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>FAQ
>How did this Humanized thread get started? What happened to Fingerbang?
The Humanized thread was created when the various humanized threads (including Fingerbang) on /mlp/ decided to merge. The rest is history.
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>>27146847
How pissed would Spike be to find out the rest of the dragons get to be humans in the EqG universe?
>>27146863
Pretty pissed I'd imagine.
>Making a thread nothing to do with Equestria Girls.
k
>>27146891
>>27146938
>not even checking the trips
This is the original thread.
>>27146953
O. then why is this one 199 instead of 198
>>27146847
>humanized Ember
YES! YES! YES!
>>27146961
Because last thread should be 198, not 197.
>>27146969
O, thanks.
>>27146847
>Patreon
no thanks
DO NO SUPPORT THAT
>>27146965
and must pay real money for that.
>>27146847
>Advertising (all forms) is not welcome—this includes any type of referral linking, "offers", soliciting, begging, stream threads, etc.
>>27147125
>>27147114
>>27147101
You guys are really thinking of absurd ways of bringing down the thread, huh.
>>27147145
the OP pic is clearly Advertising.
admit it.
>>27146933
It works for my bestiality fetish.
>>27146847
I will not give money, I do not have money.
>>27147158
>Because artist credits are now advertising
>>27147182
Where does OP ask for money?
>>27147261
yes, for the original artist.
All this petty arguing over bullshit is why FIngerbang is shit.
>>27147292
pretty much. really wish someone would make a better humanized general
>>27147301
or both.
>>27112861
>>27048708
>>27147322
what?
Both of those pretty much just serve to one demographic
Why the hell do we have 2 threads for no reason? At least the slave general had a actual reason for a fight in the title.
>>27147284
Where? I don't see it.
>>27147454
in the OP pic
bottom left
>>27147596
>>27147445
see this is why I made the other thread, because i knew op would fuck it up
>All this butthurt over nothing.
Who the hell cares?
>>27147335
You are pretty much a more annoying cancer then MLPG at this moment you fucks.
>>27147774
I think we know this.
It's not our faults though.
Ekans Monev/Luci/13 pretty much single handily ruined the thread.
Go to the discord chat if you want to express your frustrations.
>>27147965
>Ruined the thread
What the fuck are you talking about? We are still here and have a steady inflow of content. The complainers like you just need to shut up already, that's all. Luci literally already left. The only thing keeping his legacy alive is you.
So shut up about the drama and let that shit die already. More content now.
>>27147995
all we do is argue now.
Take a chill pill man, don't have to get all "White Male" on me.
I'm just stating the truth as to why we suck.
Most of our writers (I.e. Sarge, Story, and most recently Leman) left because of Luci
>>27148029
There's no need for irrational doomsaying, Anon.
>>27147995
This. I've been here since late 2013, and I assure you guys that the thread has seen much MUCH worse and darker times than this. What Luci did barely even put a dent in Fingerbang, and is close to nothing in comparison to a number of the shitstorms that this thread has experienced and then survived in the past. Seeing how far we've come , and how close we are to 200, we are practically unstoppable. There's literally nothing to worry about.
We have Disco, GreentextSavant, NaOH, Pheno, Sub 12, an occasional drawfag every now and then, Sleepover Anon, Waid (and is tripfagging fanboy), and a couple more people in the chat more than willing to keep this afloat.
We. Are. Not. Going. Anywhere.
>>27148029
I get that Sarge leaving is a bit of a blow, but that's kind of been the case ever since he moved to the Star Wars thread some time ago.
As for Story and Leman, we could easily do without those two. Barely anyone even misses them to be honest.
>>27147995
>>27148029
So many writers were harassed and embarrassed by Ekans. I mean the list i bigger then what you think.
Think of a writer that doesn't write here anymore......
most likely left because of luci
>>27148040
12 is as much, if not more, a pain in the ass then luci. him and 12 are like best friends and most of the time they help one another shitpost.
Disco Just lets this shit slide because she pretty much does not care anymore,she has the power to make these guys quit and stop their shit but she doesn't.
Waid is dead btw because school.
Pheno doesn't post.
NaOH has been discovered to be in on most of the shitposting and he only comes like once every 2 or 3 weeks.
And Greentext is the only one.
Sleepover Anon doesn't post enough to keep the thread alive. It's pretty much the Green text show now.
I really wish one of favorite writers, leman, would come back, but evidently I was told he pretty much gave up.
GunnzShowboat died.
And most of these 'New' writers who come in are just persona's of Luci for his cheap lol's
Like Luci is more of a problem then you think.
Think back to most of the stuff that has happened in fingerbang, and I can be 98% sure he had a hand, and probably more, in it.
Except the stuff with scruffy of course.
>>27148066
Story was pretty much the life blood of fingerbang for a while, because any story he wrote was gold material.You cannot deny that.
I can understand the art about Leman because he wasn't a proven writer yet
>>27146933
>>27147033
>>27147322
>>27148066
>>27148077
>>27148077
>Story was pretty much the life blood of fingerbang for a while, because any story he wrote was gold material.You cannot deny that.
Opinion discarded.
Also, you can't say that someone is dead or permanently driven away just because they got busy with life for a week or a couple of days.
>I really wish one of favorite writers, leman, would come back, but evidently I was told he pretty much gave up.
I really don't want to assume/infer that you're actually Leman trying to glorify yourself and Story and trying to make it out that Fingerbang died with you when Luci scared you away and then left in a hissy fit. I really don't want to come to that conclusion, but your actions AND words are convincing me to do just that.
Not only this, but Purp Trix and LaPhantoma did also post recently, but you seemed to just gloss over that. You're no one to guarantee the threads fate when you base your claims on negative apocalyptic viewpoints.
Like, Luci is no longer even a problem. He actually left the chat and said goodbye to EVERYONE. Stop freaking out over nothing and wait for the content to come back. I don't want to see you turn into Grim Reaper 2.0.I bet you don't even know who Grim Reaper was.
>>27148113
And on a side note. Most of Fingerbangs worst drama episodes and darkest times were in 2013 to 2014. Luci never even came here until 2015.
Think about that.
Reposting my reply to Savant incase he misses the first one on the old thread.
>>27146083
There's a YT channel I subscribe to called Smarter Every Day. A few months back there was a video covering the different processes that are used to make windshields and windows, and the reasons for each. Windshields are made with glass that's been annealed, so if anything strikes the surface that delivers enough force to crack the glass, the damage remains localized and the windshield holds its shape, since it's function is to shield the occupants from wind and any debris. They also use two panes of glass to keep any shards from falling inside the vehicle.
I'd go into this further, but the video explains it better.
Bump before beddie bye.
>>27148029
>>27148066
>Most of our writers (I.e. Sarge, Story, and most recently Leman) left because of Luci
Speaking as Sarge, I didn't leave because of Luci, I left because I got malaria.
I think you're overestimating the effect of one individual.
>>27149462
wow, great you decided to come back.
Now write more green asshole.
>>27149462
What he said but polite >>27149877
also we just humor the cuk so he fucks off. marital problems has been trying to muscle in.
>>27149903
alot of the other threads have been in and out as of late.
Apparently Normal Norman has been talking alot of shit
>>27150400
figures.
>>27146863
EqG isn't canon so like it matters
You know, if yall niggas come out from that pussy hideout Discord Chat and just fill this thread with materials, instead of the fanboyism and generally dicksucking, this thread would have been better
You know it, but you wont do it
>>27150573
>Because you're entitled to content.
Here's your (You).
>>27150599
Whats the fucking point of having a general if you dont have anything on it? Strive to fill the general you love with something you like, make it yourself if there isnt any. This general came into being with your interest as its foundation. However, interest alone, without anything to go by, wont make it anywhere.
What Im trying to say is that, yall seemed to like this general and the theme of it, but you wont actively do anything about it. You rather let someone else do it, again and again.
If you ever make anything productive on this thread, I give you a thumbs up. You've done something that you had no obligation to do, and yet you do it anyway because you found it intresting/fun/etc.
>>27148077
>Story
>Gold Material
Pick one.
Story was an Autist, and everyone here knows it.
Thought of pic related when I saw OP
>>27146847
>cropping was not enough
enjoy with you successful advertisement
>>27150998
it is because is paid.
>>27148155
Here's the vid, in case anyone is interested.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0i5rycLJ3D8
>>27146847
"thanks for the patreon link"
shill
>>27152799
>>27151102
>>27151062
All this wonderful butthurt.
>>27150573
Or you can come here and say what you want.
>>27150947
Story was a really good writer, autistic or not.
>>27152990
>Supporting Jews.
End Yourself.
>>27146847
>Advertising
>>27153814
>Still Supporitng Patreon.
Please Leave, shill.
>>27146847
WHY WONT YOU DIE?
>>27153858
because is promoting patreon.
>>27153858
>>27153814
>Hi RacoonKun,how many people have given money?
>>27147125
>tfw report options used to have advertising as a separate item from general rule breaking
>tfw the Jews won
>>27146847
>still idiots who still visit patreon.
>>27154003
>>27154011
Cancer
>fingerbang 192 to 195 are deleted
>fingerbang 199 is not deleted yet
fuck this gay earth.
we should just report this thread till it gets deleted
>>27150450
It is canon.
>>27154134
>>27154060
>>27154025
Stay butthurt, faggot.
>>27154204
>Still Suppoting Patreon ,again.
ok, now go away shill.
>>27146847
>fingerbang, now is supporting patreon.
"congratulations".Sarcasm Off.
>>27154215
>Still being butthurt over nothing.
Congratulations, you jobless cuck.
>>27154237
>Oh no ,the shill is mad, run.
patreon is not welcome.
>>27154268
>Oh no, I have no money so I shitpost on 4chan
Butthurt not welcome.
>>27154297
>Oh no the shill is still mad, so is promoting patreon.
you are not welcome too.
>>27154204
>>27154215
>>27154226
>>27154237
>>27154268
>>27154297
>>27154327
Get a room you two, Jesus Christ.
You 're like an old married couple.
>>27154350
>implying is a old married couple.
low quality bait.
>>27154395
Wasn't implying, numb nuts.
I was comparing both of you to a old married couple.
Nothing there was implied.
Now kys.
>>27154470
>Baiting Hard.
>>27154570
>I was just pretending to be retarded
Ok kid, go back to /b/
>>27154570
Ok Ekans, nice shitposting, you can stop now
>>27154634
>>27154619
both are stupid baits.
>>27146847
>>27154003
>>27154011
>Still Advertising.
Can't we all just get along?
>>27154668
>>27154675
Ekans, haven't you learned your lesson? We don't want you here or your shitpost ruses.
Did Savant die trying to put up those posts last night?
>>27154763
no
Get out if it's too much for you
Holy motherfucking shit, have you cunts been bleeding out of your collective diseased anus' about a watermark for basically 90 posts?
Is this person actually brain damaged?
Do you think that image was actually payed for?
Is there any indication of any sort that anyone wants you to go spend your money on anything?
Can you die? Has your autism transcended the mortal plane? If I sacrifice small lives to you, will you grant me power? I still have like, 30 iou souls from highschool. What'll those get me?
Seriously, get the fuck out of here. The only person's time you're wasting more than everyone here's is your own. I pray you have something better to do, although I'm not counting on it.
Seriously, I come home from a ten hour shift to this? We need a better class of shitposter...
>>27154768
>>27154853
is the Patreon's fault.
Everybody shut up about the watermark in the OP image and wait for GreentextSavant to post. It's almost midnight where he is, so he's definitely going to get something out in the next 30 minutes.
>>27154853
blame ekans
>>27154853
>about a watermark
more like a big problem
>>27154875
no u
>>27154875
>Everybody shut up about the watermark in the OP image and wait for GreentextSavant to post.
How about you stop stuffing your fat face and actually write
>>27154919
>How about you stop stuffing your fat face and actually write
The same could be said for you.
Any guesses on who is going to die next in the story?
Someone has to die rescuing Rarity.
>>27146847
>>27154959
>>27154853
This, fucking this. Holy fuck you anti-Patreon fags are autistic.
>>27146847
>Rarity hears the shuffling of many footsteps around the locker. With her hand over her mouth, she waits for the shuffling to go away.
>Just the slightest sound, whether it was her shifting her position inside of the cramped locker or her phone falling out of her lap and hitting the metal surface, would mean the absolute end for Rarity. She doesn’t even cross her fingers, somehow under the impression that doing so would make a sound as well.
>One set of footsteps stops right outside of the locker. It’s as thought Rarity’s booming heartbeat was loud enough to be heard by the predator on the other side of the metal door. And that heartbeat accelerates when Rarity hears the sound of a person squatting down… accompanied by a hungry growl.
>Two or three more sets of footsteps approach the locker after this, only giving Rarity two or three more reasons to remain as silent as possible.
>Rarity can’t hold her breath for much longer, but there’s no way she could be able to breathe undetected in this deathly silence that the zombies carefully scan. As she continues to hold her breath, breathing from the other side of the door emerges out of the growling voice.
>Someone…. or something… is getting eager. As though it is well aware of the potential meal right in front of its snarling face.
>This grim moment takes an eternity and a half before a mechanical whirring undermines the terrifying quiet sounds that used to dominate the room. It’s soon accompanied by an electrical hissing, which catches the zombies’ attention.
>>27155044
>Not more than a few seconds later, the lights in the locker room gradually flicker back on; it’s about time the emergency generators kicked in. Though, it’s hard to tell whether or not somebody manually activated them or not. But what the lights reveal right outside the door only lifts the curtain of Rarity’s now inevitable doom.
>The twisted sneer of a former middle aged man stares directly into Rarity’s bloodshot eyes through the grates. And this face almost looks as though it begins to smile as it causes Rarity to let out a cry of horror.
>And that was all it took.
>The zombie yanks on the handle of the door with all his strength, apparently knowing how to grab on to the thing. It’s more than difficult for Rarity to push her hands and feet against the inner walls of the locker for any sliver of friction, but it is practically of no use.
>With her belt still tied onto the porous door, Rarity is forced to slide forward in the direction of the door itself being pulled open. It seems as though that the zombie could rip the metal door off of its hinges if it hauls with enough strength.
>Even the hinges themselves loudly squeak for a split second, not that it matters.
>At least five more of the zombies crowd around the now open locker door… with all but Rarity’s legs still actually inside of the rectangular crawlspace. Multiple pairs of hands wrap around Rarity’s body and drag her upward.
>She can’t kick hard enough or scream loudly enough to break free.
>The zombies bite into her arms while pulling her away from the locker and further into their grasp. Rarity’s belt, tightly fastened to the door, keeps its hold. But that doesn’t stop the zombies from getting Rarity further into their cluster.
>>27155050
>Like a flimsy cloth, Rarity’s skirt is dragged down her legs by the tight belt, and the girl is soon brought to the center fo the group. Rarity begins to kick once her now bare legs are free again; the zombies lift the legs up tot heir faces and bite into the flesh.
>Both fighting back and crawling away are completely futile with the girl’s arms and legs completely restrained by hands and rows of teeth. The zombies rip her shirt open and bite in to the skin they find, only adding more pain into Rarity’s final moment.
>Rarity’s screams die down before her rapid jolts to break free do, the wounds further motivating her to try to escape the room. But escaping is something she cannot do.
>Out of seemingly nowhere, the sound of a jackhammer through the rooms aisles of lockers. Upon hearing them, Rarity desperately tries to squirm free, only to find herself completely unable to move.
>From all sides.
>…And in the dark once more, surrounded by the interior of the metal locker.
>A faint light appears right at the bottom of Rarity’s field of view. But Rarity doesn’t register it too well with the rampant growling outside of the locker. She doesn’t register much at all when she gradually wakes up.
>The girl turns the brightness of her phone’s screen down to the minimum amount before finding a new text on her screen. She turns the vibrate mode to silent, hoping that the zombies can’t figure out where the first one came from.
>A text from Sunset appears on the extremely dim screen, somehow thwarting the absence of wifi.
>>27155058
Well shit, I never thought I'd end up having to post less than 15 seconds before midnight. There will be more on the way in the next couple of hours, I just wanted to get something in before the time limit.
>>27154945Not even I know yet, Anon. At least regarding which people are going to die the deaths I have planned.
>>27154794
Was busy, but I'm going to be up all night tonight. Will do as many posts as I can.
>>27149462
Nice to hear from you again, Sarge.
>>27148140
>>27148155
Huh. Well that's interesting. Might check it out, though in order to subscribe, I'd have to log back into YouTube for the first time since January.
>>27146201
I'll try not to. But it's okay, you don't have to feel bad.
Guys, I found Luci/Ekans Monev from his isis days
>>27155099
And GreentextSavant/AlexanderGrey returns once again to outshine the shitposters with his actual content!
Good on ya buddy.also don't scare me like that. I thought rarara was done for.
>>27146847
Hello, somebody asked me to post one of my stories on this thread so, here, it's one I like a lot.
>I mostly got over him but, sometimes, when I remember his caring hands, his warm smile, those beautiful moments of him teaching me to play my guitar, his warm embrace on those faithful nights and...
>I'm sorry, I shouldn't be telling you all this. You're a great friend tho, thanks for listening to me. It hurts messing it up like this but, with friends like you, I can stop regretting hurting him so much.
>>27155145
>Sunset Shimmer, the love of your life is talking to you once again
>Sadly she's talking about that idiot again, the stupid Sentry
>Look at her eyes, they are still so full in love with that guy
>What the shit did he do?
>Yes he taught her how to play the guitar
>And yes he was the only one that truly cared about her when she was an evil bitch
>Pretty handsome too, do you remember when you took a peek on his abs? So tight.
>Wait, stop getting so horny boy, that's not the time for that.
>Shimmer almost has hearts for pupils with how she's describing her love life with her.
>It makes you sick
>"Say" you finally decide to answer"ever thought of moving on?"
>"Oh all the time," she says "but I just haven't found the right guy to make me forget about him, you know?"
>"Well" you finally decide to say it "what about, someone like me?"
>"Oh I don't know, bud" She laughs "I wouldn't want someone as wimpy as you. Haha, just kidding, bro. You know I don't mean it"
>"y-yeah, haha..."
>You shut your mouth like the good old beta kid you are and keep listening to her blabbing about Sentry once again.
>You hate that guy so much.
>>27155165
>"Oh hey, Flash!" Sunset said while she walked right behind him.
>"Oh, Sunset! Hey... again." She nervously said.
>You were walking right behind them while holding Shimmer's books.
>"So how are you doing?"
>"I'm doing alright, thank you for asking again. You know I have somewhere else to be right now. See ya." He says as he almost ran away from her.
>"Ok then... bye." Sunset said while slowly waving away while her face showed a painful expression.
>"I'm never going to be able to talk with him ever again, am I?"
>"Forget about that jerk, Sunset. You know, I'll always be with you, forever."
>Pretty smooth, cringe-lord.
>"Oh, thank you so much, bro." she says while she proceeds to hug you.
>"You're the best friend a girl like me could have."
>You can feel the tears filling your throat while you nod respectfully at her.
>"Fucking Flash Sentry." you think to yourself "this is all your fucking fault.
>"Hey, guys?" You heard a voice speaking behind Sunset. It was Sentry.
>"I'm sorry for acting like a jerk just now. It's just that, I'm still a little uncomfortable by all this, you know? But I'm glad that you got yourself someone else, Sunset."
>"What, him?" She suddenly said while breaking the hug "Oh no! We're just besties, he is just helping me with my stuff."
>Flash, understanding your painful situation, looks at you and gives you an understanding look.
>"Oh, I see. I'm sorry man. Anyway, I do have to go right now but I'll catch you later, alright?"
>"Yes, of course! Bye bye, Flashie! I mean, Flash!" She excitedly said while waving her hand. "Oh, you heard that? he doesn't hate me!"
>Great, now you will have to suffer three hours of her telling you how great that piece of shit is.
>Fuck you, Flash.
>>27155168
>At night, you constantly listen to her on the phone.
>Most of the time it was alright, she talked about Twilight and the other girls.
>But when she talked about Flash, oh boy.
>Two hours of an emotional rollercoaster.
>She went from happy to depressed, to angry, to melancholic, to excited, to crying.
>But you were there for her. To comfort her.
>Honestly, you didn't know what she was thinking half of the time.
>She always missed that jerk, but then she was angry at him and then she was depressed.
>That faggot, how could he have left her?
>A girl with such a perfect body, beautiful face and such an innocent soul.
>I mean sure, she was a cunt, but it was his responsibility to crack that tough exterior to bring out the delicate flower inside.
>What an idiot, not being able to take his chance.
>While Sunset was talking, you could feel your feelings blooming more and more, you couldn't hold them in forever.
>So you decided right there, right now, that you were going to tell her how you felt.
>But before that, you had to be sure.
>"Hey, Sunset" you started "what do you think of boys that confess on the phone?"
>"Pfft, what?" she laughed "Why would anyone do that? That's so creepy. What, are they not confident enough? Also, what do you mean by "confess"? That just makes it weird, you know? Flash never confessed to me, you know? He instead knew how to make a girl fall for him~"
>"I see..."
>Fucking Flash Sentry, it's your fault that this conversation will extend two more hours.
>>27155172
>Another time, you invited Shimmer to the movies.
>This was going to be the perfect date for you two.
>First you will watch a romantic comedy with her.
>However, you wouldn't hug her yet, you didn't want to scare her.
>You know you have to give her some space to get comfortable around you.
>Then, take her to eat some ice cream, listen to what she has to say.
>You'll pay for it, of course.
>Finally, you'll walk her back home and you'll earn a kiss on your cheek, which will make her fall for you little by little.
>It's the perfect plan, however-
>"Hey man, what are you doing here?"
>Flash Sentry. What is he doing here?
>"I'm doing nothing" You answer "just waiting for Sunset to go to the movies."
>His expression changed.
>"Wait, she's coming too?" You could see him getting nervous.
>"Yeah, got a problem with that?" You say, trying to reaffirm your manhood.
>"Well yes, I mean no... It's complicated. Anyways, it's nice that you're trying to be with her but, you have to be more assertive around girls, bro."
>Wha- Who does this guy think he is? Giving advice to you?
>"Well I'm sure I can do it just fine."
>"Alright then, but I'll give you a small tip." he said while sitting right next to you "If she agreed to come to the movies, you have to make sure that she's into you. The easiest way to know that is to slowly and subtly touch her fingers. If she doesn't move away, then let the magic flow."
>But you didn't need his advice, your plan was flawless.
>"Alright fine, whatever. Thanks anyways."
>"Good luck. I'll be gone before I meet her alright?"
>Finally, you're in the movie theater with your Sunset.
>Your plan is going alright but the movie is almost done.
>You wonder if his advice is actually good.
>You do what he said and touch her fingers with yours.
>However she moves her hand away.
>...
>That was humiliating, why did you follow his advice?
>Fucking Sentry, he is a piece of shit.
>You don't need his ideas anyway, you can conquer her heart just fine.
>>27155183
>Another day, another launch hour you sit with Sunset and her friends.
>They mostly talk with each other, sometimes to you.
>You don't know why Rarity and Fluttershy look at you with sad eyes from time to time.
>While Rainbow Dash laughs and calls you a whipped fucboi.
>God she's the worst cunt.
>But as long as you can sit with your Sunny Bunny, everything will be just fine.
>Except she starts talking about Flash.
>That piece of shit asshole, always ruining everything.
>Whenver she brings his name, the entire table gets silent.
>It has to be the most awkward conversation topic.
>Everyone in the group of friends knows that Twilight has a crush on him, but Sunset keeps talking about him with no end.
>To the point that Twilight is afraid of getting close to him because he is always trying to avoid Sunset.
>But you don't care about that, the more he avoids Sunset, the bigger chance you have.
However, even you feel bad for Twilight when Sunset goes on one of her rants about that dick.
>Sometimes the group suddenly stand up and leave, tired of her.
>Except for Fluttershy, she wouldn't dare to leave a friend talking to herself.
>Luckily it wasn't very often when she talked about him with them.
>That was your job, unfortunately.
>"So yeah, when I went to the movies the other day I crossed my path with him and we talked for like 10 mins. Oh, that was the best thing of that day."
>So that's why she arrived late.
>"Yeah, that's cool. Now please, can we talk about something else?" Rainbow Dash said.
>"Jeez, no need to get angry. What's wrong with you."
>"Well you talk about him so much that he doesn't even eat in the cafeteria. Can't you see that he is avoiding you for a reason?"
>"Hey, you can't talk to her like that." You say, backing her up.
>"Oh shut it, fucboi, this doesn't concern you." Dash said.
>"...I'm not a fuckboy" you mumble.
>"Ugh!" Twilight had enough, she angrily stood up and walked away.
>>27155216
>And thus, the discussion in the table began.
>You weren't very good with people fighting with each other, especially if they were girls.
>For some reason they tend to scream a lot louder than men.
>You decide to slowly walk away while they were busy in the heat of the altercation.
>They already knew each other when you met Sunset for the first time.
>And ever since you remember, the only times they fight are for the same reason.
>Because of Flash Sentry.
>Oh how much you hated this guy.
>What an annoying, smug kid.
>You still wonder what does Sunset look in him.
>And why she doesn't notice you at all.
>You've been trying to hide your feelings, but by now she'd probably do something, right?
>I mean, a boy and a girl together, it's pretty obvious, right?
>But then why she doesn't see the love in your eyes for her.
>Oh this is so annoying, you thought.
>If only he wasn't here, then maybe you two could be together.
>You sat in the hallway trying to rest when you hear instruments coming from a near classroom.
>Someone is playing in the middle of the break?
>You take a peek and of course, it had to be Flash and his band "Flashdrive."
>What a stupid name, who lacks the self-awareness of that?
>Well whatever, at least, the other two band players know how to play.
>Maybe Flash too but you didn't know much about instruments to give a real opinion.
>After they finished their song, they began talking.
>"Yo, I heard they were fighting in the cafeteria." On of the members commented.
>"Really? what happened?" asked the other one.
>"I think it was Sunset Shimmer and her friends again."
>"Oh no." Flash said while shaking his head. "Why is this happening? What is wrong with her?"
>You try to be as quiet as possible.
>"Hehe, guess she still likes you."
>"Still likes me? She is stalking me. She's practically obsessed. I don't want to call her this way but, she may be a little bit, you know."
>" crazy?"
>>27155145
Is this a repost?
>>27155225
>"Hey I told you not to call her that! but..." He sighs "I don't know, man."
>You keep listening to the conversation.
>"I mean I'm flattered that she still remembers our time together. She is such a cute girl after all but, maybe I should talk to her."
>"What are you planning to say?" One of his friends ask.
>"I don't know. I'm good with words tho, so I'll probably be fine."
>"By the way, who's that guy." one of the members of the band said while pointing at you.
>Oh crap.
>"Him? It's Sunset's friend." Flash answered.
>"Oh right. That guy."
>"What do you mean, that guy." You answer.
>The group of friends sighs and they tell you to come in and close the door.
>"Look, man, we need to talk, alright? I hate seeing bros in your position" Flash said.
>"It is fun, tho." Another one said.
>"Hehe, yeah, but it's still not cool." Flash answered.
>"What are you talking about?" You ask.
>They look at each other.
>"You like Sunset, don't you?"
>How could they know about your secret crush?
>You try to hide your face by looking at the ground.
>"Nah bro, it's cool. I understand, she is cute and she can be very sweet but, I've seen how she treats you, you know?"
>"She treats me fine, thank you." You said half embarrassed, half angry.
>"Well you may think that but... well, you know what friend zoning is, right?"
>The f-word.
>They said it.
>"I-I know what it means."
>"Well there you have it" Flash continues "She's using you without even knowing."
>"What do you know about Sunset?" You answer, now angrier than before.
>"I dated her, man."
>Of course, you completely forgot about her.
>"And even if she changed her ways and is not that big of a, well, naughty girl, some things take some time to die."
>"Yeah man" his friends continue "She used to manipulate Flash all the time in doing whatever she wanted."
>"She used me" he continued "and I see that is happening again, but the worst part is that she doesn't even notice it."
>>27155226
Yeah, an older story. However, I didn't write it in this thread. I used to write my stories on my own threads.
>>27155230
>But you don't believe his snake tongue.
>"You know what? I don't like you talking about my friend like that." You say.
>"Come on, man, I'm just trying to help you." Flash said.
>"By bad mouthing her? I find that very offensive. Goodbye." You finally said while you walk out of the room.
>What does he know about her, anyway?
>He is just bitter, he doesn't understand the new Sunset.
>Jealous that he lost his chance with her.
>Angry that she was mean to him and that he won't have it again.
>It's almost time for class, so you walk into your classroom.
>You see Sunset alone in it too.
>"Hey, what's up?" you ask.
>"Oh nothing, the argument got a little heated and some teachers had to get in." She sighed "They scolded us pretty hard."
>"Don't worry, Sunset, they were in the wrong in that discussion." You say, trying to console her.
>"Oh shut up" she angrily said, "They were kind of right."
>"Oh. I see..." You back down a little and sit down on your bench.
>You didn't want to make her angrier than she was, so it was better to let her cool it off.
>But she didn't stop.
>"I mean, what's wrong with me?! I thought I changed... Now they are angry with me and Flash hates me."
>Maybe, just maybe...
>"Well Sunset, sometimes you need to stay with the people that care the most for you."
>You extend your hand and grab hers. "Like me".
>Her stare tore your soul apart.
>A look of disgust and annoyance.
>"Don't be a creep, alright? I don't nee that right now."
>She pulls her hand back and walked to her seat, leaving you looking at her.
>Your self-respect was crushed.
>The only good thing about this was that no one saw you.
>However, when you turned around to see the door, you could see Flash looking straight at you, shaking his head in disappointment.
>You felt like you wanted to cry, but you controlled yourself.
>>27155239
>For the rest of the class, you doodled on your notebook.
>Nothing much, just small circular patterns.
>Every now and then, you'd turn to see Sunset, but she was looking out of the window with an angry expression.
>Was she angry with you? her friends? Flash?
>Whatever the reason, you were feeling pretty bad from what happened.
>Today wasn't a good day at all.
>When the final bell rang and it was time for everyone to go home.
>However, while he grabbed his school bag, you noticed that Shimmer stormed out of the room, without even looking at you.
>Weren't you always walking home together?
>Why is she acting like this?
>Doesn't matter, though, you blew it up.
>Maybe you didn't pick the right time.
>Or you didn't use the right words.
>Whatever the reason, it didn't matter now.
>You cannot go back in time and now your actions were set in stone.
>Once everyone left the room, you slowly walked out of the door, with your head full of regret.
>You didn't want to do anything, just sit at the computer and waste time.
>That way, no one would see you cry.
>If no one knows you did, it may as well never happened.
>While on the hallway, a hand grabbed you by the shoulder.
>you turned around and saw Flash.
>The torment never ends.
>"Hey are you busy right now? Maybe we could hang around for a while."
>You were going to say no, but you were only able to shake your head.
>"Aw come on, the guys want to head out." Flash pointed at his band mates and two more guys waiting for him.
>You don't usually hang around with people, so why not give it a shot?
>>27155252
thanks
>>27155099
Oh shit we gotta save Rarity!
>>27155252
>>27155252
>So you all walk out of the main entrance.
>"Where are we going?" you ask.
>One of them points out that the closest thing to doing is to waste some time at a small burger place.
>While walking through the street, you see Sunset Shimmer sitting by herself in a park.
>Half of yourself wants to go and hug her, but the other half remembers the trauma of her actions.
>"Hey guys, I'll be right back, you go on without me." Flash said.
>You see him walking into the park and sit beside her.
>After you all arrive at the burgers, they start talking about getting friend zoned.
>"Man, don't worry about it." one of them said "it's shitty but we've all been there. Remember that time? With the girl with the hips?"
>Everyone else laughs.
>"What an evil bitch, but you couldn't do anything else but stare at them."
>"...I'm not friend zoned" you mumble, trying to keep what's left of your self-respect.
>"Don't worry about it, you'll get over it. The first time is the hardest but you'll be able to forget that ho."
>"But, she's my friend." You answer.
>They all look at each other.
>"Man, we've known her since she dated Flash, you know? And from what he told us, that mean cunt is still down there. He told us how she scolded you."
>You try to hide your embarrassed face.
>"Chill, bro. I mean it was funny, seeing someone whipped is always funny, but it builds you, you know?"
>You decide you want to change the subject.
>"Speaking of, where is Flash?"
>"Him? well, he went to talk with her. She's been acting pretty crazy lately, you know? And he went to calm her tits down."
>As you think about what he said, the waitress brings you whatever you ordered.
>>27155382
>Two teenagers were sitting on the bench of a park.
>From afar they could 've seen as a young couple, enjoying their lives.
>However, that wasn't the intention
>Flash Sentry was talking with Sunset Shimmer, trying to make her stop acting that way.
>He was always nervous when he was near her because she tend to act a clingy with him.
>She was never able to let him go.
>In fact, ever since she stopped acting like a horrible person, the love she felt for him grew and grew.
>Since she believed he was the only person that truly accepted her when she wasn't a nice girl.
>Imagine what he could give to her if only he accepted her in his heart once more.
>"You need to stop doing this, Sunset. It's not healthy." He said.
>"I don't care if it isn't, Flash, I still have you in here." She said while touching her chest.
>"Yes, but you forced yourself out of mine, ripping it apart."
>"I know, but I can heal you, I can make the pain all go away." she said while caressing his chest.
>In disgust, he slapped her hand away.
>"Stop! Look, I heard what you did today in the cafeteria. If you keep acting this way, everyone will hate you again."
>"But-"
>"No more buts, Sunset. You lost me long ago, but you still have your friends."
>"I don't want them if I can't have you, Flash!"
>What did she say?
>"Sunset, please, listen to yourself." He said, scared of her.
>"You're that important to me." She got closer to him while caressing his fingers.
>"Remember how you taught me how to play the guitar? I do remember your warm fingers against mine."
>She slowly put her mouth close to his ear.
>"And I know that some part of your body still remember mine~" She playfully said while caressing his leg.
>He was a strong teenager, but a teenager nonetheless. Having such a beautiful girl talking to him was making him doubt himself.
>"I changed, Flash, I'm a good girl now, please, let me show it to you." She said before biting his ear.
>"Well, maybe not that good."
>>27155388
>Her playful breath tickled his ear.
>He felt his body dormant, almost as if she was putting him under a spell.
>The memories of the past were flooding his head.
>The kisses, the hugs, the erotic nights.
>Those were indeed the most enjoyable moments and not even just for the sex.
>However, with the good, came the bad.
>Other things began to hit his mind like a brick.
>The discussions, the times she made fun of him or when she manipulated him.
>Just like she is doing right now.
>"Stop!" He said while pushing her away and standing up.
>"F-Flash?" She said, not knowing what just happened.
>"You're, you are doing it again, Su-... Shimmer. Playing with my feelings for you."
>"Your feelings?" She said, a smile trying to draw on her face.
>"But it's over, you hear me? It's over."
>He walked away, but Sunset caught his arm.
>"Wait, come back!"
>That was the breaking point.
>He was about to snap at her but was able to control himself.
>"You know what?!..." he sighed "No, stop. Shimmer, I don't want to talk to you ever again. I was worried about you, but you just showed me that you haven't changed a thing."
>"B-but-"
>"Enough, Shimmer! Don't talk to me ever again!"
>He forcefully pulled his arm back and walked away, not giving the girl a chance to answer.
>After walking for a couple of minutes to the restaurant with his friends, he could feel the tears swelling up in his throat.
>He almost let her control him like she used to do in the past.
>Flash hated that feeling of powerlessness, of being controlled like if he was a puppet.
>He thought that he finally got over her but, it was obvious she still knew how to push his buttons to make him do whatever she wanted.
>He regrets giving Sunset that kind of power over him.
>If she tried just a little harder, she could still convince him to do her whim.
>He hates to admit it, but he is still under her spell after all this time.
>>27155404
>It was hard to believe, that she would do something like that.
>But by the way, he acted, you could see that it really affected him.
>"Why did she do that?" You ask.
>"Because she used to get everything she wanted that way. By manipulating people into doing her wishes and whims." Flash answered, now more calm than before.
>"So she's the same cunt as before, eh? Just with a goodie two shoes skin." One of his friends said.
>"Come on, forget about her.We were having such a good time. This guy is cool. He's a dork, but he is cool."
>"Hey, I'm not a dork!" You say.
>"Who spends all of his nights in front of the computer?"
>"Me..." You finally said.
>"Ya man. Don't worry tho, you're still alright. Stick with us, we're going to do something this weekend, wanna come?"
>It was almost nighttime when you all got out of the burger place.
>You don't remember the last time you had so much fun with other people.
>You were so busy helping Sunset with her problems that you completely forgot about having some fun for yourself.
>"Hey bro" Flash said before parting ways "The reason I told you all about what happened today was so you'd understand that she's not who she says she is." She thought for a moment for a better way to say it "I mean, old habits are very hard to die."
>You thank him and then return him.
>As you lay on your bed, staring at the ceiling, you still wonder if what he told you was true.
>Well, you'll think about that tomorrow.
>>27155416
>Next day, while walking to school, you see Sunset Shimmer.
>Trying to ignore all the events that happened yesterday, you try and go say hello to Sunset.
>"Hey, how are you doing, Sunset?"
>She turns around and says hello in a very cold way.
>Still hurt by how she answered you yesterday, you decide it would be for the best to let her be.
>The day goes without any incident, until lunch break.
>You were going to sit beside the girls once again, but at the last minute, you decide that wouldn't be the best idea.
>So you go and look for the classroom Flash and his band were playing at.
>For once, you were glad to be eating with classmates.
>The banter, this time, was fun instead of hurtful.
>You felt that you could be a lot more open than with the girls.
>Thinking about it, you were never a big friend of them.
>They wouldn't even know your name even if you asked them about it.
>But these guys were a lot funnier.
>For once, you could actually answer their insults without feeling disrespectful.
>It seems like it would be a nice thing to do from now on.
>Still, you never stopped thinking of Sunset.
>Was she still angry with you and her friends?
>What about Flash, was she still thinking of him?
>Actually, are you still angry with him?
>He hasn't done anything but trying to help you.
>Maybe he's not the asshole you thought he was.
>He's actually really nice.
>"Hey guys," You say after thinking for a while "is it hard to play an instrument?"
>"Why? you want to play in our band?" One asks.
>"Well no, but I think it would be cool to learn to play the guitar or something like that."
>"It's more practice than anything," Flash said, "After a while, you'll get the hang out of it, but you need to practice every day."
>"In that case, would you mind teaching me?"
>>27155423
>It's been a couple of months since you asked Flash to teach you how to play the guitar.
>Since then, you've been hanging around him and his friends.
>Well, I guess at this point you can call them your friends too.
>Luckily your breaks have never been as fun and your weekends are a lot more lively.
>However, on the inside, you still loved Sunset.
>Even after the way she treated you.
>Even after ignoring you the next day.
>Even after ignoring you, for these last two months.
>That's right since you stopped trying to talk to her, she didn't even try to apologize for how she acted.
>You thought that you would test her, so you were going to let her start the conversations this time.
>Not even once, did she do it.
>Not at school, nor online.
>Many times you wanted to break that rule you made and go and say hello.
>But you were able to control yourself.
>Sometimes looking at your phone at her profile picture for many minutes a day, toying with the idea of calling her.
>Why wouldn't she call you? At least to say hello?
>It's not fair, you're the one that always cared for her, worried about her problems and listened to what she had to say.
>Why did you let her control you that way?
>But at least, you found other people that would help you out of this situation.
>Thinking about your new friends, you decide to change your profile picture and add a dumb selfie you took with Flash and your new friends.
>Yeah, it feels a lot better than the one you had with Sunset.
>Looking at it now, it looks cold and embarrassing.
>After some playful banter on the comment section, you decide to finally go to sleep.
>You were happy that you were learning how to play the guitar, even if you sucked at it.
>It was a nice activity to share with your new friends.
>Something to keep your mind away from her.
>>27155439
>The next day, on your walk to school, someone touched your shoulder.
>As you turn back you're surprised that it was Sunset Shimmer.
>"Hey! How are you doing?"
>You're a little shocked that she suddenly spoke to you.
>Why would she do that?
>However, you were happy to see that this time, your crush started the conversation herself.
>"Oh hey! It's been a while. I'm doing fine!"
>After that you start talking.
>It was really nice, catching up with her.
>She even smiled like she used to when you two were together almost every day.
>She laughed at your jokes and you enjoyed seeing her smile.
>Like old times and you were happy to be with her.
>"Say, I saw you changed your profile picture yesterday."
>"Uh? Oh yeah."
>"So you're friends with Flash? That's really nice to hear. You know, I was thinking that, maybe, you could invite me to hang with you guys. You know since we haven't been able to talk with each other for a while."
>Oh.
>So that's why.
>That smile wasn't because she missed you.
>Or because she felt bad and wanted to compensate her actions.
>It was because she found a window to talk with Flash once again.
>That's all you were for her, a window, a tool to be used for other ends.
>For a split, yet the eternal second, the girl you loved so much turned into something else.
>Physically she was the same.
>But you were seeing someone else.
>Someone that disappointed you.
>A shell of something that you used to appreciate so much.
>Was she always like this?
>Listening to what Flash and his friends said, she was.
>Nothing but a manipulative girl.
>"...Are you ok?" She asked.
>"What? Oh yeah... What did you say?"
>"Don't be a dummy" she laughed, "I said that if it was alright for me to hang around with you guys." She said while holding your arm.
>She never held your arm before.
>In fact, she moved away when you tried to touch her before.
>This time, however, it was you who was disgusted.
>"I'll ask them" you finally said.
Faggot13 posting in fingerbang? Truly we are blessed.
>>27155444
>"So that's what she said." You finally said.
>You were sitting in the classroom with your friends as usual.
>You were telling them what Sunset told to you and how it hurt you when you finally realized that she was using you all this whole time.
>First as a drain to complain about Flash and now as a proxy to get closer to him.
>"Ignore her." Flash finally said.
>"No, man, I need to tell her to fuck off." You said. Your other friends agreed with this statement.
>"No, you don't understand. You may think that this is the right move, to feel good about yourself, but trust me, she knows how to convince people."
>He nervously crossed his arms, remembering painful thoughts from the past.
>"The more you speak with her, the more you get entangled in her words. If you go and try to speak with her, she will slowly take you to where she'll be able to convince you."
>"But, what else should I do?"
>"Just ignore her. It's the only way to beat people like her."
>So that's what you did. For the next couple of weeks, you ignored Sunset Shimmer.
>Calls, texts, chats, everything.
>At school, you tried to be as cold as you could possibly be, without trying to be rude.
>Truthfully, this was a very difficult period.
>After all the things she has done to you, you still wanted to be with her.
>A small yet strong part in you still loved her and wanted to be with her for every single minute of your day.
>But you had to remember constantly that she would throw you away the moment she didn't need you.
>Every single moment that your phone rang, she spoke to you or wanted to hang out with you, you had to tell yourself over and over again.
>"She just plans to use me, she just plans to use me."
>After a while, however, she stopped trying to get closer to you.
>Even if there was the smallest of doubts that she was genuine, they all died when she stopped trying.
>Not even a sorry for all the trouble.
>She just stopped trying, almost as if she was bored with you.
>>27155447
>"It hurts, but you have to keep letting her go." Flash said.
>"I know, but it still hurts seeing her every day sitting in the same classroom. Still, I'll keep working on it." You answer.
>"That's great to hear."
>"By the way, you know my side of the story but has Shimmer tried to contact you again?"
>Flash sighed before answering.
>"Of course. She keeps trying to talk with people close to me to get to me. However, almost no one in my circle of friends or relatives really likes her."
>He then looked at the ceiling trying to get into a more comfortable position to think.
>"It's also hard for me, you know? She also has her strings on me and it's scary that she keeps trying to pull them back to her. Hehe, lucky for you, she isn't interested in you."
"I guess." You answer.
>There was an awkward pause between you two.
>"What are you going to do now?" you ask him.
>"For the time being, nothing. I'll just try and keep away from her. Who knows, maybe she'll stop one day."
>"And if she doesn't?"
>He went silent for a while.
>"I don't, I don't actually know. She may even be able to get what she wants." That last part saying it to himself more than to you.
>"But that's my problem now, don't worry about it. You're free from her grasp from now so be happy about it."
>The bell was about to ring when you two grabbed your stuff to go back to class.
>"Thanks for teaching me to play guitar once again, you're a good teacher."
>"Yeah, sadly me being such a good teacher has brought me way more trouble than I wanted." He joked. "Anyway, I'll see you later."
>After that, you went straight into your classroom and sat on your seat.
>Since you were the first on your classroom, you were able to see all your classmates slowly get inside.
>You saw Sunset get inside, crossing her gaze with yours, but ignoring it completely as if she was looking at a wall.
>But you're finally free from her.
>And hopefully, you will never fall like this ever again.
The End
>>27155455
Alright, so the title of this story is "The pain of growing up" and here's the pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/UtGazejU
Thanks for reading it.
>>27155462
Good job, Faggot.
>>27155666
Look at those repeating numbers.
>>27155462
Thank you for posting. I hope we get to see more of your stories soon.
>>27155462
we don't like repost's
Only fresh new green.
If you wanted to repost it you should of just posted the pastebin link and be done with it.
Stop being lazy you cuck
>>27155789
Don't listen to this guy.
>>27155789
You don't speak for everyone.
>>27155789
As it's a story I haven't read, it's new to me. Why do you care? And isn't posting the story instead of just posting a pastebin link the OPPOSITE of being lazy? I know, I know, actual content makes your shitposting look that much worse in comparison, but you don't need to lash out.
It's okay, Anon. Everything's going to be okay.
>>27155823
>>27155852
>>27156021
>Falling for the bait this hard
Wow :^)
>>27155462
go back to normal norman you fucking piece of shit
>>27155462
I swear I've seen this namefag from somewhere
>>27156081
It's not bait when someone is genuinely trying to get people to side with them.
You're just trying to backpedal and make those who called the post out look stupid when no one agreed with >>27155789
The :^) face has never before looked so desperately defensive.
>>27156095
>>27156095
>Mf after reading that
>>27156095
>So much implied and edge in this post
>>27155462
Why are you here?
>>27156106
>>27156110
And there he goes again.
Passing off any criticisms as butthurt. You can put your damage control in one post instead of two, you know.
If anything, take your two :^) faces and evenly distribute them amongst your two posts.
>>27156116
And posting a third time would just make the number odd, just so you know.
>>27156121
But hey, a fourth post can make it even again.
Just make sure that your replies aren't in such an awkward cluster next time so it's not obvious that you're either samefagging or getting your buddies to help you look like people genuinely agree with you.
>>27156095
>>27156136
Calm down dude.
Your edge-o-meter is off the charts :^)
>>27146847
Wouldn't Ember be a dog in that universe?
>>27156136
:^)
>>27156155
>>27156136
Actually, I take part of that back. It's obviously samefagging, seeing that EVERY reply is one minute and a couple of seconds apart.
Like, that's pretty much the most obvious sign of samefagging.
>>27156142
>>27156152
>>27156156
Like these three. One minute and about 20 seconds apart. It's so obvious is almost laughable.
Good luck getting people to believe that you're more than one.
>>27156136
damn man, so much edge in one post :^))))
>>27156172
And again.
>>27156162
Do you want a dog treat now or later? :^)))
>>27156177
nice dubs my friend :^)
>>27156180
At least add a little bit more variety to your pictures. >>27156142
How big is your folder?
>>27156177
o wow ^)
>>27156194
And while we are apparently in the topic, how is your first time on 4chan?
>>27156187
Big Enough
Only 4u :^)
>>27156205
Aww thanks, failed shitposter.
>>27156203
your edge is too sharp for me. :^)
>>27156215
I'll take that as a "you're welcome".
>>27156212
Dude, do you fucking realize the more you respond to him the more it fuels him?
the only way you are going to beat him is to just shut up.
Do you even know how the internet works?
>>27156225
It's three in the morning, and I'm bored with nothing better to do.
>>27155058
GOD DAMN IT SUNSET! YOU FUCKING KILLED HER! FUCK!
>>27156243
Get your hand away from your eyes. I want you to see all of the fucks I don't give.
>>27155058
Dude, why didn't you just make this a gangrape scene?
missed opportunity.
>>27156255
I'm no expert on GreentextSavant and his methods, but I'm pretty sure that zombies like to eat brains, not fug pussy.
>Pic related
This thread in a nutshell.
>>27156273
No but listen, hear me out. These could be like highschool of the dead fuckers because the zombies gangrape Rarity then afterwards eat her
>>27156239
Now to see the infection rate on a survivor.
>>27156287
We don't have rape zombies here, go to trash for that shit.
>>27156155
if can consider support that.
>>27156301
I'm just saying......damn.
>anything I dont agree with or like goes straight to the trash.
>only my opinion matters
>>27156346
guro is a disgusting fetish universally, keep your corpse fucking to yourself or prison.
>>27155058
>[Rarity are you getting these?] The latest message from Sunset really shouldn’t exist.
>The message is still actually there after Rarity rapidly blinks at it during the brief half of a second she sees it before shielding the screen’s glow from view.
>Something within Rarity fiercely wants to respond, to let the others know that by some miracle, she’s actually still alive. But the labored breathing on the other side of the locker door convinces Rarity otherwise. If the girl had hidden the screen of her phone just a split second later, then there would be quite a bit more than labored breathing on the other side of the door.
>Just the tiniest sliver of light would be enough to provoke an attack. Rarity remains still, praying to anything she can imagine for the monster in the dark to retreat.
>…
>After about ten more minutes of driving, Sunset considers sending another text to Rarity’s number. “You sure it worked?” She looks over to Officer Moss.
>”It should. I plugged her mobile phone’s IP address into the system and everything.” He looks back down at the tracking equipment beside his seat. “If you sent a text to her phone, it would surely get there.”
>These words force Sunset’s heart to sink. She tries her hardest not to imagine the worst of possibilities… even though it looks like the most probable at this point.
>Sunset lurches forward in her seat, holding her phone out once more for Officer Moss to plug it back into the cord. “Maybe you put the number in wrong!” Every spurt of hope that Rarity is still alive crashes into Sunset’s mind.
>Officer Moss can tell what’s going on in Sunset’s mind. He frowns slightly as he hears the urgency in her voice, and knows that nothing he alone does can give her closure.
>”She has to answer! There’s no way she wouldn’t answer!” Sunset repeats to reassure herself. “When the zombies came flooding into the gym, they were after the rest of us! And Rarity was safe hiding in the locker room.”
>>27156866
>Officer Snow mumbles under her breath as she listens to Sunset’s now unrealistic rambling. “I knew this was a bad idea.” She gets ready to turn at the next corner, eyeing the paper map of the town with a marker line on the designated route to the school form the station.
>”Hey, now.” Officer Moss immediately states the contrary to at least keep Sunset’s hopes up. “It’s worth a shot. Every life counts, and this life has a huge chance of still being alive!”
>”How do you know, Moss? Huh? What’s your confirmation on that?” Snow has to keep her arms steady with effort as she turns the steering wheel. “This person could have been dead hours ago.”
>Officer Moss turns to Sunset, trying to get her to continue what she was saying before. Sunset turns to the driver with tears starting to cloud up her eyes.
>”You don’t understand.” She tries to explain, setting her phone back down on the seat. “She wasn’t even anywhere where the zombies could know where she is. She was literally already hiding before they came in. The others told me.” Her voice is starting to audibly quaver.
>Officer Snow quietly scoffs before turning her attention back to the road. She takes a quick glance into the rear view mirror after this, just barely able to see the silhouettes of the zombies still in pursuit of the SUV, barely appearing in the distance. “Yeah, well… we already did out part in getting a few of those bastards away from the station.” She bites her lower lip with squinting eyes. “And to be honest, I was willing to see how far away we can take them, but that would mean taking longer to get back to the station.”
>>27156870
>A shock makes Sunset’s eyes go wide as she hears this. “But we’re almost at the school.” Sunset tries to find a way to point it out to her from this side of town.
>The current location they’re in should be at least remotely close enough to be able to see the school in the distance. This HAS to be worth it. If Sunset can at least save one… just one of her friends, then she can at least have one thing to remind herself about this day as she tries to go through whatever it is that awaits her tomorrow.
>”But if she’s not replying right now… like…” Officer Snow tries to lay in on Sunset easily, having picked up on this being one of the girl’s friends in question here. “Time is a major factor, here.” Between the lines, Sunset can hear the words “we have to turn around” in what she’s trying to say.
>”I can try again.” Officer gestures for Sunset to hand him the phone so he can connect it to the wire.
>The SUV turns once again right as he does this, and Sunset recognizes this street. She glances ahead through the windshield to spot Canterlot High just down the block.
>”It’s there.” Sunset immediately points her finger at the building. “That’s it right there.”
>Officer Snow sighs as it dawns upon her that it’s too late to turn back. She thinks about how much of a waste of time it would be to go into that building only to find nobody alive. If only there had been a reply on the girl’s phone would there be a confirmed reason to go into the school that now stands right in front of the SUV; the horse statue a few feet away from the metal bars over the front grill.
>”We just have to go to the gym, I promise!” Reminds Sunset, already unbuckling herself. “I can lead the way if you want, Officer Snow.”
>>27156297
Never mind, I am a dumbass and didn't notice that it was a dream.
>>27156874
Oh shit, Sunset is gonna break the floodgate isn't she? When those doors open they will come.
![[80's music plays in the background].gif](https://i.imgur.com/oku2hG7.gif "[80's music plays in the background].gif")
>>27156874
>Officer Snow holds her hand out to shush Sunset, watching the distance in the direction from which she just drove. Surely enough, about three of the zombies appear running, having locked their sights on their target: the SUV itself.
>Upon seeing the approaching danger, Officer Snow keeps her hand held out. “Moss! With me, now. Sunset, stay here.” She steps out of the vehicle onto the open road with Officer Moss doing the same on the passenger side.
>Their presence becomes known to the zombies in an instant.
>”O-officer Snow?” Stutters Sunset.
>”Just sit tight until I say it’s safe!” The lady sternly replies after drawing her gun. “And you can call me April.”
That's all of the definite green I have for now, and I'm currently looking back into the story to see if it would be possible changing one Twilight dying to the other. I'm still iffy on whether or not I should do that, and it would be really hard to make it work with SciTwi not caring about Flash or being a princess or anything like that.
>>27156255
>>27156287
I'm not saying that this isn't a creative idea, but I'm probably not going to do that. I've written my share of fetish-y stuff,most of which centered around Rarity anyway.
>>27156900
It's fine. Fun fact, I myself generally have the attention span of a whole 5 seconds max.
>>27156912Maybe.
>>27154876
>>27154768
>>27154634
Blaming Ekans for Fingerbang "dying" is on par with blaming Obama for 2012 being the "end of the world".
He has literally nothing do do with what's going on right now.
>>27153282
Story's fanfics a were all the same cookie cutter generic protagonist one-shots with boring plots and predictable endings only with different female characters each time. He was literally a shit version of Holy who didn't improve much at all even after writing like 30 stories.
To say that "everything he made was gold" is stupid. You're only white knighting the guy.
>>27155462
I still love your shit m8...I miss you
>>27156135
Someone asked me to.
>>27156090
I don't post in norman, except that one time. No need to be so violent.
>>27157645
>I don't post in norman, except that one time. No need to be so violent.
Don't worry, mang.
>Someone asked me to.
I'm happy to see you.I gave you my e-mail adress to find me at skype. Move your ass.
I enjoyed your story!
>>27157662
Added since a while ago but you haven't accepted it.
>>27157695
You sure you done it right? I don't have it.
>>27157704
I'm sure.
>>27157725
Did you write something to me?
There are two accounts whit the same name and picture.
>>27156928
Im sure you can make it work Greeny, I mean its not that hard considering you killed her quickly, thus minimizing stories containing her You starts the story with Twilight in her hose,using a car, and texting, a complete set of human interaction, something that SciTwi would do, not by Princess that resides in another dimension, who lives in a castle.
SciTwi might not as intrested in Flash as Princess were. However when shit literally goes down, and Flash decided to protect her, it would be very unlogical for her to start dismissing him. Twilight isnt being intrested in Flash in the story, she is only doing what a sane person would do, which is sitting in the bay while someone else is willing to do something else much dangerous.
Its really not as hard as you think it is. The word Princess literally only appear once in the pastebin once, and as far as I know, it affect completely NOTHING in the flow of narratives, beside pointing out the identity of Twilight being missing. Remove that word, and replaced the word "leader" with "friend", and it wont budge or disrupt the story in any way. Not to mention that CHS students quickly recognize Dean Cadence and Indigo Zap, meaning that the story happened after Friendship Games, meaning that SciTwi are bound to enroll there. Im sorry man, but in my honest opinion, stating that the Twilight being killed here is actually the Princess Twilight would only make things weirder and more complicated.
But this is your story,I can only give you suggestion about it. Thanks for listening! and if you or anybody here had drawing request, just shoot right away!!
>>27157750
I want a pic of Indigo trying to grasp at Rainbow's heel as she gets brought down by zombies in front of the gym doors.
>>27157662
welcome back fapman, thoughts on GreentextSavant's story?
>>27157783
Sorry, not read. Lost the pastebin link, or my brain.
>>27157790
got you man, have the big zombie story. http://pastebin.com/BYpgLyGi
>>27157743alright, alright, in that case just add me. [email protected]
funny thing, I went to the Norman thread and odd thing, there were only 2 stories and both were old reposts. I think we are winning.
Letting everyone know, Slave general was sniped again, its remade now, saying this incase this is taken out as well.
>>27158365
It's back now? Thank goodness.
>>27158941
its been back, but it got deleted an hour ago until it got put back up.
>>27146847
bump from 9
>>27146847
>>27146847
bump
>>27160886
for the patreon link.
>>27160895
shut up
>>27160903
no, you are blind or something, the OP had a Fucking patreon link.
>>27160903
Just ignore them.
>>27160984
stay mad, shill.
>>27155011
thanks faggot
>>27156928
>>27149462
Best writers of /fb/
Page 8 bump
I bet sunset runs into an undead twilight.
>>27154194
EQG will be retconned by the end of the season. :^)
>>27162780
>>27163416
>bumping a patreon thread
shill in denial.
>>27163416
With all the bullshit going on in the thread, everyone forgot your namefagging ass is still around.
>>27163995
I'd applaud him for his acting, but I don't think his autism is fake.
>>27146847
bump from 9
>>27156354
>>27165116
"sarcastic clap"
>>27163968
How is this a patreon thread?
Who's looking forward to Legends of Everfree?
>>27166739
here.
>>27148077
>NaOH has been discovered to be in on most of the shitposting
How?
>>27167034
Ignore him. He's just lying to start shit, and it didn't even work.
>>27165900
I don't know, some fuck earlier said there was a patreon link at the start of the thread information. I think it is a random acting like a troll.
>>27168046
A watermark depicting a patreon link is about on the same level as the watermark depicting their tumblr or deviant art. You can't even click on the link, it's a watermark that just happens to be part of the free version of the picture.
Like, (this part right here isn't specifically directed towards the post I'm replying to) what was the poster supposed to do anyway? Photoshop the patreon watermark out? There is nothing wrong with posting the free version of a patreon supported image if the poster just wants to show it off in a 4chan thread. It's just an image that is related to the topic, and the patreon site is one of the places where the artist operates from. The poster is not telling people to go to the website, they're just including a picture they found on the internet to set the thread theme.
The logo shouldn't be forbidden from being shown on an anonymous image board just because it relates to a site where the artist makes money.
That's overly nit-picky as fuck.
And to everyone who might reply to this with your "ur just defending patreon u shill" comments, your argument is shit and bases its premise that relies on jump logic and stating the contrary for either the sake of trolling or the sake of being contrary. You're not funny, or cool, or smart, orloyal, or grateful, and I don't appreciate that.
And to take this a step further, I reverse image searched the OP image and found one that doesn't have the "shilling" patreon watermark.
https://cdn.everypony.ru/storage/00/09/61/2016/04/20/938cfcb134.jpg
Now shut up, take your excuses and walk out with them.
>>27168242
Most reasonable post I've read here in days thank you
>>27168242
This.
I've been wondering, has anyone ever written Flash going to equestria with Twilight? And I don't mean it in a romantic way. I mean like he's curious about Twilight's world after all she told them about it and wants to see it for himself. I've been playing around with this idea in my head for a couple of weeks now but I want to know if it has been done before I start writing anything.
>>27168753
I dont think so. It was an excellent and intresting premise anon. Bonus point if you dont write him like a douche without no apparent reason.bonus points if you make it till the end to be a friendship green, but implying romance in the future, so it wont be too cheesy
>>27168915
I'll try my best. Although it won't be anything long like savant's or naho's greens. At least, I hope not. Last time I thought something would be short it ended up been 12k and a pain to finish.
daily reminder that ekans/luci/13 did nothing wrong and that he is the hero of fingerbang
Anybody know what happened to sleepover anon? His green was getting really good.
>>27170219
He died.
So are we legitimately back or do we have to snickity snake because we won't abandon the dream?
>>27170409
We're back.
>>27170450
Fucking finally.
>>27171807
Nice shitpost, anon.
>>27171807
That's semen, isn't it?
>>27171833
Yes
>>27171953
>"You asked for two ice cubes in your drink, but I only put in cum!"
>>27171807This is almost up there with the RD boiling in a jar filled with cum.
Savant where are you?
>>27172828
Right here.
>>27156928
>Officer Moss is the second one to draw his gun. He slowly backs away from the approaching trio, bumping into the SUV as they get close enough to see the whites of his eyes. The whites of Sunset’s eyes explode with anxiety before the girl covers them with her hands.
>Without hesitation, April pulls her trigger, and Moss does the same after hearing the first ear-splitting shot ring out.
>The first hit goes right to the front zombie’s head, blowing the undead lady back and nearly making her fly out of her own torn shoes. Once the sound of her head hitting the asphalt before the rest of her body reaches April’s ears, the officer directs her barrel towards the next target and fires.
>It’s like clockwork; the second zombie goes down in exactly the same way the first one had, and the same happens with the third zombie. Officer Moss lowers his gun after he realizes that it’s better for him to save his bullets until his partner needs to reload. The extensive focus in April’s eyes as she mows the zombies down one by one reassures Moss that it will take a lot more than just three zombies to get past her when her gun still has ammo.
>One more shot later and four zombies lie in the middle of the street, three of which are motionless. April approaches the only one still moving and hits the target Officer Moss barely missed on it before — the head.
>But April is not convinced that the first four will be all; she eyes distant far end of the street, hastily reloading despite having a couple of bullets left. “Moss, check the other direction.” She scans a number of the yards of surrounding houses along with the grounds of the school.
>>27172999
>Now a little bit more confident about who has his back, Officer Moss raises his gun once more and finds a lone zombie slowly approaching on his side from one of the houses. He aims as precisely as he can and waits for the undead man to get just a little bit closer. “We got one right there!” His finger gets ready to squeeze the trigger.
>”Same here! Smoke him!” April points her reloaded gun and shoots first. “Try not to miss!”
>Officer Moss waits until the zombie he has his gun pointed towards reaches about fifteen feet from him. He knows that it would only take about two more seconds for those rapid legs to move that scowling face to his neck. Moss pulls the trigger in an instant, praying that he’s had at least enough experience to pull off a rushed headshot from ten feet away.
>A hole in the zombie’s forehead appears and the lifeless body slams down onto the grass below. After seeing nothing else coming in his direction, Moss spins around after hearing a gunshot behind him. He sees another zombie fall forward into the street.
>Over a (nearly) silent minute of heavy breathing goes by before April turns her attention over towards the school. “Alright, we’re clear. Let’s move in.” She lightly taps on the side window of the SUV with the butt of her handgun. “Sunset, come on.”
>Sunset scrambles out of the back seat and nearly falls out of the vehicle. She clumsily follows the two Officers already heading to the school before regaining composure.
>”Offic- uh, April?” She stutters, still shivering from the event. “Did you shoot all of those?”
>April smirks at the girl. “Most of them, yeah. Why? You weren’t looking?”
>Sunset shakes her head, staying silent as April continues.
>>27173006
>”Heh… well I’ve been in the force for ten years. Got pretty handy with a pistol. But that’s a story for another time… we need to find somewhere to enter.” She turns to the other officer. “Moss, stay on your toes!”
>Officer Moss perks up as he reaches the glass front doors. “Oh, uh, right.” He gets ready to try the front doors, but instantly backs away and draws his gun.
>He saw a LOT of movement in there, and April can tell through how fast he jumped away from view from inside the building. It was too dark inside through the tinted windows to see what was going on.
>”How many? Did they see you?” April grunts one question after another in a half-whisper while pointing her gun towards the front entrance.
>Officer Moss trembles in his shoes. “Like… t-ten… maybe more.” His voice suddenly sounding a lot more submissive than before.
>”TEN?” April’s own arms start to tremble as this dawns upon her. “Sssshit! Around the corner! Now!” She directs the other two along the outside of the school without a second of hesitation.
>They stop around a corner to ensure their absence from the zombies’ line of sight in the apparent pack were to swarm out the doors. No noises so far; no doors opening, no banging, no footsteps, no growling, nothing.
>April turns back to Sunset, still keeping most of her attention focused on her surroundings. “Where did you say you left from again?” Her voice stays in a hushed tone.
>”The… the gym. It’s on the other side. We have to go around.” Sunset brings up.
>”Alright…” April already starts off to the other side of the building. “Go go go!”
>The three turn around another corner, momentarily along the side of the school at about the midpoint between the front entrance and the gym at the back. What sounds like the shuffling of footsteps just barely makes it to April’s earshot. She of corse alerts her partner about this, hardly haven taken two more steps.
