All new, All different! Edition
>Previously on Agents of Hydra
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27491494/#q27491494
Hey there, true believers! This is the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing, the Spectacular, the Sensational Spider-Woman! Dump your greens, art, and everything else mlp and superhero related here.
Excelsior!
>Pastebin list
Voidborn
http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x (in a coma)
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon - http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY (fucked off)
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V (rest in pepperoni)
>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/6Izcp-9naQo
Ok we have a new thread. You can update now.
>No dead writters.
We Cancerverse now.
>>27536484
I'll do an update later
>>27536484
I'll work on a new Issue. Just gotta decide how quickly I want to start ramping things up.
I don't want to rush things and leave people dissatisfied.
Well alright spidershim thread. You've finally got my attention. Before I dive right into your greens and eventually find myself lurking here, are there any reccomended stories?
Or possibly ones with the antagonist as the main character?
>Inb4 spoon feeding
Just asking for a place to start
>>27537422
Shocker and Void are the only ones with antagonist MCs, and Void is the only one that's competent about it
>>27537422
I'll flat out say to start with Beans, Shocker for funnies, Red for feels, and then our newer writers (myself included) in any order you like.
As far as I know, none of ours are done.
>>27537656 is correct, though calling Shocker a villain is a bit of a stretch.
Uh, bump, I guess?
>>27538124
An just like that I'm left wondering if lady-venom and Mania are comfy to their other part.
>>27538142
>if lady-venom and Mania are comfy to their other part.
??
home sick, so I should have had the time to write
yeah, but also no motivation
>>27538176
I think they mean is Venom comfy to have on your skin, or some shit like that
>>27538197
Oh. It's probably startling to have at first, but afterwards?
Comfy City, Population 2
Also, does wearing a symbiote mean that the two of you are holding hands 24/7?
>>27538226
...my god Symbiotes are pure lewdness
>>27538232
Infinite hand-holding and unconditional love?
Symbiotes a best
>>27538226
I'm curious to what a symbiote feels like.
Also got a crap load of inspiration for a fight scene, so gonna watch the scene and hopefully make a good fight.
>>27538290
I like to think that it feels like being underwater
I made a thing.
http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
>>27538698
yaaaay!
>>27538567
Makes sense, for some reason i was thinking it would be a combination of latex and jello.
For some strange reason
>>27538698
A THING!
>Going through the various writers pastebins to see what I've missed.
>Click Roommate's.
>404.
Is it a bad thing if I feel like this is an improvement?
I LIVE
I'll do a lot of story tonight to make up for the fact that I'm taking a three day vacation (no, not porn ban, ya goofs, actual IRL vacation where I won't have internet)
>>27539249
If you are going to bail for 3 days then take the chance and post porn.
>>27538286
Quoting Nova as he is being forced by Venom:
>"IT'S IN MY PANTS! AHH! OOh~!"
>>27539512
When?
>>27539602
Ultimate Spiderman S1E04
>>27539657
Thanks.
>"Shh, no tears. Just dreams now"
The "Ooh" didn't as lilted as I thought but it's probably because panic took the big part. It's kids television, so they probably wanted to stealthily get across that being Venom'd is a bit of a sensual/sybaritic deal to the older audience.
writing lewds
and I'll be posting them here instead of in pastebin, where they'll go afterwards
>>27539880*didn't sound as lilted
>Be Sunset Shimmer
>Known to the population of Canterlot City as Spider-Woman
>Hero, Menace, and Heartbreaker
>Okay, maybe just the first two
"Gotta focus"
>You shake your head as you swing through the air in your brand new black suit
>Lately, you've been feeling... off
>Maybe it's this weird, liquid suit, maybe it's some delayed side-effect of your spider powers, maybe it was bad sushi
>Whatever the reason, you've been feeling this... warmth
>It was tolerable at first, barely noticeable, even, but now?
>A wave of heat pulses through your body, starting from your groin and spreading out to the tips of your fingers, making you fumble and fire a panic THWIP that catches you just in time to no be street pizza
"Okay, that's it, I've got to take care of this"
>Launching another strand, you zip off into an alley way, sticking to the brickwork like you'd lay in bed
>As if reading your mind, the suit opens a gap between your thighs, exposing your shaved muff to the hot summer air
>Looking left and right to ensure your privacy, you immediately set about rubbing at your already wet lips, eyes closed as you try to focus on the sensation
>It's not enough...
>Without waiting you force a finger, and then another, into your hole roughly, pumping with an eagerness you hadn't felt since you were a filly going through your first heat
>You bite down on your lip, moving your fingers faster, rubbing at your clit desperately
>Your mind was hazy with need and that heat was blazing away inside you
>You couldn't focus, couldn't think, the need to cum dominating your mind
>The heat in your belly built up, swelling larger and larger and at its peak...
>Nothing
>Nothing!
>You were dripping like a broken faucet, on the cusp of orgasm, and it just wasn't coming
>....
>Pun not intended
"Agh, DAMMIT!"
>Your hand jerks away from your pussy and punches a decent hole in the wall behind you, sending a shower of dust and your own juices down onto the alley floor far below you
>cont
>>27540287
This better continue
>>27540287
...Go on.
>>27540753
I type slowly, also I'm working on, like, three things at once
patience
>>27540802
Same here. I meant It better not be a short post thing.
THAT'S MY THING
>>27540287
>Be Anon
>Be average, ordinary high-schooler taking a shortcut from school to home through an alley
>Be... sticky?
"The hell?"
>Dusting some powder and sticky droplets from your shoulders, you look up to see the cause and...
"Oh my god"
>That's Spider-Woman and her amazing cunt
>And...
>Holy shit
>She sees you
>You stare up at her, she stares up at you, and another, faint trickle leaks down her spread thighs,
>For a moment, nobody moves
>And then you turn and run back the way you came, half-formed apologies spilling from your lips
>Your feet make it as far as three, maybe three-and-a-half steps before something hits your back and you're lifted up into the air, your backpack left behind as the force of the pull jerks it from your fingers
>The sound you make as you're hoisted through the air is not particularly manly, but another THWIP fixes that
>Cold, wet goo covers your mouth, muting your panic as your momentum changes downwards and you land in a mass of sticky, black threads
>A spider web
>The webbing holds your arms down and your legs spread eagle and you know from the youtube videos that nobody not super-powered got out of these things
>A pressure behind you makes you tilt your head back to see her
>Spider-Woman, her slit still shown off to the world, crawling over to you on all fours
>Oh god, why was this hot?
"Mfff? Mmmhmmff? Nggh!"
>Your "words" stop when she places a sticky finger over the webbing covering your mouth
>"Shhhh"
>You shh
>Pleased, she keeps talking, leaving you time to ogle her figure
>"Want to help a hero out, big guy?"
>You nod
>"Thought so. See... I've got this itch I can't scratch, but I think you"
>Spidey boops your nose, making you crosseyed
>"have the tool..."
>Her booping finger traces down your chest to your pants, coming to rest on your zipper
>Oh boy
>"to help~"
>With a flourish, like a magician revealing a bouquet, the lusty hero fishes your unflowery cock from your jeans
>"And you definitely have the tool for the job~"
>>27541146
>cont
>>27541175
>cuntinue
>>27541175
>Continue
I have a quarter!
Gonna post tomorrow as I'm tired and don't want to post an incomplete green scene
>>27541611
We'll wait. Thanks for filling out the cliff instead of letting us hang.
>>27541175
>Be the incredibly horny Sunset Shimmer
>Be running entirely by the seat of your well-toned ass
>This was... not what you'd had planned
>But you were too far in, and honestly, you didn't want to stop
>Your whole body was on fire, a heat that only intensified once you got a good look at your prize
>Somehow, you knew that this dick would help quench your needs
>Only thing is, he isn't even hard
>With an angry glare at the offending, flaccid cock, you crawl over the nameless boy's face, , face to face with his prick before wrapping your silky hands around it and stroking
>His hips kick up in surprise but your webbing holds, leaving you free to try anything to get your new toy working
>You are Anon
>This is amazing
>But also fucking terrifying
>Spider-Woman is ohmygodshe'ssuckingyourdick
>Your boner betrays you, as it has so many times before
>You're a couple dozen feet in the air, tied up like a bug in a... net, getting head from a sex-crazed superhero
>Your cock reacts happily to its new warm, wet home
>All the while, Spider-Woman's legs are spread directly over your face, giving you a good look at her, well, goods
>Kinda-rape or not, you wished you could get a taste and return the favor she was giving you
>Abruptly, the tongue fun ends and your view clears, the shapely hero instead positioning her dangerous hips over your throbbing cock
>Wait, you aren't wearing a rubber
>Oh no
>Be Sunset
>Oh yes~
>Your hips drop and you
>Are Anon, seeing stars
>You try thrusting but ultimately, she's in complete control, bouncing like a madwoman
>Panting, breathy moans trill from her masked lips
>You're completely at her mercy and for some reason that puts you over the edge, grunting as you spill yourself into her
>....
>She's not stopping
>cont
>>27541658
>Be Spider-Slut
>You feel a bit of warmth and you don't care
>You aren't stopping until the fire in your belly is doused completely
>No matter what her says
>The suit you wear covers you, is even inside you, milking him in ways a normal hole couldn't, tendrils keeping him rock hard as you ride to your heart's content
>You are Anon
>Your prick is being... well, you don't even know how to describe it
>Something is keeping your dick hard, milking it as she uses you
>You try to thrash, to get away from the bizarre pleasure, but it's totally pointless
>You're not going to get away until she lets you
>If she lets you
>Time passes
>You aren't sure how much
>Minutes?
>Hours?
>She's relentless
>If anything, she's only gotten more energetic
>Your hips are going to be so bruised...
>you are...
"Fuck~!"
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>And you can feel it
>Finally
>Eyes shut, teeth clenched, you pound down onto your toy and tilt your head back, letting out a scream as you cum, your whole body shaking as wave after wave of relief crashes over you
>Be terrified Anon
>the last thing you see before you pass out is spider-Womans mask morph into a horrifying, toothy face and screech like a banshee
>It's too much
>Your body and mind give up as you join her in orgasm
>You are a couple, the pair of you guess
>Turns out that a hard enough orgasm unmasks a certain Spider-Woman while she sleeps
>And a certain walking cock is too terrified to say no when she tells him she had a good time and would like to see him again
>Holding hands, the maybe-rapist and her victim stroll through the park
>And a certain symbiote is pleased to find its bond something it couldn't supply on its own
>Besides, all that cum would be useful in making a symbiote just for him
>No one likes being alone
So, I guess that's my contribution
Pastebin's updated
Those text limits and my fucking slow typing are why I just prefer to put everything in one pastebin page, btw
Anyone else still alive?
>>27541814
Welp, another day, another great fap
>>27542236
Glad I helped you masturbate.
So... I'm sorry guys, no update this weekend, couldn't find it in me to write tonight and, like I said, I'll be gone over the weekend.
When I come back though I'll have LOADS of time to update.
>>27542494
Well FUCK you
But do have fun on your vacation, VB
We'll be here when you come back.
Well, not /right/ here, but in a similarly titled thread.
Probably.
>>27542494
have a good time. or don't idgaf
>>27541814
>>27538698
So. How is everyone doing.
>>27543897
*groans incoherently*
>>27543897
Silently panicking.
Anyway, it's 10pm and I need to get some sleep.
Maybe I'll actually be able to finish the next part of my story tomorrow.
'Night.
>>27543897
Slept like shit
But ready to face the day
>>27543897
Not doing to bad and i'm trying to get the next scene done for tonight
>>27544442
That's the spirit!
Currently writing a green for this thread. Not sure when it will be done but I hope the character I chose to do keeps people entertained
>Pic related
>>27545430
Am excite
Always good to gain a new writer
>>27545430
We can wait.
bermp
>>27536440
oky fuck this shit im caving in
what story should i read first? and what should be skiped?
>>27547235
glad to have more readers in our threads
>>27547235
Be warned if you read mine, there will be some mistakes in my green.
Read one of the others first
>>27547606
I started with yours. And I regret nothing!
>>27547684
Oh, how do you like it then?
>>27547701
Took me a while to understand what the fuck video energy was, but once the powerset was set I started liking it for the character interactions.
>>27547758
Understandable. I'm more or less winging it
>>27547758
>He hasn't played Second Son
>>27547235
>which should I read first
Shocker
>which should I skip
Roommate
>>27547787
>he's only played the good ones
>>27547787
If you ask me, Playstation is something that happens to people.
>>27547801
>PlayStation is something that happens to people
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, what?
LIVE
>>27548202
I'm starting to suspect you have a thing for Mania.
>>27548241
Don't we all?
>>27548263
Which character would be the best host for an MLP/Marvel version of Mania?
Moonlight Raven? Vinyl? I just want a character that would give her the right headspikes!
>>27548202
What would the symbiote costume feel like? And i mean when the girl becomes Venom/Mania
>>27548442
The slithering covering of the bonding, or the inside texture while you are inside?
>>27548463
Texture. I know from the 90s cartoon that it could change into regular clothes.
So that got me thinking of what the texture is of the suit itself
>>27548500
It can do so even in Earth-616, and each symbiote has access to a personal hammerspace. But to answer your question, they are indistiguishable from what they are mimicking, It took supersenses for someone to realize that spider-man's black suit webbing was organic. When they are in their suit form? Who knows! I like to think it feels like being incased in water at just the right temperature, and the exterior feels just like the skin of a ray.
Slightly spongy and soft, but unmistakeably alive.
>>27548241
YOU'RE RIGHT
>>27548442
I've said before, like you're breathing underwater.
>>27548576
Wrong idea my friend, i meant if someone were able to touch let's say Mania, what would they feel?
>>27548596
Oooh
Hm...
I must think... what would waifu feel like...
>>27548596
>>27548636
latex and lust
>>27548738
l-lewd...
>>27548738
Ok i can buy the latex part and love the thought. But lust, how do you feel lust?
>>27548820
>how do you feel lust?
ill tell you when you are older anon
>>27548820
throbbing warmth about to explode.
>>27548820
Lust it's an incontrolable want for something, I assume someone who has lived for a while with his/her symbiote would feel incomplete without it and would search through heaven and hell for it.
>>27548840
>>27548842
>Pic related
Come on guys.
>>27548842
>>27548840
Ok i walked into that one. And I'm 25.
Still the idea of the suit feeling like latex gives me a few ideas
>>27548858
What kind of ideas?
>>27549363
Sexy/rapey ideas if I use them correctly. The Symbiote may appear soon
Also update time and excuse the roughness of it.
>Be Anon.
>You more or less saved Spider-Woman’s life, you think.
>Backing away from the edge of the building, you spread your wings and flap them.
>As you flew, you could see the roads began to empty.
“Better get home.”
>Making a hard left onto Juno road as you saw a red and blue blur behind you but ignore it.
“Just a car or something.”
>Before you can blink, you see a white mask with pink outlined eyes.
> “Pull over buddy.”
>Spider shot a strand of web while in the middle of her flip and swings on it in front of you.
> “I need to bring you in for questioning.”
>You didn’t answer her as you did a barrel roll and flew in the other direction.
> “Hey, wait up.”
>Looking behind, you can see Spider-Woman trying to catch up with you.
“Gotta lose her.”
>You saw the school nearby and remembered one important fact.
>The old abandoned warehouse near the woods was a perfect place to lose this girl.
>You descend closer to the ground while flying towards the insane asylum.
“Try and follow me now, Spider-Woman.”
>Flying past the school, you glide toward the woods and down the open path.
>You could still see Spider-Woman swinging on her webs, trying to catch up to you.
>You try to gain more speed and distance by flapping your wings a bit more, getting closer to the asylum.
>>27549443
>You were nearing a destroyed wall when you feel something pull your left leg causing you to slow down a bit.
>Looking back you see a strand of web connecting you to the rapidly approaching Spider-Woman, feet first.
> “Got you.”
>You didn’t have time to dodge as practically flew at you, ready to dropkick you.
>The force of the kick sent you crashing through a partially destroyed wall and into a deserted hallway.
>You slowly get up from the floor and start to run down the hall.
>Pushing doors closed and jumping over wheelchairs to reach the end of the hallway and turn right to see Spider-Woman at the opposite end staring at you.
> “Don’t even think about it.”
“Don’t get in my way.”
>Running at each other, she jumps at you with her fist raised as you bend your right leg.
>She was able to hit your chest, causing you to stumble, as you kicked her, sending her against the ceiling.
>She stands up, or down in your perspective, as you regain your balance and kick her.
>She grabs your foot, holding on to it, as you jump and slam your other foot into her chest.
>You land on the floor while Spider-Woman falls off the ceiling and into a crumpled heap on the floor.
>You stagger to your feet and run towards the fallen hero, creating a sword in your hand and raised it over your head.
>With her just a few steps away, you move your arms forward bringing down your sword down in a frontal slash.
>She saw the blade coming and rolled to the side and jumped on the wall, avoiding the blade.
>She holds her hands out in front of her shot a web bullet at your hands, trapping them to your sword.
>You focus on cutting off the connection of your power to your arms, causing the gauntlets to fade and reveal your hands to the world with the web falling to the floor.
>The next second, the gauntlets return as the web falls to the ground.
“Gotta do better than that.”
>>27549468
>You turn to face her, while raising your hand and releasing a barrage of video bullets that she was able to dodge easily.
>While in the middle of the flip, you saw her hold both of her hands in front of her.
>Knowing what she was about to do, you grab a gurney and hold it like it's a shield as she fired a bunch of web bullets at you.
>Holding your hands together and behind your head, you create a glowing club.
“WHY WON'T YOU STAY…”
>You swing the club at your shield.
“DOWN!!!”
>The gurney is sent flying towards Spider-Woman as you run after it.
>She jumps over the gurney, doing a small flip.
> “You've got to do better…”
>You had an open palm just inches from her face.
> “Than that?”
>She didn't have time to think as you unleashed a barrage of bullets at her.
>At point blank range, none of the bullets missed hitting Spider-Woman.
>She then fell on floor and rolled to her side as the attack was finished.
>You don’t move, waiting to see what happens next but after a few moments Spider-Woman still didn’t move.
>You calmly move a bit closer to her, wondering if this was a trick but she just lays there.
>Stopping right next to her, you gently nudge her with your foot to get a reaction from her.
>She doesn’t even know move as you turn her over.
“Well at least you’re out of the game. Now what to do?”
>You bend down over her.
“Should I see what’s under the mask or not?”
>>27549563
That's all I have for now. I'll update the pastebin later. So thoughts?
>>27549582
>The moment he finds out
>>27549606
To fast?
>>27549608
I mean he's gonna be like
>"Oh shit nigga"
>>27549563
This is some rough foreplay
>>27549645
Ah sorry. Sometimes I don't understand the images used. How was the fight scene?
>>27549666
It pleases satan
>>27549666
Got my dick waiting for anon to grope the unconsciouss spider woman and remove her mask only to find sunset is strangly into it
>>27549666
Better than what I was writting.
I'm rewritting stuff now.
Feel proud, you are my rolemodel now.
so i got a good length of green here, its a little slower paced then what ive seen in the pastebins but i suppose i could post it just to see if its worth continuing.
ah well... here goes nothing.
>>27549710
>mfw Sunset fantasizes about a supervillain overpowering and having their way with her but she's too good at being a hero for it to happen until Anon gets the better of her by accident
>>27549742
Wow all I did was rewatch an episode of Red vs Blue for the fight. Thanks and glad I inspired you.
>>27549710
I'm debating on what happens if he does it or not
>>27549755
we wait with baited breath
>>27549755
>Tick...
>Tock...
>Tick...
>Tock...
>the silence in the room is nearly deafening as students sit quietly around you each concentrating on the tests in front of them
>Twilight of course is as confident as ever, her pencil calmly moving across the page with precision and purpose
>behind her is Flash, and of course he is just the opposite.
>you cant help but smirk at his look of pure terror as he likely forgot to study for the test all together or simply doesn't remember the answers
>there is a loud and expecting cough
>the eyes of Ms Harshwhinny bore into you
>"I suggest you keep your eyes to yourself... this is your only warning."
"yes ma'am."
>you hate this class
>you especially hate that its your first class of the day and you already have a test
>leaning on your desk you look over the test paper in front of you
>there is only one question filled out on the whole thing.
>your name.
>"thirty minutes remaining."
>well at least class is half over. Maybe you can just flub this test and ask for a retake sometime at lunch-
>suddenly the door to the classroom swings open and a exhausted looking Sunset Shimmer
>all eyes are on her, including those of Ms. Harshwhinny.
>"I'm sorry I'm late. I uh.. got a little tied up on my way to school today."
>"you have already missed half of the class period. You will be marked as absent and your test will need to be rescheduled."
>she quickly walks over and takes a seat next to you at her desk shoving her backpack below her seat
>"That's fine I'm sure that I can-"
>you tune out the rest of the conversation and look back to your test
>well better get started on it
>Finally the bell rings signaling the end of first period
>Everyone stands up and slowly make their way out chatting with their friends about how easy or hard they thought the test was.
>you look down at your test again
>Name: Anonymous
>Question one: "blank"
>god damn it.
>well... looks like you are going to have something to look forward to in study hall.
>>27549784
>standing up from your desk you nearly run into Sunset as she reaches down for her backpack
>luckily she saw you coming and avoided the would be collision
>"Hey! watch what you're doing!"
"Sorry, I didn't see you."
>Sunset retrieves her backpack from under her chair with a huff
>"just be more careful."
"sure thing."
>Shimmer walks off her bag slightly opened with some sort of red fabric barely sticking out
>"Hey Anonymous! how do you think you did?"
>within seconds of his outburst Norman warps an arm around your shoulder
>"that test wasnt so hard huh? to think we thought it would be a pain to deal with this early in the day."
"it wasn't so bad, But you could say I ran into a few rough spots"
>and then stopped immediately
>the two of you eventually walk out of the classroom and into the halls of Canterlot High
>students bustle about with their momentary break between classes as you and Norman stop at his locker
>"so did you hear about that Spiderwoman chick today?"
>you lean against the lockers and wait for your friend to gather his books
>why he doesn't just carry them in his bag like you do, you'll never know.
"nah, what happened?"
>"apparently some guy was holding up the store next to the Sweet Shoppe, "BuyMore" or something?"
>Norman takes out his phone scrolling through his many notifications on the subject
>"the robber took off down the street and he was found hanging from a streetlight with the cash left back at the store!"
>He hands you his phone so you can get a look for yourself
>and honestly, the image of a man tied to a streetlight in a cocoon of webbing is a lot cooler than you expected.
>though somewhat gross.
>you hand the phone back to Norman and he quickly pockets it with a smile on his face
>>27549808
>"dude isnt just awesome how we have our very own Spiderman?! its just like in the comics!"
"I mean, yeah. It is really cool and all but--"
>"I wonder if that means there are more heroes like that out there. stopping crime all over the world and we just don't know it yet?"
>you place your hand on his shoulder and shake him back to reality
"calm down buddy. you're starting to fangirl, they could have at least picked a better hero to copy than Spiderman-"
>there is a loud slam of a locker just a few feet away from you as you see Sunset walk off a in a rather annoyed hurry
"sheesh whats her issue?"
>Norman gives a shrug in response
>"shes probably just mad about Harshwhinny.."
>yeah that's probably it...
>after heading to your next class the rest of the day goes by as usual
>eventually you got caught by Harshwhinny in the hall and were.. "asked" to take the test again during study hall
>but all in all it wasnt so bad.
>books in your bag and bag in hand you walk outside the school just as the bell rings signaling the end of the day
>maybe you might get lucky and make it home without someone shouting at you about Spiderwoman
>shes cool and all, but people have a tendency to obsess over things like that and really it just bores you.
>you take out your phone and plug in your headphones for the walk home
>normally you'd drive home but its Friday and paying for gas sucks when you don't have a job.
>it usually involves asking your dad for some cash and getting a fifty fifty shot of actually having gas for the weekend
>so walking home from school now and then can save you the trouble of being car-less for a weekend
>your phone bings with a notification interrupting your music for a second
>taking it out you read the Facebook post
>"New Images of SpiderWoman! Never Before Seen!"
>it already has a good hundred or so likes and even more comments
>why does Facebook think this is relevant to your interests?
>(38 friends have liked this)
"ah.. that's why.."
>>27549765
He must witness the truth!
>>27549582
You blue balling bastard.
>>27549837
Ok you ay have a point but I'm trying to think about what Anon would do when he finds out.
>>27549830
"ah.. that's why.."
>after browsing the less than impressive images you pocket your phone and arrive at home
>the door is unlocked so Dad must be home already
>with a slight squeal the door opens and you head up to your room
>Dads likely working in the basement like normal, so he wont even know that you are here until later in the day.
>it used to bum you out a bit, but you got used to it.
>besides it gives you more freedom than most kids have.
>just as you sit down on your chair and boot up your PC your phone rings
>checking the caller ID you see its your Dad.
>you answer it
"uh, hello?"
>"hey boy! listen, I'm in the basement and I heard you come in but I cant step away from my project quite yet. Mind coming down here and giving me a hand real quick?"
"uh, yeah sure. ill be right down."
>"alright thanks!"
>click
>the sudden end to the call surprises you a bit
>and now that you think about it.. your Dads tone was a bit off.
>you shrug it off and assume it has something to do with his project
"always working on something.."
>the door to the basement is slightly open and there is a single light on at the bottom of the stairs
>as you make it down to the bottom step you freeze in place
>in front of you, your dad is tied to a chair with a man holding your dads phone in hand
>"come here, kid."
>it doesn't take a super genius to tell you this is fucking bad
>the last thing you remember is having a black bag pulled over your head and getting hit. Hard...
>you awake sometime later in a sitting position
>where you sit is kinda soft but its holding you down by your wrists and legs
>are you in some kind of chair?
>"god damn it just tell us where you kept it and we will let you and your son go!"
>"I don't know what you are looking for-"
>thump.
>"don't lie to me! you know exactly what im talking about!"
>"please just let Anonymous go! he has nothing to do with this!"
>thump! thump! thump!
>you can hear the sound of your dad coughing from each impact
>>27549862
"Dad! whats going on?!"
>"well looks like the kid is awake.."
>the bag over your head is ripped away by one of the voices
>you are suddenly greeted with a blinding light in your eyes and suspicions from before are confirmed
>you are indeed in a chair with your wrists and ankles bound to it by rope
>but besides that you cant really make out anything in the room because of the light
>"enough games! tell us where you stored it or ill shoot him here and now!"
>WHAT?!
>if there was a time to piss yourself in fear the time has arrived.
"D-Dad! do something! whats going on?!"
>you feel the cold kiss of a gun barrel to the back of your head
>"Alright! ALRIGHT! just let Anonymous go!"
>"then tell me damn it or ill-"
>a strange sound of two "THWIP" noises silence the gunman
>"or you'll turn yourself in like a upstanding citizen?"
>"awh shit. its her!"
>"sooo... is that a 'no'?"
>there is the sound of a gunshot from somewhere in the room behind you
>"yeah im pretty sure thats a no. too bad. you could have got off easy."
>more shots quickly follow
>"shes fast!"
>THWIP!
>THUMP!
>those sounds continue on for a few seconds then the light in front of you crashes down and breaks from the impact of a unconscious body
>your eyes finally adjust and you can see you were facing a wall the whole time
>you can also see a man knocked on the ground in front of you with...
>is that webbing?
>...
>Facebook, you were right!
>SpiderWoman is now the top of your interest list now for sure!
>you do your best to look back and see whats going on
>unfortunately the way you are bound prevents you from seeing much of anything
>the voice from before comes again
>"god damn freak!"
>CRASH
>"take another step and the doc here takes the fast way down to earth!"
>theres another duo of THWIPs and you can hear the sounds of a scuffle
>then another crash.
>>27549875
>you are Sunset Shimmer
>The one, the only, Spiderwoman!
>no matter what comics say.
>and-- holy shit!
>you did not expect him to actually drop him like that!
>without thinking you propelled yourself forward with your webs and knocked him out the window with you
>the two of you fall out of the building towards the earth below
>the man who was previously held captive just a but further ahead of the two of you
>there isnt much time
>your web shoots out at the criminal sticking him to the side of the building before you turn your attention back to the civilian plummeting down
>you dont have much time
>aiming at the man as you dive you shoot another rope of webbing in an attempt to catch him
>...
>unfortunately... you didn't...
>before you collide with the ground yourself you create a web and launch yourself forward and eventually land on a stoplight and look down at the scene
>you were too slow to save him...
>you force yourself from crying as you look back up at the building from under your mask
"Im sorry Anonymous..."
>Im so sorry.
>its been silent for a while now...
>you tried calling out for whoever might be there
>Dad, Spiderwoman, anyone at all.
>but there wasn't ant responses
>eventually you start to struggle against your binds having little other options
"damn it, damn it, damn it!"
>after enough wrist wriggling goes by you finally get one loose enough to slip out
"HAHA! success!"
>the rope has left a dull red ring around your arm where you were once tied
>the air feels cold and refreshing against your unbound skin
>how long have you been tied up?...
>with your free hand you eventually get the other one out of its binds, followed by your legs.
>as you stand up the chair falls to the ground and you can finally see the room behind you
>several bodies are either tied up or unconscious spread around the room
>one is even webbed up into the wall with some around his mouth
>but there is no sign of your father
>>27549858
>rape
Or he could shit himself and panic to wake her up
>>27549898
>or Spiderwoman
>even though you tried calling out before you do so again.
"Dad?"
>slowly you walk over to a large broken window with some webbing still stuck to the sides
>you can feel the wind as you get closer and the city below starts to peek more into view
>just from a few of the buildings you can already tell you are downtown.
>its one of the few places that have buildings this tall
>you get within a step or two from the ledge when a sudden rope of white webbing sticks to the are just inside the window
>you nearly fall over in surprise.
>Now standing before you is the person who has been driving everyone in school crazy
>Spiderwoman.
>you're not sure if its you finally feeling excitement for her mere existence or the hope that everything turned out alright
>but you feel your legs wobble and your voice shake
"what happened to my dad?.."
>before she can answer the door to the room is kicked in
>BASH
>"Freeze! everyone get down on the ground!"
>police rush into the scene and spiderwoman holds up her hands as you turn around to do the same
>the police quickly start to check the suspects vitals and secure the room
>"alright everyone stay where you are."
>the police point their weapons at Spiderwoman
>and from behind you there is a soft and shaky voice just above a whisper
>"Im sorry..."
>you dont see what happens but the sound of a THWIP and the sudden rush of the police over to you give you a clear idea
>as you are safely secured by the police only one thing stays in your mind.
>she said she's sorry
"Dad..."
>its been a few weeks since that day.
>your mother was informed and came home from her business trip as fast as she could
>she seemed to take it rather hard at first, but now-
>"Anonymous? Im heading out for work."
>now she acts like nothing has changed
"Alright mom."
>>27549921
>today is the first day you are going back to school since the event and your mother is already taking off
>you cant really blame her for working though.
>now that its just you and her, she is the only one able to pay for the house.
>"I left some money in the kitchen ill be back in a few days."
>you can hear the door close shut downstairs and you come out of your room ready for school
>how are you going to be treated when you get there?
>are people going to baby you? or treat you like some outcast?
>no.. most likely everything will be the same
>they will think the whole thing was just some stupid adventure
>or a chance to see Spiderwoman.
>your fist starts to tighten around your bag unintentionally as you think of that 'hero'
>the hero who chose to save your fathers murderer instead of him
"a hero wouldn't have saved the bad guy and let the innocent die."
>she isn't a hero.
>your alarm on your phone goes off breaking you from your thoughts
>taking out the phone you unlock it and turn off the 5 minute warning
"well no use in standing here getting angry."
>you spot the money on the kitchen counter and go to retrieve it but something catches your eye
>the door to the basement is slightly open
>you dont know why, but you make your way over to the door and peer down into the basement
>besides when the police checked for evidence its been left alone
>that was the one thing you insisted on despite your mothers wishes
>she eventually gave up and assumed it was some coping deal
>but you haven't been down there since then
>you open the door the rest of the way and walk down to the bottom step
>the room is as you remember it from that night, minus the chair and the man
>on the desk all of your fathers papers and notes remain untouched and his small science lab of test tubes and chemicals still stand perfectly fine on the opposite end of the room
"okay... that's more than enough time down here for now-"
>>27549928
>you turn to leave and accidentally knock over one of the office toy snow globes
>it collides with the floor shattering and the water spreads out on the floor
>until it eventually stops and forms a slight line
>you look at your phone and check the time
>10 minutes until your first class starts
>you don't have time to goof around at home
>but you cant help but wonder about the water
>kneeling down and getting a closer look you see a slight crack in the floor
>no, not a crack
>a perfectly straight line
>in fact the line eventually makes out a small square in the floor
>you take one of the pens off the desk and use it to leverage the tile
>it finally comes loose and inside is a small compartment with a glass vial inside
>you reach down and lift it up
>the liquid inside is clear and void of bubbles
>you bring it closer
>suddenly your phone rings causing you to jump and drop the vial
>it too shatters on the floor and the liquid quickly dissipates into the air
>it smells like a mix of sulfur and strawberries gone bad
>you cough deeply over and over again as the smell eventually wears off
>your phone is ringing, you just breathed in some unknown chemical, and you're late for class
>what a great start to the day
>you answer the call still coughing slightly from the smell
"hello?"
>"Hey Anonymous. Its Norman, you said you were coming back to school today right?"
>you forgot you had already talked to Norman about coming back to school
>he said he was going to wait for you by the entrance to welcome you back
"yeah, yeah, I'm just a little late. I slept through my alarm"
>"Ah, Alright, well listen, class is starting in like two minutes"
"yeah no its fine man, go to class. Ill be there soon, I'm sure ill get excused if I'm a few minutes late"
>"alright man, and uh, some of the other guys wanted me to tell you there is going to be a party to celebrate your return. I uh, wanted to give you a heads up."
>you can only imagine who would throw a party on your first day back
>>27549946
and there you have it. i pretty much whipped this up in an afternoon.
figured it would be worth posting to see if i should continue it or not. feel free to give your thoughts on it
>>27549954
Gotta say love the idea. Anon seeing Sunset as a bad guy is good
>>27549971
thanks. honestly the thing im most afraid of is the pace.
i usually have a slower style of writing than most writefags i've read from so that was my biggest fear in posting it
>>27549998
Well you're doing good In my opinion. Now you need a pastebin
>>27550008
already got one.
http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
>>27549898
>but there wasn't ant responses
>ant responses
im sure they are on the way!
>>27550013
well grab a trip so we can pick you out from the rabble.
Spider-shim porn when?
>>27550310
That's a good question
>>27550310
i don't know but I hope the answer is soon
>>27549946
>>27549954
I like it so far, the only thing that is a little bit annoying is your lack of mayus.
Keep it up!
>>27550801
>your lack of mayus.
could you explain? im not sure i follow
>>27550807
>could you explain? im not sure i follow
Try
>Could you explain? Im not sure I follow
>>27550832
Ah, capitalization. If its that annoying ill be sure to work on it.
>>27550832
Uh that was a joke I think.
>>27550841
I didn't notice when I read it, but it's more like getting sand on your socks, it gets more annoying the longer it goes on.
>>27550310
>>27550442
>>27550713
We need drawfags
>>27551203
We have one. However we only have the one.
>>27549666
>How was the fight scene?
A lot better than the ones in the first version of this story. When I read a good fight scene I feel my heart rate picking up and I definitely had that feeling with this one.
Also regarding unmasking her or not I'd say he should unmask her then possibly panic and leave. I'd also imagine Anon is smart enough to figure out who the rest of the Power Ponies are if he finds out Sunset is Spiderwoman though he'd probably have to keep it to himself as if he revealed to Sunset that he knew she'd probably be able to figure out he is Angel. On the other hand that could make the big S.H.I.E.L.D reveal even more interesting (if you are still planning on doing it) doubly so if it Anon's other superhero identity getting revealed, I think I remember reading that the Power Ponies think Angel and Anon's original hero identity (that I forgot) are two separate people.
All in all the update wasn't massive but what follows on could have a pretty big impact if the unmasking does take place.
>>27552040
Thanks. I tried putting in more but It just didn't work in a way.
But yeah, at the moment I'm trying to figure out how Anon would feel when he unmasks her. Would he feel mad, sad or something cause I'm trying to get that right idea for it.
>>27549858
Be confused and in shock making his way out of there after seeing to her injuries or securing second base which sunset wittnesses half conciouss leaving her in rage mode afterwards searching for him until she finds out about his secret identity as well
>>27552055
I would bet confused and more or less angry at himself for beating his own gf
>>27551502
I will add it to my list. Sorry for lack of art, busy but should get most done by monday at latest.
>>27552564
We finally get a confirmation on some spider-shim porn
>>27552153
>>27552161
Thanks for the ideas and i was thinking about him being mad and sad
"morning" bump
>>27553654
How're you doing today?
>>27549563
>Moving your hand to her head and grab the bottom of the mask.
“Hope you don’t mind if I take a peek, it’s the least you can do for me.”
>Gently pulling the mask up as her face was slowly revealed to you.
>Your angel form flickers until you’re back to normal as the mask is removed from her head.
“T-This can’t be.”
>At that moment you felt nothing but a wave of sadness hit you as you looked at the fallen hero.
>Laying there on the ground was no other than your girlfriend, Sunset Shimmer.
“Sunset…..is Spider-Woman? H-How’s that possible?”
>As you stood there, looking at your girlfriend, trying to comprehend what’s going on as a million thoughts were going through your head.
>How did she become Spider-Woman?
>Why did she fight crime?
>Why did she work with the Power Ponies?
>Did anyone know she was a hero?
>You shook your head clearing it of thoughts and tried to focus at the moment at hand.
“What to do with you Sunny?”
>You raise your hand and hold it just above her chest.
>The sound of a police siren causes you to stire from your slumber.
>Be Spider-Woman and you slowly open your eyes and see that you’ve been laying on the rooftop of some building in town.
“Where am I?”
>You rise to your feet and look around to see you’re on Town Hall.
“How did I get here? Wait WHERE’S THE ANGEL?”
>You frantically look around to see if Angel is anywhere near by.
>But he was long gone.
“Damnit. I almost had him.”
>You pick up your phone and dial a number.
“Twilight, I’m gonna need some help. Also I have some info on the Angel.”
>>27556859
Gonna have more later. Getting to many ideas on what to do so gonna choose them carefully
>>27556859
>>27555664
Fuckin exhausted
Thanks for posting, am hype
>>27556859
>>You shook your head clearing it of thoughts and tried to focus at the moment at hand.
>“What to do with you Sunny?”
>>You raise your hand and hold it just above her chest.
That's way beyond what shreds of rational thoughts I would have after that kind of revelation.
>>27549946
already have another update probably just as long as this one.
>>27557657
I kind of hate you right now. I was going to publish my green with that Trip.
On the other hand, if you thought of the same joke, then it wasn't that bad a joke.
>>27557742
if you want you can have it, i just thought it was clever :^)
>>27557657
You can post it, if you want.
Its to early for me to say that I dig it, but it got me interested enough to want to know what's coming next.
>>27557779
It is. So it's yours now.
>>27549946
>as you approach the doors to your old school you check the time on your phone
"and I missed about half of first period... nice"
>no real point in showing up to it now then
>you walk in the double doors of canterlot high and are greeted by the same old hallways
>it gives you a strange sense of security knowing this place is still the same even if your life has changed
>with nothing to do for the next few minutes you head down to the library
>the librarian Miss Cheerilee looks up from her book and over to you as you sit you bag down at the table
>"Anonymous, what are you doing here?"
>looking at the clock you notice there's probably only fifteen minutes of class left in first period
>Miss Cheerilee walks over to you with her arms crossed
>"well?"
>you sigh and sit down in a chair
"I accidentally slept through my alarm and was a half hour late for first period. by the time I got here I would have been marked absent and probably receive a lecture from Harshwhinny about being punctual and professional"
>Miss Cheerilee looks to the clock
>"I heard about what happened Anonymous. I wont make you leave if you don't feel ready, but you will have to go to your next class on time."
"so, you're going to let me skip class?"
>she laughs a bit
>"just this once. I better not find out that this is becoming a normal thing"
>she gently places a hand on your shoulder as a show of understanding before walking away
>you always knew she was a cool teacher
>taking out your cellphone you text Norman "sorry I missed class. I'm waiting in library for next one to start"
>bing
>"np man c u soon"
>well there you go.
>everything is just like normal again.
>as you sit there in your chair you glance around to room until your eyes come across a poster on the bulletin board
>you cant read it from here but the drawing of Spiderwoman is pretty obvious
>>27557835
>you get up and walk over to the poster to get a better look
"You might not fight crime, but YOU can be a superhero and save the world too! Recycle!"
>you reach forward and unpin the poster from the board and smash it up in your hands
"what a stupid poster"
>you toss the trash into the nearest can and grab your backpack
>the bell will be ringing soon anyway
>on your way out you wave to Miss Cheerilee
"thanks for not turning me in."
>"have a nice day Anonymous, I hope things get better for you soon."
>walking down the halls you make your way to the locker room for your second period physical fitness class
>this was you choice of elective class simply to get out of having extra homework
>and luckily for you the class after is regular Gym so you dont even need to go anywhere afterwards.
>well besides the showers that is.
>RIIIINNNNGGG
>as the bell rings you take your phone out again and message Norman again
"going right to locker room to avoid being late."
>bing
>"k"
>again the phone goes away as students make their way out of the locker room giving you a chance to enter
>a few of the guys recognize you and give you short welcomes
>"hey Anon"
>"glad to see you again buddy"
>"sorry about what happened man, hope you have a good day though"
>etc etc
>honestly its kinda nice that they are making short little comments to show they care
>its far better than the long drawn out pity parties that your family gave you
>that only made it feel worse because you were constantly reminded that you are feeling bad
>somehow despite you waiting outside for the locker room to open Bulk is already inside and changed
>does he like live in here or something?
"whats up Bulk? you going to welcome me back too?"
>he runs over to you in a way that can only be described as charging and gets you in a headlock
>"YYYEEAAAAHH!"
>he does a short bit of tossing you around jokingly before letting you go
>you laugh a bit and start to get changed into your workout clothes
>>27557865
"thanks man, glad to be back really, if you can believe it"
>"Yeah?"
"yeah, it nice to be back someplace that's still the same after whats happened you know?"
>Bulk ponders what you said for a moment before a grin comes across his face
>"YEAH!"
>soon the rest of the class starts to file in and get changed after a few give you the same greetings as the others
>Norman however looks a little upset that he lost his chance to be the first to welcome you back but gets over it quickly once the two of you start talking like normal
>that's kind of his thing anyway.
>once you leave the locker room you and the rest of the class are standing in the weight room
>Bulk has already picked out the machine that He, Norman, and yourself will be using
>"Bench pressing again?"
>Norman gets a loud "YEAAAH!" and a flex as a response
>"great..."
>it takes both you and Norman to have a hope of properly spotting Bulk
>he can pretty much bench press the combined weight the two of you do and then some
>"yyyeeaaah... yyeeaaah.."
>the bar is placed back on the top with a loud clank once he finishes his first set
>"YEAAAH!"
"who's next then?"
>Norman pats your back with a smile on his face
>"all you buddy"
>"yeah!"
"alright then."
>you make sure to wipe off the bench with a towel before laying down on it and you get a nice weight on the bar
"alright, its been a while so don't expect me to do too well"
>3... 2... 1...
>lift!
>you struggle a bit at first having not worked out in a while
>eventually you get your rhythm and you set the bar back
"add a bit more will ya?"
>about twenty more pounds are added
>lift!
>you struggle even more than before
>there was this old saying you told yourself whenever you worked out with Bulk
>if he could do it, then so could you.
>of course it was hard to believe it but it helped on occasion
>you finish your set and take a minute to breathe
>strangely you recover quickly and are already set to do more
"hey.. Norman, mind if I take your turn?"
>>27557881
>"ha! are you expecting me to say no? go ahead!"
"sweet... add more."
>your workout has started to gain the attention of the class, including the teacher.
>everyone crowds around you ass more weight is added again
>it feels like you are just a few pounds away from Bulks level of workout
>ready, set, lift!
>Bulk cheers you on as the bar makes its way down to your chest
>"YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! YEEEAAAAHHHH!"
>with a bit of struggle you lift the weights like all the others as you repeat to yourself
>if Bulk can so can I..
>if Bulk can so can I!
>you lift the bar again and again feeling sweat pour from your body from the workout
>as you lift the bar again you see something strange in the mirror on the ceiling
>why do you have Bulks eye color?
>they fade away and it suddenly feels like you are holding up the entire world
>you arms cave in but luckily Bulk and a few others grabbed it in time before you were cut in half from the impact
>"you okay Anonymous?!"
>you lay there breathing for a moment as everyone looks on in worry
>you force a laugh and smile
"I- I guess I hit my limit"
>"Man you crushed you limit! that was intense!"
>"Yeah!"
>"do you even know how much you just did? you were ten under Bulks personal record!"
>holy shit, really?
"no way."
>Bulk points to the weights on the bar and holds up two five pound weights
>"Yeah!"
>the bell rings, the universal signal that class has come to an end
>"damn Bulk, better watch yourself Anonymous might just beat you next time"
>he rolls his eyes and gives Norman a slight shove
"alright guys, we better get ready for our next classes."
>back in the locker room you take a longer than average shower since you don't have to go far to get to the Gym
>why did you have Bulk Biceps eyes when you were lifting weights?
>water runs over your hair and face for a moment before you shrug it off and change into casual gym clothes
>>27557900
>Gym class is co-ed so the appropriate level of clothing is a bit more strict than the workout classes
>you grab a spare towel and head out to the gym
>there a few students already waiting there for the class to start
>Twlight Rainbow and Applejack chat in their little group and eventually welcome Sunset when she arrives and joins the conversation
>you are Sunset Shimmer
>the girls have been talking about a party pinkie has planned for anonymous to welcome him back to school
>they were never really good friends with him, but they knew him enough to come up with the idea for a party
>from the corner of your eye you can see Anon standing near the door with a towel just looking around at the gym
>he almost looks lost in a way.
>"so what do you think Shimmer?"
>the sound of your name brings you back to the conversation
"Huh? I'm sorry?"
>Rainbow wraps an arm around you
>"about the party for Anonymous! you think you could get him to come?"
"well, i guess so. But why me? Why not one of you girls? You know him better than I do."
>"well duh! because we have been working on the actual party, so this is your part to do."
>great...
>the person who failed to save a kids father from falling from a building has to now invite him to his welcome back party.
>you feel a lump in your throat and your heart sinks a bit when you think about what happened
>with a sigh you nod to the girls
"alright, its only fair that I do it then."
>"that's the spirit suger cube!"
>at least if he blames Spiderwoman for his fathers death, he doesn't blame Shimmer for it.
>maybe you can somehow make things a bit easier for him now that he's back to school
>or.. something...
>"Anonymous?"
>you raise your hand
"here."
>the gym teacher who's name you never really cared to remember looks over to you
>"welcome back. Im sorry to hear about your father."
>you just nod as she goes down the list of students for attendance
>>27557934
>a few more names get called out with "here" following each one
>putting down the clipboard the teacher looks around at the students
>"well originally I had planned for us to run the track, but right now its being redone, so I guess that leaves one option..."
>a smile comes over her and everyone else as the word "Dodgeball" leaves her lips
>"alright! everyone form into two teams ill get the equipment out."
>the class divides into two sides
>you find yourself on a team with Rainbow Dash as you go against Applejack, Twilight, and Sunset on the other.
>at least the girls were nice enough to not take both Rainbow and Applejack
>that wouldn't be fair to anyone
>everyone gets into a ready stance as the balls are placed in the center of the gym
>"watch out Rainbow, ah'll be sure to take you out first!"
>"HA fat chance Applejack."
>well least the two heavy hitters are already going for each other.
>standing directly ahead of you is Sunset
>so you suppose she should be the first one to go for.
>as the whistle blows the class rushes to the center of the gym to grab a ball
>the first four outs happen in a few seconds leaving the teams a little uneven with your team Dash down three and team Apple down one
>you elected to stay back to avoid the initial fight
>Rainbow slowly makes her way over to you dodging shots and returning fire when possible
>"Hey Anon, here."
>she tosses you one of the two balls she had in her hands
>"when I give the signal focus on Applejack, if we take her out this game is as good as won!"
"alright. I got your back"
>"alright. NOW!"
>the two of you wind up and launch your shots at the blondie scoring one hit
>"out!"
>just as the two of you go to high-five to celebrate the victory a throw from sunset takes Rainbow out of the game
>Rainbow is surprised, but takes her seat without too much of a fuss.
>just Rainbow levels of fuss..
>she and Applejack give each other looks of mixed victory as the two sit down on the bench
>>27557951
>the teams have come down to you versus Twilight and Sunset
>honestly you never expected Twilight to be one of the last two
>Sunset and twilight each have a ball in hand as you lift one to your chest to block
>with a laugh she tosses the ball in her hands up and down
>"well Anon, heres your shot! we wont throw until you do."
>looking at the gym you can see why
>you have the only ball on your side of the field in your hands
>well you might at least get an out if you throw at Twilight
>you wind up and throw the ball right at her legs making her drop the ball and it rolls to your side of the gym just close enough for you to reach it and block the shot from Sunset
>its down to a one versus one
"Im sorry, I thought you were going to try and get me out with that shot? Guess not.."
>you hear an "OOOoo" from the spectators
>"alright, but I wont hold back just because you have been gone for a while like the others have."
>the class goes quiet at her words but you just smile back at her
"good, thats all I wanted from the school anyway."
>you raise you arm with the ball and target the girl
"Im glad at least one of you understands!"
>you feel that same level of strength from when you were lifting with Bulk come back just as you release the ball
>or to put it more accurately...
>as you fire that ball from a cannon.
>>27557969
>you are Sunset
>"Im glad at least one of you understands!"
>your spider-sense suddenly goes wild
>you watch as the ball comes blasting at you and the world around you begins to slow as you react to the incoming projectile
>without thinking about what you are doing you jump and twist yourself over the ball while throwing your own at Anonymous
>the onlookers eyes go wide, along with Anonymous'
>... did he always have eyes like Bulk?
>the ball he launched at you bounces of the wall with a hard smack as the one you threw back heads right at him
>by the time you land on your knee the whole Gym is deathly quiet
>maybe you should have just let the ball hit you
>looking up from the floor you can see why the class is so silent
>standing opposite you in the gym is a completely shocked Anonymous...
>staring at the Dodgeball in his hands
"I'm, I'm out?..."
>>27557986
>>27528690
>Gordon and Bullock walk to the right and naturally you follow.
>You’re not really certain, but you believe these are possibly dormitories, but only time will tell.
>It isn’t long before the three of you arrive in front of a door and stop.
>Gordon clears his throat, and begins to knock in a little rhythm.
>You think he’s trying to play the song “Lucy in The Sky with Diamonds” by the beats at which he knocks at, and when you hear the other side of the door knocks alongside him, you smile a little bit.
>You can tell there’s a connection between the two that’s deep.
>Kind of makes you wish your Dad talked with you more often...
>After twenty or so seconds of this little knocking game on the door and an annoyed sigh from Bullock, Gordon chuckles happily as Barbara opens the door.
>“Daddy!”
>The girl who answers it is young as you are, though if she wanted, she could pass off as a girl in her twenties if she dressed so.
>Her healthy red hair is curly in the back and continues until it stops at shoulder-length.
>It shares some similar textures from her father, Gordon, but Barbara’s red lock’s are much thicker and wholesome than her father’s gray hair.
>She wears the top half of a male’s uniform--as in the tie and blazer--but below is all for a female in regards to clothing.
>She seems to be a tad more conservative of her looks seeing as she’s been the only one wearing her uniform’s skirt that goes just below her knees.
>Her eyes are like a cat’s: mature, strong, and independent.
>However, you can also say the exact opposite of this two upon further inspection.
>Not only do they hld experience, but they also come from someone young, naive, and a bit brash for someone of her age.
>Another thing about her eyes: it’s rather cute when she smiles which hem squint from how hard she curls her mouth.
>...You find it hard to believe someone who looks as smart she does would call a buffoon like you in an interrogation room ‘cute’.
>>27558287
>Pastebin is UPDATED
Don't worry, Shimmer will be back very soon, too.
http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
just letting everyone know I am still alive
>>27559232
no you're not! dont lie to me spook!
>>27559261boo
>>27559232
We have sources pointing you to be a skelleton in disguise, using a flesh suit to pass as untitled 7!
>>27559290AHA! A confession!
>>27559290
>>27559290
>>27559320
>>27559313
>>27559298
>>27559332
>>27558287
>Barbara smiles in familial glee as she wraps her arms behind her father in a tight, loving hug.
>“Oh my gosh, I’ve missed you so much!”
>Her father shares her enthusiasm.
>“Oh ho ho, I’ve missed you Babs! How’s my sweet little girl doing, huh? This place hasn’t been too bad, has it?” Gordon asks as he hugs his daughter with just as much strength.
>The two let go as Barbara answers, brushing some strands of her red hair away from her face.
>“Well, you know how it is. All these kids are uptight, the teachers are weird and the lunch is richer than diamonds…” she stops mid-sentence as her eyes land to you.
>You wave nervously, but then Bullock shakes his head no at you disapprovingly, so you stop.
>She raises a finger, pointing at you with a look of recognition.
>“Hey! I remember you! Yeah, you were in the interrogation room with Dad! You’re name’s Anon, right?”
>You shrug sheepishly with a tiny smile.
>“I don’t know what’s worse,” says Bullock, “the fact ya seen this pitiful wuss or that ya even bothered to remember his name!”
“Well, since my name’s been in the papers a bit, I figure it’d be hard to forget it. Nice to meet you, Barbara.”
>You extend your hand out for a handshake while making eye contact with her.
>This girl is gorgeous, funny, cute, but something’s weird about her.
>You don’t know what it is or why you think so, but she has this strange familiarity about her that you can’t place.
>Either you’ve met her someplace before or have deja-vu to the ‘nth’ degree.
>She accepts the handshake with a firm grip that’d make someone like Applejack proud.
>“Oh no, the pleasure’s all mine, Anon, believe me! I haven’t met someone normal in months.”
“Most people don’t count calling someone cute in an interrogation room ‘normal’ these days,” you say with a smile as the handshake stops.
>Barbara shrugs as a response to your question.
So much green today...
Trep, Beans, Rabble..
If I weren't being held hostage here at work, I'd be home writing right alongside you all.
>>27560203
It's fine. And I'm gonna have more pretty soon.
>>27556859
>Be Anon and it’s the next day.
>You didn’t go to school today.
>You had too much on your mind to even think about school.
>That and you didn’t want to face Sunset yet.
>Opening up your laptop, you make a new search window.
“Let’s see what we got.”
https://youtu.be/xaJnPv18r70
>You started to type ‘Spider-Woman articles’ into the search box.
>A bunch of links pop up but you click on the first one.
>The link brings you to a page with a bunch of news articles.
>You start to read through them and paying attention to the date of each article.
“Spider-Woman stops mutant Lizard, March 26, 2016.”
>You scroll down some more as you take a potato chip.
>....And eat it.
“Spider-Woman saves couple from fire, January 14, 2016. Not even close.”
>It takes some more time until you find the last article on the website.
“Mysterious Web holds robbers, April 9, 2013. So that’s the first time huh?”
>You look over the article and find nothing special as it was just on the way the robbers were captured.
“Still it’s not like there are a bunch of spider themed heroes out there. At least none near here.”
>There have been some news reports on a couple of spider people but they were in the opposite part of the world.
“Well, Sunset had these powers for three years at least.”
>Clicking the back button, you type ‘Spider-Woman and Power Ponies’ into the search box.
>Clicking on the link, you see various news articles ranging from ‘Spider-Woman and Zapp saving the day’ to all seven of them stopping some crazed madman.
>>27560604
>You started to read one of the recent articles.
“Witnesses claimed to see Spider-Woman and Zapp take down the criminal Hydroman. With the superpowered villain being carted away, Zapp was bragging on how ‘No one could stop this awesome team’.”
>You lean back into your chair with your hands behind your head.
“Zapp and Rainbow would get along well…….Wait a minute.”
>You look at the picture of Zapp and Spider-Woman a bit more closely.
>Same color hair, using the same line, and they’re usually together.
“They couldn’t be, could they?”
>You start looking at the other Power Ponies and you’re shocked by the comparisons.
>Saddle Rager hides behind the others like Fluttershy.
>Fili Second has the same excited look and smile like Pinkie Pie.
>And you’d be lying if Mistress Marvelous’s hat didn’t look like the same old hat Applejack wore.
>It doesn’t help the Radiance has the same hairstyle as Rarity.
“Are they really superheroes? Spider-Woman teams up with the Power Ponies and Sunset hangs out with Rainbow and the others.”
>You leaned back into your chair, thinking of this possible discovery.
“I need more info.”
>You let off your chair and grab your coat and walk into the living room.
>You see Adagio and Sonata playing a videogame as Aria lounges on the couch.
“Hey Sonata, tell mom I’ll be back in a couple of hours.”
>She gives you a cute smile while saluting.
> “Got it, NO FAIR DAGI.”
>The orange haired girl just smirks while mashing buttons like crazy.
> “All’s fair in love and war, Nata.”
>The two go back to their game as you look at Aria.
“Aria tell mom I’ll be out for a while.”
> “Yeah, yeah.”
>That’s the best you could hope for.
>You walk out the door, ready for your mission to find Spider-Woman.
>>27560617
That's all I have for today. The next part may take a while to figure out were it'll go.
Thoughts and ideas? I was thinking Anon Angel meets the Power Ponies and Spider-Woman
>>27560864
I like it.
About the confrontation I'm thinking of something along the lines of:
>We need to talk alone... Shimmer.
In front of the Power Ponies.
>>27560914
Oh I was thinking that as well, but I had the idea she kept on trying to bullshit her way out of it.
That is until Anon says he unmasked her, or something like that
spidershim thread, why are you on page 9?
>>27561682
Because I got tied up watching spiderman cartoons on Netflix.
>>27561735
But the only Spidey cartoon on netldix is ultimate Spiderman
>>27561808
Netflix
>>27561808
And I'm enjoying it greatly.
>>27561820
I'd watch it if they had the first two seasons on there
>>27561834
Even my third world netflix account has the first three.
>>27561856
In Murica, we have 3 and 4
>>27560864
Updated the pastebin
http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
>>27562070
My heart weeps for you through mountains and valleys.
BUMP
>>27562529
Did you think about my question? What Waifu feels like?
>>27562640
I've never stopped
I'm still thinking...
>>27562640
Wibbly wobbly stuff
anyone have any good songs to listen to while writing superhero green?
>>27559953
>She starts to take a few steps to get a bit closer to you, but Harvy Bullock puts a hand between the two of you before such things can happen.
>“Don’t you think about it, Barbara; this guy is what separates them and us,” he says with a warning, still with a look of disgust aimed at you.
>The commissioner’s daughter quirks a brow at this with a smile.
>“Them and us? Riiiight. I have a good feeling Anon’s one of ‘us’,” Barbara says with a smirk.
>You’re to preoccupied to care.
>...Them and us.
>Those words and how she said them bounces around in your skull like a game of pong.
>Then you find it.
>Them and Us!
>Like the book Twilight and you talked about the other day!
>She sounds exactly like Twilight!
>Same speech pattern, that intellectual tone, and that light innocent sound; the resemblance the two exceeds what can be described as uncanny.
>The only differences--which there are not many of--between Twi and Barbaras’ voices is probably how relaxed Barbara seems.
>She’s not as anxious sounding, just more comfortable in herself.
>You’d imagine if Twilight had a good-night’s rest and a mug of warm milk, this would be her voice.
>Your face glows a little red as all of sudden, you’re having trouble acting normal around her glowing smile thanks to this realization.
>Barbara sees the redness in your face.
>>27563174
I listen to Winterage - The Harmonic Passage, I find it inspiring.
>>27563197
Protip lad, when talking with a girl try to avoid thinking of other girls, it often ends in dissaster.
>>27563174
I recommend anything by Shirley Walker, the woman who did all the music for "Batman: The Animated Series".
I also think that anything soft and sweet by Paul McCartney (like No More Lonely Nights) is good for emotional scenes to write.
Then for action scenes, I recommend any music from the Spider-Man trilogy, music from CW's the Flash
...and for weird abstract fights,Die Antwoordhelps make you feel weird and shit. Even if it's not your type of music and makes you feel weird, embrace the weirdness and translate it.
>>27563174
.... porn?
That's usually what I listen to while writing, whether comfy or sad or lewd.
I just need something that will help me focus.
For fight music I usually turn to the Bloodborne OST
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-rdt5XNvPkc
Transistor for sads/peaceful
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cGMWL8cOeAU
Or Dance with the Dead for anything else.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JfLFhFbpdzk
My tastes are varied but I crave anything epic and orchestral, hence a deep love of Blind Guardian.
How do you know when to post?
I think have a rewrite-mania.
>>27563693
when you're done writing?
thats what I do anyway.
>>27563693
I write so slowly that, by the time I'm done, it's usually 12 in the morning, so I just wait to post around the afternoon/evening.
Shameless art plug.
Mamorukusanagi.tumblr.com
Spidershim.tumblr.com
Also Trep, finished your request. Want it here or tumblr or email?
Love ya all.
>>27563841
We love your art, never be ashamed of plugging on the thread.
just a quick question since i haven't read all the greens to completion yet.
Has Shining Armor been given a character yet?if not i have a pretty neat idea for him in my green
>>27563882
Neither have I, but you shouldn't trouble yourself with character overlaps.
>>27563902
yeah true, but im a nice guy who feels he should ask anyway
>>27563882
what >>27563902 said, but I've got 0 interest in using him
>>27563841
>that Doc Octavia
>>27563915
If it helps any i haven't seen him mentioned in any greens thus far. I think it is safe to say you are good to go.
>>27563841
Go for tumblr
>>27564936
It has been done. Hope you enjoy. Finding a good ref was harder than expected.
Btw did you shim in full mask or hair out? Working on one of her now.
>>27565023
Go for hair out. Also saw the pic and I think it turned out great
>>27563174
K
http://youtu.be/4e26y2r2leM
http://youtu.be/eZvhREeVTYo
http://youtu.be/HG7Y33-526Q
http://youtu.be/K7VmOZ4Ppj8
http://youtu.be/sAkL2-vh2Sk
http://youtu.be/nW5XLxO7pNw
(Alright alright alright)
Heads up all! There are a pair of spider women swinging by. First is the good red and blue from Beans!
Close behind her is the lovely spiderwoman from earth Treppahcs!
Wonder if she got that hoodie from the same magic place as the Dazzling's?
>>27560914
>>27560945
Pic related.
Also at this point would Anon reveal that he's figured out who all the power ponies are?
>>27565633
Somewhat, I tried to make it were he's a little unsure of the Power Ponies identities.
He thinks it makes sense but he knows that he could be wrong.
>>27560617
And before we get the introduction scene again, only this time he responds to them by their real names.
>>27565932
Well only Sunset
I'm currently working on the next part of my story, but I would like some input.
Maybe.
I might post a nightmare that Sunset sometimes has since Tarantula showed up before that.
>>27566104
>Tarantula
god damnit, I'm a week behind in thread, and miss 2 new writefriends and one of them going with "Tarantula"
>>27566143
Sorry?
Was it already taken?
>>27566158
no, my Anon (he has a superior spiderman type techwear) was trying to think of a name, as black widow was spider themed too, he then thought "Tarantula" was too stupid so he went to research spider species
>>27566175
He should call himself
*drum roll*
Mimic
*crickets chirp*
The following is a nightmare that Sunset has every now and then since Tarantula showed up.
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>Looks like he's down for the count this time though
>Jumping down from the wall you slowly approach him, ready to run and continue fighting if he moves
>He's not getting up
>Good
>Standing next to him now you glare down at him
"Time to find out who you are beneath that helmet, 'Tarantula'."
>You kneel down next to him and grip the helmet between your hands and gently pull it off
>You eyes widen in spandex-wetting terror
>Dropping the helmet you quickly stand and back away
"S-SNOWDROP?!!"
>You think for a second before you are certain that you have pissed youself at the next realization
"B-but, i-if you're S-snowdrop, then w-where is A-anon?!"
>*CRASH!!!*
>The wall next to you breaks apart,and there is Anon
>/WHY IS HE AS BUFF AS THE HULK?!!!!/
>Your Spider-Senses tell you that you're in danger, and that you're not going to be able to get out of danger
>/FUCK!!/
>You see his fist heading straight for your face
>It keeps getting bigger!!
>*WHAM*
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Cont-
>>27566223
"FUCK!!"
>You scream as you quickly sit up in your bed panting rapidly
>You hear footsteps before your door opens gently and your mom pokes her head in, an eyebrow already raised
>"Sunny, are you okay dear?"
>Sighing you place your head in your hands
"I had that nightmare again. But it was different this time."
>Her footsteps come closer before you feel the bed depress a little as she sits on it and pulls you into a comforting hug
>"Who was Tarantula this time."
>.....
>She's going to make fun of you for this
"Snowdrop."
>You can hear her suppressing her laughter as she speaks
>"That doesn't really sound that different."
>Sighing you snuggle into your moms embrace as you prepare to tell her the next part
"I pissed myself and then Anon burst through the wall looking like the Hulk. He punched me and I woke up."
>She's now shaking with suppressed laughter
>God damnit
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-End
Each time she has this nightmare it's a different person as Tarantula.
Once it was even Princess Twilight Sparkle.
>>27562073
Nice, keep it up!
>>27566251
>DC superheroes
>>27566251
>DC Superheroes in a Marvel thread
>>27566296
>Bardock will never appear in dragonball super
>>27566296
I remember this was anything goes from thread 1?
Guess what time it is...
>>27567130
Spider-hips time?
>>27567130
>Clobbering Time?
>>27567181
>>27567194
ITS MORPHIN TIME
>>27567200
I really thought that kind of announcement would come with a green or something.
>>27567594
No, it came with a white
>>27567662
Smooth.
>>27567662
I will fucking murder you, spic
>>27560617
>Be Spider-Woman
>It’s the next day and you’re currently patrolling with your friends, the Power Ponies.
>After your fight with the Angel, you contacted Twilight and told her everything you could about his powers.
>At lunch, you and everyone else were trying to figure out what the next course of action should be.
>Many ideas were pitched ranging from ‘Beating the shit out of him’ to ‘Luring him out with candy’, it was decided that the peaceful approach was the easiest.
>Everyone agreed that was the best thing to do with Rainbow saying she’ll kick his ass if the plan fails.
>Now you, Radiance and Mistress Marvelous were looking around everywhere for him.
“You girls see anything?”
>Radiance and Marvelous both shook their heads as they were looking in any direction possible.
> “Sorry there, Sug. But I don’t see any glowy angels.”
> “And I can’t see any heroic winged men their dear.”
>You sigh, knowing it wouldn’t be easy to find this guy.
“Let’s go towards the-”
>Before you could finish, you see a familiar winged man fly ahead of you.
>You look at both Radiance and Marvelous, and nod giving them a silent command.
>Following him proved to be easy as he just flew straight while turn his head every so often.
“Is he looking for something?”
>He lands on one of the buildings with you and the girls landing near him as quietly as possible.
>You could hear him say, “It shouldn’t be this hard to find one spider themed hero.”
>Looking at the other girls, you see them shrug at this.
> Why was he looking for you?
>>27567802
That's how spiders work. You see one on your pillow, go for something to take it outside and when you look back at the pillow the spider is gone, the only mark of it's passage is the sleep-sapping dread that it might be waiting in hiding fo you to fall asleep and crawl over you...
>>27567838
Crawling over you.
Crawling on your skin.
CRAWLING IN MY SKIIIIN
>>27567802
>Screw it, you want to know why he’s looking for you.
>You get a running start then jump over him and land crouched down.
“Heard you were looking for me.”
>He doesn’t say a thing.
“Well, here I am.”
>Still nothing from him
“Hey can’t you say something instead of giving me the silent treatment?”
>You could hear his sigh as he took a few steps towards you.
> “We need to talk…..Sunset.”
>Your eyes widened as you now regret following him.
> “And get your friends here. I know who they’re.”
>You could feel butterflies in your stomach at this point.
“Who’s this Sunset person? You sure you don't have the wrong person?”
>You need to play it cool and find out how he…
> “I looked under your mask the other day.”
>...know, well that was easy.”
> “And if I’m correct, I know who the Power Ponies are.”
All I'll have for now. Might have something later.
