Hey cunts My girl friend wrote this poem and doesn't Believe me when I sag its good, pic related
>>8209496
why is it at a 90° angle and gilded
Sorry, bad photo
It's okay. Not too cringeworthy but it doesn't scan and totally falls apart towards the end.
>>8209496
[x] rhyme
[x] alliteration
[ ] attention to meter
[ ] interesting vocabulary
[ ] interesting topic
[x] color in the hollows of letters with another color
Vader Sultanfuss/10
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xo9KuT8vtSU
Fuck off pedo.
>>8209496
It isn't good, sorry
>>8209496
juvenile and generic
not cringe, but also not anything