Edge of Time edition
>Previously on Loonatics Unleashed
>>279294212
Hey everyone. Welcome to the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Sensational Spider-Woman. Any and all mlp/superhero content is welcome.
EXCLESIOR!
Pastebin List:
Beans
http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
untitled 7
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
superkeaton
http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)
Red (risen from the dead)
http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon
http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
treppahcs (last place but rewritten)
http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Dead?
FemAnon
http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
>Thread intro
http://youtu.be/uok3RnF_8Bk
First for nanomachines, son
>inb4 that one guy posts TwiXPeter
>>27371342
Like I said I the last thread I planned that part, but I guess I could have added a bit more
Update either tomorrow or Tuesday, depends on whether I get slapped with the overtime stick.
PREVIOUSLY, ON SHOCKER'S SCHLOCK:
>BEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!
WAIT, SHIT, WRONG CLIP.
>"WE ARE THE TWILIGHT FORCE!"
"...Nope. Fuck this. I quit. You have all officially RUINED my day. I don't even want the money anymore. To hell with it, I'm turning myself into the police."
AND NOW A CONTINUATION OF THAT PARTICULAR STORYLINE NO ONE ASKED FOR.
>"NO! YOU'RE GOING TO FIGHT US, DAMN IT!"
>"PINKIE NO--Aw, fiddlesticks."
"You fucking bitch! That smarted like hell! Do you know how expensive dental is when you're a super villain?! Right, you want to go?! We'll fucking go!"
>"Ohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboy--"
>"God dammit Pinkie...Oh, screw it, Twilight Force, ATTACK FORMATION!"
>>27371277
>>27371699
oi mate stop fucking putting yourself down.The only major problem with your writing is the huge length of time between posts. It's hard to tell if you're dead or not if you don't post.
>>27371759
A unique but visceral hatred boils in my guts
>>27371277
Did you link the wrong post or did it explode in the archives?
>>27373078
Exploded to death
>>27373213
extra death
>>27371699
Nice seeing you around
>>27373078
Nope
>>27371277
>279294212
>>27294212
>when u bump at 2 am because you live in a modern society where everyone else is asleep at 2 am
>>27374756
I'm awake, just wasn't paying attention
Talk to me, bloke
>>27374756
Bloke? Bloke?
BLOOOOOOOOKE!
>>27374756
>>27374764
>implying it's 2 am everywhere at once
>>27375021
The east coast is the world.
>>27375017
>>27375021
>Spiderman is physically incapable of seeing or understanding time
http://youtu.be/xeMtL6Yk3mw
>>27375036
Kek.
bump
Anyone got that Spider gwen Shimmer pic?
>>27375859
gonna have to be specific
this un'?
>>27377433
I think he's asking for Sunset in Spider-Gwen's costume
the last 3 times I updated (~12 posts) I got a total of one spelling correction and one single-word response
I feel like noone even read my last update
doesn't feel great...
I probably would have written something were it not for the lack of motivation
Yes, I'm whining. But not entirely unreasonable, right?
>>27378218
I like your story, but you asked for corrections and I gave them to you
Please keep writing
I know I'm struggling to find my motivation as well, but hopefully some rest and a distinct lack of classes will help me out there.
>>27378218
We all appreciate you and your story. Still, you must remember this is 4chan not Tumblr, so we're not a hugbox.
Keep writing, don't give up.
>>27378218
I read your story but asking me for corrections wouldn't work as my own is most likely full of them.
Still just continue and be happy people read it
>>27378218
I should let you guys know i read every story. I would add art to highlight the parts that inspire me, but i feel i finish what i owe first. Sorry for not responding often, figure people want my responses with drawings attached.
>>27378379
dude, we'll take your responses with insults and shitposts if that's all you've got
>>27378379 >>27378340 >>27378303 >>27378292
I don't need a lot of praise, and everyone's always telling my my story is good, but if not a single person acknowledges my existence sometimes I must do something wrong.
anyway, thanks guys.
motivated me enough to even keep going today
>>27378444
Good to hear, friend
>>27378218
>>27378733
fucking FACT
>>27378733
yeah, I should try to drink more alcohol
If I'm in the mood I'll do that tomorrow
depends on how my day goes
I hope to finish the Crysalis-scene in the bus
then I'll do my own date-scene... maybe drunk
how do you guys feel about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy?
>>27378218
Not unreasonable. And just letting you know that every time i see a green i instantly become something like pic related ... honestly i sometimes feel like the only happiness in this life of mine is reading greens .... appriciate your work guys not just untitled but every single writefag ever!
(sorry for my english, sorry for the whiny post)
>>27378863
then let us know, post something, anything to show our stories are read, doesn't matter if it's half a thread behind
>Yfw the MLP Movie is getting a lot of famous people to co star
>>27379135
So rhey get Sabertooth in the movie? Is he the one who plays Wolverine"s brother?
>>27379596
Yes.
I know some of these actors in these ways:
>Michael Pena
Mexican guy in AntMan
>Emily Blunt
Rita from Edge of Tomorrow
>Liev Schreiber
Saber tooth from X men origins. Cotton from Scream series.
>>27379691
Liev's got a great voice
If he's playing a character I hope it's a villain
>>27379725
>This guy is gonna be in the my little pony movie
http://youtu.be/VevqDJM8KH0
>>27379691
Now we need to get Troy Baker, David Hayter, David Tennant, and Kiefer Sutherland, and then the movie will be perfect
Well, I had this picture saved, posting it because the thread is about heroes...I guess
>>27379946
All heroes are welcom.
>>27380105
>Welome.
Can you guys be honest with me? Did i fuck up in the last couple of posts? Story wise i mean . I'm wondering if i should redo the part
>>27380669
It's a little rushed.
Slow down, re-read your posts before you make them, check for grammar and spelling.
You've got good ideas, just take your time with them.
>>27380823
Thanks, but should i redo the last few posts.
>>27380863
that's for you to decide
if you're satisfied by the finished product, then that's that.
but if you think you can improve it, do so in your pastebin and tell us when you finally feel comfortable and satisfied with it.
>>27380911
Thanks, it's just i have a different idea for Anon and Sunset's friends that I'm wondering would be better
are we dead?
>>27382447
We killed ourselves.
We killed Beans.
>>27382447
I'll have something tomorrow
>>27382747
rad
that makes one of us
I'll try to have something by next saturday
>>27283318
>“How far did you go? What did you do with her?”
>You feel uncomfortable.
“Look, I know you were just open to me with your whole backstory and stuff, but I never pulled a Tommy Wiseau and asked: “How is your sex life?” to you.”
>“...Look, did you screw her or not?”
>That tone is starting to sound a wee bit creepy now.
“N-no. We just made out, did some foreplay...Can you stop being creepy please?”
> “...Fine. I just...do you think she might’ve been the one who put the stick on your back?”
>You give her a goofy smile, not sure if she’s serious or not.
“Uh, yeah, Derpy wouldn’t do that.”
>“Derpy?” she asks more to herself than to you.
“Yeah, she’s a friend of mine. Nicest girl, she has a thing for muffins too. She’d probably like you.”
>“...Yeah. Sure.”
>Is she upset?
“You sound irritated. Is something wrong?”
>“What? Oh, no, no! I’m fine! Fine, fine, fine! Just, uh…”
“Uh what? Why would you be upset? I mean unless you were...Oh my god.”
>The corners of your lips travel upwards to form a devious smile.
“You’re jealous.”
>“No I’m not! I just don’t think you should’ve...done that...and things…”
>You start sputtering out loud laughs.
“Ha! Oh my god, you are SO jealous!”
>“Shaddup,” she says quietly.
>You can only imagine her pouting behind her mask.
“You were supposed to say ‘b-baka!’ and stuff.”
>Suddenly--BAM!
>A toilet from the girls’ room comes crashing through the wall, broken pipes blasting water up.
>The hole in the wall reveals none other than Doctor Octopus.
>“Desu,” she says in a threatening monotone.
>That’s all the motivation you need to start running out of the bathroom with Spidey.
“Oh fuck me!”
>“Don’t motivate her!” Shimmer yells.
>The villain cocks a brow behind the shades the cover her identity.
>“You think I need any more motivation other than him alone?”
>>27382844
Find my last post as "Fui" on desustorage via link for what happened previously
https://desustorage.org/mlp/search/image/vDoKSUvswYxgUfjhE3gDZg/
>>27382844
>>“Desu,” she says in a threatening monotone.
Man, Anon's gotta get himself to the X-Men, needs to train them mutant lady-attracting dick pheromones.
>>27382860
Thanks for the green beans
never fails to make me chuckle
>>27382844
>“I don’t know, you seem to be rather satisfied when it comes to robberies. Someone paying you big bucks on the black market? Trying to traffic him? C’mon Doc, spill the beans.”
>Doctor Octopus stomps through the hole in the wall with her mechanical arms.
>“You think I’d tell you anything, plan or not?”
>“You always do which gives me enough time to escape your dumb traps….and enough time to do this.”
>“Do wha--?”
>“Here’s web in your eye!”
>Once again, the mighty Doctor Octopus is blinded by the thick web-like material.
>Spidey then points to the door.
>“Go! Leave the school building! As long as I keep her here, then the feds will catch her when they arrive!”
“But what about you!?”
>“I’ll be fine!”
>One of the four wailing and disoriented arms immediately swipes her to the sink and mirror.
>You take off running like a goddamn Kenyan.
>...Or snapped a photo real quickly first…
>Either way, you run off before Doctor Octopus can start chasing you again.
>...While quickly taking snapshots of the wreckage too.
>What?
>You’re a journalist/photographer, and you’ve got great material, ok!?!?
>...
>Later….
>Finally, the front doors of the school…
>Panting, you stop running and walk to them with a sense of victory.
>You just escaped a fucking psychopath again.
>A metal should be placed in your honor.
>...Or in Spidey’s.
>Preferably yours, though.
>When you open the front doors, the view you’re met with is the entire front of CHS crowded with SWAT teams in riot gear surrounding it, police officers holding back waves of reporters, three police copters, two news copters, and a flock of geese.
>That last one wasn’t really relevant, it’s just weird because you didn’t know geese were still migrating or whatever.
>Or were they?
>I mean, you did see a flock fly by last week, so maybe you’re wrong.
>...You’re still focusing on the geese, aren’t you?
And to who ever made this pic from whatever amount of time ago, I demand my sides back, please.
>>27382922
you'll never get them back, motherfucker, and I ain't even the one who took 'em
>>27382894
http://youtu.be/Qmpl3byvMUs
So who here thinks Spider-man comics suck now?
>>27383229
slott and bendis really fucked our mouths, but there are still a few good ones
>>27383264
Bendis is awful. I want Bendis to stop.
He will never stop.
>>27382844
>“Don’t motivate her!” Shimmer yells.
>>27383530
What's wrong with it?
http://youtu.be/haI_HT8Xrss
>"You put your mind in Spider-Man's body? That's brilliant, I'm going to write that down"
He...hehehe....
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
no
I'mma use my thinkbrain and try to plot out where I'm going for Issue #7.
Got some fuzzy ideas, gonna try to solidify them.
>>27383592
It should be >Spidey yells
>>27383971
>symbiote rape
>>27384035
hey now, nothing so tawdry
it's clearly just going to betender symbiote hand-holding
>>27384008
No it's good.
>>27384141
2 lewd 4 me
real talk, I'm super glad these threads exist
I don't know why this topic clicked with me, but I'm glad it did and I'm glad it motivated me to write for you faceless cunts
>>27380669
I personally preferred the other version where Anon joins them, it was more entertaining with the whole taking Zapp down a notch or two. I'll be honest the majority or the rewrite has been good but this part sucked ass big time.
>>27384613
Well I'm redoing the 3rd meet up differently so don't worry
>>27378987
I'm not really sure how it proves anything giving that i can just open their pastebins and read a random line ... but treppahcs can confirm that the previous version of his story had Anon as the main character his hero name was Zeus or at least they called him that and there was a part when he had to escape from Iron man and some other heroes but he left his backpack in a warehouse or what and that's when he got discovered ... or in Red's story Sunset visits Anon sometimes to just talk to him and he can't really talk because he's in a coma or something after almost killing himself with a gun. Is that enough?
>>27385586
That's in the old version of my story.
>It’s been a week since then.
>You tried to keep an eye and ear out for anything worth while.
>But any possible leads turned out to be just rumors or some crazy story some kids made up.
>Since all leads were useless, you decided to find them yourself and take to the skies.
“WOOOOOHHHHOOOOOO.”
>You’re glad Uncle Eugene taught you to use your powers.
>You have too much fun flying around with your wings.
>With general place in mind, you just just go around and see if you could find anything.
>Looking down, you see some people run down an alleyway.
“Let’s get this over with.”
>You glide down and land in the alleyway.
>You don’t see any movement in front of you, and you look behind you to see nothing.
“Now where did those guys go?”
>Something hits the back of your head as you stumble forward..
>Turning around you see a small gang of either thugs or homeless people.
>You’re not sure which they are.
>The one you assume to be the leader points a lead pipe at you, smirking at your discomfort.
> “So we have a freak among us? Guess the Diamond Dogs will earn a little street cred tonight.”
>That confuses you, as they circle around you.
>They all have weapons ranging from bats to switchblades.
“Wow, all this for me?”
>The leader laughs a bit as he swings his pipe in his hand.
> “We know you freaks have powers that can take down gangs like nothing, but..”
>He points behind him and you see a little girl being held a knife point by another gang member.
> “If you try to fight us, then the girl dies. Can you deal with that?”
>You activate your power and cloak yourself.
>>27386076
>They look surprised as you run past the leader and towards the little girl.
> “Kill the girl.”
>You see the thug raise the knife as you run towards them.
>You reach the thug and punch him, causing him to drop the knife and the girl.
>You grab his arm and flip him over your shoulder.
>Before he lands on the ground, you kick him in the head with a low right kick.
>You uncloak yourself and look at them, but they were still look smug.
> “So you took down one of my underlings. We still outnumber you ten to…”
>You gather the energy and release it, creating five flying suits or armor.
> “One?”
>You look at them and raise your hand and point at the gang.
“Sic ‘em.”
>Your angels rush forward, hitting the gang from all sides.
>Two of the thugs get slammed into a wall by one angel.
>One thug tries to hit your wingman with a baseball bat.
>He catches it and crushes it in his hand.
>The thug throws a punch at the chest and feels pain.
>He then gets slapped away.
>Another two were nailed to the ground by swords.
>One angel began to glow as three of the thugs tried to rush at it.
>When they get within arm’s reach, it releases a large shockwave knocking them against the walls.
>A short thug was shaking and made a run for it leaving the leader by himself.
>And this happened in the span of thirty seconds.
>The leader looks scared and he’s shaking.
> “You d-don’t s-scare me.”
>Wordlessly, you sent your wingmen to rush him, causing him to hit the wall.
>And the wingmen hit him as well.
“That was overkill, but I guess it works.”
>Turning to the little girl, you bend down trying not to scare her.
“Hey you ok?”
>She nods a bit fearfully.
“How about we find your parents? Do you know where they are?”
>She shakes her head.
“Do you know your way home?”
> “Y-yes Mister Angel.”
>You chuckle at her and pat her head.
“The how would you like to get there in style?”
>>27386129
That's all. Is this better or worse?
>>27386302
Its okay.
>>27386302
Better.
And i kinda like Angel as his new hero name
>>27385660
Yup. Thats why i said the previous version, and i actually hope it proved my point 'cuz i really do read all of your stories!
>>27386317
>>27386328
Thanks.
This gelt better to do than have Anon join them to early.
I'm also trying to get a villain for this.
>>27386877
Remember, slow down, double-check your spelling and grammar.
You said English isn't your first language, yeah?
>>27387053
It is but I'm no English teacher. It's just i have big hands and using them on a phone is a pain sometimes
>>27384141
that looks more like he is fisting it not holding it's hand.
>>27387114
Symbiotes are complicated creatures
What is fisting for one species is simply hand-holding to them.l-lewd
>>27387227
you think fisting is something like a taboo for them?
>>27387227
Can a symbiote love?
Spectacular Spider-Shim! Only on le Hub!
http://youtu.be/42-2xuw_pTI
>>27387596
It can if he wants it to.
>>27386877
Tirek as Apocalypse
>>27387633
Good idea and i need to read up on him.
I know who he is, just saying so i know what I'm doing.
>>27387683
With Chryssi as Mystique
>>27387747
Definitely and we need Sombra, Nightmare Moon, the Dazzlings and Midnight Sparkle to have a party.
>>27387829
Nightmare Moon-Enchantress
Sombra-Black Adam
>>27388095
And the rest?
>>27388128
Calling it now, Midnight Sparkle is the Phoenix Force.
>>27387829
The dazzlings should just be a group like the birds of prey but with villains. Like titania, vertigo, etc.
>>27388128
>>27388149
I'd say go with this. Have Twi become Midnight Sparkle, aka Dark Phoenix
>>27388325
but civil war is better with only good guys, and a few changeling infiltrators pushing along...
>>27388128
Adagio-Domino
Aria-Rogue
Sonata-Shadow Cat
>>27388349
>>27388325
>>27388174
>>27388149
>>27388095
>>27387747
Well I'm glad you guys gave me a few ideas and I'll be sure to use them soon.
Also what should Midnight be like if i use her?
>>27388128
The power ponies are part of SHIELD, right?mao bring in some SHIELD agents...
Cadence-Agent May
Flash-Ward
Normal Norman-Phil Coulson
Doc and Octavia-FitzSimmons
I'd love to contribute, but I'm busy establishing more or less my own universe with only somewhat similar stuff, not copies
cont from pastebin and >>27328195
>Dr. Octavia hadn’t been nice to you.
>Working with her was had a stark contrast to Dr. Mason
>She made you carry and assemble heavy machinery with your gear.
>The list of flaws soon became quite long, and you mind was too focused at the tasks at hand that you could barely even make notes, much less think of how to right them.
>“Mr. West.”
“Just a second.”
>You try to finish your current task and don’t let yourself get distracted.
“Yeah?”
>“It’s past your finishing hour. We only pay you from 7 to 10.”
“Oh...”
>You check your company given PDA.
>It’s already 10:28 pm.
“I was caught up in the process.”
>“So I saw.”
>She sounds amused.
>“But if I’m not mistaken you have someone else to meet.”
>...
>Chrysalis... the Black Widow. Fuck.
>You hastily start cleaning up your place, but-
>“You’ll work here again tomorrow. Just make it so that nobody gets an heart attack while passing by, okay?”
“I- ahh...”
>Dr. Mason had been way more strict when it comes to cleaning, you didn’t expect Dr. Octavia to be lax in that regard.
>“Only because you’re late already.”
>She must have read your expression.
“Yes, thank you.”
>You finish up and leave.
“See you tomorrow, Dr. Octavia.”
>“Until tomorrow, Mr. West.”
>As you exit the lab and move to the elevator you wonder what her work hours must be like and just how much money she makes on them.
>You return the PDA, get scanned for smuggling and get your own electronic devices back before you exit the building.
>Chrysalis has your techwear, so the next order of business is to find the alley she said she would ‘lurk around in’.
>...
>She’s not here.
>Or is she?
>Is this a test?
>Maybe she just got bored and left, because you were late.
>Does that seem like her?
>You don’t know her well enough to make such an assumption.
>You at least owe it to her to put that half hour you were late in to try and find her.
>>27388571
>A few minutes after looking in the darker places of the alley and investigating the fire ladders more thoroughly you hear someone else enter the alley.
>Two someones actually.
>They stroll down the way and give you a clear ‘bad-guy vibe’
>Street thugs?
>This has to be a test, right?
>Either on if you’re able to talk your way out of a fight or how you’ll do in one...
>You only have one good arm, so talking it is.
>They approach you.
>“Yo, waddap, man? Yo kno what kinda hood yo in?”
>Could you be any more stereotypical?
>And dear god, his accent is thick.
>The second one immediately draws a knife.
>Cutlery really...
>Screw talking, those two probably deserve a beating.
“Oh yeah. I heard about this.”
>Be aware of your surroundings, take in everything that might hinder a fight and make it apply to your enemy, and the things usable as a weapon in only your own grasp.
“Blowjob free alley, right? But you’re the one who uses too much teeth.”
>You point at Knifey who immediately charges.
>You take a few steps back and steady yourself to duck under the knife, in the same motion you let your backpack of your shoulder and swing it into his abdomen.
>He bends just slightly enough over for you to trip him and ram your elbow into his back.
>Teethy... pulled a gun.
“Wohoa...”
>You dodge-roll forward to his right, and immediately after a gunshot rings through the alley.
>The recoil of the gun and his bad footing made it easy to trip him too with a simple kick in the knee.
>His second panicked shot goes wild into the air, and you were already on his gunarm before he could shoot again.
>You disarm him and kick the gun under a garbage container before pinning him down on the street.
>Wishing you could use your second arm, you only put your weight on his chest.
>Now what?
>The other guy will come charging at you again, and this one will not stay down willingly...
>Where is the Knifey?
>You look around before returning your attention to Teethy.
>>27388581
>He’s smiling at you... deviously.
>What the?
>“Good job. Although you shouldn’t be the aggressor.”
“What?”
>On one hand you barely understood what he was saying, because your ears were still ringing.
>On the other you were confused about it’s contents.
>“Would you remove your arm from my chest before I transform back?”
>Processing...
>Processing...>Your free upgrade to Anon 10 is ready.
>“Miss Chrysalis?”
>He nods. No. /She/ nods.
>You look down at his/her chest.
>A moment later you frantically remove your hand from said area.
>He/she goes up in green flames and transforms into her costumed form.
>The costume looks different than four hours ago.
>She must have tweaked it.
>You stand up and extent your arm to help her up as well, which she gladly took.
>“You shouldn’t have been the aggressor in that case.”
“Uhh... I started the fight on my own terms.”
>“Your terms are ‘outnumbered, outgunned, and one arm too less’.”
>’too few’
>“You were about to be stabbed into your back while the other kept you busy.”
>You don’t respond.
>“You’re dead.”
“I’m sorry.”
>“You don’t get to be sorry, you’re dead.”
“That’s not necessarily a given...”
>“How far have you tested your healing factor?”
>That’s an question you have dodged most of your life.
>So instead you turn around to look for Knifey.
“Where’s the other guy?”
>She looks over your shoulder.
>“I made myself hollow and split up to conserve mass. You thought you could fell approximately 180 pounds that easily?”
>She continues to make you look stupid, but...
“Holy fuck, what are your powers?”
>“I change, it’s what I do.”
>Your eyes trail down her body for a moment.
“And how do you really look like?”
>“I forgot that a long time ago, so ogle away, I’m proud of my creation.”
>You take the chance to check her out more thoroughly for the first time.
>>27388594
>You don’t quite believe she forgot what she looks like but if conversion of mass is correct, she’s not fat.
“I assume you can heal easily too?”
>“Comes with the package.”
“You made wings... what /can’t/ you do?”
>“If you want this to be a share on our origin stories then I sit at the longer lever.”
“Just one more question. How old are you? Because I’d feel bad if I would - ‘ogle’ as you put it – an elderly women.”
>“You want to reenact Twilight? Because I’m not gonna watch you in your sleep.”
“Young enough to pop culture references. Gotcha.”
>The next awkward pause has been brought to you by the question if you’re comfortable flirting with her..
>She can be anything.
>But there’s Sunset.
>Yeah, awkward.
“I regrew my baby toe. With nerves and everything. Took less than two days.”
>You raise the injured arm.
“I’m not sure, but I give it a week, maybe more.”
>“I know something which could substitute an arm for a while.”
“Oh?”
>“Maybe I’ll bring it along tomorrow. You’re not much use with only one, so that’ll be it for today.”
>She turns.
>“Come.”
>You pick up your bag and follow her along the alley where she picks up your techwear spider-legs.
“Thanks...”
>You take another look at it.
“They do have my blood from cleaning it already, don’t they?”
>She doesn’t respond immediately.
>“I don’t know. It’s likely. But from how Flim is now he might actually have respected your decision.”
>As she hands you the techwear she leans in close to you and whispers...>“Hail Hydra.”
>>27388603
pastebin will be updated after someone - I'm looking in your direction superkeaton - pointed out all my flaws again.
I'm also posting at "primetime"
maybe this'll get me more people responding. (I need lots of attention)
Day 3 of internship went better.
Elevator engines are heavy if you have to carry them up 7 floors with only one other guy.
Well, hope you guys don't mind, finished a picture of Sci-Twi, I only hope that it is good enough.
Please let me know any critique for it.
>>27388345
>>27388388
http://youtu.be/6Izcp-9naQo
>>27388731
I love it
>>27388755
What is this? Nobody tells me anything anymore.
>>27388805
I'm glad to hear, I might still mess with it to see if I can get a better effect ratio out it.
>>27388731
Nice design, but I'm seeing mega-man for some reason
>>27388755
I don't get it
>>27388731
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ufVQIUEiYc
>>27388845
>mega-man
It's the pose
>>27388843
Maybe make it glow in an aura?
>>27388856
You got me, started working out a design for the boots, some reason it stuck in my head.
" A super Science robot." do do de doo
" Science Twilight"
>>27388843
On second glance, you still need to work on your anatomy
One headsize down crosses nipples, else they be saggin
>>27388603
>>"Hail HydraOH SHIT NIGGA
>>27389326
don't you fucking frank that milk I swear to god
>>27389341
You're outta control Frank.
So, Anons.
Will fucking Spider-Shim Sham be worth it even if you will lose your dick to penis cancer?
>>27388349
What does Domino's powers do?
Please make it simple so I can understand
>>27389674
The power to deliver pizza in 30 minutes or less
>>27389674
http://marvel.wikia.com/wiki/Neena_Thurman_(Earth-616)#Powers_and_Abilities
>>27389866
Thanks. We might have Anon fight some bad guys soon.
>>27389722
So we're ordering from superheroes?
>>27389722
>>27389959
Piiiiiizzzzzzaaaaaaa
Tiiiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmeeee
>page 8
I'll have something tomorrow. Should Anon get his first taste of supervillains in the next post or two?
>>27389341
Whatever happened to Punisher Anon?
>>27389322
That's why we do it
>>27392691
I'm scared.
Scared of smurfposters.
Anyone know where/how I can read Venomfor free?
>>27392333
Dead?
>>27393763
2 AM Pacific time, everyones asleep
>>27392691
I'm so fuckin lost in your story m8.
Does anon have powers? It it like a "Anon works for the baddies" type deal?
Who the fuck is anon supposed to be?
>>27386129
> “Faster, Mister Angel. Faster.”
>You chuckled at her, glad that she’s not crying anymore.
>You promised her a little ride before returning her to her family.
>You flew around almost everywhere at a easy maintained pace as she held onto your shoulders..
>She asked if you could fly over the park, river and a few buildings.
>And you were happy to grant her wish but now it was time to return her home.
“Ok, now it’s time to go home.”
> “Do I have to?”
>You laugh as you heard the disappointment in her voice.
“Yes we do. Your mother must be worried sick and I’m not gonna explain why you were late. Now how about telling where you live?”
> “Aww, ok. I live at 37 Maple Street.”
>Huh, that’s not far from you home.
“Ok, sweetie. Now hold on.”
>It doesn’t take you long to find her house.
> “It’s that one. That one.”
>You nod and slowly land on her lawn as you bend down for the little girl to jump off your back.
>Looking up you see a man and a woman staring at you as the little girls runs to the door.
>She opens the door and runs inside to her parents.
>The father bends down a picks her up as she hugs him.
>She then looks at you and waves as you wave back.
>You then jump and fly as you hear someone yell at you.
>Looking down you see the family on the lawn as the woman yells, “Thank you.”
>You just smile and wave as you fly away from the happy family.
>>27394710
All I have for the moment plus thinking of which villain or hero Anon will meet in the next post
>>27394724
>>27394710
Forgot my name. Like I said thinking of a villain or hero Anon meets next
>>27394648
he'd probably likes to know the answer to those questions, too.
>>27394710
"Nono, Mr. Angel was my father. Just call me Angel."
>>27394730
Scarecrow
>>27394807
Damn I should have used that line.
Also who would Scarecrow be?
>>27394820
I got nothing, so... no unmasking
>>27394868
Well all i have is that he meets th Dazzlings and they have a weird friend/enemy relationship
>>27394820
DC or Marvel scarecrow?
If DC, a character who would have extensive psychology and psychiatry knowledge, likely an adult.
If Marvel, a flexible, lanky person with a troubled childhood whose skills, fighting style and professional attitude we'd associate with a mmorpg thief-assassin, but they have crow allies.
>>27396139
There was a marvel Scarecrow?
And i was just asking so i don't do the same thing to Hydroman in my first version
>>27396258
Ok.
What did you do to Hydro Man?
>>27396412
In my orginal green i had him show up then Anon beat him in the next second.
>>27396258
Marvel Scarecrow went from a normal villain to a demonic Ghost rider villain
>>27396258
Big Mac as Scarecrow
>>27396470
So that's who it was. Just throwing this out there I find a more relatable down-to-earth and oppressed thief-assassin Scarecrow as opposed to DC's (in my opinion) full retard sociopath scarecrow. Plus, more actual fighting and chasing with Marvel's Scarecrow.
>>27396927I meant to say I find the idea of Marvel's Scarecrow more appealing, but didn't proofread. Sorry.
>>27396927
Not a bad idea. Like i said all i had was the Dazzlings meeting him and they sort of follow him
>>27396967
You do you man. Any ideas why they might follow him? Maybe you could read intoMarvel'sand find something that you can work with. Even just reading into his personality on a wikia could help.I'm worried that I'm pushing this on you, I'm usually just lurking with the occasional reply so it's nice to engage with a writefag and suggest things.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scarecrow_(Marvel_Comics)#Fictional_character_biography
>>27397068
>implying scarecrow was your idea
>>27397068
Don’t worry about it. I'm just thinking about all my options.
And for the Dazzling idea I either had it were Anon beats them and they want revenge or he helps them cause they're poor and they follow him to learn from him.
Or something like that
>>27397140
Nice, and good to know you've got more cards in your hand.
>>27397296
Yeah I'm trying to pick which one to do. I leaning more towards either beating the villain but wasn't a challenge.
Or Anon gets beat up and sees the villain again later
>>27397427
>Anon can kick Spider-Shim and the Power Ponies' asses but loses to a group who hits below the belt.
Oh the irony,and he won't hear the end of it from his parents or Sunny.
There's also both: Anon gets involved in a turf war between two rogue factions, one side gets their asses kicked while the other manage to beat him.
>>27397549
I was going for an older villain Anon would lose to like Sombra or Chrysalis
>>27397574
Oh, I had the former group of thugs in mind.
>>27397574
Turf war between them, with Anon in the middle?
>>27397630
It's not a bad idea, just the decisions. You know.
Also trying to get a love triangle or square going
>>27397722
I hear ya.
Between Sunny, Spider-Woman and Anon?
>>27398258
Well Sunset, Anon and 1 or 2 others.
Also Spider-Woman wouldn't count as she's Sunset. I mean i may throw Twilight and Adagio into the mix
>>27398283
Noice, you must live dangerously if you're involving Adagio in a love whatever-the-hell-sided-polygon.
>>27398588
It's not in stone but an idea. Though the Twilight idea has some merit
>>27398714
>>27398283
I like it!
>>27394710
>You fly around now that you don't have a little passenger on your back.
>A flash of light grabs your attention as you look to the side to find the source.
>You see what appears to be a bunch of flashing bright lights near the park.
“What's going on over there?”
>You slow down as you descend and land near a tree.
>Hiding there, you see a group of three girls running from a group of seven men.
>The strangest thing was that six of the guys wore some crazy looking helmet.
>The one without a helmet stepped forward and began talking.
> “You three were given a chance at a better life. All you needed to do was to join me.”
>The puffy orange haired girl snarled at him saying, “If we joined you, we would have been nothing more than your personal toys.”
>The man sneers that them.
> “Better to be mine than to live on the streets. Now I'll ask again, will you join our little group or do we need to ‘persuade’ you?”
>The two other girls were shaking as the puffy girl tried to look tough.
> “Go to hell.”
>The leader doesn’t look amused as he raised his hand.
> “I really hoped you would come willingly.”
>His gang moves to surround them as he just stands there.
>You get ready to channel your powers when a loud snap is heard.
>Looking down, you see a stick under your foot.
>You look up to see a huge fist swipe at you.
>Jumping up, you create your wings to avoid the black fist and land safely.
>A few yards away from you, the leader looks at you with mild interest.
> “Looks like we have a party crasher.”
>You don’t say anything as two of his goons flank you.
> “Unfortunately, this is a private affair. Take care of him.”
>The two rush you, as you use your wings to propel yourself back a few feet.
>They stop in front of each other just as you got your footing.
>Raising your hand, you charge video energy to your palm and release it in a machine gun like blast.
>Video bullets hit almost every part of their body before they fall.
>>27399496
>The leader looks shocked at this but schools his expression to a frown.
> “What’re you waiting for get him.”
>The rest of them try to rush you as you continue shooting at them.
>Surprisingly you only hit one of them as the rest move to the sides.
>They form black blades on their hands and swing them at you.
>Using your wings, they fold over you in a makeshift shield blocking the blades.
>You stretch your arm out, as your shield fades, creating a large sword and swing at them.
>You catch the closest two off guard as the last two jumped away to avoid your strike.
>You summon two wingmen, who rush at the final two slamming them into trees.
>Looking back at the leader, you see he was getting angry.
“You need better fighters than stormtroopers.”
>He roars as a black fist is shot at you.
>It hits you so fast, you’re forced to the ground before you know it.
>A moment later you feel a foot on your chest as you see the leader above you.
> “You took down my men and made me look like a fool.”
>He lifts his foot up then slams it back down.
>You grunt at the pain.
> “It’s too bad you’ll die here tonight.”
>He slams his foot into you again.
> “I could have used someone like you in my gang.”
>He lifts his foot up and kicks you hard this time.
>You hold your stomach in pain as he keeps talking.
> “Oh well. You can’t win them all.”
>He raises his dark hand above you and forms a long black blade.
> “At least I’ll be rid of one pest tonight.”
>You feel something wrap around your shoulders as a body presses against you as you heard a feminine voice by your ear.
> “Nope.”
>Suddenly, all you see is darkness and the next moment you see the ground.
>>27399970
All for now. Gonna have more in the morning
Not gonna lie, been coming home tired after work, so I might just do my stories on weekends.
>>27400445
I'd be pretty tired too if my job involved robbing banks and satisfying superheroines all day
>>27400550
you forgot villains as well
>>27400576
I'd never forget Mysterio
>>27400624
looks more like cobra commander to me
>>27400687
Would Trixie wear a fish bowl as part of her costume if she was Mysterio?
>>27400742
That would be pretty funny
>>27400742
kek, like a low budget Halloween costume.
>>27401420
>>27401585
It is a funny thought, but I meant it. Would she wear a helmet or something to cover her head?
Cause I see her not wanting to ruin her hair
Yeah, original requests lead to cobra commander style mask, debated on fishbowl but that hair is too fabulous to contain
Maybe go the ultimate universe route and set her head on fire or whatever that was supposed be? It's just that I look at that pic and I would never asssume thats mysterio, just kinda looks like Trixie's costume combined with cobra commander's.
>>27399970
>You groan as you roll to your side.
> “Hey, you ok?”
>You look up to see one of the girls kneeling by you.
>Slowly, you get on your hands and knees then get into a kneeling position as well.
“Yeah, just ...just give me a moment.”
>You take a few calming breathes as you heal.
>Looking around, you see that you’re behind a building.
>You look at the girl to see her blue hair and huge smile on her face.
> “I’m so glad that you’re ok. When me and the girls saw you take down Sombra’s men it was so cool.”
>You listen to this girl just go on and on.
>You sigh put a hand to her lips.
>She instantly stops talking.
“Thanks but are you and the other two ok?”
>She nods as she stands up.
> “Oh right. Hey Dagi, Aria, he’s asking about you girls.”
>The other two show up from the other side of the building.
>All of them are wearing the same hoodies and pants.
>The only difference was the the twin tailed purple haired girl wore gloves.
> “So our hero is ok, huh?”
>You could feel purple’s sarcasm.
“Maybe you should be a damsel in distress then.”
>She glares at you and removes one of her gloves, but the orange puffy haired one put a hand in front of her.
> “Aria stop. He helped us, so we should show a little gratitude towards him.”
>The purple one, Aria, huffs and looks away.
> “Now that’s taken care of. I would like to thank you….”
“Angel.”
>That name sounded better than Spectrum.
>She grins at you and claps her hands.
> “Well thank you Angel. That’s Aria, Sonata and I’m Adagio, and we’re The Dazzlings.”
>>27403002
Small update for now. will have more tonight then I'll update the pastebin. Liking it so far?
>>27388603
>Be Spitfire
>Be talking to BonBon and Soarin about their talk with Sunset Shimmer aka. Spider-Woman went.
“And you didn’t bring up her copycat?”
>“No, after she chose to not partake in super-hero activities anymore, Soarin and I silently agreed on the copycat not being her problem.”
>He nods, and so do you.
“Okay.”
>Sunset was barely at a need-to-know basis, and if she casts herself out of the live even less so.
“You think she will keep her word?”
>“Nope.”
>“Definitively not.”
>BonBon shook her head vigorously, and moves on to ramble on.
>“She is known to show impulsive behavior, and-”
“Soarin, what do you think we should do if she continues?”
>He furrows his eyebrows and taps with his fingers.
>Just like he always does when he’s thinking.
>Seeing this quirk now just makes you want to flinch.
>“We offered her to join us on a few occasions, and she always wiggled herself out of giving an answer, and now said no. She needs a show of force, if she does decide to go out.
>“She has to start living with the consequences of her actions. Hmm... And Sparkle should be on the team to apprehend her. Best way to make Sunset see reason.”
>You have had the same idea, but were now less inclined to do it.
“BonBon?”
>She shrugs.
>“Soarin has a point, but I don’t think Ms. Sparkle is field-ready.”
>Twilight Sparkle isn’t even supposed to be a field agent.
>Then again, neither is Time Turner.
>“It’s not like it will come to a fight. Sparkle and I will only talk to her.”
“No.”
>You shake your head.
“You’re going to heal from your injuries. Sparkle will go with Misty Dew.”
>“Misty doesn’t know about the situation properly...”
“That’s the point. She brings a fresh perspective and is someone who wouldn’t have an emotional bond to stop herself if it does come to a show of force. Plus you wouldn’t be able to catch up to her if it comes to a chase. Twilight can fly with her boots and Misty-”
>>27403112
just realized i had to check the name first, It's Misty Fly, not Dew
>>27403112
>“She’s just as brash as Sunset. Misty herself could be the one to think why she should follow rules.”
“Soarin, I made my decision.”
>“I just think Misty wouldn’t be a good fit...”
“No, This is about you Soarin. You’re trying to get out. But as we still don’t know what’s going on with you, you’ll be on the bench.
>He frowns.
>“So I am under house arrest?”
“That’s the way it’s gotta be.”
>BonBon looks awkwardly between you two, then Soarin shrugs.
>“Sure, why not? If anyone needs me, I’ll be watching some Oprah reruns.”
“You’re pissed, we got it. But there are some creatures out there who can take your form.”
>“I’ll put some positive energy out into the universe, wait and see what comes back.”
>He’s walking backwards out of the door while having his arms raised into the air theatrically.
“You’re taking that very personal.”
>“Oh, I wonder why...”
>He sighs.
>There’s no will to fight left in him, at least not with you.
>You can’t imagine what he’s going through, but you all have your burdens to bear.
>Yours just include the burdens of everyone under you.
>>27403129
>When you look up again it BonBon was still there.
>For a second you wished you could just dismiss her, but there were still things to deal with.
>“The captured ‘changeling’ claims to be the real Soarin.”
>You nod, you know that already.
>“And this one-”
>She nods to the door.
>“-has done something to him to change his appearance, and killed the other ‘changeling’ for some reason. For ‘their queen’.”
>You rub your temples, and stall your answer.
“Imagine you’re a ‘changeling queen’ with foot soldiers who can take anyone's form, and you have enough of them to dispose of one... No...”
>...
“No... They could have probably switched him without us noticing. What they did give us was one at least one live one, one dead one, and the real Soarin back. Or we have two live ones, and Soarin is imprisoned somewhere.”
>“Maybe... things didn’t go as planned?”
“Never count on your opponent making a mistake...”
>You turn your attention to your computer screen again and summon your web browser with the news.
“A very public place... They make the public doubt they can trust us anymore. And it makes us distrust our own agents. Not just Soarin.”
>Your counter move was to pretend to trust this Soarin.
>There is no good move to make right now.
>You need more information.
>>27403135
moar later-ish or tomorrow
scene isnt over
>>27403029
oh hey, we're update buddies
the dazzlings live on the street?
Do I feel Anon taking them in (Gwen Stacy style) comming along to create more drama with Sunset?
>>27403249
Yeah, i guess we are.
And I haven't decided if they're homeless or living in the slums.
But yes more drama for Sunset real soon.
>>27403249
Also like the drama that building in your story
>>27403352
you guys are gonna hate me for what I'm about to do next
>>27403630
name'd
>>27403630
What?
>>27403811
lean in closer
>>27403818
Yeah
>>27403864Hail Hydra
>>27403869GOD FUCKING DAMMIT! GETS ME EVERY TIME!
>>27403869
Damn you, you got me
>>27403630
I meant within the course of the story
>>27404719
Can’t be that bad.
>page 9
We gettin lazy
>>27405598
I'm working on the next bit ok. Besides it gets slow sometimes
By the way what sounds better.
Anon helping them with everything or just their powers?
>>27406105
Everything. His family seems like the type that have raised him well. They've all likely been through some shit it seems, and they're better for it.
>>27403002
>You look at them as they introduce themselves.
“So you girls a musical group or just a hero group?”
>Aria huffs as she sits on the ground.
> “Sure why not.”
>Well that’s helpful.
>Glancing at Adagio, you see her sigh and shrug.
> “We can sing and tried to enter a singing contest, but we lost.”
>....That's pretty straight forward.
“So you girls tried to win this contest to win money and get off the streets?”
>The girls shake their heads and laugh tiredly as Sonata waved at you.
> “Nah, we just have a rundown one room apartment. We want the money and to get recognized for our talent to get a better place.”
>The others just sit against the wall, not caring that their hair was touching the ground.
> “Our place doesn't have much in it and we try to get jobs to pay for the stuff we want.”
>You nod, not knowing what else to do when you begin to wonder something.
“What about that guy who was chasing you?”
>They sigh as Aria raised her head to look at you.
> “You mean that prick Sombra. Long story short we tried using our singing talents or our powers to bring in as much money as possible.”
>You wonder what their powers are as Aria continues talking.
> “Anyways he saw what we could do and wanted us for himself, to be his own sirens. You can guess what happens next.”
“You say no and he tries to strong arm you into an agreement.”
>You heard of those kind of guys who would do everything in their power to get what they want.
>Adagio smiles sadly at you and pulls Sonata and Aria into a hug.
> “That and he followed us almost everywhere we went. He even knows where we live.”
>They look down as you try to think on what to do.
>This really isn't something that involves you, so you shouldn't even bother to help them.
>>27406878
>You were inside your apartment with your new ‘friends’ and family.
>After telling your mother of what happened.
>The whole thing.
>Anyways it took a little longer to get home as you tried to pry Sonata off of you.
>Adagio and Aria were no help with they're constant snickering.
>You arrived home to see your mom with some food for the girls.
>They thank her for the food and eat it as you talk to your mother.
>She told you that dad said it was ok and that you did good.
>Now you’re just taking all of your mom’s old clothes to them.
>You knock on the guest room door.
“Hey open up. I got some clean clothes for you.”
>The door opens to reveal a wet but smirking Adagio in a towel.
> “Oh Anon. You’re a lifesaver.”
>You roll your eyes at her as you walk in the room.
“It’s just clothes, Adagio.”
>She shakes her head and walks towards the bed.
> “Clothes are part of a girl’s life, Anon. Never forget that.”
“Whatever you say Adagio. Anyways do you or the others need anything?”
>She puts a finger to her lips as she swings her left leg over her right.
> “I don’t think so.”
>You sigh and begin to walk out the door.
> “Anon.”
>You stop and turn around to see her smiling.
> “I have to ask you something. Why?”
>You’re confused at her question.
> “Why’re you helping us? This wasn’t your problem, so why did you help us?”
“I was reminded of a story, when i saw you three.”
>She smiles sadly as she looks through some of the clothes.
> “For what it’s worth, thanks.”
>You smile at her as you slowly close the door.
“Don’t mention it.”
>You close the door as you walk into your room.
>>27407492
That's all. This part was a little weak but I'm gonna try to a better part tomorrow, as Sunset meets a rival or does she?
>>27371277
[banjos start playing]
>>27407551
IN THE CHILL OF NIGHT
LIKE A STREAK OF LIGHT
SHE ARRIVES JUST IN TIME
(Web Warriors arrive)
(This starts playing)
http://youtu.be/TsskkT3HJwU
>>27407492
>anon takes them in.
called it
>>27408117
Now they need showers too
>>27408138
No shower scene but Dazzlings teasing Anon may happen
>>27407522
Bretty good for a little part. Did they come from another dimension or what? That would make from good green I think.
>mfw page 9
>>27408304
Everyone is a regular human. Well you know what I mean.
>>27406878
>“So you girls a musical group or just a hero group?”
>>Aria huffs as she sits on the ground.
>> “Sure why not.”
>"A or B?"
>"Yes"
So, uh, I was wrong.
No greens today. Or this weekend, prolly. Cause work.
I'm bad at the keeping promises thing.
>>27410905
It’s not a big deal, me and untitled7 or anyone else will keep this place going.
I'm thinking about the Dazzlings and the Power Ponies have a history together. What should it be?
>>27409094
>mfw we're down to two writers
>>27411419
trep, super and I just have to work all that much harder now, don't we?
my internship is over, finally. I have no positive remarks.
boss even went as far as to say I should search in another field if I didn't like it with them.
Fuck that guy.
Stellaris - Last played: Monday
My friday night is secured.
>>27411534
Your right and that sucks.
>>27411204
Well, you've already mentioned a singing contest, though it can be something separate from the Battle of the Bands entirely. Maybe the BotB never happened and there happened to be some singing contest in the city where the Dazzlings were accused by Humane 7 for cheating because Twilight detected there were odd forces at work? No evidence was found to support their claims but the judges or whatever decided to "dismiss" the Dazzlings from the contest because they felt something was up (their siren magic) and just wanted to be safe. Why would they trust dirty, and no doubt smelly, girls who have no family or non-family to vouch for them over the group of girls who actually have family and non-family besides each other? That's one route.
>>27412417
I like the idea. Now should the Power Ponies and Spider-Woman know about their superpowers and what they do or not?
Had the idea that Adagio knows at least Spider-Woman's identity but doesn't say anything out of same and amusement.
>>27412557
Could be interesting.
>>27412557
Spider-Woman's identity being known bu Dagi sounds like fun. If she were aware of the Power Ponies superpowers and talents (like the Spider Sense), however, I think she would refrain from entering the contest to conceal their abilities. The Humane 7 would probably "invite" them to SHIELD or offer their friendship. Whether the Dazzlings would be up for it is my question. Probably a question of how risky the 3 think it would be. But they're still in a dumpy apartment by the time Anon comes into play. There's still a lot of room to work with here.
>>27412709
Just spit balling ideas. Who knows maybe the Dazzlings just become Anon’s friends with Adagio causing some trouble
>>27412753
How about Sunset finds out about Anon's powers, but only the video power. She would think Anon is Angel and not Specturm.
>>27412753
The most simple ideas can be the best. You do you.
>>27412808
She could analyze footage on the internet that someone took of the wingmen fighting the guys at the mall.
>>27412808
>>27412923
Oh Sunset will find out. That was planned.
And I think I'll stay with the Dazzlings being Anon’s friends/sisters
>>27413665
Ok, looking forward to it.
>>27414234
The Sunset thing happens later though
>>27414861
Like I said, I'm looking forward to it (regardless of how far in the future).
>>27407492
>Be Sunset.
>It’s been crazy since your date with Anon.
>You and your friends were patrolling to find Spectrum and some new guy called Angel.
>A few reports were made of a white glowing man with blue wings helping people and even a small child.
>The kid was even on a news report and drew a picture of the angel in question.
>It was adorable.
>Anyways you’re heading to school for another fun filled day.
>Joy.
“At least I’ll have nothing to worry about.”
>You continue on your way to school when you see Anon with some people.
>You wave your hand as you jog over to him but slow down when you see who he's with.
>Anon was talking with the Dazzlings.
>Why was he hanging with them?
> “All I’m saying is that ….Oh hey Sunny.”
>You weakly wave at him at you stare at the Dazzlings.
“Hey Anon, um if you don’t mind me asking when did you start hanging out with the Dazzlings?”
>He opens his mouth when Adagio puts a hand over it.
> “What’s it to you, Sunset?”
>You’re starting to get angry.
“Is it wrong to ask my boyfriend a question?”
>Adagio raise an eyebrow at that.
> “If you must know, Anon here let into his home when he found us on the streets.”
>You look at the other two as they look away sadly.
> “We had a run in with a vicious man when Anon offered us a warm meal and bed.”
>Wow now you feel like an ass.
>Adagio then wraps her arms around him and rubs head against his.
> “He was such a gentleman. You have good tastes, Sunset.”
>Now you’re angry.
>That should be you not this bitch.
>Before you could say anything, the warning bell rings.
>Anon stands up as he makes his way to you.
>He kisses the top of your head and then walks inside.
> “I’ll talk to you later Sunny.”
>You smile as you wave.
Hey is Pastebin down? I can't connect to it
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>You can hear the girls snicker at you.
>You turn and glare at them.
“Alright what’s your game?”
>They look confused as Adagio gasps dramatically.
> “Why Sunset, whatever do you mean?”
“I mean why are you mooching off my boyfriend and his family!”
>Adagio sighs as she turns towards Aria and Sonata.
> “You two go. I need to talk to Sunset alone.”
>The both of them nod as they walk inside.
>Sonata waves at you cheerfully as you half-heartedly wave back.
>Out of the three, you like Sonata the most.
>Turning back to Adagio she begins to talk.
> “Sunset. I wasn’t lying when I said Anon found us on the street.”
>You just stand there and listen to her.
> “We had a man after us, then Anon found us. I don’t want to think of what would happen if he didn’t offer us a place to sleep.”
>Hearing that makes you feel sorry for her.
> “I know you don’t like or trust me but I wouldn’t lie about something like this.”
>You want to call her a liar, a manipulative bitch or anything else to that matter.
>But she wouldn’t lie about her sister’s safety.
“I believe you.”
>She looks a bit surprised at that.
“But I don’t trust you.”
>She smirks at you as she begins to walk forward.
> “Oh, afraid I’ll steal him from under your nose?”
>Glare at her with so much hatred.
“You wouldn’t dare.”
>She circles around you, still smirking.
> “Oh I wouldn’t dream of it, but if he were to seduce me ….Well that’s a different story.”
>She walks inside the school leaving you alone outside.
“I really hate her.”
I need help. Pastebin is down for me, is it down for anyone else? Also I'll make more tomorrow. Tell me what you think so far
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>>27416082
Pastebin works for me
>>27416242
Not for me
>>27416266
I know :^)
>>27416297
Wish I knew what was going on so I can update my pastebin
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Change ram chip
