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Last Thread >>43669676
FAQ: http://pastebin.com/MhAQAJiw
Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/9ijwopa42ke49q1/AAA40vUS2BzstD9eHyyBLTr8a?dl=0
IRC Chat Channel
https://client01.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.rizon.net%2Fcyoa
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>>43694057
I prefer apples
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>>43694151
Well get on it and make that Apple CYOA!

Granny Smiths,
Golden Delicious,
Fuju,
McIntosh,
Cox Pomona....
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Why do I have funny feeling that there's maybe one lonely and pathetic anon, trying desperately to keep /cyoa/ generals alive when there's no traffic, and forcing people to make cyoas, no matter how shitty or rushed they are?
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>>43694057
Before I even scrolled to the bottom of that I wanted a banana, so I left to get one

We had no bananas and I felt bad

I came back to finish reading it and now I feel better

I don't think I'll ever need another banana ever again.
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Didn't get a chance to reply to >>43691317 in the last thread, but yes a pic dump would be great.
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>>43694057
There's money in the banana stand.
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>>43694358
I'll have much more time to work on making a CYOA over Thanksgiving if that's any consolation.
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>>43694929
Have you tried spending thanksgiving with your family and frie-pfttt who am I kidding?

I hope your CYOA have the dankest of memes.
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>>43694766
>Healing 5 (91)
>Longevity 5 (82)
>Outlive Universe (72) -- Obligatory immortality out of the way
>Charm 5 (63)
>Compulsion 5 (54) -- -- My fetish
>Grant Immortality (44) -- Immortal-friends are nice
>Demonology 5 (35) -- In case I need to fuck shit up (Also, succubi)
>Polymorphing 4 (28) -- Disguises and burning shit
>Prophecy 3 (23) -- Just in case someone comes up with some kind of sneaky plan
>Infernal Coronation (13) -- Eh I might as well rule hell, since I can already command demons
>Conjuring 1 (12) - In case I forget to cook
>Teleportation 3 (7) - In case I get stuck somewhere
>Metamagic 1 (6) - In case I'm bound
>Air 2 (3) - Flying is cool I guess
>Illusion 2 (0) - For your entertainment
This has so many points and I don't care I love it.
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I've seen these threads from time to time. It's there any good games you've done that actually have something interesting in either mechanics or worldbuilding, or are you all just here for sad solo erp?
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>>43694988
Coming home from college gives me a lot of free time. Besides, it's good to get these ideas down on a page anyway.
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>>43694892
Wellp, I rolled 1, 1, and 4 on my die at home.
>Collar
>Youth
>Defense
>Obedience
>Arousal
>Coin-Operated
I keep myself eternally youthful and protected, and I allow others to do the same -- as long as they keep paying me. If they stop, the other curses kick in 3:D
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>>43694358
Shitty rushed CYOA comin right atcha friend
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>>43695341
>Kancolle
>small c
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>>43695206
>mfw get shit rolls
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I post this to make people mad now to be quite honest, At first i just did it cause i like it.
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>>43695206
>end up in skyrim
>take Dragonborn and Neravarine for 3, take Earthbending for 1
>Corporation leader is Maven Blackbriar
>Vorpal Blade as a weapon

not a bad roll actually
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>>43694358
You can't force someone to make a cyoa on an anonymous message board.
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>>43695606
Oh sure you can, just pester any poster with "Why get on it and make a X CYOA!"

As seen here >>43694204

Do it on everybody trying to be a nonconformist and do it in every thread.
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I kinda like this clusterfuck, even if it is hard to read.
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>>43694923
>Part 1
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>>43695656
And all they'll have to do is ignore you.
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>>43695839
Any other parts are lost or nonexistent
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>>43695861
In order to ignore something you have to know what you're ignoring first.
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>>43695682
Trivilae, Goddess of Creation

I know what to splurge all my money on.
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>>43695206
This is just going to end up with a bunch of rolls, isn't it?
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>>43695493
Not a Gundam fan, but what the heck.

>Female (0) Because I have no points, and I'll shot for legendary status.
>Gundam Fighter (75) Because if I'm going to die, I'm going to go out punching my killer in the face with a burning fist.
>Anno Domini (15) I need to go fast.
>Trans-am (10) GO FAST I SAID.
>Rain Mikamura (10) Doctor, mechanic, love beams. What's not to love?
>Mashymre Cello (-10) Every fighter needs a good rival.

It's double SANIC speed time. I spend all my time beating the shit out of other mobile suits with crappy weapons and stealing their weapons. I expect at least one cliffhanger episode where I nearly die, one episode where I do die, and then a SURPRISE PLOT TWIST episode where it's revealed that I didn't actually die and show up unexpectedly. 75% chance that I die for real in the climactic battle while screaming something barely intelligible about doing the impossible.
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Hasn't been posted in a while, so why not. Pick 4 companions, then make your own class to form a party.
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>>43694314
>Ork Warboss
>Ancestral Awakening
>Alpha-type Psyker
-C'Tan Awakening
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>>43696675
>The Iron General
>Sophisticated Psion
>Grizzled Detective
>Honorable Kabuto Samurai

And me, literally Starry-Eyed Occultist, female.

Together we form the Get-Shit-Done alliance. Not incredibly personable, but dedicated to making the world a better place, one cold blooded murder at a time.
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>>43696675

>Dragon Knight
The muscle and tank

>Misunderstood Necromancer
Healing and support

>Ninja Guardian
Stealth and scouting

>Sophisticated Psion
Combat-control

I considered the Brawny Gentleman, but thought the Dragon Knight would offer more thoughtful conversation for the other three party members. I would give myself some type of Sage class to fit in with the rest of the party, and enjoy bro-tier conversations about the complexities of the universe.
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>>43694766

Outlive Universe
Grant Immortality
Muscle Wizard.
Calling 5
Nature 5
Time 1
Illusion 1

Time to call the Tarrasque and fuck shit up with a play by play from the announcer. For eternity.
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>>43694314
here I gooooooooo...
>Space Marine Librarian [80]
Raptors chapter, because obviously
>Discount Alpha Psyker [60]
power overwhelming
>Blank [30]
no, I don't know how this works
I'm doing it anyways
>Terminator Armor [15]
My mind is protected, so why not my body?
>Personal Teleporter [0]
in the interest of chapter tradition
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5CfNarCjSHM
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>>43696675
Oh god, Broquest. The greatest game that never was. Not seen this pick either, must have been one of the last character list made.

Gonna go with boring pick of ulimate broship: Dog, Friend, Druid, Nameless Soldier
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>>43694358
Oh, do not worry friend. Kingdom crusher will come this weekend. The amount of work and thought put into it is more than any of my other works. And is single page too, which I am happy about. There may be some kingdom's missing, but it won't affect gameplay.
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>>43696675
>All those diverging story paths and possible character syngery builds with special dialogue
>All those bosses and villains with their own ties to the characters and place in the universe
>All of it lost like tears in the rain.
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>>43697181
What the fuck is Kingdom Crusher?
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>>43695493
Female
Gundam Fighter (75/170)
Correct Century (125/170)
Trans-Am (135/170), God Finger (155/170), ZERO (170/170)
Drawbacks: Frost Brothers, Zechs, Char
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>>43696675
Why is David Bowie one of the companions?
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>>43696675
Suave but Dubious Devil, Masked Magician Con-Artist, Realigned Villainous Vixen, Dick-Ass Thief
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>>43697352
I think the better question is: Why isn't David Bowie a companion in all CYOAs?
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>>43697282
A cyoa of course.
If you're not in the loop then wait till the weekend.
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>>43697443
It's kind of expected that you should be the protagonist, not your companion.
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>>43697443
Black Freddie Mercury is also a nice touch.

Also, is the Psion an angry Foucault?
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>>43696675
>The Cheerful Druid
>Seasoned Veteran Relative
>Ninja Guardian
>Misunderstood Necromancer

I'll be a scholar to start with, probably try to pick up some necromancy along the way.
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>>43695931
* Can the "path of the Abyss" teleport to other galaxies by looking through a telescope? If so, do you arrive at the time you saw, the time they see you leave, or some time in between? If any answer but the second, what happens when you try to go back?
* How big of a nuclear explosion can you create with the "path of the demon"?
* Is the Death Star a valid weapon for the "path of the warrior"?
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Anyone mind posting the monster expansion packs for alice? They're not in the dropbox and I need them for research. Not even joking here, working on something and want to see what's been done
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rawl
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>>43698222
Nice trips.
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>>43695918
If you can' figure that out then there is no helping you.
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>>43698256
>>43698341
Thanks anon
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>people still circlejerk over the same 20 images
Jesus christ people get a hobby or try and make OC
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>>43696675
>Amazon
Tank and Waifu
>Undead Warrior
We need a soldier that can take a hit
>The Iron General
Smart and good with a sword
>Kabuto Samurai
Our prized fighter

I guess i want to be an engineer who can make battle armor. (basically iron man)
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Part 1/2

Houserules:
* You are not permitted to create Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann by buying 2-point mounts for 2-point mounts for your minions ad infinitum.
* Sub-minions from Spawner, Mounts, or Composite Body may not be sacrificed to power Divine Focus
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>>43699613
Part 2/2
More Houserules:
* Stuff from your afterlife, even stuff that's not souls, can't reach across to the world of the living. You can't use Divine Focus with Realm Guardians + Restoration Cycle to get unlimited god powers in the living realm, but you can do it in your realm. Intruders beware.
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So, got the news that I'm working 14 hour days from now until Thanksgiving. Kinda eats the time I had planned to spend on Conduit. Teach me to open my mouth before I've got something to show I suppose. My apologies.

On the other hand, I'll guiltily gladly play Q&A for the next hour until my sleeping meds kick in.
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>>43699728
Sweet god how are you willing to go back to conduit after what happened last time?
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>>43699767
Good first question, jackass.
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>>43699767
I liked writing it, learned a bit building it, and despite the shitstorms had fun brainstorming and giving errata/implications with other anon's on the board about it.

I'm going back to try again because I'm still getting the occasional email asking about it, and I think I can do better for myself this time.
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>>43699827
So with you being back will you make new worlds for conduit as well?
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Anyone know what happened to Quiet CYOA? Did it finish? Did the creator die?
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>>43699849
I've got a few new world ideas that I want to try out, but I'm saving them as a sort of 'reward' to myself after going through all the effort and work of rebuilding what is already there.
Also planning to (once I've gotten enough work done) try to find the various anons that made fanworlds and get them to either update, or give me permission to rework their worlds into it myself.
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>>43685130
If you New You your sponsor, do you still have to complete their objective?
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>>43699868
Bit of an odd question - when you're done reworking your settings, would you mind if I made a Jump (Jumpchain CYOA) out of one or more of your Worlds? Been a fan of both CYOAs for a long time, and I think it'd be fun to adapt one - but only if you're alright with the idea.
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>>43699866
Nah, Quiet might be stuck in Pakistan but I don't imagine he's dead, Quiet CYOA is finished but I don't have it. If someone could drop it?
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>>43699999
I personally have nothing against it, though like all things Conduit I'd like to be kept informed. Which Worlds caught your fancy?

That said, I think something of the sort was attempted once and the result was so godawful that it was stricken from the archives and only reposted as an example of 'see this shit, don't do it'. I wouldn't recommend it.
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>>43700020
Check link in OP it should have Quiet CYOA in it.
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>>43699767
>>43699827
What happened last time?
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>>43700020
I'll put down what I have.
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>>43700048
>>43700061
Thanks mates. Also-

>>43699999
Holy fuck dem Quintets mang.
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>>43700059
The usual.
A shitstorm about a few rules/rulings, some frothing at the mouth and me losing my temper over it, and the occasional bit of painful realization of my own ignorance.

I kinda figure that's par for the course when you put a name on for any reason or stand out enough on an anonymous board, and I still want to create more even if it means going through it all over again.
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>>43700108
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Working on a cyoa wherein the player will choose a species/race to become & choose from a largely overlapping list of species/races for their city-state. Would it be annoying to have a page for each list? Should I make it one list and put wizbiz only choices on the left and serf only choices on the right?
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>>43699679
Arthropod

Inc Str
Inc Def
Inc Spd
Regeneration

Budget Rangers
Magical Girl Team
Dark Hero

Enh Str
Enh Def
Enh Spd
Enh Regeneration
Gigantism

Final Tally:
Str - Very High
Spd - Extremely High
Def - Final Boss
Regen - Very High
Gigantism +2 Levels Str and Def when Active
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>>43700114
It's alright man, I think losing your shit over something trivial and realizing after the fact your a fucking jackass is part of becoming a mature human being. I've done it a few times and I leaned not to be a fucking ass.
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>>43700173
Last one! Mystery box.
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>>43700032
Kuiper. There's others that really feel like I could make them Jump-worthy, but Kuiper's something really unique, and it's captured my imagination.

I am aware that the first attempt to make Conduit into a Jump was a miserable failure. On the other hand, they tried to make the entire Multiverse into a Jump, which doesn't fit Conduit or Jumpchain very well. If I do any of this, it'd be world-by-world.
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>>43700169
Thank you.

>>43700199
You're welcome to, just keep me in the loop, email is at the bottom of everything I toss out.
I'm tempted to tell you to wait for me to get to Kuiper with the rebuild, but lord knows when that will be with the way things are looking right now. I do find it amusing though that the world I personally find to be relaxing and enticing is so full of 'oh fuck no' for other people.
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>>43699868
I remember the draft new rules you posted back then and how every World would have its general Outpost perk, even if I can't see how it would work?

Would you mind explaining your general concept for Outposts? What would an Outpost of, say, Rim entail.

And speaking of which, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing your revamps of the earlier worlds in particular.
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>>43694151
Does Ancestral Awakening mean you're a Sensei?
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>>43700328
The idea behind outposts is bringing a bit of the World in question to wherever you're setting it up.

Take Rim for example, look at the theme and the effects that are prevalent across the World, then look to popular mythology for hints. Mechanically your Serfs wouldn't have the breeding restrictions in an Outpost that they have on other Worlds, and you might be able to play with the time difference to create some interesting effects. The land around one might find itself subtly shifting to be more encouraging of Conan-esque adventure, with the wildlife getting just a little bit primeval.

The hidden elf village that time passes so quickly in could be an Outpost, as could the surreal rabbit hole that leads to a place so like, but unlike Earth.
As far as Outposts go though, a Rim Outposts (different name for each one? Still an idea on the list of maybes) would be useful primarily for it being the site of a Gateway.
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>>43700164
>lose your memories
So it's just death. You die making the entire thing pointless.
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>>43700260
I can wait - I'm honestly looking forward to seeing what you come up with, and it'll probably help me with making items anyway. Take your time - I'll be here.

Also - gotta say, if you're talking about the world I think you are (Prison), I don't get the whole "oh fuck no" response either. I'd probably feel anxious rather than relaxed, especially if I was a newbie and had to keep constantly moving so it wouldn't grow over my feet, but I don't think it deserves the fear it gets.
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>>43694314
>Inquisition: Acolyte
Let's say I was an Arbites or something.
>Extraordinary Luck
>Blank
>Ancestral Awakening

I'm set for quite a while.
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>>43700576
Not the Prison, that place is supposed to put you on edge. I meant Kuiper. Between the TOSO, one anon freaking out about thinking that the webs of aggregate could eat entire stars whole, and the general fear of space/void a lot of people were torn on it.
I find the idea of just drifting in the stars to be a relaxing one, and it was that feeling that started the idea for Kuiper.

--

Eyes are getting heavy, I'm heading to bed.
I'll try to be more talkative in the hour or so I've got each day to check on the board, and spend it putting the pages and ideas together.
G'night /tg/.
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>>43700710
Ganbatte, Thrallherd-senpai
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>>43700477
I see, when you describe it that way.

I ask because I'm one of the fanworld anons, and have definitely given thought to how to blow my fanworlds up to 20 perks. Any insight from the original creator is useful on that front.

I'll be following progress too. Maybe even over email!
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Tweaked this a little based on what people told me.
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>>43700710
Ah, got it - I think I put 2 and 2 together and got 5. Anyway, I'm with you on Kuiper - the idea of swimming through the stars, or flying through them on wings of light, sounds extremely relaxing. Or invigorating, depending on how you go about it.

Anyway, sleep well. Turning in myself too.
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>>43695578
This CYOA was clearly made for me!
Running Free for the free truck!
Murders in the Rue Morgue, badass song and be Sherlock.
Total Eclipse
To Tame a Land, spice sounds delicious
Flash of the Blade, choosing knives
Heaven Can Wait, have a long happy life
The Clairvoyant, overpowered when combine with Heaven Can Wait, also my favorite song on the album.
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>>43701078
Might be an oversight.
>Move in with them
Live where they live, gotcha.
>or move to their world
Do they not live on their world? Is it just a different residence on that world?
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>>43685130
A bit late for this one, posting anyways.
Expedition: Paititi
Contact: Mio
Traveller: Pollinus Satch
Soldier: Sal Morgan
Doctor: Don Cephal
Archaeologists: All of them
Beasts: Hoover, Vara
Challenges: Treasure Thief B, Competition
Rewards: New You (Florence), Payday

Final Chances: 85% Success, 100%+ Survival Rate.
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>>43701203
I'm in Alagaesia
Double bending, I bend Water and Earth.
Fighting psychotic killer
Weapon is Alice Vorpal Blade

Well, should I encounter the killer, at least I have the abilities to confront him.
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>>43701235
Yeah, i meant to say that you either have them move in with you, or you can move to their world. I always wonder when i see mistakes like that in cyoa, like "how could they have missed this?" but i dont know man it just happens.
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Is Towergirls dead? I haven't seen a thread in a while.
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>>43701399
It has it's own board in 4x2chan but no idea why you are asking here. CYOA general would be the best place to ask.
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>>43701417
This is CYOA General, Anon.
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>>43701417

This IS CYOA general. I was just on the 4*2chan board and it's pretty dead.
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>>43701417
Ok I just went retarded there.
Why did I put that I am on CYOA general.
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>>43701429
>>43701430
Yeah I realized after I posted it. It must be because I've been up for a while I should go to sleep.
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>>43701436
>>43701447
YOU LIE!
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>>43699679
Mammalian for extra freakiness.
Increased Speed for chasing shit down, Tentacles for capturing stuff, Natural Weaponry because I want retractable spikes on my tentacles, and Bio Laser. It's badass.
Drawbacks are Rape and I'm fighting the Magical Girl Team. 5 boss token for me.
Boss abilities: Enhanced Regeneration, Napalm Breath, Freezing Breath, and Electric Discharge. Now I'm immune to a good portion of magical attacks. Nightmare Embodiment, so the tentacle rape is infinitely worse. Band of Mooks comes free. They're my gang-rape buddies.

Between my laser, elemental attacks, nightmare breath, and tentacles, I should be a fast, annoying, versatile enemy that is not to be underestimated.
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>>43695206
Why not
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>>43701078
The mystery box text is still impossible to spot unless you know it's there
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>>43701088
Shouldn't ??? Be changed so she uses mind control WITHOUT a your consent?
And I have to pick Devourer. She's adorabke, even if the "I'm the only joy in her life" line is creepy
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>>43701852
Would you prefer it that way? If so, why?
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Little Girl Time!

Also I didn't get to say this in the last thread but I just wanna thank everyone who comment on Black, White, Pink, Blue, Red post
That input really helped.
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>>43702163
>she may take to using mind control with your consent
The sentence just doesn't make sense to me. It feels like you're trying to go two directions at once:
Either you ask her to help you stop these thoughts (consent), or she uses mind control on you to nudge you away from those bad thoughts (no consent).
Which is it - are you asking her to help you stop these thoughts because you do love her but have no control over your thoughts, or is she sad you have these thoughts and eliminates them from your mind?
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>>43697203
What happened?
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>>43700501
Yeah, it was pretty good up until that point. It wasn't your usual power fantasy with no drawbacks and a billion points to do whatever, which was nice, but the whole "lose your memories" thing just soured it for me. Without your past experiences to shape you, you're pretty much a completely different person.
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>>43702360
It fell apart. From what I've heard there was talent there, but also a lot of bad writers/programmers and drama galore. Had lots of potential, but most of it was dreams backed up by 1 or 2 good artists/writers.
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>>43695341
Killy, definitely.

I'll just go around and live my life, and kill those who come after me.
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>>43701078
>>43701088
what are the tweaks?
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>>43702686
Added pola's age, clarified the part about whether they are moving in with you or you are moving in with them even though i fucked up that sentence in the cyoa, added little aspects of them. The people that probably got most changed for this are the two mystery ones, so i don't blame you if you can't really see the changes.
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>>43702706
I'm sticking with Maie. We'll fight together til the end. Though I'd like to return to Earth and wipe out isosilez and the other groups of scum.

Wonder what faction Maie is part of.
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>>43695578
Newer albums when?
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>>43702798
>pokemon
Goddamit, and it started so well... Not even Adam Jensen package outweighs that.
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>>43701078
What type of royalty is Pola parents? Duke, Archduke, King, Baron?

How feudal are we talking for Vatryllal? What is she in society?
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>>43702870
Are you seriously asking or do you mean for me to put that into the cyoa? If you're asking, i'd say Pola's parents are most likely King and Queen of whatever country they inhabit, and that Vatryllal is a not-poor-but-not-rich farmer's daughter in a sort of Medieval Europe or Feudal Japan society.
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>>43702537
Yeah it was basically one decent artist, one or two decent programmers, and a horde of entitled idea guys.

>Ok, this game basically needs to be an RPGMaker game.
>But we're not going to use RPGMaker.
>Why doesn't someone just make us a full game engine? It can't be that hard!
>I don't care if RPGMaker can do literally everything I want, it sucks!

Basically every aspect of it was plagued by "my ideas are great and if someone has different ideas I'll get upset!" The whole catgirl design drama was a great example of that, people would get mad no matter how often it was redesigned even though it was 100% wasted time.
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>>43701417
>>43701436
>>43701447
>the city of you
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>>43702811
When i get around to it.
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>>43694057
I can't believe you saved that cyoa, I literally spent 3 minutes on it like 2 months ago and no one commented on it.
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>>43702905
Unfortunate, but I guess to be expected. Broquest probably wasn't even the best idea to fail here. Not everyone can do what 4Leaf Studios was able to do.
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>>43694057
I'm looking for an old PDF, I think it was called 'Super Powered CYOA' maybe about 20 pages long.
There's an older version available on reddit, but I'm after the newer.
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>>43695931
The sad thing is-these chumps are woefully underpowered against certain CYOAs.

Like say-any CYOA than makes you into a literal god above mere physical harm.

Or Conduit, where niggas can reincarnate and hurt you from half a universe away. Also, [spoier]something something prison meisters[/spoiler]

Or any fetish CYOA with a "you can mindbreak anybody" option.
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>>43702944
Don't Rest Your Head CYOA when?
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>>43703048
I thought it was pretty funny so I saved it. I've posted it a couple times and so have a few others so people did like it even if the original posting didn't get any comments.
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>>43703060
Only one I have over 10 pages is the Superpower Store? Not sure if that's the one you want or not.
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>>43701088
Hey anon, I found a pic of the waifu on the right's true form.
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>>43703136
Why is God afraid of being shot?
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>>43703167
Because God's an idiot who a) created an Angel of Death with a sword capable of killing anything in existence-even Him, apparently-and then b) not doing jack diddly squat when the Angel of Death decided to retire, melt down his sword into a pair of pistols and appoint a random damned soul as the Saint of Killers. Nigga becomes literally indestructible.

He killed the Devil and threatened the Angel of Death at gunpoint on his way out of Hell right after his appointment.

He goes on to shoot every angel in Heaven dead.

Like I said. God's an idiot.
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>>43703183
But wait... Wouldn't the bullets need to be made from the magic sword in order to work?
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>>43703167
If he shoots that means he wants him gone and god is clearly insecure about that kind of stuff.
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>>43703193
Unfortunately he never runs out of bullets. His only real limitation is how quickly he can draw his guns.

...

...look, it's Old Testament reality warping. I figured science was kill around the time another guy told some asshole to go fuck themself, and they literally complied.
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>>43703126
Maybe I should mess with it or make something similar that is slightly more playable
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>>43703183

God, at the time, is not on his throne. It seems to be his position rather than his person that holds much of the power. Enthroned he could have done much to help the Saint - but nothing the Saint wanted. Off the throne he's vulnerable.

God left his throne because he feared another, still more terrible threat - the creature Genesis, a hybrid monstrosity as powerful as God himself.
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>>43703167
In Preacher, God is only omnipotent when he's sitting on his throne (which he isn't at that point). The Saint of Killers kills he shoots with no exceptions except Cassidy for some reason and can also survive anything without a scratch (pic related, his reaction after facetanking a nuke).
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>>43703258
>kills he shoots
kills anything he shoots*
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>>43703258
so he's a bullshit edgelord character who's more powerful than the creator of everything (when said creator isn't on a throne), and God is too stupid to realize this and just remove him.
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>>43703275
Yes.

Preacher is a pretty cool comic, but at its core it's just "god sucks and religion is stupid" over and over again.
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>>43703275

God had already vacated the throne for fear of the newborn monster Genesis. Responding to this crisis, the angels awoke the Saint from sleep and ordered him to hunt down and kill Genesis and the human host it had implanted into.

The Saint failed in this mission, and in doing so learned that God was missing. Knowing his orders were not from God he considered himself free to act from then on. This finally led to the execution of God.
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>>43703275
Exactly.
>>43703294
There's a reason I don't read comics.
>>43703295
>The Saint failed in this mission, and in doing so learned that God was missing. Knowing his orders were not from God he considered himself free to act from then on. This finally led to the execution of God.
That is the most retarded thought process I've ever seen.
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>>43703258
In all fairness, I recall Ennis mentioned that Cassidy surviving was a mistake he forgot about at the time when he just came up with the idea of the Saint of Killers.

So in other words, his plot armour was too strong.

>>43703254
You'd think face with that threat, he'd sit his ass firmly down on his throne and reach through the space-time continuum to prevent an angel and demon from fucking, or just magic some legs on the throne to walk away on it.

But no. Instead, He flipped the fuck out and ran away from his problems, which seems to be a recurring character flaw.

>>43703275
To be fair, a lot of dudes in the comic are edgelords of one stripe or another. Some of them are just classier about it than others.

Cassidy for example is simultaneously a self-destructive parasite (socially, as well as a vampire) who ruins the lives of everyone around him by accident, spite and wilful self-ignorance and also a loyal bro who genuinely wants the best for his friends.
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>>43703322
It doesn't help the whole reason why he shoots God is because his wife and child were killed by bandits back when he was human.

Which is apparently God's fault because he made the universe and as mentioned in the earlier pic, has been purposefully introducing evil into creation to test humanity into loving Him.
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>>43703322
>There's a reason I don't read comics.
Eh, some of them are quite good. There's just a lot of shit ones. Preacher isn't even bad if you ignore the heavy-handed religion bashing that's more or less one of Ennis' trademarks.

Some of his other stories push it even further, like Wormwood, which has has an Australian pope addicted to drugs and whores, Jesus as a really nice, but brain-damaged guy and God as a literal retard who spends most of his time masturbating.
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>>43703359
Ennis in general is...not who I'd point at as a good example of comics. I'd recommend Arkham Asylum: A Serious House on Serious Earth for the more surreally inclined, Hellboy, Locke & Key, the Endless (which features nigh-omnipotent characters but gives them actual character arcs and subtly explored flaws) as well as its spinoff Lucifer (which takes a much more nuanced look at the whole rebelling against God thing, especialy since the poor bastard's whole character arc was building up to the revelation that God is literally omnipotent, planned everything, only introduced a tiny bit of uncertainty because He wanted some and Lucifer never had a chance to escape His presence in the first place; the whole reason he ended up in Hell was because God was trying to understand and accomodate His son)
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Oh yeah and-in the interest of upholding the pretense of staying on topic, have a CYOA vaguely related to our current discussion.
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>>43703400
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Also, this.
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>>43703385
Yeah I wasn't saying Ennis is good (though some of his stuff is, like Hitman or much of his Hellblazer run), just that hating on religion is kind of his thing.
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>>43703048
LOL I can't believe you saved this, I actually made this as a joke and never actually balanced anything
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>>43703960
Can you create software copies of Partner III?
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>>43704005
I think she'd have to be okay with it. Might be easier to just have her run multi-string.
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>>43704044
I'm thinking making a backup of her is kind of exploitable in combination with Trade III or IV, which makes up for the fact that she's otherwise of really limited use outside of setting III and maybe IV.

For example it would be neat to copy her, trade the copy for the sexbot, then have her take over the sexbot's body by overwriting the original software. She gets a body, and I get a more useful companion.

I'd choose Partner IV either way, but this seemed like a cool idea.
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>>43704044
>>43704102
Oh and speaking of Partner IV, how many years would it take for her to turn 18? Like, would she be 18 by the time the Trade becomes available?
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>>43701078
>Fuck buddies
>Platonic
>Platonic sex

I think I know what you're going for, but you might want to work on the wording
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>>43694057
Why not do what every other third world country does? Hire a banana booth babe, use the rest of the money to pay for a video camera and bribes to get her to record amateur porn. Westerners love poorly shot porn with desperate trashy girls who need to humiliate themselves on camera to feed their families.

I've seen that banana documentary. It's barely less cutthroat than the drug trade.
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>>43703183
To be fair, God being kind of a jackass with no fucking idea of what he's actually doing is more or less the theme of Preacher. I mean, the entire quest is to find God and make him answer for doing so much stupid shit, the angels we see are massive shitheads, Jesus' relative is a retard who shits himself, and the secret church organization is horribly corrupt and decadent. At least having the Saint of Killers around worked out great for God right up until the end, so it was probably one of his lesser mistakes over the course of the story.
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>>43704191
>Westerners love
i don't
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>>43695206
I prefer this version. More concise, funnier, nice art.
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>>43695378
>vague opening.
Egh. If you're going to write a plot spiel to a cyoa actually make it specific, or don't bother. People can make their own vague setting to fit the rules. OP's cyoa funnily enough does an opening spiel perfectly.
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>>43695578
I don't listen to much Maiden, but I'll tell Caught Somewhere in Time and Can I Play With Madness any day of the week. I like to think the oracle is Graham Chapman's ghost.

Also, I live in the same town as Janick Gers. Does that count for a bonus?
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>>43704284

The point of creating the Saint wasn't about God's security anyway. It's not that God was making a plan for a hitman to protect him and didn't think it through. God was perfectly secure. Sitting on his throne of eternity, surrounded by devoted seraphim worshipping night and day, no worries.

It's this adoration, this worship, that God likes. First the angels. Beings separate from himself who were perfectly good and would certainly adore God.

Then Man. With free will and the choice of good and evil, and all that meant. Triggered the war in heaven. The fall of the angels. He wanted the adoration of beings who had the choice to hate him. It means more to him that way.

Then the Saint. A man endowed with the power to kill anyone, anything - even God himself, given the right conditions. To be loved and adored again, this time by a being with the choice not to, and every reason not to, and the power to retaliate meaningfully - it's an even bigger thrill.

Then Genesis. The point at which God's addictive behaviour, this seeking of love from ever more dangerous places, goes too far, and he spawns a monster truly as powerful as himself, and runs away.
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>>43695931
Define weapon for path of the warrior. I'd use "anything the chosen can carry in two-hands and has used to kill another human".

How do blasts of solar fire work? Do you have to generate charge from exposure to daylight? How is this demonic?

How long does it take for the creator to
generate a waterstorm? Does the lightning have to come from a cloud or can the sky by clear?

My choices for now are Emperor and Titan. Giant beloved reincarnator are GO.
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>>43696675
>Druid
>Warrior Girl
>Foreign Catgirl
>Family Pet
KAWAII-DESU COMPANY FORM UP!!!
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>>43695206
>Rolled 937
>Skyrim
>Four points in Bending
>Four points in Companions
>Last point for 5bux an hour
>Mythological Beast is my BBEG
>Necromancy powers

I am Dragonborn, or close enough since I've got to kill Alduin anyway. And if I'm not actually a Dovahkin, not a problem. One of my party members is.
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>>43704741
>kawaii party
>takes the warrior over the cleric

0/10
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>>43696675
>The Cheerful Druid
>Lifelong Warrior Friend
>Seasoned Veteran Relative
>Experienced Warrior Girl
And I will be the resident Red Mage Plus:
I seek to master all of the magic so that I can heal my Warrior bro.
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I am >>43697916 , not the author

If I were writing definitions, I'd set the parameters like so:

Path of the Warrior
* Weapon must be man-portable
* Weapon must be something the IRL military could provide to a soldier if it felt the need

Path of the Abyss:
* You must specify a feature you can see at the target location that is smaller than 1m
* You travel at the speed of light

Path of the Demon:
* Blasts count as sunlight when that would be beneficial
* Fire blasts something like this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZ1PpM4DAGQ&t=40s
* No charging necessary or possible

>>43704504
Creator:
* Storms grow twice as fast as the fastest natural speed. In other words, a hurricane (typhoon) takes 24 hours from a clear sky, or 12 hours from thunderstorms
* Lightning can come from a clear sky
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>>43704882
>Distant Future

>Firearms -1
>Lods Emone -3
>Companions -4

>Final Boss Corp. Leader
Probably the guy that put in the Blacklight.

>Blacklight Virus
I don't think I'll ever put this to use, even though it is tempting.
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>>43699613
Dominator (6/12) (+2 Minion Choices)
After the End
Cloudform (5/12)
Lord of Hosts (Free)
Pillar of Strength (4/12)
Living Fog (3/12)
Tentacles (2/12)
Day or Night (1/12)
Bolt (0/12)
Battle, Fear, Souls, Underworld (0/8)
Prophet: Child
Humanoid x2
Humanoid #1: Form (Default I guess? Humanoid), Affinity: Life (1/9) Skill: Healer (Free) Skill: Toughness (2/9) Skill: Speed (3/9) Skill: Attraction (4/9) Skill: Spawner (5/9) Skill: Ghostly (6/9) Skill: Vampiric (7/9) Equipment: Armor (8/9) Equipment: Smiting (9/9)
Humanoid #2: Form: Great Size (1/9) Affinity: Decay (2/9) Skill: Rage (Free) Skill: Toughness (3/9) Skill: Perpetual (4/9) Skill: Composite (5/9) Skill: Terror (6/9) Skill: Get Back up (7/9) Skill: Spawner (8/9) Equip: Armor (9/9)
The Battlefield (0/0)
Organic, Halls of the Gods, Changer of Forms, Realm Guardians, Gladiators, Citadel, Restoration Cycle, Dungeons

A lone child wanders into the camp of grizzled and weary survivors, Grinning ear to ear and lugging a crate of food. She sits quietly at the center of camp and waits for someone to approach, And then explains patiently that her master would gladly ensure they live happily for a simple fee, Their souls. A thick fog descends upon the camp around this time and a beautiful woman walks out to reinforce the childs words 'Quite happy indeed'.
If they agree? They have food and protection provided to them, Even a few beautiful women. If they don't...Then they live a much shorter life full of fear as gigantic beasts rear out of the shadows and pick them off one by one while their weapons fall apart in their hands.
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>>43704900
Okay, so is there any other limitation on sky lightning? Once a day, once per hour?

Hurricans and sea-storms are natural to some parts of the world but not to others. Does the rate change depending on location? Can I generate a typhoon off the coast of England at twice the rate one grows in India?
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>>43705708
You're on earth as Adam Jensen against a robot army. You have 7 points to spend. Just shy of Varia Suit purchase.

>>43705782
You're also Adam Jensen, this time in the Fallout Wasteland against a genetically-engineered super-corporation. 7 points for you.

What do you do?
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>>43706313
I moiself am a Vampire in the Citadel from Mass effect against a Dragon and his faggy cult. I have 3 points to spend.

I purchase the Hypermetal Axe and Technical Mastery. I prowl around the setting killing or converting cool aliens to act as my party and scoot around. I follow the activities of the cult and amass weapons to fight the space dragon.

Now all I need is a DM and some friends willing to be my minions. They'd be the proper main characters in truth, I'll just be the overpowered plot charismatic plot device.
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>>43696407
Yes. And plenty of rolls with no response because they didn't get what they want.
Rolling is cancer.
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>>43706628
Cry harder and see if the mods care.
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>>43705625
The time for storms is based on a google search for "how fast can a hurricane form?", and the answer I got was, "48 hours, or one day if there are already storms"

Spontaneous bolts... how about "once per three seconds". slightly more than twice as fast as this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKMdYbOfFzI
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>>43707372
That shit is pretty fucking powerful! It's not completely unbalanced but it's making Demon and Titan look weak. Unless Pyrokinesis means flame conjuriong or something, and Berserker Fury means "you are the Incredible Hulk".
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>>43706450
>actually deleted your roll post
That's terrible. Way to prove >>43706628 right.
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>>43707503
My ruling of Demon gets continuous fire over a wide area, whereas the storm-guy gets to drop a lightning bolt on one target every three seconds.

I suppose there's a question of whether lightning can *miss*, and if it can't, I could see it being slowed down.

Also, I had forgotten that your objective primarily involves single-target DPS. Being able to hit a hundred people at once isn't as relevant as I had been assuming.
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>>43707590
Wait, are you not the creator of the CYOA? You can't just give answers as if they're standing, you have to state it's your judgement.
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>>43707803
Not that anon, but see >>43704900
RTFT, bro.
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Is there a consensus on using watermarked images in CYOA's?
I've found some that are great, but those silly watermarks are being ugly
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>>43707828
I didn't read the top of the past as it wasn't relevant to me. Nevermind, normal misunderstanding.

My stance is that a tempest or typhoon is a big fucking deal, and should take a day's meditation in location to bring it about. Once in place the Creator can direct it but do little to diminish it; however without the Creator's sustenance it will disperse eventually. Lightning can be conjured once without conducive weather; with conducive weather it can be brought about multiple times a minute and with good accuracy.

For others:

Demon: Solar flares are powerful bright burning blasts that blind and destroy. The user can store up to fifteen such charges, which about 4 hours of strong sunlight to 12 hours of overcast daylight to build. Up to three can be released back-to-back or at once as a powerful blast, then about half an hour must pass. Pyrokinesis is just heat manipulation, and is more powerful the warmer the Demon and its environment. In a typical room-temperature situation the Demon can light a match-stick by touching it, and then guide the flame around the room swiftly without putting it out. The Demon can create powerful but short-lived anima from large fires like bonfires, and can wreak havoc with a furnace.

Warrior: repeating my earlier input, the Warrior can summon any object that it can carry with two hands without immediate strain with which it has killed another human. It immediately knows how to use any such implement. Using ammunition-based weapons and explosives temperorally diminishes the Warrior's regeneration if spammed. The Warrior can regenerate if all three of his heart, lungs and nervous ganglia are intact and connected with vessels and nerves etc.. He can regenerate beyond the requirements of nutrition but will be weak until he eats.

(funnily enough, I've actually not eaten anything for three days. remarkably I feel already, but then I haven't regrown any limbs)

1/2
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>>43708885
Abyss: Teleportation is accurate proportionate to visible perception. Examples include teleportation to a location enveloped in mist, behind frosted or stained glass, glimpsed on the other side of a hedgerow or very far away. Telescopes can aleviate x-axis accuracy but not z-axis; ie you will end up in a straight line from where you aimed but not necessarily as far or further than intended.

Titan: Replace beserker rage with "eat rocks and metal, incorporate weapons into body". Basically become a hypervorous inorganic assimilator.

Eagle: Perfect accuracy entails extreme sensory acuity and physical coordination. Supersonic flight can be used to speed up ground travel if desired, though it's generally less efficient.

Got no questions, modifications or clarifications for Prophet or Emperor. Them's sweet. I'm still goign with Emperor Titan.
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>>43700114
If you're referring to the prison meister thing - I thought you displayed as much patience as can be expected of a human under the circumstances. I still think very fondly of your setting from time to time.
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>>43700710
Kuipur is an interesting and peaceful setting, but as a conduit I'd be so suspicious of people who hang out there. I'd keep expecting that one guy to drop an asteroid on my burgeoning serf empire.
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>>43703960
Wait, this is different from the version I know of...
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I'll post some of the other images since a few people apparently don't know what this is.
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>>43702231
>Age: 18
>Crippled [Horrific Scars] (+2)
>Bust the Bullies (6)
>SECONDARY: Girl Power (+4)
>Modern Suburban Tokyo (0)
>Size (2)
>Athleticism (3)
>Naptime Desk (0)
>Golden Star Staff [LOS teleport] (4)
>Super Sugar Candy (4)
>Cool Snow Globe (2)
>Little Steel Blade (3)
>Tanaka (1)
>Kasumi (1)

Psychotic Makoto mode engaged. I'd prefer to go 14, but don't want to be 14 forever, so 18. Don't care all that much about hair or eye color - probably dark hair, don't care about eyes. Will be HUGE. Super tall. 'Talented.' Sure, I've got a bit of a violence problem and I can get overexcited, but the emotional control from the globe will help me tamp down on those urges when they aren't needed. Always remember to carry around a bunch of candy to sate those sugar cravings. Gotta keep that staff safe.

Our school is plagued by bullies and our martial arts team is pathetic. The solution to one of these problems lies with the other. Tanaka and I become a two-girl wrecking crew, beating the shit out of bullies and then offering them the choice of joining the martial arts team or getting beaten some more. Those that only pretend to take the offer get fucked with yandere sneaky powers and a LOS teleport into their room at night. Just a not-so-friendly reminder that I can be anywhere, at any time, and end them. Let the reins go on my violent side a little more for these intimidation plays. Word will get around. Bullies will eventually be forced to either try to trap me or give up preemptively.

With my reach, athleticism, unfailing stamina and Tanaka and Kasumi's help, I'm likely to be standout athlete anyway, but I want to build up the team into protectors that can extend my anti-bully beating policy. The teachers like me, but we also have Kasumi help shield us from administrative retribution because we help the school AND the team.

Hajimemashite, Kobayashi Hitomi desu.
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>>43710911
Y'know I always saw all these images and figured there had to be something behind it all.

Seeing and hearing the story behind all this work makes me pretty damn disappointed that nothing came from it, or that the world and character relations aren't better documented.

I'd love to introduce some of these dudes into a campaign as either characters I play or NPC/enemies my players run into.
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This thread is bananas.
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>>43711113
Noice
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Rolled 6, 8, 6 = 20 (3d10)

>>43704377
Roll?
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>>43711043
Here are the other two images. I got distracted and forgot to post them.
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>>43699661
>>43699613
Corruptor
World of Mysteries

Cloud Form
Entropic
Illusionist
Face of Terror
Wrathful Avatar

Living Fog

Worship
Fear
Sacrifice
Monuments

Cultist

Mutation (free)
Resilience
Restructure

Terrain Warp
Whispers

Humanoid
Form-Transformation
Form-Undead (free)
Affinity-Decay
Skill-Attraction (free)
Skill-Flight
Skill-Speed
Skill-Terror
Skill-Ghostly
Skill-Invisibility

Fearful men will build great altars on the edge of the twisted lands to appease the hungry fog, and with each sacrifice the mists roll further afield. The chosen among them will be known by the voice of the wind, and in time they shall be twisted to match the dominion of their god.

From the fog will form the faces of the dead, and their beauty will be terrible to behold. The foolish will seek them with longing in their hearts, and the wise will flee in fear. They will dart through the air on the panicked breaths of their prey, flitting from vision in the corners of widened eyes, and their touch will bear the rot of the grave.

Spook levels are off the charts, somebody send help oh god.
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>>43711496
I like these but I feel there's some neutral change in the third rank Thief and Mage trees rather than upgrade. A basic binary tree would work better I reckon.
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>>43694233
I don't see why Cybernetic Limbs can't be taken with Amputee if you take Prosthetics as well. No limbs while I'm there, new shiny robot limbs when I leave.
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Getting somewhere.
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>>43712323
The end part.
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>>43712323
>>43712358
A little difficult to read.
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>>43700189
I dont ususally come here, but i really enjoyed this CYOA. Thanks
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>>43712358
>White Queen wants war AND peace with the Queen of Hearts
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>>43713609
She wants to read a book with her?
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>>43713659
aww, cute.
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>>43712323
>>43712358
>A Witch's Nightmare
>The Wine, The Worker, & The Witch
>Valkyrie Rising
In this order.

Hard+ mode for the first one, use allies gained to clear Critical for the next 2.
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>>43713609
She's tsundere, obviously.
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>>43701078
And with the tweaks and changes...

Still Xam. Definitely Xam. Xam forever.

Though now that the choice of living arrangements is made clear, I think moving to her home world would turn out better than the other way around. Let's just ignore the "OMG Aliens!" shitstorm and government experimentation issue that'd result from ANY of the girls coming to earth. Bottom line is, she doesn't appear to have any marketable skills OTHER than being a good lay, or possibly drug dealing, so her lifestyle would be pretty hard to afford most places on earth. We'd have to live someplace like Vegas, or the hip parts of Tokyo, etc. and she'd have to pay the rent as an escort or something. In which case, what's the benefit of actually staying here if I'd have to move to a town like that anyways? But if I went over there, she can keep doing whatever it is she does, and myself on the other hand can brush up on the 100 years of computer tech I missed out on and become a game dev or something over there. Most of the underlying principles of design will stay the same. Also, if I move over there, I can get a flying car. Fuck yeah!


Side note: For all those people picking Pola, getting fucked up the ass by a Loli dom's lizard tail might seem peachy to you, but look at that picture again. That tail has fucking SPIKES on it. You get pegged with that fucker and you'll be bleeding for days if you manage to survive.
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>>43701078
>maie
not into robots
>ur'scha
don't wanna be experimented on
>xam
no commitment
>pola
nice girl but a bit too young for my tastes
>vatryllal
not into feudal
>lilly
best girl 11/10
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>>43713609
The US wants peace in the middle east and yet...?
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>>43715733
I'd put a hole in the skirt, probably with elastic.
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>>43715892
I'd dock the tail.
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>>43715733
Split the skirt in half at the back, with buttons to re-attach the halves below the tail.
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>>43695479
This is fun, but broken. I can time stop, make it permanent, then kill all of the other mages methodically. Grab arcane encryption so no one can beat me to it. Many other OP combinations exist if this one is disallowed; the language for dispell needs to be clarified.
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>>43708773
Some people use them. if its only a single image or so, you can post it and ask if someone could remove the watermark, though if they don't then just use it or find another image.
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Back for an hour till the meds kick in.

>>43710327
I flipped a bit over the whole 'it's an OP non-choice' bit since I have tried to keep such things out of my work. Glad that you enjoy the worldbuilding.

>>43710403
Depends, are you one of the people hanging out in Kuiper? One of the things I plan to add as a side note is a sensitivity to the Warp effects, so you'd be able to detect one starting and its general aim if it was crossing your path.
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>>43712323
Beat up the healer and steal her pet goo? That's messed up lol. More i read the more I think "Easy Mode' should be renamed "Dick Mode"
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>>43716883
Or "Lazy mode"
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>>43716883
Better would be for her to follow you on adventures.
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>>43716883
Will the fox spirit ever grow up to be a month spirit? Is she shooting for becoming a year spirit or does she have grand designs and dreams of being a century spirit?

The above tongue in cheek sentence is to inform you that she is a Weak spirit not a week spirit.
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>>43713106
The discussion threads were really cool. You should go archive-diving for them sometime. There's a lot of hidden stuff to the lore and plenty of cool theories came up.
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>>43715733
>you can see her butt
I like this solution.

>>43715958
Mot realistic, probably.
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>>43699613
Warrior

World- City of the Gods. Let's turn their peace into eternal war!

-Form
Demonforged (Free)
Earthform
Wrathful Avatar
Pillar of Strength
Pillar of Hope, combined that makes 400% more time for combat!
Twin Threats, woohoo, twice as much fighting!
Lord of Hosts

-God Powers
Firestorm (Free)
Fissure
Bolt
Area Banish (Plan is to Banish enemies for a while so I can regroup and gather reinforcements while they are banished)

-Empowerment
Battle (Free)
Underworld, for eternities of endless slaughter

-Prophet
Leader. Sadly Prohpet doesn't seem so useful in a city of Gods.

-Divine Gifts
Resilience

-Dominion
Free avatar

-Minions
LESSER
Insectoid Form
Affinity- Earth
Skill- Rage
Power- Divine Focus, Earthquakes will turn the city to dust

-Second Minion
HUMANOID
Affinity- Fire
Affinity- Lightning
Skill- Rage (Free)
Skill- Speed
Skill- Toughness- they won't fear death, and won't hesitate to sacrifice thmeselves
Skill- Overcharge
Power-Divine Focus

-Underworld
Type: Judgement
Cloudlands
Gladiators
Servants
Citadel

Those who fight most bravely in the arena can go to the Citadel for another chance at life. Servants are available to anyone who isn't battling at the moment. I care for my followers, and servants seems like the only real way to give back to them, other than Citadel, of course.
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>>43712323
>>43712358
>You have no powers except for immortality
>You cannot gain any powers, only titles, land, and allies
>Victory would mean that you lose the only thing that made you unique, back into a regular, powerless human, the only difference being that you have a couple of assets you can toy around with for a few more decades until you die a mortal's death
>An average anon, with only few menial skills to speak of, with far inferior physical, mental and magical attributes compared to races of dragons, demons, sorcerers who can probably live for thousands of years, just as a even bigger fuck you when you lose your immortality
>The human races are supremely advanced, with technology that surpass anything the Waking World has to offer

At least give us a body with physical and magical talents that could realistically kill dragons before the number of respawn reach triple digits.
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>>43718937
Powers and abilities are for pussies. Not really.

Yeah I'm figuring out a way to make good, not OP and not too weak abilities + other stuff (companions, areas, mounts, gears) to expand the Quest CYOA further.
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>>43703275
>Retard edgelord the comic
kek, that does sound pretty damn stupid
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