Your one stop shop for all MLP-related transformation needs. Writefags, drawfags and lurkers alike are all welcome.
Any type of transformation into or from ponies, dragons, gryphons, minotaurs, changelings, or any other beings from the MLP:FiM universe is fair game.
Previously on PTFG,
A Buggy Holiday & A Strange New Year's Eve: http://pastebin.com/6DT4tXbg http://pastebin.com/qpukKfEz
Changeling Christmas: http://pastebin.com/C9VJb2x9
CRUNCHTIME & PEER PRESSURE: http://pastebin.com/SLiRMr3v http://pastebin.com/RC8RP70F
Radiance: http://pastebin.com/u/ZeroandInfinity
Story archive and additional links and materials:
http://derpy.me/PonyTF
Unrated TF image dump thread:
http://derpy.me/ptfgnsfw
Below are some suggested writing prompts.
AiE Going Native:
>Somehow anon managed to get stuck in Equestria. It seems that the magic in the world around them is catching up to their mundane body, and in amusing ways. Watch as anon adjusts and makes sense of the new world and soon to be new body.
Occult:
>Spoopy things are afoot, as some strange rites have been performed by a mysterious group. Following members of the cult or unknowing trespassers into the area of the ritual as people randomly start becoming small pastel horses.
Outbreak:
>A significant portion of a population undergoes drastic physical changes into small equines, with unknown implications if the changes are contagious. Follow a group of survivors or perhaps one recently changed through the continuation or aftermath of the epidemic.
Official /soc/-type chatter's in #ptfg on irc.rizon.net
Previous Thread:
>>25753614
>>25872429
>One stop shop hop
Phineas and ferb God damnit.
May you all get a plushie in the mail, followed by a visit from Santa's minivan
>>25873260
So long as it's not a reindeer plushie.
It's funny that this TF thread >>25862015 is better than the dedicated general
>>25874343
>inflatable garbage
yeah, so much better
>>25874343
>food tf with added voreshit
>inflatable
>clothing
No, it's objectively much, much worse.
>>25874343
Anon please, this thread is just for Anon-to-mare TF. Anything else is haram.
>>25874381
>>25874477
They've both been posted here in the past, and are allowed.
>>25874491
Might as well become the TG general. Or dead general.
>>25874491
>Anything else is haram.
Whereas Anon to mare is a good method for acquiring a hareem.
It would actually be nice to see stories that aren't tg just for the sake of variety, but it seems to be what people like.
>Never eat strange tacos.
>>25875125
>those Gaston tier thighs
Sketch for a simple Appleboom TF/TG sequence.
>>25875705
That's really good. I love Applebloom's face in that final image.
>>25875705
What would you guys do if you were to turn into the filly?
I'd probably molest myself
>>25876062
Freak out.
>>25876062
Grow into a mare, have wild sex with stallions once my hormones kick into gear.
>>25876062
I don't think it counts as molestation if you do it to yourself.
Regardless, if it happened I would try to adapt to using hooves, act adorable, wear cute outfits.
>>25876074
This is the realistic answer, at first anyway, but you've got to think more long term.
>>25876162
This is probably also worth a try.
>>25876329
Maybe a little, but at least you're among those who share in that weirdness.
>>25876627
Sorry, I moved my post. Thought it would be more fitting to be in the AnonFilly thread.
Here it is: >>25876536
>>25876804
Well if you want to be the abused green filly. Then yeah, that's weird. If you gonna be the pony at least make it a tastefully designed OC.
>>25876827
I think my OC is tasteful...
>>25876897
Then have a merry christmas, blessed with nanite plushies (or other transformative agent of your choosing).
>>25876933
>Other transformation agents
Hah.
>>25877059
It's not all plushies. You could always come across a helpful pony to carry out the procedure.
so, bugpone green when?
BUGPONE GREEN WHEN
>>25877423
When Spacewolfe returns from whatever it was that was keeping him busy.
Alternatively write about your own bugpones.
>>25873260
>Get a plushie in the mail
>Don't touch it
>Wait by front door with shotgun
>Load with homemade wacky rounds
>Door gets kicked in
>Evil bad guy gets sprayed with flaming titanium pellets
>Next is the dime round
>Next is the napalm round
>Next is the glass slug
>Nigga's dead asf now
>>25878270
Should have loaded it with the plushie and made a pony TF gun.
>>25878424
How to do that without touching it?
>>25878529
gloves
Christmas present soon, a new year hangover delivery planned (May not work out, though.) Deliveries could return to normal on the fourth January.
>>25878773
Slight recap.
Our hero, Fem Nonnynous, had joined the Queen Chrysalis as a new Queen, in an intent of ruling over a continent.
We left her, sitting in the shower, just after her transformation.
>>25878791
>You were never one of the types to sit around in a shower, questioning reality.
>What now?
>A voice rips you out of thought.
>You look around, for the source of the noise.
>But you can't see anyone or anything that could make the sound.
>You hear it again, it's calling out your name.
>Almost as if thousand different voices were welcoming you.
>Thousands, just chanting one thing.
>One clear phrase, one clear sentence.
>"Welcome home, Queen."
>>25878797
>Either you've grown mad, or the entire hive, all the drones, are welcoming you.
>Both are completely viable options.
>You close your eyes.
>You focus on the source of the sound.
>You start to see shapes, which connect into a hallway, a hallway full of bookcases, full of knowledge.
>It draws out a strong scent, a scent of memory, scent of many minds.
>And one dominant figure, one above it all.
>Chrysalis.
>The Queen, standing and pulling the strings on everything.
>It's amazing, really.
>The disorder.
>A disorder with a strong sense of organization.
>You're dragged on, further towards Chrysalis.
>Further to the top, by the invincible hand.
>Further towards the Queen.
>>25878807
>Further towards the Queen.
>"Welcome to the hivemind. This is where we store all knowledge, memories, forms images. Everything."
"And I can use all of this knowledge? I can use all of this?"
>"Yes. And in time you'll add more. And that time might be very soon."
"Explain. But in person, please. This place is nauseating."
>You hear a chuckle. "If you insist. I'll see you in the throne room."
>You open your eyes.
>You turn off the water, shake it off and you enter the throne room.
>Chrysalis, Non or whatever is sitting on the throne.
>It all has an odd atmosphere.
>Chilly, scary and respect inducing.
>Yet, there's some kind of a subtle underline.
>>25878846
>A safe, homely underline.
>"You look great! How do you feel?"
"Odd. Very very strangely. I'm not sure, both psychically and physically. I can hardly walk, these two wings tend to buzz on their own. I hear voices in my head and I don't understand these urges."
>"You require acclamation, if I understand correctly?"
>You nod, make flipping into your eyes.
>Was it in that shade of blue? This dark blue?"
>"I'd love to grant you that, even for the sake of your adjustment to this mess of a situation. But we have more urgent matters at hoof."
>Was that pun intended?
"What kind of trouble?" You say, and sound interested.
>"A small militant group is a day trip away from shore. I'd send drones to take care of it, but they brought a large sum of military material. Material we can use for our cause, material that'll allow us to construct our own force."
>>25878852
"I still don't see where I come in."
>"The leader is a well known womanizer. If you manage to...drag him over to our side, I'd let you keep those drones for yourself."
"So you're saying if I seduce him, manage to capture his entire crew, and leave most of the things intact, I'll get some drones?"
>"Excellent line of thinking. I suppose you do want to know how many it'll involve?"
>You nod once again.
>"Well, search the collective mind. I can't tell you everything. I'm sure you're competent enough."
>That's a joke, or what? You have no idea how to find out how to find out that there are fourty mercenaries on an old cruiser.
>Wait what?
>Did you just find this out?
>Fourty men, including support staff.
>A roster of weapons, ammo, vehicles.
>Names, families, blood groups.
>Even phone numbers and bank account numbers.
>Everything about those men.
>"Now, I know what you're thinking. How the hell we know all this?"
>>25878860
"Yes, that's the second thing that came to my mind. Right after all the information."
>"We've made infrastructure, used old one, and melted it together with what we have. We have limitless access to the internet, television and radio, right at the palm of our hand. I even sequestered a team of drones to process information."
"Sort of like espionage?"
>"I would like to call it more of an informational gathering, if you catch my drift. We know what they do, think, everything. If they decide to throw a stick, we can build a house to hide in, before they even throw it. Of course, a network this magnitude took time to set it up. We have it running for a few days."
"What else do we know? About the world, I mean."
>"We have complete access to the internet. We even manged to get into many government organization systems."
"I was thinking more of the general public."
>"They think we're alien invaders. Social sites are in chaos, forums full of discussion. Even 4Chan didn't draw any porn yet."
>You chuckle.
>>25878870
"That's nice. Although, I'm not sure if I'm up for the job. I just," you pause to think for a correct word, "hatched, if you get my drift. I'm not able to run, let alone get close enough to someone to capture them."
>"You know everything, it'll just come in time. Sort of like a genetic memory."
>You rise an eyebrow.
>"All of the necessary skill is locked, deep down in your genetically code. It'll unlock, piece by piece, though I can accelerate it by teaching you."
"Like when you allowed me to control that drone?"
>Chrysalis nods. "I'll teach you the necessary things. But you need a new name first. How about Nequiora?"
"Let me guess. Latin?"
>"Yes. Even though I failed half the tests. Thankfully we were fortunate enough to pick up a linguist with fluent knowledge of the world languages."
"And what does my name mean?"
>You sound as if you were sure you wanted it.
>>25878882
>"It's a butchered form of nequior. And adjective, with the meaning of bad and vile. Just what we are."
>You bow down.
>Out of instinct, more than anything else.
>"Rise, Queen Nequiora. We have work to do."
>And you rise.
Obligatory fucked up green that gets posted every thread
>>25878890
Pastebin updated, enjoy the holidays, you spergs.
And don't waste yourself too hard on new year's eve.
>>25876062
Prostitute myself for launch money!
>>25878899
Jesus fucking Christ.
>>25879018
>launch money!
You're gonna have to be a damned good filly-prostitute to afford that.
>>25879048
Silly CMC, you only made one space helmet!
Two of you are going to die of oxygen deprivation in the cold depths of space! Silly fillies.
>>25878899
>snout
>>25879086
>"Launch in T minus 10 seconds!"
>You sprint towards the launchpad with the two helmets that the fillies left behind.
>"Seven... Six..."
"hOLY FUCK STOP THE LAUNCH!"
>"THREE! TWO!"
"STOP! YOU NEED THE HELMETS TO BREATHE!"
"ONE!"
>"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS SPACE EXPLORERS, BLASTOFF!"
>The bottom of the makeshift rocket explodes in a mix of cola and mentos.
>Metallic-painted cardboard bursts apart as it lifts a few feet off the ground, only to collapse when the 'fuel' runs out.
>Three sniffling, boo-boo covered fillies crawl out of the wreckage.
>Why the fuck did you think it was a real rocket?
"C'mon you three... I'll take you over to Rarity's place so she can patch you up."
>"T-thanks Mr. Anon..."
>>25878890
>>25878917
Glad you're back. Looking forward to the next part.
>>25879168
Heh, very cute.
>>25879390
Hopefully on Sunday, can't make any promises, though.
Sential, sorry if you already responded in the last thread and I missed it before it 404'd, but do you plan to reopen commissions at some point? I'd still love to pay you for a Velvet Reindeer sequence.
>posting this on christmas
hue
Merry Christmas, PTFG. May you all get the transformations you desire.
Hey all you ponies, hope your time off is treating you awesome, and may you all awaken to find yourselves exactly the kind of ponies you wished for! I've been so impressed at all the amazingchangeling <3content that's been created recently, and I haven't even gotten to read most of it all the way through yet! You're all updating your pastebins (or w/e) when the threads close, right? I'll be spending a good chunk of the 26th on a plane, and will be quite possibly without internet for a week following, so I'm hoping to both stock up on fic pulled from our stuff, and to get out some stuff of my own as well; including a little holiday oneshot. (Starry, I hope you like what I've got planned~!)
>>25880717
I hope I become a changeling today
>>25880717
That's good.
>>25880756
You already are one. You just need to remember how to drop your human disguise.
>>25875705
Inked it- will color soon,
Merry Christmas, everyone!
>>25881258
It must be weird suddenly shrinking like that.
I may want that bow as a christmas present.
>>25881223
Why is this thread turning into a second AnonFilly general?Not that I'm complaining...
Santa made you a cute mare for christmas!
Here she is!
>>25881615
Because we're so low on content someone recycles it. I can't believe Anon filly is still a thing from a one off thread I made with Skitter's comic
>>25881927
That's bloody cute. I'd be honoured to be her friend.
Thanks, Satan.
>>25881927
Who is this semen demon?
>>25881927
>>25882186
Nevermind, derpibooru reverse search told me exactly what I wanted
>>25878899
Have another unusual green.
>>25881258
Shading and quick crappy background coming Soon(tm).
>>25884578
Nice
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3G4R5u49GsI
>A global alliance of Men had arisen. In light of a threat that threatened to strip them of their Humanity. literally.
>the "Alicorns" took over 500 million humans to be their unwilling citizens. Their minds erased and brainwashed In their sick toybox world, over the course of a millennia. And now they planned to take the entire world.
>The beings who had kidnapped and altered their fellow humans were now exposed. Their world has been found. Their magic nullified by military science.
>And now. Earth will have their revenge
>over 4 billion soldiers, from around the world. The combined military might of the East and West, using the CERN mega portals. Poured into Equestria
>The Princesses were the main priority. Neutralise them. And the whole facade falls apart.
>avenge those who were had their lives stolen.
>as helicopters, tanks and artillery battered the city of Canterlot, Recon Squad fought their way into the castle...
>>25886309
Do continue.
>>25886309
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUlclgxgNAo
>they met resistance as they made their way through the castle, but the ponies were weak softhearted creatures.
>they started to flee in terror when they saw their comrades fall to the ground...bleeding
>finally. The Royal Throne room
>Celestia, Luna, Cadence and Twilight stood in front of them. Ready to fight.
>"Humans." Celestia hissed
>"Yes. HUMANS!" The Squad leader roared. "YOUR GAMES ARE AT AN END! NO MORE STOLEN LIVES. NO MORE PLAYING."
>"You hope to defeat us?" I am the Sun!"
>"I am the night!"
>"I am love!"
>"I am magic!"
>Celestia blasted magic at the soldiers, only for it to be absorbed an energy shield
>"HOW!! HUMANS DONT POSSESS MAGIC!?"
>Squad leader Anonymous laughed
>"you really do believe your own bullshit don't you? We've done our research. Decades of planning. Trillions of dollars of development. We've figured out your "magic", quantum particle manipulation through telepathic means. Very clever.
>my kind wields power beyond your sun. A moment of blinding light. And it all turns to ash. The Nuclear Bomb. Millions of lives erased in one second.
>Celestias face turns to fear and unease.
>He turns to Luna "the Princess of the Night, you know so little of true darkness. The journeys my race has endured. We once howled at the moon. Then we conquered it. And exposed the darkness with a light of our own. We map the stars. We see past the blackness. You are nothing"
>Lunas face fumes with anger
>"Love conquers all!" Cadence protested
>"You are nothing but a symbol of childlike naivety. Love is powerless. Rape. Genocide, slaughter, subjugation, slavery, torture. Mankind killed its way to the top. Inside our hearts. The blood of champions flows."
>Cadence looks away in shock, tears forming at the revelation
>Twilight stood defiant
>"you think magic is your ally? You merely adopted it. I was born in a world of Chaos, by the time I was already a man, it was nothing to me but lies
>>25886796
>"But death is too easy an option for you, you don't get excused for a millennia of subversion and forced assimilation with a short bullet to the head, no.
The Commander wants you alive. Your going to be made like us. You will be made Human.
>You'll lose your immortality. Your powers. Your memories. Your friends. Your family.
>all the moments you ever had, gone forever. Just like you did to our people.
>your legacy will stand for nothing. No one will remember you.
>and you'll be lost in our world. And in the back of your mind. You will know something's wrong. That you don't belong there. That something is missing. But it will never come. Just how the former humans stranded here feel
>Squad Leader Anonymous gave a evil grin
>"lights out ladies"
>the soldiers fired their sidearms loaded with high dose horse tranquilliser at the princesses
>they all flop to the floor
>"take em back to the extraction point, tell the Commander his prize horses are his"
>suddenly a cracking sound is heard and Discord appears in front of the soldiers
>"Bravo! Bravo! An excellent coup de etat if I ever did see one! Allow me to introduce myse-"*BANG*
>Discords head was exploded and splattered across the floor
>"fuck off" said one of the soldiers as he pumped his smoking shotgun
>"I honestly despise the fucking gay ass creatures in this dimension" Agreed one of the soldiers.
>>25887008
Quite the reversal of fortunes for the princesses and that was incredibly careless of Discord. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
>>25887008
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXppvWbAPIc
>"Roger that sir, targets neutralised and on route to location on Earth."
>"good work. Execute Operation Swordfall, document everything"
>months passed as the Humans poured endlessly into Equestria and its neighbouring kingdoms, systematically killing everything in their path, draining the resources dry.
>Celestia and the others could only watch in horror as they played the live feed from the front lines as they lay restrained in their cells in this cold magic devoid realm. Where the sun and moon did as they pleased and friendship was scarce.
>her allies, her enemies. None were spared the Human's wrath.
>they made her watch. Every genocide. Every battle. Filmed from their war machines.
>the "Nuking" of The Griffon kingdoms
>the fall of the Dragons to the Humans metal birds
>pegasi cut to shreds on the rotary blades of their "Helicopters", Twilight yelped in despair when she saw a yellow body and distinct rainbow mane among the bodies on screen.
>the Burning of the changeling hives. As Queen Chrysalis was cooked inside her own nest
>the siege of the crystal Empire, with the loss of his wife and sister, Shining turned into a monster, fuelled by hate and anger, not unlike Sombra himself.
>he fought hard and brutally. But the Humans weapons overpowered the protections. as even dark magic was powerless against Humans
>Cadence simply went insane when they executed him, she screamed for hours. But they didn't care. Their walls were soundproof. This was a prison
>even Tartarus itself was not enough to stop the tide
>she saw the look on Tireks face when there was no magic to be found in these beings. And she watched his pain as they beat the old centaur to death. Of all the darkest, most dangerous creatures in creation. They all fell to the Humans.
>a last alliance of Minotaurs and Diamond Dogs, along with the remnants of those defeated already, was formed, but it was not enough. The Humans pushed on. No reprieve.
>>25887628
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BXonfJdFCM
>Some years later
>Equestria is dead, gone.
>not a single soul remains. Save the Humans and their crews extracting the precious minerals from the ground
>They were defeated. Everyone was defeated
>the Princesses toyed with a baby lion. And in the end. It grew up to devour them.
>Mankind won. Their victory over the ponies ensured a lasting unity between themselves. But not one made for peace. But so they could work together to conquer the rest of their universe.
>The princesses were transformed. Stripped of their immortality. Made human. And made never to remember what had happened. Their punishment for interfering with Human society. For daring to challenge them.
>Celestia survived the transformation, but her mind did not. She spends her day in a state run care home for the mentally disabled. She spends her days giggling manically at the sun and calling herself the queen of light, And desperately trying to make it obey her. She calms down once they give her a dose of Thorazine. She died alone and afraid.
>Lunas spirit was broken. She lived a pitiful life. Working her 9-5 job at QuikMart, coming home to only her cat and depressing loneliness and isolation.
>She can't even cry herself to sleep at night. So she takes sleeping pills. Until one night she takes too many...and never wakes up again.
>Cadence sells her body on the street to survive. Candy the whore they call her. Addicted to drugs. There is nothing she won't do.
>She's found dead in an alleyway,raped and murdered.
>And Twilight? She could never make any friends. She drifted through life with no one. She felt a hole in her life. And she never found out what it was.
>then. When it was finally too much to bear. she threw herself off a roof.
>and if not just to end it, thinking. Maybe. Just maybe...she would fly...
THE END
>>25887932
Forgot pic
thats pretty edgy desu senpai
>>25886309
>>25886796
>>25887008
>>25887628
>>25887932
Ending B:The Humans continued to be assimilated into happy little ponies. And Squad Leader Anon took his own life before becoming (in his words) "a gay faggot horse that eats cum"
Credit to Slamjam for pic
>>25888033
This is where I live!
>>25887932
Nothing personell, kid
Well-worded story but so dark it got killed by the cops; edgelord please.
>>25888333
fuckin checked
>>25884578
>>25888813
That's really good
>>25887932
An unusual sort of story but pretty well written.
Turning ponies into humans does not have a happy ending.
>>25886309
>over the course of a millennia
It's either "a millennium" or "millennia", not "a millennia". Jesus.
>>25878270
taofledermaus represent!
>>25880717
I update my pastebin right after I deliver.
>>25880756
May your dreams come true.
Delivery today evening, once I get home, being busy with church things.
>>25889739
>Delivery today evening
That's good!
>>25888813
heads up >>25879877
>>25890549
Ah, thanks for the heads up!
>>25879877
I'm trying my best to reopen by early new year's! Give me a reach out, then!
For the BugPone guy.
>>25890858
2spooky
>>25890786
If I don't see anything on your FA account regarding it I'll try dropping a message here when you pop in, thanks!
So is bob and Gerald kill?
>>25891821
Yes. Sorry. It's all Wotr and spacewolfes now
>>25892400
Lame. I mean cool but lame.
>>25892456
And nothing of value was lost
>>25892456
No Anon, it is you who is lame.
>>25892469
Implying this general had any value
>>25892480
Yeah kinda
Happy Santa Day PTFG! Got a good chunk of update here for you guys this holiday. Hope you enjoy, preferably with a nice mug of hot chocolate.
>Chad was giving you that ball busting grin, and Patrick chuckled at your forwardness.
>But Patrick was also petting you again.
>So whatever man.
>Shit felt wayyyyy too good.
“Mmmmm…”
>Patrick adjusted his stance, getting himself comfortable.
>You just leaned against his leg and let his hands work their magic.
>”Well Applejack wus tha family pony. Ya know the type, mostly fer draggin the cart to’ther market. Me pap was in the force atta time, but he wasn the type ta stik it in town ya know.”
>Chad nodded and lit up a cig.
>”I hear you. Don’t like big buildings much either.”
>Patrick nodded.
>”M more partial ter tha fields meself. S’anyway, pap and me we’d take Applejack and’r cart fulla potatoes n we’d make the rounds sellin’. Getem good penny ya know.”
>You listened intently despite yourself, Patricks’ voice was soothing, deep and old.
>There were years in it, tough ones and great ones, sounded like a voice that could tell all about…
>Well, his family pony at the market one moment, and a good rousing bar fight with his friends back in his prime years the next.
>Patrick was eyeing your mane intently as he passed his hand down through it, there was a fond smile on his face.
>”Ser we’d get tha money tergether, an Applejack well…”
>Patrick chuckled and shook his head, the memory shining fresh in his eyes.
>”She’d gerrof tha cart one way er another. Ah think it’d be abou’now that I explain Applejack wazza real pretty little pony. Hazelnut coat on’er, brushed everyday, ana beautiful blond mane ter boot.”
>You opened your eyes and giggled.
>You looked up at Patrick and smiled, tossed in a little eye flutter too.
“Like mine?”
>Patting you on the back, Patrick grinned down at you.
>”Naw, hers was better ya little brat. Straw blond on’er like real gold.”
“Fuck you say to me?”
>>25892934
>You scrunched your muzzle and furrowed your brow, Patrick was still grinning as he lifted up a handful of your mane, blonde hairs flowing through his old fingers.
>Chad was laughing his ass off, he nearly choked on his cigarette.
>You shot him a glare and he just laughed harder.
>”Naw lass, yer mane is nice an all. But this here?”
>Patrick pointed at it.
>”Pale gold. Luscious too, but Applejack’s was jes as luscious with tha better color to er. Ya’d lose that pony show, gal.”
>Snorting, you turned your head away and stuck your snout up, stomping a hoof down for good measure.
“Fuck off.”
>”Applejack didn’ave a talking mouth on’er either. Didn’ needun to do what she did, too good at’er.”
>You were still looking away from Patrick, resolute in your defiance.
>But then his hand touched your mane and you faltered.
>”What Applejack’d do was she’d geround and steal apples, right frem under the shopkeeps nose!”
>Oh god that felt n-
>No.
>Another jerk of the head, you snorted again too, to show that you were completely fed up with him.
>Chad was smirking at you as he rolled up a cig and listened.
>He mouthed the words “Not for long”.
>You mouthed back.
“Fuck off.”
>Patrick just kept on with his story, he had sly smile on his face though, and he was inching his hand back to you head.
>”She’d go an eatem all too! Every. Last. One. I’ll be damned ter hell if she didn eat at leas’a undred evry day we took’er.”
>All of a sudden, Patrick’s fingers wrapped around your ear.
>You were just about to pull away and tell him to fuck off again…
>But then they rubbed together.
>And you melted.
>>25892943
“Ahhhhh…”
>You just flowed right back up to Patricks’ leg and you even started to rub your face into his pant leg as he rubbed away at your ears.
>Patrick chuckled whole heartedly at that.
>You just caught Chad shaking his head at you as your eyes closed again.
>”Told you so.”
“F-fuhhh…”
>”Ther’ ain’a thing fuzzy an on four legs out ther that don’ like me pettin em. Don’chu worry yer little pony heart bout that lass.”
>No response, you couldn’t even talk, just humming and hawing now.
>“Applejack had a trick bout the same, diffrence was, she coul’get any damn vendor ter giver a scratch behind tha ears an an apple fer tha trouble. She’d use it all too, whinny and neigh and sit pretty. Devil ‘imself’d do well takin’ tips from er on temptation.”
>Finally there was some respite from that overwhelming comfort, Patrick went back to just petting your mane.
“She sounded like a great pony.”
>”Ahh she was. Applejack lived long and well. Died easy too, in me pap’s arms. He held’er tight all the while.”
>Chad tucked all his finished cigs away and hopped off of Patrick’s desk.
>”Take it you were there too?”
>Patrick smiled.
>It was a little… different this time.
>There was age, yeah, but you felt more bad years than good ones.
>”Naw I was… Well I woulda been bout halfway ter Korea then. On a ship with me friends, Ma told me bout Applejack inna letter though, so I wasn’ left wondrin’.”
“Oh.”
>Chad nodded, expression curt.
>”That’s a whole other story, I can tell.”
>Patrick stood up and laughed, booming and joyous again, as he smacked Chad on the back.
>”Damn right lad. Damn right. And you young’uns don’ave the time fer it. Now get tha fuck outta here and get yerselves some beer er whatever fuckin’ drugs you kids fancy these days. Jes’ don bring it round my desk er I’ll haf ta call the real coppers on ya.”
>>25892953
>You laughed at how straight up this old man was.
“Thanks Patrick. We’ll get right to that.”
>Patrick winked back at you and smiled.
>He bent down again at your level and reached behind your ear.
>Holy shit were you about to get a scratch again?
>You closed your eyes in preparation.
>Only to be met with Patrick chuckling.
>”Open em lass.”
>Patrick was holding out a big red apple.
>Your eyes went wide and you immediately brought a hoof up to feel behind your ear.
>Mouth gaping a little, you pointed to Patrick and then to the apple.
“You just-“
>Patrick laughed and stuck the apple in your mouth.
>”Don’ worry bout tha details gal. I jes figured you were lookin hungry was all, go’in hav a time.”
>You almost wanted to object, but Chad was already walking away and waving goodbye as he hollered to you:
>”Gotta catch the bus Anon! Hurry up!”
>You just settled for nodding your thanks before galloping away.
“Fenk you!”
>Looking over your back, you saw Patrick wave you off as he wheeled his chair back into his office.
>>25892978
“Hwhat a fice fold gur.”
>You mumbled, around a mouthful of apple.
>There was a certain extra zip to it that you hadn’t ever really gotten out of apples before.
>Really tangy.
>You had to be careful the juice didn’t soak into your socks, sitting down and holding it up with your forehooves like this.
>But overall you were starting to get really nimble at these sorts of things.
>The blizzard had finally stopped, right on time.
>There was just a soft fall of flakes now, as you and Chad waited at the bus stop.
>It was nice and quiet, mostly because Chad had got you to sit inside the waiting stall where most passersby wouldn’t notice you.
>Chad was sitting next to you, sidled up against you for warmth while he puffed away on a cigarette.
>It was still pretty cold out after all.
>”Yeah. Surprised I haven’t even talked to him before.”
>You rolled your eyes and swallowed.
“You never talk to security guards. Ever. They all just give you dirty looks and you ignore them.”
>Chad shrugs and knocks the ashes off his cig.
>”Yeah, but he was real legit.”
“That’s for sure. I think I’ll try to walk by there more often now.”
>Nudging you, Chad smirks knowingly.
>”For scratches and ear rubs.”
>You blush and take another bite out of your apple.
“Fuhg hoff.”
>Chad just smiled and kept smoking.
>You were surprised and a little happy that no one seemed to be in an awful rush to get off campus today.
>The mall would be bad enough without being swarmed at the bus stop.
>”You hear anything about Tammy?”
“Huh?”
>Chad takes a drag.
>>25892987
>”Tammy.”
>You think for a moment, rubbing your chin with a hoof.
“Nnnnope. Last I heard she was going out with some other friends today, from her Origami club or whatever.”
>Chad nods.
>”Alright. Just curious was all. Wondering if Thot was with her.”
>You nodded and munched on your apple for a bit.
>The streets were silent today, sort of scared, like they were shivering in the aftermath of the storm and were just waiting for it to come along and wail on them again.
>People hurried around, trying to get out of the cold as quick as possible, breath steaming and making little fading clouds that whisked away as soon as their makers did.
>Understanding dawned on you all of a sudden.
“You want to break it to Tammy and Thot at the same time, don’t you?”
>Chad nodded as he puffed.
>”Yeah. Figure since they’re twin sisters, Tammy’ll set Thot straight when she freaks. Tammy is used to all the weird crap after all.”
>You snorted and shook your head.
“Tammy is IN to all the weird crap. You’re right though, Thot being the innocent little nun she is, she’ll flip. But Tammy being there to make it a small thing will help.”
>Chad shrugged and butted out his cigarette.
>You chomped up the core of your apple and rubbed your tummy.
“Ahhh. Let’s head to the restaurants, first thing. I’m only running on Monster here.”
>”Alright.”
>The both of you stood as bus 14 pulled up to the stop.
>Chad went first, no issues.
>The busdriver gave you a look when you mouthed your bus pass up to show to him, but didn’t do much else.
>You trotted up to Chad and sat next to him, right at the front of the bus.
>You tried to stay casual, passively looking out the window and acting like you totally weren’t out of place on this bus full of two legged human beings staring at you.
>For now you just stared out the window, watching the streets pass you by while Chad checked his phone.
>>25892999
>But eventually, you had to look away.
>And your eyes were met with the unblinking stare of the seven year old girl sat in front of you.
“H-hi there…”
>You smiled nervously and tested a wave with one of your socked fore hooves.
>Chad was still checking his phone, but there was a smile creeping up his face again.
>She was a cute girl, black hair tied back in a ponytail, wearing a warm black winter jacket with a fur lined hood.
>Kind of like your hoodie actually.
>But her face was practically pressed right up against your snout and she had a hell of an obsessive grin on.
>There was a black haired woman next to her, presumably the girl’s mother, who was smiling at you apologetically.
>”Come on Sally, let the little pony have some space-”
>”HI MY NAME’S SALLY! WHAT’S YOURS!? CAN I BRUSH YOUR MANE?”
>”Now Sally.”
>The mother reeled her daughter in and gave her a stern look.
>”You can’t just go bothering little ponies like that. It’s very rude. Be more polite, and lower your voice. Then maybe she’ll let you pet her. Alright?”
>Sally nodded, cowed.
>”Alright mommy.”
>Jesus, when was the last time you actually saw a mother who could control her kids?
>You were now seriously considering those lottery tickets.
>Sally looked back at you, still smiling, but much more reasonably now.
>”Is it ok if I touch you?”
>You nodded and smiled.
>Yes… More petting, good.
“Yes that’s ok Sally.”
>She practically jumped out of her seat, crackling with excitement.
>Sally extended her little hand slowly, up and up till she got it above your head.
>Your ears flattened down out of instinct.
>>25893003
>Then she patted you.
>Just over the bus sounds and all, you could hear a few of the people behind you laughing and awwwwing.
>It took a few pats before Sally got a bit bolder and started really petting you.
>You giggled a little and let her at it.
>That feeling just didn’t get old.
>Sally giggled right back and got her other hand involved, mussing up and playing around with your mane.
>”So what’s your name, pony?”
“Some people call me Keyboard Masher.”
>Sally oohed, looking at the broken keyboard on your flank.
>Her mother smiled and motioned towards you.
>”Mind if I?”
“Sure.”
>There was a childlike glee in that moms’ eyes as she rubbed your ears.
>Mmmmm…
>This was what?
>Three times now?
>Yeah, you could definitely get used to sudden public outbursts of petting.
>Chad was shaking his head, tired smile on.
>”Addicted…”
>You rolled your eyes and poked him in the ribs with your hoof.
“Whatever.”
>That was a nice bus ride to the mall.
Here's to a happy winter. See you guys around, I'll be lurking sporadically till the next update.
>>25886302
That would make a cool story...
GF redid her Luna TF. Whaddya guys think?
>>25883985
Oh god people are still posting this? I still have nightmares from writing it, let alone reading it again.
>>25893045
looks a lot neaterwaiting for the NMM followup
>>25878890
>You're training god knows how long.
>Your day is long and hard.
>Sleepless too.
>You know how to use that horn of yours, how to change shape, nimbly move around, fly at speeds that challenge planes and most importantly, how to lie.
>How to lie so well you would fool anyone.
>You're enjoying it, confusing Liam on a daily basis.
>Poor guy.
>But it's necessary training, needed in order of succeeding
>And one day, it happens.
>>25894001
>You awake late after a short night of cuddling to Chrysalis on a single bed.
>Your back hurts, your entire shell is strained.
>You'd say your bones hurt, but you found out the only skeleton you posses is the outside one.
>Your chitinous armour.
>An armour which has been hardening.
>It hardens in response to physical trauma.
>Anyway, Chrysalis usually slept beside you, providing a single island of comfort in the sea of roughness.
>You've been enjoying hers company, oddly enough.
>You've been enjoying the entire mess, now that you think about it.
>A mess you've gotten yourself on.
>Like a rollercoaster without breaks, breaks that you yourself had removed and used them to go faster.
>A very speedy ride.
>Without an end.
>You make way out of the bedroom you've been occupying with your friend, and move out to the throne room.
>Chrysalis is already sitting on the throne, watching over the room as if it were an empire.
"Good morning." You say and yawn.
>>25894015
>"Morning. Sorry to bother you this early, especially on Christmas day, but we have some unexpected events.
"It's the merc fleet? What had happened?" You've been taught how to read and listen to minds of others.
>Even though you're able to read through most of her, some parts are enigmatic, impossible to read.
>"We've slown them down before, at the expense of a surprise attack. Now they're moving again, to the predestined coordinates, on the D beach."
>You and Chrysalis were able to set up a detailed plan and even managed to slow the mercenary ship down with a surprise ambush, using a couple drones as damaging tools.
"That was all planed. What's the issue?"
>"Them using helicopters to move men and create a camp. That's why we have to start early."
"But I'm not ready yet!" You say.
>"I verily know that. But I'm confident that you'll succeed."
>>25894028
"So nothing changed in our plan? What if they take me aboard their ship?"
>"Then you'll take that ship over. I want them reduced to nothing but mindless obedient drones. Mercenaries aren't good enough for anything better anyway."
"And if they show resistance?"
>"Proceed as planned, we want them alive. They're more useful to us alive than dead."
>You execute a small bow, and walk out of the room, walking through the numerous hallways.
>Your heart is racing, every beat filling you with excitement.
>You're pretty sure you have some blood in your adrenaline.
>Alright.
>Don't mess this up.
>You exit the hive.
>Streams of chitin dig into the earth, seemingly without an end.
>The chitin stops around at a hundred meters out.
>The beach is a couple kilometers away.
>You focus, and soon after, buzzing and after the buzzing, flight.
>You're flying forwards, slightly above the ground.
>A bush.
>Perfect hiding spot, you're not far from the beach.
>You land, slide for a few meters and disguise yourself.
>You peek out of the bush.
>You see the camp.
>You stand up, and begin running towards the camp.
>You're stumbling, running on two legs is different, too different.
>You're almost there.
>You trip over your own leg, and fall face first.
>The sand gets everywhere.
>But your fall had caught attention.
>Two men are aiming assault rifles right at you.
>>25894039
And that's it. For today.>>25894001 Fucking off by one.
Pastebin in OP, updated as per usual.
>>25894060
>Actually updating your pastebin on time
Take notes, Woofr. You lazy bum. >>25893014
>>25894015
>A very speedy ride
>Without an end
>>25894060
Observe real trips in action: >>25892999
I really have to catch back up and read your new updates.
>>25894105
I remember that gif.
>lazy bum
Your shit talk game has seriously taken a step down though. I'll update it when I feel like it.
>>25894197
It's a sing of good will to update the pastebin within the hour.
>>25893045
Still fantastic
>>25894264
>Filename
>Dat finger
I see what you did there.
>>25894236
Updated just 4u Spacewolfe.
>>25887628
That almost reads like... well, does the name Fehrenbach mean anything to you?
"The drive northward was not easy.
As many years earlier, when the cavalry fighting on the Plains had developed leaders such as Miles, Crook, and Ranald Mackenzie, men who rode hard, made cold camps, threw away their sabers, and moved without bugle calls, putting aside all the things they had learned in the War Between the States--but who had driven the Indians without surcease, hammering them across the snows and the mountains until their women sickened and their infants died and they lost theiar heart for war, so the Army developed men who learned to fight in Asia.
Soldiers learned to travel light, but with full canteen and bandoleer, and to climb the endless hills. They learned to hold fast when the enemy flowed at them, because it was the safest thing to do..."
>>25894415
nice
>>25893045
I like it.
>>25891821
I sincerely hope not. I loved that story.
>used to write for this thread
>people liked it
>dropped a story unfinished
>look back through
wewlad am I a cringey faggot
boy howdy am I glad I dropped this turd of a thread
>>25897369
Fuck yo couch, nigga
>>25893014
I wonder if there's some deeper significance to Patrick's Applejack story. Very much enjoying this.
>>25898054
I found that scene interesting. Because when you get down to it, Keyboard Masher basically takes on Applejacks' role. Patrick pets her and gives her an apple for the trouble. Like, Patrick is sort of reliving Applejack through her. I think that's what Woofr was getting at there. It was a very nostalgic sort of scene.
>>25872429
>all semen diet
yes please
>>25893014
>But eventually the ride had to end.
>The bus screeched to a halt, just a little ways up the road from the mall.
>”Thank you kuh… uhhh, Keyboard Masher!”
>You waved back and smiled at Sally and her mom before trotting off the bus, Chad trailing behind you.
>The both of you immediately started towards the mall, not wanting to stay out here drawing gazes for too long.
>You’d gotten lucky though, most people were staying indoors out of the cold right now.
>Smiling, you playfully swung your new ponytail around.
>Sally’s mom had done your mane up into it for you, a carbon copy of Sally’s own ponytail.
>You giggled and poked Chad.
“Hey. Chad.”
>Chad looked down at you as he strode along, one brow perked.
>”What?”
>You snorted and giggled and waved your ponytail again.
“I’ve got twintails. Get it? Ponytail.”
>You pointed at your tail, swishing it back and forth.
“And ponytail!”
>Now you pointed at your mane and shook it about.
>Chad stared back, a dead and dried out gaze.
>The look of a man who’s heard too much shit for one life time.
>”If you weren’t an adorable little pony right now I would strangle the shit out of you.”
>You just grinned and bumped his leg with your hips.
“You know you love it.”
>Smiling, laughing and prancing your way to the mall.
>Over all, you just felt great right now, refreshed from that apple, de-stressed because all your work was in for the year, comfy in your hoodie and socks.
>Yeah.
>You could get used to this pony thing.
>All jokes and sarcasm aside, Chad was looking pretty peppy too, the dark bags under his eyes were gone and he was humming tunes often.
>>25898799
>He practically bounded up the stone steps at the mall entrance, sparing a glance at the esoteric glass architecture as he went to open the door for you.
>You stared a little longer.
>It was almost Escher, like a fragmented crystal dragon breathing fire collided with a set of stairs made out of sand.
>Cubes and pyramids, dodecahedrons and hexagons stuck out.
>Spheres melted at the edges and flat planes folding into the third dimension.
>The whole mall had that sort of aesthetic, lights and balcony retaining walls were all decorated with these glass abstractions.
>Where it wasn’t glass, it was brushed steel or polished stone flooring.
>It was a little dazzling actually, walking through the door, light flashed a little everywhere because of it.
>Chad didn’t seem to be bothered by it though, so you chalked it up to your new eyes.
>People all around were taking pictures as the both of you passed through the halls, some of them shouted out hellos and pointed.
>But you weren’t getting swarmed, thank fuck.
>You just trotted along on the polished tiles, clip clopping away till you got to the stairs.
>There you paused, wondering.
“The food is all on the second floor right?”
>Chad snatched up a map from one of those directory screens and gave it a quick glance.
>”Yeah.”
>You nodded and kept on up them.
>Jeez this was hard when you were so short.
>The steps really weren’t designed for your height at all.
>Chad noticed your fatigue at the first landing.
>”Here, let me take your jacket at least.”
>You nodded and slipped out of it.
>He picked it up and slung it over his shoulder, nodding.
“Thanks.”
>That felt a bit better at least, you weren’t so hot anymore.
>>25898810
>The next two landings went a bit easier, you swear Chad was giving you little pushes up every now and then, but he’d always be looking away when you turned to check.
>Finally you reached the second floor.
>There was an urgent feeling though.
>In your bowels, not your loins.
>Your ears flopped down and your head drooped.
“Oh.”
>”What? Not what you were expecting?”
>The restaurants spread out before you, with plenty of seating all in between.
>People milled about with food on trays, finding tables to sit at with their families.
>Up above there was a fantastic looking chandelier, one of the glass pileups, in keeping with the usual look of the mall.
“N-Naw… I uhh… Is there a bathroom around here?”
>Chad’s face dropped.
>”Oh.”
>…
>You tapped your hooves a little while Chad checked the map.
>”Yeah, just over there.”
>Chad pointed over at a corridor at the very back of the court, next to a sketchy kebab place.
“Just wait for me outside the door, I’m going to run ahead.”
>You didn’t wait for Chad to answer, instead you took that time to start straight into a gallop through the food court, under tables, around chair legs and people legs.
>If you weren’t… Busy, it might have been a good adrenaline rush.
>People freaked a little where you passed, confused and trying to get out of your way.
>You just pumped your legs, hooves clopping loudly against the tiles.
>Finally you reached your destination, ducking around a stroller and the mother pushing it, you dashed into the women’s bathroom.
>You were met with about three gasps and one squee.
>No time to look, you just jumped into the nearest stall and plopped yourself down on the porcelain throne inside.
That's all for now. Goodnight PTFG.
>>25898834
Ponies with ponytails are amazingly cute and so is that pizza-entranced mare.
Good night. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Worst scenario is a delivery on Sunday, happenings may happen, and a delivery may end up here sooner.
I'll still write though.Surprised I got the knocks for the ride joke and not for the Nanomachines.
>>25898834
I wasn't a fan of this story at first but now I'm thoroughly imersed. Looking forward to more.
>>25900751
Better than me, I feel like i'll never get an updoot for my story out because lazy.
>>25900964
Be less lazy.
>>25900964
You gotta discipline yourself anon. Writer's block is an excuse to fall back on. Write an hour a day. It doesn't matter if you think it's schlock, just make yourself do it to get used to it.
>>25901479
Why write when it literally serves no purpose for my self?
>>25901556
Oh, I thought you were into writing. My bad.
>>25901570
I used to enjoy it. Then it became a time sink with little reward.
>>25901624
Yeah, even writing the like 3 greens I've ever written I know that feel.
please no. I don't want to be a pony
>>25901886
To each their own. Would you rather be a gryphon, changeling, diamond dog or dragon or something else perhaps?
>>25901886
You'll become what I make you, you cheeky cunt.
>>25901912
Dragons are bretty gool.
>>25901912
I wanna be human!
>>25901921
No pls
>>25901624
Yes, I wrote for the general once and the only reward I got was a small amount of notoriety and lots of shame.
>>25902362
It may be worth trying again (assuming my guess about who you are is correct).
>>25902915
Who do you think I am?
>>25899272
Peetzer pones are adorable.
I felt that Keyboard needed a more defined mane style, at least for a little bit, her mane was kind of vague. I'm still trying to decide a final look for it, if anyone has suggestions I'm open to them.
>>25900927
Good to hear, and thanks. What changed your mind?
>Three hooves clacked up onto the seat, but the fourth had other plans.
>Your right fore hoof just kept on sliding, dragging you with it, right over the toilet and into the stall wall.
“Ah!”
>With a bang your snout smashed into the cheapo aluminum wall, followed by the rest of you.
>You barely had time to register the pain from that before sliding down the wall to smack your butt on the ground.
“Ow! Fuck!”
>Cringing and stinging all over, you rolled away from the wall, eyes watering.
>Fucking fuck, was your nose bleeding?”
“Owowowowowow… FUCK!”
>You felt something wet dripping down from your nostrils.
>Dreading the touch, you brought a hoof up to check.
>Red.
>Yep, blood.
>God damn it.
>Your bowels urged you on though.
>Shaking a little, you got up on all four hooves, wincing every now and then as a sore spot protested.
>Then you snorted, determined.
>You tugged off your socks and set them on top of the toilet paper dispenser, best to keep them somewhat clean.
>Then you checked to make sure the door was closed proper and locked.
>Now…
>Hop up, two hooves on the seat.
>Hind legs now…. Annnnnnd….
>Yes.
>There you stood, bleeding from the nose and a little bashed up, but on the toilet.
>Slowly, making sure not to slip, you turned in place.
>Tail end towards the back, head end to the front.
>You flicked your tail up to keep it out of the toilet as you sat.
>Your muzzle scrunched up at the thought of all this.
>This is going to be super weird.
>>25903533
>It was super weird.
“Nope. Nope.”
>Your business was done though, so you hopped off the seat, sure to keep your tail high as usual.
>You almost bit down on the dangling strip of toilet paper from the dispenser with your mouth, but you stopped yourself at the last moment.
>Instead you got your hoof all wrapped around it and you tugged it down.
>Once you’d gotten enough, you wiped your butt.
>God this was weird.
>Just when you were getting used to this pony thing.
>Your muzzle was still scrunched up in slight disdain.
>Finally you just tossed the used toilet paper into the toilet.
>Up on your hind legs, you flushed it all away.
>Over the roar of the toilet you gave yourself a once over, checking for any… stains.
“If only I could flush away the memories…”
>You sighed.
“But I’m going to be doing this every fucking time anyway.”
>Your all white fur was going to be a liability, you could tell already.
>Luckily though, you’d managed to avoid getting anything on yourself this time.
>Pretty good for a first.
>Your snout was still bleeding though, you could see it dripping down on the linoleum floor.
>And now that the toilet flushing had subsided, you could hear a lot of excited chatter just outside your stall.
>”Oh my gosh that was Keyboard Masher!”
>”Did you see her galloping? So cute!”
>”I hope she’s ok… That bang was awful loud…”
>”Oh she’s fine, you heard her swear right? Adorable.”
>>25902940I'm guess the writer of the infamous story that involved being raped by the dog. Whether or not that's right, sorry for bringing it up again.
>>25903542
>You were about to get gang snuggled.
>You mouthed your socks and opened the door.
>Three gasps, one squee.
>Four women were waiting outside the door for you, one twenty something and three in their thirties.
>All of them had their eyes on you.
>You waved.
“Harro.”
>”YOUR NOSE! HERE LET M-“
>”HELLO HELLO HEL-“
>”CAN I GET A PICT-“
>”LEMME SNUGG-“
>Your ears flopped down at all the noise and you winced.
>Jesus Christ, why.
>You decided ignoring them was the best option, and started towards the sink to rinse off.
>But one woman jumped in your way, a twenty something blonde, lifting up a wetted tissue.
>”Here just let me get that blood off for you dearie.”
“Ner, m fine. Hreffy.”
>She rubbed the tissue against your nose anyway, smiling.
>Did these people even have ears?
>You snorted and pushed your way past, hopped up on your hind legs so that you could reach the counter.
>Setting your socks down next to the sink, you twisted the faucet on with your mouth and stuck your hooves into the stream.
>All of a sudden you felt your mane tugged back, ponytail pulled taught.
>”This ponytail is so cute! Did you just get it done?”
“Ow, yeah I did. Could you let go pl-“
>”Wow your tail is so well kept! Oh my gosh imagine if it had a red bow on it! Here let me get one.”
>You turned your head, frowning.
>Three of the women were bumbling with their cellphones while a third, the same blonde, was tugging on your tail now, reaching into her purse.
>>25903552Yeah that's me.
>>25903562What a legacy.
>>25903553
“No thank you. I just want to get clean and leave.”
>”Oh.”
>The blonde backed away, face down.
>Whatever.
>If she didn’t want to get hurt, she shouldn’t have tugged on your ponytails.
>You finished your business washing your hooves and tugging your socks back on, refusing the help of all four of the women in turn.
>And now you trotted to the exit, the women were looking away, all a little disappointed.
>Your snout twitched.
“Ah…”
>Your head lifted high, muzzle pointed up to the sky.
“AhhhhhhhCHOOEFRRR”
>You sneezed, and you swear there was something of a whinny in there too.
>Immediately you could FEEL the women behind you flicking their gaze to you.
>You looked over your back and you could SEE the grins spreading on their faces.
“Now just calm down okay?”
>”CUUUUUUUTTTTEEE!”
>”OHOHOHOHOHOH-“
>”CMERE!”
>”HAS ANYONE GOT A FEATHER?”
>War is hell.
>You tried to gallop away, but you slipped and slid on the linoleum.
>How the fuck did I even dash in here earlier?
>The ladies practically pounced on you, hands rubbed along your back, fingers pinched your cheeks and fingers ran through your mane.
>You struggled against the press, snorting and tossing your head, eyes rolling.
>The babble coming out of them was unintelligible, you just kept your ears pressed down trying to block it out.
>Finally you found an opening through a set of legs, past them and through the door.
That's that update.
>>25900964
I like writing, usually when I run low on confidence or I'm not really up for it, I down a few beer and just write anyway while I play copious vidya and shit talk with friends. Then I'll edit the whole mess come the morning after.
>>25898231
That's a real detailed explanation, I love it when people do in depth interpretations like this.
>>25903552
>>25903562
>>25903570
Also, seriously? That sounds hilarious, gimme a link to the pastebin for that shit.
>>25903613
I don't think I still have the link
let me see if I can find one
>>25903613
>>25903749
Oh boy, after a bit of searching I found it.
>>25903868
Gib me.
>>25904048
fuck I forgot the link
shit
http://pastebin.com/h5cpmv1a
>>25903613
What a lucky escape. Shame she won't get that bow.
>>25904062
Oh my god. Holy shit. This is like a masters thesis in derailing a thread. Thanks anon, I needed that laugh.
>>25904328
You're welcome
>>25904062
It was going well until that last part.
>>25904062
what is this I don't even
>>25905085
>>25905866
Yeah, I didn't mean for it to go there honest. I just got caught up in writing when I wrote it, and then posted it.
Now that I've reread it after all this time I actually think it might be salvageable.
>>25904062
>>25905960
Honest though, this really isn't that bad. The sentence structure needs a lot of work, but at least the spelling is ok. The pacing is kind of shit to be honest. There's a lot of repeating words in sentences.
If you're gonna stick with the dog rape, then go more into detail, it's a little lacking there.
Pastebin updated. Update again later tonight, likely.
>>25906012
>If you're gonna stick with the dog rape,
This is 4chan. Do you really think he's not gonna stick with the dog rape?
>>25906012
>Update again later tonight, likely.
Nice
>>25906148
It seemed like that part was what people objected to. I dunno.
>>25906012
It was a one shot I wrote in a short amount of time with little proofreading.
Also I tend to have some stilted writingbecause I have schizoid personality disorder,which can make natural word flow difficult
>>25908215
That's racist.
>>25908236
It is, but what can you do about it? Being a pony isn't a protected class.
>>25903613
>You could hear the four women following after you.
>Thinking on your hooves, you dashed to your left, further down the corridor.
>You galloped past two people leaning against the wall, chatting, and barged your way into the closet just a few steps away.
>Real spacious janitors supply closet.
>A quick scan and you found the perfect hiding place, the big stainless steel bucket in the corner.
>You jumped inside, rolled to flip it over and covered yourself with it.
>Immediately you perked your ears to hear all you could, rubbing at your nostrils trying to get the blood out so that you could smell better too.
>”Was that-“
>Someone outside shushed.
>Then came footsteps, heavy and multitudinous.
>Probably the women who were chasing you.
>”Hey have you seen any little ponies run by?”
>Yep.
>”Are you on fucking drugs? Jesus fucking Christ, can’t a guy talk to someone without getting harassed by nutters on meth?”
>You pushed your bucket up a bit, peeking out your muzzle.
>Was that…?
>”Well I n-“
>”What? You never? WELL. I. ALWAYS. If you don’t want someone to holler at you then you shouldn’t go around asking stupid shitty questions. Fuck off.”
>You snorted and laughed aloud.
“Thanks Chad.”
>All at once you stopped worrying and you came out of your hiding spot, smiling.
>You sniffed at the air, smelling the cigarette smoke.
>Definitely Chad.
>He’d probably knock once they were gone.
>So you waited, sitting patiently.
>”N-no she’s real… Haven’t you seen Keyboard Masher on Twitter?”
>>25909526
>”Unlike you I don’t browse shit fuck social propaganda trash in my spare time. Have I asked you to fuck off yet by any chance? Because that would be great.”
>Silence for a second.
>Then footsteps, getting quieter as their makers got farther off.
>Once the footsteps had completely dissipated, there was a knocking on the door.
>”Anon? You in there? They’re gone now.”
>You pranced over to the door and pushed it open to meet a peeved looking Chad staring down at you, cig dangling from his mouth.
>That peeved look lasted about as long as it took for Chad to notice the little bit of blood still dripping from your snout.
>Right then it turned murderous.
>Chad bit down hard on his cigarette, severing it clean as he turned away.
>”I’ll be right back.”
>”No Chad you stay right here!”
>Just now you noticed the other person with Chad, a young lady.
>Shock of natural red hair, military green skirt and brown thigh high stockings with a big dark brown Russian overcoat.
>There was only one redhead that you knew who’d wear a skirt in December.
>Chad snarled and whirled around.
>”Fuck that shit Tammy! They hurt her! No fucking way I’m dropping that.”
>He pointed at you, still glaring straight at Tammy.
>“You think Anonymous would drop something like that if it were me who got hurt?”
“Chad, while I definitely would not drop something like that-“
>”See!”
>Tammy rolled her eyes and rocked back and forth on the balls of her feet, fists pressed to her hips.
>”Well what the hell are you going to do, huh Chad?”
>”I’m going to fucking-“
>You sighed and bumped hard up against Chad’s legs to catch his attention.
“Chad!”
>Finally Chad stopped and listened for a second, staring down at you, concerned.
>>25909537
“Chill. They didn’t hurt me or anything. A little rough petting at the most. I got the bloody nose myself because I’m a clumsy dumbass and I slipped jumping on the toilet.”
>Chad crouched down and checked you over, looking at scrapes and wiping at the flow of blood from your snout.
>His eyes met yours, concerned and serious.
>”For real?”
>You nodded, solemn.
“Yes. I am a clumsy ass.”
>”You’re no donkey, you’re a pony!”
>…
>Both you and Chad turned, brows raised in unison, and stared at Tammy.
>She just giggled and crouched down alongside Chad.
>Without warning she reached out and gave you a good scratch behind the ears, smiling.
>”Hey ‘Non. I heard the news from Chad. I like the new look! I always figured you for a blonde anyway.”
>You couldn’t help but smile back and let her at you.
“Thanks Tammy.”
>Carefree.
>That was Tammy in a nutshell.
>It was refreshing to have her here.
>Chad was your best bro and all, but he could get real hard headed.
>Not that you were any better, which is why Tammy fit so well.
“Where’s Thot hiding?”
>Tammy giggled and crab walked over behind you.
>She started fixing up your mane a bit, it had some loose ends here and there from all the running and crashing you’d done.
>”Oh you just missed her, she’s ordering some food.”
>Chad relaxed quite a bit, there was a smile on that face again thank fuck, and he was leaning against the wall lighting another cig.
“Alright.”
>>25909544
>Tammy undid your pony tail and then tied your mane back up into a big, loose braid, just three knots through it.
>She showed it to you in her little pocket mirror.
>”Adorable?”
“Definitely. Thanks a bunch.”
>Tammy grinned and hopped up onto her feet.
>”No problem. So how did you get like this anyway? Chad didn’t get the time to tell that part of it all.”
>”Pon-E. New drug.”
>Chad stepped forward, pulling out the little pill bottle you’d gotten from the OC out of your hoodie.
>He tossed it to Tammy so she could look at it.
“Yeah I got it slipped to me, Tylenol bottle full of them. Takes two in twelve hours to OD and that makes the change permanent, just one will change you for twelve hours.”
>Tammy shook the bottle around, pills rattling.
>”Huh.”
>Popping the cap off the bottle, she dumped one of the little white tablets out and took a good look.
>And then Tammy popped the tablet into her mouth.
>Tammy swallowed, smiling as carefree as ever.
>>25909572
That's where I'll leave off for tonight.
Sleep tight PTFG.
>>25902250
Oh gosh I never noticed just how sexy Garble is
>>25909586
You wonderful, devious bastard.
>>25909572
>HAPPENING
>>25909572
Chad proves his worth yet again in hilarious fashion and now this new character wishes to try being the little pony. Interesting developments are afoot.
>>25908841
>>25909572
>inb4 Tammy becomes the stallion
>inb4 lustful horse sex
>>25911905
Or she could become a mare with the same outcome.
>>25912994
I would be okay with this.
Where was I?
>>25913242
Where were you?
Cute pic.
>>25913313
I was dealing with finals and drinking
>>25913328
Welcome back, writefriend
>>25913328
Then welcome back. I hope your finals went well.
Did you have a pastebin for your story?
>>25913651
I don't use pastebin
I don't care to save my work because I'm writing a fucking weird story. Future generations will not look back on us fondly
>>25872429
I only just now noticed that the text on the OP pic has been edited
>>25913789
This is why you always read the fine print before agreeing to whatever Twilight is proposing.
So this is just anon is a gay slut general right?
>>25914264
No, it's the TF general. Anon can be whatever he wants.
>>25914264
This general is for all things relating to humans turning into ponies (other transformations are also acceptable). The human in question doesn't have to be Anon or gay or slutty. That's all up to the writers.
>>25908841
>weareponies
>we'reponies
>wereponies
pls
>>25915281
Yes please. Could make for a cute story.
>>25890858
Cool art but rather disturbing.
>>25918331
Very good. Now, let's remove these bandages.
Hmmm, your face has healed nicely. To tell you the truth, these bandages where more for your protection- to hide you from those who want you dead. As of today, your name is Ahab. Forget everything, your name, your past.
>>25918564
fucking kek
I immediately thought of that but you beat me to it you bastard
>>25918953
>>25918564
>Ahab
That would explain my obsession with hunting for the white pone.
>>25894039
Pretty good. I'm sure Nequiora (nice name by the way) can handle these guys.
Update delayed due Rocket League, beer and friendship.
>>25919693
An acceptable excuse. Have fun.
Berry Punch TF/TG First Person
Imgur link for the NSFW version
http://i.imgur.com/0nkDoK0.jpg
>>25920485
That's really good. Looking in a mirror at your transformed self always makes for a nice picture.
>>25920485
Eww, it's anthro. Who would want to transform into that?
>>25920680
He says, completely ignoring the fore hooves.
>>25920688
And yet not ignoring the entire rest of the body. And the boobs.
>>25920710
>And the boobs
Mere stepping stones on the path to proper crotchtits.
>>25888040
That's a cool drawing, though I feel a bit sorry for the guy. He should have chosen "friendship", however suspicious the offer may be.
>>25921919
Ah, the horror of your arm turning into macaroni.
>>25920485
Fella named Bass Canon (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Bass+Canon) wrote up a story to accompany this drawing!
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He tried to get off the alcoholic high, but this new AJ Cider was just too much to say no to. It had a tingling, almost magical flavor to it, and the intoxicating smell of it also made it the drink of the new generation. There were strict guidelines though; no more than 10 cans per week, or the company “Sweet Apple Acres” would not guarantee your integrity, or whatever they meant.
But Chuckster, as his friends like to call him, was not really a fan of label warnings, or really common sense. So after his friend Ace made a bet with him that he could not chug 12 of those bad boys in a hour, he quickly shook the hand and bought the large pack for himself. The first 5 were a breeze, as his trained stomach made no arguments against the dance with the devil. One he got to 9 though, things got a lot more complicated. His vision was getting hazy, and both his nose and mouth began to drool.
He stammered, but managed to open the 10th can. Everything in his body was buzzing, and saying no, but a bet is a bet. He began chugging the bubbly nectar, as it glowed in a magical way, going down into his now desperate stomach.
A new, numbing sensation came over him, as he felt a pressure all around his body. Bathroom began to ring in his pounding head, and he tried to get up,only to fall flat on his face. His legs were being stretched into new positions, as did his arms. Purple began to cover his skin, first timidly, but then in waves of color.
>>25920485
>>25922520
He managed to get up, the clopping of his... Hooves on the parquet evident. What was happening to him? A mirror! Yes, he remembered the big mirror in the bedroom. Almost dancing from dizziness and the new sense of gravity, Charles managed to lean onto the mirror. His waist had already gained a hourglass shape to it. Not to severe, but the curves were there. His hazy look first looked at his right hand, the fingers merged into a purple hoof, with the thumb holding the can, and apparently his humanity as well. The other hand was just about to merge its fingers, a sensation that made him groan in pleasure. Whatever was happening, his body wanted more.
And soon enough, as his face began to stretch, and a precious muzzle, fit with bigger eyes and a quirky mane replaced the old male features, pleasure started to come back in. His new ears flopped back, sign of fear, and confusion.
Lastly, as his pants fell down, and the raging boner he had began to suck back in, he knew that the end was coming. Each push inside made him number, and more aroused. Everything he ever was was now under siege in his mind, as the penis kept retreating, one violent thrust at a time. Then, as only the tip remained, the pulsating assault on Charles stopped.
“I’ll never drink again...” was all that Charles could muster.
Then it him, and she collapsed on the floor, losing consciousness. The new vagina began to leak fluids of pleasure, as the mare twitched on the floor, a tired but happy smile on her face, the personalities mixing like a nice wine and some fresh Coke. Charles was right, he would never drink again, but Berry? Berry Punch might just be the damn mascot for the cider.
>>25921958
>>25921958
It's not just the arm. Soon you'll be a whole macaponi.
>>25922525
Nice. When they sell packs of 12, but you can't safely drink more than 10, it's almost like they want you to fall into their trap.
>>25923666
Hi satan
>>25909572
>Dead silence.
>You and Chad both stared, open mouthed, brains still whirring and trying to catch up.
>Tammy for her part just flinched and put her hands up to the top of her head.
>”Ow. That stings a bit.”
>You moved first, bucking open the janitors’ closet again.
>Chad understood immediately, he grabbed Tammy by the shoulders and led her in after you.
>Quickly, you kicked the bucket over for Tammy to sit on and she obliged.
>Already you could see her new pony ears coming in as the human ones shifted back into her head.
>Tammy noticed too, grinning and rubbing them.
>”Wow! I can hear a lot better now, like, a whole lot better.”
>As Tammy played with her new ears, Chad stared at you, still not quite understanding.
>You shook your head, sighing, and bit down on Tammy’s shoes, tugged them off.
>Stockings next.
>Chad paused.
>Then he nodded and got to it, unbuttoning Tammy’s overcoat.
>”Sorry ‘bout this Tam.”
>”Oh that’s okay, I really don’t want to lose these clothes anyway, they’re nice. Hey look!”
>Tammy lifted her hand up to Chads’ face.
>Sky blue fur was spreading across the back of it, and her fingers were all melding together.
>”Hoofsies! Oh I like the color!”
>By the time Chad got her overcoat off, Tammy had shrunk down quite a bit and you could hear her spine clacking.
>Tammy’s black tank top slipped as her shoulders retreated and covered over with blue fur, falling around her waist in a heap.
>She didn’t bother trying to cover her chest, her breasts had already disappeared.
>You got to undoing Tammy’s skirt, ignoring the cricks and cracks of her legs shrinking and reshaping.
>It came off just in time for her hips to start pushing out, thighs becoming furred flanks.
>”Awww, I just styled it too.”
>A quick peek up, Tammy’s’ hair had turned a pale green, her styling fell apart and a new mane flopped down with little natural curls at the ends.
>>25924497
>You went to get Tammy’s’ panties, but she put her new hoof in the way, blushing a little.
>”That’s fine, I don’t really like these ones anyway. They’re cheap, and pink.”
>Tank top and overcoat slung over his shoulder, Chad gave Tammy some space and stood aside.
>”I still can’t believe you actually did it, Tammy. What the fuck.”
“Yeah. Holy shit. At least warn us before you just go popping pills.”
>Tammy tried to shrug, but her shifting anatomy wasn’t cooperating.
>She slid out of her seat on the bucket, and lay on the floor on her side as the changes progressed.
>You watched as her new tail came in, green like her mane, over the back of her panties.
>The underwear was being pushed pretty much to its limits now.
>Tammy rolled over onto her back, you could hear her organs shifting around, those weird and mildly nauseating sounds you’d tried to block out when you’d changed.
>She didn’t seem to mind as much, her ears didn’t flop down at all as she stared and watched her body shift.
>All of a sudden there was an especially loud crack and Tammy’s’ jaw pushed out, her little button nose disappearing into a blue muzzle.
>A mark appeared on both of her flanks, the black silhouette of a bird in flight.
>…
>Seemed everything was over.
>You and Chad sighed in unison, and Tammy giggled, kicking her hooves at the air.
>”Don’t I look sooooo cute? Oh my god this is so cool!”
“Yeah, yeah. You look adorable Tammy. Maybe do it on your own in your room next time though, it’s going to be hell with the both of us trotting around the mall.”
>Chad groans and rubs his temples.
>”Jesus fucking Christ. I feel like I’m working at the daycare all over again.”
>Tammy rolls her eyes and sits up on her haunches, panties creaking ominously.
>”Oh shUHhs-“
>Tammy breaks into a coughing fit, hunched over.
>You set a hoof on her back, concerned.
“You alright Tam?”
>She nods, still coughing.
>>25924506
>”Ye*cough*Yeah. I *cough*Ahhhhh. Haahhhhh. I think I just, whoa, whoa that’s deep. Did your voice go deep like this?”
>What.
>Tammy’s voice had dropped, deep and masculine and honestly…
>Kind of hot.
>Like, casually cutesuave.
>Those were the only words you could use to describe it, honestly.
“N-no. That didn’t happen.”
>Chad was frowning, one brow perked.
>”What the fuck is going on?”
>He was answered with a loud wet sound coming out of Tammy, like flesh sliding across flesh.
>Tammy gasped and fell onto her back.
>There was a bulge on her crotch, pushing against her pink panties.
>Before your eyes, the bulge grew and extended, while Tammy’s body shifted more.
>Tammy’s feminine details disappeared, her curves sharpened and her muzzle became more rectangular than round.
>Her mane receded a bit, coming up for a shorter, more boyish look.
>With a great ripping noise, Tammy’s panties finally gave way, revealing a meaty, pulsating horse cock.
>”Nope. You’re up to the plate Anon. Fuck that shit, I did my time.”
>Chad bailed, never looked back once.
>You stared wide eyed, mouth gaping.
>You were essentially paralysed with arousal, your snatch was soaking and your clit was winking over and over again.
>Cock.
>Fuck me.
>NO.
>NOPE.
>You snorted and sat down, willing yourself not to walk over to Tammy, all while your sub-conscious screamed for her dick.
>Tammy panted and stared down at her… His new addition, slightly bemused.
>>25924518
>”That’s pretty big isn’t it? Huh.”
>He gave you an embarrassed glance and tried to cover it up with his hooves, blushing, but the cock just grew even longer and thicker.
>Another loud couple of shlicks and a weighty set of balls grew below it, bulging with cu-
>STOP.
>NOPE.
>Every single iota of your being wanted to fuck Tammy so bad right now.
>But you had all the signs flashing red in your brain, it was lockdown son, no fuck-
“Just let it hang out Tam, you’re going to have to get used to being naked all the time anyway.”
>The words just slipped out of your mouth, you’d hardly even thought about saying them.
>This estrous shit was seriously fucked up.
>”Really? Well alright…”
>Still blushing, Tammy sat up and let his cock loll free, flared head bobbing at the air.
>Hell, it was still growing, bumping against Tammy’s barrel as it went.
>Finally it came to a halt, fully erect, about halfway up to his chest.
>You hadn’t noticed it, but Tammy hadn’t shrunk in size as much as you had when you became a pony.
>All in all, he was about five inches taller than you were.
>Big and… and muscled and toned and-
>”Hey Anon? Ummm… I’m not really up for walking around in public with a honking huge boner though. You used to have one, what do I do with this thing to get it to chill out? And hey, what’s that smell anyway?”
>Tammy takes a big whiff of the air around her, smiling curiously with her eyes half lidded.
>”It’s… Nice, like alluring and musky.”
>You trot up to him and smile back.
“Here let me help you with it.”
>You try to put your muzzle up to the tip of his shaft, but Tammy shuffles away, back up against the wall.
>He’s staring at you, a little shocked.
>”Anon what are you-“
“Shuuusssshhhh, shush shush shush. The walls keep most of the noise out but if you’re too loud then Chad might hear.”
>”Chad? Anonymous wh-Ah!“
That's all for now. Be lurking.
>>25924527
Really nice. It seems that the prediction of her becoming a stallion was correct. You don't see that very often.
>>25925372
Opposite Gender swap always happens, nothing new here.
>>25926000
Doesn't always happen in Pon-E stories, just almost always. Greek Ponies doesn't involve gender shift.
>>25926000
Mostly, yeah, but you don't see many examples of FtM.
/r/ing a story or more art where male anon gets turned into a little filly and then when he get's turned back to a human it's as a femanon.
