Bacon edition
>Previously on Law and Order SVU
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27453418/#q27453418
Hey everyone. This is the superhero general, starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spider-Woman. Any and all mlp/superhero discussions, green, and art are welcome.
Fifteenth Anniversary Edition
>Pastebin List
Featured: Our newest addition: Voidborn
http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
Live writefags by storysize:
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)
Dead Writefags by storysize:
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon - http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Remember, keep calm and Excelsior on.
>Thread Theme
http://youtu.be/iFKAgx6-ZnE
>>27491494
the thing about features is that they should change
beans is alive again
>>27491538
Couldn't be bothered to change it
Now that that's over. LET THE GREEN FLOW!
>>27491494
Best edition.
>>27491556
then what good are you, prequels-liker?
>>27491578
Let it go
>>27491578
Hey now, let's not hold bloke's highly-questionable taste against him.
>>27491596
You wanna 'av a go at me m9?
>>27491623
I'd rather keep posting pics...
>>27491645
I'll show you pics...
>>27491661
M-Muh heart...
>>27491494
I'm not dead
I'm just a little writing impaired
I'll try to post something soon, but between studying, exams and work, it might take some time
HEY GUYS CAN I JOIN TOO
>>27491686
go be a spider nigga somewhere else.
>>27491686
Sure, I think a Miles is fine too.
If I'm not going to post greens, I might as well post Spideys.
>>27491741
Don't worry I'll have a post ready soon
>>27491741
You'll need me as well
>>27491758
Noir spidey's so cool...
>>27491494
Didn't realize it was Deku Scrub edition.
>>27491494
Here comes the cavalry!
>>27491806
Oh yea? Take this!
>>27491897
Hey grill, whatchu doing later?
So, does anyone have any story ideas they'd like to see?
Not saying I'd write them, just curious to know what ideas people have that they'd hope to see.
>>27491968
From you or from anyone?
>>27491968
still the symbiote anon, clinging all over sunsets body and make her feel everything more intense.
>>27491977
Just in general. An idea for a story you have in your head, but lack the compunction to produce it, that's all.
>>27492032
>Symbiote lewd
>Agent Venom Anon
>Spider-Shim 2099
>Cyclops Vinyl
>Green Ranger Anon
>Spider-Carnage
>Big crossover story with all the Spider-Shims we've seen so far
>>27489886
>Her carefree nature also seems to be reminiscent of your rainbow-haired friend, but her headphones that fail to contain all the music she listens to seems much more like a neat little callback to this one girl you’ve seen around CHS…
>You’re pretty sure her name was Vinyl Scratch, but you don’t know that for sure other than that she’s apparently an extraordinary DJ.
>However, this girl’s lax nature differed though and you could tell by the smile on her face.
>Whereas someone like Dash or Vinyl is cautiously aware of their surroundings despite being absorbed in their own music or activities, this girl seems to ignore not only her environment but her social exhibitions--hence why she literally just snapped a picture of you so up close without so much as saying “what’s up?”
>Not that you mind that much, though.
>I mean, truth be told: you’d wanna take a pic of HER ass, after all.
>She then stares at the picture on her phone for a second, nod with a smug smile of self-satisfaction, starts to hum to her music again, and walks away as her rock music leaks through her cheap headphones.
>For some reason, you feel a certain desire that make you start walking after her immediately.
>Almost hazily in a trance, you take several steps to pursue her cease when you feel a heavy hand on place itself on your shoulder.
>It’s Commissioner Gordon’s hand.
>You blink for a few seconds and clear your mind a little; you know, trying to shake off the haziness.
“Hey, what gives?”
>He smirks at you.
>“You know, kid, you remind a bit too much like myself when I was your age,” he says with a complacent smile.
>>27489075
>Be Sunset.
>Laying down on your bed, wearing a pink silk nightgown and you can’t sleep.
>Looking at your alarm clock, you see that it’s 9:37 pm.
“Why can’t I sleep?”
>You’ve been trying to fall asleep for the last hour but you’ve been thinking of what happened earlier today.
>You ran around school searching for Anon and you held him down while demanding another date.
>Not your best moment but Adagio just makes you so mad.
“Maybe I should apologize.”
>Sliding you legs off the bed, you get off the bed and walk towards your vanity mirror.
>Picking up your phone, you scroll through your contacts till you reach Anon’s number.
>You hesitate a little, wondering if he’s awake or not.
“I’ll just call and leave a message.”
>You hit the call button and you hear the phone ring.
>RIIIIING.
>RIIIIINNG.
> “Hello?”
>Well guess that answers if Anon’s awake or not.
“Hey Anon, it’s Sunset.”
> “Sunny, is everything ok?”
“Yes everything’s fine.”
> “You sure, I could be over there in a few minutes.”
>You feel a bit tempted to say come over but decide not to.
>You don’t know if you want to see his reaction to your current state of dress.
“I’m sure and I called was to tell you that we don’t need to go on that date tomorrow if you don’t want to.”
>You hear him laugh a bit tiredly.
> “Sorry Sunny, but you’re not getting out of that date that easily.”
>You couldn’t help hugging yourself as you walk over to your bed.
“But I feel bad demanding a date from you.”
> “Hey, we were bound to go on another date sooner or later. So It’s not a problem.”
>You sit on your bed smiling.
> “Now what should we do tomorrow?”
>>27492123
Nice save Jim, who knows what sort of lewd acts she would have performed on him
>>27491968
Anon is a hostage to get to spider-shim. However, this happens so often that he no longer responds with fear, instead he is incredibly sarcastic and often mocks the villain who has captured him. After all, if they were going to kill him they would have done it before. Eventually, he gets so annoying that he either convinces a villain to reform, or throw him out.
>>27492206
“How about noon?”
> “That’s fine.”
>He yawns a little.
> “Is there anything else you need Sunny? I’m a bit tired and want to sleep.”
>Shaking your head, smiling at his blunt response.
“No, I just wanted to apologize. But anyways I just want to say I love you and goodnight.”
> “I love you to Sunny and wish you were here.”
>You hang up the phone and lay back down on your bed.
>Grabbing your yellow and red pony plushie, you hug it close to your chest.
“Wish Anon did come over and see me right now.”
>You remember that you have your phone in your hand and get an idea.
“Maybe Anon will see me tonight.”
>Be Anon.
>You just finished talk to Sunset about your date.
>You just hope it’s better than last time.
>BEEEP BEEEEP!!
>You check your phone to find that you have a text from Sunset.
“Did she forget something?”
>Shrugging, you open the text to find a very interesting pic.
>The shows Sunset wearing a red silky nightgown that ends at her nice ass and hips while bending forward to show some cleavage.
>The text that follows said, “Think of me in your dreams.”
>You’re not sure if she’s messing with you or not, but one things for sure.
“I’m gonna have to save this.”
>>27492219
He'll show fear when Rhino tries to do butt stuff with him
>>27491968
I had an idea where Spider-Woman is trying to bone Twilight, but shoots web. The reaction Twilight would have practically writes itself.
Of course I can't write this due to my own established canon, but it's still a funny idea.
>>27492230
All for now gonna write the date tomorrow. Thoughts?
>>27491968
Generally speaking I would like to see a green were Anon has to deal with a few variations of Spider-Sunset living with him and wanting him.
>>27492265
>Anon has to deal with a few variations of Spider-Sunset living with him and wanting him
I'm just gonna keep this in mind for later...maybe...
It sounds like a fun idea.
>>27492219
I'd like Anon reforming Starlight like that, It would be a good reason to have one of the powerless Anons to start learning magic, or not.
>>27492219
Or what if Anon becomes friends with several of spidey's villains and has a poker night or something where they all meet up? I'm thinking of that scene from the JLU cartoon with the flash and the trickster.
>>27492219
That's actuay pretty funny. I quite like it.
>>27492277
I'm surprised no one did the idea with the Web-verse being out
>>27492278
Comics Fan Anon trying to teach Starlight about Truth, Justice, and the American Way in spandex?
That could be fun too.
Man, you guys are full of sweet ideas.
>>27492281
*actually
>>27492265
Please have something big written.
Thats all I ask, something nice that won't leave me hanging on the edge of my seat betwix deliveries.
>>27492307
Thanks.
>>27492357
I'm gonna try to have a good number for tomorrow, that's all I will promise
>>27492307
>She's a magical girl with great power but couldn't care less about being responsible
>He's a comic book fan who's read all about the responsibility, but without any power
>Together, they fight crime!
>.... Now if only they could decide on her superhero name...
>>27492289
Web-verse? The fuck's that shit?
>>27492405
I might have got the name wrong but I meant that comic were they show the different Spider-mans
>>27492437
Spider-verse. That's what you're thinking of.
>>27492289
You mean the Spider-Verse?
>>27492472
The extended skull one on the bottom left. Who it is?
>>27492481
Spider-Monkey
So many Spiders, so little time
>>27492557
... two of those are Silk, tho
>>27492576
Hey, who turned out the lights?
>>27492307
Personally, I'd go the extra mile for a protective, lightweight and utilitarian yet stylish sneaking suit. Both have their pros and cons, but I wouldn't take my chances with guns, superpowers or not. What do you guys think about this kind of thing?
>>27492735
Spandex gets you labeled as a fetishist by storeclerks.
Military equipment gets you in watchlists and texas.
>>27492735
B-But muh superheroes...
Though it would be very funny to see Glimmer go full "No Capes!"
>>27492769
it's all about striking a balance
>>27492778
>If it goes lower than your knees, it will get you killed!
>If it stays far from the floor, it will be a problem regardless!
>>27492778
Remember that time Disney had a villain get sucked through a fokin jet engine
>>27492852
Remember that a duck will slow the engine and force a plane to an emergency landing.
He probably went to moraly-relative-afterlife with a few dozen souls.
>>27492735
Do you think that love can bloom on the battlefield?
>>27492769
Texas, man.
>>27492778
You don't have to look like a scarlet macawto do the right thing. And I like the idea of her listing off random superheroes being screwed over by their capes.
As for the balance. Dark hex patterned spandex or something something similar? Like Spidey's black spandex when he began rolling with Venom.
>>27492917Yeah... I do.
>>27492230
Oh my, yes.
>>27493058
I had a revelation, about Starlight being a mutant who can supress others powers, she would be an antihero like the punisher, just slightly less violent.
She enters the scene, the supercriminals powers stop working and she breaks them with less-lethal weaponry, mainly her steel staff which ends in a cattle prod, she would beat the shit out of them before leaving, broken bones, internal hemorraghea and all that. She wouldn't be against shooting someone if there is no other choise, but it would be 'last resort'. I think she would be a paragon of fitness and would fight backed by [/fit/] normal people wearing the same oufit.
Those were my thoughts while brewing a cup of coffee for my boss.
There is a distinct lack of Jay Garrick in this thread
>>27493332
I recognize the suit, but I have no idea about the name.
>>27474051
>"So you have no direct control over them... hmm, I doubt that will do for very long, I imagine the Void will give you a power to at the very least direct them in a general direction eventually, but for now, if that is all you have for your offensive abilities..."
>She grinned at you, her appearance suddenly almost feral
>"Let's learn about your defensive capabilities!~"
>Oh fuck
>The way her voice changed at the end there
>...that was both terrifying and arousing
"O-okay!"
>She begins to float, the powers of the void faintly swirling around her momentarily, her hair growing longer and longer until it formed three distinct, ethereal whips around her
>The tendrils came together in front of her, sparking purple
>Then came the giant laser
"holy FUUUUUU-"
>your voice was cut off by the noise of the laser as it blasted right for you
>You tried to dodge it, but you were too slow
>it blasted into your shield, which, thankfully, held
>the blast sent arcs of purple light past your head, diffusion from the laser
>You stared it down, mouth open in a silent scream of pure fear until a second later your shield fell, and you were suddenly taking the full brunt of the laser
>It seared into you, almost rooting you to the ground
"AAAAAAAAH!"
>You screamed in pain as it started to burn THROUGH you, seeming to almost dissect you, even though you could somehow tell it hadn't actually burnt through you, it sure as hell felt like it.
>You fell to your knees as the laser finally stopped and Luna landed back on the ground, her grin gone, replaced with a look of worry
>"Oh dear..."
>That was the last you heard before you passed out
>>27493379
>not recognizing the first Flash
>>27493408
Nononono, I recognized "First Flash".
But thats all.
gooey friends
>>27493248
Pretty nice, but what about her magic gimmick?Are we going thermonuclear astrophysics for this?
>>27493735
Heh, you said goo
>>27493789
>>27493837
Lewd
>>27493850
good
Post hips.
>>27493871
So you're holding the story hostage unless we provide you with hips?
Fine you madman
>>27493871
Here's Spider-Hips
>>27493401
>You woke up with... holy fuck chest pain
>You groan weakly, looking around
>you're in a hospital bed
>greeeaaat
>last thing you remember is getting blasted in the face with a big purple laser
>...fuck you Luna.
>Fuck
>You
>Taking a closer look at your surroundings, you realize your hospital bed... isn't in a hospital
>It's still inside the warehouse thingy Luna has
>well, that's better than what you were expecting
>Having to explain a giant hole in your chest to your parents would have been hard
>You look down, finding yourself bare-chested
>no bandages
>nothing
>no burn marks or anything
>what in the high holy fuck is going on here
>you pat your chest, wincing a bit
>it hurt like a bitch, but there was nothing on the outside that showed it
>actually, now that you looked at yourself
>...when the hell did you get buff? or at least, muscular
>what used to be a layer of flab had become a well defined six pack
>huh
>well, guess the Void found something in you worth devouring after all
>thanks, you guess
>you slowly sit up, and find Luna staring down at you
>holy fuck you're blind sometimes
"...what the hell is wrong with you?"
>She continued to stare, writing something in her fucking clipboard
"Hello? Earth to Luna? You just SHOT ME WITH A LASER!"
>She nodded
>"Yes, yes I did, and not only did you survive, you completely blocked best attack with your shield for one point five seconds"
>...for fucking real
"...that was your best attack, and you used it on me"
>"...yes? I do not see your issue with this, if I had not tested you, something else would have, and I doubt they would carry your limp body to a bed after you passed out"
>okay maybe she had a point
>you sighed, wincing as your chest moved, it still stung like a bitch, but gradually, the pain was lessening
"Mind explaining why there's not a hole burnt in my chest?"
>"well that's quite simple, Anon, you regenerated it"
>are you
>FUCKING SERIOUS
"How fast?"
>"You have been unconscious less than an hour"
>>27493871
but hips are lewd...
>>27493888
Or maybe he's writing lewds and needs inspiration.
https://derpibooru.org/535815
https://derpibooru.org/733249
>>27493935
Luna is Worst Mentor.
Worst.
Mentor.
>>27493947
Come on kid, all the cool people are doing it.
Don't you want to be cool?
>>27493972
B-But... lewd...
>>27493993
Shhhhh, don't fight it
Just enjoy the ride
>>27493888
Nope, I just tried weed for the first time, and I want hips more than usual. And I'm giggling at absolutely fucking nothing. Kinda weird amd shit.
I'll deliver though, don't you worry. Probably tomorrow...
>>27494014
O-Okay...
>>27494028
But Beans, drug are addictive and illegal
>>27494028
You should write now and edit later when you've ridden it out. Might be worthwhile.
https://derpibooru.org/413081
https://derpibooru.org/1144216
>>27493907
Whew lad...
>>27493966
>pic related
>>27494052
It's a one time thing. I ain't ever doing this shit again. There's not even a buzz, I just feel giddy. I'm just hungry, my mouth is weirdly dry, and I'm slower.
>>27494065
Ok, I'll try this...
>>27494111
"They said I wouldn't get hooked after the first hit"
>>27494124
Bloke, I don't even drink. I'm not going to do weed ever again after this. It's not really all that good anyway.
>>27494132
Good, there has never been an instance where a person's life improved because of drugs
>>27494151
I literally fell off my chair laughing at this and I never fucking do that.AYLMAO
>>27494151
>4:19
>4:20
>>27494042
>>27494132
My sister did it once. She was very disappointed and frustrated by the fact that she was in that daze you get in when you're about to go to dreamland but wasn't able to actually fall asleep. She feels it isn't the right kind of escape.
Trigger warning:anthro
https://derpibooru.org/1016530
https://derpibooru.org/1016531
https://derpibooru.org/1016533
>>27494251
This is basically porn
>>27494280
I'm not complaining.
>>27493746
Go Warlock route. Give her a grimoire (can be linked to Equestria, or not) and a ritual to contact a higher patron. She hid this from her henchmen/minions/fellow norman persons.
>>27494532
>She summons some mad as fuck wank demon as a last resort
>Everyone except her is awestruck and afraid
>But mostly afraid
>>27493935
>you'll think it again
>ARE YOU
>FUCKING SERIOUS
"You lasered a hole through my chest and I'm supposed to believe it took LESS THAN AN HOUR to heal up?"
>"Well, that is quite simply the truth, dear Anon, you have a healing factor, less than that of most other Voidborn, in fact, though faster than my own."
>This is bullshit of the highest caliber
>but you believe it
>because the only other option is her laser didn't actually do anything
>and pain like that is... pretty much impossible to fake to your knowledge
>so
>apparently you can heal from some fucking serious injury in under an hour
"So... why am I not dead? Legitimate question, because as far as I'm aware I kinda need a heart to live and you kinda melted that with your laser"
>"Oh, silly Anon, I did not put the laser through you! It may have felt that way, and I do apologize for that, I should have waited a while longer to put your body through such strain, if only for the more conclusive results. In any case, your heart did not stop, it was merely chared to almost a crisp"
>...
>WELP
>you're basically immortal
>...as long as you keep murdering people
>You slip your feet over the side of the bed
"Where's my shirt?"
>"Oh, ahem, it appears to have burnt up in the beam, however, I have some... replacement clothes, that I feel would suit you better"
>...
>hang on you don't have enough ellipsis to match your current emotional state of pure "wat"
>.......................................................................
"Why? Why do you think I need new clothes?"
>"Well, so that your identity can remain hidden, of course! Here, do try this on, it is made of cloth infused with Void energy, so it should change it's size to match yours"
>You were handed a faintly glowing purple cloth, and slipped it over your head, noting the hood that came up with it, and a scarf that covered your mouth, hiding your face.
>The voidcloth shrunk to fit you
~It feels GOOD~
>Wait
>that wasn't your voice...
~What else does this do~
>>27494654
Make it a Telugoroth, a timestream creature gould be a golden way to link it to her canon story. And being learned from a grimoire lets Anon/Sunset keep it in mind topull a "One More Day"
>>27494169
Speed Force. Not even once.
Have a uncomfortable pic m8s!
>>27495100
Uncomfortable indeed, why are you eating canned cat food?
>>27495100
But why?
>>27491968
Blue beetle anon.
>>27495123
I don't know
kinda quiet tonight, surprised I'm not getting much feedback, but whatever
>>27494692
>"Hmm? oh, it disguises your voice, lends it an air of command, useful, considering what you will most likely be doing while wearing that"
>The cloth was light, and seemed to keep you at your perfect temperature, and it was incredibly soft
~Do you have more o-~
>you pull the scarf down
"god that's weird, anyways, do you have more of this stuff? I kinda like it..."
>she giggles
>"I have a stockpile, I suppose I could let you have some extra, though if you intend to wear it, there's more from that outfit, here"
>She tosses you a set of blue underclothes and purple pants to go over them, a set of metal gloves -oh that would be useful to hide your glow- and some boots
>There was also a belt with a sword on it, but you... somehow got the feeling that was purely ceremonial
"Thanks, but I was hoping to make something else out of the stuff, it's... really nice, like, better than silk in terms of softness and stuff, I was kinda hoping to use it for blankets and pillows"
>the giggle became a laugh, and you sighed, putting a hand against your face
>"Oh Anon, you are quite adorable sometimes, but to answer your question, yes, I have plenty of the cloth left for you to make a blanket and pillows out of if you so desire"
>your face is turning red at this point, and you're starting to stutter out of embarrassment, which only made you more embarrassed
"T-thanks... c-could you turn around so I could try this other stuff on?"
>she smirks coyly
>"It's nothing I haven't seen before, Anon, I had to examine your whole body to keep track of the regeneration, after all"
>...WELP
>Luna's a fucking psychopath, AND a perv
>God damn, just your luck
>Get awesome super powers
>but you have to kill people
>get a mentor to help learn about your powers
>she's a creep who's easily twice your age and yet somehow has the body of someone so much younger
>...fuck it
>you strip quickly, tossing your old clothes away...
>>27495374
I'm liking it so far, but you might want to wrap this whole training scene up and get to the shimsham real quick like.
>>27495533
Aye, it's almost over, once he really gets into his new clothes it'll be time for dimmerdong to meat shimmysham
Bump
I'm not saying any of you should write him into a story, but one of you should definitely write him into a story
>>27495374
>...fuck it
Oh he better. moonass is best ass.
>>27497483
We need a stalker Spider-Shimmer
>>27493401
Luna is Vel'koz.
Called it.
>>27498087
Well I mean, no shit, she's a void born who's in control of a school, a place of knowledge, I thought it was pretty obvious
>>27495374
>Luna mumbles something under your breath as she scribbles something down
>"Physical condition... peak... examine... capabilities...
>you think you know where she's going with that, and considering how fucked up your life is right now, you... don't really care that she wants to jump your bones
>You glance into the mirror
>Your whole body is evenly toned muscle, with maybe a light layer of fat over it all
>Well, that explains why she wants a piece of you
>Shit, if you were gay and had a cloning machine you'd probably fuck yourself, you look that good
>The Void has granted you a wonderful gift, with a terrible price
>But you've already proven you're willing to pay that price
>Are you a monster for that?
>Or are you just a man trying to keep himself alive?
>Is there a difference?
>You'd find out soon, you supposed as you slipped on the underclothes -a blue shirt and underwear-
>Next came the pants, which you found breathable, and light, with plenty of freedom of movement, on top of the already amazing qualities of the Voidcloth
>Then you slipped the robe back over your head, making sure the long piece was in the back
>Belt and boots and you were suited up
>The whole thing felt simply incredible to wear
>You pulled down the facemask and looked back at Luna, who nodded approvingly
>"Excellent, I assume they are to your liking?"
"Yes"
>"Good, now, if you will excuse me, I will be slipping into my own garb, and then we shall put your powers to the real test"
>Wait what
>You thought you were done for tonight
"Wait, what do you mean?"
>"You have your hunger to sate, I have mine, and our goals coincide, thus, tonight I am going to... oh how do you younger folk put it... 'take you out on the town' and feed upon the masses"
>...das fucked up
>dat's just straight up FUCKED
>She's basically asking you on a date
>to go murder people
>this is your life now
>...fuck, there's no other choice is there
>No real hope of mitigating damage either...
>Fuck
>Do or Die, Anonymous
>>27498415
Post-Murder-Fuck when?
>>27498415
"...um, okay, I guess, I mean..."
>You sigh
"I'm still getting used to the whole "Killing people" thing"
>She nods solemnly
>"I understand, that is why I will be going with you, to ensure the fact that you are uncomfortable with your duty does not prevent you from preforming it, and, if you require, to comfort you in the aftermath."
>Well shit
>You don't really have a choice
>Might as well just get it over with, try to avoid killing children so you feel slightly less horrible
>You pull up the cloth, covering the lower half of your face
~When do we start~
>She smiled, a warm, genuine smile
>Which just made you all the more uncomfortable
>"As soon as I change into my disguise, after all, I cannot risk being discovered and captured while we sleep"
>Wait hold up
>While WE sleep?
>She leaves before you can ask about THAT choice of words, which leaves you forced to assume the worst
>Or would that be the best
>On the one hand, she's your vice principal, easily twice your age, and fucking psychopathic
>On the other, you'd lose your virginity to that smoking hot body
>you shake your head, sighing as you walked out the door of the little emergency room she had set up
>Here you were about to fucking murder people, and all you can think about is sex
>Definitely leaning towards monster right about now
>You look around the warehouse, which was... mostly loaded with books
>And almost all of them were in languages you couldn't fucking understand
>Most of them had to do with science, from the looks of it
>Understanding the world around us
>Even as that world was fucked sideways by the Void
>You hear a door behind you and turn, looking at Luna
>She wore a purple facemask with her hair wrapped in three long, purple tendrils, and the rest of her body was covered in... grey? you think it's grey armor.
>Said armor made her look sexy as all hell
>why did you think that
>now is not the time to think with your boner, Anon
>"Well, are you ready to leave, then?"
"...Yes, let's go."
>>27498496>soon™
>>27498519
Ah damnit I forgot to use the "Void Voice" marks instead of his normal quotation marks, I'll fix that in the pastebin
>>27498510
>The two of you leave the warehouse, and then climb up on top of the school to get a view
~So, do you have a plan?~
>"Yes, indeed I do, you see, my hunger cannot be sated with mere killing, I need assets in order to collect what I need, and on this world, assets are rather difficult to come by, therefore, we are going to collect what I need from the bank, where you can feed on the guards"
>Bank Robbery
>Welp
~Any chance I get a cut of the cash?~
>"Well of course, An- hmm, that is a problem"
~What is it?~
>"I cannot call you by that name, lest we reveal our identities... ah, there is a solution"
~We don't use names?~
>"No, we simply use the names given to us by the Void"
>wat
~The Void gave us names?~
>"Well of course, it has to identify us by something, and it does not understand human names, I'm shocked you did not realize this, do you not already know yours?"
>You thought about it
>Your name
>Anonymous
>Anon
>Then the Voice with no Voice put the thought in your head
>Malzahar
>Felt... Egyptian
>But you liked it
~Malzahar~
>"Ah... I am Vel'Koz, it is a pleasure to be on this quest with you"
~I would say the same, but I still have a little bit of a moral quandary dealing with, you know, murdering people~
>"Well, that is why we are doing this, the faster you become accustomed to this, the more useful you will be to the Void, come, let us begin our conquest"
>You both floated down off the roof, almost gliding towards the closest bank in your small suburb around New York City
>It was late now, almost 8:00, the bank would be about to close
>You both stood just outside the doors, and you took a glance around
>No one had seen you the whole way
>Good
>"Before we enter, Malzahar, I wish you to keep one thing in mind - be quick, for I have heard there is someone locally who has powers capable of giving us a fight"
>There's someone out there
>Good.
>>27498947
wait a second malzahar? vel koz? league of legends inspired i guess? vel would rather kill anon than help him
>>27499425
It's been that way since the start, I confirmed it a long time ago, and, from what I've seen of Vel'Koz, it would use Anon and his powers as a tool to gather more knowledge and THEN kill him. As long as Malz!Anon is useful, Vel gets more knowledge, why would it destroy a powerful tool?
>>27498947
>You felt legitimately better, knowing there was someone who could potentially stop you
>You still had some problems with murdering people, and breaking the law in general
>But you had to do this if you wanted to live
>Luna -Vel'Koz, you guess- had already put a laser through you as a TEST
>If the Void didn't kill you for refusing to kill others, she would
>just... get this over with, make it as quick and painless as possible for them
~Let's go~
>You shoved aside your doubts as you burst through the doors with Luna at your side, you could deal with the guilt when you weren't doing something risky
>Like robbing a bank
>At first, people just gave you strange looks as the two of you stormed across the marble room towards the tellers
>Then Luna shot a strange projectile forward, between the two security guards.
>It split, hitting both of them and making them stumble, groaning in pain
>You took your queue, wincing as you summoned forth the gateways to the Void, the two projectiles cutting right through them, killing them
>You kept moving, not looking at the dead bodies as you made it to the Tellers, who were currently panicking, having already pressed the button to call the police
>"Money, now! In the bag!"
>She held out a large sack of Voidcloth, and the Teller complied, opening her register and tossing money into it
>"Kill her" she snapped at you once the poor girl was done
>You complied, blasting your basic Void energy forward at her head, killing her as quickly as possible
>Four
>Four people you've murdered
>and as you looked around, you only saw more potential victims to your slaughter
>You pushed those thoughts away as Luna kept moving, collecting money
>Damn it
>>27499549
ok that kinda makes sense velkoz using anoin as tool
>>27499549
>You followed her, killing every single Teller
>You tried to make it quick and painless, but you knew how the Void did it's work
>You kept your self hatred pushed down though
>Luna could easily turn on you if you didn't kill who she said to kill
>And you knew you couldn't win that fight
>Soon, the whole row was dead by your hand
>you followed her to the back of the building, where the vault was kept, and watched her use her so-called "Best attack" to blast it open
>inside was loaded with cash on shelves, and you even saw a few gold ingots
>you helped her grab it all and shove it into her Voidcloth bag, which seemed to have an almost infinite space
>you were about to leave when you heard a female voice from up to your left
>"Hey, Arabian nights!"
>You looked up, and there you saw what would become your arch-nemisis
>A woman, hanging on the ceiling, in a red and blue spandex suit
~Is this the person you spoke of, Vel'Koz?~
>"Yes, yes it is"
>Luna glared up at her
>"We meet again, Spider-girl"
>"Um, excuse me, it's Spider-/woman/, please get your names right, you hentai nightmare"
>holy fuck you almost laughed out loud
>"I don't have time for this, Malzahar, kill her"
>You blinked, then nodded
~Very well~
>"Uh-uh, you stay right there tentacles!"
>The girl launched some white substance at Luna's feet, rooting her to the ground
>You stepped up in front of her, opening the gates of the Void to kill her
>She almost got out of it, jumping away, but the projectiles hit her leg, and she fell awkwardly, seemingly trying to throw another white projectile your way
>"What gives? Uugh, stupid fucking web slingers are broken again, fine, we'll do this the other way!"
>She launched herself at you, fist aimed right at your face
>your shield was in the way of that though
>her fist collided with it, and you thought you heard a *crunch*
>"Ow motherfucker!"
>You took the opportunity to back up a bit as she fell away, though you stayed silent
>you need to work on your banter
>>27500267
"~I don't have time to deal with inse-- I'm going to squash you like a--...Just die~"
>mfw I legitimately can't bring the bantz for Malz!Anon because I'm not clever enough
I need to read more spiderman comics to figure this shit out
>>27500922
If can't do playfull bantz then just try with menacing, even if it's bad you can have the other characters react to it.
"Welcome to the splatterhouse, kid"
-That's the best you have? A NES title?
"That and the building over you" Drops it.
>>27500267
>Seriously, you've murdered how many people now?
>Eleven
>Eight Tellers
>Two Guards
>and Flash Sentry
>Eleven people
>And you couldn't come up with some good one liners
>What kind of super villain were you?
>Because you were a villain, that much had become clear
>This girl in front of you, with her form fitting spandex with a spider on it, was the Hero
>Wait, a spider?
>Yes, something to poke fun at!
~Well, little bug, I suppose it's time I introduced you to your friends!~
>You called to the Voidlings, summoning one in the tiny hall you were in, and hoping it moved towards this Spider-Woman
>It did, as Luna had disappeared with the cash... somewhere
>You'd find her later, for now
>You heard sirens out front
>Even as the bugs were multiplying around Spider-Woman, you started to float away as fast as you could
>"Hey, come back here, OW mothe- WHY ARE THERE MORE OF THEM!? GET OFF ME YOU PURPLE PUNKS!"
>You snickered to yourself, opening a nearby side door and making your escape
>Or, you would have
>had there not been a SWAT team right in front of that door
>"GET DOWN ON THE GROUND, HANDS BEHIND YOUR H-"
~SILENCE~
>You cast your void gates at the group, making their guns start to smoke and melt, now effectively neutered
>They started to run, but you called to the void again, and this time something else came out
>A purple cloud covered the head of one of the team leader, and he began to scream, falling to his knees, and then all the way to the ground, the purple cloud suddenly popping over to another SWAT member, causing the same thing to happen
>Until all six were dead
>Seventeen murders
>You had a feeling this was only the beginning
>But you couldn't think about the atrocity you just committed, you had to run
>And run you did, escaping the bank and making it back to Luna's warehouse inside the school
>the whole situation had taken only a bit over an hour to finish
>You had killed sixteen people in an hour, and robbed a bank to boot
>Villain status confirmed
>>27501507
He could always become a Punisher style vigilante how just kills criminals. He would still be at odds Spider-Woman because you know 'Killing is bad'. Still better than being a straight up super villain, in my opinion.
>>27501610
The story started with Anon killing spider-woman.
>>27501637
I haven't been paying attention but,
Why is anon murdering people?
How can you have a spider-shim story if she's dead?
>>27501658
It's a weird life story idea, telling Anon's story
>>27492230
>Be Anon.
>You’re in front of Sunset’s house to pick her up for the date.
>You walk up to the door and knock.
“Hope nothing happens today.”
>The door opens to reveal Sunset wearing a simple purple halter top, an orange skirt and heels.
>She even had a small red purse hanging from her shoulders.
> “Hey Anon. Ready to go?”
>You cock your eyebrow.
“Yeah, you in a hurry?”
>She grabs your hand and drags you away from the house.
> “My parents wanted to do something embarrassing.”
>You smile and walk beside her.
“Aw, and I wanted to see your cute baby pictures.”
> “Not if I can help it.”
>You just laugh as her whole face blushes.
> “Let’s get going, ok?”
>You pull her arm, stopping her, as she looked at you confused.
“We’ll get there, but.”
>You break her grip on your hand and slip your arm behind her.
>You pull her close to you and begin to walk towards the park.
“Ok now we can go.”
>Sunset just nods as she rest her head on your shoulders.
>It only took about ten minutes to get to the park.
>You just walked around the park with no purpose except enjoying your girlfriend’s company.
>You asked all kinds of stuff ranging from ‘What’s going on,’ to ‘What crazy things Pinkie’s been up to’.
>Sunset answered all your questions and she even asked some of her own.
>Soon you decided to just walk and window show.
>Sunset walks towards a shop and looks at the window.
>You talk your time as you make your way towards Sunset.
“Why did you stop Sunny?”
>>27502059
>She doesn’t answer, she just looks at the window.
>Looking up you see two mannequins dressed in a snow white dress and a black suit.
“So thinking about prom? Or maybe something else?”
>Sunset looks away from the window as she stammers.
> “N-no I wa-asn’t thinking t-that. T-they ju-st looked nice, that’s all.”
>You roll your eyes at her.
“Sure you weren’t. Let’s go look around some more.”
> “I want to check something first.”
>She walks inside while you stay where you are.
>Sunset comes back out a minute later and grabs your hand gently.
“Got what you came for?”
> “Sorta, just wanted to ask them something.”
>You nod, knowing she asked about the dress.
“Well, let’s go. I need to get something to drink.”
>Walking around you see a familiar face walk out a bookstore with a stack of books.
“Hey Twilight.”
>Said girl turns around and waves at you and Sunset.
> “Hey guys, what’re you doing?”
> “We’re on a date, Twilight. We just saw you and figured we’d say hi.”
>Twilight nods as she tries to hold onto her books.
“Need help with those?”
>She shook her head as she struggled to hold them.
> “I’m fine and I better get going. And Sunset, I need you to show you something later.”
>Sunset looks a bit excited.
> “You mean..?”
>Twilight nods at her question.
> “I’ll come by as soon as I can.”
> “Alright, bye Sunset, bye Anon. Have a nice date.”
>Twilight starts to walk away as Sunset waves goodbye.
“See ya Twilight and don’t tell Pinkie.”
>You could hear her laugh as Sunset giggles.
> “Why don’t you want Pinkie to know?”
>You give her a dry look, like she’s an idiot.
“She would throw a party for us and do you want a party to randomly happen if we have lunch or dinner?”
>Sunset’s eyes go wide and nods.
> “She must never know.”
>>27501658
because this is a flash back sorta dealand Shimmy isn't dead, this started with her ABOUT to die
>>27502088
>You’re returning to Sunset’s home with Sunset happily hugging a small wolf plushie.
“You really love that thing, don’t you?”
>She nods as she looks at you.
> “Of course, you did win it for me.”
>You’re just outside her front door when it opens to reveal a woman with red and orange hair wearing a simple white dress.
> “There you are Sunny-Bunny. I was wondering when you would get back.”
>Sunset sighs as she hugs her mom.
> “Well I’m back mom.”
>Se let’s go of Sunset and looks at you.
> “Now did the two of you eat dinner yet?”
“No we decided to go home cause we were feeling a bit tired.”
>Mrs. Shimmer smiles as she holds the door open.
> “Well why don’t you stay for dinner. And I can show you Sunny-Bunny’s baby pictures.”
>Before you could answer Sunset starts to push you to the sidewalk.
> “Oh what’s that? You need to go home?”
>She spins you around and gives you a quick kiss on the lips then spins you back around.
> “Hate to see you go but I’ll see you later. Goodbye.”
>Once you’re on the sidewalk Sunset runs back to her house, pulls her mother in and closes the door.
“Well, that happened.”
>You begin to walk away as your phone rings.
>You take the phone out of your pocket to see a text message from Sunset.
> “Sorry Anon. I’ll talk to you later. Love you.”
>You end a reply saying it’s ok and that you loved her back.
>You put your phone away as you start to walk home.
>>27502143
Good. Now I can actually bother to read your story.Why everything I write sounds scornful? I just mean that the snippets of your tale I've read over the last few days were pretty interesting, but without their link to Shimmy and the Spider-Shim theme it becomes (as I see) Lol fanfiction, and that is most uninteresting to me. Your declaration has given me hope to endure.
>>27502211
The dates done and action will happen tomorrow.
Gonna try to figure out how Sunset will find out about Anon's powers. Thoughts and ideas?
>>27502211
When he finally gets his hands on those baby pictures I want him to make copies and them the all their friends. Cuteness overload.
>>27502143
I really hope we get some redemption for our hero. I'll keep reading even if there isn't, and you can do whatever it's your story, but I would rather self insert as a hero than a murder puppet from the depths of space.
>>27502249
That thing Twilight wanted to talk about. It's about Sombra right?
>>27502285
It could be anything.
New material for their costumes, a vibrator, a love potion or even bondage gear.
>>27502249
A simple one is having a villian attack with only one place to hide, but no way to hide from each other, so it becomes a stand-off of who suits up first to save their lover.
>>27502311D) All of the above.
>>27502311
Oh I love it when like that.
>>27502325
I like the way you think.
>>27502325
Like the idea. Still thinking of Sunset seeing Anon transform into the Angel first before she finds out.
And it could be.
>>27502356
>>27502331
You have no idea how happy this makes me feel.
One question. How did you decided on the angel's powerset?
>>27502405
Anon Has Deslin Rowe's power from Infamous since Anon is his son.
Now I went through and saw what powers Deslin absorbed and Anon more or less copied them.
He has the simple blasts but I'm tweaking the powers so theyre somewhat special to him.
>>27502436
Does Anon's powers have a green tint? I feel like they should.
>>27502263
There's plans for that
remember the tease about "Kaz"?
>>27502469
Somewhat, when he touches someone and absorbs their powers yes but the elements all depend.
Neon for example gives him a rainbow like glow.
The green's there but he's not like the Hulk
yo, how's everyone?
>>27503101
Good, just had post an update a while ago
>>27503101
Dead inside, dead outside. How are you?
>>27503309
hot, wet, and sticky. I hate working at the movies and this weather hasn't helped my mood.
>>27503339
At least you're not me. I work at a parking garage
ITT: How being miserable at work improves the quality of the greens.
>>27503339
I clean hotel lobbies at a national park, so I know that feel.
>>27503339
This picture makes me hot and sticky
>>27503791
what a qt
Ah, okay, I've added possible story ideas to my notes for Shimmering.
>>27504479
I'm really liking that Henchman idea.
>>27504479
Go With Glam!
>>27504523
He could be like her own, personal Bob
It's not his fault, some people are just uniquely suited to the hench life
Sunset'd probably notice his constant appearance every time she shuts down a mad scientist or some other wacky shenanigans and strike up a friendship with him.
It's not personal, just part of the life, y'know?
>>27504552
That'll be a long haul story, prolly
Might do it after Shimmering is finished up.
>>27504479
>>27504552
Meh, I think there needs to be more GlimGlam green, but I feel like it would be kind of cringey if the anon was a comic fan relentlessly lecturing her on what she should do. If he just had a common sense of decency and a mild affection then sure it could work, but the picture that comes to mind with comic book fan is awful. If anything, I think an Anon who is either friends/dating Spider-shim getting kidnapped by villains so often, he's chill about it and either winds up socializing with her to pass the time, relentlessly annoying her into submission/reform, or giving therapy sessions to her so she gets over her abandonment issues and becomes a good guy.
>>27504611
He'd probably start off overexcited because hoply-shit-he-just-found-someone-with-amazing-powers-and-oh-no-why-is-she-frowning-at-him and then just offer to be her jimminy cricket. Something he says probably strikes a chord with her (maybe something Celestia once said in a speech about duty) and she decides ure, why not?
Costume arguments ensue
I'd actually totally forgotten about Constantly Kidnapped-non, I'll add it to the list
>>27504647
See all I picture is some fat, hyperventilating nechbeard stammering out a few words and then shouting "CAN I BE YOU MORAL COMPASS?" before passing out. It just sounds like shitty cringe humor. Why would Glimmer listen to him for even a second? She doesn't have a reason to pay attention to him, let alone make him her "jimminy cricket." This is just what I'm picturing, don't let it stop you.
By the way, I just talked with Mamo, and his ban was only til the 30th. He'll back soon, the magnificent bastard. For his new lewds, he'll just post the links. He says hi to you all.
Also, weed is weird. I never felt a buzz, but I laughed a lot and felt loopy. My writing was also sloppier than usual and I've had massive brain fog all day. I don't think I'm gonna smoke it again.
>>27504479
I like
>Symbiote butt stuff
>Black suit bullying
>Goblin-non and Shommer
>>27504669
.... If that is how you want to picture as yet unwritten, intentionally physically vague, basically faceless characters, then that is your prerogative.
As it is, he'll hardly be a drooling fanatic, just an excited fan of capes who sees someone with a lot of potential, but no desire to dedicate herself to a higher cause.
And Glimmer? Well, her intentions might start off... rather selfish.
>>27504716
You do you, Beany
>>27504717
Nothing more embarrassing than your brand-new suit from space giving you a public orgasm because it's decided that you should feel good all the time
The bullying thing I'm just looking forwards to writing Shimmer as more of a character than a presence, even if it's just for something goofy and cute.
I feel like I do her a disservice most of the time.
uh, bump
>"...So to sum it up, I'm Griffon, the Vulture's replacement after he retired, and no, I'm currently not interested in getting in your pants."
"Oh thank god."
>"Wait, you're actually GLAD that I'm not hot for you? What're you, gay?"
"What."
>"Whatever, dweeb, I got places to be. Catch ya later on a job or something."
>>27505507
kek
>>27504479
>work to make her a proper superhero
Something something proper battle dress something something pragmatic.I'm just yanking your chain I'm fine with whatever a hero's wearing.
1, 2 and 4 also appeal to me.
>>27506084
That Gobling Anon thing is really stuck in my skull.
It's a hell of a fun idea to think about writing, just need the drive and the skill.
>>27506143
*goblin
fuck my useless fucking fingers fuckity fuck fuck
>>27506143
Just do your bets not to fuck up whatever you go with.
>>27506143
Is he bad or good guy Goblin?
Hey quick question Should I make an update to my green once a day or randomly through the day?
>>27508068
hmmmmmm...Yes.
>>27508068
Whenever you feel writty is fine. Once a day sounds reassuring, but I'd like to see more than just one update a day if you have the will to do so.
Gonna update later today
Moment of truth, was a very eventful 28 hours sans sleep, but I think it was also productive. Behold the three latest additions.
First the leader of the Sirens, Adagio (Her hair is crazy to draw fyi)
Next up is (my personal fav for these pics) Aria ^^
And last but not least (For realzies) Sonata!
>>27460999
>Lunch break
>Be Anon.
>You’re walking besides Sunset carrying her purchases.
>She said she needed some stuff, and now you carry her shampoo, conditioner and aftercare.
>You are just explaining her this mornings lesson thoroughly, because, for some reason, she missed out on the obvious.
“-and for the resistance to stay low we need to...”
>That’s why you only try to lead her into the right direction.
>You point to her to finish the sentence.
>“Uhh... increase the cross-section?”
>She doesn’t sound convinced, so you nod and give her the thumbs up.
>“Wha-? It’s that simple? But that’s like- Uhrg! I’m so stupid!”
>She hits your head.
>“Why didn’t I think of that? It’s the basics!”
>A boyfriend of your aunt once said you should look for someone who looks hot or cute when frustrated or angry.
>Back then you certainly didn’t want that image of your aunt in your head, but with Sunset as she is now, you know what he had meant.
>It was one of the guys your Aunt has kept for the longest you can remember.
“You were just caught up thinking of something else.”
>Sunset thinks and then starts to blush, going from one kind of cute to the next.
>“Yeah, just... stuff on my mind.”
>She scratches her shoulder.
>She does that a lot.
>You’re not certain if it’s a tell or something else.
>Should you say something about it?
>Would it be weird for you to admit you're analyzing her body language, or would you only be an attentive boyfriend.
>Painkillers no longer inhibit your... inhibitions.
>And she liked you being brash, didn’t she?
>So maybe you should say something?
>Eh...
>>27508264
>Fuck it.
“Itchy shoulder?”
>“Huh? What?”
>Damnit.
“You’re scratching an awful lot.”
>“Oh- ah... yeah. I know I shouldn’t.”
>If she shouldn’t... that means it’s /something/.
“Mosquito bite?”
>“Uhh... yeah.”
>She scratches again, because her hand is already there.
>So maybe it is a tell.
>Is she lying?
“Should we get some mosquito bite stuff too?”
>“No, I-”
>She sighs.
>“Okay, it’s a skin-thing.”
>A skin-thing?
“Bad?”
>“No! Nono. it’s just a smallish-”
>She takes a breath and looks down.
>”Rash-thing.”
>She’s ashamed to admit it.
>“It’s just some red dots at a stupid location. Nothing severe.”
>You need to cheer her up.
“We discover our little flaws, how romantic.”
>And right back to blushing she goes, we have a winner.
>>27508227
Nice, but needs more camel toe
>>27508275
>“S-shut up.”
>You smile at her, but believe you were blushing as well.
>You find little flaws on her.
>It really is... enticing.
“Can I see?”
>“I- What?”
>You press the bottles of haircare between your stump and body and touch her by her shoulder with your good hand.
“May I see?”
>She removes her own hand and tilts her head away to offer her neck up to you.
>You can see her blushing even more as you touch her neck and run your fingers down, then you slightly push her top aside..
>Black strap... she’s wearing a black bra.
>You don’t listen to your brain and observe her skin.
“It’s not bad at all. But I guess annoying? As you said, stupid location.”
>“Mhm...”
>Then, the next few seconds seem to pass in slow motion.
>You place the shoulder of her shirt back where it belonged and trace your fingers up her neck again.
>Your own gentle touch fascinates you as your eyes carefully stick to your fingers as they make their way up.
>But eventually your fingers stop and you face her.
>You had come quite a bit closer as you investigated her shoulder, but now you’re uncomfortably close.
>No... The situation wasn’t uncomfortable.
>Sunset leans slightly into your hand and lets you support her head.
>Her eyes were angled down on – you guess – your lips, but then she looks up and her gaze meets yours.
>You can see the longing in her eyes as she licks her lips.
>You do the same.
>Of all these little actions which came instinctual, this was that last calculated thought.
>Softening up your lips to make them more pleasant, before you lean in closer...
>>27508227
blue?
>>27508297
Per request, Psylocke's costume was more blue in the original xmen cartoon, granted it's black in the comics but at the time almost everything that was black was normally inked with blue highlights so detail could still be seen (IE Venom, Spidey 2099-the last one since characters in the comic describe his suit as black)
>>27508284
Agh, you tease!
>>27508246
Sonata a cute
A CUTE
>>27508142
No not just one, i meant i post 3 to 4 at once or do 1 or 2 in the morning and another 2 at night
>>27508227
>>27508238
>>27508246
PERFECT
>>27508319
I should have spent my time writing
>>27505507
Love it btw Shocker. Feels very true to the character. Poor shocks.... the life you choose is a harsh one fraught with peril.
>>27508505
>that pic
Kek
>>27508362
>Agh, you tease!
any guesses on what'll happen? cause I think I'll write some stuff at home still
>>27508749
Eother they kiss or they get supervillain-cock-blocked
>>27508830
*Either
Dammit, phone
>>27508749
>>27508830
they kiss, then hear a villian clapping whoa asks the two lovebirds to get out of the way.
>>27508227
>>27508238
>>27508246
You're too good for Anons like us, Mamoruku.
>>27508284
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>You’re currently sitting on a water tower on a roof in central New Yoke.
>On your lap is your trusty laptop on which you work very slowly compared to what you could achieve in the lap.
>Not that the laptop is bad, by any means, but as compared to a borderline supercomputer... yeah, pretty bad.
>It also had to sacrifice some of its processing power to surveying traffic cam footage and social media for any signs of Sunset.
>Or rather, for signs of Spider-Woman.
>You knew she was in her lunch break, and usually shows herself.
>You can’t believe you’re in risk management of your own best friend.
>Neither can you believe that Sunset quit being Spider-Woman.
>It’s just not in her nature. Given her past.
>A past which would most likely give her different threat level than what she currently is.
>You scratch your head.
>Maybe you should have told the Wonderbolts.
>You hadn’t been present, but apparently Sunset had been a power hungry demon before.
>The Element of Magic had transformed her to show her – back then – true colors.
>You assume Spider-Woman is some way for her to repent.
>“Have some sunscreen. Boop.”
>Misty Fly immediately applied some to your nose.
“Gah!”
>You retreat backward, almost dropping your laptop in surprise.
>“Be aware of your surroundings.”
>She rebukes you.
>“And right now our surroundings are unhealthy amounts of UV-radiation, which are no known source of super powers. So we’ve got to fight it.”
>She raises her arms in a fighting stance against the sun.
>>27508989
>Misty Fly is a woman in her mid to late twenties with wild hair of two separate light blue tones.
>She’s only wearing shades and a Wonderbolt-themed water-sports suit which left really nothing to the imagination.
>Would it not be bulletproof and Misty’s usual fighting gear, you had considered it indecent.
>But maybe only because probably everything that woman wears makes it seem indecent.
>You’re in college. You go through phases.
>And even though you have another equally unlikely celebrity crush, doesn’t mean you can’t be fond of Misty’s physique.
>“You’re staring again.”
“I’m so sorry, I-”
>“I don’t know if it’s envy, or lust in your eyes.”
>You bite your lip and she has her laugh.
>“Yeah, I do have that effect on people.”
>You take the small goop of sunscreen from your nose and apply it to your face better.
“Thanks...”
>She walks around the edge of the water tower again.
>“I’m just teasing. God knows I have nothing else to do if you take on all the surveillance.”
>Then she stomps down with the foot to the thin metal sheet.
>Water could be heard riling within the tower, seemingly trying to escape.
>“I must have done something to piss off good old Spitty, to have to do stakeout with someone who doesn’t talk to me.”
“Oh! I’m sorry, I-”
>“This is your first time being a field agent, isn’t it?”
>You gulp.
“Y-yeah...”
>“You’ve seen cop shows, right? We pass the time by – I don’t know – play ‘would you rather’, something like that.”
“Would you rather stakeout your best friend and wait until she commits a crime, or do the thing you love painfully slow on a laptop?”
>“Tuché.”
>>27509000
>>27508989
sorry, not sorry, I take painful enjoyment in what I do
also I changed it to Misty Fly's canon name where I refered to her as Misty Dew earlier
>>27509028
I smell a changeling.
>>27509028
So, iis Anon's aunt ever going to appear?
if I recall, her being bedridden is kind of the impetus for his studies, right?
>>27509140
>So, iis Anon's aunt ever going to appear?
She has answers to some questions.
>if I recall, her being bedridden is kind of the impetus for his studies, right?
indeed
>>27509028
>sorry, not sorry
ok, I'm sorry
I shouldn't have ripped the scene apart
I'm probably just pissed and like to unpleasantly end exciting scenes because last time I got laid my music jumped to a nightvale
We came to the voice of Cecil and were laughing madly, but it was awkward
How was the last time you guys got laid?
>>27509000
>Be Sunset.
>Of all the times you romanticized a first kiss, not once had it crossed your mind you’d have yours in the skin-care products aisle.
>What you have had wondered about was how the entire process goes.
>Do you, like, place your lips on his and hope for the best?
>But there was no more hesitation, no more wondering, no more doubt as Anon began to lean in.
>You don’t even know if his hand on your pulled you toward him or if you met him greedily on your own accord.
>The result stayed.
>Your lips met his.
>He gently sucked in your upper lip to have more of.
>The small movements on that sensitive body part felt like you were tickled.
>You never imagined to be ticklish on your lips.
>Not in a way to make you laugh, but one to make you smile.
>It’s an all around pleasant feeling.
>Does he feel the same?
>You slightly part your lips to take in his lower lip and return the favor.
>Sucking it in just enough to have more access to it, you press slightly on his, squeezing him.
>Getting really adventurous you bring in your tongue, poking his lip, then drawing a line from one side to the other.
>You sense him like you’ve never sensed anyone before.
>The texture of his smooth lips.
>The tensity when you squeeze him.
>His taste together with the still lingering lunch.
>His breathing.
>You feel his hand on your neck, gently massaging you.
>You want to feel his heart to see if it beats as fast as yours.
>As you get closer to him you were met with his cast, and the bottles of shampoo he was carrying.
>You open your eyes, not even remembering ever closing them.
>The moment was broken, and so is the kiss.
>>27509506
>You look down to the bottles, the evil perpetrators who ruined your moment.
>Then up to Anon.
>He licks his lower lip, tasting the rest of you on him.
>You do the same, only with your upper lip, the one he had in his grasp.
>Your eyes meet again.
>And slowly realization came to you.
>Your eyes widen as the event sank in, and you look away.
>You’re probably blushing like you never had before.
>“Sunset...”
“I think I gotta go cool off.”
>You hastily make your way to the nearest ladies room.
>You splatter water into your face.
>You just had your first kiss and then decided to run away.
>You’re stupid.
>So fucking stupid.
>Stupid, stupid, stupid!
>ARGH!
>You look at yourself in the mirror.
>And now you’ve gone and ruined your make up.
>...
>Beyond salvageable.
>Your anger only increases as you remove what you can with the contents of your purse.
>As you rummage around in it you always came back to your in it’s hidden compartments on the corners.
>You really need to go for a swing.
wasn't happy with the scene, so I stalled
was a stupid idea to rip the scene apart
will fix in pastebin
>>27509614
it's alright, just take your time, write what sounds good
>>27510001
If you make anon Goblin, will he be a good guy or a bad guy?
>>27510050
Honestly?
I'm not sure.
>>27509614
Worry not, we read what you write and defer to your judgement on what's best for the story.
Questions for the writefriends, have you all numbered your universes?
Have you learned something writing Spidershimm that you would have liked knowing from the beginning?
>>27510001
so the kiss was okay?
writing it was easy, but I pend long just pondering about it
...
I should get drunk
>>27510091
goblin is supposed to be a bad guy
you can't just switch around a characters alignment
>>27510118
again, I haven't decided on a lot of things
the kiss was cute, as was Sunset's inability to deal with it
>>27510091
Good guy. He is physically incapable of being a villain, and it wouldn't make any sense
>>27510118
>>27510146
Goblin is derranged, not necessarily evil. The guy could fly around mauling whoever he thinks is a bad guy without realizing what he is actually doing. The evil comes mainly from the person that took the serum.
>>27510118
!!!!!!!!
>>27510172
That was the original idea, Anon in his Goblin persona being not so much an evil monster, but a playful madman who doesn't really think about the consequences of his actions or who could get hurt.
>>27510118
>Reading the new Cap comic
http://youtu.be/gG5OmOBQcYc
Steve Rogers a bad guy.
Norman Osborn a good guy.
Everything's all topsy turvy now!
>>27510265
as I always say...hail hydra
>>27510311
Who sees that symbol and thinks "This is the group for me!"
I mean, honestly
>>27510395
you just need to belong
>>27510395
I do. They seem like a nice bunch.
>>27510456
We need more speeches.
>>27510311
>>27510456
I will never join Hydra!
The Cap I'm totally not obsessed with would never join Hydra!
>>27510606
He is just... just unfairly handsome
It's cheating, it has to be...
>>27510606
want to aggressively post caps at each other again?
Was Hydra meant to be a copy of SPECTRE from James Bond? Because that's what it is
>>27510627
#TeamThor
he's dreamy
>>27510627
It's called Super Soldier Serum
>>27510627
I know....
No homo.
>>27510661
The proof that drugs are only as bad as the user.Compare cap/goblin
>>27510674
You misspelled all of the homo
>>27510690
I wouldhold handswith that man...
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