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Pick four.
>>47226597
Who's the guy with the knives and the greentext?
>>47226597
What ever did happen to broquest?
>>47226657
The original Dickass thief
>>47226658
He stopped making it and went on to do bestiality porn.
>>47226597
>horizontal scrolling
Fucking dropped
Nah I'll take a look. Some neat characters from what I can see.
>>47226658
It got flooded with idea guys
>>47226674
Well shit. Did anything come out of Broquest? I remember /tg/ and /v/ were all about it then, i became homeless, then when i got back it fell off the face of the planet
>>47226673
Clearly, the new guy's better, if only because he can steal somebody's spot in reality.
Still, original recipe dickass thief still manages to make a bid for revenge despite being kicked out of his reality, so I guess it's a tie?
>>47226702
Nope. People kept trying to make it a game with and without him, but see >>47226697
>>47226702
Some neat artwork and broken dreams
>>47226723
I always disliked how you could only hook up with the cat girl. I mean, she's not bad, but she's bland and I never like 'default love interest' characters.
>>47226674
c-could you provide a-a link?
>>47226733
You make me physically ill, but I'm sure someone else will.
>>47226733
I think it's called Breeding Season? Shame really, he could be doing porn I enjoy instead of whatever he's dong over there that he enjoys.
Have fun, little wierdo.
Well I promised my self i wouldn't post any more wip pics until I at least finished all the classes (have to write text on about twenty more) but here i go breaking promises to myself.
But I never got much feed back on the last two that I've posted other then balance issues and some issues with text readability both of which I think I fixed
Anyways if you guys wanna comment on it my shitty day would become a billion times better.
If not oh well I understand that their are a lot of people who hate wip
I also have the second page ready minus the text if anyone wants to see it.
>>47226723
>>47226697
Damn that's too bad to hear. Anyone have any of the art? I remember there being a list of the BBEGS and different forms for the Steam knight and some other guys I feel like nostalgia'ing
>>47226774
>>47226732
Putting this up,
>>47226797
>Posting yet another CYOA with NTR shit.
>>47226810
No. Not again. Shut the fuck up you faggot.
>>47226792
>>47226823
Blame the idiot who posted it.
>>47226810
>>47226828
nah
civil please
this isn't happening again
I DON'T WANT TO RIDE AGAIN MOMMY
waifus are neet
>>47226833
Again, blame the guy who posted the picture. Not my fault he's spewing his fetish here.
>>47226834
>>47226834
Does anyone have any balancing issues with this cyoa? I'm just curious.
>>47226826
>>47226797
>>47226792
Thanks so much anon this literally made my week
>>47226840
>projecting this hard
>>47226732 was complaining about how only the cat girl was romanceable. I posted the bit that showed the other options. Not my fault that the author made a NTR character.
>>47226841
Holy shit, moon on a chain. Setting Awesomeness++
>>47226864
Both of those posts are me. You posted NTR shit in response to my innocuous post.
>>47226834
>sounds like she's fighting something
I'm probably a dumbass, but is that her masturbating and panting?
>>47226840
Blame the guy who keeps bitching about it. If he'd stfu the thread would be fine.
>>47226840
You're the guy getting triggered, both parties are at fault. POST CYOAs OR GET OUT
>>47226797
>Cheats
>Loyal
Retard writer.
>>47226877
Just ignore him. He wants to shit up three threads in a row, I'm for breaking up his streak.
>>47226895
I don't even know what in the thread before last you're talking about you think is me, but I can tell you right off I wasn't involved in any arguments there.
>>47226900
Stop inserting your awful fetish into conversations.
And here's the final image I have with all the actual companions and not >>47226597
If anyone else has broquest images please post
>>47226892
>warrior
>thief
>archmage
One of these things is not like the other~
>>47226914
Samefag confirmed
>>47226892
I know this is old, but why does the magic tree start at archmage? It could just start at mage, but archmage sounds a step above. It's not like the physical starting class is archfighter, or the dexterity starting class the archthief.
>>47226933
>archfighter
>archthief
are those even real terms?
>>47226925
How? How in the hell did you get that from this post?
>>47226925
Here's a fucking wild idea, how about you stop responding to him?
>>47226933
I would guess it's probably some kind of caster supremacy joke.
>>47226946
I'll take that as a promise then.
IF IT AIN'T GOT A CYOA, IGNORE IT.
IF IT'S A CYOA YOU DON'T LIKE, SCROLL DOWN.
4CHAN ISN'T ROCKET SCIENCE.
>>47226951
Probably this, due to the final class being "Double Best Emperor Greatmage".
>>47226964
If anybody has the supplemental, I'd be thankful.
>>47226756
>mfw i actually looked up "Breeding Season"
>mfw it wasn't a joke
>>47226874
Yes.
>>47226963
I wouldn't, friend. Never trust me.
Image Version: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
yea
>>47226979
>>47226998
>>47226874
I fucked up meant to reply
>>47226996
Traveler is your fetish?
>>47226761
Reminder that if you want to talk about something us, you have Box Wine up here asking for help.
>>47227011
Thanks famalam
>>47227011
>Michelle still has feelings for Lucia
WOW ANOTHER FUCKING KEK SHIT NTR CYOA. WHEN DID 4CHAN BECOME BLACKED.COM?
>>47227016
I liked your post better before desu. Like it was an excercise by no-reply anon in minimalism.
Daily reminder that if she is married, it is NTR.
>>47227017
It really is, in the sense of being able to go on multiversal adventures with superhuman powers and interesting allies.
>>47227043
>>47227050
I like how you people are doing this without me even posting anything.
>>47227043
That isn't true, but a girl hung up on a previous relationship honestly would make a bad girlfriend.
If this thread is going to be filled with shitposts, let's try to make them about cyoas.
>>47226987
Do the catgirls look better? Because I remember Shwig literally could not draw them right and another artist had to do the designs for the catgirl in broquest
>>47227102
Everything looks kind of weird, and part of it is caused by the animation being choppy and just bad.
>>47226761
Shit forgot to mention that if you have any ideas you guys want to so in companions I would love to hear them. I try to include everyone's ideas as much as possible
>>47227126
Creepy mage kid who only opens up around you.
I dunno I look at this and I think of that magic best friend CYOA.
>>47226964
Like Angel one better, but here's a build.
>Daeliph
Party and drink for a year. Earn my keep as a slave by carrying her home and cleaning up since it says she's a slob. Has beauty power.
>Keep Daeliph as slave.
Mostly just to get her power. Treat her as drinking/party bff instead of slave though.
>Hellish Castle
Might as well have good demon castle since I'm a pretty powerful demon. Plus get to party with craziest demons.
>Fallen Angels
Corrupted formerly goody-two-shoes Angels as maids is so hot.
>Styx HQ
Decent pay with lenient hours, and get to keep up with what's going on in Hell.
>>47226979
>Azriel
Will teach me to fight demons. Is into cuddling AND rough stuff, which is awesome.
>Countryside Castle
Fairytale castles are great.
>Seraphim
They can fight alongside me and Azriel. And I can embarrass them by making them wear short skirts, low cut tops, and high heels.
>Army of Heaven
I really want to do Extended Partnership so I can keep serving under Azrielin more ways than one. But I can't have my own castle or maids that way so it's tough choice...
>>47227126
Some arrogant but brilliant mage who seeks to become a god and might actually have the skill to pull it off.
Thoughts?
>>47227143
could you link that? i would love to see it
>>47227126
Devious tomboy who excels at setting traps. Likes to show affection by pranking people with her nonlethal traps.
>>47226756
Holy shit, I remember seeing that on f years ago. Then he scrapped the whole thing pretty much and started over from what I can tell, redrew everything. I can totally see it in the art though, god damn.
>>47227158
I like it thanks!
>>47227163
Not that anon, but probably this.
>>47227126
Delinquent who uses illusions to create weird magic-art while high on illegal potions
>>47227204
thanks anon :)
>>47227178
Yea I can do that one easy thanks for the help!
>>47227126
A suave knight who has taken a liking to you and decided to be your best bud/wingman.
>>47227204
Got the mystery box senpai?
>>47226665
I am feeling autistic enough to make a build for this:
- Loser: +15
- Deviant: +25
- Nerd: +20
- Weeb: +40
- Neckbeard: +15
- Edgelord: +20
- Insanity: +15
TOTAL: 150
Ward: Prison School
Items:
- Your stuff: Anime paraphernalia: Free
Powers:
- Cute Boy: -60
- Reality Marble: -45
- Interjection: -40
- Leftover Points ($15/week): -5
I will live a happy life in Prison School ward, and I will join a tabletop club with cute lolis and cute boys and be uguu kawaii as fuck. I will use my Reality Marble to live out my tabletop sessions and stories, and nobody will question me when Irightfullypoint out that my interpretation of the rules is correct.Because this is blatant wish-fulfillment, I deserve all compliments and rage directed at me for this.
>>47227126
Noble that became a hero to avoid an arranged marriage?
>>47226841
>A moon chained to a planet.
I really, really feel like that wouldn't work. In theory, the earth is still rotating and the moon would either get caught at such an angle that it is in constant collision with the earth, or would get caught at such an angle that is is all but in the planet's atmosphere.
>>47227204
>>47227267
Whoops, I forgot.Good thing it's disappointing anyway.
>>47226761
I'd like to see that second page
As for companion ideas
>Dancer girl. A support artist that gives top-tier support to any group. But she's a major party girl and only went to school because her parents forced her. Unmotivated and will whine if you work her "too hard". Will probably be less lazy after she graduates. Maybe
>Bow Bro. Guy that wields a fuck huge bow that fires arrows that are more like spears. Bro tier as fuck. Would do anything for you, with the assumption that you'd do the same for him. Will work excellently with you on any team. Will stick by you on anything you want to do after graduation. Flounders if anything gets too close in combat.
>Wannabe Hero. Happy go lucky guy that is as loud and proud as possible. Adores all heroic tales and wants to make his own. These goals are entirely unrealistic. But he sticks to them regardless. Cant into stealth, due to all the yelling and laughing. NEVER gives up. A bit of a jack of all trades. Has the potential to MAYBE live long enough to achieve his dreams. If he has a good team to support him.
Of course, feel free to change shit around. Just off the top of my head.
>>47227232
Not super sure how to write that in but Ill defiantly give it a try
>>47227262
That sounds pretty cool also it doubles as both a bro charterer and easy husbando material
>>47227281
Already have something like that planned I hope you like it!
>>47227326
Those are all great suggestions thanks! Also there isn't a whole lot there yet but here's the page
>>47227423
Should be "Berserking" (or "Berzerking") instead of "Bezerking", and "Imbuement" instead of "Imbument".
>>47227423
Sweet.
>>47227448
thanks anon!
>>47227423
How does a snarky male healer who gives you shit for getting hurt sound?
>>47227423
I just wanted to let you know that I disregarded Odesium immediately as a place for nerds, but whatever Mage Armor is has changed my mind instantly.
>>47227510
Nobody knows how to beat up other nerds like nerds.
>>47227423
>not sure how to write it
I was thinking something stereotypical like a bro you can skip class with and who can hook you up with illegal shit. The illusion magic-art thing just worked with the archetype I had in mind.
>>47227423
A priest who's quite the deviant and indulger of cardinal pleasures. What better way to teach the dangers of sins than to experience them?
>>47227325
>>47227508
sounds pretty cool desu
>>47227510
so mage armor is the epitome of the Odesium mindset, with out going deep in to detail it's basically controlling robots, mechs, and other doodads through interact magic manipulation
>>47227524
So like that one stoner friend, except instead of listening to nirvana he likes to manipulate the forces of the universe? .
>>47227577
yes
>>47226665
>This CYOA is based on your real life.
Years ago I would have had no powers. Now I guess I get to be a grand autismage, living the dream.
Loser:40
Deviant:25
Nerd:15
Weeb:40
Neckbeard:5
Edgelord:30 ,I guess a lot of my clothes are black actually.
Insanity:15 (+10)
Total:180, I guess cyoas count as roleplaying, so I took those points.
I choose Wapanese House.
Alignment: Loner deviant weeaboo edgelord.
Items:
~Animu paraphernalia:Free
~Liquor:150
~Katana:135
Powers:
~Marble:90
~Transformation:50
~Teleport:25
~Coldsteel the hedgeheg:10
~$30/week
Drinking makes the animu better.
>>47226761
>>47227577
What's the meaning of "wip"?
Also, I'm not sure if I understood "You will choose 9 courses along with 1 exclusive course", I will choose 9 courses from the first page and 1 from the second?
>>47227878
Work In Progress. Have you seriously never seen this acronym before? It's not even a new one; it's older than you are.
>>47227878
you get 1 for free from the second page but can also take as many as you want from the second page as long it belongs to your school
>>47227900
At least I don't remember seeing it....
Maybe I saw but didn't care to find out what it meant, or I just forgot.
WIP Page 2 of Desert Soldier.
Suggestions for Evolutions welcome.
Suggestions for factions welcome as well. Faction that worships the God Emperor of Mankind is confirmed.
>>47227981
Faction that wants to Mad Max it up
>>47228139
Never seen that. Heard of it though.
What do you guys think about yanderes? How much yandere is too yandere? What is your thoughts on yandere companions, or a cyoa based around surviving different type of yanderes while solving different problems from fantasy to slice of life while using different tools/people/powers?
>>47228258
I love yanderes.
>>47228258
I'd buy that for a dollar.
>>47228258
That killing intent. They were ready to fucking go.
>>47228258
source
>>47228258
I used to hate yanderes after Yuno killed off Akise in Mirai Nikki, but I've since learned to love the bomb. There is so such thing as a bad yandere, in my book. Even the tie-you-up-and-torture-you-slowly-to-death kind are pretty okay in my book.
>>47228258
Yanderes are fine, too. In terms of how yandere I like, someone like Tharja comes to mind: obsessive, caring, kind of creepy, and above all loving everything about you.
Too much yandere is when she goes out of her way to kill and ruin the lives of people who so much as look at you funny. Granted, that is the popular view, but there's not much hook in that scenario for CYOAs unless you're making a fucking horror story.
Yandere companions work well under two scenarios:
1. They don't murder other companions.
-OR-
2. They are your only companion.
>a cyoa based around surviving different type of yanderes while solving different problems from fantasy to slice of life while using different tools/people/powers
That is fairly specific, and I have no clue.
>>47228338
how'd you manage to go from hating them to liking them?
>>47228356
Emotional distress is the only way I feel anymore.
>>47228258
I would very much be interested in this. Make this possible please.
>>47228258
I'm fine with variants 1, 5, 6, and 7 on this chart: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2166000
>>47228193
>Never seen Mad Max
Holy shit Ordion c'mon
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sRBu-FxD5W0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nSXTxyynUJ4
Still believe the Second mad max to be the best, but I haven't watched the first three in awhile
>>47226761
Is there going to be some kind of invention/engineering course more specific than Smithing?
>>47228371
I needed this in my life.
>>47228258
I hate how everyone has made them murderous psychos. the core of a Yandere should devotion to their love interest above all else.
I remember reading a story where the MC stopped a girl from killing herself and she fell in love wit him for giving her a reason to live. She was so devoted to him that she would do anything for him. She didn't care if he loved her as long as he would let her stay with him. She would have been fine with him sleeping with everyone but her as long as he didn't abandon her.
>>47227126
Childhood friend that followed you to the academy after realizing their life would be shit without you?
>>47227126
Basically just the main cast of Boku no Hero Academia:
A positive, friendly cutiepie with a great power, who's encouraging as fuck
A tsundere childhood "friend" who thinks he's superior to you, but slowly warms up to you (remember to explicitly state he isn't gay)
A girl with big tits - but no /d/ big - who wears a tight uniform showing off her cleavage
>>47228500
Yeah, people don't really understand that the obsessive love is the main component.
>>47228500
NTR / 10.
>>47227314
That moon looks way too close to the planet. Assuming otherwise Earthlike conditions, that height it would need to orbit once every couple of hours. With the planet rotating much more slowly than that, the chain would quickly break.
You couldn't do it with our own Moon either. Earth spins once a day, the Moon orbits once a month, result snap.
You could only do this if the moon being tethered sat in geostationary orbit. One orbit in 24 hours, so the planet spins at the same rate as the moon orbits. Then what you have is a space elevator.
>>47227423
>husbando material
Cool, so I can't get any male companions since they're all gay.
>>47228639
>would avoid a male companion simply because they're gay
Wow Anon, you sure are a faggot.
>>47226933
>>47226943
If you want to be technical, the "Arch-" prefix doesn't even technically require competence. It refers to an X chosen to be in position of leadership by other Xs.
An Archmage is the leader of a guild of mages; the tower hermit wizard might have stupid levels of power supremacy over the archmage, but he won't be an archmage himself.
>>47226841
>>47226866
Agreed.
>>47227314
>>47228624
But also agreed.
As far as I'm aware, chaining something the size of Phobos or Deimos to Mars or Earth would be totally feasible (merely expensive in energy, time, and engineering, as they say).
Getting the Moon into a geostationary orbit around Earth.... I don't remember enough from physics, but I'm pretty sure that that speed at its current distance would hurl it right the hell out of the solar system. But bringing it close enough to not do that would end up with more of a co-orbit situation, not to mention rewriting our coastlines because of the permanent ultra-giga high tide.
>>47228258
Is this in any way relevant to a cyoa you'll actually make?
>>47219981
Man, lotta content. Great stuff.
So here's my critique on a gameplay/editing level (rather than content, which I might save for /d/). It's fairly mixed in level, from organization to phrasing.
It obviously inspired Enchante/d/ Rings, but honestly, rings was notably better constructed. There was a lot more thought put into interactions, though that one still wasn't quite perfect, and to be fair, slut life seems larger.
I like that you included the link right there in the pdf to the other versions.
It looks like despite having the same version number, v3.0.3-NSFW and V3.0.3-SFW is missing some similarities. NSFW also says it includes a change log and doesn't.
I didn't realize this originally, so sorry if anything I mention below was corrected between versions.
The writing quality is overall pretty good, humerous, fairly descriptive, no copy errors I saw. I like it a lot overall or I wouldn't have spent, holy crap, an hour and a half writing all this.
I recommend full title case as the title for all items, not just initial caps.
There were a handful of things I felt should be explicit that I had to assume. I'll mention them throughout.
The rules should make explicit that the inhabitants of the planet are pretty much like humans and are compatible with humans, and should say anything about the animals.
I think that Jobs should go before Punishments, after owners, since it will likely take up more time than punishments (it probably takes up more than owners do too, but owners fits with the whole section of roommates and neighbors).
Oh Jeez. I've got like six posts more of this crap. Screw it, have a pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/RVt0kAug
>>47226834
Kaifus are better
>>47229065
>>47229057
All CYOA belong here.
>>47229076
>>47229089
>>47229102
>>47229065
>1432 pixels
>3938 pixels
This shit is not okay.
>>47219981
Would like to suggest an upgrade for nipples that gives them a dick-like length/thickness/hardness (without actually making them into dicks, since you already stated you won't do that), so they could be used in penetrative sex.
>>47229057
>http://pastebin.com/RVt0kAug
>Under Monster Breeder requirements it should be "or" not "and/or".
Pretty sure futanari would qualify for both kinds of partners, hence the "and".
>>47229221
>>Under Monster Breeder requirements it should be "or" not "and/or".
>Pretty sure futanari would qualify for both kinds of partners, hence the "and".
Yes, but that just means they qualify both ways. With my proposed edit:
"Requires at least one penis, or hyperfertility."
When restrictions come into play, "or" alone never reads as exclusive (that is, the typical-in-English implied "but not both" version of or). I mean, try and imagine that: "requires at least one penis, or hyperfertility, but not both."
This is a linguistic and English principle, but I admit, it could just be the Logic and Rhetoric and Computer Science courses I took that make it come easy to my mind. If Slut Life Anon really believes that specific clarity is worthwhile, I won't judge them.
(Personally, I would also drop "at least one penis" for "a penis", because I think it'd be unnatural to read "a penis" as meaning "exactly one penis", but that's more opinion than strict grammar.)
Also, +1 your suggestion.
Some sort of synergy between lactation and penetrable nipples would be interesting. That's a bit like how cow teats work: instead of dozens of pores, like human nipples, their milk glands empty into a milk reservoir ("the teat cistern", though the opening's smaller than a human urethra).
>>47229132
Big images for big waifu, anon.
>>47229057
>>47229221
>>47229380
I totally just realized that Amputee has the dagger. The bonus points are bonuses you get for selecting it multiple times. So "both arms" is Amputee twice and then a special bonus.
I guess then that my criticism changes to "Amputee, instead of being re-purchaseable, should have suboptions for removing multiple limbs."
>>47229380
I thought the "and/or" for the monsterpartner's sex wasn't necessarily just what you qualify for, but also some degree of choice (at least for hermaphrodites).
>>47229221
why is Slut life so popular?
are people really so degenerate?
Let's say that I wanted to make a "become somebody's waifu" CYOA.
What would it include beyond
>you are now a girl
and
>pick someone to marry
?Also, do I have to write gross men?
>>47229655
Oh my yes.
>>47229670
Get inspiration from our two Valentines CYOA about that same topic.
>>47229670
You absolutely don't have to write gross men. It'd probably be good to cover all bases, but I don't think anybody would miss a gross old fat man being in the roster.
>>47229670
This >>47229705
>spoiler
No.You don't have to write any men at all.
>>47229113
>>47229102
>>47229089
>>47229076
>>47229065
I liked the RYOA varient ruleset I used for this, so I'm going to do it again.
First take "Gender Swap", then roll 3 random mutations
Then create a rogue kaiju as normal with 3 random mutations
Then choose a Kaifu as if with Exemplary Qualifications, and roll 3 randoms for her as well.
(reroll any duplicates)
Personal rolls 9, 8, (8) 1
Size Swap
Monstrous Fertility
Muscle Enhancment
Rogue kaiju rolls
3, 5, 1
Tongue Mutation
Healing Factor
Muscle Enhancement
Well I'm fucked. At least the tongue has an aphrodisiac effect on my giant form (because it's technically human) rather than as acid. Not that it won't still disable me. I forsee giant tentacle rape in my future.
Here's hoping my Kaifu can save me. Going with Christina Busto. Hopefully she can use that flying to her advantage here.
11, 4, (11), 1
Erectile Malfunction, Camouflage, Muscle enhancement
Could be worse. She's still sterile so the fertility thing probably won't cause too much trouble. Camouflage will work well as a flying monster, and we all have the muscle enhancements to fight on even ground.
I was going to add 2-3 choices from the Enhancements section at this point, but then I realized there are ONLY 2 choices left that can directly help me. Maybe just 1? It would obviously be armory though.
>>47229655
It's just a very, very vocal minorityshut up, let me believe this
>>47229872
>>47229655
When you are doing wish fulfillment, sex/fetish based options are pretty much top tier. Power is really only a means to get (more) sex. So of course a CYOA that's just that will be popular.
Slut Life is one of the biggest and most comprehensive for that, but it's kind of boring to build for. It gets talked about a lot but you don't see many builds. What we need are more specialized /d/ related but /tg/ friendly CYOAs.
>>47229017
The Moon's current orbit is ten times higher than the geostationary satellites. If the Moon were moved to that orbit, then by the inverse square law its gravitational effects would be a hundred times greater. We'd all have to learn to swim.
>>47229899
If it's geostationary though that means effectively pulling the water away from the other side of the planet. We'd probably get MORE dry land, depending on where it was positioned.
>>47229897
Slut Life is just too damn long. The transition to PDF removed the natural constraint on adding ever more content and it just ballooned. The earlier editions are better: the straightforward old /d/ image ones, or variants like Paperwork Error. With Slut Life as it is a build gets swamped in small details that distract from the overall theme.
>>47229734
oh thank you
>>47229705
The first was purely about fetishes, the other was kinda generic I felt.
I'd be more interested in following the "Fantasy waifu" CYOA, but have more lore.
>>47229897
>What we need are more specialized /d/ related but /tg/ friendly CYOAs.
You seem like the optimal candidate for just that.
Good luck with your project! Which fetish will you start with? (Please don't be vore)
>>47229924
Definitely.
When I build for slut life I just post the general concepts rather than the full build.
>>47229915
The tide actually pulls the ocean into an ellipsoid. You have a bulge on the face nearest the Moon, another bulge opposite, and low tides around the circle in between.
So it would depend where you hung the Moon. It has to be over the Equator. High tides forever at the point you choose and at its antipode. I suppose Hawaii or Ascension would be favourite to avoid disaster?
>>47227981
Faction of supersoldiers that live completely monastic lifestyles.There was a place like that in fallout NV with peaceful super mutants.
>>47230009
that was less a monastery and more of an asylum where they were trying to reform (with only limited success).
>>47230009
>fallout NV
I need to buy that fucking game, looks amazing.
>>47228534
>A tsundere childhood "friend" who thinks he's superior to you, but slowly warms up to you (remember to explicitly state he isn't gay)
You do realise the (imagined) homolust is what makes Kaachan such a popular character instead of an autistic douche?
>>47227981
Faction of supersoldiers that consider themselves abominations and want to actively wipe out every supersoldier from the planet.Of course the true goal of their leader/s is to be the only supersoldiers and completely monopolize the process of supersoldier-ification.
>>47229943
>>47229924
There aren't enough positives is a big problem I found. Android and Secret Society Membership is -300. Tack on a few more bonuses and a living space that isn't literally a prison cell and you haven't really added that much to that.
Even if you want to be silly and use the rewardless higher difficulties, the drawbacks list is just this big ballooning list of nickle and dime stuff. "Oh, and here's another way in which my life is mildly inconvenienced in a sexually abusive manner." or "Here's 8 more hours where I'm still literally fucked less than my actual job figuratively fucks me."
>>47230086
Wait, if they consider themselves abominations, why isn't the first thing they do to kill themselves?
I know that's not the leader's wishes but the common supersoldier wouldn't know that.
>>47227423
>>47226761
Would it be possible for you to elaborate on what taking each of the possible classes more than once does? I figure it's important to be able to know whether or not it's worth it to spend more than one point out of nine on something, and those vague one/two sentence blerbs below each class's description don't always help, although the history ones are interesting.
When do you think the next update on this'll be?
>>47230091
I always played on hard difficulty: I need some pretext to take the weird stuff so that I can claim I was forced to.
But there really are far too many little two-point effects. Minor inconveniences that you then feel you have to name-check in any description of what you do with the build.
>>47230052
Nope. That shit is what ruins a character
>I only hated you because I secretly wanted your dick!!!
>>47230091
I would play on Hard (0 credit start), because the other ones are just stupid. I take it you max out owners and shit in order to get those 300 credits? Because IMO 3 owners is pushing it and more than that is just way too much.
My build is only able to manage android and a decent house after taking a bunch of not-so-minor drawbacks and new home.
>>47230112
If they kill themselves then who is going to save the world from all the other abominations?
They might even go full cult. "When we have rid the world of abominations, we will be forgiven and the Lord will take us into his all-loving embrace."
Such a cult would attract supersoldiers whose life got ruined by the process (ex. extremely ugly behemoths/wraiths, unstable psychics, or even normal humans who lost family to rampaging super soldiers, etc.) or just desperate supersoldiers and people alike who are clinging to some form of religion.
>>47230154
That must be why female tsundere characters are so universally hated. Wait.I get the feeling Box is going to keep the romance aspect of companions subtle anyway so you can decide those things for yourself.
>>47219814
Why did you guys convince Angel to go anonymous? At least I could filter her when she had a trip. Now I have to suffer through seeing her terrible posting style again.
>>47230211
I never said I liked tsundere girls :*)
If he goes from asshole to good guy only because he admits he wants the main character's cock, that's shit.
Same if it were a girl.
>subtly imply they're gay.
Yeah no, I'm playing it safe and not taking any guys, then. I don't want to associate with a guy that wants to fuck me.
>>47230275
>all gay people want to fuck me
I don't remember Box saying this a world where gay people have no taste.Do you automatically assume all girls are after your dick too?
>>47230275It is statistically impossible for that many people to have such shit tastes. No one will ever have to suffer the horrible fate of being attracted to you.
>>47227423
Why are the Ej Har spec classes all magical? Is the Ej Har school no good if you want to be a nonmagical superhero?
>>47230151
Yeah, that's the big problem. Enchante/d/ Rings actually improved on this immensely by scaling the prices of both benefits and drawbacks way down.
>>47230159
That's probably the most canonical way.
On Hard with no origin I did it with 6 owners, one of them being the +5 cred submissive futa girl. Admittedly the others were on the expensive end, but I didn't even take Everybody or Casting Call for that build. Still ended up over 150.
Jobs were a little iffier, but Part Time makes it more bearable. (Do we get weekends? I assumed we get weekends.)
With no sleep, 32 hour days, and horniness on demand, I don't feel especially constrained by giving up 16 hours a day, 5-7 days a week, to elaborate raunchiness.
Memory Wipe + Dissonance is worth 20 points. 10 of those from Dissonance; I'd almost pay points to have that.
I do take some fairly extreme punishments. Because I'm into that shit. But they add up, and some practically overlap once you've started getting crazy.
I didn't even need to use the "cheaty" punishment combinations for Hard mode: for instance, mandatory daily double concentration fecundity injections are +20 credits. But if I take baby bot I can never be impregnated, and gain a bunch of points. Forced Impregnation has the same deal, and Curse never triggers if you don't sleep; both even more directly cheat-y.
On the drug boat I could also get +20 credits from mandatory double concentration stamina injections.
Water Chamber is +8 credits, shaves just 4 hours off my 224 hour week, and gives me gills.
Climax Control and Edging is 40 points even after I've given myself a remote for it. Controllable vibration implants throughout my body for +15 credits. An enhancement I would've wanted to install anyways.
I did take Long Play. I take a mere 4 extra years off my arbitrary life span, get 50 credits and quintuple my seed fortune from working.
>>47230231
Idk, but was she one of the people in the shitstorm about the Crown Quest homo shit?
>>47228258
The best dere bro, the best.
>>47230693
Enchanted Rings is terrible in the respect of variety. It's all bondage/exhibitionism. Slut Life has more variety than that, which is why I care for it more.
>>47227934
How're the Unholy Arts going to be different to everything is? Also you said unethical/illegal potions were only possible through ej har, but I'm not seeing anything for that
Trooooooll.
>>47230275
>>47230307
Alright so I passed out before the whole gay thing could be addressed.
I will say it now neither the men or women will have their sexual preferences addressed, and no this isn't some sjw bullshit, I honestly believe a character should be able to define themselves past the genatails.
That being said I understand the appeal of waifus and husbandos and am not speaking out against them. I've just realized from an early point that I can't control how people play the game, I've personally been guilty of waifuing women the author clearly didn't want waifued so why should I hold my players to different standards to myself? If you want a character to be a waifu then they're a waifu, if you want them to be a husbando then they're a husbando.
Sorry if this is a mess to read I just woke up.
>>47231008
How is that a troll?
>>47231045
>Sorry if this is a mess to read I just woke up.
Makes sense to me.
>>47231008
Why do you people even waste your time on this nonsense.
I bothered reading it, gonna point out the Francis one overreaches itself in assuming you're going to let yourself be consoled. That's after this forced rape contract thing, so no such thing is in your premise.
I'd just not pick anyone and get no money or power desu. I don't really care, your CYOA doesn't do anything to make those seem appealing.
>>47231075
Probably because it's 'You're a girl now and you're going to get fucked by these mostly unpleasant assholes with stupid drawbacks!"
Anon probably doesn't know that this kind of setup is bogstandard here. I mean, they're talking about Slut Life just above.
>>47229897
I think (just at a guess based on my own experience) that it's less people don't make builds and more that they're harder to share and harder for other people to care about. A few friends and I made some builds and stuff, had some fun with that but it was really the kind of thing we kept to ourselves.
If anyone is curious, though, here's one for 3.0.0. Pure smutty good times. Also included a schedule for her daily life on a second tab. I uh, put a lot of effort into this.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1O6jersl__Gi1I6K0vYafhElTkiKjR-E-1yt66yPwec0/edit?usp=sharing
>>47231008
Francis is great and all but, as Tim Minchin points out, he's probably not the only man in the world I could fall in love with. Pauly is a boring choice but at least not an asshole. But I think I'm going to pick Ron. It would always prey on my conscience, the people I'd left behind: it's a good thing to have a fetch like him to take my place.
And, yeah, I'm narcissistic enough to find the idea of spending my first year as a girl being enjoyed as often as possible by my original male self kind of exciting.
>>47231160
This. It's one thing to discuss a fetish CYOA. It's another thing to post builds for a fetish CYOA
>>47231160
Neat. What's the stuff at the bottom of your schedule tab?
>>47231160
I think it's fine to post if you're doing something interesting or of the CYOA is small, but if you're going into detail and it's just you going on about your fetishes then most people aren't going to want to read it. Combine that with long builds being really boring without commentary, which just ties into making it more you talking about your fetishes.
>>47227204
i'm certain there was a second edition to this with a werewolf option (and probably others) but i haven't seen it posted in age
>>47231207
In the middle is a calculator to convert from Earth Time to Slut Life Time and back since after I built the schedule I found myself wondering, "What would Maiale be up to right now?"
On the right is just some doodling around.
>>47231246
>Werewolf in Wizard School
what
>>47231249
What a good idea. I'll need to find my last build and work out one of those.
Friday afternoon... Probably right now I'd be entertaining my second lucky viewer of the day. Trying to keep him engaged in flirtatious and witty chatter so that he doesn't start playing with my remote controls just yet. Of course he's going to eventually, it's what he came for, but the longer I can distract him the less exhausting the whole experience is. I have two more of these people to date today, after all.
But of course the moment he switches on the vibrating implants in my lips and tongue I can't do much but moan incoherently.
OC shit tier cyoa here. Please tell me I'm stupid so I won't continue this.
>>47231478
You're stupid.Please Continue
>>47231478
I think you have it backwards. If I'm trying to suck out their precious natural essence, shouldn't I be going after male humans instead? That's the kind of psychosexual horror we're going for here, no? The monster that drains you through sexuality - it's a feminine role.
>>47231478
This is hot. Too bad you're ignoring all that cute shota ass.
>>47231256
found it
you all mocked me but i was right
who's laughing now
>>47231478
Continue on I say.
>>47231579
rolling for technomancer.
>>47231538Please suggest what kind of pokemon should I put in
>>47231552
>>47231557
But that's gay anon, I can't do gay.
Also incubus can drain people (females) sexually so I think it's fine to go this route.
Though I doubt you would eat a rat, or a cat, or a dog, or a frog. I mean I can see people eating a tauros but it's a small category of pokemon.
>>47231045
so long as you don't imply any guys are gay, I'm happy.
>>47231579
Do we have magic of our own or do we always have to leech/learn from our friend?Any particular reason you wanted that closeted homolust werewolf jock?
>>47231619
Hot damn I got me a neet girl.
>>47228258
Yandere is the worst dere.
>>47231620
You could just add [and boys] everytime you mention the word girls and our imagination would do the rest. You don't have to design gay trainers and such. Our imagination will take care of that.
>>47231478
I don't even have words for how retarded this is.
You're making a furry cyoa.
>>47228258
Yanderes are about onesided devotion and unconditional love. They'd be any fa/tg/uys dream girl since they'd have no reason to cheat on her.
>>47231620
Most cattle like mons you would theoretically try and eat. So stuff like Tauro's, Buffoulant, etc would be ok.
Blaziken [Fire chicken], Emboar [Fire pig], some kind of fish mon, Farfetched [I think canonically it's rare because people keep eating it], Magikarp?.
For the pure insanity of it go with bug. I mean it's a curse meaning you did it in a very unlikely fashion so perhaps an illogical pokemon [bug, or lizard] or two just for the hell of it. People eat weird shit when in the wild or in different cultures or are having a brain fart and want to experiment.
>>47231662
Monster sex =/=furry
Centaur =/= furry
Hybrid with human face and nose and animal features =/= furry
>>47231662
Technically he's making a mindbreak furry TF cyoa.
>>47231695
What is wrong with your brain?
An animal fucking a human and turning said human into a monster-human hybrid is most certainly furry.
>>47231662
As he has the right to do so. Even if no one touches it, he can make whatever he wants.
>>47231620
This >>47231694
Also Tentacool and Tentacruel as calamari. Maybe the eggs of a Dragon type pokemon. Any Flying birdlike and Water fishtype pokemon. There are vegetable like Grass pokemon too (Bulbasaur cabbage salad). Go nuts.
>>47231747
Tentacool and Tentacruel are jellyfish, though...
Also: Slowpoke (tails).
>>47231739
Agreed. Bitch aside nothing should be off the books.
Has Scientist finished updating Necromancer CYOA 2.0?
>>47231620
Gengar is my suggestion.
>>47231784
He said he needed to level up.
>>47227423
Not sure if you'll see this but I'd like to have a companion (probably Uzuza only from how it sounds) that makes really good mage killing equipment.
>>47231478
Color me interested
>>47231478
If I'm not supposed to eat it, why is it made out of ice cream in the first place?
>>47231739
>Please tell me I'm stupid so I won't continue this
I did as he asked. Or am I not allowed to do so?
>>47231738
No, it's only furry when it doesn't have the human face and nose.
>>47231825
what does it mean?
>>47231826
>he wants to be a dumb uzuza jock
I'm literally going to learn genderbending magic just so I can turn Uzuza students into weak little girls.
>>47231842
I don't care. Do what you like.
>>47227423
Soon I'll have my forbidden Uzuza x Ej Har true love affair.
Godspeed, Box.
>>47231849
Okay, fine, it's bestiality then.
Because that's so much better.
>>47226597
>Cheerful Druid
>Lifelong Warrior Friend
>Nameless Rank and File Soldier
>Evil Black Knight
Yeah man
>>47231914
Pokephilia =/= bestiality
Bestiality only counts when it's real life animal, think about a dragon or werewolf, does that count as bestiality?
>>47230662
>>47227423
seconded. At the very least give them a stealthy or underhanded trade/tactic option.
>>47231008
Ron. I know what I'd do under those circumstances. I'm going to enjoy every minute of it.
>>47231887
I want to be of excellent mind and body, thank you very much. But I'm any setting where there is sufficent mage slaying slaying stuff I don't find it smart to be a mage. If you lose your magic, you're screwed. All I need is antimagic, emps and an awesome body and sufficent tactics. Ki just makes it too easy since I can go Super/Kaioken and make ki shields for my equipment so I don't render my stuff useless. I'll have magitech to boost my power even further. Gonna keep y'all in check.
>>47231926
Aren't pokemon sentient? I vaguely remember them communicating with each other in one of the episodes or movies.
>>47232041
Not that guy. But I like to assume that any setting with anit-magic where mages still exist and aren't heavily monitored/controlled that the mageslayers lose just as often as they win. Making offense magic obsolete through just the sheer existance of mageslayers would be quite dumb.
Not even a big fan of magic but I'm just sayin. Just because you have the option doesn't mean that you're just mageproof.
>>47232041
I envy you, anon. I can't pick warrior stuff in cyoas anymore ever since I discovered the existence of muscle theft porn.
>>47232092
Well yeah it doesn't but it's the best I can do and with all that enhancement I'm pretty sure I will perform well. If ki wasn't a thing I'd have more to be concerned with.
>>47232101
Ok. Why the fuck should that have any bearing on your CYOA builds?
>>47231887I would be okay with this, assuming you were a hot girl and made me your sweet, gentle lesbian lover who can't fight back when you hold me down.
Sadly, you aren't.
>>47232138
It really freaked me out. Now I'm afraid of not picking magic options because some defenerate wizard might steal or atrophy my physical strength and get off on it. That shit is sick and terrifying. NTR has nothing on it.
>>47232092
If even mage slayers lose to mages 50% of the time then being a warrior is obsolete. You might as well just be a mage and then you're equally as good at fighting even compared to warriors who are specifically geared to defeating mages, which means you're apparently better at fighting than any other warrior, plus you have a bunch of other magic powers. It doesn't make sense having warrior options unless warriors are in general better at fighting than mages, because that's the whole point of being a warrior, being able to win fights.
>>47232153
What? Are you just not able to separate something that exists in very specific porn from a CYOA? That doesn't make any sense. This a really irrational fear anon.
>>47232153
The guy who asked you about it wasn't me, but I am mageslayer anon. You can at least be a battlemage, anon. Don't lose hope! Fearing things in the wrong sort of way only makes them more likely to happen. You gotta train your get a rippling brain and exterior!
>>47229044
Wouldn't have asked if it wasnt
>>47232173
That's ridiculous. Mages and warriors should be about equally strong to keep things balanced. Mageslayers would have a definite advantage over regular mages but a disadvantage against other warriors who are immune to their speficic techniques. I'm sure you mages specialized in fighting warriors too, using curses and binding spells.
There's no reason to make mageslayers superior.
>>47232173
I guess I made a poor choice of words.
All I was trying to say really was that Mages aren't obsolete just because mageslayers exist. The anon I was talking to knew that anyway so really I guess I was just talking out of my ass. He was just saying he was going to stack his anti-magic abilities.
>>47226834
Is there one but for husbandos
>>47232210
Mageslayer anon, adding to what this one said. I'll demonstrate his concept further. Mage scries slayer. Slayer uses some sort of detection on the mage. Mage nukes. Slayer uses antimagic nuke and punches through it. Mage defends with mini black hole. Etc.
>>47232187
You'd agree with me if your stupid curiosity tricked you into that shit too. Do you really think those mages don't want to look fit and ripped? They'd have no time or interest in working out though so they use their magic to get what they want. I could definitely see some mage with no sense of morality use dark magic to drain the life out of young people.
It's a common trope. Life Drinker or something on Tv Tropes.It might be an irrational fear of mine but that is something that scares the shit out of me.
