defense of his country. I don't have the suitor page open, but his country seems to train mages for military use. Clearly if his country is extant, it isn't seen as much of a threat as you claim.
I'll also remind you that mages are not as powerful as you think here, as pointed out in the CYOA, where it says typical wizardry is no longer popular because they can only use a few big spells before they run out. It's not a matter of inventing ICBMs.
>>47346012
Favorites? Traveller's Tales, Spooky Adventure, ArchAngel's Roomate, Vampire BBEG, and the good ol' The Sky Split in Two (with the Iz).
Lorewise? Traveller's Tales.
Build-ability? Worm because of Kaleidoscope, which is probably the most OP thing ever put into a CYOA. As long as you're not a complete idiot, you're pretty much God.
>>47351883
Well, say what you will about nuclear weapons but we as a species have one data point correlating MAD and a distinct uptick in world peace. Yeah, the Cold War could've gone hot but it very distinctly didn't. The situation is far too complicated to put all the credit on MAD but I'd say it's worth a thought.
To be honest though, I don't see the socio-political factors that kept the Cold War cold existing in a pseudo-medieval land.
>>47351915
Pretty sure that's a separate state-run and -funded group specifically for war rather than research.
>>47351942
Do you really want peace under the threat of world destruction?
Know that you are personally responsible for it.
>>47352034
But that's the best kind of peace.
>>47351741
I don't know, sourthern accents can be charming. As long as it isn't completely hill billy. But upper class, or country girl style southern accent can be nice to hear. Also I don't know if she would be willing to go for it, it's forbidden love.
I know I should rewrite it and reformat it with a bit more work, instead of just adding more stuff, but I just can't resist it.
>>47352070
It's a good thing you/he doesn't plan to rule the country.
I'd definitely go full jihad and ruin your/his reputation with magic I learnt at your/his school. Peace under fear is no peace.
>>47347323
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If fictional reality engine is free, what the hell do I need all the other options for? Why would I blow 30 credits to explore the universe where I may or may not actually find hospitable planets or sentient life I can actually communicate with, when I could just as easily go to star wars, star trek or any other sci-fi space opera where I KNOW there's hospitable worlds and bangable aliens for 0 credits?
I'll take the boat, if only because it can be larger than the car, and thus have a larger entry for transporting larger objects if need be. It can fly anyways, so I'll just declare is has a futuristic hover-drive. (If I had the actual limitations of aircraft aerodynamics for flight mode I'm better off with the car and would pick that instead)
Systems:
Return function, shields Chameleon Circuit, Adaptive Environmental system, AI (30)
Best not to skimp on defensive options unless I want to inevitably get stranded somewhere. I assume the AI can drive the vehicle for me and make the return function work better.
Interior
Storage space,Deluxe Personal Quarters, Deluxe Passenger Quarters, Mess Hall, Medbay, (Also if I still get the basic personal quarters for free in ADDITION to the deluxe to use as a third guest room, that too.)
Now I've got rent-free housing and free medical care.
>>47352089
Go ahead and build on it to start, it's a good CYOA with promise. If anything, once you get around to revising, I'd say pare it down cause it's a little wordy. Keep all the options in though.
>>47352151
Peace under fear is the only peace you have ever known.
>>47352210
Alrighty I'll take that into account, thanks for the feedback anon!
