Good End Edition
ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost
List of stories: http://anonpone.pineapplecomputing.com/
Read this advice first:
http://anonpone.pineapplecomputing.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice
>What day is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151810
>What time is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151833
>What genre are you interested in?
http://strawpoll.me/5151994
>What if I cannot into art?
http://strawpoll.me/5207921
>What race would you play?
http://strawpoll.me/5498136
Remember: You can do the thing
Last thread: >>26082801
>>26095905
First for all dead CYOAs. RIP in peace.
>>26095905
You're an inspiration for birth control
2nd for kitty burds
Yeeeah baby, work that grill.
>>26095928
get fucked
Is it just me, or is Wander another Coltshan(tm) production?
>>26095977
why a fucking squirrel?
>>26095989
Why not?
Reminder
>>26095989
Because Res
>>26096003
A compelling reason indeed
>>26095989
Because Res has a pet squirrel.
>>26095989
Res got a squirrel in a desperate attempt to be less of a normie.
>>26096031
I bet that only leads to even more normal fag contact
>>26096063
>our first date
>>26096063
I want to see the aftermath of propane exchange
Pony ears on hippogriffs r dumb.
>>26096096
*cute
>>26096102
Being dumb can be cute, just not in this case.
>>26096119
ur wrong
>>26096130
No, you are
Would you save him?
>>26096144
I would wrap him in a burrito after
>>26096141
No, you are
>>26096157
Nu uh, you are
>>26096144
For $17000.
>>26096166
>>26096169
GC pls
>>26096178
He started it!
>>26096156
Look at how happy you made the little guy
>>26096188
>professional contacts
>>26096144
i would hire prostitutes after for him
>>26096144
I would jump in after him, but then pretend to drown myself so I could be the last thing he clings to before he sinks to a plastic demise.
But then I would save him.
>>26096214
Who the fuck are you?
>>26096193
no u did!
>>26096236
A newfag who doesn't realize that the name field is optional.
>>26096250
Hey, you're not me!
>>26096214
Pen pls
>>26096250
Nu uh, don't make me tell auntie cewestia!
>>26096236
the one who will fuck your anus so badly that you will walk whit crutches for 4 months and when you poo you will not push anymore
>>26096270
Cocни бoльшoй и тoлcтый.
>>26096262
I am he as you are he as you are me
Hey again Anon!
What are some of your favorite quests and for each, what's one thing you wish they would do better?
>>26096325
Vampony
Coltquest
I dunno tbqh ponks
>>26096325
Nips
To not run at 2 am
>>26096325
M&M
That it ran longer:(
>>26096325
Super, 11-54, NE
uh...
>>26096366
RIP M&M =(
>>26096325
JAD
That it wasn't dead;_;
>>26096366
Yeah, shame that Hero's going to hang out with boats for the next 8 years, because the ending felt really rushed.
>>26096325
Bless you for trying to keep discussion alive, ponk.
Long Name: post when the next update is going to be before disappearing for a day.
Dirty Work: outlaw all odd numbers
AirJAD: start existing already
>>26096370
Come on Anon, surely they're not perfect.
>>26096433
I don't know man, Super is pretty good and I've yet to see many complaints about it.
>>26096433
I like them as is. Would be nice if they ran more.
>>26096394
>2 elements in the same chest
>practically pushed into going to Canterlot
>all but 2 Medusa's conveniently locked up so we can just walk to the Grand Medusa.
yeah the end was Deffo rushed.
M&M was still good overall though.
>>26096464
Well he'll disappear off the face of the planet on the 8th so I can see why.
>>26096471
Did he go to Africa?
>>26096479
He's joining the navy.
He won't have internet for a whole year.
>>26096479
He is going to Mars
>>26096489
In a boat.
Trottingham died this morning, and I just arrived from a nice 11 hour long day at uni, so I'll start a new thread tomorrow.Still, thanks for the bumping effort guys, you gold.
>>26096506
Fins that's lewd.
>>26096464
There were a good few conversations I would have liked to have with party members and some more places I would have liked to visit, just unfortunate that real life happened.
>>26096535
We could have done so much more.
>>26096535
The obvious ones were the Carver and Flash bonding side activities.
>>26096325
Across the OceanHeart attack warnings.
>>26096535
I wanted to see Cloudsdale's bars with Gis
Active threads
M&M Last Chance: >>26064761
ButtQuest: >>26080948
Threshold: >>26041486
Necroquest: >>26029016
Coltquest: >>26077971
Alchemy: >>25979911
Space: >>26073430
Galloping Steel: >>26043559
Vampony: >>26031454
11-54: >>25975103
Long Name: >>26031398
YRWYS: >>26041573
Wander Quest: >>26089797
SIM: >>26029095I blame you for letting Super die.
>>26096144
Dashcon CYOA?
>>26096729
I've been wondering, how do you pick the order that you list the active threads in?
>>26096750
Nostalgia kek.
>>26096799
Starting at the top of the catalog and going down.
Amm, I'm a dumbass. How does the new report system work?
>>26096729
>spoilerI didn't mean to
>>26096829
You're full of shit, anon. The truth is: you hated that bitch.
>thread dies
Guess I'll make a new one in a bit.
>>26097019
WEAK
FUCKING
SISTER
>>26097047
Which thread died?
>>26097071
all of them
CYOA'S are dead/
I don't like being dead when I didn't mean to, let's fix that
>>26097257
>last thread
>>26097307
>fuck airship
wew
>>26097307
even trying end super
>>26097307
>Space rape
>>26097307
>>26097307
>Nips tiny part
so he /does/ have a very feminine penis
>>26096144
Anyone got the dubs version of this?
>Your CYOA-waifu becomes real
>butyou're trapped together in a Coltshan-quest
>>26097307
>anon love quests
>another cyoa?
>Changelings got Coltshan
>shit space
>gay shitposting ideas get fun people going
>Vampony anime
>edgy quest really wants something cool
>>26097307
>perfect Urban special
>>26097521
>The Urban Holiday Special
>>26097475
This took me literally like thirty seconds. Enjoy anon.
>>26097575
>not CHECK 'EM
Or does he want me to check electromagnetism?
>>26097575
Not what I meant but I'm damn well saving it
>>26097588
wew
>>26097591
What did you mean?
>>26097610
There was a thread that got caught in a tidal wave of dubs checking and someone made a pic of all the balls saying "dubs posters". It's incredibly stupid but I find it amusing
>>26097644
Oh okay, I haven't seen that one, but maybe it would help if you checked those sweet double digits you're having there.
>>26097341
Oh look, Punishment lives once again.
So, who else finds themselves wanting to see their favorite MCs succeed in life?
I would love to see Dandy rise in the Threshold rank and learn more of the secrets that the organization holds.
I would love to see Sharp pay off her debt and rise through the ranks of the syndicate until she runs the most organized organized crime ring ever.
I would love to see Baroness Etherbreeze become Viscountess Etherbreeze, then Countess Etherbreeze, then Marquis Etherbreeze, then Duchess Etherbreeze, and finally Princess Etherbreeze.
>>26097816
But if she has no wings then how would she become a Princess? :^)
>>26097816
Remember, there's always a chance of a bad end.
>>26097816
I want to see Blit-
I want to see Octav-
I want to see Anong-
>>26097575
>75 75
Unorthodox dubs, Gar
>>26097843
>no wings
SHE HAS WINGS ON THE INSIDE!
>>26097876
Why doesn't Hijacker just run Airship Quest?
He's already on his way to becoming Nips 2.
And with all his Innkeeper dicksucking, he might become No. 35 2
>>26097816
I would love to see Chalk Dust fall to her demons and killing Red Glare, The Pink Laugh, and The Queen only to just take her place as the rightful ruler of the city.
don't fuck quest when?
or a herding or studding quest would be nice.
>>26097816
I wanted to see Aurora become a powerful warlock but idiots killed her.
>>26097816
>princess Etherbreeze
Why stop there? I've always thought Equestria is too small, and "Empress Etherbreeze" has a nice ring to it.
Two things Amm.
1: When switching from pastebin back to the posted image, the pic won't actually show up and will stay on the pastebin part.
2. There is a duplicate version Fruit and his sisters in the fanart section of SS.
>>26098027
Overlord.
>read first line
>read second line
>>26098236
The conditioning works.
>>26098236
what?
>>26098027
>>26098069
Godness
>>26098069
>>26098308
Yes, I can see it now. God Empress Etherbreeze Clearsky, who once she had conquered her own Equestria proceeded to invade all the other CYOAs and bend them to her will, uniting all of the multiverse into one colossal cross-dimensional empire.
>>26098236
Wait a minute...
>>26097905
Yeah, but Princesses need wings on the outside.
And if she became an alicorn would she just get a second horn, since she's already a pegasus?
>>26098000
Now there's one more statue in Sombra's garden!
>>26098454
>would she just get a second horn, since she's already a pegasus?
and here I thought I could hold onto my sides
not today, it seems
>>26097910
you mean No. 70
>>26098454
I CAN'T HEAR YOU! LA LA LA LA LA! SHE IS A PRETTY PEGASUS! SHE HAS BIG FLUFFY WINGS!
>>26098236
What the hell is this, anyway?
>>26097910
Because a couple reasons
>because someone else pitched the idea with the intent of running it, me doing the same would be in poor taste
>too many other quest ideas, wanna finish ONE first
>>26097968
Anon you just want a lewd impregnation quest, don't you?
Just be honestI was one of the folks gunning to knock up hope too, you don't have to be shy
>>26098656
Why aren't you running Butts right now?
>>26098717
He has to cook 7 dinners, walk 3 dogs, and rescue 5 groups of friends from bad neighborhoods first, Anon.
>>26098236
>>26098717
I'm at work
>>26098877
How intellectually demanding is your work? Do you maybe need to run butts at the same time?
>>26098678
Not that anon
But i would like a quest where you get to be the little mare in her first estrus
>>26097910
How can you not suck perfection?
>>26098408
Pretty sure she'd get wrecked by the memes
>>26098911
With lots of lewds, a typical "go anywhere, fuck everything" quest or something more real, dealing with the strange new side of yourself, being insecure and entering a sort of dialog with your new self in the context of the world around you?
>>26098911
The club was discussing a Butt-touch 2 and two of the possibilities were a: the fillies go into their first estrus and its a 'dont fuck quest'. or b: The fillies go into their first estrus and you play the colts in an episodic horror/comedy where one of the fillies is hunting each class colt.
>>26097307
How is this done?
>>26099049
http://www.wordle.net/create
>>26099047
I really like the second idea, personally.
>>26099038
I finally return from work.
Let's continue the Quest.
>>26099047
All 'don't fuck' quests will immediately fall into getting fucked at the first or second opportunity. It's really hard to incentivize people against free lewd.
The second one could be fun though. Woe to the colt that gets Terminator dawn after him.
>>26099007
Kind of a mixture of both
Like she was planning on something like this but is to shy to actually try anything
>>26099101
>Soft Serve being hunted by Dawn
>Finally catches him
>informs her he's actually a filly
>"Don't care, bend over."
>>26099056
>>26099200
>>26099230
What exactly did you lose? I don't quite get it.
>>26099243
a post he wrote on obviously
>>26099230
I feel you, man. The back button is my worst enemy
>>26099243
His entire update
>>26099230
This is exactly why you use Word to type out your posts.
>>26099230
LIVING ON THE EDGE
>>26099252
>>26099253
Wait, you mean there are still QMs who write their posts directly in the browser? Holy shit that sucks, but he seriously had it coming.
>>26099282
Is this the new meme?
>>26099285
Jacku does it
>>26099230
lel who cares
>>26099285
This shit has happened to me numerous times over the years and the consequences never stick for me for more than a few months.
People get lazy, man.
>>26099302
no he doesnt.
>>26099302
>constant streams showing that he writes his updates in word
>>26099302
Nope.
>>26099322
It happens to pretty much everyone, but the difference is that it usually happens to everyone only once or twice at most before they switch. Got nobody to blame but yourself otherwise.
>>26099296
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nqcL0mjMjw
> again and again and again
>>26099344
The switch is real mang, I have seen the light.
>>26099361
Good man
>>26099230
>loses post
>presumably still unable to make word cloud despite browser restart.
too creul
>>26099379
I have since swapped to writing in word because I have lost far too many updates from shenanigans
[dpoiler]I still sometimes lose posts, too
>>26099441
wew
>>26099208
Wouldn't soft serve be in estrus to?
>>26099457
Maybe, maybe not
>>26099441
Either ctrl+s or get off mobile, scrub.
>>26099463
Urban's up
>>26099285
I know Hero typedall his updates directly into the browser.
Sloth pls
>>26099476
If I was able to get off mobile I'd be running
>>26099514
>>26099514
wot
>>26099566
>Bats
>Mentally challenged
Redundant
>>26099573
But without that how would you point out exceptionally dumb bats?
>M&M's over
Reminder that chubby bats are cute
>>26099566
Run the thing.
>>26099562
Easy pls
>>26099562
That pony is hot.
>>26099630
Tubby Tara a QT
>>26099630
Steelie needs to provide the extra filling.
>>26099662
sweet sweet custard
>>26099486
Pure threesome incest when?
>>26099662
>tara and steel have expressed mutual affection
>we probably won't be playing as them next time hijacked runs
AWKWARD FIRST DATE MISSION WHEN
>>26099624
Another quest goes to Valhalla
>>26099688
>conversation combat system
>mc must combo to avoid spilling spaghetti
>>26099636I'm busy getting a lot of images done for it, especially a map of the city. I'll likely be read at the end of January.
>>26099719
Uhh.... Do nothing to save AP!
>>26099725
Then run the other thing.
>>26099733
>Steel says something
>Tara sits there for a minute staring at him
>sweatingguard.jpg
>Its a Coltshan quest
>>26099725
hype
>>26099755
>she take a mango out of her bandanna and takes a bite
>Taunt
>>26099755
![add[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/mRaSlp2.png "add[1].png")
>>26099760
>>26099755
Inflicted status on Steel Charge!
Enemy stunned!
Enemy addled!
Enemy feared!
Enemy silenced!
>>26099760
I said so before. It HAS to be coltshan
>>26099760
Where?
>>26099760
Is Wander really coltshan? I just dropped it because the writing was an incoherent mess.
>>26099768
>>26099698
Thanks for reminding
>>26099859
Space Vex should probably get one too.
>>26099849
Back to not being dead, at least for some time.
>>26099859
;_;7
>>26099681
Treads is not for incest
>>26099975I think we need a treads edit of >>26099681 now
>>26099975
Anon pls
She needs someone in her life and she has two loving brothers
>>26100060
How did that family's parents fuck up so bad?
One who's delusional and drives tanks in a mental institute and two socially inept morons.
>>26100060
But are they BIG brothers
>>26100132For her
>>26099859
Where's The Nine Lands' (Chapter 1)?
alright time to get started.
PZ pls
>You are Treads Softly
>Filly
>And most importantly
>The BEST tank commander!
“Rrrrrmmmmbbbmbmbmmmmll”
>And by your side was your BEST driver, Little Star!
“We’ll show ‘em today, Little Star!”
>His plush head droops slightly
“I know I say that all the time, but we really will today! I have a secret weapon!”
>You present the most powerful round your behemoth could ever fire
>It was FOUR PLY
>The Guard will HAVE to take you seriously now!
>Tanks ARE real!
>You traverse the yard in your unstoppable cardboard juggernaut
>You grind to a halt
“Eeeeeeee!”
>Your screeching brakes catch the attention of a pegasus guard immediately
>”Oh! Hello little filly! Quite the impressive armor you have today! Is that a new cannon?”
>You nod gleefully, ready to explain the robust composition of the new main cannon
>You got it from a post office!
“Sure is, Mister Sir! This one can fire a new round I made!”
>”Who’s this brat? Why is she boxed up like a present?”
“BRAT!?”
>”Oh, hey Siqueue! Did you want to see little Tread’s new heavy armor?”
>”…Her what?”
>”Her heavy armor? She calls it a tank!”
>”That’s completely rid-“
>Nopony calls you a BRAT!
>You load the 4 ply payload into your main cannon
“GUNNER, FIRE!”
>Siqueue cocks his head to the side
>”Huh?”
>The round flies out at an alarming speed
*Thunk!*
>Siqueue remains nonplussed
>…For all of two seconds
>Mister Sir struggles to keep Siqueue from assaulting you
>”I’LL REND THAT LITTLE TWERP!”
>”EASY! IT WAS JUST A JOKE!”
>You ready another round for delivery when suddenly
>”HEY!”
>You look in the distance.
>There appears to be two heavily armored ponies walking towards the commotion
>Not like it matters
>Your armor was the HEAVIEST!
>Nothing will beat your tank!
>You squeeze Little Star totally not because they’re a bit scary.
>>26100140
Of course
Anybody can be a big pone to her
But are they big to regular sized pones?
>>26100170
K.
Super's up.
>>26100182
>”Any particular reason you’re trying to assault a FILLY, Private Siqueue?”
>”The little ankle biter was disrespecting a Guard, sir. Completely uncalled for.”
>”And Siq’s salty he got rekt by a filly”
“That’s right! I’ll take you on any day! Gunner, load 4 ply!”
>Little Star droops in response
>Siqueue can only grumble as the blue unicorn approaches you
>”The name is Steel Charge.”
>His voice takes on a kinder tone as he speaks to you
>”So I heard you shot one of my ponies with something. I take it your ensemble is to blame?“
“It’s a tank! Its got heavy armor, and unmatched firepower! Kneel before the power of tanks!”
>”Unmatched firepower?”
“That’s right!”
>At first, he’s somewhat confused
>Then, a smile slides across his face and he chuckles
>”Show me.”
>The shot rings out
>A hefty roll of booty wipe rockets out of the barrel
>And strikes Steel right in the face
>Time seems to slow as the plushy round squishes his muzzle a bit
>He topples backwards
>Steel’s armor clatters as he falls onto his back, and his two friends rush to his aid
>Siqueue sounds somewhat surprised
>”Sir?”
>Sir tacks on a much less caring, and more deadpan
>”Staff Sergeant. Please. It’s just toilet paper.”
>You celebrate your victory in the duel
“WOOO! YAY! Another victory for us!”
>Little Star bounces and tumbles through the air
>Steel sits up and examines the spent round
>”Huh. Four ply?”
>He shakes his head and looks at you
>Before putting his hoof to his head
>”OH! OUCH! I’ve been bested! Farewell, cruel world!”
>He falls back down, defeated
>His two friends on the other hoof…
>”I don’t get it?”
>”It was JUST toilet paper!”
>HE MOCKS YOUR POWER?!
>You’ll show them!
“FIRE!”
>Another salvo of rounds find their marks, clunking off the helmets of the two remaining guards>”Guys! Go down! Don’t make the filly sad!”
>Sir just simply nods after the hit
>And Siqueue looks awfully mad…
>But he won’t for long
>Tanks have never let you down!
>”Oh! Arhg! I! Can’t! Stand! Any more! UHRGH!”
>Sir falls to the floor, tongue sticking out and legs pointed to the sky
>He holds the pose before rolling to his side with a heavy ‘whump.’
>You look at Siqueue
>He rolls his eyes and droops his head, just like Little Star
>Before falling unceremoniously onto his belly
>And quietly saying
>”It appears I have been defeated. Noooo.”
“That’s right!”
>You look around, and note the final armored guard
>Reinforcements?!
>You’ll show them!
>You’re out of high ply rounds though…
>Little Star shifts on your head slightly
>…
>What’s that?
>…
>Brilliant!
“Great idea Little Star! As the heaviest armor around, we can just ROLL over her! Let’s go!”
>You engage the engine and lock the turret
“Grrrummbblrblrrrrr”
>And you speed forward towards your target
>All shall fall before Treads and Little Star!
>The best tank team in EQUESTRIA!
>She stands completely still
>Appearing to be in her own little world
>Soon she’ll be UNDER the world!
>Because you’ll run her over
>With a tank.
>…
>Yes.
>You speed up to her
“Brace, Little Star!”
*Thump*
>Your advance is halted!
>The target appears to be heavier than she looks
>You growl menacingly
>And she winces
>Probably in pain!
>You’ll get her yet
“Reverse, Little Star!”
>If at first you don’t succeed..!
>You strike her again
>And again!
>Each time she winces and looks around, begging for help!
>Beads to sweat trail down her face, and she swallows hard
>With a final push, you scrape her armor with the side of the box and put some distance between you two
>Surely that will have done it!
>She stands still
>Looking quite confused and flustered
>Before clattering to her side, legs extended and erect.
>She pauses a moment when on the floor
>Then she suddenly opens her mouth
>”Oh no. I am hit.”
>Aweso-
>”I am bleeding out. Oh no. Mother. Save me. I don’t want to die. It is over. Now I am dead. Bleh.”
>…
>You turn to speak to Little Star privately
“Did- Did we go overboard?”
>You look around at the carnage around you
>Four ponies lay on the floor
>Rounds scattered about
>And scuff on the fourth’s armor reveals your relentless brutality
>You hold up Little Star again.
“Nopony will know we did these war crimes, oka-“
>”Not bad, little filly!”
>Huh?
>”You were really great at driving that thing!”
>I WAS?!
>”Your armored construct there really showed us!”
>IT DID?!
>”Might be the best weapon I;ve ever seen, too!
>IT IS!?
>”Makes me want to get a… what was it, tank? Yeah! One of those!”
“EEEEEEEEE”
>You did it!
>Now they HAVE to take you seriously!
>Tanks exist!
>For realzsies!
>You squeak in excitement and hug Little Star close.
>It’s everything you ever wanted!
>You got to shoot ponies AND run one over!
>And now they love tanks too!
>You throw Little Star into the air and yell
“WOO HOO!”
>He tumbles lazily
>…
“You said it Little Star!”
>Victory is yours!
*Whump*
>”Annoying filly.”
>…
>You’ll get him back so hard for this.
>And you’ll use FIVE, no SIX ply next time!
months in the making
and I didnt even color it
ho hum
>>26100186
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>>26100233
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>>26100256
>>26100270
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>>26100311
Full Size:http://files.catbox.moe/f9c2b7.png
>>26100311
He's just salty he's not a main character.
>>26100321
>http://files.catbox.moe/f9c2b7.png
cute story.
>>26100328
Yeah, we haven't even seen those guards in ages.
>>26100321
It's cute.
Good job.
>>26100402
you can tell how long ago this was started
>>26100321
Haha, time for colorDoes Siqueue have a color scheme?
>>26100311
RIP treads
>>26100449
He's a coltquest guard
>>26100449
I don't think it's ever been said.
>>26100198
>Mister Sir
Muh heart
>>26100449
How in the living hell do you pronounce Siqueue?
>>26100570
Somewhat like Skew, I'd imagine
>>26100570
See queue
>>26100570
Either Seek or See-cue
>>26100592
>See queue
>CQ
SON of A BITCH
>>26100604
He's going to become Emerald's husbando and rekt his boypussy every night lovingly. This is canon.
>>26100636
Probably not since he serves his step parents. However if one was to draw fan art or write about that...
>>26100570
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0kjighPMrB6
Where were you when Shade went fucking insane over his waifu?
>>26100685
right here calling him a cuck.
>>26100681
alrighty then
What's a fun, simple quest idea that can be completed within a couple of threads?
I want to practice running something small and disposable before I try a bigger quest.
>>26100734
Going on a sub expedition :^)
