Spider-Shim and her Amazing friends! Issue #10
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>Previously on Alan Wake
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27144245/#q27144245
"Hey everyone"
This is the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spiderwoman.
All greens, art, and any other superhero/mlp discussions are welcome.
>Excelsior!
Pastebin list:
superkeaton
http://pastebin.com/i6kMKCnN
untitled 7
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
Roommate Annon
Http://pastebin.com/crUhxGks
Beans
Http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red
Http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
FemAnon
Http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Treppahcs
Http://pastebin.com/Aabr5wQC
Shocker Anon
http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/WIkH3V3wUiM
I bet you never seen this before.
Also yay new thread!
>>27189451
it's a weird sense of pride to see my name on a list of writefags
I'll try not to disappoint
>>27189507
Best of luck.
>>27189507
You're doing Josh Keaton proud
>>27189451
To the people who still kinda care about my green, I'll be gone for a while longer. I think I need a break from this story for a while.
Also, whoever said Spidey 2099 was the best Spider-man was 100%right
>>27189568
nononononononononono
You don't just get to come back, then instantly runoff.
Where the hell you been?
And why the hell you taking a break?
>>27189581
I made enough drama about it last thread. If you want to know more, look back on that.
Sorry. Doesn't mean I'm not writing green though, just not this moment.
>>27189568
You have got to be kidding me!
>>27189597
You weren't even here to cause drama.
Besides, drama is good, keeps up the comic bookey thing we've got going here.
Also
>AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHH
>>27189546
that ALSO gives me a weird sense of pride!
I'm not entirely sure he'd appreciate it or not!
...
I just realized the connection between my handle and his name...
>>27189568
Ah, it's fine, Beans
Everyone needs some time to recharge their batteries, right?
[/spoiler] bestest Spidey[/spoiler]
>>27189621
I always thought you did that name on purpose
>>27189597
OK. Fine, just come back soon.
And when you get back, a little less dram would be good.
>>27189648
>a little less dram would be good
I'll keep that in mind. Made my mistakes, but I'm learning from them.
>>27189648
P.S Can you post anything at all, don't like in the middle of a chase scene.
>>27189635
I honestly didn't....
Still, I suppose it's a convenient coincidence, no?
>>27189694
You spend your time living on the edge?
Fighting crime, spinning webs?
Whatever happened to the drawfriend?
>>27189722
What happened to FemAnon?
>>27189722
Drawing Sand-maud...I hope.
>>27189726
what happened to Roommate Anon's pastebin?
so many unanswered questions...
>>27189616
>>27189568
>>27189597
Oh wonderful, the attention whore returns.
Didn't burn enough of the last threads replies pretending to be incapacitated?
>>27189747
I have an answer for that one.
Roommate Anon said he didn't like where the story was going. He basically gave up
>>27189755
People complained about him starting "drama"
But you're starting drama by trying to pick a fight
>>27189762
oh, well, that's fair then.
>>27189762
Soooo, pussyed out like a bitch.
Roommate Anon CCTV footage
http://youtu.be/nL8hVXSDmNM
>>27189747
My bin is here:
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
/somebody/ keeps posting the old link that I nuked while trying to write with a shit-ton of morphine in my system.
>>27189809
I laughed too hard at this. Both here, and in the theatre when I saw it for the first time.
>>27189822
An even better answer!
>>27189822
When will you be back, we need you!
>Meanwhile, at Spider-bloke's flat
http://youtu.be/aRhze-CEdcU
>>27189762
I have a small update for spider-shim in the pipeline, and it'll be the last for a while so I can fix the story up so it's at a level where I feel like I can post it without it being such a clunky mess.
In the meantime though I'm working on an "Applejack as The Batmare" story to remedy the lack of DC support.
>>27189913
god bless Spiderman 2
that movie's amazing
>>27189451
>>27189944
Imagine it:
Jonah Jameson fighting crime in a spider suit while smoking a cigar.
I'd watch that movie
>>27189954
And he would still complain about spiderman
>>27189966
It's the perfect ironic secret identity.
The guy who bashes Spiderman turns out to BE spiderman
>>27189954
>>27189966
Superior Editor-In-Chief?
>>27189945
Why does twilight look like a fat Dora the explorer?
>>27189978
The perfect cover!
>>27189988
havent watched dora the explorer
is she like a magical girl?
>>27190010
In a way. She's always traveling to far away places with her talking monkey, her talking map, and her talking backpack.
She's also always trying to avoid getting raped by a talking fox dressed like a burglar
Out to dinner atm, might try and throw out Issue 4, if I can manage it.
Also, question, would you prefer if I posted things as, well, posts, or do you not mind my just posting the pastebin pages?
>>27190047
No transformation sequence tho
>>27189993
Clearly we have a mastermind among us.
Gonna have a short update later. I'm trying to figure out were to go with Sunset's and Anon’s talk
>>27190056hand-holding
>>27190205
And I thought I had some messed up fetishes
>>27190232rough, desperate hand-holding
and Sunset didn't paint her fingernails
>>27190252
I prefer rough, un consensual, belly rubs
>>27190355
.... I know now what I must write.
>>27190252
>>27190205
There will be some hand holding.
>>27190195
Gonna try to have a treesome sort of thing happen later, if possible
>>27190361
The best part is the broken look on their faces after I boop them.
They know they can never have their bellies un-rubbed, or their noses un-booped.
>>27190386
Who's in the threesome?
>>27190431
If I had to guess, I'd say
Anon, Sunset, and Dash, because there is a looooot of sexual tension there
>>27190431
Anon and Sunset but I'm thinking of who the last person would be
>>27190454
Do Dash.
It's obvious that she wants it
>>27190464
Some good old fashioned angry/hate sex
>>27190464
Fone, maybe I'll have more happen
>>27190487
>Fone
>>27190501
I meant fine
>>27190504
sure you did
continued from last thread
>You follow Sunset to an empty classroom as you sit on a desk.
>Sunset does the same as she looks everywhere but at you.
>You sit there in silence for a bit.
“So what did you want, Sunny?”
>She mumbles something you didn’t hear.
“What did you say?”
>She sighed and said, “I want to talk about our meeting a few weeks ago.”
>What’s she talking about?
>The last time you and her met was on a building as she…… oh.
>She’s talking about that make out session.
>You feel your face heat up a bit.
“Don’t worry about it.”
>She looks surprised as she said, “But I took-”
“Look, let's forget about it ok. I really don't want to talk about it.”
>Sunset looks relieved and said, “Ok.”
>The both of you sit in silence once again but you decide to break it.
“I'll say one thing though, that was the best kiss I've had.”
>Her face goes red and she yelled, “AAANNNOOONNNN!!!”
>She stands up and tries to hit you but you grab her hands.
>She tries to free her hands as she struggles a bit.
>After a while she stops as she leans into your chest.
>She seems content to just laying on you saying, “You're a jerk, Anon.”
>You chuckle lightly as you let go her hands and wrap your arms around her.
“Yeah yeah, just like old times huh?”
>She wraps her arms around you and nods into the crook of your neck.
>The both of you stay like this for a while when you notice the time.
“4:30 already? Guess we better get going.”
>You let go of Sunset but she keeps on hugging you.
>>27191067
that's the good shit
>>27191067
“C’mon Sunny, we need to go.”
>She mumbles, “Don’t wanna.”
>You sigh at her childish attitude.
>You bring your hands to her sides and start to tickle her.
“You let go and I’ll stop.”
>She tries not to laugh but soon she starts to giggle.
>Soon her giggles evolve in full blown laughter.
>She tries to say, “Ok, Anon. Just stop,” in between laughs.
>You grin as you stop.
“I told you to let me go, but nooooo you wanted to cuddle.”
>Sunset huffs and said, “I don’t cuddle. I just hug for a long time, ok.”
>You roll your eyes but smile.
“Anyways let’s get going.”
>You reach out and gently grab her hand.
“I’ll walk you home if you want.”
>She blushes but nods her head.
All I have for now.
>>27182451
>>27191067
>>27191373
Hell yeah, you've done it again trepp.
still writing issue 4
god my brains working slow tonight
>Shocker hasn't written anything in a while
I'm worried
>>27192212
probably finishing my work tomorrow
fuck, so sleepy
hope this thread survivors the morning
>>27192212
You could use a littte less tripfaging while not posting greens
>>27192704
that's fair, I don't know why I throw it on so often.
Just tired, I guess.
>>27192797
Much appreciated
First time actually checking this thread out.
Is this thread made for mlp characters crossed with strictly Marvel/DC characters and their respective super powers, or is it mlp characters in any kind of environment, but with any kind of superpowers?Has anyone done something like pic related yet?
>>27193000
Actually, yes.
Check out treppahcs
>>27193024
Looks like this could be a cool thread to follow. I'll check more out when it isn't so late for me.
In case I feel like writing green in the future, just to clarify, does it have to be Marvel or DC, or can it just be a "you are Anon and you have super powers" type story or something? Writing something like this has been a fun idea that I've had for a while, but had never seen an opportunity to put into action before.
>>27193217
I can't speak for everyone, but Marvel would be best but we'll take most anything, I think
>>27193217
#dowhatyougottado
I wait for you Shocker-anon, so we can get back to the lewd adventures of
Spider-shim
Shocker-non
And Trixie-Mysterio
Still alive, still thinking up the "conclusion" of Shocker meeting the CMC. On my cell, so I can't exactly work on it right now, plus now I've got work in the morning, so expect updates even later.
Hey hey, sorry all. Been hectic, but enough of my life, on to the arts. I'm still working on Electro-dust and Doc Octavia.
So in the mean time, I present the next member of the Sinister six, Sand-maud!
See if you can spot her minion ^^
>>27194817
This is perfect and Bolder in a mask is awesome
>>27194817
Pretty good, man! Loving bolders mask.
>>27191373
>It doesn’t take long to reach Sunset’s house.
>Her home’s only a couple of blocks away from yours.
>Sunset’s home is a simple two story white house.
“It’s been awhile since I’ve been here.”
>Sunset quietly said, “Yeah, I still remember when you use to help me with my homework.”
>You nod remembering the times you helped her.
“Yeah, well anyways I’ll see ya.”
>You began to walk away when you hear Sunset say, “Do you want to come inside for a bit?”
>You stop and debate on what to do.
>You could go home and just watch TV or you could hang out with Sunset at her house doing who knows what.
>.....Ok.
>Stop thinking of that brain.
“Sure, why not.”
>You turn around and see Sunset with a huge smile on her face.
> “C’mon in and make yourself at home.”
>She opens the door as the both of you enter her house.
>As you enter her living room you take off your shoes.
>Sunset said, “What to watch a movie?”
“Sure, what do you have?”
>A quick movie before heading home sounds good.
>You feel someone tap your head as you sleep as you groan.
>Opening your eyes you see a man with pale blue hair and a woman with Sunset’s hair above you.
“Hi, Mrs. Shimmer and Mr. Moonlight.”
>You yawn a bit.
>They grin as Mrs. Shimmer said, “It’s nice to see you, Anon. But you mind doing that in Sunset’s room.”
>You’re confused but they point down.
>You look down and see Sunset sleeping peacefully against you.
>And your left hand’s on her ass.
>Great, now you’re blushing
>Mr. Moonlight laughs at you and said, “Anonymous Rowe Incognito, you better treat Sunset right or else.”
>>27194876
aw, cute!
Alrighty, this one took.... much faster than anticipated. I hope you all enjoy Electro-Dust!
>>27195084
oh wow, she looks amazing!
>>27194876
>You quickly remove your hand from her ass as she starts to stir.
>Sunset mumbles, “My pillow…..stay here.”
>Her mom giggles as she said, “This is so adorable. I need a picture of this.”
>You blush even more and hope Sunset wakes up soon.
>Mr. Moonlight said, “Don’t bother honey.”
>You sigh knowing that he’s not gonna hold this over you.
> “I already got several pictures.”
>Scratch that, you curse this man to the bottom of hell itself.
>You start to shake Sunset to wake her up.
“Sunny, it’s time to get up.”
>She snuggles closer to you and said, “Don’t wanna.”
>You shake her a little more.
“Sunny, your parents are here.”
>Her eyes open and looks at her parents and asked, “When did you get home?”
>Mrs. Shimmer said, “Long enough. Had a nice nap with Anon?”
>Sunset looks down, confused until she sees you.
>Now she’s sporting the same blush as you.
>The both of you didn’t say anything.
>Mr. Moonlight asked, “Sunny-bunny, do you mind helping me with dinner?”
>Sunset got up and said, “Dad!! Don’t call me that.”
>They enter the kitchen, leaving you and Mrs. Shimmer in the living room.
>She asked, “Would you like to stay for dinner?”
“I really should be going.”
> “But I insist.”
>You can see where Sunset got her stubbornness from.
“Fine.”
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as the Spider
>As you are walking through the school halls blindly bypassing everyone around, are contemplating a way to get into the Oscorp expo
>Sadly, time is running out since the expo is tomorrow
>You could just sneak in
>The vents are an option
>Open windows
>Maybe through a backdoor somewhere
>Still, once you get in, what will you be looking for?
>Suspicious people doing suspicious things?
>Carrying around crates of high-tech equipment
>What else could people be doing in an expo?
>What are the chances than an arms deal might go on then?
>It will be filled with people
>Heavy workers carrying around bulking machinery
>During the day
>Actually that might be something that could work
>No one would pay them any attention
>But how will you proceed?
>Jump out and web them up?
>Or take them down, one by one, from the shadows
>Still
>You have to be ready for nothing of the sorts to take place
>You might just have to pin a scientist and ask them if they've seen something fishy
>You'll get to that later
>Right now you still have to think of a way to get in
>>27195209
>As you are walking through the halls, something catches your eye
>Two jocks bullying a nerd
>The same nerd from about a week ago
>And the same jocks
>Figures
>You could tie their feet together
>But
>You just walk up to them
>They are passing each other some papers the kid was carrying
>You just catch the papers mid-air
>"Hey, hey! What's the big idea?"
"Leave him alone"
>"Pff... wha?"
>You grab the guy by the collar of his shirt
>You are not in the mood
"Get lost or I'll make you get lost"
>The guy just stares at you
>You throw him aside
>He quickly regains his composure
>"Yeah, well, we were done anyway."
>He waves his partner to come with him
>Still shocked, he runs to him
"Little Norman can't save his own hide. Got to make his girlfriend protect him"
>They both laugh as they climb up the stairs
>You turn towards "Norman"
>Small stature
>Looks weak
>Glasses
>Braces
>Tucked in shirt
>Typical bully victim
>You give him his hand to help him get up
"You alright?"
>"Yeah...thanks"
>He gets up and you help him gather his belongings
>Among them you find a pamphlet on the expo
>What are the chances that he might be going?
"Hey...umm...Norman. Will you be going to this expo?"
>"Will I ever! It's one of my most anticipated days of the year! They'll be showing all their stuff their. Their findings on teleportation, first signs of alien life, bio-mechanized suits..."
"Yeah, yeah, yeah...butt do you happen to have another ticket? I kind of want to go too..."
>He frowns a bit
>He searches his wallet
>"Well...I was planning to scalp it..."
>You'll pretend that you didn't hear that
>"But since you helped me out a bit here...I can give it to you for free"
>He takes out a ticket
>And gives it to you
>"All in the name of progress! The motto of Oscorp!"
>Yeah
>Sure
>>27195214
"How are you feeling today?"
>The hospital room is quiet
>There are sounds of beeping machines
>Liquids dripping through tubes
>You can smell the sterility in the room
>It's almost toxic
"Today I helped a guy who was being bullied. Reminded me of you. Except for the fashion sense"
>You laugh a bit to yourself
>The ambience uninterrupted
"He gave me a ticket to the expo. I've got a hunch I'm gonna find the culprits there. They will be brought to justice"
>
>
>
"You know, this could have been all avoided if you could have just told me who was tormenting you."
>Or maybe if you were a better friend
>Or you were faster
"...we should have been watching movies now..."
>
>
>
"I'll be going. I'll see you later, ok?"
>It's like you expected an answer
I have a green where Anon is more or less the Reverse-Flash and goes back in time with "hilarious" hijinks. It's much more lighthearted but it was also my first green
I could post it if people are interested
>>27195349
was it the one were he basically makes Twilight how se id today?
>>27195359
Yes actually
I don't remember posting it here
>>27195374
It was posted here but I think it was the 2nd thread
>>27195388
huh...dont remember doing that
still
8 threads ago
i dont think ive been so active on a general since the green requests threads
not so much on /bat/
anyway
should i or shouldnt i repost it?
>>27195410
Go for it. I'm just waiting for someone to find what I did in my green for today.
>>27195410
sure, why not?
>>27195225
Hospitals just get me every time.
>You are Anon
>The green speedster
>Through the use of black magic and soft science you've achieved transhumanal speed
>And like your uncle always said
>"Anon, with great power comes great responsibility"
>To fuck with people's lives!
>After which he'd let you smoke because he was a cool uncle
>And with your speed and your knowledge of shit-tier sci-fi, you decide to travel back in time using your super speed (even though chronomancy is well documented and there are guides in the royal library) for the ultimate fuckage
>Reshaping a pony in your twisted vision
>>27195635
>As you travel through hyper space you think about which pony pissed you off the most
>And it hit you
>The purple one
>She has been the plight of your life in Ponyville
>She and that stupid ban list
>You'll get her
>She will pay!
>You speed off
>Hoping you are going in the right direction
>>27195640
>You end up ramming into Celestia when you arrive
>You knock her off her hooves just in time for a laser beam to nearly miss the both of you
>The year is one thousand years before you began your journey
>This is the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon
>Although you'd love to stay and watch, you have a life to ruin
>And you can return any time you want
>You dash off and on your way towards Hyperspace, you pass by a fine looking green lad, with an outstanding suit, watching the battle
>He doesn't pay you much attention
>You are off!
>You end up on a roof of a house
>By sheer willpower and luck you managed to stop before you fall
>You hear voices and duck
>You see a grayish mare and a little purple filly, rolling on the ground and crying
>"Twilight Sparkle!"
>Bingo
>"You cease this at once!" the gray mare yelled
>"I WANT CHOCOLATE MILK!"
>"You will get nothing of the sorts! Don't you know what happens to little fillies who don't listen to their parents? They get taken by the Boggiehorse!"
>The Boggiehorse? Sounds like the perfect plan
>You don't stay to hear the rest of the conversation. You had those when you were younger - the parent will yell at you, and you'd cry, and they'd give up and give you what you want
>Good times
>You go to town and find a few supplies that a Boggiehorse might carry around
>Bags
>Lantern
>Chains
>After which you decide to kill some time until night falls by jacking off right behind ponies in their houses and running off before they notice you
>It's not so much the jacking off, but rather the thrill that they don't know that you are there
>>27195648
>It's night
>By now you have visited about 20 houses and you have fashioned yourself a costume
>Time to engage the plan
>You break into Twilight's house and you put on your Booggiehorse costume
>A couple of bags sown together, nothing big
>You get your chains ready and you light up your lantern
>You rattle your chains in front of Twilight's door
>"Who...who's there?"
>Perfect, she's awake
>You slowly open the door and enter
>The light from your lantern barely illuminates your figure, let alone the room
>"I am the Booggiehorse, Twilight. I have come to take you away in my bag and whip you with my chains!"
>"NO!"
>"You have been a bad little filly, you must be punished!"
>"NO! PLEASE DON'T! I SWEAR I WON'T DO ANYTHING BAD EVER AGAIN!"
>You hear the hoofsteps behind you and in a flash of black and green, you are gone
>This will be a fun adventure
>>27195655
>You are in a school cafeteria
>It's taco day
>You see Twilight talking with her friends
>She seems pretty popular
>That's absurd
>You are going to fix this
>Using your super speed, you enter the kitchen
>You start devouring tacos
>One, two, three, four, five
>Breaking the laws of physics can leave a guy hungry
>Ten, eleven, twelve
>Your stomach starts roaring
>It's time
>You quickly duck behind Twilight Sparkle
>"...and that is why we all have to...."
>...
>Ten seconds of uninterrupted farting
>The smell is horrid
>You are pretty sure you ripped your pants
>After the bombardment stops
>Everybody starts laughing at Twilight
>She's about to cry
>Oh God, this is perfect
>You speed out to hyperspace
>Along the way you change your pants
>>27195666
>You arrive
>You look around
>It looks like a teenager's room
>Messy bed
>Clothes thrown all around
>Pregnancy test
>Hello!
>Looks like our dear friend Twilight has gotten herself into a bit of trouble
>And you know just what to do
>You speed out with a cup in your hand, looking for a pregnant peeing mare
>Lucky for you, today is free Parasprite day in the maternity ward in the local hospital
>You go into one of the bathrooms, jump into a toilet and wait
>Like some sort 16th century ninja
>It doesn't take long for someone to come in and get on your toilet
>Let's just hope they need to do a number one, instead of number 2
>Several number 2s later, a quick shower and a change of suits, you have it!
>You get back to Twilight's house and you change up the urine test
>You hide under the bed and wait
>"NOOOOOOO!"
>Yes!
>Your work is done, you have taken your revenge
>Time to head back home to brag
>>27195666
dem trips!
>>27195674
>You are Twilight Sparkle
>Stick in the mud extraordinar
>You are currently in the process of rereading a dictionary
>Because
>Let's face it
>You are just that dull
>"Poetic Justice - Poetic justice is a literary device in which virtue is ultim..."
>There was a flash of green and black and all of your papers went flying in the air
>You see Anon
>That bastard!
>He thinks he's so cool with his suit and green skin, and funny sense of humor, and general charm, and the cute way he staggers some times
>You'll show him
>You are going to make him follow so much rules that he will have to love you
>You mean, he will have to become a productive member of society
"Anon, what are you doing here?"
>"Twilight, have you ever thought that every bad thing that has happened to you was orchestrated by one person?"
"What?"
>"IT WAS ME TWILIGHT! IT WAS ME ALL ALONG!"
"What?"
>"REMEMBER THAT TIME YOU WANTED CHOCOLATE MILK AND YOUR MOTHER TOLD YOU ABOUT THE BOOGGIEHORSE? THAT WAS ME! I WAS THE BOOGGIEHORSE! I BROKE INTO YOUR HOUSE TO SCARE YOU"
"What?!"
>"And remember that time you were in school, and it was tacoday. You were having so much fun with your friends and suddenly there was a fart and everybody laughed at you. IT WAS ME, TWILIGHT! I WAS THE ONE WHO FARTED! AND THE TIME YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE PREGNANT? IT WAS ME!!! I STOLE SOME PREGNANT PISS FROM THE HOSPITAL AND SWITCHED IT WITH YOURS!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA"
"Why?! Why would you do all of these things?!"
>"Why? I'll tell you why. Because you are always such a bitch. Always making me follow rules and principles and checklists that have to get checked 3 times. I was tired of that! It was time to have my revenge"
"Wait. You had your revenge for me making you follow rules by travelling back in time and doing those things to me?"
>"Yes Twilight! What is so hard to understand?"
"Those things were the things that shaped me into the pony I am today..."
>"what?"
>>27195689
"Yes. I learned to always follow the rules, I became socially awkward and I always made checklists of things that had to be done"
>"Wait....that means"
"It means that you created that which you despised the most, Anon. Me"
>"I...uh..."
>Be Anon
>Be a thousand years ago
>Watching the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon
>Not as epic as you had hoped
>As you are munching down on popcorn,, you notice a green douchebag in a suit zapping right past you
>You could have stopped him
>But in the end, he is the one that ruined your life
>Let him ruin his life as well
Duh Ent
>>27195684
Cheers!
>>27195705
yeah, you totally did post this in one of the first threads. Or someone did at least.
Doesn't make it any less humorous though.
>>27194817
>>27195084
You are fucking basedLewds when?
>>27195846
Hopefully soon
>>27187496
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>Which means there are at least 811 other Earths out there.
>You know only of the one where everyone is a pony. The one where Sunset is from.
>The others... you have no idea.
>The only information you, and Dr. Noteworthy and Dr. Time Turner have was about some beings who had been around and called this dimension by the number 712.
>Yes, that Dr. Time Turner a.k.a. Dr. Whooves of the Wonderbolts, eccentric philanthropic millionaire in iron suit.
>It’s really a gold-titanium alloy, as he entrusted you with.
>He taught you all kinds of advanced technologies not yet in any papers available for students in your field.
>Not that Dr. Noteworthy wasn't a genius in his own right, but he didn’t have the charisma of Time Turner~
>You may or may not have a crush on the man a decade older than you.
>Which is part of the reason you barely go to college anymore and work full-time at the Wonderbolt base in Fillydelphia.
>Anyway, you’re Twilight Sparkle.
>>27196387
>And Spitfire just informed you that your best friend Sunset Shimmer refused to join the Wonderbolts, refused to have the same internship you have, and quit being Spider-Woman.
>You had been looking forward to working together with Sunset.
>While you can wield a bit of magic through techwear, you lack the understanding of it that Sunset had.
>All the breakthroughs which could be achieved with Sunsets knowledge...
>She’s the only natural user of equestrian magic in Earth-812 which is known.
>Everyone else had to have been in contact with the otherworldly artifact called the “Element of Magic”
>Drain something of it’s residue in this world into their own body, like yourself.
>The Wonderbolts are very wary of Equestrian magic...
>They know it turned you into a demon-esque being, but everyone involved decided to never mention the same thing happening to Sunny as well...
>Sunny...
>She needs her friends.
>But you can’t tell her you work for the Wonderbolts.
>And you were not sure what made them go to Sunny right this moment.
>You DO know there had been an incident last night involving her as Spider-Woman, but not what kind.
>One that would make her give up being a super hero?
>You sigh as you continue to calibrate your gauntlet.
>It’s fingertips emit a familiar purple aura.
>No, Sunny will continue to be Spider-Woman.
>She just needs some time, and then maybe the two of you can have a team-up.
>>27196396
>Be Anon.
>Sunset was in incredible shape.
>But you could have guessed that from her lean figure and super-heroic activities.
>You were in good shape yourself, but the pace she jogs at forces you to be at your best.
>Your metabolism is still trying to heal you... you should have eaten more breakfast.
>Just before you arrive at Peezzer’s you hear a phone ring.
>Wait- Is that ringtone...?
>Sunset picks her phone up before you could have coherently formed a thought.
>“Hey Twilight.”
>Twilight.
>“Well, yeah, somewhat important. But I can’t discuss it right now. kinda busy.”
>You shouldn’t be listening in and trying to guess what Twilight was saying.
>“I’m with a friend right now. – Funny thing actually, he went to Crystal Prep with you.”
>God damnit.
>“Anon, Anon West. He says he knows you. – Oh... – Mhm... – Okay...”
>What the heck is Twilight saying to her?
>“I guess so, when do you have time? – Mhm... no, that works for me. – So, see you... huh? – Yeah, sure... I’ll... I’ll tell him.”
>She looks at you with a weird expression while doing so.
>“Bye.”
>She hangs up and pockets the phone.
“You could... at least...”
>You gulp.
“...pretend to be... out of breath.”
>She has held a normal conversation while jogging at that speed.
>Running, more like it.
>“Oh... “
“You’re in... god damn good shape.”
>“Sorry, I didn’t notice... I just assumed my usual jogging pace.”
“Well, I call it running.”
>She looks back to the way you already made through the park.
>“You want to go slower?”
“No, I won’t manage jogging now. Uff... Continue running.”
>“If you say so...”
>“And Twilight wanted me to say hi to you from her.”
“Okay..?”
>You don’t exactly know how to feel about that.
>>27196404
>>27196396
The plot thickens
>>27196387
>>Yes, that Dr. Time Turner a.k.a. Dr. Whooves of the Wonderbolts, eccentric philanthropic millionaire in iron suit.
>>27196396
>>you continue to calibrate your gauntlet.
>>It’s fingertips emit a familiar purple aura.
>>maybe the two of you can have a team-up.
If Time Turner is Tony Stark, and Twilight works under him on a magical gauntlet...
Does that mean she gets a magical iron man suit?
Seriously >>27196519 the plot thickens
But don't get our dicks hard and not follow through, okay?
>>27196730
War Marechine?
>>27197030
you should be ashamed of yourself for that pun, but I guess real perverts don't feel shame
and no, not war machine, I'm trying to establish part of my own world and not copying too much.
>>27196730
Time turner/Dr. Whooves is my equivalent to Tony Stark/Iron Man
with Noteworthy undefined, but the wits of Bruce Banner
I want that duo for exposition purposes.
Noteworthy is not the Hulk though (a figure I personally never liked)
while I'm at it:
I planned Spitfire as an Nick Fury's counterpart
and Soarin as Captain America
yet maybe I give one of them Johnny Storms powers
so far only thing fixed about Soarin is that he's strong, and that Spitfire's in a leading position.
>But don't get our dicks hard and not follow through, okay?
I have no idea.
I know I have a somewhat story I want to tell (at least partially) but if I'm able to make something complete?
dunno
>>27197195
Soarin could be like Luke Cage, maybe.
I dunno.
And no, I won't feel bad about that pun.
>>27195225
Rest in nap time, Normie
>>27197572
Reee in peace
>>27197675
Meme in peaces
>Agent Ward is taking over this thread
What do?
>>27197770
>What do?get banned for roleplaying
>>27197804hail hydra
>>27197770
I keep on not caring about AoS
>tfw you have a spider stuck in your neck
I guess i should have asked before, would people like lewds of the sinister six as well?
>>27198016
ABSOLUTELY
>>27198016
Yes but what would you do? New pose or basically the same pic but naked?
>>27198016
Do it. Do it you wonderful artist. Draw sinister snatches, villainous vaginas, and heinousHIPS.
My god.
The possibilities with hips are endless! Endless, I tell you! Endless!
>>27198074
http://youtu.be/bPBKIhm1Gs4
Im still waiting to see if Octavia tentacle rapes anon
>>27198074
My hips want's to know if you will post soon.
>>27198107
Spider-Bloke
You are my meme lord
Pick your team:
Team Cap stats-
Captain America-Super Soldier. First Avenger. One of the greatest heroes who's ever lived.
Hawkeye-Bored Green Arrow. Shield Agent.
Falcon-The black guy.
Scarlet Witch-Newest girl avenger. Can bring Vision to his knees.
Bucky-Cap's best friend. The Winter soldier. Hydra assassin with metal arm.
Ant-Man-Comic relief. Trained by Hank Pym. Surprisingly badass. Made Falcon look like an idiot.
-
Team Iron Man stats-
Iron Man-Lighthearted Batman. Can be serious. Billionaire, playboy, philanthropist. Unlimited supply of resources and suits. Basically James Bond without the suit.
Black Widow-Shield's best agent. Managed to tame Hulk. Pewpew bang bang.
War Machine-Black iron man. Probably gonna die.
Black Panther-Super African prince. Badass suit, super speed, bullet proof suit, big claws.
Vision-...(I don't know much about him)
Spider-man-Arguably the greatest marvel hero. Has Parker luck. Super strength. Wall crawling action. Pew pew webs pew pew. Extremely agile. Has taken on some of the biggest marvel villains. Believes that great power, comes with great responsibility.
Whose side are you on?
I'm with Team Cap
>>27198250
>Spiderman later defected to caps side
>>27198250
Team Cap, because he never got people murdered by making a fucking Deathbot with daddy issues.
Cap fought Nazis. Tony ain't fought no got damn Nazis.
>>27198297
Hell yeah.
Let's just hope he doesn't get asssssassinated to death...
Femanon please come back
>>27198309
if he gets killed, it'd better mean Red Skull is back
Yeah, sure, the indistinct beam used for space travel TOTALLY killed one of the most notorious men who ever lived.
Right.
>>27198115
Not for a while, family. I have other stories I do months in advance.
>>27198322
THIS
>>27198250
The answer is obviouslymother fuckin' hips, nigga
Beans acting like everything's all well and good besides being MIA for God knows how long
>>27198344
Dem hips doh
>>27198322
He might have gotten banned like a lot of other writefags
>>27198438
This t b h
>>27198344
Amurica hips?
No homo
Is Spidey taller than Wolverine?
>>27198552
He's a (not so) big guy
Is Gilda the equivalent of Wolverine? I need to be sure for reasons.
>>27198590
Gilda would be Vulture
>>27198344
I got a question. In an earlier thread, you said that Anon in your story knows how to defend himself.
If so, why does he let Flash push him around?
>>27198609
That's fair, I guess.
New Cgi-man footage. He puts that spider strength to work.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3KNEbWSirg
>>27198675
Man I'm excited for CW.
It'll be nice to have a solid, clear interpretation of that storyline
>>27198627
I said Anon knew Krav maga when he was very young, but primarily forgotten it. He knows tai chi, though, but he can only block and swipe people out of his way for running, never attacking. He can dodge, jump, and misdirect, but other than that he's fucking helpless.
You see, he does Tai Chi for the meditation, the breathing, the relaxation, but he does not focus on the fighting moves. What also doesn't help is he has no teacher. He just got interested in it when he was young, and only has a few books to go by and maybe youtube videos. His stance, form, position, and all that are not corrected by a teacher because he has no one teaching him, just the reference.
>>27198746
Anon as Iron Fist when?
>>27198746
Didn't Dadpool ever think that maybe he should teach Anon some Kung fu mercenary stuff to defend himself?
>>27198805
I doubt it.
DP strikes me as the kind of guy who'd try to keep his kid as far away from actual fighting as much as he could be bothered to.
After all, if you're functionally immortal, you don't want that kind of shit on your conscience if something bad happens to your kid because you taught them that.
>>27198842
Beans said that Dadpool was pre-healing ability Wade
>>27198857
Oh well fuck me, then.
Still, maybe the same kind of logic apploes? Bad guys wanting good kids isn't wildly uncommon in fiction.
>>27198871
*applies
Jesus fuck, and you people let me write smut for you.
>>27198871
>>27198842
And with Anon getting kidnapped/nearly raped by a bunch of super baddies lately, it would probably help him out if he knew how to do this
http://youtu.be/AiibN8EmIxE
>>27198899
fair
>>27195225
>Oscorp
>The epicenter of scientific break troughs in the continent
>Everything from medicine to quantum physics
>What we thought of the distant future is just one step away
>All in the name of progress
>At least that's what the banner said outside
>You aren't sure where progress comes when they are selling weapons to children
>In any case, the building is enormous
>And packed with people
>Mostly college students, going around taking pictures and notes
>Even the staff seems to be missing
>Or you just can't see them
>No security
>No lecturers
>It's going to be real hard to locate an arms dealer here
>You can't just go around snooping
>You've got to act with tact and stealth
>Maybe...
>...your spider sense can help you
>It picks up bad guys when it wants to
>You could try and make it pick up bad guys
>It's worth a shot
>You close your eyes
>And you try to isolate all the noise around you
>You concentrate
>You focus your intentions
>Time is slowing down
>You begin to feel something
>Something off
>You open your eyes
>The feeling is still there
>You walk towards the direction this feeling is radiating from
>You reach a wall
>But you can sense something behind it
>You look around
>There are no doors
>But there are sure to be ventilation shafts
>You look around
>You see a sign that says "restroom"
>>27199258
>You go to the restroom and look around
>Bingo
>Ventilation shafts
>Big enough for you to crawl in
>You enter one of the stalls and change in your costume
>You jump on the ceeling, open the shaft and crawl in
>Turns out its a maze here
>But you follow your spider sense
>Twists
>Turns
>Left
>Right
>Finally you arrive
>This is it
>You gently open the cover
>You can hear a couple of people talking
>"Pleasure doing business with you, Mr. Systevich"
>"Like-wise, Lowell. I need to be going. Some kids wanna buy themselves a few of our toys tonight."
>"Oh, I'm sure"
>This is it
>This is the deal
>You can't miss this opportunity
>You jump out
"Everybody hold it!"
>There are 4 people
>1 guy wearing a labcoat
>And 3 brawny fellas
>One of them has a couple of tubes underneath his arm
>Did...
>Did you fuck up again?
>"Rhino! Now!"
>What?
>Your spider sense tingles
>You turn around and
>You fly across the room
>>27198250
Team Cap
Picture absolutely related.If only I could be a citizen of glorious America.
>>27199271
>And you land on a few computers
>"We figured we might have some company. Good thing we brought an extra bit of security"
>Your entire body hurts
>It's like you were hit by a truck
>You look up and see something charging towards you
>You quickly jump out of the way
>But you weren't quick enough
>You get grabbed by a giant hand and go through the wall with it
>You can barely tell whats going on
>You feel yourself lifted high above the ground
>You look down
>It looks like a giant man-rhino
>"So you're that Spider everybody keeps talking about? Pff...You don't seem so tough"
>You get thrown across a large room
>Glass breaks on your back
>It cuts deep into your skin
>There's a sudden sensation of a cold liquid enveloping your body
>You hit some sort of vat
>Your muscles tense up
>"Come on, bug! I ain't got all day"
>Your spider sense is going crazy
>But you can barely move
>The pain combined with the cold liquid has you petrified
>You can also swear you can feel something sticking to your skin
>Crawling even
>This is it
>The big one
>You tense up
>Hold your ground
>And you are swept away
>You pass through another wall
>You get thrown again
>You hear people screaming
>You are probably in the middle of the convention
>You've gotta move
>You try to stand up but you fall
>Your limbs feel numb
>Your ribs hurt as hell
>Was this your run?
>A run filled with disappointment and guilt
>Well
>It could have been worse
>
>
>No it couldn't
>You were a joke
>But you can fix it
>You just have to escape somehow
>You try to get up one more time
>And you get picked up
>"This one's for the winning point"
>You get thrown
>The longest throw for now
>You feel a door break on your back
>There's a crash
>Darkness
>>27199271
<We can do it
<We will fix everything
<No need to worry
<Just wake up
<Wake up
>"Wake up"
"Whu...?"
>"Are you alright?"
>You open your eyes
>It's the commissioner
"Wh...what happened?"
>"You got in a fight. Witnesses say there was a rhinoceros going throw walls here"
"They are right"
>You try to stand up
>The commissioner helps you
>"Easy. You are badly hurt. It's a miracle you survived."
>You look around
>You are in the restroom
>Just you and the commissioner
"I've got to stop them"
>You make a few steps and fall
>This time Wordon catches you
>"You are in no condition to do anything. Just tell me what happened"
"The...there was a deal. But they didn't have weapons. Just tubes. I don't know. Someone said something about kids and toys...it's a blur..."
>"Tubes? They could be schematics. What was that about the toys"
"I think...I think they will be making a deal tonight"
>Gordon takes off his trenchcoat and covers you with it
>"Thank you. I will drive you home."
"I can go home myself."
>"Not in your condition"
>You definitely get up
>You prove yourself wrong
>He catches you one more time
>This time he takes you in his arms
>"You should take off that mask. No need to be drawing attention. Either way it's almost completely ripped off."
>You grab your face
>You can feel your skin
"I-I..."
>"Don't worry. I won't tell anybody."
>He he walks out of the bathroom, carrying you
>He gets to his car and puts you in the front seat
>He sits in the driver's seat and tosses you something
>"Painkillers. They'll help out. Just tell me where you live, before you take them"
>>27199294
>It feels like you've been driving for hours
>Everything just meshes up together through the window
>You could swear that you had fallen asleep at least 3 times
>Maybe it was more
>You don't want to think about it
>The car stops
>The driver's door opens
>In a moment yours does as well
>Wordon takes you again
>It's raining
>You hear a door unlock
>"Home sweet home, huh kid?"
>He leaves you on your couch
>"Check with me tomorrow, alright?"
"al-alright"
>The door closes
>You drift off
>>27199310
<There will be no pain anymore
<No guilt
<No sorrow
<No pain
<Just accept us
<We will make everything better
<We are your friend, Sunset
>You wake up
>You've never felt better
>It's like yesterday never even happened
>Except something is wrong
>You are in warehouse
>Surrounded by what seems to be angry, armed youth
>You've got guns pointed at you from all sides
>One of them fires
>You dodge, web his feet and pull him towards you
>Another one fires
>You jump and throw the first shooter at him
>Third one has an automatic riffle
>You can't dodge mid air
>You aim towards him and
>He's knocked out
>A tentacle retracts in your sleeve
>You fall on the ground
>Two more come at you
>One has a knife
>The other a pipe
>The first one tries to slash you, but you catch his hand
>You headbutt him unconscious
>The second one swings with his bat
>The bat breaks in your shoulder
>He drops the handle
>You squint your eyes
>He starts running
>You web his feet and pull him towards you
>You web him to the ground
>You do the same with the rest
>You look up
>There's a hole in the roof
>You web yourself to it and jump out
>It's night
>You notice your gloves have white rectangles on them
>And your sleeves are black
>You jump to the ground and check yourself in a puddle
>You are wearing a black jacket with a hood, instead of your usual red sweatshirt
>The spider one your chest is white and more angular
>Even your sneakers are black
>What happened last night?
Pic by Sentel
>>27199323
aw yis
love how Sunset keeps getting btfo
>>27199294
Kinda fucked up the post quotes on that one
Hope it doesn't bugger it up too much
Have some more venomshim, darlings
based off that Todd McFarlane cover
you know the one
>>27199514
you're a fucking gift from god, Sentel
>>27199416
Not bad. Wonder what's gonna happen to Anon? No really what will happen, do people in that situation ever get better?
>>27199530
anything can happen with comics
cyberbrain, healing serum, nanobots, all sorts of crap
>>27199530
>>27199549
I'm thinking of giving him the same role Bruce had in the 90s Spider-man cartoon
>>27199559
>>27199549
No i really mean it. Can someone actually get better from that? I meant literally getting shot nut surviving
>>27199575
there is a chance but its far more likely theyll be a burden after that to live a normal life
>>27199575
Meant to put "and" were nut is
>>27199323
Hmmm, I think we've found our cure for Anon's headache
>>27199602
the human body is remarkably resilient
survivors of head trauma brought about by bullet wounds are not uncommon
and I wasn't joking about the superscience stuff.
people sometimes just refuse to die in comics, no matter how "realistic" their wounds.
>>27199636
>>27199575
of course, there IS a difference between "surviving" and "living a normal life"
>>27199636
Especially if they happen to, get their hands in a symbiote
*wink wink*
*nudge*
>>27199654
Sooo...you are saying...thaaaaat...Sunset should fall into a bloodrage and eat Anon?
>>27199667
no. no she should not.
>>27199667
That is an option.
But I was thinking more like, giving him venom
>>27199682
>>27199688
Let's eat people!
>>27199722
I like cannibalism as much as the next guy, but...
>>27198071
I would do new poses. Hate to just give an edit when i could do more. Might start working on the other heroes as well
>>27199762
Hi. You're Red, right?
I'm Negan.
>>27199774
>I might start working on the other heroes as well
I have a request for you, but asking it would spoil my own green.
>>27199799
>Juicy
>>27199774
Can make a suggestion, when you do these lewds make them like a pin up. Maybe have them still have something on them like Trixie's cape
>>27195144
>Be Spider-Woman.
>It’s been a few days since Anon had dinner with you and your parents.
>It was nice having him over but your parents kept on trying to set the two of you up for a date.
>You’re glad he had to leave.
>Not that you didn’t enjoy his company.
>He just need to get home before it got to late.
>Anyways you’re on patrol right now with Radiance, Zapp and Anon.
>He refused to be called Zeus and said he would think of a better name.
>Zapp’s a little miffed with working along side Anon but Radiance is willing to at least.
>Anon looked around as he said, “So, why am I here?”
>You sigh at the obvious question.
“Celestia wants us to show you how we do things.”
>Zapp gets up in his face and said, “And this is your training, newbie.”
>Anon then said, “Am I still a newbie when I've beaten you two times already?”
>You and Radiance giggle at Anon dissing Zapp.
>Radiance giggled and said, “While seeing Anon put Zapp in her place is amusing.”
> “Hey.”
>Radiance continued, “We really should get started on our patrol.”
>Everyone nodded as they left in their own ways.
>Zapp flew into the sky, Radiance created a platform for her and Anon while you began to web swing.
>It didn’t take long to find some local gang members robbing a store.
>Everyone lands on a small building near the store.
>Anon looks at you and said, “So now we beat them, right?”
“Yeah, but I'll deal with them myself.”
>Zapp whined, “You always get to beat up gang members.”
>Radiance said, “You like to show off too much.”
>You jump down and land on a lamp post.
“Hey boys, late night shopping?”
>They look at you as you shoot webs at their hands and feet.
>They fell to the ground in a tangled mess.
>You turn around as your friends land on the ground.
“That’s all there is to it.”
>Anon raises his hand as lightning coats it and fires a bolt at you.
hi red made me do this don't kill me :D
>>27199893
What the what
>>27199799
No big. If you ever want to let ne know feel free to email me or something. Same name at gmail. I have a tumblr as well for gallery usage
>>27199950
Its Venomshim eating Anon
>>27200048
I know what it is
>>27200100Venomshimmer as a trap, sexually bullying Anon
yis
yis pls
>>27199888
>The bolt flies past you as you hear a small thud.
>You turn around and see a thug on the ground, knocked out.
>Anon said, “You missed one,” as you turn back to your friends.
“Thanks.”
>Anon nods and said, “Whatever. So we leave them here or what?”
“Yeah but we need to tie the other guy up.”
> “I got it.”
>Anon walks over to the downed guy and……….searches his pockets?
>He pulls out the hugs wallet and opens it.
>Radiance, outraged, said, “We don’t steal from criminals.”
>Anon sounds surprised as he said, “Really?”
>Even Zapp is angry as she yelled, “Yeah, we don’t stoop to their level.”
>Anon just shrugs as he put the wallet back and said, “He had nothing anyways.”
>Anon then put his hand on the guy’s chest as he creates a rope around the thug.
>Anon turned to everyone and asked, “So we done here?”
>You sigh at his blunt question.
>He really needs to take this seriously.
“Yes, we’re done here.”
>Anon said, “The sooner we’re done, the sooner I can get out of this stupid getup.”
>Radiance said, “Oh, I could make you a better outfit, darling.”
>Anon replied, “You’re crazy if you think I’m gonna be a dress up doll for a day.”
>>27200046
I just emailed you, friendo.
Almost done with Issue #4
It's more cutes than anything else. Just Sunset and Anon becoming friends.
>>27200394
http://pastebin.com/fAifi2eh
There we go
like I said, not much action, mostly character stuff
>>27200426
so, ah, any thoughts?
>>27200555
Good filler. I like How it more or less show's how Anon and Sunset interact without any rogues around.
>>27200589
It'll pick back up.
I'll be addressing Anon's Last Name, Flash's jealousy, and what exactly happened to his more... intimate notebook.
Probably not all in one issue, mind you, but they'll happen.
>>27200555
>>27200783
Cool issue. I liked it. Are we going to see more of Anon's /sup/ thread?
>>27200929
Absolutely!
>>27199323
"This power...it feels...good!"
http://youtu.be/nKnXfQV8S94
>>27201133
>Theme Of Dancing
>>27200333
What a killing joke
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SnTSqgJPVl8
>>27199888
Nice trips.
I've decided to give each writer a theme song for their story.
>Beans
http://youtu.be/JofmaI4X4Sk
>superkeaton
http://youtu.be/h2ASUOtvHBU
>treppahcs
http://youtu.be/p3l5KeIdr7A
>Red
http://youtu.be/jpLKwwcvvlE
>Shocker Anon
http://youtu.be/07GTOMMdRsc
>>27202110
Wha made you choose the songs?
>>27202110
>Everybody Loves Raymond as my theme song
I'm okay with this.
Also, pretty much passed out after work, so I didn't work on my story. Hopefully, I'll do so tomorrow.
>>27202110
What about untitled 7 & Roommate Anon?
>>27202110
Not all that surprised and one of my favorites.
What should Anon's new outfit and name be?
>>27198675
Spiderman sounds a bit too young but I'll give it a fair shake.
Though at this point watching the marvel movies and netflix shows feel like an obligation.
>>27202110
>gets best theme song
Aw yis
>>27200187
Nice
taking a break from writing today
will lurk in thread
So
Are we gonna make a spiderverse event with all the spiderhims or what?
>>27203719
I don't think that'll work unless some of us use different Spider-Man/Womans. Like Noir or 2099.
Unless we have Sunset in different outfits it could work.
>>27199575
Well there is Wenseslao Moguel AKA El Fusilado. He survived a firing squad, got shot 9 times and a final one to the head.
>>27202598
nobody cares about me
I'm not even part of "each writer"
>>27203719
>A Sunset who went from Earth to Equeestria, fighting crime as the ponified Spider-Mare
>A Sunset from a future where the Dazzlings won, armed and armored by a distant relative/lookalike of Twilight Sparkle, becoming the techno-magical Spider-Woman 3099
>A Sunset who has no powers, instead using poisons and terror tactics against the grimy criminal elements as The Spider
>A Sunset from the Evil Alternate Equestria, who fled from tyrant Celestia's rule and uses the pure power of the Alicorn Amulet to transform into Magical Girl Spider Princess, battling the monstrous invading forces of the evil Equestrian Horde with magic and friendship
>An older Sunset Shimmer who's long graduated college, seen it all, and is just there to make sure her idiot friends don't get hurt in their own bids to fight crime
>>27203957
Might as well drink the old bleach now
>>27203974
why life? whywrite?
>>27203957
I Enjoy your story more than the others
>>27203957
I still like it and I'm interested in were you go with it
>>27196404
>Healing factor includes better stamina, or rather you recharge faster after, and even during physical exertion.
>Which can be interpreted as better stamina.
>You’re wandering a path of just enough work out to stay fit but stuff you don’t get hurt at.
>You can’t be discovered having a healing factor.
>Or rather, you can’t have people look into why you have one.
>You’re way too close to Sunset, and she’s way too close to the Wonderbolts.
>Which means you’re way too close to the people you were taught to stay away from.
>Yet here you are, being the copycat of a superhero, getting blown up and then having pizza with her.
>Why did you decide to do this again?
>You watch a drop of sweat run down her neck which she quickly wipes away.
>She then decides to fan her t-shirt to get some air flowing.
>Real life has some fine jiggly-physics.
>Don’t stare!
>Suddenly your prosciutto-fungi was really interesting.
>Oh look, it has ham AND mushrooms on it.
>Fascinating!
>And so tasty!
>“So, err... your cheat sheet to human courtship... Did you forget I would have some effect on you too?”
>She noticed you staring.
“Uhmm... yeah, well... What I did not expect was that instead of a nice jog we’d go running.”
>“So, how does it differ? Talk all psychological too me.”
>>27204806
“Let’s see... you know how in action movies couples get together for apparently stupid reasons?”
>She frowns.
>“Yeah...?”
“Because usually the respired together, and sprayed their pheromones on the other. It’s a more carnal, physical one bonding there. Besides looking out for one another to not get eaten by a saber tooth kitten or something. As humans we /do/ bond like that.”
>She’s playing with her straw, and you can’t help but watch as she licks her lips and takes it into her mouth to take a gulp.
“We ahh... we’d like to pretend we are logical creatures, but we’re not. We rely on instinct and our gut feeling. Couples stay together because of their personality, but they come together because of hormones, the olfactory system... besides visual attraction, I mean.”
>“And? Do you?”
>She asks with a smile after finishing her drink.
“Do I? ‘Do I’ what?”
>“Do you find me visually attractive?”
>You have to take a sip of your own drink before answering.
“You’re not a girl who constantly needs to be told she’s pretty. I believe I already told you so in Sombra’s lecture, did I not?”
>“Yes, that’s true~”
>Her tone is idle as she let’s the last sound ring out. Keeping her mouth just a moment too long in that position.
>The position of a mouth awaiting a kiss.
>She looks off for second, before returning her attention to you, her mouth a smile again.
>...
>She doesn’t really want a kiss, does she?
I have more, but I'm blackmailing you for a theme before I post it
>>27204813
You rotten bastard!
Fine, here!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUtziaZlDeE
>>27204977
That'll do pig, that'll do
Let it be known that I'm a man of my word
>>27204813
>You readjust yourself in your seat as if preparing to lean forward to her.
>Her eyes widen ever so slightly, if only for a moment
>No, she’s scared.
>Scared of her own feelings you so carefully manipulated–
>Oh, who are you kidding? This never worked before.
>This is not supposed to work.
“As, uhh... scientists, I believe we have to collect more date before we can come to a conclusive result.”
>You look off, as does Sunset.
>“Yes, I... no. That’s probably the best course of actions.”
>Nerd talk for ‘Fucking hell, we know each other for half a day, let’s take it slower.”
>The two of you nod awkwardly.
>...
>You continue with your pizza.
>As does she.
>You don’t know what to do next in kindling this relationship.
>As in dating sims and advertisement you continuously have to expose an object of desire to your target audience.
>But don’t run it into the ground.
>Don’t be a Minion-movie.
>Doesn’t matter how cute they were initially.
>Anyone with a mind of their own should be sick of them by now.
>“Awkward silence now, huh?”
“Yeah, well... We just talked in code about taking it slow, which still means we entered a deeper relationship beyond friendship.”
>>27205032
cute nerds in love
>>27198250
>Has Parker luck
´What is this Parker Luck you speak of?
>>27202110
>mirror's edge
I don't know anything bout this but the music's good. Do you really think it fits my green, though?
>>27205246
the best luck
hey, you know what ever so slightly fixes One More Day?
is if it was MJ who had been shot, not Aunt May
>>27202162
The voices
>>27205525
If it doesn't, I have a backup song
>>27205558
Oh no, I love it. Just want to know your interpretation of the story and it's tone.
>>27189913
My god what a dork he is sometimes
>>27205032
this is adorable
Anon seems almost too cool about it
he should be freaking out more
>>27202110
>FemAnon (in case they decide to stop being dead)
http://youtu.be/szmI40GWyn0
>>27205672
>not https://youtu.be/Bfe4TxvUOiw
c'mon
>>27205672
>mfw he won't.
>>27205693
why must you hurt me this way
>>27205672
He will be missed.
>>27205713
it brings me sexual gratification
>>27205672
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bq54jb_5WCI
Never forget.
>>27205747
be careful, some blood vessels in your dick may pop because my pain can't grow greater
>>27205783
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zLfCnGVeL4
TAKE COVER DICK IS BOOM!
>>27205599
Well, despite the lewd and jokes, like all Spiderman movies, it's a tragic love story.
Anon likes Sunset.
Sunset knows this and likes him back, but she can't show it.
Instead of taking the selfish path and taking what she wants (Andrew) she decides that it's best if they stay just friends to protect him.
Anon sees this as her being cold and not caring about him, which hurts Sunset.
Still, she secretly watches over him, and is always there when he needs her.
>>27205525
I think I've decided once and for all who I want the characters in your green to turn out as:
>Applejack
Ms. Marvel
>Rainbow Dash
Storm
>Fluttershy
Songbird
>Rarity
Black Widow
>Twilight
Doctor Strange
>Pinkie
Harley Quinn
>Anon
Shazam
>>27205991You really do understand...
>>27206032
Sorry, not ALL of the mane 6 is going to be super. I do have someone in mind already though, and it should be a neat surprise.
>>27206079
For Anon right now, I'm wanting either Shazam, or Iron Fist
>>27206079
Is this "someone" very...
Marvelous?
>>27206140
>Marevelous
one job, bloke
>>27206123
I was thinking Purple man. You know, because of the pheromones
>>27206177
I said this at one point too
>>27206140
dangerously anthro
>>27206177
pretty sure that's Jessica
filename never lies
>>27206204
>dangerously anthro
BUT DEM HIPS DON'T LIE
>>27206212
Beans confirmed for hips-sexual
>>27206222
We confirmed this like 10 threads ago
>>27206234
yeah but I didn't get to say the thing then, so nyeh
>>27206239
I'm Negan.
>>27206222
Everyone in this thread is hip-sexual.
Also thinking of rewriting my green. Thoughts?
>>27206399
What do you mean, rewriting?
>>27206425
explain how someone gets suddenly a name.
What I do too much world building you do too little
>>27206425
I feel that I'm rushing parts of the story to much. Still gonna use Infamous Anon but gonna change the story.
>>27206440
Excuse me?
>>27206452
you're excused
>>27206449
But I don't want you to change anything.
At all.
It's perfect.
>>27206449
that's fair, if that's the way you feel
there's nothing wrong with taking the slow path
it's your story, after all
>>27206468
I was just thinking cause i had a better idea for a story and conflict for it.
>>27206490
So you're saying that you wanna reboot everything you've done so far?
>>27206452
but you realize I meant to respond do >>27206399
>Also thinking of rewriting my green. Thoughts?
more establishing your world
>>27206506
Yes, still gonna have everything in it. Sunset as Spider-Woman, Anon still have his powers but more and the power ponies.
And as>>27206508 said more on some back story and the world
>>27206490
Just start the rewrite with, and then anon woke up and realized that everything posted previously was a dream.
>>27206535
But it was getting so cute and comfy.
>>27206553
It will still have those parts, just feel that Anon will be ab edgelord or something
>>27206568
I thought he already was
>>27206579
Yeah i meant bigger one than he already is
>>27206535
Be careful my friend. Many a writefag has walked the way of the redcon and failed.
>>27206584
But wouldn't that be a dangerous amount of edge?
>>27206620
That's the point. I have a better idea for the story on his actions, relationship with Sunset and other things that should make it a bit better
>>27206490
Like building more of the characters past, id, ego and super-ego in between or during the main/action sequences? Helps with thinking about conflict.You could also try writing about a character's 1st, 2nd and 3rd faceif you want to put in more substance. That helps to show someone opening up or shutting themselves in, and not writing about just their expression, but their actions and words.I like applying characters to one of the astrology signs since it correlates irl. The idea's fun to experiment with in fiction.
>>27206676
The idea has more cute Sunset x Anon ideas and I'll still use some of the old story in it
>>27206695
So on a scale of Shadow the hedgehog to Alex Mercer, how edgy are we talking?
>>27206712
New idea or old? I need to know what you mean
>>27206727
New
>>27206734
The edgyness would be Alex Mercer if i understand correctly. But can i explain my idea?
>>27206759
Ok so Anon tries to fp good with various results, his relationship with Sunset and his dad is bettet, Shield wants him captured, his dad knows about his powers and tries to help him with weapons and stuff.
But some stuff won't change, well much. The meets and his dad hospitalized still happen
>>27206846
I still like it better with Shield trying to recruit him instead. Otherwise, I'm intrigued
>>27206901
That’s what i meant but Shield wouldn't know if he’s Electro or not. Oh and more Sunset and Anon cuteness as it goes on
>>27206928
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm......
Ok, go for it.
>>27206945
Thanks
Spider-Shim: Web Warriors, when?
>>27206997
lets just gather all spidershims and throw them in one place to solve a big problem
the writefags should colab on this one
>>27207031
We'd get
>Beans Raimi-like Shimmer
>Red's noob, guilty Shim
>treppahcs horny Shimmer
>Shocker-non's other horny Shimmer
>Femanon's lesbian tension Shimmer
>And all the other Shimmer's I've kinda forgotten about
>>27207118
all of them reacting in different ways to the situation and each other
perfect for comedy and drama
>>27207031
>>27207118
I'd have to read up on the other writefriends' greens, but I could totally see myself involved in that.
I've got an idea for Hollywood.
A Web Warriors movie starring Tobey, Andrew, and Tom
>>27206846
So Celestia isn't going to be motherly and understanding this time around or at least not as much. I'm ok with this, but only just.
>>27207296
She’ll still be the same but it's just that I'm making her just slightly cautious as Sunset and the others don't have any info on him
>>27207118
doubt I could contribute, since Sunset doesn't really take center stage in my greens
>>27207292
What about the japanese spider-man
and that other guy that also played spiderman in a tv series that one time
>>27207355
its not so much the spidershims as everybody being in one place and doing stuff
everyone can join in
>>27207413
Also Italian spiderman.
As someone semi-new to the threads, and as a fan of symbiotes, I'm pondering doing my own writefagging involving the Venom symbiote as the viewpoint. Share your thoughts, I'm not sure whether I'll do this or not, but I'm def. considering it.
>>27207514
don't suppose you also partake in /co/'s Sunday Symbiot Threads, do you?
>>27207514
Well, I do have a symbiote fetish
>>27207532
I've lurked there on the occasion, not really sure what I can provide as a rookie writefag. I just figured that since greentext is fairly common here, this would be a good area to attempt to hone my talents. Also, I just saw one of these threads amidst a bored lurk on this board, and was immediately struck with inspiration. So that's why I thought I'd see what people thought.
>>27207580
well, give us a taste, then
>>27207318Looking out for her own. Ah, alright.
>>27207580
Go for it friend
>>27207599
Alright, since it seems I have an audience, I might as well give it a crack.
>You are the banished symbiote, having landed.
>You were sent away simply for poor genes.
>You want revenge.
>You feel loose.
>Your body is beginning to come apart.
>You need a host. Fast.
>The first thing you see is highly promising.
>A strange red streak, soaring overhead.
>You slither out of the water you were in.
>The hunt begins now.
>You chase the red streak around rock towers.
>Finally, the streak lands.
>You now realize it more than just a streak.
>It is the most worthy host you've encountered.
>You follow it through the gate of the tower.
>Your new host lies down on an platform.
>You slither onto the platform, the host still.
>You take on a design very similar to the host.
>You have bonded.
>As quickly as the host fell still, all goes black.
And that's as much as I'm writing for the moment. Hope it wasn't the worst green you've read.
>>27207714
trust me, it isn't
take your time with it, there's something here
so I kinda lied to myself
currently writing Issue 5
a little heavier than the last one
>>27205529
>one more day
>fix
It needs far more than that to fix it.
It needs a repairo spell from the elder wand.
>Late at night, you could hear the faint sound of someone crying in an alley.
>“Now, we don't want any trouble,” a short man said, as he glared at a defenseless woman.
>“Just give us all yer money, and no one gets hurt,” a taller man said, holding a knife at the woman.
>The woman let out a cry as she began to say, “Please, I have a son.”
>The shorter man grunted, “Just give us the money.”
>She shakily reached into her purse and pulled out her wallet.
>“That’s right. Just give it here and we can all go our own ways,” the talker one said.
>“Need some help Ma’am?”
>The two turned around, surprised, to see a cloaked individual standing at the alleyway entrance.
>The shorter one yelled, “Would you look at this? This guy's trying to be a hero.”
>The mystery guy said, “Can’t leave a girl with two hobos, that's for sure.”
>“Leave and maybe we'll forget you were here,” the taller one snarled.
>“Funny, I was about to say the same thing,” the cloaked guy said, raising his hand.
>The smaller one mockingly said, “Oh, what're you going to do, shoot us?”
>The two laughed as the cloaked guy shot a beam at the tall one’s leg.
>He was instantly wrapped in neon colored rope as the shorter one stopped laughing.
>“Something like that,” he said as the smaller one joined his partner.
>The woman slowly got up and said, “Th-Thank you.”
>The cloaked man nodded and said, “I was just in the neighborhood, but you better get out of here and call the police.”
>The woman nodded and ran out the alley.
>Turning back, she saw that the man disappeared but left a faint colored smoke where he stood.
>>27208181
>Later the man enters a room silently, trying to make as little noise as possible.
>He tiptoes his way to the next room when the lights suddenly turn on, showing the room to be a nice little apartment.
>Sitting on a couch was an older man wearing a loose police uniform.
>The older man looked at the cloaked man and said, “You're late and take off that mask.”
>“Fine,” the guy said, as he lowered his hood and removed the bandana from his head, showing a young face to the world.
>The young man started to take off his jacket as he said, “And i was taking down a couple of thugs, ok.”
>The older man chuckled and said, “Rescuing damsels now, Anon?”
>The guy, now Anon, said, “I was on my way home and saw it happen. I couldn't just leave her there, dad.”
>“That’s fine. Also I’m almost done with our little project.”
>Anon looks at his dad and asked, “Really? I thought it would have taken longer to make it.”
>“It would have but I’m testing something. Don’t know if it’ll work.”
>Anon sighs as he walked towards a door and said, “That’s fine, anyways I'm going to sleep.”
>“Ok, and sweet dreams.”
>Anon yawned and said, “Same to you,” as he entered his room.
>He threw the jacket and mask to the side of the room as he flopped onto his bed.
>He fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow.
>>27206032
>Pinkie
>Harley Quinn
>Pinkie
>obsessively emotionally attached to an abusive psychopath
Wut?
>>27208254
Not all things have to correlate with the canon. If there were an abusive psychopath involved, that'd be interesting, just coming out of left field like that (as far as it applying to Pinkie goes).>Robin's circumstances in Batman Beyond.
>>27208254
Current harley doesnt want anything to do with the joker
She owns a hotel or something atm if i remember right
http://pastebin.com/c95NyErX
Issue 5 of the Shimmering Spider-Woman!
A secret revealed!
An ominous sign in the distance?
Truth, and the hearts it brings closer!
>>27208941
>To your surprise, the Spiderwoman threads have gained a decent crowd
Literally me
>>27208941
So... what kind of panties did she wear?
>>27209087
If you keep reading the story, you might find out
>>27209070
I thought you'd approve, bloke
>>27209168
Honestly, I wasn't sure how to do the reveal
This was the softer of the two I'd thought of
But it leads to much harsher repercussions
>>27209186
>rapercussions
>>27209212
>>27209245
You sneaky shit
>>27209245
wait nononono. You can't kill the self insert!
>>27209245
There's one thing you forgot.
No one stays dead in comic books forever!
Not even Gwen Stacy!
>>27209270
I'll confess, once I hit upon the idea, I really couldn't let go of it
So, to balance it out, I went with the more immediate, lighthearted option
>>27209277
I love a good tragedy.
>>27209297
You're so right.
>>27209315
so long as he comes back you can have him eaten by hobos for all I care.
>>27209315
So, he'll be revived as good guy Carnage?
I'm ok with this. Just don't let that worthless neckbeard stay dead forever.
Beans get your shit together.
>>27209319
That's be sad, yet hilarious
http://youtu.be/Pdw8IO32XmE
>>27209339
>>27209319
>>27209319
>>27209339
This is honestly putting a huge smile on my face
And not even a mean one!
I promise, I'll do my very best to meet your expectations.
I'm very glad that I'm still holding your interests.
>>27209437
I am not gonna lie, that jersey devil pic is creeping me out
>>27209464
have some spooky ghost cookies in return for my spooking you
Okay, tomorrow? DEFINITELY no updatesprobably
>>27209498
>no updates
>tfw we know what's coming
>tfw we have to wait
>>27209505
>>27209557
How is Anon gonna get laid if he becomes Vision?
>On the next issue of superkeaton
Anon and Sunset have a really, bad, day
>>27209576you act like I've given away my favorite twist, bloke
>>27209618
I've never watched Ultimate Spiderman.
Now I'm really clueless.
>>27209632
That's okay.
It's enough that I know.
>>27209649
You little fuuu-
What kind of ride are you putting me on?
>>27209618
Eureka! I have you now!
http://youtu.be/P1QKloO6sKk
>>27209658
The only kind of ride that matter, bloke.
>>27209681
Oh my, do you?
Woe as me, I must be out of tricks.
Mustn't I?
>>27209691
I am literally gonna have a breakdown if I don't see an update from you tomorrow
>>27209708
>>27209691
I haven't worried and theorized this much since Beans started out
>>27209720
The answer is somewhere in this data, I just have to find it!
>>27209722
>>27209737
I'll confess, you've made my night
But it's late and tomorrow's an early day for me
Maybe I'll drop a teaser
Maybe a full Issue
Who knows?
>>27209750
>Who knows?
Who. Nose.
>>27209750
(Don't make him a villain)
I'm going to use this name and confuse people until Beans says what the fuck he is doing.
>>27209750
>Reading through the Spider-Shimmy issues
>'Sonic the Fuccboi'
Too good, you actually made me laugh out loud in front of the monitor.
>>27207118
Always forgotten
>>27210368
I'd accuse you of being an attention whore if it weren't for the fact that this keeps actually happening. Don't worry about it pal, I really like your story the most. Your anon is by far the most entertaining to watch as he fumbles through seducing the spider-hips
>>27207118
I just fucking got that derpy is supposed to sue storm, based on the logic that if she can't see you, you can't see her.
>>27210412
I read up rest of the thread and didn't quite see how much has been posted since then
Had id been more up to date I'd have been more in my right to answer
I understand why it seems attentionwhory
Also... Im home sick so i probably have time to write much more today
>>27206846
As long as we get the gloating/"you did nothing" meeting scene I'd be happy with whatever you do as that was pure gold.
>>27210434
>Also... Im home sick so i probably have time to write much more today
Stay sick long?
>>27210426
Actually it is supposed to be that time that Peter had to leave the Fantastic 4's tower without his costume and wore a paper bag on his head.Yes, the only reason I know this is a thing that happened is because of the N64 game.
>>27210552
I like my version better.
Copying and pasting this from last thread for context on what I'm pasting next.
>"HOLD IT RIGHT THERE, EVILDOER!"
>"YOU FACE THE MIGHT OF--"
>"THE ALCHEMIST!"
>"SONGBIRD!
>"AND THE TINKERER!"
>"TOGETHER WE ARE--"
>"THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS!"
"...You have GOT to be kidding me."
>You are the Shocker.
>For once, none of you many girlfriends have tried to "stop" you from trying to rob a bank.
>Instead, you get what you're pretty sure are some of their sisters/sidekicks.
>You can't help but facepalm at the absurdity of KIDS trying to stop you.
>For goodness sake, shouldn't they be in school right now?!
>Whelp, might as well try to talk some sense into them.
"Look, first off...'Cutie Mark Crusaders'? Really?"
>"Oh, lay off! It's what we called ourselves when we were younger, and we figured it would suit us fine now that we're heroes!"
"Uh huh, sure. Secondly, I'm pretty sure all but one of your names are pretty much already taken girls. Namely, Songbird and The Alchemist."
>"Yer' puttin' me on! It took us weeks to come up with these names, an' yer' tellin' us they're already takin'?!"
"Don't believe me? Just ask one Melissa Gold of the Thunderbolts and one Al of The Order of the Triad."
>"Aw, dagnabbit! No wonder those sounded familiar!"
"Third, do your parents know you're skipping school to play heroes!"
>"Hey! We are NOT 'playing' heroes, we ARE heroes! Plus, school holiday, so pffffffft!"
"Nice display of maturity there, kid. Look, I may bungle my jobs a lot--
:snicker and giggling go here:
"Yeah, yeah, laugh it up, but I AM actually credible threat--"
:outright laughter intensifies:
"...Right, I WAS going to go easy on you brats, but you apparently need a spanking!"
>>27210745
ONE HOUR OF COLLATERAL DAMAGE MAINLY ATTRIBUTING TO THE CMC LATER:
>Well.
>You certainly didn't expect the brats to put up quite the fight.
>You also didn't expect to fight them to a FREAKING STAND STILL.
>Well, at least you weren't outright defeated.
>Doesn't hurt they actually had some skill to back up their words.
>"Songbird" defintely has some nice pipes, could probably give the Sirens in their prime a run for their money.
>The "Alchemist" has quite the bag of tricks (but nowhere near as flashy as Mysterio's).
>And the Tinkerer is a few techs away from a lawsuit from Stark Industries and Wayne Enterprises.
>But still...
"...I'll admit. You kids are good."
>And not just because not saying so would be admitting that you suck.
"You all have some potential."
>You nod in acknowledgement. Their expression noticeably brightens up
"Unfortunately..."
>>27210748
>NUCLEAR LAUNCH DETECTED
"YOU ALL ALSO NEED TO LEARN RESTRAINT AND CONTROL! WHAT HELL, KIDS?! YOU CALL YOURSELVES 'HEROES'?! WHAT KIND OF HEROES WRECKS WHAT THEY'RE TRYING TO PROTECT?! YEAH, I'LL ADMIT I HAD A HAND IN THE DAMAGE, BUT MOST OF IT WAS FROM YOU BRATS, AND I WAS TRYING MY BEST TO UTTERLY THRASH YOU ALL! FUCK, I'M A VILLAIN, IT'S NOT OKAY WHEN I DO IT, YEAH, BUT AT LEAST IT'S EXPECTED THAT I'LL DESTROY SOMETHING! YOU GUYS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE THE PROTECTORS, AREN'T YOU?! WHAT, YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST CALL YOURSELVES 'HEROES' AND DO WHAT YOU WANT WITHOUT CONSEQUENCES?! NEWSFLASH, LIFE DOESN'T FUCKING WORK THAT WAY, AND FURTHERMORE--"
>...Fuck, maybe you went overboard on that? The kids appear to be on the verge of crying.
"...Oh for god's sake...look, it just...REALLY pisses me off when 'heroes' just wreck what they're trying to protect without any thought of who has to live through that. In some cases, yeah, that kind of stuff's unavoidable, but to cause so much damage on a bank robbery? I know you're kids, but come on, you could have at least drawn this fight out into a location that isn't so...'expensive'. On the plus side, you all did a good job on avoiding any casualities, so that's a plus."
:sigh:
"Look, this is obviously your first time if it took this long to fight me to a stand still with three of you, so I'm just gonna allow you to turn me in so you hopefully don't get yelled at any further by the other adults. They'll probably still give you a stern talking to, but hopefully that'll be blunted by you guys having captured me."
>"Thanks uncle Shocker!"
"What? Who're calling uncle?! Tch. Kids."
>>27210748
>>27210762
God damn it, forgot to name fag.
>>27210112
You freakin what?
>>27211286
everyone spider-bloke namefagging party!
>>27211365
I whole heartedly agree
>>27211397
Yes
I'm not sure how to feel right now.
>>27211683
Aroused, clearly.
>>27210434
>Also... Im home sick so i probably have time to write much more today
I lied
head ache and more sleep for me, maybe later I write something
Alright, since I've got the skeleton written out, and plenty of time, now to get into the meat of my first issue.
>You are a symbiote, now with host.
>You and... Shimmer, yes, awaken.
>You sense a level of disturbance in her.
>You decide to attempt speaking.
"Excuse me, is everything alright?"
>She jumps like she saw a ghost.
>"Who is that!?"
"Oh, sorry, I'm the suit."
>"The...?"
"Suit."
>It seems you're making a little progress.
>"Wha- Oh. Yeah, that's a problem."
"Is it?"
>"Yeah, I can't exactly... romp around in this."
"Ah, how about another look, then?"
>You search her memories, and find it.
>The look of a sleek, black jacket.
>It's perfect.
>You shift into the look, and Sunset jumps.
>"Gah! Alright, I guess that works."
"Good, I suppose it'd be good to head out."
>"Wha!? Oh, that's right!"
"You wanna take the swing route, or?"
>"The bus will be here soon, just relax."
"Alright, fine."
>You head for the bus stop, having dressed.
>You both say something, resulting in an echo.
"We might just be good together."
Don't leave this thread, there's more to be had here!
>>27211794
she seems pretty nonplussed about wearing an alien
>>27211794
>As you get on the bus, people take notice.
>"Hey, nice jacket!"
>"Nice to see the leather jacket back!"
>"It looks even better now!"
>Shimmer is embarassed at this.
>You don't really care about it.
>Eventually, Shimmer relaxes.
>Once you arrive at school, people still notice.
>You decide to remark on it.
"Seems I have fashion sense."
>Shimmer mutters, so as to not be overheard.
>"It was my fashion."
"And people think it still is. Relax."
>"Alright, let's just get through today."
>You head towards first period, and a long day.
>You feel like this is the least of your worries.
Sorry for this post being short, but the two posts around it are fairly meaty, important stuff. Both before and after.
>>27211836
I was trying to go for "Deal with it later, I've got school." with Shimmer, whether that was successful is honestly questionable.
>>27211842
>Shimmer is stressed, you can tell.
>"Okay, now that I've not anything to worry about, just what the hell are you, precisely? And why are you on me?"
"Firstly, consider me something of a... symbiote. Secondly, you were the closest thing for me to latch onto, and it was nessecary."
>"Symbi-!? You didn't even ask for consent!"
"I need a host to survive, and I needed one fast. Also, you kinda just ran in and fell asleep before I could even attempt communication."
>Shimmer takes a deep breath.
>"Alright, you can stick around for now, but the instant stuff starts getting weird, I'm blaming you."
"Clear."
>It is then, in a strange convenient matter, you both hear a crash.
>It seems to come from the building across th-
>Seems like a bank robbery.
>"Shit, I need to get into my cos-
>You shift back into the Spider Woman look.
"Say no more."
>"Alright, whatever, the robbers are more important right now."
>You swing through the window, surprising the two scoundrels.
>"What the-!? Are you some kind of ripoff?"
>You smile under the suit.
"No, we're the real deal."
>The crooks start to laugh, until you web one.
>And then you whip one at the other.
>They fall ass over teakettle and you walk towards them.
>You then watch them reel back in horror as you raise a clawed hand to-
>Shimmer snaps back to conciousness, and webs them to the nearest lamppost.
>She leaves a letter for the police, and starts to swing home.
>"Care to explain yourself for that one?"
"I was only going to scrape them, honest!"
>"That's still kind of fucked."
"Alright, look, we're already acting outside the law, so who cares?"
>"That doesn't mean we get to be worse than the criminals!"
"Okay, I'm sorry, let's just try to relax, tomorrow's... Saturday, I think?"
>Sunset sighs, and nods.
>That definitely could've gone a lot better, in your mind.
>But Anon's probably getting nervous, since he most likely got home from work 30 minutes ago.
Alright, this probably isn't particularly good, but I'm trying.
>>27211920
And now to finish this off this particular issue, I'm not going to attempt to stick to a particular schedule. The next might be tomorrow, or even next week. I don't really know.
>You get back to the apartment building, and shift back into a jacket.
>You walk in on Anon twiddling his thumbs.
>"Hey Anon, I'm home."
>"Oh, Sunset, thank god! Everything alright?"
>"Yeah, I had to take a longer route due to the whole sidewalk thing."
>"Oh yeah, that sucks, Sunny."
>If you could snicker, you would right now.
>"Anon, you know I hate that name."
>"Why do you think I use it? C'mon, let's see if there's anything on the news right now."
>Anon turns on the news, and well, there's definitely something on, with the breaking news banner stating loudly, "Monster Spider Woman?"
>You can almost taste Shimmer's rage.
>She mutters, not wanting Anon to hear.
>"Well, thanks, you gave all that anti-me media so much material."
"I'm sorry, alright? It won't happen again, I promise."
>"Tomorrow, we're going to spend some time figuring out boundaries in this... Whatever it is we're in."
"I'd call it a symbiosis."
>"It's not precisely give and take."
"Trust me, it is."
>After Anon goes to bed, you turn off the news, get undressed, and lie down.
>You slither off of Sunset, and lie on the counter next to her bed.
>There's some rough edges here, but this might be your most successful bond yet.
>You fall asleep on that hopeful note.
And that's the last of this first issue, tell me what I could've done better, what I did decently, etc. I never say no to feedback.
>>27211990
I doubt that, in all honesty, but I'll accept that compliment with a pound of salt.
>>27211980
honestly?
it feels a little rushed
the symbiote doesn't feel alien enough
it might as well be just a normal person stuck in her head rather than a viscous space-goo
>>27211980
I wonder if the symbiote chafes.
>>27212081
I'll admit to the rushed thing, but the humanity is definitely intentional. It may seem odd, but there's a distinct reason for it.
>>27212170
taking your word for it
Working on octavia solo pic and then pin up lewds per request. Somewhere in the middle is a special commission to be released per the client's request. Hope to have new one up soon
>>27211980
with your confusing use of
>"... and regular "... to start a line I don't know who's speaking
it kinda seemed like she has a roommate called anon, not that anon is the symbiote here.
Felt like there are 3 people talking...
I is confused
>>27212589
pic related
>>27212589
You're too good to us
>>27208540
The holiday specials, especially valentines day ones, aren't canon, Anon.
>>27212727
>it kinda seemed like she has a roommate called anon
That's because she does have a roommate called Anon, how is it hard to figure out? Also there is nothing wrong with his use of green; the normal use is black for the character who's pov is being followed, green for everyone else and narrative. For example:
>You walk in to the apartment and see Sunset sprawled across the couch with Rainbow Dash, their costumes discarded on the floor.
"Hey girls, tough night?"
>"Yeah but nothing we couldn't handle right Rainbow?"
>"You know it Sunset, of course there wasn't anything we couldn't handle, I'm awesome."
Beans I summon thee
>>27212887
If celestias hips wont do the job, then all hope is lost
>>27213059
>JJ
Absolutely disgusting.
>>27213059
Remember, hips and breaking stuff. THAT'S how we get his attention.
>>27213175
Broken hips?
>>27213242
If it helps.
>>27212887
>>27213059
>>27213175
>>27213262
My hips sense is tingling!
>>27213663
How about your writing senses?
>>27161458
>As more and more things are thrown at you while running, you give a nervous glance to your fellow victim.
“Hey Spidey?”
>“Yeah Anon?”
“...I’m scared.”
>“You should be. You really, really should be.”
>Eventually, the hallway reaches a dead-end, and you and Spidey are both cornered.
>You know there’s nowhere else to run.
>You and Spidey are trapped.
>Doc stands on her four mechanical monsters as her shadow covers you two.
>She looks at Spider-Woman with an angry snarl.
>“You should never lay hands on my property you annoying arachnid. It is inevitable that Anonymous will be my plaything within my lab...I could let you join him if you so desire, though. Letting you watch the things I’d do to my little ‘boyfriend’ here would be...”
>She breathes shakily as her arms bring her face close to Spidey’s.
>“...very pleasurable. I bet you’d love to see me make him into my property.”
>Spider-Woman’s hands clench into fist
>“Don’t you dare call him that!” she yells.
>Before Spidey can throw a knuckle sandwich, Doctor Octopus torpedos an arm around her neck to the wall, choking the crimson crime-fighter.
>With another hand, she bundles Spidey’s wrist as well, hoping it will make sure the web-slinging hero won’t cause any trouble.
>“Or what? You’ll try to run away even faster, you insipid fool!? Do you forget already that you two are cornered?”
>You give a worried glance to Spider-Woman.
>She looks fearful of what to do, but angry at Doc-Ock’s gloating.
>She gags for air, banging against the metal arm with all her strength, but her strength only dwindles as does the air she can manage to breath.
>“You have two choices, Anon,” says the maniacal Doctor, “I can take you back to my lair or I can take her life.”
>“ACK! A-anon! D-don’t--!”
>Doc-Ock slams Spidey against the wall violently.
>“SILENCE! Now what’ll it be, Anonymous!?”
>You have no choice...
“...What’ll you do to me?”
>>27212081
Symbiotes have become bros in the recent years
Don't impersonate me guys, PlsKThxlol
>>27213776
Then get a tripcode.
>>27213713
Rapey rapey time
>>27213776
Okie-doki-bloki!
repostan Issue #5 because I probably posted it at an inconvenient time last night
http://pastebin.com/c95NyErX
>>27214369
>>27214437
OUT AM I
>>27214454
>>27214450
>>27214454
>>27214492
Sometimes you just can't catch a break
>>27214520
Oooooooohhhh, you lil fucker
>>27214520
WE ARE DISPLEASED WITH YOU, CARLOS!
>>27214539
>>27214550
Don't get all wound upLord knows she didn't
>>27214492
Is this going to be you tryign to be Red?
Compared to what he's put us through, killing Anon after so little time is nothing.
Take your time.
>>27214625
Trust me, I am
Rushing Anon and Sunset is NOT something I want to do
>>27214520
You fucker
>>27214658
This isn't funny anymore
>>27214681
wow, you're really beside yourself over this aren't you?
>>27214681
Hey, man, don't be sotwo faced.
>>27214701
>>27214709
Silence!
Changelings...
There are a lot of Blokes today
>>27214736
Indeed, what a tangled web that's been weaved.
>>27214782
>These jokes
>>27214681
Why not just share Spider-bloke as a collective entity like we do with Anonymous,or a better question would be, why did you namefag to begin with?It seems (and is) pretentious unless you're making content and need an identity so you don't get confused with another content provider, anonymous or not. Then there's the risk of being copied which usually happens to no-fruit-bearing namefags. Just use a new nameand a trip (not a secure trip)or just go back to being anonymous.
Who would the Dazzlings be?
>>27214795
I like that idea
Superheroes wear masks
So here we also wear a mask
But we will all be wearing the same mask
But we will feel special for it
Also
>Terrific Trio
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1aljYjcxmOo
just replace Jay with Spider-bloke
>>27214833
I disagree
>>27214846
How can you disagreewith yourself
>>27214864
In most threads, the most common name to see is "Anonymous", here, it is now "Spider-bloke." I'm getting myself a Trip Code, this shit's spooky.
>>27214864
This feels like that one episode of...
Jimmy Neutron
Now, my namefaggotry is secure, working on Issue 2 ATM, hope to improve where I messed up, and take a little more time to refine my stuff before posting it.
>>27214905
>>27214889
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ZIX5YKqLew
Ha-Ha!
Take that clones.
I win
>>27214929I'm sorry this happened, butyou brought it upon yourself.
>>27214946
I dont understand
Looks like the situation has settled itself
>>27214959
The impersonations. Consider learning how to draw, edit, animate or write, or you'll be n better than Lucy.
>>27214975
*no better
>>27214975
I have no idea who that is
>>27214986
Neither do I, but I get his point, either contribute, even with shit, or just stop namefagging. Hell, I submitted some writefaggotery, even if it wasn't quite good, it's still something, and I'm working on more. TL;DR Either contribute, or don't namefag.
>>27214986
Then don't worry about it, I'm glad you don't knowand you should be too.
I'd be genuinely disappointed if you didn't make content though. You have a good sense of humor.
>>27215021
Who's Lucy?
>>27215094
A shitposting tripfag in /vg/
>>27215020
Got that right
>>27214795
The Powerpuff Girls
>>27215223
Eh, that would make more sense with the CMC, but they'd make a decent Gangreen Gang, if we're going there.
Take it easy guys
>>27215248
How about you take it easy?
>>27215323
Well, isn't this a sticky situation? It seems the clones aren't quite dead.
>>27215323
Enough! I am a god! And I will not be bullied by-
>>27213713
In before Anon pulls a Shiro, or, Dense Anime Protagonist:
>"I'm going to conduct various...'experiments' with you, and neither of us are going to be dry or clean afterwards."
"That doesn't sound pleasant."
>"Oh, I assure you, while there will be much screaming, I'm fairly sure you'll find the experience...enjoyable, to say the least."
"Why would I find something that's going to get me wet, dirty, and screaming fun?"
>"...Direct approach then! I want to fuck your brains out."
"That sounds worse!"
>"You...you can't be serious. Alright, I'll dumb it down FURTHER. I want to rip our pants off, and shove your pxnor into my vag00, repeatedly, until you ejaculate into my womb. Repeatedly."
"...You lost me."
>>27215436
Nope.
>>27213713
>With a mischievous chuckle, she smirks.
>“The better question is...
>A mechanical arm slithers around your cheek, caressing it gingerly.
>The cold, icy metal touching your skin gives you goosebumps.
>Descending to the ground, her remaining free tendrils place her directly in front of you.
>That smug smile suddenly seems so...dominating.
>She leans so she may whisper to you.
>“...What wouldn’t I do with you?”
>She licks the lobe of your ear and nips it.
“MEEP!”
>Spidey starts thrashing around in Doc’s hold, anger fueling her.
>You can only imagine how purple her face is under that mask.
“I...I’ll do it. I’ll go with you.”
>“N-no! Anon, you don’t have to--GAK!”
>Doc smiles.
>“I knew you’d come around.”
>“NO!”
>Fueled by total rage, Spidey rips her arms out from the mechanical hand’s hold, and blasts web into Doc-Ock’s eyes again.
>Once the arm on her neck lets her go to remove the webbing, she picks you up bridal style.
>“Hang on tight.”
“Why, I thought you’d never ask. Got a plan?”
>“Yeah. Run and hide.”
>While holding you, she runs past the blinded Doc-Ock, and races down the hallway.
“Wait, we’re going to hide!? That’s all!?”
>“Yeah, any ideas where, kid?”
>Well, it’s not like you want to face Doc-Ock again…
“Wait, why don’t we just sneak out of the school?”
>“It’s on lock down until the cops arrive. If we sneak out, we let Ock out. If we want her caught, we have to stay in the building.”
>Fuck.
“Well, where are we gonna hide?”
>“Why do you think I asked you!?” she yells.
>Your thoughts race of any locations that seem smart.
“Uh, how about one of the boy’s bathroom?”
>“...Are you kidding me? Why would I go in there!?”
“Cause our multi-legged friend won’t?”
>She huffs.
>“Fine! Where’s the closest one?”
“To our left!”
>She skids to a stop so abrupt, that it could almost leave skid marks on the floor of the hallway.
Hello everyone, quick two picture post tonight, but the final femme fatale of the Sinister Six is complete. I include a version of her without glasses (which she might have lifted from a certain someone she knows) and one with.
First is with.
And again without the glasses. Please give me feed back when you get a chance.
>>27215787
>>27215797
fucking god-tier
>>27215787
>>27215797She has quite the wide hips the more I look at itthat's good
>>27215891
All for you bud. Hips are required by law.
>>27215904
Your right and love that Octavia
>>27215904
I don't even care if her trench coat is not the color I imagined, you captured how I pictured her perfectly!
Like my vision come to life, dude. Fucking based.
>>27215904
I got an erection.
is good/10
>>27215934
Debated on going greenish like last time but ended up purple to match her eqg look. Also threw vinyl's glasses for giggles.
>>27215952
Besides the pin ups, who's next?
>>27215952
The colors you chose look better in all honesty, and I'm embarrassed I didn't think of having her use Vinyl's glasses in my story...maybe because I have plans for Vinyl too.
>>27216001
So far i will need to do another of spidershim. Other than her, the six and my request of secrecy i am open to possible suggestions.
>>27216035
*coughs*
>>27216043
you take requests?
I'm gonna go ahead and get started on the next one.
Brb
I am open to requests. Might take abit but i will try to get to them. Either email or post here, i lurk like no tomorrow here.
>>27216087
email?
>>27216108
Same name at gmail. Minus trip code also have a tumblr with same name. Have all six up there.
The party's over here
>>27216149
>>27216171
Too soon, but ok.
>>27216157
thanks!
I might hit you up for somethingIdunno
your work is awesome!
>>27215787
>>27215797
Honestly at this point i would just go with her
Saving spidey, fucking octavia until ragefuelled shim comes to "save" you and thereafter claims you herself
>>27214454
>>27214492
>twilight sparkle laughing.png
