Great Power Edition
>Previously on Alan Wake
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27144245/#q27144245
"Hey everyone"
This is the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spiderwoman.
All greens, art, and any other superhero/mlp discussions are welcome.
>Excelsior!
Pastebin list:
superkeaton
http://pastebin.com/i6kMKCnN
untitled 7
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
Roommate Annon
Http://pastebin.com/crUhxGks
Beans
Http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red
Http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
FemAnon
Http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Treppahcs
Http://pastebin.com/Aabr5wQC
Shocker Anon
http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/WIkH3V3wUiM
I bet you never seen this before.
Also yay new thread!
>>27189451
it's a weird sense of pride to see my name on a list of writefags
I'll try not to disappoint
>>27189507
Best of luck.
>>27189507
You're doing Josh Keaton proud
>>27189451
To the people who still kinda care about my green, I'll be gone for a while longer. I think I need a break from this story for a while.
Also, whoever said Spidey 2099 was the best Spider-man was 100%right
>>27189568
nononononononononono
You don't just get to come back, then instantly runoff.
Where the hell you been?
And why the hell you taking a break?
>>27189581
I made enough drama about it last thread. If you want to know more, look back on that.
Sorry. Doesn't mean I'm not writing green though, just not this moment.
>>27189568
You have got to be kidding me!
>>27189597
You weren't even here to cause drama.
Besides, drama is good, keeps up the comic bookey thing we've got going here.
Also
>AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHH
>>27189546
that ALSO gives me a weird sense of pride!
I'm not entirely sure he'd appreciate it or not!
...
I just realized the connection between my handle and his name...
>>27189568
Ah, it's fine, Beans
Everyone needs some time to recharge their batteries, right?
[/spoiler] bestest Spidey[/spoiler]
>>27189621
I always thought you did that name on purpose
>>27189597
OK. Fine, just come back soon.
And when you get back, a little less dram would be good.
>>27189648
>a little less dram would be good
I'll keep that in mind. Made my mistakes, but I'm learning from them.
>>27189648
P.S Can you post anything at all, don't like in the middle of a chase scene.
>>27189635
I honestly didn't....
Still, I suppose it's a convenient coincidence, no?
>>27189694
You spend your time living on the edge?
Fighting crime, spinning webs?
Whatever happened to the drawfriend?
>>27189722
What happened to FemAnon?
>>27189722
Drawing Sand-maud...I hope.
>>27189726
what happened to Roommate Anon's pastebin?
so many unanswered questions...
>>27189616
>>27189568
>>27189597
Oh wonderful, the attention whore returns.
Didn't burn enough of the last threads replies pretending to be incapacitated?
>>27189747
I have an answer for that one.
Roommate Anon said he didn't like where the story was going. He basically gave up
>>27189755
People complained about him starting "drama"
But you're starting drama by trying to pick a fight
>>27189762
oh, well, that's fair then.
>>27189762
Soooo, pussyed out like a bitch.
Roommate Anon CCTV footage
http://youtu.be/nL8hVXSDmNM
>>27189747
My bin is here:
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
/somebody/ keeps posting the old link that I nuked while trying to write with a shit-ton of morphine in my system.
>>27189809
I laughed too hard at this. Both here, and in the theatre when I saw it for the first time.
>>27189822
An even better answer!
>>27189822
When will you be back, we need you!
>Meanwhile, at Spider-bloke's flat
http://youtu.be/aRhze-CEdcU
>>27189762
I have a small update for spider-shim in the pipeline, and it'll be the last for a while so I can fix the story up so it's at a level where I feel like I can post it without it being such a clunky mess.
In the meantime though I'm working on an "Applejack as The Batmare" story to remedy the lack of DC support.
>>27189913
god bless Spiderman 2
that movie's amazing
>>27189451
>>27189944
Imagine it:
Jonah Jameson fighting crime in a spider suit while smoking a cigar.
I'd watch that movie
>>27189954
And he would still complain about spiderman
>>27189966
It's the perfect ironic secret identity.
The guy who bashes Spiderman turns out to BE spiderman
>>27189954
>>27189966
Superior Editor-In-Chief?
>>27189945
Why does twilight look like a fat Dora the explorer?
>>27189978
The perfect cover!
>>27189988
havent watched dora the explorer
is she like a magical girl?
>>27190010
In a way. She's always traveling to far away places with her talking monkey, her talking map, and her talking backpack.
She's also always trying to avoid getting raped by a talking fox dressed like a burglar
Out to dinner atm, might try and throw out Issue 4, if I can manage it.
Also, question, would you prefer if I posted things as, well, posts, or do you not mind my just posting the pastebin pages?
>>27190047
No transformation sequence tho
>>27189993
Clearly we have a mastermind among us.
Gonna have a short update later. I'm trying to figure out were to go with Sunset's and Anon’s talk
>>27190056hand-holding
>>27190205
And I thought I had some messed up fetishes
>>27190232rough, desperate hand-holding
and Sunset didn't paint her fingernails
>>27190252
I prefer rough, un consensual, belly rubs
>>27190355
.... I know now what I must write.
>>27190252
>>27190205
There will be some hand holding.
>>27190195
Gonna try to have a treesome sort of thing happen later, if possible
>>27190361
The best part is the broken look on their faces after I boop them.
They know they can never have their bellies un-rubbed, or their noses un-booped.
>>27190386
Who's in the threesome?
>>27190431
If I had to guess, I'd say
Anon, Sunset, and Dash, because there is a looooot of sexual tension there
>>27190431
Anon and Sunset but I'm thinking of who the last person would be
>>27190454
Do Dash.
It's obvious that she wants it
>>27190464
Some good old fashioned angry/hate sex
>>27190464
Fone, maybe I'll have more happen
>>27190487
>Fone
>>27190501
I meant fine
>>27190504
sure you did
continued from last thread
>You follow Sunset to an empty classroom as you sit on a desk.
>Sunset does the same as she looks everywhere but at you.
>You sit there in silence for a bit.
“So what did you want, Sunny?”
>She mumbles something you didn’t hear.
“What did you say?”
>She sighed and said, “I want to talk about our meeting a few weeks ago.”
>What’s she talking about?
>The last time you and her met was on a building as she…… oh.
>She’s talking about that make out session.
>You feel your face heat up a bit.
“Don’t worry about it.”
>She looks surprised as she said, “But I took-”
“Look, let's forget about it ok. I really don't want to talk about it.”
>Sunset looks relieved and said, “Ok.”
>The both of you sit in silence once again but you decide to break it.
“I'll say one thing though, that was the best kiss I've had.”
>Her face goes red and she yelled, “AAANNNOOONNNN!!!”
>She stands up and tries to hit you but you grab her hands.
>She tries to free her hands as she struggles a bit.
>After a while she stops as she leans into your chest.
>She seems content to just laying on you saying, “You're a jerk, Anon.”
>You chuckle lightly as you let go her hands and wrap your arms around her.
“Yeah yeah, just like old times huh?”
>She wraps her arms around you and nods into the crook of your neck.
>The both of you stay like this for a while when you notice the time.
“4:30 already? Guess we better get going.”
>You let go of Sunset but she keeps on hugging you.
>>27191067
that's the good shit
>>27191067
“C’mon Sunny, we need to go.”
>She mumbles, “Don’t wanna.”
>You sigh at her childish attitude.
>You bring your hands to her sides and start to tickle her.
“You let go and I’ll stop.”
>She tries not to laugh but soon she starts to giggle.
>Soon her giggles evolve in full blown laughter.
>She tries to say, “Ok, Anon. Just stop,” in between laughs.
>You grin as you stop.
“I told you to let me go, but nooooo you wanted to cuddle.”
>Sunset huffs and said, “I don’t cuddle. I just hug for a long time, ok.”
>You roll your eyes but smile.
“Anyways let’s get going.”
>You reach out and gently grab her hand.
“I’ll walk you home if you want.”
>She blushes but nods her head.
All I have for now.
>>27182451
>>27191067
>>27191373
Hell yeah, you've done it again trepp.
still writing issue 4
god my brains working slow tonight
>Shocker hasn't written anything in a while
I'm worried
>>27192212
probably finishing my work tomorrow
fuck, so sleepy
hope this thread survivors the morning
>>27192212
You could use a littte less tripfaging while not posting greens
>>27192704
that's fair, I don't know why I throw it on so often.
Just tired, I guess.
>>27192797
Much appreciated
First time actually checking this thread out.
Is this thread made for mlp characters crossed with strictly Marvel/DC characters and their respective super powers, or is it mlp characters in any kind of environment, but with any kind of superpowers?Has anyone done something like pic related yet?
>>27193000
Actually, yes.
Check out treppahcs
>>27193024
Looks like this could be a cool thread to follow. I'll check more out when it isn't so late for me.
In case I feel like writing green in the future, just to clarify, does it have to be Marvel or DC, or can it just be a "you are Anon and you have super powers" type story or something? Writing something like this has been a fun idea that I've had for a while, but had never seen an opportunity to put into action before.
>>27193217
I can't speak for everyone, but Marvel would be best but we'll take most anything, I think
>>27193217
#dowhatyougottado
I wait for you Shocker-anon, so we can get back to the lewd adventures of
Spider-shim
Shocker-non
And Trixie-Mysterio
Still alive, still thinking up the "conclusion" of Shocker meeting the CMC. On my cell, so I can't exactly work on it right now, plus now I've got work in the morning, so expect updates even later.
Hey hey, sorry all. Been hectic, but enough of my life, on to the arts. I'm still working on Electro-dust and Doc Octavia.
So in the mean time, I present the next member of the Sinister six, Sand-maud!
See if you can spot her minion ^^
>>27194817
This is perfect and Bolder in a mask is awesome
>>27194817
Pretty good, man! Loving bolders mask.
>>27191373
>It doesn’t take long to reach Sunset’s house.
>Her home’s only a couple of blocks away from yours.
>Sunset’s home is a simple two story white house.
“It’s been awhile since I’ve been here.”
>Sunset quietly said, “Yeah, I still remember when you use to help me with my homework.”
>You nod remembering the times you helped her.
“Yeah, well anyways I’ll see ya.”
>You began to walk away when you hear Sunset say, “Do you want to come inside for a bit?”
>You stop and debate on what to do.
>You could go home and just watch TV or you could hang out with Sunset at her house doing who knows what.
>.....Ok.
>Stop thinking of that brain.
“Sure, why not.”
>You turn around and see Sunset with a huge smile on her face.
> “C’mon in and make yourself at home.”
>She opens the door as the both of you enter her house.
>As you enter her living room you take off your shoes.
>Sunset said, “What to watch a movie?”
“Sure, what do you have?”
>A quick movie before heading home sounds good.
>You feel someone tap your head as you sleep as you groan.
>Opening your eyes you see a man with pale blue hair and a woman with Sunset’s hair above you.
“Hi, Mrs. Shimmer and Mr. Moonlight.”
>You yawn a bit.
>They grin as Mrs. Shimmer said, “It’s nice to see you, Anon. But you mind doing that in Sunset’s room.”
>You’re confused but they point down.
>You look down and see Sunset sleeping peacefully against you.
>And your left hand’s on her ass.
>Great, now you’re blushing
>Mr. Moonlight laughs at you and said, “Anonymous Rowe Incognito, you better treat Sunset right or else.”
>>27194876
aw, cute!
Alrighty, this one took.... much faster than anticipated. I hope you all enjoy Electro-Dust!
>>27195084
oh wow, she looks amazing!
>>27194876
>You quickly remove your hand from her ass as she starts to stir.
>Sunset mumbles, “My pillow…..stay here.”
>Her mom giggles as she said, “This is so adorable. I need a picture of this.”
>You blush even more and hope Sunset wakes up soon.
>Mr. Moonlight said, “Don’t bother honey.”
>You sigh knowing that he’s not gonna hold this over you.
> “I already got several pictures.”
>Scratch that, you curse this man to the bottom of hell itself.
>You start to shake Sunset to wake her up.
“Sunny, it’s time to get up.”
>She snuggles closer to you and said, “Don’t wanna.”
>You shake her a little more.
“Sunny, your parents are here.”
>Her eyes open and looks at her parents and asked, “When did you get home?”
>Mrs. Shimmer said, “Long enough. Had a nice nap with Anon?”
>Sunset looks down, confused until she sees you.
>Now she’s sporting the same blush as you.
>The both of you didn’t say anything.
>Mr. Moonlight asked, “Sunny-bunny, do you mind helping me with dinner?”
>Sunset got up and said, “Dad!! Don’t call me that.”
>They enter the kitchen, leaving you and Mrs. Shimmer in the living room.
>She asked, “Would you like to stay for dinner?”
“I really should be going.”
> “But I insist.”
>You can see where Sunset got her stubbornness from.
“Fine.”
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as the Spider
>As you are walking through the school halls blindly bypassing everyone around, are contemplating a way to get into the Oscorp expo
>Sadly, time is running out since the expo is tomorrow
>You could just sneak in
>The vents are an option
>Open windows
>Maybe through a backdoor somewhere
>Still, once you get in, what will you be looking for?
>Suspicious people doing suspicious things?
>Carrying around crates of high-tech equipment
>What else could people be doing in an expo?
>What are the chances than an arms deal might go on then?
>It will be filled with people
>Heavy workers carrying around bulking machinery
>During the day
>Actually that might be something that could work
>No one would pay them any attention
>But how will you proceed?
>Jump out and web them up?
>Or take them down, one by one, from the shadows
>Still
>You have to be ready for nothing of the sorts to take place
>You might just have to pin a scientist and ask them if they've seen something fishy
>You'll get to that later
>Right now you still have to think of a way to get in
>>27195209
>As you are walking through the halls, something catches your eye
>Two jocks bullying a nerd
>The same nerd from about a week ago
>And the same jocks
>Figures
>You could tie their feet together
>But
>You just walk up to them
>They are passing each other some papers the kid was carrying
>You just catch the papers mid-air
>"Hey, hey! What's the big idea?"
"Leave him alone"
>"Pff... wha?"
>You grab the guy by the collar of his shirt
>You are not in the mood
"Get lost or I'll make you get lost"
>The guy just stares at you
>You throw him aside
>He quickly regains his composure
>"Yeah, well, we were done anyway."
>He waves his partner to come with him
>Still shocked, he runs to him
"Little Norman can't save his own hide. Got to make his girlfriend protect him"
>They both laugh as they climb up the stairs
>You turn towards "Norman"
>Small stature
>Looks weak
>Glasses
>Braces
>Tucked in shirt
>Typical bully victim
>You give him his hand to help him get up
"You alright?"
>"Yeah...thanks"
>He gets up and you help him gather his belongings
>Among them you find a pamphlet on the expo
>What are the chances that he might be going?
"Hey...umm...Norman. Will you be going to this expo?"
>"Will I ever! It's one of my most anticipated days of the year! They'll be showing all their stuff their. Their findings on teleportation, first signs of alien life, bio-mechanized suits..."
"Yeah, yeah, yeah...butt do you happen to have another ticket? I kind of want to go too..."
>He frowns a bit
>He searches his wallet
>"Well...I was planning to scalp it..."
>You'll pretend that you didn't hear that
>"But since you helped me out a bit here...I can give it to you for free"
>He takes out a ticket
>And gives it to you
>"All in the name of progress! The motto of Oscorp!"
>Yeah
>Sure
>>27195214
"How are you feeling today?"
>The hospital room is quiet
>There are sounds of beeping machines
>Liquids dripping through tubes
>You can smell the sterility in the room
>It's almost toxic
"Today I helped a guy who was being bullied. Reminded me of you. Except for the fashion sense"
>You laugh a bit to yourself
>The ambience uninterrupted
"He gave me a ticket to the expo. I've got a hunch I'm gonna find the culprits there. They will be brought to justice"
>
>
>
"You know, this could have been all avoided if you could have just told me who was tormenting you."
>Or maybe if you were a better friend
>Or you were faster
"...we should have been watching movies now..."
>
>
>
"I'll be going. I'll see you later, ok?"
>It's like you expected an answer
>>27195225
>>27195225
I have a green where Anon is more or less the Reverse-Flash and goes back in time with "hilarious" hijinks. It's much more lighthearted but it was also my first green
I could post it if people are interested
>>27195349
was it the one were he basically makes Twilight how se id today?
>>27195359
Yes actually
I don't remember posting it here
>>27195374
It was posted here but I think it was the 2nd thread
>>27195388
huh...dont remember doing that
still
8 threads ago
i dont think ive been so active on a general since the green requests threads
not so much on /bat/
anyway
should i or shouldnt i repost it?
>>27195410
Go for it. I'm just waiting for someone to find what I did in my green for today.
>>27195410
sure, why not?
>>27195225
Hospitals just get me every time.
>You are Anon
>The green speedster
>Through the use of black magic and soft science you've achieved transhumanal speed
>And like your uncle always said
>"Anon, with great power comes great responsibility"
>To fuck with people's lives!
>After which he'd let you smoke because he was a cool uncle
>And with your speed and your knowledge of shit-tier sci-fi, you decide to travel back in time using your super speed (even though chronomancy is well documented and there are guides in the royal library) for the ultimate fuckage
>Reshaping a pony in your twisted vision
>>27195635
>As you travel through hyper space you think about which pony pissed you off the most
>And it hit you
>The purple one
>She has been the plight of your life in Ponyville
>She and that stupid ban list
>You'll get her
>She will pay!
>You speed off
>Hoping you are going in the right direction
>>27195640
>You end up ramming into Celestia when you arrive
>You knock her off her hooves just in time for a laser beam to nearly miss the both of you
>The year is one thousand years before you began your journey
>This is the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon
>Although you'd love to stay and watch, you have a life to ruin
>And you can return any time you want
>You dash off and on your way towards Hyperspace, you pass by a fine looking green lad, with an outstanding suit, watching the battle
>He doesn't pay you much attention
>You are off!
>You end up on a roof of a house
>By sheer willpower and luck you managed to stop before you fall
>You hear voices and duck
>You see a grayish mare and a little purple filly, rolling on the ground and crying
>"Twilight Sparkle!"
>Bingo
>"You cease this at once!" the gray mare yelled
>"I WANT CHOCOLATE MILK!"
>"You will get nothing of the sorts! Don't you know what happens to little fillies who don't listen to their parents? They get taken by the Boggiehorse!"
>The Boggiehorse? Sounds like the perfect plan
>You don't stay to hear the rest of the conversation. You had those when you were younger - the parent will yell at you, and you'd cry, and they'd give up and give you what you want
>Good times
>You go to town and find a few supplies that a Boggiehorse might carry around
>Bags
>Lantern
>Chains
>After which you decide to kill some time until night falls by jacking off right behind ponies in their houses and running off before they notice you
>It's not so much the jacking off, but rather the thrill that they don't know that you are there
>>27195648
>It's night
>By now you have visited about 20 houses and you have fashioned yourself a costume
>Time to engage the plan
>You break into Twilight's house and you put on your Booggiehorse costume
>A couple of bags sown together, nothing big
>You get your chains ready and you light up your lantern
>You rattle your chains in front of Twilight's door
>"Who...who's there?"
>Perfect, she's awake
>You slowly open the door and enter
>The light from your lantern barely illuminates your figure, let alone the room
>"I am the Booggiehorse, Twilight. I have come to take you away in my bag and whip you with my chains!"
>"NO!"
>"You have been a bad little filly, you must be punished!"
>"NO! PLEASE DON'T! I SWEAR I WON'T DO ANYTHING BAD EVER AGAIN!"
>You hear the hoofsteps behind you and in a flash of black and green, you are gone
>This will be a fun adventure
>>27195655
>You are in a school cafeteria
>It's taco day
>You see Twilight talking with her friends
>She seems pretty popular
>That's absurd
>You are going to fix this
>Using your super speed, you enter the kitchen
>You start devouring tacos
>One, two, three, four, five
>Breaking the laws of physics can leave a guy hungry
>Ten, eleven, twelve
>Your stomach starts roaring
>It's time
>You quickly duck behind Twilight Sparkle
>"...and that is why we all have to...."
>...
>Ten seconds of uninterrupted farting
>The smell is horrid
>You are pretty sure you ripped your pants
>After the bombardment stops
>Everybody starts laughing at Twilight
>She's about to cry
>Oh God, this is perfect
>You speed out to hyperspace
>Along the way you change your pants
>>27195666
>You arrive
>You look around
>It looks like a teenager's room
>Messy bed
>Clothes thrown all around
>Pregnancy test
>Hello!
>Looks like our dear friend Twilight has gotten herself into a bit of trouble
>And you know just what to do
>You speed out with a cup in your hand, looking for a pregnant peeing mare
>Lucky for you, today is free Parasprite day in the maternity ward in the local hospital
>You go into one of the bathrooms, jump into a toilet and wait
>Like some sort 16th century ninja
>It doesn't take long for someone to come in and get on your toilet
>Let's just hope they need to do a number one, instead of number 2
>Several number 2s later, a quick shower and a change of suits, you have it!
>You get back to Twilight's house and you change up the urine test
>You hide under the bed and wait
>"NOOOOOOO!"
>Yes!
>Your work is done, you have taken your revenge
>Time to head back home to brag
>>27195666
dem trips!
>>27195674
>You are Twilight Sparkle
>Stick in the mud extraordinar
>You are currently in the process of rereading a dictionary
>Because
>Let's face it
>You are just that dull
>"Poetic Justice - Poetic justice is a literary device in which virtue is ultim..."
>There was a flash of green and black and all of your papers went flying in the air
>You see Anon
>That bastard!
>He thinks he's so cool with his suit and green skin, and funny sense of humor, and general charm, and the cute way he staggers some times
>You'll show him
>You are going to make him follow so much rules that he will have to love you
>You mean, he will have to become a productive member of society
"Anon, what are you doing here?"
>"Twilight, have you ever thought that every bad thing that has happened to you was orchestrated by one person?"
"What?"
>"IT WAS ME TWILIGHT! IT WAS ME ALL ALONG!"
"What?"
>"REMEMBER THAT TIME YOU WANTED CHOCOLATE MILK AND YOUR MOTHER TOLD YOU ABOUT THE BOOGGIEHORSE? THAT WAS ME! I WAS THE BOOGGIEHORSE! I BROKE INTO YOUR HOUSE TO SCARE YOU"
"What?!"
>"And remember that time you were in school, and it was tacoday. You were having so much fun with your friends and suddenly there was a fart and everybody laughed at you. IT WAS ME, TWILIGHT! I WAS THE ONE WHO FARTED! AND THE TIME YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE PREGNANT? IT WAS ME!!! I STOLE SOME PREGNANT PISS FROM THE HOSPITAL AND SWITCHED IT WITH YOURS!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA"
"Why?! Why would you do all of these things?!"
>"Why? I'll tell you why. Because you are always such a bitch. Always making me follow rules and principles and checklists that have to get checked 3 times. I was tired of that! It was time to have my revenge"
"Wait. You had your revenge for me making you follow rules by travelling back in time and doing those things to me?"
>"Yes Twilight! What is so hard to understand?"
"Those things were the things that shaped me into the pony I am today..."
>"what?"
>>27195689
"Yes. I learned to always follow the rules, I became socially awkward and I always made checklists of things that had to be done"
>"Wait....that means"
"It means that you created that which you despised the most, Anon. Me"
>"I...uh..."
>Be Anon
>Be a thousand years ago
>Watching the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon
>Not as epic as you had hoped
>As you are munching down on popcorn,, you notice a green douchebag in a suit zapping right past you
>You could have stopped him
>But in the end, he is the one that ruined your life
>Let him ruin his life as well
Duh Ent
>>27195684
Cheers!
>>27195705
yeah, you totally did post this in one of the first threads. Or someone did at least.
Doesn't make it any less humorous though.
>>27194817
>>27195084
You are fucking basedLewds when?
>>27195846
Hopefully soon
>>27187496
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>Which means there are at least 811 other Earths out there.
>You know only of the one where everyone is a pony. The one where Sunset is from.
>The others... you have no idea.
>The only information you, and Dr. Noteworthy and Dr. Time Turner have was about some beings who had been around and called this dimension by the number 712.
>Yes, that Dr. Time Turner a.k.a. Dr. Whooves of the Wonderbolts, eccentric philanthropic millionaire in iron suit.
>It’s really a gold-titanium alloy, as he entrusted you with.
>He taught you all kinds of advanced technologies not yet in any papers available for students in your field.
>Not that Dr. Noteworthy wasn't a genius in his own right, but he didn’t have the charisma of Time Turner~
>You may or may not have a crush on the man a decade older than you.
>Which is part of the reason you barely go to college anymore and work full-time at the Wonderbolt base in Fillydelphia.
>Anyway, you’re Twilight Sparkle.
>>27196387
>And Spitfire just informed you that your best friend Sunset Shimmer refused to join the Wonderbolts, refused to have the same internship you have, and quit being Spider-Woman.
>You had been looking forward to working together with Sunset.
>While you can wield a bit of magic through techwear, you lack the understanding of it that Sunset had.
>All the breakthroughs which could be achieved with Sunsets knowledge...
>She’s the only natural user of equestrian magic in Earth-812 which is known.
>Everyone else had to have been in contact with the otherworldly artifact called the “Element of Magic”
>Drain something of it’s residue in this world into their own body, like yourself.
>The Wonderbolts are very wary of Equestrian magic...
>They know it turned you into a demon-esque being, but everyone involved decided to never mention the same thing happening to Sunny as well...
>Sunny...
>She needs her friends.
>But you can’t tell her you work for the Wonderbolts.
>And you were not sure what made them go to Sunny right this moment.
>You DO know there had been an incident last night involving her as Spider-Woman, but not what kind.
>One that would make her give up being a super hero?
>You sigh as you continue to calibrate your gauntlet.
>It’s fingertips emit a familiar purple aura.
>No, Sunny will continue to be Spider-Woman.
>She just needs some time, and then maybe the two of you can have a team-up.
>>27196396
>Be Anon.
>Sunset was in incredible shape.
>But you could have guessed that from her lean figure and super-heroic activities.
>You were in good shape yourself, but the pace she jogs at forces you to be at your best.
>Your metabolism is still trying to heal you... you should have eaten more breakfast.
>Just before you arrive at Peezzer’s you hear a phone ring.
>Wait- Is that ringtone...?
>Sunset picks her phone up before you could have coherently formed a thought.
>“Hey Twilight.”
>Twilight.
>“Well, yeah, somewhat important. But I can’t discuss it right now. kinda busy.”
>You shouldn’t be listening in and trying to guess what Twilight was saying.
>“I’m with a friend right now. – Funny thing actually, he went to Crystal Prep with you.”
>God damnit.
>“Anon, Anon West. He says he knows you. – Oh... – Mhm... – Okay...”
>What the heck is Twilight saying to her?
>“I guess so, when do you have time? – Mhm... no, that works for me. – So, see you... huh? – Yeah, sure... I’ll... I’ll tell him.”
>She looks at you with a weird expression while doing so.
>“Bye.”
>She hangs up and pockets the phone.
“You could... at least...”
>You gulp.
“...pretend to be... out of breath.”
>She has held a normal conversation while jogging at that speed.
>Running, more like it.
>“Oh... “
“You’re in... god damn good shape.”
>“Sorry, I didn’t notice... I just assumed my usual jogging pace.”
“Well, I call it running.”
>She looks back to the way you already made through the park.
>“You want to go slower?”
“No, I won’t manage jogging now. Uff... Continue running.”
>“If you say so...”
>“And Twilight wanted me to say hi to you from her.”
“Okay..?”
>You don’t exactly know how to feel about that.
>>27196404
>>27196396
The plot thickens
>>27196387
>>Yes, that Dr. Time Turner a.k.a. Dr. Whooves of the Wonderbolts, eccentric philanthropic millionaire in iron suit.
>>27196396
>>you continue to calibrate your gauntlet.
>>It’s fingertips emit a familiar purple aura.
>>maybe the two of you can have a team-up.
If Time Turner is Tony Stark, and Twilight works under him on a magical gauntlet...
Does that mean she gets a magical iron man suit?
Seriously >>27196519 the plot thickens
But don't get our dicks hard and not follow through, okay?
>>27196730
War Marechine?
>>27197030
you should be ashamed of yourself for that pun, but I guess real perverts don't feel shame
and no, not war machine, I'm trying to establish part of my own world and not copying too much.
>>27196730
Time turner/Dr. Whooves is my equivalent to Tony Stark/Iron Man
with Noteworthy undefined, but the wits of Bruce Banner
I want that duo for exposition purposes.
Noteworthy is not the Hulk though (a figure I personally never liked)
while I'm at it:
I planned Spitfire as an Nick Fury's counterpart
and Soarin as Captain America
yet maybe I give one of them Johnny Storms powers
so far only thing fixed about Soarin is that he's strong, and that Spitfire's in a leading position.
>But don't get our dicks hard and not follow through, okay?
I have no idea.
I know I have a somewhat story I want to tell (at least partially) but if I'm able to make something complete?
dunno
>>27197195
Soarin could be like Luke Cage, maybe.
I dunno.
And no, I won't feel bad about that pun.
>>27195225
Rest in nap time, Normie
>>27197572
Reee in peace
>>27197675
Meme in peaces
>Agent Ward is taking over this thread
What do?
>>27197770
>What do?get banned for roleplaying
>>27197804hail hydra
>>27197817
>>27197770
I keep on not caring about AoS
>tfw you have a spider stuck in your neck
I guess i should have asked before, would people like lewds of the sinister six as well?
>>27198016
ABSOLUTELY
>>27198016
>>27198016
Yes but what would you do? New pose or basically the same pic but naked?
>>27198016
Do it. Do it you wonderful artist. Draw sinister snatches, villainous vaginas, and heinousHIPS.
My god.
The possibilities with hips are endless! Endless, I tell you! Endless!
>>27198074
http://youtu.be/bPBKIhm1Gs4
Im still waiting to see if Octavia tentacle rapes anon
>>27198074
My hips want's to know if you will post soon.
>>27198107
Spider-Bloke
You are my meme lord
Pick your team:
Team Cap stats-
Captain America-Super Soldier. First Avenger. One of the greatest heroes who's ever lived.
Hawkeye-Bored Green Arrow. Shield Agent.
Falcon-The black guy.
Scarlet Witch-Newest girl avenger. Can bring Vision to his knees.
Bucky-Cap's best friend. The Winter soldier. Hydra assassin with metal arm.
Ant-Man-Comic relief. Trained by Hank Pym. Surprisingly badass. Made Falcon look like an idiot.
-
Team Iron Man stats-
Iron Man-Lighthearted Batman. Can be serious. Billionaire, playboy, philanthropist. Unlimited supply of resources and suits. Basically James Bond without the suit.
Black Widow-Shield's best agent. Managed to tame Hulk. Pewpew bang bang.
War Machine-Black iron man. Probably gonna die.
Black Panther-Super African prince. Badass suit, super speed, bullet proof suit, big claws.
Vision-...(I don't know much about him)
Spider-man-Arguably the greatest marvel hero. Has Parker luck. Super strength. Wall crawling action. Pew pew webs pew pew. Extremely agile. Has taken on some of the biggest marvel villains. Believes that great power, comes with great responsibility.
Whose side are you on?
I'm with Team Cap
>>27198250
>Spiderman later defected to caps side
>>27198250
Team Cap, because he never got people murdered by making a fucking Deathbot with daddy issues.
Cap fought Nazis. Tony ain't fought no got damn Nazis.
>>27198297
Hell yeah.
Let's just hope he doesn't get asssssassinated to death...
Femanon please come back
>>27198309
if he gets killed, it'd better mean Red Skull is back
Yeah, sure, the indistinct beam used for space travel TOTALLY killed one of the most notorious men who ever lived.
Right.
>>27198115
Not for a while, family. I have other stories I do months in advance.
>>27198322
THIS
>>27198250
The answer is obviouslymother fuckin' hips, nigga
Beans acting like everything's all well and good besides being MIA for God knows how long
>>27198344
Dem hips doh
>>27198322
He might have gotten banned like a lot of other writefags
>>27198438
This t b h
>>27198344
Amurica hips?
No homo
Is Spidey taller than Wolverine?
>>27198552
He's a (not so) big guy
Is Gilda the equivalent of Wolverine? I need to be sure for reasons.
>>27198590
Gilda would be Vulture
>>27198344
I got a question. In an earlier thread, you said that Anon in your story knows how to defend himself.
If so, why does he let Flash push him around?
>>27198609
That's fair, I guess.
New Cgi-man footage. He puts that spider strength to work.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3KNEbWSirg
>>27198675
Man I'm excited for CW.
It'll be nice to have a solid, clear interpretation of that storyline
>>27198627
I said Anon knew Krav maga when he was very young, but primarily forgotten it. He knows tai chi, though, but he can only block and swipe people out of his way for running, never attacking. He can dodge, jump, and misdirect, but other than that he's fucking helpless.
You see, he does Tai Chi for the meditation, the breathing, the relaxation, but he does not focus on the fighting moves. What also doesn't help is he has no teacher. He just got interested in it when he was young, and only has a few books to go by and maybe youtube videos. His stance, form, position, and all that are not corrected by a teacher because he has no one teaching him, just the reference.
>>27198746
Anon as Iron Fist when?
>>27198746
Didn't Dadpool ever think that maybe he should teach Anon some Kung fu mercenary stuff to defend himself?
>>27198805
I doubt it.
DP strikes me as the kind of guy who'd try to keep his kid as far away from actual fighting as much as he could be bothered to.
After all, if you're functionally immortal, you don't want that kind of shit on your conscience if something bad happens to your kid because you taught them that.
>>27198842
Beans said that Dadpool was pre-healing ability Wade
>>27198857
Oh well fuck me, then.
Still, maybe the same kind of logic apploes? Bad guys wanting good kids isn't wildly uncommon in fiction.
>>27198871
*applies
Jesus fuck, and you people let me write smut for you.
>>27198871
>>27198842
And with Anon getting kidnapped/nearly raped by a bunch of super baddies lately, it would probably help him out if he knew how to do this
http://youtu.be/AiibN8EmIxE
>>27198899
fair
>>27195225
>Oscorp
>The epicenter of scientific break troughs in the continent
>Everything from medicine to quantum physics
>What we thought of the distant future is just one step away
>All in the name of progress
>At least that's what the banner said outside
>You aren't sure where progress comes when they are selling weapons to children
>In any case, the building is enormous
>And packed with people
>Mostly college students, going around taking pictures and notes
>Even the staff seems to be missing
>Or you just can't see them
>No security
>No lecturers
>It's going to be real hard to locate an arms dealer here
>You can't just go around snooping
>You've got to act with tact and stealth
>Maybe...
>...your spider sense can help you
>It picks up bad guys when it wants to
>You could try and make it pick up bad guys
>It's worth a shot
>You close your eyes
>And you try to isolate all the noise around you
>You concentrate
>You focus your intentions
>Time is slowing down
>You begin to feel something
>Something off
>You open your eyes
>The feeling is still there
>You walk towards the direction this feeling is radiating from
>You reach a wall
>But you can sense something behind it
>You look around
>There are no doors
>But there are sure to be ventilation shafts
>You look around
>You see a sign that says "restroom"
>>27199258
>You go to the restroom and look around
>Bingo
>Ventilation shafts
>Big enough for you to crawl in
>You enter one of the stalls and change in your costume
>You jump on the ceeling, open the shaft and crawl in
>Turns out its a maze here
>But you follow your spider sense
>Twists
>Turns
>Left
>Right
>Finally you arrive
>This is it
>You gently open the cover
>You can hear a couple of people talking
>"Pleasure doing business with you, Mr. Systevich"
>"Like-wise, Lowell. I need to be going. Some kids wanna buy themselves a few of our toys tonight."
>"Oh, I'm sure"
>This is it
>This is the deal
>You can't miss this opportunity
>You jump out
"Everybody hold it!"
>There are 4 people
>1 guy wearing a labcoat
>And 3 brawny fellas
>One of them has a couple of tubes underneath his arm
>Did...
>Did you fuck up again?
>"Rhino! Now!"
>What?
>Your spider sense tingles
>You turn around and
>You fly across the room
>>27198250
Team Cap
Picture absolutely related.If only I could be a citizen of glorious America.
>>27199271
>And you land on a few computers
>"We figured we might have some company. Good thing we brought an extra bit of security"
>Your entire body hurts
>It's like you were hit by a truck
>You look up and see something charging towards you
>You quickly jump out of the way
>But you weren't quick enough
>You get grabbed by a giant hand and go through the wall with it
>You can barely tell whats going on
>You feel yourself lifted high above the ground
>You look down
>It looks like a giant man-rhino
>"So you're that Spider everybody keeps talking about? Pff...You don't seem so tough"
>You get thrown across a large room
>Glass breaks on your back
>It cuts deep into your skin
>There's a sudden sensation of a cold liquid enveloping your body
>You hit some sort of vat
>Your muscles tense up
>"Come on, bug! I ain't got all day"
>Your spider sense is going crazy
>But you can barely move
>The pain combined with the cold liquid has you petrified
>You can also swear you can feel something sticking to your skin
>Crawling even
>This is it
>The big one
>You tense up
>Hold your ground
>And you are swept away
>You pass through another wall
>You get thrown again
>You hear people screaming
>You are probably in the middle of the convention
>You've gotta move
>You try to stand up but you fall
>Your limbs feel numb
>Your ribs hurt as hell
>Was this your run?
>A run filled with disappointment and guilt
>Well
>It could have been worse
>
>
>No it couldn't
>You were a joke
>But you can fix it
>You just have to escape somehow
>You try to get up one more time
>And you get picked up
>"This one's for the winning point"
>You get thrown
>The longest throw for now
>You feel a door break on your back
>There's a crash
>Darkness
>>27199271
<We can do it
<We will fix everything
<No need to worry
<Just wake up
<Wake up
>"Wake up"
"Whu...?"
>"Are you alright?"
>You open your eyes
>It's the commissioner
"Wh...what happened?"
>"You got in a fight. Witnesses say there was a rhinoceros going throw walls here"
"They are right"
>You try to stand up
>The commissioner helps you
>"Easy. You are badly hurt. It's a miracle you survived."
>You look around
>You are in the restroom
>Just you and the commissioner
"I've got to stop them"
>You make a few steps and fall
>This time Wordon catches you
>"You are in no condition to do anything. Just tell me what happened"
"The...there was a deal. But they didn't have weapons. Just tubes. I don't know. Someone said something about kids and toys...it's a blur..."
>"Tubes? They could be schematics. What was that about the toys"
"I think...I think they will be making a deal tonight"
>Gordon takes off his trenchcoat and covers you with it
>"Thank you. I will drive you home."
"I can go home myself."
>"Not in your condition"
>You definitely get up
>You prove yourself wrong
>He catches you one more time
>This time he takes you in his arms
>"You should take off that mask. No need to be drawing attention. Either way it's almost completely ripped off."
>You grab your face
>You can feel your skin
"I-I..."
>"Don't worry. I won't tell anybody."
>He he walks out of the bathroom, carrying you
>He gets to his car and puts you in the front seat
>He sits in the driver's seat and tosses you something
>"Painkillers. They'll help out. Just tell me where you live, before you take them"
>>27199294
>It feels like you've been driving for hours
>Everything just meshes up together through the window
>You could swear that you had fallen asleep at least 3 times
>Maybe it was more
>You don't want to think about it
>The car stops
>The driver's door opens
>In a moment yours does as well
>Wordon takes you again
>It's raining
>You hear a door unlock
>"Home sweet home, huh kid?"
>He leaves you on your couch
>"Check with me tomorrow, alright?"
"al-alright"
>The door closes
>You drift off
>>27199310
<There will be no pain anymore
<No guilt
<No sorrow
<No pain
<Just accept us
<We will make everything better
<We are your friend, Sunset
>You wake up
>You've never felt better
>It's like yesterday never even happened
>Except something is wrong
>You are in warehouse
>Surrounded by what seems to be angry, armed youth
>You've got guns pointed at you from all sides
>One of them fires
>You dodge, web his feet and pull him towards you
>Another one fires
>You jump and throw the first shooter at him
>Third one has an automatic riffle
>You can't dodge mid air
>You aim towards him and
>He's knocked out
>A tentacle retracts in your sleeve
>You fall on the ground
>Two more come at you
>One has a knife
>The other a pipe
>The first one tries to slash you, but you catch his hand
>You headbutt him unconscious
>The second one swings with his bat
>The bat breaks in your shoulder
>He drops the handle
>You squint your eyes
>He starts running
>You web his feet and pull him towards you
>You web him to the ground
>You do the same with the rest
>You look up
>There's a hole in the roof
>You web yourself to it and jump out
>It's night
>You notice your gloves have white rectangles on them
>And your sleeves are black
>You jump to the ground and check yourself in a puddle
>You are wearing a black jacket with a hood, instead of your usual red sweatshirt
>The spider one your chest is white and more angular
>Even your sneakers are black
>What happened last night?
Pic by Sentel
>>27199323
aw yis
love how Sunset keeps getting btfo
>>27199294
Kinda fucked up the post quotes on that one
Hope it doesn't bugger it up too much
Have some more venomshim, darlings
based off that Todd McFarlane cover
you know the one
>>27199514
you're a fucking gift from god, Sentel
>>27199416
Not bad. Wonder what's gonna happen to Anon? No really what will happen, do people in that situation ever get better?
>>27199530
anything can happen with comics
cyberbrain, healing serum, nanobots, all sorts of crap
>>27199530
>>27199549
I'm thinking of giving him the same role Bruce had in the 90s Spider-man cartoon
>>27199559
>>27199549
No i really mean it. Can someone actually get better from that? I meant literally getting shot nut surviving
>>27199575
there is a chance but its far more likely theyll be a burden after that to live a normal life
>>27199575
Meant to put "and" were nut is
>>27199323
Hmmm, I think we've found our cure for Anon's headache
>>27199602
the human body is remarkably resilient
survivors of head trauma brought about by bullet wounds are not uncommon
and I wasn't joking about the superscience stuff.
people sometimes just refuse to die in comics, no matter how "realistic" their wounds.
>>27199636
>>27199575
of course, there IS a difference between "surviving" and "living a normal life"
>>27199636
Especially if they happen to, get their hands in a symbiote
*wink wink*
*nudge*
>>27199654
Sooo...you are saying...thaaaaat...Sunset should fall into a bloodrage and eat Anon?
>>27199667
no. no she should not.
>>27199667
That is an option.
But I was thinking more like, giving him venom
>>27199682
>>27199688
Let's eat people!
>>27199722
I like cannibalism as much as the next guy, but...
>>27199744
>>27198071
I would do new poses. Hate to just give an edit when i could do more. Might start working on the other heroes as well
>>27199762
Hi. You're Red, right?
I'm Negan.
>>27199774
>I might start working on the other heroes as well
I have a request for you, but asking it would spoil my own green.
>>27199799
>Juicy
>>27199774
Can make a suggestion, when you do these lewds make them like a pin up. Maybe have them still have something on them like Trixie's cape
>>27195144
>Be Spider-Woman.
>It’s been a few days since Anon had dinner with you and your parents.
>It was nice having him over but your parents kept on trying to set the two of you up for a date.
>You’re glad he had to leave.
>Not that you didn’t enjoy his company.
>He just need to get home before it got to late.
>Anyways you’re on patrol right now with Radiance, Zapp and Anon.
>He refused to be called Zeus and said he would think of a better name.
>Zapp’s a little miffed with working along side Anon but Radiance is willing to at least.
>Anon looked around as he said, “So, why am I here?”
>You sigh at the obvious question.
“Celestia wants us to show you how we do things.”
>Zapp gets up in his face and said, “And this is your training, newbie.”
>Anon then said, “Am I still a newbie when I've beaten you two times already?”
>You and Radiance giggle at Anon dissing Zapp.
>Radiance giggled and said, “While seeing Anon put Zapp in her place is amusing.”
> “Hey.”
>Radiance continued, “We really should get started on our patrol.”
>Everyone nodded as they left in their own ways.
>Zapp flew into the sky, Radiance created a platform for her and Anon while you began to web swing.
>It didn’t take long to find some local gang members robbing a store.
>Everyone lands on a small building near the store.
>Anon looks at you and said, “So now we beat them, right?”
“Yeah, but I'll deal with them myself.”
>Zapp whined, “You always get to beat up gang members.”
>Radiance said, “You like to show off too much.”
>You jump down and land on a lamp post.
“Hey boys, late night shopping?”
>They look at you as you shoot webs at their hands and feet.
>They fell to the ground in a tangled mess.
>You turn around as your friends land on the ground.
“That’s all there is to it.”
>Anon raises his hand as lightning coats it and fires a bolt at you.
hi red made me do this don't kill me :D
>>27199893
What the what
>>27199799
No big. If you ever want to let ne know feel free to email me or something. Same name at gmail. I have a tumblr as well for gallery usage
>>27199950
Its Venomshim eating Anon
>>27200048
I know what it is
>>27200100Venomshimmer as a trap, sexually bullying Anon
yis
yis pls
>>27199888
>The bolt flies past you as you hear a small thud.
>You turn around and see a thug on the ground, knocked out.
>Anon said, “You missed one,” as you turn back to your friends.
“Thanks.”
>Anon nods and said, “Whatever. So we leave them here or what?”
“Yeah but we need to tie the other guy up.”
> “I got it.”
>Anon walks over to the downed guy and……….searches his pockets?
>He pulls out the hugs wallet and opens it.
>Radiance, outraged, said, “We don’t steal from criminals.”
>Anon sounds surprised as he said, “Really?”
>Even Zapp is angry as she yelled, “Yeah, we don’t stoop to their level.”
>Anon just shrugs as he put the wallet back and said, “He had nothing anyways.”
>Anon then put his hand on the guy’s chest as he creates a rope around the thug.
>Anon turned to everyone and asked, “So we done here?”
>You sigh at his blunt question.
>He really needs to take this seriously.
“Yes, we’re done here.”
>Anon said, “The sooner we’re done, the sooner I can get out of this stupid getup.”
>Radiance said, “Oh, I could make you a better outfit, darling.”
>Anon replied, “You’re crazy if you think I’m gonna be a dress up doll for a day.”
>>27200046
I just emailed you, friendo.
Almost done with Issue #4
It's more cutes than anything else. Just Sunset and Anon becoming friends.
>>27200394
http://pastebin.com/fAifi2eh
There we go
like I said, not much action, mostly character stuff
>>27200426
so, ah, any thoughts?
>>27200555
Good filler. I like How it more or less show's how Anon and Sunset interact without any rogues around.
>>27200589
It'll pick back up.
I'll be addressing Anon's Last Name, Flash's jealousy, and what exactly happened to his more... intimate notebook.
Probably not all in one issue, mind you, but they'll happen.
>>27200555
>>27200783
Cool issue. I liked it. Are we going to see more of Anon's /sup/ thread?
>>27200929
Absolutely!
>>27199323
"This power...it feels...good!"
http://youtu.be/nKnXfQV8S94
>>27201133
>Theme Of Dancing
>>27200333
What a killing joke
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SnTSqgJPVl8
>>27199888
Nice trips.
I've decided to give each writer a theme song for their story.
>Beans
http://youtu.be/JofmaI4X4Sk
>superkeaton
http://youtu.be/h2ASUOtvHBU
>treppahcs
http://youtu.be/p3l5KeIdr7A
>Red
http://youtu.be/jpLKwwcvvlE
>Shocker Anon
http://youtu.be/07GTOMMdRsc
>>27202110
Wha made you choose the songs?
>>27202110
>Everybody Loves Raymond as my theme song
I'm okay with this.
Also, pretty much passed out after work, so I didn't work on my story. Hopefully, I'll do so tomorrow.
>>27202110
What about untitled 7 & Roommate Anon?
>>27202110
Not all that surprised and one of my favorites.
What should Anon's new outfit and name be?
>>27198675
Spiderman sounds a bit too young but I'll give it a fair shake.
Though at this point watching the marvel movies and netflix shows feel like an obligation.
>>27202110
>gets best theme song
Aw yis
>>27200187
Nice
taking a break from writing today
will lurk in thread
So
Are we gonna make a spiderverse event with all the spiderhims or what?
>>27203719
I don't think that'll work unless some of us use different Spider-Man/Womans. Like Noir or 2099.
Unless we have Sunset in different outfits it could work.
>>27199575
Well there is Wenseslao Moguel AKA El Fusilado. He survived a firing squad, got shot 9 times and a final one to the head.
>>27202598
nobody cares about me
I'm not even part of "each writer"
>>27203719
>A Sunset who went from Earth to Equeestria, fighting crime as the ponified Spider-Mare
>A Sunset from a future where the Dazzlings won, armed and armored by a distant relative/lookalike of Twilight Sparkle, becoming the techno-magical Spider-Woman 3099
>A Sunset who has no powers, instead using poisons and terror tactics against the grimy criminal elements as The Spider
>A Sunset from the Evil Alternate Equestria, who fled from tyrant Celestia's rule and uses the pure power of the Alicorn Amulet to transform into Magical Girl Spider Princess, battling the monstrous invading forces of the evil Equestrian Horde with magic and friendship
>An older Sunset Shimmer who's long graduated college, seen it all, and is just there to make sure her idiot friends don't get hurt in their own bids to fight crime
>>27203957
Might as well drink the old bleach now
>>27203974
why life? whywrite?
>>27203957
I Enjoy your story more than the others
>>27203957
I still like it and I'm interested in were you go with it
>>27196404
>Healing factor includes better stamina, or rather you recharge faster after, and even during physical exertion.
>Which can be interpreted as better stamina.
>You’re wandering a path of just enough work out to stay fit but stuff you don’t get hurt at.
>You can’t be discovered having a healing factor.
>Or rather, you can’t have people look into why you have one.
>You’re way too close to Sunset, and she’s way too close to the Wonderbolts.
>Which means you’re way too close to the people you were taught to stay away from.
>Yet here you are, being the copycat of a superhero, getting blown up and then having pizza with her.
>Why did you decide to do this again?
>You watch a drop of sweat run down her neck which she quickly wipes away.
>She then decides to fan her t-shirt to get some air flowing.
>Real life has some fine jiggly-physics.
>Don’t stare!
>Suddenly your prosciutto-fungi was really interesting.
>Oh look, it has ham AND mushrooms on it.
>Fascinating!
>And so tasty!
>“So, err... your cheat sheet to human courtship... Did you forget I would have some effect on you too?”
>She noticed you staring.
“Uhmm... yeah, well... What I did not expect was that instead of a nice jog we’d go running.”
>“So, how does it differ? Talk all psychological too me.”
>>27204806
“Let’s see... you know how in action movies couples get together for apparently stupid reasons?”
>She frowns.
>“Yeah...?”
“Because usually the respired together, and sprayed their pheromones on the other. It’s a more carnal, physical one bonding there. Besides looking out for one another to not get eaten by a saber tooth kitten or something. As humans we /do/ bond like that.”
>She’s playing with her straw, and you can’t help but watch as she licks her lips and takes it into her mouth to take a gulp.
“We ahh... we’d like to pretend we are logical creatures, but we’re not. We rely on instinct and our gut feeling. Couples stay together because of their personality, but they come together because of hormones, the olfactory system... besides visual attraction, I mean.”
>“And? Do you?”
>She asks with a smile after finishing her drink.
“Do I? ‘Do I’ what?”
>“Do you find me visually attractive?”
>You have to take a sip of your own drink before answering.
“You’re not a girl who constantly needs to be told she’s pretty. I believe I already told you so in Sombra’s lecture, did I not?”
>“Yes, that’s true~”
>Her tone is idle as she let’s the last sound ring out. Keeping her mouth just a moment too long in that position.
>The position of a mouth awaiting a kiss.
>She looks off for second, before returning her attention to you, her mouth a smile again.
>...
>She doesn’t really want a kiss, does she?
I have more, but I'm blackmailing you for a theme before I post it
>>27204813
You rotten bastard!
Fine, here!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUtziaZlDeE
>>27204977
That'll do pig, that'll do
Let it be known that I'm a man of my word
>>27204813
>You readjust yourself in your seat as if preparing to lean forward to her.
>Her eyes widen ever so slightly, if only for a moment
>No, she’s scared.
>Scared of her own feelings you so carefully manipulated–
>Oh, who are you kidding? This never worked before.
>This is not supposed to work.
“As, uhh... scientists, I believe we have to collect more date before we can come to a conclusive result.”
>You look off, as does Sunset.
>“Yes, I... no. That’s probably the best course of actions.”
>Nerd talk for ‘Fucking hell, we know each other for half a day, let’s take it slower.”
>The two of you nod awkwardly.
>...
>You continue with your pizza.
>As does she.
>You don’t know what to do next in kindling this relationship.
>As in dating sims and advertisement you continuously have to expose an object of desire to your target audience.
>But don’t run it into the ground.
>Don’t be a Minion-movie.
>Doesn’t matter how cute they were initially.
>Anyone with a mind of their own should be sick of them by now.
>“Awkward silence now, huh?”
“Yeah, well... We just talked in code about taking it slow, which still means we entered a deeper relationship beyond friendship.”
>>27205032
cute nerds in love
>>27198250
>Has Parker luck
´What is this Parker Luck you speak of?
>>27202110
>mirror's edge
I don't know anything bout this but the music's good. Do you really think it fits my green, though?
>>27205246
the best luck
hey, you know what ever so slightly fixes One More Day?
is if it was MJ who had been shot, not Aunt May
>>27202162
The voices
>>27205525
If it doesn't, I have a backup song
>>27205558
Oh no, I love it. Just want to know your interpretation of the story and it's tone.
>>27189913
My god what a dork he is sometimes
>>27205032
this is adorable
Anon seems almost too cool about it
he should be freaking out more
