Fifteenth Anniversary Edition
This is the superhero general, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as Spider-woman, but any and all mlp/superhero content is welcome.
green away faggots
Featured: Our newest addition: Voidborn
http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
Live writefags by storysize:
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)
Dead Writefags by storysize:
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon - http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Previous Thread: >>27371277
>>27444055
>Be Anon.
>Be seriously pissed.
>“That look on your face...”
>Chrysalis was laughing.
>“Sorryyy~ I just couldn’t resist.”
>You let her laugh herself out as you hide your techwear in your backpack.
>Her laughter slowly dies.
“At least someone is happy.”
>“Okay, I’ve collected myself. Haaa... That was fun.”
“Speak for yourself.”
>“It was mean, yeah. But anyway... I really don’t think Flim kept the bits of your body which were charred. Or that it was any good. Fire does destroy so much.”
>Hmm...
“And what about anyone else? Who even knows that I...”
>You were unable to finish the sentence.
>“Well, the people present-”
“Who was the last guy, I didn’t know him.”
>“Hmm? You mean Dr. Connors?”
“Would I know his name I wouldn’t have asked. But I know that name.”
>“Yeah? He does research involving anything ‘super’. He made big parts of the serum that triggered Flam’s little goblin incident.”
“You sound like this all amuses you. Flam and... Hydra. Those are no jokes.”
>“It is when you are me.”
>...
“And who are you? You’re not a normal employee of Flimdustries, and you’re not even a- you have abilities.”
>“Flimdustries...?”
>Damn, you said that nickname out loud.
“Don’t change the subject.”
>“And here I thought I could shake your mind off.”
“You’re not going to give me a good answer, are you?”
>“Let’s see what the best one would be. I’m an interested party.”
“Interested in what?”
>“In ‘not being bored’.”
>You narrow your eyes.
>>27453434
>She had her arms raised and does a pirouette, looking up in the sky.
>Centipede? Ten Rings? What?
>Well, at least Weapon X was dead.. right?
“You want to bring it all down? You’re an anarchist?”
>“Oh no, I do think some kind of /government/ needs to be in place, you know, for the greater good, even though chaos could be fun for a while too.”
>You don’t know what to make of her.
“Soooo...?”
>“I just don’t like to be bored. And you... You might be my ticket into Hydra.”
>You gulp.
>She wants to use you as a pawn.
>“But don’t worry, I’m... your ally, okay? I’ll look out for you, and in turn you continue to do what you’re doing, okay?. Loyal to those who’ve been good to you, remember?”
“You’ll protect me?”
>She smiles.
>“I will.”
“And in turn you want me to dance like a monkey?”
>Her smile fades.
>“Don’t insult me!”
>All the cheerfulness from earlier was gone.
>“I’m not looking for cheap amusement, and neither will I gamble your life on ‘fun’, you understand me? I offer you friendship.”
>She almost spits that word.
>“And you think I’m some kind of villain.”
>Now you feel bad.
>Would she not be seriously scary right now you’d feel worse.
>Her anger evaporates after a while.
“You have a weird way of offering up friendship.”
>“Yeah? I’m no expert in that field.”
“No, apparently not.”
>There was a small awkward pause.
>“If you’d ever need protection from them I will do so because I will finally be able to interact with them. But that doesn’t mean that you will not be protected, or that I don’t care for your life.”
>She sighs.
>>27453445
>“I know people who’d willingly sacrifice a life to accomplish a small task. Just recently someone died for a simple message... ‘Hey, I’m here. Want to come out and play?’ It’s despicable...”
>There is some puzzle piece you are missing, isn’t there?
>“What do you think?”
“Uhh... Life is sacred?”
>She tilts her head.
>“Give me your hand.”
“Wha-?”
>Confused, you raise your injured hand again.
>“No, the fine one.”
>Even more so, you do as she says once again and give her your good hand.
>She then produces a pen (from somewhere) and begins to write on it.
>’Chrissy’ with an heart-dotted ‘I’ and her phone number.
>“Girl number.”
>She comments.
>“No booty calls, but do use it when you’re in trouble or want to go out crime fighting.”
“Girl number...”
>You reppeat her words like a moron.
>You don’s have Sunset’s number yet.
>But Chrysalis is not...
>“I’m 24 by the way.”
>Oh?
>That’s certainly within a date-able margin.
>What are you thinking about, you have Sunset!
>You shake your head clear.
“You’re not the /real/ Black Widow though, are you?”
>“I am who carries that mantle at the moment.”
“And the real one?”
>“Nobody I have to worry about.”
“The name is for a constant double agent where nobody ever knows which side she's on.”
>>27453451
>She smiles.
>“I’m always on my own side, Anon.”
“That... makes sense, but what about loyalty?”
>“Loyalty is for those who were good partners in the past and whom I see to continue to be such in the future. Now if you have other options... Opportunity cost, remember?”
>You talked about this before, but not on a human level, but back when she was a superior in the company you work at.
>Now... You feel like at eye-height with her.
“So if someone has a change of hearts you don’t count him as being the same potentially good partner in the future?”
>“We constantly judge people. Evaluate them, and sort them somewhere in our head, even if unconscious.”
>You nod.
>“Let’s go fight some crime tomorrow, bear up some low lives. It’ll be fun.”
“You have the weirdest interpretation of fun.
>She smiles again.
>“See you, Anon~”
>Then turns and walks away.
>You focus more on her swaying hips than you’d like to admit.
“Black Widows have like an hourglass, not a cross on their backs.”
>You shout that bit of Trivia after her.
>“I... knew that.”
>You chuckle.
>She’s complicated.
>Probably because of her own fucked up circumstances.
>Basically the same as yourself.
>She’s just way more confident than you are.
>And she could take a previously known person’s name.
>You’ve not given too much thought in how you’d name yourself.
>Not ‘Spider-Boy’ though, how Chrysalis called you.
>Maybe you pick a species as well.
>...
>The Tarantula!
>...
>Yeah, scratch that one of the list.
>Let’s see what Wikipedia has to say...
>>27453460
Good shit, 7
your Anon's endearing
and Chrysalis is funny-complicated
Off to a great start.
>>27453434
>“Would I know his name I wouldn’t have asked. But I know that name.”
????
>>27453586
>“Would I know his name I wouldn’t have asked. But I that name does sound familiar.”
apologies
>rereading my last Issue to remember where I left off
>noticing near month-old mistakes
>PUBLIC mistakes
>mfw
>>27453728
point it out for us all to see and laugh at you
>>27453740
nooooooooo
>>27453761
you know you have a public humiliation fetish, my little slut
>>27453728
Don't worry everyone makes mistakes.Especially you, because you're TERRIBLE
>>27453761
>>27453777
>>27453781
This is the WORST OUTCOME!
BAD END!
Writefag is not for sexual!
>>27453779
Mom pls
>>27453800
>Writefag is not for sexual
Are you sure?
>>27453800
look, it can't be as bad as what I did to my pastebin just a two hours ago and didn't bother to fix
>>27453800
I want to cum inside Keaton
>>27453815
pls no rectal bullying
>>27453418
The only writers we have that are dead are roommate anon and Femanon.
Red said he will return in June.
Shocker jumps in whenever.
Beans never die, they're just missing in action
>>27453832
No he belongs to me!
>>27453837
Too late. Prepare for butt stuff, old sport
>>27453832
et tu, Bloke?
>>27453852
Man, how am I supposed to focus on writing with all these dicks in me?
>>27453862
>Too late
>>27453866
>>27453832
Where the fuck were you? We needed someone to make the new thread and poor untitled7 had to do it for you. Shame!
>>27453866
I can’t help Keaton, but you need to escape.
>>27453926
School
>>27453929
There are no breaks on the rape train
>>27453936
You do know he could pull a Beans if this keeps up, right?
>>27453947
we're just having fun here.
ok, let's go too...
>>27453820
what did YOU do?
>>27453947
nah, I'm not going anywhere
if a bit of perfectly non-consensual dirty talking from anonymous strangers bothered me, I wouldn't even be on 4chan, let alone making lewds and cute for my favorite freaks and geeks.
>No thread theme
http://youtu.be/7912LZ_OPws
>>27453966
And that is why I like you, based writefag.
>>27453966
That’s good.
>>27453975
Whose fault is that?
>>27453991
Not mine
>>27453998
>>27453991
samefag to make me feel bad
>>27454009
Life is a great Big Bang up
Wherever there's a hangup
You'll find the spider-bloke
Off-topic, but I made cinnamon crisps
sugar and lewd things help the writing process probably
>>27454034Trixie a shit
>>27454177
while this is a fact, you cannot argue that the image is not at least somewhat arousing.
>>27454244
Enjoy your worstfu
>>27454226
mediocre art style, anorexic upper body except for large breasts, yet thighs as thick as her waist, wicked expression (and not in the good way), hair looks like paste, hands are bad, her right foot impossibly angled
while the artist had some skill he lands in an uncanny valley and should go toward anime, because right now he's in some surreal cartoon, and I doubt he can make the jump to realism.
but then again, I'm just a writefag and probably don't understand much about drawings
>>27454305
>>27454395
And to think, I was going to use your butt
>>27454410
>>27454395
if you stop fighting I'll post more green... tomorrow
>>27454410
>implying you still aren't
>>27454485
Except now, there won't be any belly rubs afterwards
>>27453460
>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>You’re in the lecture hall waiting for it to start.
>The clock tells you, there were more than twenty minutes left.
>The clock also tells you it had been 29 hours since you last wore your costume.
>Spider-Woman.
>Is she no more?
>You should focus on being a regular girl, but apparently you forgot how to do that.
>When was the last time you were a normal girl?
>Well... the short time between the friendship games and the spider-bite.
>Before that...
>Everyone hated you after your reform.
>Everyone certainly hated you before it.
>Even before that you were an anti-social shut in hanging at Celestia’s tail.
>And before that you were not even double digits.
>You’re a regular girl, doing regular girl things.
>You feel like some alien trying hard to be normal.
>Is this what Ted Cruz feels like?
>Technically you ARE an alien trying to be normal.
>How do you do things like a regular person?
>Your morning bathroom routine for example.
>Make-up.
>What’s the appropriate amount of make up to show you put effort in looking good and not have it overdone?
>Like making yourself look natural, but an improved, prettier version of yourself.
>It’s spring already, you spend enough time outside, and should buy a new foundation.
>Plus you’re getting your stress-rash on your left shoulder again, so a bunch of tops fell out of question when you got dressed.
>As if your appearance was your worst problem.
>But, maybe for a regular girl, appearance is the worst problem they have.
>You think about Rarity for a moment and fell bad immediately after.
>Rarity is an amazing person, you do her no justice putting her in any kind of stereotype.
>You sigh.
>Focusing on regular girl problems is exhausting when you have the Wonderbolts-thing breathing in your neck.
>Your studies, clothing, make-up – and on that note you need to stock up on new stuff.
>You need to go shopping.
>>27454549
>And as your lunch break is newly made free of any spider-y activities, you have your time slot to do so.
>Stop being a superhero vigilante and suddenly you have time to go shopping.
>What other perks might there be?
>For the price of letting people stay in trouble while you could help them.
>Someone robs a drug store, but at least you’ll get a new foundation.
>How do other people do it?
>Okay, they don’t have super powers.
>But can they simply walk through life oblivious to what’s happening around them?
>As long as it doesn’t happen to themselves it’s fine.
>You will not be able to go three days without putting the suit back on, will you?
>“You constantly sigh, with no sign of stopping. What’s on your mind?”
“Oh, hey, Anon.”
>You greet him absent mindedly.
>...
“Oh! Hey, Anon.”
>You right yourself up, put a streak of loose hair behind your ear, and find a comfortable seating position.
“Hey Anon~”
>He narrows his eyes.
>“Yeah, you said that already. That’s the third time, actually. And ‘hey’ to you too, Sunset.”
>He puts his backpack on the desk and starts setting up his gear.
>“So, what’s up?” “
“N-”
>“And don’t tell me it’s nothing, cause you’ve let out one sigh after another.”
“How long have you’ve been here?”
>“Just entered through the door and wanted to comment on your make up, but saw you sadly-”
“W-what about my makeup?”
>You look away, not able to face him.
>As an additional shield you let that streak of hair loose again.
>He didn’t respond immediately, but he has stopped unpacking his things.
>“You... put effort into it, right? As if you’re trying to impress someone.”
“I-I didn’t. I just...”
>>27454556
>“And you’re stuttering.”
“I’m-”
>You were silenced by his hand on your shoulder.
>He gently guides you to turn back to him.
>He’s smiling.
>“You’re gorgeous.”
“G-gorgeous?”
>You stare at him. Eyes wide. And probably blushing through your generous make-up.
>He continues to smile at your reaction, then takes his hand from your shoulder and raises it to your face to put that streak of loose hair back where it belonged.
>“That’s the purpose of make-up. To make yourself feel pretty. Isn’t it?”
>You only gulp and nod.
>His smile widens.
>“And? Did it achieve it’s purpose? Do you feel pretty?”
>/You washed away my doubts and made me feel pretty./
>It’s what you wanted to say, but instead you shrug.
“Yeah, I guess so.”
>You play cool.
>That’s working...
>“Hot and cool, how are you pulling that off?”
>You giggle.
“Shut up.”
>He continues unpacking and waits until he sits before talking again.
>“So, before I arrived, you made some sounds of distress. What’s up?”
>Everything plus the fact that you’re crushing on him like crazy.
“Nothing.”
>“Yeah, that’s exactly what I wanted you not to answer earlier.”
>You need to come up with an excuse.
>Your studies? Not sigh-worthy.
>The Wonderbolts and you being Spider-Woman? Can’t tell him that.
“Just Sin of Omission and the apathy of people regarding things that doesn’t directly involve them?”
>>27454559
>“That’s awfully deep for early mornings.”
>Please don’t ask.
>“So what’s your stand?”
>He asked...
“I think... that if you have the power to stop a bad thing from happening, it’s your duty to do so.”
>Surprisingly he didn’t just agree with you but sank into his own train of thought.
>“Do you think the homeless should have food and shelter?”
>What?
“Uhh... yeah?”
>“Then why are you not out there building homes and make them sandwiches? Uhh... Sorry- I mean, are you? Like volunteering at a homeless shelter?”
“No...”
>Is he calling you a-
>“I’m not calling you a hypocrite. I mean, yeah, I kinda am. But then again, so am I. And probably everyone in here you’d ask.”
>“Isn’t it that any person claiming to be ‘good’ would have to do that? Has to help with all their power? That even a minute of lollygagging, not making someone a sandwich or not building them a house.”
>By now he seems to be talking more to himself than to you.
>“That even a minute could mean the difference of someone starving or freezing to death. Or at least to have a full stomach or be warm sooner?”
>“And there is no answer which would not sound evil. Evil in varying degrees.”
>“At least I’m the visionary type. I further myself to sometime in the future make the world a better place for not only myself but for everyone.”
>He looks at you again and gives you a smile.
>“But it’s probably a cheap excuse of my selfishness. But I believe everyone does have a right to some degree of selfishness, don’t we?”
>>27454567
done
>>27454580
>>27454549
>>You think about Rarity for a moment and fell bad immediately after.
goofed
>>Rarity is an amazing person, you do her no justice putting her in any kind of stereotype.
awkwardly worded
good update, yis, just a few minor hickups
>>27454512
You vile monster.
>I got Featured
Well shit, I feel honored now, I'll continue in a bit!
>>27454559
>“G-gorgeous?”
>>You stare at him. Eyes wide. And probably blushing through your generous make-up.
Sunset a cute
>>27455520
Sunny buns is always a cute
>>27437739
>You blink, those questions weren't what you expected
>I mean, you knew stereotypical jocks were stupid
>But this was a whole new level
"No, no, I didn't fucking kill him, what would make you think that?"
>"You're the one who said he was dead, asshole!"
>You sigh, pushing down your guilt and hoping it didn't show on your face
"I heard he got into some shit with the cops and pulled out a gun on them"
>The crowd seemed placated by that
>"Shit dude, you for real?"
>You nodded, and so the conversation went, you pretended you had only heard this, not saw it for yourself, they ate it up, pretty soon the whole school would think Flash Sentry was a case of suicide by cop and the reason they didn't hear about it was Flash's father was on the corp, and wanted it kept hidden.
>You hated how easy it was to lie to them
>You were eventually called out of the locker room by your coach and put through your warm ups, and afterwards, a game of dodgeball
>Surprisingly, you weren't decked in the face the second the whistle blew
>Apparently Flash was the one who went after you like that
>But as the game progressed and balls flew all around you, something happened
>A ball was about to hit you directly in the face, there was no dodging it, you couldn't even get your arm up to block
>Time seemed to slow, and you saw a purple miasma appear from nowhere, blocking the ball a little over a foot away from your face, letting it drop neatly into your outstretched palm, a second later it was gone, and you were left standing with it in your hand, wondering what just happened as you threw the ball back at the other team.
>Your group won the game, and you attributed that to your void-shield, as you had decided to call it
>Every time you had thought you were about to be hit, which, thankfully, wasn't often, the purple miasma appeared, blocking the shot, sometimes even two, before vanishing.
>No one else seemed to notice this.
>They honestly thought you were using your hands
>Impressive...
>>27455797
yay! 'nother update!
>>27455797
>He has the broken-ass passive
Then how the fuck did he get stuck in the beginning of this?
bemp
I promise I'm still writing this Issue.
bleah, I'm slow today
>>27456369
You're gonna have to sit through the story to find that one out.
>>27455797
>You had finished getting dressed again
>You were worried your hands would glow in the public showers, where you couldn't hide them, but it seems you now had much more control over that
>Only took murdering someone
>The final bell rings and you head out to your car, noting that now that you were in the sunlight, you could still faintly see the miasma around you.
>That reminds you of something
>you're staying after school today idiot
>You turn around, heading back inside and making your way to Luna's office
>You wandered through the empty halls, thinking about what you did, what you COULD do, with these powers
>Your shield especially
>Could you stop bullets? other magic?
>How strong was it? it seemed to flicker away after getting hit once, but while it was up it seemed to block everything...
>You knocked on Luna's door, maybe she could help you figure it out...
END CHAPTER ONE
>>27457034
am excite, looking forward to the next chapter!
Old sport
Continued from last thread
>He holds his hand in front of him as it starts to change.
>The fingers grow longer and sharper as they gain a glossy like shine to them.
>You duck as he swipes at you when he raises his other arm behind him.
>You jump backwards as he launches his fist forward, into one of the downed goons.
“You know killing your henchmen is bad business right?”
>He merely scoffs at you as he dislodges his arm for the dead goon.
> “They’re expendable and easily replaceable.”
>Sombra runs at you while his clawed hand started to grow and fuse into a large blade.
>His skin got darker and harder as you tried to hurt him with a video surge.
>Tried being the keyword.
>All of your shots did nothing to slow him down as he ran.
>You didn’t have time to dodge as he hit you with his shoulder, smashing you against the wall.
>You groan as he backed up a bit, making so space, as he lifted his left leg and kicked you.
>He goes for a second one, as you move to the right and raise your arm.
>You lower your arm around his leg, catching it as he kicks.
>You swing your other arm as you create a sword to strike him.
>He growls as the blade touches his darkened skin.
> “You think that’ll hurt me.”
>He then throws a punch at your face causing you to stagger and release his leg.
> “What did you hoped to accomplish by coming here?”
>He continues throwing punches as you put up your arms to defend yourself.
Not good with fight scenes and I'll have more tomorrow
>>27457688
thanks, trep
I know the feeling
I feel like the only way I can write a fight scene is to not...
>>27457746
No prob. Don't want people to think I'm dead or anything.
And I'll be glad when this fight scenes done
>>27457034
Oh boy!
>>27457777
Glad to see reports of your death were greatly exaggerated
I'm going to finish up Issue 7 of Shimmering Spider-Woman and post it in the morning, when people will actually see it
>>27457688
Shit's about to get real.
Have you tried seeing and hearing a fight from one of the fighter's perspectives? It might help.
Issue 7 is DONE!
Yaaaaay!
>>27457894
Who reported him dead?
>>27458275
I dunno, nobody, prolly
>>27458266
why don't you share with the class
>>27458394
'cause it's 1 AM (my side) and that means it's hard to get numerous, live feedback
I want to believe that Uncle Beans will return someday
Hi. Still not dead.
"So, let me see if I got this right. You, the Chameleon, were a lady by the name of Chrysalis all along, and you only just recently decided to throw your metaphorical hat into the ring for my affections."
>"Got it on the nose. Now then, shall we discuss dinner arrangements for tonight?"
:Groaning intensifies:
>>27458757
Huzzah!
>>27458757
Why do you post tiny updates nowadays?
>>27458777
'Cause it usually takes me forever to hammer out a lengthy-but-really-that-lengthy update, and by the time I think up one, it's usually late, making me save it to finish for some indeterminable time. Unless I'm feeling really inspired, but that's not so common these days. 'Sides, I like to have my stories relatively short.
bump
>>27458275
No one but you know how it is. Don't post for a day and everyone goes "He's dead".
Are we still alive, gents?
>>27460424
Yes we are. The mornings tend to be slow and I'm work on the next post before work
>>27460424
Post Issue 7 and find out.
>>27460447
fair enough
content keeps a thread alive
....
usually
The Shimmering Spider-Woman! Issue #7
http://pastebin.com/46saQ7kh
>>27457688
>The next punch sends you through the door and into the hallway.
>You roll to your side as the sound of footsteps get closer.
>You feel a lot of pain despite your angel form basically being armor.
>A pair of fancy leather shoes enters your line of sight as you feel something collide with your back.
“This paints quite the picture from my view.”
>Something hits your back again causing you to fall to the ground.
> “Funny but I must know, what was the point to this? Coming here and fighting?”
>Another hit.
> “Why even face me when you almost died?”
>Another hit.
> “It’s a shame really. I could have used someone like you in the grand scheme of things.”
>You feel your back crack a bit after the next hit.
>So he had some kind of plan.
“Oh, so what’s your master plan then?”
>He laughs darkly as he took a step back.
> “I’m sorry but you’ll never know.”
>You wait for the next blow but hear a crash instead.
>Looking up you see Sombra sized hole in the wall and you hear a familiar voice behind you.
> “Guess we’re the heroes this time, Angel.”
>You feel yourself get lifted up to your feet.
“Why’re you girls here?”
>You look over at the Dazzlings to see them smiling a bit.
>Adagio, with a flick of her wrist, has a glowing purple broadsword in her hand.
> “Well we were thinking about why should you get all the fun.”
“And you just got here?”
>Aria just grins as she shook her head.
> “Actually, we’ve been here for a few minutes now.”
>Your eye started to twitch.
“And at no point did you think of jumping in to help me?”
>Aria just shrugged nonchalantly.
> “We didn’t want to cramp your style.”
“Aria, when this is over I’m gonna show you the meaning of pain.”
> “Kinky.”
>>27460452
Also loved this one and can't wait for the next one.
Hopefully Anon doesn't get hurt a lot and can't wait for crazy villains to try and get him for herself
>>27460530
I actually have different plans, regarding the Six and Anon.
Hopefully I wasn't being tol heavy handex with that ending tidbit.
I really struggled with what kind of note to end on.
Ultimately settled on foreboding.
>>27460553
Seemed fine to be and I'm trying to edit my stuff before posting as well, but you know how that is right?
Still liking the pacing
>>27460553
*too heavy handed
Holy fuck, my phone
>>27460574
Thanks!
Liking your story too
>>27460582
Thanks funny thing is that using infamous conduit powers wasn't my first choice.
The original idea was using Darker than Black
>>27460452
Good job, i'm looking forward to see what happens next.
On a side note, will you make a smut issue?
>>27460903
So far all smut has been "non-canon" (god I feel like such an asshole, talking about my bullshit as having a canon)
Might write another one-off if an idea strikes me or you all suggest something
Seriously, if you guys have any ideas, let me know
>>27460918
I have noticed a disturbing lack smut in this thread.
Someone fix it!!!!!
>>27460932
Well, do you have any ideas for lewds?
If you say it, I'll probably write it.
Maybe.
>>27460934
>>27460918
>Might write another one-off if an idea strikes me
Web hammock.
>>27460944
>>27454567
>You ponder about his speech for bit.
>He’s really quite smart, but he misses the reason why you asked.
>What would he have said would he have known you’re Spider-Woman?
>Something along of spending all your spare time as /her/?
>It almost feels like you did.
>Maybe you should help out at a homeless shelter.
>But the last thing he said nags on you, and so you frown.
“So, ‘be selfish’? That’s your advice?”
>“Uhh- no. It’s not really advice. It’s just... what … uhh... everyone else does?”
>The sad part about that is that it’s true.
>“Look, I know you. You...”
>He scratches his head.
>“You’re a good person for even wondering about such things. I’m sure you’ll find your own way of helping people if you really want to.”
>Being Spider-Woman...
>“Greenpeace, Red Cross, or something. This is New Yoke, you’ll find something. Just don’t go to PETA.”
“Hmm...? Why would I pick PETA?”
>“I saw you looking over the vegetarian options yesterday.”
>How to explain that one.
“I’m not vegetarian, but I do try to minimize the amount of meat I eat.”
>Meat was great for your human taste buds.
>And even if you never really met a cow back in Equestria, you know them to be sentient.
>It’s not an easy hurdle to overcome, even after all this time.
>“Even here you’re the better person than me.”
>No, you think the thought of eating /someone/ is disgusting, even though meat can be tasty.
>Cannibalism is on some similar level to necromancy.
>There are things you just don’t do with dead people.
>Pork, chicken and fish is entirely different to beef, but by extent shouldn’t be,
>Damn, now you're having that train of thought again.
>Add some old stuff to your current burden to carry on your mind.
>You sigh.
“It’s not like that...”
>“But there you go sighing again.”
“I just... I have a lot on my mind.”
>He makes an amused sound.
>“Yeah, I know how that feels.”
>You tilt your head.
>>27460986
>You still barely know about one another, not really at least.
“Tell me.”
>He seems surprised, before thinking again.
>“Well, let’s see... They want me as a full employee at my internship.”
>You nod.
>Usually that’s a good thing because it means significantly more pay.
>So why would it make him worry?
>“And there is, like, a loyalty-issue.”
“Loyalty-issue? What do you mean?”
>It takes him a while to answer.
>“I don’t know how good it will look if I do get my own startup done after college is over. There is just this nagging feeling that I’m doing something wrong by continuing to work for them.”
“Where are you working at anyway?”
>This time he looks you in the eyes, only a quick moment of doubt revealed itself in his before he answered.
>“Flim Industries.”
>Of all the places...
>Anon works for the guys responsible for your powers, for at least one confirmed super villain.
>And the place outside the Wonderbolts where most people knew your secret identity.
>You could only hope their word counts when they said they would stop experiment with that serum or your and Flam’s blood.
>Flim seemed like a good guy.
>But there is just a lot at steak.
>“I know, I know, it has a bad rep. But they’ve been nothing but good to me... Actually exactly that ‘goodness’ is what makes me question everything. I’m just some guy, and they are too good it’s almost creepy.”
>You’re not sure how you feel about that, but you know one thing-
“You’re not just some guy Anon. From what I’ve gathered you’re some kind of genius.”
>He chuckles
>“A genius? No. A genius is someone who... ahh...”
>You can see him thinking about some definition that’s non-applicable on him.
>“I just...”
>You smile as he stammers around.
>“I just have a good memory and can connect things with one another. You know, ‘thinking logically’.”
>Now you giggle.
“Isn’t a genius someone who can do just that?”
>“I’m not-”
>>27460990
>He stops himself.
“Hmm?”
>He then gives a defeated sigh.
>“Just yesterday I had a similar conversation and was told I can’t take a compliment. Not because I’m humble, but because I have too little self esteem.”
“Huh?”
>You think about yourself and see that holding true at times as well.
>Even though-
>No.
>Especially since you once were crazy with power and placed yourself above everyone else that you don’t think you’re worth it anymore.
>But right now you want him to feel better.
“Well, if you want some self-confidence...”
>You need to raise it with something he can’t deny.
>Turn his own words against him...
>Even if it’s not easy to say because it’s seriously awkward.
“You have a g-gorgeous girlfriend, r-right?”
>You were fidgeding, nervously playing with your hair.
“You must have done something right.”
>He turns to you with a devious smile.
>“I guess I do~”
>Your heart is beating faster.
>Is this the moment?
>You bite your lip.
>Damn, what lip gloss are you wearing?
>You know you’ve probably settled for something discreet.
>How’s the taste?
>You sample your lips.
>Okay.
>Okay... that’s fine.
>It’s...
>You look up to him.
>He has already moved along.
>The moment was gone.
>You let out a heavy breath.
>Damn.
>You could feel your heart beating rapidly.
>Shut the fuck up, heart!
>You’re angry.
>Angry at yourself.
>You probably could have just had your first kiss, but then you went ahead and doubt everything again and ruin the moment.
>You close your eyes and wallow in self pity.
>Just a moment later the door to the lecture hall opens again and the professor came through.
>Class is in session.
>You hope you could properly distract yourself by focusing on the lesson at hand.
>Spoiler alert, you couldn’t.
>>27460999
>>Damn, what lip gloss are you wearing?
These fucking cute nerds...
>>27461052
she panicked, what can I say?
>>27461073
It's almost unfairly cute
Spergs in love
>>27460944
So, like... just them on a hammock made of webbing?
>>27461122
>Spergs in love
I'm just doing a more realistic love story cutting all the crap about how great love is.
And I mostly do it out of Sunsets point of view because of reasons
>>27461148
Ah
I'll probably be putting a bit more focus on how difficult it actually is to date a superhero, no matter how great she is
And when Sunset's POV comes up in my story, there'll be a reason for it
>>27461122
You mentioned exhibitionism. Picture Anon and Sunset fucking on a webhammock high above ground, like inbetween two skyscrapers. Sunset in costume and Anon in a mask, the people notice them.
It's in all the papers the following day.
>>27460999
Check'd
Sunset knows who is Black Widow?
>Inb4 Chrysalis show up in the... University? High School? Idk
>>27461253
do we know her age?
Chrysalis teasing Anon as a substitute teacher and making Sunset jealous would be adorable
>>27461253
>Check'd
I didn't even notice
>University? High School? Idk
I called it a college, but I still know shit nothing about american education system
>>27461265
see >>27453451
>>But Chrysalis is not...
>>“I’m 24 by the way.”
>>Oh?
>>That’s certainly within a date-able margin.
>>27461282
ah, my brain derped
Early to mid twenties is the normal university age, yeah
bremp
>>27461642
I want to rip off her arms and then fuck the holes.
>>27461786
>Not ripping off the head and fucking each individual organ til it becomes much on your cock
Plebian
>>27461868
>>27461868
>>27461786
>>27461868
that's not okay...
>>27461943
yeah, we should continue to please ourselves by publicly humiliating a writefriend
>>27461982
That's... marginally less not okay, I guess
>>27462002
It's doc ock's holes or your's pal.
>>27462022
we can give him new orifices too
>>27462040
We have the technology.
>>27462040
Please don't kill him. He writes the best feels.
>>27462040
>>27462054
I DID NOT CONSENT TO THIS
>>27462060
hmmm...
>>27462002 looks like consent to me
>>27462060
>implying I asked
>>27462060
so, uhh...
Lady Sif or Princess Diana?
>>27462060
No one's raping Keaton.
Without me.
>>27462201
As a fan who leans more towards Marvel, the obvious answer is
Wonder Woman
>>27462060
>Rape
It's mandatory.
>>27462214
I can't believe you just said that
>>27462224
>not wanting Amazon warrior princess
So, uh, so long as everyone is raping my good self, could I have some feedback on Issue 7?
>>27462201
Easy, pic related
>>27462237
Can we get back to rapeing keaton now please.
>>27462239
>texting, eating lunch, holding hands
Jesus Christ Keaton, this is too lewd
>>27460918
Symbiote Anon tentacle fucking Sunset.
Make it happen.
>>27462292
wait for it
>>27462292
>not the other way around
>>27462239
Wait I forget, who plays the sinister 6 in your story?
I know that
Trixie=Mysterio
Maud=Sandmare
Lighting Dust=Electro
Who's the rest?
>>27462292
I could do this...
>>27462312
Remember consent.
>>27462325
*Cumsent
>>27462310
Rule63 Iron Will is Rhino because I couldn't think of something better, Vinyl Scratch is Shocker, and Octavia is Doc Oc because FUCK originality
>>27462239
Fucking loved it. Good pacing andcharacterization.
>>27462337
Fucking phone.
>Vinyl as Shocker
>Not Cyclops
Missed opportunity
>>27462333
>Rule63 Iron Will
>Googles
Sweet Jesus save me.
>>27462357
Cyke isn't a villain tho... and I'd rather not have to involve more superhero groups than I have to
>>27462333
Photo Finish would've been a good Doc Ock
Oh, does anyone remember that story I was going to write and then failed to?
Anyone want to know what it was going to be?
>>27462390
I do, so tell me
>>27462390
Weren't you gonna kill Anon?
>>27462414
kay
well, the working idea was Anon, friends with Sunset and the other girls, save Twilight, was secretly the Green Goblin.
He doesn't know about Spider-Sunset and she doesn't know about him.
He starts off getting publicly exposed by laughing like the Goblin after Pinkie tells a too-funny joke to cheer up the table.
He bolts from the school (because everyone's heard the maniac's laugh on tv and the internet) and pulls on his costume, escaping on his glider, only to be tackled by an also-costumed Shimmer.
She doesn't joke around and he struggles to get some breathing room before fighting her off this his very few pumpkin bombs (you can only fit so much in a backpack, after all)
He knocks her into a condemned building with his glider, only to get pulled in himself
They're evenly matched but exhausted before the deliver a mutually-unmasking blow
Stunned, he sits back while she fumes on the other side of the room, demanding to know if he thought it was funny to pretend to be her friend
He argues that he never knew, but she screams at him instead
"THEN WHY DID YOU KIL TWILIGHT!?"
Twilight is Sunset's Gwen Stacy and she thinks that Anon, who has feelings for her, did it to get closer to her
Anon apologizes, the serum makes it hard to think, he never even knew that the girl he'd held from the bridge was Twilight, that he didn't know Sunset would break her neck saving her, that he was just playing around and having fun
Sunset has enough of it, calling him a murderer and a psycho and starts fighting him again and this time Anon realizes that she's really going to kill him
Panicked, Anon activates his secretly still-functioning glider, killing himself when Sunset dodges
He dies saying he's sorry, Sunset realizes what she's done and collapses the building around him, to hide the Goblin's identity and swears to make up for her failure, both to Anon and Twilight
>>27462423
ahahaha.
>>27462528
*kill
Anyways, yeah, just couldn't shape the idea quite right as I was writing it.
>>27462584
not sure if that's a reaction to the aborted story or my teasing of possible future events for Anon
>>27462670
well.... was it at least a decent story idea?
'cause if it was, I might revisit it, polish it, etc.
I'm very fond of villain-protagonist stories
>>27462687
>>27462687
Well, no use doing that particular one since you explained how it would end
>>27462687
It was. Kinda surprised you didn't make that a one shot thing
>>27462687
>inb4 venom Anon
>>27462687
I'd still like to see Anon "die" and get into this predicament
>>27462721
Like I said, I really wanted to but... the words just weren't flowing from brain to hands to screen
Maybe I'll put a different twist on it, maybe I'll do something else, who knows?
I'm a mercurial cunt at the best of times.
>>27462771
The superpowered makeup sex will mindblowing
>>27462821
Will be*
God fucking dammit!
>>27462771
I understand. To tell the truth, I'm gonna write a bit of a one shot green.
I had this idea for a while and feel I should write it.
Not quiting Infamous Anon
>>27462821
>>27462832
.... This is an Idea I could work with...
>>27463037
Angry sex is best sex
>>27463037
Go forth and conquer my son!
>>27463037
Now go
>>27462687
Honestly it sounds like it would be pretty difficult to write. Not to mention, he gets revealed because he laughed too hard? I'm sorry, but there are like 3 types of laugh, tons of people have the same one. whose perspective would you write it from?
>>27463370
Anon's POV, until the end, maybe
I'd probably change something, say that, instead of the costume, his serum starts acting up, giving him half-goblin features as he laughs, a total lapse of control because of his inherent instability
thanks for pointing that out to me, actually
>>27463117
>>27463131
>>27463184
Working on it
Question, have people wanted Beans to return? I know he's been on the fence since all that debacle and is alittle more wary to post in the thread for fear of bombardment. I got his email and can relay info to him in case he no longer checks the threads.
Guess I just want a consensus of how many here want Beans back?
-Also slacking on lewds until I get some degree of answers, planning to spam all six at once rather than one at a time.-
>>27463565
Please tell him we're sorry and love him.
All the homo.
>>27463565
I'd like him back
His story, despite my small issue with the out-of-nowhere lewds, is still really good.
>>27463565
Baby I'm sorry please take me back. I didn't mean it.
>>27463597
>Issue with the out-of-nowhere lewds
What are you a normie?
Lewds and my own sexuality fantasies is the only I'm even still on 4chan.
>>27463565
Yea boi. We want some good ol beans back.
>>27463597
>out of nowhere lewds
But that's like 70% of why we read these
>>27463565
Baby come back
You can blame it all on me
Baby come back
>>27463565
I hope whatever he's going through, he finds it in himself to come back. But you can only blow off steam and bitch for so long before it becomes pathetic. He needs to decide whether he wants someone else to write the story or wants to do that himself. Beans, you're just a fucking human being who's had a convoluted love life like so many other people, you're not a living romcom.What woul Spider-Shim say?
>>27463746
With great memes, comes great memeabilty
>>27463565
I'm indifferent to this, but wouldn't mind to have another writer here/return.
>>27463812
The more the merrier.
>>27463833
That’s the point, also i would be lying if i didn't admit I'm a little bit curious on what will happen next with anime Doc Oc
Thanks all, sorry if it seems odd, I just wanna try to get us back as many of our writers as we can, granted I do enjoy Shocker's arbitrary pop ups. Loving all your works, sorry if I don't say it often, I lurk pretty often and get a hit of inspiration from you guys, so thanks again.
>>27463833
>this
planning out Chapter Two now, do you guys want to see Spider-Woman this early, or do you want me to wait a bit, I have plans for both (one is going to be chapter 3) I just want to know the order.
so, I've hit a slump, hate-fucking lewds delayed
>>27464198
Was this part of your plan?
>>27464240
Yes
>>27463986
M8 pacing is important. In every story she's been an element that was already present before the start. If you want to delay her introduction by any significant period of time, you best do it for a good reason, like having her not have powers yet. If you don't intend to go in detail about how and where she got them (which is fine) don't put it off for very long.
>>27464198
So what’s the problem?
>>27464877
energy, mostly
working on something fluffier, now
>>27464923
I know what you mean
>>27382894
>...
>Later….
>Finally, the front doors of the school…
>Panting, you stop running and walk to them with a sense of victory.
>You just escaped a fucking psychopath again.
>A metal should be placed in your honor.
>...Or in Spidey’s.
>Preferably yours, though.
>When you open the front doors, the view you’re met with is the entire front of CHS crowded with SWAT teams in riot gear surrounding it, police officers holding back waves of reporters, three police copters, two news copters, and a flock of geese.
>That last one wasn’t really relevant, it’s just weird because you didn’t know geese were still migrating or whatever.
>Or were they?
>I mean, you did see a flock fly by last week, so maybe you’re wrong.
>...You’re still focusing on the geese, aren’t you?
>Several SWAT troops quickly rush up to you, pulling you by the arm into safety.
>You don’t even care, you’re just kinda exhausted.
>As you’re pulled away, you see your Dad amongst the crowd of people.
>You wave tiredly to him like you would after a long day of school.
>Which it kind of was….
>...You pass out rather abruptly.
>>27465388
>You yawn as your eyes begin to open.
>You wake up in the back of a car.
>The back of a police car.
>Your mind is foggy and your legs and lungs burn.
>You feel sore, too.
>What happened…?
>...You were running earlier.
>Running around in the school...from...Spider-Woman?
>No, no...it was from...
>Then it hits you.
>The memories wash up from the back of your mind like a savage tsunami.
>Spider-Woman was fighting Doc-Ock, you and her hid in the bathroom, and she made you run…
>You passed out when you escaped too, right?
>Yeah, that’s right.
>You saw Dad out in the crowd, too.
>Now why the hell are you in a cop’s car?
“What’s goin’ on?” you ask sleepily.
>The two men in the front both look familiar, especially the older one in the passenger seat.
>You can’t see their faces very well.
>The window-thing in the back that blocks the front of the car prevents you from touching the driver makes sure of it.
>You tap on it a little to let them (whoever they are) know you’re awake.
>The man in the passenger seats turns to you, and opens up the window.
>“Rise and shine, son.”
“Officer Gordon?” you say with confusion, “what’s going on?”
>The moustached officer readjusts his glasses as he groans.
>“It’s Commisioner. Commissioner Gordon, remember?”
>>27465388
>>27465398
Huzzah!
>>27465398
“Oh. Sorry, I forgot you’re the commissioner...but, uh, who’s he?” you point to the driver.
>He’s a rather large looking guy, quite fat and plump from the looks of it.
>He wears an old grey trench coat with a matching hat (an actual fedora, not a trilby), and the hair on the back of his head is jet black and greasy.
>His jacket needs to be ironed too, cause it’s way too wrinkly.
>His angry eyes glare at you from the rear-view mirror.
>“Oh, me? Well it don’t matter who I am, kid! I’m just bein’ a nice, little ol’ chauffeur for Gordon here instead of findin’ out where some eight-legged freak without a shirt on is hidin’,” he says with an aggressive American-Italian accent.
>“Bullock!” scolds Gordon.
>“What? It’s true, Commish! I’m not meant to be driving this stupid kid around and pickin’ up your daughter!”
>“Well that doesn’t mean you get to behave like a ‘stupid kid’ yourself, Detective Bullock! Now focus on the damn road!”
>‘Bullock’ mutters under his breath, fist clenched against the wheel tightly.
>Gordon sighs and looks back at you.
>“Look, Anon, we’re taking you to the Police office to ask you a few questions, ok?”
“...He’s not going to be interrogating me, is he?”
>Gordon shrugs with a look that says ‘yeah, probably’.
“Yippee. Second time I’ve been brought to an interrogation room this week...”
>The commissioner chuckles slightly.
>“You should be proud. You're the first kid I’ve taken twice that’s actually clean both times going in there.”
“That’s comforting.”
>“Yeah, well don’t go too comfortable,” Bullock says rudely, “gettin’ punks like you to squeal is what I do, and I’m gonna get answers from ya one way or another.”
>You really don’t like this guy’s attitude.
>He looks like he hasn’t had a good night's sleep in weeks, but his fat gut tells you he probably sleeps on the job.
>You get up in his face about his attitude.
>>27465388
>>27465398
>>27465545
Thanks to some kind words from mamoruku, I think I'm gonna give this another shot. It'll be difficult though because of a voice-over project I'm working on for /co/, and the Flash story in Spider-Shim may need to be reworked thanks to DC's Rebirth (which is great BTW), and I just finished doing another play....but I've written over ninety pages for Spider-Shim, and I'm not gonna turn my back on her. She'd never turn her back on Anon, after all.
I have a responsibility that I plan to keep for the time being, so enjoy as I continue.
>PASTEBIN UPDATED
>http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
>>27465620
glad to hear it, Beans
>>27465620
Nice to have you back
>>27465620
I hope you enjoy it too.
>>27453418
I'd just like to say how glad I am that someone decided Sunset's Spidersuit was Superior Spider-Man.
postan' moar best grill
>>27466862
Agreed on the Venom part
Bump
In latest news, the new captain America comic has revealed that Steve Rogers is, and always has been, an agent of Hydra
(Not a joke)
>>27468122
What the fuck
>>27468122
Hail HydraI ain't even mad. I'm moving to DC anyways.
>>27468122
We're all Hydra now.
>>27468122
>>27460530
“Enough with the jokes Aria. This is serious.”
>You turn back to the hole, to see a black rock like hand grab the edge as another grabs the other edge.
>You could see Sombra slowly pull himself up as his start to rip.
> “Now I’m gonna have to deal with you girls as well.”
>Aria savagely grins as a couple of blades protruding out of her knuckles.
>You make a note to ask them what their powers were later.
>Glancing at the girls, you couldn’t help but feel something missing.
>Sombra grows impatient as he growls menacingly.
> “No matter. I’ll crush all of you before the night’s over.”
>He crushes the edges a bit more as he began to run at you.
>You and Adagio charge at him with swords in hand.
>Sombra raises his hands as they turn into sharp claws ready to strike.
>You ready yourself when see him move his claws towards you while Adagio does the same.
>As he gets closer, Sombra started to bring his claws down on you and Adagio.
>You swing your sword down on his arm, as you move to the side.
>Adagio copies you but grins as she does it.
>You see a glint of silver enter your eyesight as Aria leaps at the guy with her claws in front of her.
>He saw this and tried to back up but was to slow to dodge the attack.
>Aria’s claws, while not piercing his face, puncture his upper torso.
>Sombra screams as both you and Adagio take a step back.
>He then punches Aria, forcing her claws out of him.
>Adagio caught Aria within her arms asSombra started to stand up.
> “I was gonna grant you a painless death.”
>You could see Sonata rising from the floor behind him.
> “But I think I”ll take my time with it.
”>Sonata grabs his ankles and starts to sink into the floor dragging him with her.
>>27468529
I thought AIM had the dental plan though.... but I'll take no dental over MODOK any day I guess.
>>27468181
>>27468497
>>27468529
>>27468537
We must fight back. Say no to Hydra!
>>27469121
Screw Hydra
Just a heads up on art front. You should see the SINister six up before saturday, taking time since i wanna produce top quality for these lewds. Afterwards i still need to finish celestia fury. Feel free to toss requests, it just might take awhile
>>27469450
Thanks for updating us.
>>27468122
In what comic was that?
So, how's everyone living today?
>>27470002
>living
>He hasn't shed his fleshy prison and tasted true freedom
>>27470002
We are waiting for more green, nothing new here.
>>27465545
“What’s your problem, man? What’re you even upset about?”
>“Look outside and find out for yourself, punk.”
>You do, and are surprised to find the car driving past the police department.
“What? Why’d we just pass it?”
>Gordon sighs as his partner glares at him.
>“...We have to pick my daughter up from school.”
>Oh.
>Ok.
>Wait, no, what?
“Uh, and why’re you doing this now?”
>Bullock scratches his double chin as he speaks.
>“Because the entire city’s schools are all scared. Scared of what that freaky maniac girl’s gonna do next. Don’t blame ‘em either.”
>“Then you shouldn’t blame me for this either, Harvy, because I’m scared about my child like any normal father! Now stop complaining!”
>Father…
>You saw your father in the crowd of reporters...where is he now?
“...What about my dad? What’s he doing? And everyone else? They’re all alright...right?”
>Gordon goes quiet, thinking of a way to word his answer correctly.
>Instead, he decides to wait to explain.
>“I’ll tell ya later, Anon. He and I had to sort out some things. Maybe when Barbara's in the car...”
>Barbara...yeah, that was his daughter’s name.
>The one that also said you looked cute behind the glass when you were interrogated.
>The one going to Canterlot High soon if you remember correctly.
>The one you thought was his extremely elderly wife on the phone when you were there last time.
“Ok, whatever you say officer.”
>“Commissioner.”
“Whatever.”
>>27470074
Awkward incoming
I might have to delay update to monday again -.-
>>27470263
I'm a little disappointed, but fine take your time m80
>>27470074
>Bullock pulls up at Crystal Prep and parks in the lot.
>The many students in their uniforms .
>You really hope this Barbara chick isn’t a preppy bitch.
>This school’s infamous for it’s rude and snobbish behavior.
>Rumor is it’s gotten better recently, but nothing changes overnight.
>The uniformed students each head to either their car or a waiting parent’s.
>None of them look too concerned about the reason why they’re dismissing early, but you wouldn’t believe that a topless woman with robo-arms would attack your school a week ago.
>Bullock proceeds to undo his seatbelt as does Commissioner Gordon.
>They look at you expectantly.
“...What?”
>Bullock groans.
>“Sheesh, get a clue, kid. You’re gonna walk in to get Barbs with us, is that simple?”
“Won’t they think I’ve been arrested and that you’re bringing a criminal into school?”
>“Don’t worry about it, son. They’re gonna know you’re no criminal,” reassures Gordon.
>You find this hard to believe.
“And you know this how?”
>“‘Cause of the news. You’ve been on the papers more than the ink they print on. And now? Everyone in this city saw you get out of the building. They think you’re innocent…” explains Bullock, “but I /know/ you’re guilty, punk. Now get out of the car.”
>“Harvy, go easy on the kid! He’s been through alot this week, more than most kids should!” says Gordon in your defense.
>“But that’s just the thing! First he takes the first picture of her--she’s there with him. Then a restaurant he’s at is attacked--she’s there with him again. Then he plays hero and gets a kid outta a fire--she’s there with him AGAIN! He’s up to somethin’, Gordon, and it don’t take a detective to figure it out.”
>“HARVY, WE WILL DISCUSS THIS LATER! NOW SHUT THE HELL UP!” shouts Gordon, his face red with anger.
>Harvy tips his hat to cover his eyes a bit.
>“...Yes sir,” he says with underlying malice.
>>27470360
>He exits the vehicle before either of you.
>Commissioner Gordon proceeds looks at you awkwardly, shocked by his own anger.
>“I-I’m sorry, son. I’m just worried about my daughter is all.”
>The look in his eyes is familiar.
>Tired, weary, purple circles around the bloodshot eyes that’ve been awake far too long.
>It’s the same look that Sunset has whenever you're with her.
>That sad look in that says they’re concerned about something--as in something they care about.
>He must be scared for his daughter, Barbara.
>And his wife--whoever she is--must be absolutely petrified about both her husband and daughter’s safety.
>You nod your head, feeling sympathy for the jaded man.
“Don’t sweat it, I understand. You and your wife must be worried sick about her sometimes. I get it.”
>He pauses, his mouth about to speak words, but he closes it before he speaks, the sadness in his eyes becoming more prevalent.
>“C’mon. Let’s get Barbara, ok? ...Maybe we can stop at a drive-thru for you two. Betcha didn’t have lunch after what happened, eh?”
“You know it...Commissioner.”
>“That’s Commissioner, not offi--oh, wait.”
>His moustache curls as he smiles lightly and gives you a wink.
>“C’mon, son. Let’s go.”
>You exit the car with Commissioner Gordon and find Harvy sulking against the trunk of the car.
>“Took ya long enough,” he grumbles.
>Gordon rolls his eyes.
>“Shut up and walk, Harvy.”Sorry, accidentally used a trip for another project. It's still me, though.
>>27470074
>>27470360
>>27470371
Am I writing Harvy's dialogue well? I'm trying to sound like he does in the animated series as best as possible, but I don't know if it shows.
>>27470417
you're doing fine.
>>27470417
He's good, as suspicious and bullheaded as he was in the cartoon
>>27470417
First, good to have you back. Second, Bullock feels as suspicious, and lazy ad he was I'm the animated series.
>>27469725
Captain America: Steve Rogers #1
It released yesterday on Wednesday
>>27470653
He may act suspicious, but he's still one of the good guys
http://youtu.be/RdY4e5DAFUU
>>27470705
And that's why I like him.
>>27470763
Fuck wrong name.
bermp
>>27468122
I smell a shitstorm to rival ponies brewing on /co/
>>27471236
There is
>>27471236
There's never not a shitstorm in /co/
>>27470002
Good, trying to write the next part
>>27471279
Nah, yesterday everyone was too satisfied with rebirth, and the people who did talk about Captain Hydra were mostly saying "Hail Hydra".
Update of sinister six, all flat colors are good to go, all that's left is shading on 3 of them and highlights/effects. Plus side, got an 8 hour shift at midnight coming up so plenty of time to work.
If not posted tomorrow, avenge my death comrades.
>>27472293
I gotchu fampai
