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Previous thread >>2514823
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=ggli_%28yuine_wantan%29
I'm looking for an artist who can colour like this.
Can anyone here/does anyone know who can colour/shade like this whom I can commission?
>>2532714
Why are these threads so dead now?
>>2532713
This is a fetish I didn't know I had.
>>2532740
>/ic/ - self promotion and samefag advertising
>>2532741
furries aren't allowed anymore and they chased away the only good artists that were posting quality artworks and redlines.
>>2532756
how many layers does your tinfoil hat have?
>>2532777
looks like shit, now fuck off
can you read the rules?
>>2532777
this looks like you took a photo you found on tumblr, drew on top of it, and then tried to stylize the body to make it into porn. Also, tigers don't have hair you fucking maymay.
>>2532777
I really hope this traced pile of shit will also be the last.
>>2532741
Because of that jealous shitposter. Nobody wants to post their work here while that guy is at his shitty job, frustrated because even with his 10+ years of studies and learnings, now watches how beginners and rookies start out of the blue doing porn and earning more in 1 month than what he can make in 1 year.
Its basically that.
>>2532740
wow, this actually makes a lot of sense, I'll have to try it.
is this basically how a lot of shading in digital art works?
>>2532932
ok wait a sec
>>2532932
you seem to be missing the point of why it was deleted
or you could just use 4chan x plugin
>>2532932
sent ;)
>>2532740
well fuck I've been doing it wrong
all this time I've been trying to emulate the sharp defining edges by doing each little bit of shading on a new layer, using an eraser to make the edge, then continuing on with a new layer
fuckkk
>>2532714
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>>2533024
no rules just tools
>>2532741
some shithead is chasing away all regular artists who aren't kayle. why would he choose him as somebody to look up to is beyond me.
>>2533084
I don't think that's the case. there's an idiot that is trying to make kyle look bad by posting his art, so that people think it's kyle that is shilling his own stuff.
that cancerous douchebag is not looking up to him. he's just jealous.
>>2533048
copy and paste is a tool. so are you.
>>2532713
Who's the artist of the original post?
>>2532713
work in progress obviously. Time to colour it- the part I dread.
>>2533125
dickbrains can please GTFO to /aco/. thank you.
>>2533127
>Time to colour
nope, sry. it's time to do 100-200 more of these. unless you are one of those turd polishing artists. are you?
>>2533136
Aco is just about the porn aspect. We are here to discuss techniques and show our art, even if it'd NSFW- it makes more sense to post it on the artboard.
Plus my art is not good enough to put on /aco/
>>2533139
I said that because this is obviously a dickbrain that wants to fap to the guys art and doesn't give a shit about giving any kind of critique.
>>2533024
There's nothing wrong with doing it that way.
>>2532741
the sooner these shitty porn threads disappear the better the board will be.
>>2533042
Link to his blog?
>>2533150
>being this insecure
all my keks
>>2532713
Anyone know the source of the op image
>>2533179
>you can't colour bad sketches
there, fixed.
i finished something from a while ago
>>2532714
you mean like ishikei? there's hundreds of clones of him in japan but you'd need to speak japanese and most of them aren't too keen on the idea of commissions...i don't know a whole lot of western artists who go out of their way to specifically emulate ishikei
>>2533150
why anon? what do you do when you go to a museum and see a naked figure?
or even better, what happens if you are watching a film at the theatre and suddenly a sex scene appears? do you wake up and leave the place? or do you try to close and rage on the product?
even one more example, you dont want porn isnt it? are you a religion radicalist? are you ashamed of your own body? does it look to tits and asses make you unconfortable or are you still a boy whose parents dont allow to come to 18+ websites?
what are you doing in a nsfw thread then? please leave and come back when you grow up. thanks.
>>2533230
>>2533170
>actually thinking shitty animu hentai porn threads is in any way comparable to artistic nudity in museums.
>thinking a porn thread has its place on an art thread instead of /h/ or /d/
>insecurity
>mfw
>>2533252
so drawing porn and erotic art doesnt belong to /ic/?
please, tell me more, anon.
>>2533185
True, I don't question that. Bad decision to colour a sketch if it's utter shit. I was just confused as to why that guy called ME harsh when I wasn't even the one talking about sketching.
My comment was on whether porn should be on /ic/ so I'm confused as to why I'm now in some discussion about colouring sketches
>>2533252
dear anon, have you noticed this board its a nsfw board? you dont need to thank me for the info
This is my last drawing and the truth is that there is something which I didn't like.
I would like you give my tips to do it better.
>>2533301
her left foot looks like a fucking hand and your proportions are wrong on the left leg, adding to the weird factor to that side of her
>>2533301
go to the beginner thread, I know this might seem harsh but you are just polishing a turd and there is nothing we could tell you to improve on other than EVERYTHING
instead of telling yourself you are too good for the beginning thread and that we are just trying to put you down, listen to that part which is telling you there is something off with your drawing, and then compare your work to one of your favorite artists and decide to up them
if you has shit taste in artists... well, get better taste nigga
>>2533316
I think that post is bait.
>>2533301
Foreshortening is crap
> https://mega.co.nz/#!yEVH0RzI!hExkmbL9WTEV20aI10De7q9J4rf3t3A6uluz4cT9FbM [perspective made easy]
Pillowshading is crap,
> vk DOT com SLASH doc25354472_262504889 [ james gurney - color and lighting ]
Patreon takes 1/3 of the picture
You have a patreon while you obviously still grasp the concept of anatomy (I don't know where that right leg starts)
Background is flat as a pancake and pasting real life textures seems lazy and sticks out badly
> vk DOT com SLASH doc366484900_437540636 [ Drawing Scenary by Jack Hamm ]
Also, I don't like the feet.
>>>/h/4240899 Use them as a reference and do a master study of the pics you like.
>>2532713
>SHOTA ARE NOT ALLOWED
what about glorious /ss/
>>2533150
>>2533316
>mfw I don't get this much attention from my drawings when I post anymore.
>>2533461
You've either improved enough that people don't consider you a hopeless newbie anymore or you're so shit that people have told you the same thing over and over and they grew tired of it.
sketch
>>2533213
Funny I was just downloading a bunch of Ishikei pics today. I love the way he paints skin. Do you know anyone with a similar style on his level?
>>2533447
No /ss/
No /ll/
No nothing, punk
>>2533225
saying the harsh truth in your scrubby faces make you guys run away? awwww. you poor little thingies.
trust me kid, it's much better for you to drop everything now and find a normal job if you are so easily demotivated. fucking sissy..
>>2533252
commercial art doesn't belong to /ic/? really?
fucking kek. please GTFO tardo.
>>2533301
haha, omg. please dude, learn what foreshortening is. seriously. I can't even look at this piece of garbage. I don't even know where to start.
>patreon
hahahaahhaha
>>2533461
we have our own insecurities anon, so it's easy to give a shitty artist critique
>>2533520
Im wondering, have you ever posted your art here anon? Im curious about how would it be.
>>2533478
>Empowered porn
Fuck yeah for concept alone. I see that you even tried to emulate artists original style.
>>2533544
it's down right criminal the lack of good porn of comic, since it itself is basically soft core.
Any feedback?
>>2533539
never
and never will.
I'm too well know to risk being recognized and having some assburgers start a personal vendetta.
>>2533574
>t. liar
>>2533478
This is pretty flawed. The perspective on the tits on the right is off, you don't know how to draw the muscles of the leg and how to connect the thigh to the lower leg. The armpit makes no sense. She's being penetrated through her peehole/clitoris instead of where the vaginal entrance is. That's just for structure alone (and there's tons of other smaller mistakes). Then there's the pretty insecure and scratchy gesture of the lineart, and I won't even start with how boring the composition is.
Well, at least you know how to draw symbol faces. It's a shame though, since every single beginner out there seems to be a master in that field.
You need to put more training into your fundamentals. Perspective and gesture training above all. If you can't draw powerful and extreme povs (for which you need to have a very good perspective knowledge), your compositions will always look boring. And if you don't improve your gesture, your characters will always look lifeless.
Sorry for the harsh critique. Just my honest opinion.
>>2533586
see. that's one of those assburgers I mentioned.
I asked for the feedback, no need to apologize.
I was going more for a view underneath, my idea didn't translate apparently? I will say that this is no where near final line work, for what it's worth.
>>2532757
Real talk, can't I just post my furry/pony images here, but just censor the tail/head/whatever so it looks human enough? I like criticism and this is a good place usually
>>2533620
yeah. I think that is totally allowed.
>>2533618
Ok, now it's much more readable and I guess I've been way too harsh with you about the construction and perspective part. I can do a quick redline of some areas that need refinement if you want. It's mostly just perspective corrections.
>>2533626
I'd really appreciate, thanks!
I know it's bad. I need feedback.
>>2533651
don't photograph on an angle, hard to evaluate.
>>2533494
There is nobody, that's why he's got so many clones. Go Masahiro is someone rather popular who colors in a similar way, I suppose. http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=18158
>>2533651
Use a scan app. Cant see jack captain
>>2533451
I didn`t know Trump was in Home Alone 2.
It's extremely rough right now
You can laugh if you want to that's okay
I'm not sure how to animate the tentacle going in yet
still have the legs and stuff to do I'm aware
>>2533144
Are you honestly defending the sanctity of critique on a porn thread? Are you really that autistic? If you want constructive criticism, you go to another thread. This one is solely focusing on ass and titties you uptight twat.
>>2534978
Do tits last dude
I know it's fun and everything but tits jiggling is a secondary action and should be done after all the other motions are down.
>>2535353
Thanks, that should make things smoother
Appreciate it this is only my second animation
>>2534978
this is so fucking bad.
>>2535318
>I am butthurt because I know I have a dickbrain and you are hurting my dickbrain feelings.
>you are that autistic, not me
kek.
time to pick one, my little tardo friend.
>>2534978
Besides doing the primary motions first, you should also draw the whole animation in rough to see if it looks good and then to the necessary adjustments, instead of trapping yourself with finalized lineart. (Most of the effort you spent in drawing this all cleaned up is now going into waste)
>>2533213
Blog?
>>2535489
http://mw-magister.tumblr.com/
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=367529
>>2532713
source is soapmonster. he doesn't do a lot of what the op image has.
>>2534978
google 12 principles of animation
Still slow, but how'd this turn out?
>>2535773
I assume the bigger (and I don't mean just taller) body size of Rosalina is intentional.
Time for an anticipation fap.
>>2535775
Yeah I made her bigger than peach cause I'm into that
>>2535773
muh dick
>>2535776
You could also explain it with Rosalina being Cruiser class while Peach is only Light.
>>2535581
>http://mw-magister.tumblr.com/
I took a look at this. the only pics that are okay, are the frontal shots with very simple poses. as soon as you are involved with more complex poses you start doing blatant mistakes. perspective and foreshortening are what you want to study. A LOT!
>>2535779
>as soon as you are involved with more complex poses you start doing blatant mistakes
>perspective and foreshortening
Uh, examples of this? I took a peek at the gallery and didn't really find anything that would fit into those two criteria.
>>2535773
other than being pretty flat (both shading and lineart make it look like this), this is a neat pic. if you want your smut to look more appealing and hot try to avoid these boring shots with little to no dynamics. emphasize the perspective more.
>>2535773
You open to commissions?
>>2535784
Alright, I could try more dynamatic stuff next time.
>>2535792
I got scolded for doing this last thread, but email me [email protected] no promises though.
>>2535781
I don't know if anon wants me to post links to their pictures. my critique was aimed at them, and based on their skill I'm sure they will get what I mean. look for foreshortened knees, elbows and palms. typical recurring beginner's mistakes.
>>2535800
I'm the artist. No, you can go right ahead, I'd like to know. I'm on /ic/ for a reason.
>>2535792
>>2535797
>I got scolded for doing this last thread, but email me [email protected] no promises though.
GTFO
>>2535801
oh, cool.
http://mw-magister.tumblr.com/image/144811096348
bad foreshortening of her right arm. you didn't apply the correct shading at the change of direction of the forearm below the elbow. now the arm looks like it's too short.
http://66.media.tumblr.com/868ec4ff458d657f80dc96f0ee42b440/tumblr_o7l8d7LU9h1sq7mo2o1_500.jpg
bad foreshortening of her left upper arm. the perspective of her short sleeve is off and now her upper arm looks too short.
same problem with wrong perspective on her right leg. the thigh perspective doesn't make sense combined with the lower leg's one, or vice versa.
http://66.media.tumblr.com/48a4dd86306f9e624418c89f92432c43/tumblr_nzf12bz8ml1sq7mo2o1_500.jpg
wrong elbow construction on her left arm. both hands look stiff. too little confidence with the gesture there. especially her right hand looks like a the side of a facehugger, because you did the foreshortening of the palm wrong (the fingers are too long and the meaty part of the palm is too short).
http://66.media.tumblr.com/69bd3c04d20ccd082297119f12ca603e/tumblr_nxcqicMdcK1sq7mo2o1_500.jpg
her right knee is way too flat because of the wrong foreshortened construction and shading.
http://66.media.tumblr.com/2d3856100ab57c4948c1548de2fcf735/tumblr_nwxz8rWShm1sq7mo2o1_500.jpg
bad foreshortening on her right upper arm. the perspective on the sleeve is slightly off. same goes for the construction of the bending of the elbow.
http://66.media.tumblr.com/5f3c8a233cd551f86debbb2982f75f2e/tumblr_nwbmawaHl31sq7mo2o1_500.jpg
her entire left arm is off. again the most prominent error is the construction of the elbow and it's bending. the flat shading doesn't help.
...
these are the recurring errors that totally ruin your art for me. it my sound like nitpicking, but I'm an artist and I can't just overlook mistakes that to me look this obvious.
>>2535816
I'm aware of some of these and just didn't know how to fix them(mostly foreshortening), but some of the other ones are intentional, like with how I draw elbows and knees. This isn't meant as an excuse, but I have zero formal training so it's often hard to get actual critique and fix issues before I get too far in really janky territory, so thanks.
>>2535826
yeah, I can tell you learned everything by copying other anime artists. it's very obvious. your symbol drawing and the really flat anatomy give you away. if you don't care about getting good at anatomy so that even when it's stylized it still looks realistic, then just keep doing what you are doing. dickbrains will still worship you, as you can see in this thread.
but if you really care to improve as an artist, and some day be actually able to call your art really yours and not just a copy, then I suggest you get a step back and learn some perspective and anatomy fundamentals and try to implement it into your art. develop your own style and stop being a copycat.
>>2535831
Whoa, calm down there dude. I do care, and I never said I didn't. I appreciate your critique, but calling the whopping 1 reply I got 'dickbrains' says a lot about your outlook on others. I'll work on all of it as I continue to draw--that's just how it works and I'm sure you know that. Personal growth is something that comes with time, and I don't plan on stagnating if I can help it. I wouldn't have asked in here otherwise. In the meantime, you might want to try some introspection yourself and deal with that passive aggression.
Really rough sketch, wanting some critique before I start lining
>>2535831
Damn this board is TOO hostile and aggressive. There are plentier of ways for saying things and you are really using a very disgusting one.
>>2535895
And then they wonder why nobody posts here.
>>2532713
any feedback senpais?
>>2535816
I see you have some points here and there. Some I kinda agree with, some that are not even worth mentioning, but you manage to blow it way out of proportion, at least in my opinion.
>that totally ruin your art for me
...Yeah, right.
>but I'm an artist and I can't just overlook mistakes
Yeeeah. Maybe it's better I don't elaborate on your views for the sake of keeping this thread being overly insulting.
(Before anyone loses their shit, I'm not Magister myself.)
>>2535900
>And then they wonder why nobody posts here.
Probably because posting anything remotely loli may warrant a reported post and possible ban desu senpai
>>2535940
would look better if the foot on her extended leg wasnt shattered in a horrible accident
>>2535864
look, don't take my words too seriously. you have some good sides to your art and I am sure people can appreciate that. but what I said is the harsh reality of smut art. dickbrains are the masses that look at your art just to jerk off to it. you can totally adapt to them and draw everything just to cater to their needs, or you can be more self critic and try to improve for your own sake. that's all I wanted to say.
>>2535940
neck too short
feet are at weird angles
right leg positioned weird
work on the hands
work on the hair
work on the face in general desu
other than that, there's potential
>>2535895
harsh reality is my middle name. man up and deal with it, or be a sissy and cry about it like you are doing now. your choice.
>>2535900
if with nobody you mean 16 year old sissies who don't have a backbone that can withstand this kind of critique, then I'm fucking glad.
>>2535948
don't worry. the thing here is that I'm just used to better level of skill. beginners mistakes always ruin art for me. always. please top assuming you know better.
and as I said in my post. I was nitpicking based on my art skill point of view. of course you can overlook all those mistakes. but that doesn't mean they're not still there.
and, again, as I said already, I'm sure a lot of normies/dickbrains will never notice them.
>>2535989
>le cringe meme
>>2535831
It's you again. You really need to have a better understanding of "guidance" with your word choice. Stop projecting. That's what I see every time you give advice. Everything you said here >>2535816 was all that was needed to point out all the problems that artist had, and you were correct about them. Here's one thing you don't project when giving any general advice, however;
> these are the recurring errors (that totally ruin your art for me). it my sound like nitpicking, (but I'm an artist) and I can't just overlook mistakes (that to me look this obvious).
Speak in general. Not every one is you, nor is every opinion is yours. I don't think his foreshortening isn't flawed, as mentioned, it has it's quirkiness in some appearances, but this "muh realism" mentality needs to stop being forced so critically in a non realistic piece of work. It depends on how the artist wants it to work for his characters, as long as it fits and people don't mind it looking "different" compared to how you're used to it; like >>2535773 for a general example.
>>2535831 All of this is personal opinion. This "muh animu symboldrawing" shit needs to die as well. While I myself don't recommend the overuse of "Samefacing" or general eastern cartoon artstyle without making some unique stylizations out of it from your own style, but it's again, up to the artist. Their are many artist that does this, and whether or not this artist does the same, it doesn't matter. That being said, >>2535816 is what does need general improving to vary up that artist's art pieces overall, but I would suggest lighting as the stronger focus imo. Everything does look rather "too lit up" and general depth is loss in the end.
>>2535991
not everything is a meme idiot
nice way to avoid posting your art though you worthless piece of trash
>>2535995
I'm not even the OP tho lol
>>2535976
cont.
also, my aggression isn't passive at all. I really put effort into it. and it's meant to make artists really, hardly think about what I said. the smart ones will understand. the others probably aren't made of the right stuff anyway.
>>2535679
took yalls advice and saving boobies (and also like up and down motion) for last
sorry for the hair flash also it scares me
any better?
>>2535989
right after you kill yourself. sry, that's my policy for posting art for you lowlifes.
>>2535998
yeah but you're a stupid memester faggot of the same quality so everything that i've said applies to you as well.
>>2535994
never posted my art on 4chan and never will.
sorry f-a-m.
>>2535992
Not the OP, but in my opinion, harsh criticism isn't that big of a deal. Yeah he comes off as an asshole, but good critiques in these porn threads are rare enough as it is. I really don't get why you fuckers complain and whine so much every times someone deals a CRITIQUE on a board called ARTWORK CRITIQUE. Dude, this is 4chan, if you're going to post here asking for honest critiques, don't expect a fluffy highschool art teacher answer to everything.
Personally, when I critique, I am not as dick-y about it, what what I'm trying to say is that you take what you can get. As far as I can tell his critiques are pretty relevant.
>>2535976
Referring to your audience as 'dickbrains' isn't productive no matter what your demographic actually is. I can't fap to completely borked art and that's a truth for most people. To imply that I'm only drawing smut because I don't care about artistic value(which isn't true, given a handful of the things you yourself critiqued are not smut) just makes it sound like a vendetta. I've done what studies I can manage without formal training(can't afford school), and I'm working to improve. You don't have to give me any credit, but your tone is crazy condescending, work on that. I'd keep going, but it's apparent from >>2535979 >>2535983 you're kind of edgy just for the sake of being edgy, so I'll just say thanks for the initial critique again and I'll quit replying.
>>2535999
If you're being openly aggressive then you're not fostering any kind of growth. You're lucky my skin is pretty fucking thick and I can pick out the personal insecurities in your posts from the actual info. You don't have to be a drill sergeant on an anonymous image board to point out what someone needs to do to improve. Your first post was great, everything after that has just made you seem more than a little petulant.
>>2535992
nah, sry dude. muh style will never be something that will be more important than obvious mistakes. you can go on about this all day long and it will never become true. stylization is something you apply to realism to make your art differentiate from other and/or to make your process easier.
if someone learns to stylize by taking in other people's mistakes, that may be a choice, but it's a wrong one nonetheless.
>>2536000
dude you need so much more practice it's not even funny. I know it's hard to see but there is nothing appealing about this gif to any kind of viewer. You need to get good at art before even thinking about doing moving gifs. Movement is 100 times harder to get down than a static pose, and as far as I can tell you probably can't do a regular pose that well to begin with. Just practice, practice practice (loomis meme lel) until you feel really confident in your art.
Personal note: I think the book "drawing with the right side of the brain" is a pretty good starting point. My art teacher in highschool used it as a framework to teach beginners and every student that cared about art came out of his class a better artist.
good luck!
>>2536007
>"youre gay bro"
>haha jokes on you i DO suck dick so THERE
this is you
>>2536000
I think people are expecting you to animate the whole body, including the pelvis, torso and the head.
>>2536010
>thick skin
>still whining
What the fuck is up with you people.
Not OP again, but seriously dude your art is fucking amazing, there is no way you get much criticism anyway, and the one time you do, you can't fucking handle it. Just drop it, it's not a big deal. "dickbrain" = thinking with your dick
>>2536010
i really couldn't care less about you and what you think about me. kek. seriously. I told you what's wrong with your art. now take it or leave it.
stop fucking trying to be my mom and go study some foreshortening. preferably from rl pics or models and not from fundamentally flawed anime artists.
>>2536021
>whining
No, that was his critique to him.
>>2536021
replying != whining
>>2536027
I know I know, the guy is just giving his whole life story and shit. It's not relevant. Lets just move on
>>2536021
what this guy said. ffs, seriously people. are you all a bunch of fucking underage sissies? GTFO!
>>2536018
and I should care about this whaaaay?
I fucking love how frustrated you little scrubbies get every single fuckign time kek.
May I get a bit of a feedback please?
>>2536051
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
>>2536058
quoted wrong post: just read "drawing with the right side of the brain" before you do anything
>>2536008
> Personally, when I critique, I am not as dick-y about it, what what I'm trying to say is that you take what you can get. As far as I can tell his critiques are pretty relevant.
That's my entire point of my post. I said twice before his critique was valid, that wasn't what I said wasn't true. I said; >>2535831 wasn't necessary. That's all. Dickish or not, it's nothing but personal agenda. Not something that applies to every artist, nor does every audience. You don't project yourself, your opinion/taste as a argument. If you don't get this, then I'm sorry for not making that clear enough it may seem.
>>2536014
Tell this to every art teacher that's been in the art field longer than you have. Cuz I highly fucking doubt you have a life being a "professional" artist, being on fucking 4chan of all places. I'm here to learn from the ground up, and every person here is as well, no one is high level on this damn board. Once you've "got gud", you would NOT be staying on this fucking site to learn what you fucking know already. That's why every one of "muh opinion" you're projecting on others to make yourself sound like God Almighty makes you pointless and worthless. If you're really here to teach, go to a University and TEACH. Being on 4chan means shit all about any thing you give off as "advice" on a professional level.
>>2536065
can you stop fucking posting your blog and arguing with children
this guy is just a frustrated anon who couldnt success in the industry or with his works so the only thing he can do now is bashing on others work.
Its the typical troll behaviour, failure at life and coming to 4chan acting like a god.
>Im far better than any of you but I wont post my shit because its 4chan lol
>>2536071
Holy shit her vagina looks fucking repulsive. I mean, this isn't half as bad as the other gif that was posted in here but it's definitely not good. The one thing that is fairly OKAY is her facial expression. her mouth seems to "float" around her face a lot though. Try watching a porno frame by frame as a reference a few times or something like that.
>>2536065
ok, then, since it seems you really can't let off of this one, I'll have to ask you directly I guess.
did your art studies involve copying or referencing other anime artist's styles or not?
I am absolutely sure you did this and with that you took in the bad habits too.
so what's your answer? now I'm really curious if I'm wrong.
also, please stop being butthurt already. you look like a little whining bitch kek.
>>2536051
Gotta say something constructive ...uhh.
The line work varies between blurry and sharp, giving it a very unstable look in a bad way!
>>2536071
There's a lot of good, but I am going to skip to what I consider the main negative points:
- Those button-nipple tits seem to dance on their own, not really according to the main motion of the fucking.
- I don't really agree with the facial expression. It seems like she's silently saying like a response of dismissive, casual and content "Whatevs, wanker!" with it.
- The vagina looks like an uncanny alien mouth spitting drool all over the place, but don't feel like giving my final judgement on it yet because I'm not what it would look in the final version with all the content in place.
- Her actual mouth seems to give off a weird yelp. "Wan!" (the Jap dog barking sound)
>>2536136
That would have been nice to know.
>>2536071
I actually like that a lot anon, I wish I could see any finished art like this one
i used to do requests on other boards for fun like... two years ago? my technique has improved so much since then so im thinking about getting back into it. do y'all think that porn gains a following faster?
>>2536051
lmfao
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=ggli_%28yuine_wantan%29
My situation still stands.
Can anyone here/does anyone know who can colour/shade like this?
>>2533213
>like ishikei
Er, close, but not quite. Heck, I'm looking for something even more simple in terms of polish. Also, it looks like your style is close enough to what I'm looking for. Do you think you can imitate exactly what I want? Easy job, I promise.
>>2536376
any competent artist can color like this. just commissions somebody and stop spamming this thread already.
>>2536302
Sorry dude but if this is you "improved" technique you must've been darkly bad at drawing before.
READ THE STICKY
start from square one. Drawabox, drawing with the right side of the brain, vilppu, etc etc
>>2535797
Do you mind if I send you email? I asked you for email, you're not here begging for money.
>>2536417
I posted my email so people could use it. Go ahead man I won't stop you
>>2536421
all this fucking cringe. my eyes are bleading.
>>2536413
drawabox and right side of the brain are shit, though.
>>2536051
Not used to redlining/critiquing, so take this with a grain of salt.
My 2¢
1. Seems like you're not thinking of the body as a whole. It looks like you just connect symbols of body parts together as an after thought without knowing how they actually work or what forms they have. Try doing more gestures and study anatomy to get a feel for how the body is put together.
2. There are a lot of things that are out of proportion. The hands and the legs being the most noticeable. No lower leg? Hands are generally as large as the face. The forearm and the humerus are about the same length/volume as well.
3. There's no weight to the figure. She's just floating there. Ground the figure?
>>2536475
No, fundamentals are not shit.
>>2536490
those aren't fundies you fucking parrot.
>>2536483
bro, dont deprive us of future memes what the fuck are you doing?
>>2536513
Probably because he can't draw a straight line without chicken scratching, i.e. a fundamental drawing skill.
>>2533048
Vilppu sensei
God bless
how do we look so far
>>2536529
you're a fucking idiot if you think drawabox is more useful than scott robertson or the like. shut the fuck up yoy bottom-feeding cunt.
>>2536513
yes they are shit, people will recommend them because they don't know any better and love to follow the hive-mind of /ic/. remember kids, only 4-5 people here are even close to being decent, everyone else is just regurgitating what other people tell them to.
>>2536547
>"remember kids"
cringe city
>>2536553
>>2536083
Dude you REALLY can't take any critisism.
Just calm down holy fuck.
>>2536544
Adjust the gesture
But the main issue I see is the belly and pelvis. The abdomen is too long and the vagina leg combo looks like a penis.
The boobs look solid, and not boob like imho.
The arm's attachment to the torso should be slightly closer to the body.
Finally, the head looks awkward in that position
>>2536571
Thank you bby <3
>>2536566
I'll take it as a yes. also, chill princess.
>>2536544
If you make the adjustments that one critic pointed out this will be pretty fucking hot
>>2536571
any better?
and I just did a little skin coloring for practice, if it should still be adjusted that's no biggeroo
>>2536713
uhhh I actually blushed
>>2535816
I also think there's another issue, in some of these pictures the characters' boobs might be a bit too large compared to proportions you'd usually expect.
>>2536525
:/ Can't help trying to help
Any aintsmart fans here tonight?
>>2536413
bruh if you learn to read those are drawings from two years ago. the file name is old.png
>>2536757
I THINK I FINALLY HAVE IT!!!!!!!
wake me up
>>2537517
You're wrong.
>>2537517
This is a red board. You can and you should. Go read a figure drawing book.
>>2537495
wake up right into the beginner thread
>has a couple of doxy tutorials on hd
>professional armchair artist now
>Won't dare to redline over drawings and instead lists things that are wrong. (Such clarity!) or else it would betray lack of knowledge and understanding of form.
>>2537322
nah, you don't. you aren't even close to having anything.
as the other anon said, gtfo to the beginner thread.
>>2537560
I got it from the three other people in front of you, thanks for beating a dead horse though.
>>2537322
Heres a ref. dont be afraid to scrap the drawing and start over in an adjusted pose/gesture.
maybe put this drawing on hold and study gesture and anatomy fampai
>>2533574
You just finished seeing whiplash for the first time eh?.
>>2537584
That's fucking disgusting, m8.
>>2537592
Cool? The pose in the pic is similar to anons drawing, thought it would help said anon
>>2537600
Dude it does help Thank you
>>2537667
Nah, you gtfo 'cause you're BTFO thinking you're jk simmons or something.
>>2537669
you are never going to be good unless you start taking what you are doing seriously. and if you don't care to make it then GTFO to deviantart or something, pathetic spineless scrub.
>>2537676
And you're never going to get anything out of anyone coming in here , bashing everyone's artwork without any proof of your own work 'cause muh vendettas.
You do realize 99% of the people here are hobby artists and not professional ones? Its not your jazz club you can mangle around mister discount simmons.
>>2537667
I was replying to someone who was actually being nice to me? I can lurk calm down. we can make out if you want.
>>2537718
Nah man, I'm just telling you who you barely even try to ressemble. You seem so triggered by people drawing, yet not showijng any credentials of what you can do. Go be master jizzman somewhere else. Maybe facebook.
>>2537728
0 trigger here.
I'm cold as ice.
also, stop being so butthurt just because you know I'm right and my critiques are correct. maybe someday you'll be able to give them too. keep practicing though, hobby artist.
>>2537724
sry subhuman living being.
after seeing this >>2537322
I really can't take you seriously. my cat would probably be able to do better kek.
>>2537740
Your critiques may or may not be correct, without credentials, you're just some who from whoville vomiting bullshit. And you know, who's opinions don't matter to fucking any one.
Also, stop projecting your frustrations with the newbies.
Oh also
>kek
My bad, I take everything back, im just talking with a 12 year old.
>>2532714
What the
>>2537748
kek, I've been a pro porn artist for 12+ years now. please, kid, gtfo and stop trying to be smarter than you are. if you read my actual critiques in this thread, and you are not a total retard who barely know how to hold a pencil, then you should be able to tell I know what I'm talking about.
again GTFO.
oh right
kek
>>2537756
yeah anon, you just realized this is a polished turd, you are looking at. grats. also, if that's the only part of this drawing that you recognize as a mistake, then I have some bad news for you.
>>2537772
Again. Posting as anon in an anon's board without creds. Sure thing :^). And all the OP's are done by incase.
>>2537775
incase can suck my fat cock. maybe that way he'll finally get some skill.
again, GTFO.
also
kek
>>2537817
Oh boy, surely jealous at the amount of money and popularity someone other than you has eh, how's the work at mcdonalds my 12y old jazzmaster??
>>2537974
Nope
>>2537980
which one are you?
>itt people who still haven't figured out how to ignore attentionwhores
![[nsync voice] it's gonna be mei.png](https://i.imgur.com/bAzdvss.png "[nsync voice] it's gonna be mei.png")
au naturel or a bra too small?
>>2538241
Left seems to work better. The right one isn't bas, but the sagging might be a turnoff for some.
Do does you making fan art mean you finally have a blog?
>>2538251
workin on f-tracer x mei comic to be finished an uploaded soon hopefully, till then still workin on understanding color
apologies if this comes off as annoying :c
>>2538403
I'm the girl with the shitty drawing there, I am butthurt though, not going to lie. but I'm not flying it high unlike that guy, I took that flag down to the beginner thread and I'm trying to improve thank you friends <3
>>2538583
you're the one drawing riven's vagina?
>>2538632
sadly
it's scrapped now though don't worry about it.
>>2533301
>Shit tier art
>SUPPORT ME ON MUH PATREON
I get that you want some money from horny 10 years old who don't have the slightest idea of what anatomy is but please don't, close your patreon and wait until you have at least 10 years of experience.
"it's shit"
"Fundamentals"
"Anatomy"
"perspective"
"Who finds this attractive?"
There I already critiqued it for you.
>>2539075
NO! morbi you're not getting off that easy not by a long shot
>>2539086
It warms my heart when people call me Morbi. It also makes me feel like maybe I need something to make my art (and imps) distinct.
>>2538241
>nuking your tumblr gallery
>>2539075
why are you so jaded faggot
>>2539111
Jaded? how am I jaded? I was just making a joke because I've been told over and over what I need to do to improve. Now I just need to do it.
>>2538282
just wanna see how you work
>>2539075
polished turd
>>2538692
it was fine, the other anons are idiots.
>>2539075
...I-I like your ideas and designs...
>>2539075
you have some perspective problems. other than that this is quite solid.
>>2539546
learn what a polished turd is, dumbass.
>>2536151
second
i feel like i may have possibly found a coloring process that i like? tho i still need to see how kind it is to faces
>>2539119
i just throw lines till i see the form i want an then i clean up all the lines i don't want (the head i have so far is a good example of this process before i've cleaned it up). i think of it as sorta carving my forms
i tend to go back over the new line with a more confident, usually thicker one (or i'll just remember where it was, erase it and then draw a clean version)
i also use a lot of layers because i'm indecisive as hell/it's easier to cleanup, also "whiteout" layers where i'll whiteout parts of lines as a way of non-destructively erasing them
coloring wise i have no idea but i think i like to start dark before working my way lighter
all of this makes me insanely sloppy when it comes to traditional, hahahah
>>2539105
?
>>2539749
Love it, comfy and soft.
>>2539749
How do you get such good skin and nipple colors man?
>>2539764
danke~
>>2539765
skin tends to have an undertone that shows through when it's thinner (lips, nipples, genitals, bumholes) that is usually much more saturated and warm looking but it also pops up when skin is thicker (joints like the elbow and kneecap, knuckles) and even zones of the face (and i think chest sometimes??)
so i like to make the base color of the figure their undertone and then build up the skin color from there
i also use the undertone for light shading to gently imply form even tho i don't think it's technically correct to do so, but it works out cohesively palette wise
i still need to practice way more but i think it's a good simple base for a consistant feel that'll hopefully work well for the comics i wanna do
What are some good guides for line quality and colour?
>>2539749
Neat stuff as always milk anon. Let me just give you a very friendly advice. Try not to open up too much to this board. It's full of parasites and jellyfags that can't wait to see you fail or get hurt while trying to be helpful. Just a heads up.
>>2539870
Ive been waiting for a doom related drawing.
The imps pose looks off to me, take it with a grain of salt
