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drew this girl and tried to do it really fast
>>2485520
drew this girl
>>2485521
drew this lady
>>2485523
aaaaaand i drew this girl. again i was just trying to draw really fast
>>2485516
So I guess this must be the brian containment thread. Anybody else up for making a draw thread?
every night before i go to bed i pray to brian so maybe one day ill have the spark
>>2485534
the last draw thread was like decades ago. i had a lot of stuff lying around
a random gyaru to get back into drawing
>>2485534
I would love to but whose art are we going to use? If we use any of our own people will just call us assholes and jellyfags etc. Maybe we could use some old master work until we get new choices from the new posts. This guy's ego is bad enough without him turning every draw thread into his personal sketch dump of things he really doesn't want you to critique.
>>2485516
can someone besides you please start these? sick of your face and your hands tb.h
I just got a laptop with a multitouch display and this is my first attempt at anything at all so take it easy. I love having infinite mediums at my fingertips working digitally, but I know it's awful. Any constructive criticis,m would be appreciated :) Also I have corel draw but not corel paint and I used Fresh Paint a terrible program that came with my PC for this. Just wanted to have a first try to see where I'm starting
>>2485606
>First attempt at anything at all
There is a beginners thread for this.
Please post in Beginner's Thread.
not able to draw today, but I got a wonderful print framed and just picked it up. motivated for tomorrow!
WIP
>>2485643
Did you do this or is this from some other artist? I really like this piece
>>2485633
LOL, but seriously though. If the drawing looks good overall, perfect anatomy is not necessary.
>>2485764
as Brian, please don't comment stuff like that. because theyll think i said it, and they hate me enough as it is. also though, very true :)
why does this Brian guy do this? he's seriously worse than Quentin
>>2485633
As redlined by someone who understands neither how foreshortening nor clothing works
>>2485790
It's still wrong in the first drawing, he's just making fun of it.
sketchbook page
This monster is boring?
>>2485803
I think the portrait you chose is boring. Dead on angle, nothing happening. If you want to make a "scary" monster or something like that, at least try to make an interesting picture in terms of camera angle, lighting and pose.
>>2485516
Currently doing some gondola to aport in the /wsg/ thread: >>>/wsg/1034221
Currently I'm basing this on this page of the berserk manga:
waa DOT ai/kfLl
Going to use this music on the webm: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1o4O2SfQ5g
this thread has reached new highs for autism on /ic/
>>2485516
Foot study because I might inherit Kyles talent.
<2minutes per group attempting to get the blocking first.
>>2485788
What's so wrong with it?
im not really pleased with the outcome, anything i could change?
>>2485854
>>2485858
pls no bully
>>2485663
not him, but its from the god james jean
>>2485854
get rid of the backgroudn altogether if you're not going to do something more interesting (better palette too). It would look nicer on white or black than the way it is now.
>>2485854
this is the stiffest pose in context of the situation that i've ever seen
>>2485826
Show me your advance /ic/, even if you posted already.
Since the last draw thread died right after I posted, I'm posting this again. Finished this a couple days ago; not particularly impressed with the rendering compared to the linework I had before. Any advice for more interesting/better faces?
>>2485652
The waves look very unnatural and uniform, especially in the right part. I suggest you take a look at some master seascapes. I also feel there is little in the colours to pique my interest, they lack oomph. Make use of a wider range of values and use it to lock the viewer's eye onto something.
Working on a character
>Louisiana 30s'
>black man trying to reach the north
What do you think ?
>>2485858
Rofl
>>2485945
I saw it back then and really liked it
This is good
>>2485966
thanks anon, your kindness warms my soul
>>2485551
Love it and love your style <3 tumblr?
wip
>>2485974
>>2485963
looks good anon. reminds me of wreck-it-ralph. nice warm colors and strong individualizing features(large hands, overalls, broad figure) etc. the face isn't that great - i get that it's supposed to be simple, but it's kind of just ugly. look up some disney/pixar character concepts for a lead on how to simplify facial features (while keeping them intact).
you should try drawing him in different, more dynamic poses/gestures to capture more than just the front. right now he looks a bit robot-like.
too simple to critique farther than that, though.
>>2485945
this is sort of off in terms of drawing and construction, which gives it a nice kind of lumpy rearranged look
but here's a redline anyway
basically what i see is the mouth tilting off from the plane of the face. same with his right eye. that piece of cartilage between the nostrils looks like it's off too, but that might be an individual thing. the way you've shaded the left eye socket and eyelids doesn't give much of a sense of shape. also he has no tear duct. the eyebrow tilts down too much into the eye socket, when it should be up on the brow. the ear is a little underconstructed. maybe try overlapping a little more in the bits of cartilage of the rim to give it a solid look.
the shading in general is just really tentative and not all that descriptive. i don't get a feel of where the light source is other that "above and to the sides and front", and even then there are places that should be darker (eye sockets/lids, under the hat rim, under the top lip) and lighter (the nose) if that were the case. maybe try reading up on planes and doing direct light studies with charcoal.
hope this helps
>>2486007
thanks for the help anon! this is super helpful
...
Something.
>>2485960
Rodger thanks for the critique.
I'll look into some old master seascapes and try for a new value range/ take another crack at it.
>>2485516
fuck this tumblr shit
>>2485971
Thanks anon, it's rokujuukyuu69 though I don't update it often.
>>2485945
you didn't need to use white at all. looks kind of messy with it, actually.
>>2485803
Zoidberg?
like another anon said, 3/4 view with 2 opposite light sources or go home
JUST
another one. This page was really frigging tricky.
>>2486054
use the brush tool, I know a guy who loves sketching in paint and uses the brush tool as it gives you more cleaner lines, that or he uses larger brush.
nice tho haha
apples
>>2485652
>>2485960
Beginning to refine waves, differentiate planes etc.
On the right track?
Still having trouble settling in on a color pallet (am very colorblind, but motivated to overcome)
man why are there so many beginners in the draw threads. Holy shit.
>>2486192
that's what happens when le hands man starts them all
doot doot
help me
>>2486054
Blog ?
Doodeling while being tired as fuck, bros.
>>2486699
I like it
>>2486163
I mostly use binary because I dig the look of it. Reg brushes are cool looking too. Idk I guess I just use binary way too much.
>>2486440
Ketteii on instagram
Ketteiii on dumblr
Usually people asking for blogs are memeing it up but whatever.
Trying to do some 30-40 min studies. Really tough so far.
>>2486743
I really like the third one, it seems like trees are giving you the hardest time.
Yes. Now that you mention it I really don't know how to simplify them :/. Thanks for the comment.
Hey nerds, some more comments?
I still feel like the inclination isn't right. I was going for a dutch angle but it just feels like everything is out of balance instead. Any tips?
>>2487015
>>2487015
Limit your pallet more overall. The shadow on the ground has so many different colors when it really only needs one. Same goes for his hair and clothes.
I'd saturate the colors in the foreground a bit more and make things more desaturated as they further from the foreground.
>>2485858
kik
>>2487015
fix the perspective I know hes farther away but not that far to be that small, as he's standing the ground is slanted like the red plane he needs to be somewhere around the blue plane
I drew this a few hours ago, a few friends told me it was alright after a few alterations to head shape, but I'm not too sure.
>>2487027
kek
>>2485947
Some progress
>>2487015
im not any better than u but fuck man u gotta put contrast in that shit dont be afraid of dark colors and light colors. also this shit is just crap messing around
>>2487165
That looks a lot worse
>>2487166
advice still there mayn he needs fucking contrast that was crap and ik that
>>2487155
Is this supposed to be a night? because it seems like you wanted it to be with the light from the house, but it doesn't look dark outside ,
>>2487170
Yeah, it was supposed to be night time, right after dusk. So i made strong blue ambient light. Found that it helps with readability.
>>2487173
did you try something like this or does it not fit ur mood that u want
>>2487175
I'm a bit ambivalent on wheater I should darken it. It loses a bit of its mood, detail and depth. But it definitly makes a stronger focal point. I will try a Darker variation. Thanks for highlighting that options, I appreciate it.
Hello, this is my first post on /ic/. Altho, I lurk for months now.
>>2487181
keep drawing
>>2487191
Will do, f.am!
>>2487175
I think this is a good compromise.
yurghghgh face
Drawing grimdark fantasy for a change. Pretty relaxing stuff.
>>2487230
very cool, anon
>>2486435
OK.
>>2487230
Bloggu?
>>2487240
Cool anon.
Could you tell me what you did to improve the composition?
>>2486180
And another refine.
Am just polishing a turd?
Drop it and move on or what
>>2487386
Just focused on the lines/shapes that carry the eye from place to place. You don't want to guid it around, so emphasized the diagonal shaft of light, brought some more attention to the altar by making it lighter (the candles would light up this scene more realistically anyway). Made the silhouette of the wall more rocky and steeper so you can tell the guy is walking behind it, and added some stalactites as well to make it feel like a cave.
>>2487403
I actually love the differences in opacity and shapes with the waves, feels very lifelike. You might wanna add deeper values, though. Everything's starting to look muddled, especially around your horizon line. I like your palette too, the purples and soft yellows, but be careful with those greens in the water, too much and it'll look "contaminated."
First post on /ic/, Soo I'm a bit nervous heh
Drew this a few hours ago with a ink brush pen and a water brush
I feel like there's a little bit off about her face, but I can't find out why
>>2487424
Thanks for the kind words and critique, I'll work on the horizon line, making the shapes clear-er, and generally un-muddling everything
>>2487432
this isn't instagram, bb
you can leave your utensils off the drawing, I'd rather just see the whole thing.
>>2487441
Ahh I'm sorry! I should have properly scanned it
what do you think ?
>>2487432
it's the eyes i think
>>2487181
Same guy, different style.
>>2487452
Are the eyes too long that made her look weird?
>>2487453
His nose seems a bit too flat, maybe some extra shading would help!
>>2487463
Ah, of course! Why I did not notice that.
Thank you~
>>2487446
you don't have to scan it, shit, how hard is it to move the pen away before you take the photo?
>>2486743
>color-picking
>>2486743
wow, your renditions are like when I'm not wearing glasses
holy shit, I can hardly find any difference at half a meter away without glasses
>>2487432
You are symbol drawing.
>>2487403
Hello i did a quick and sloppy paint over for you. I really like your waves and clouds and i just went over them really rough and i'm sorry. But I'm trying to get the point across to make a more clear division between your values; don't be scared to go dark on your darks and to go light when called for (I exaggerated it in this paintover but i hope you get the idea.) As it is right now, everything just kind of blends together (especially the cute little ship and its lights) and that's a shame because otherwise i like it a lot.
>>2487411
Thank you anon
>>2487432
>putting the drawing utensil by the drawing
this fucking triggers me, and I'm not even sure why
does this make anybody else rage, or am I just autistic?
>>2487647
I hate it too. When the drawing isn't particularly good it's even worse.
>>2487651
signed symbol scratchings sighted aside strathmore
>>2487510
No he's not, there's obviously form and understanding there, I hope you're just trolling
>>2487647
I'm more triggered by aggressively angled pictures and Instagram filters, but in this case the pen is occluding the drawing which is pretentious
>>2487700
Look at the eyes. Look at the nose. Look at the lips. Look at them closely. It looks like instAnon just learned to draw some higher-resolution symbols than your average nonartist, at least as far as features are concerned.
>>2487700
I hope you are trolling.
>>2486699
I am completely new to digital, how the fuck do you 'make it look like this'?
Also, if pic related is you ily nigga
>>2487729
I'm sorry that angle triggered you
I was symbol drawing because I didn't shade the face or was the face overly simplified?
Thanks for the pointing out the problems, been learning a lot from ya
>>2487980
>I was symbol drawing because I didn't shade the face or was the face overly simplified?
You are seemingly drawing features and face structure without proper knowledge. Closer to oversimplification, but more seems that you built on the same flawed foundation of oversimplification then added glitter.
Maybe it could be chalked up to medium. What have you been learning from, brah?
>>2485516
Need crit to become environment concept artist.
>>2487990
Personally I'd like to see more contrast in the line weight and a subsequent better sense of depth, can't comment on compo because that part of my brain is shut off rn.
>>2487453
Diggin' it.
You have some rudimentary knowledge on form and lighting but it's not quite developed yet. Watch out for the placement of your ears, probably want to revisit basic construction for a bit and make sure you have basic proportionality down. Like the other anon said, the form on your nose is not coming through very well without proper placement of tone to describe the nose's form.
Also might want to consider steering away from colour for a while, it's okay at the moment, but it's over-complicating your learning for now, so consider just sticking to greyscale. Also mess with your brush settings, flow/opacity/etc, your brush (in combination with the very flat colours) makes the painting feeling sort of ms-painty. Also another thing to comment on is the chicken-scratchy nature of your lines, they're not the worst, but your line quality can definitely improve, it'll come over time but you need to continue a conscious effort to improve your lines.
Overall i'd say you're doing pretty well - but try get out of your comfort zone soon - try delving into some deeper anatomy study in the near future.
Keep drawing anon!
>>2487990
The line drawing's very good but the painting lacks some fundamentally important things.
I'd say that one of the most important things with environmental design (especially landscapes) are values as value tends to be the most effective method of portraying depth.
Maybe one criticism I would say is possibly emphasizing scale, the lack of a properly laid in sky and atmospheric values makes the village not feel as small as it should be in comparison to the rest of the landscape.
I can definitely see this painting pretty damn good if you lay in your values though.
>>2487985
Ahh... I see, I need to stop to add details and take a look of the forms first
Actually I learn a lot from Chinese ink portraits, the ones with thin lines and faint colours, so it is kinda over simplified and it focuses on the details.
>>2487565
Wow really have to thank you for this paint-over.
My laptop screen busted and I had to send it in for repair, tragically I wont be able to implement this idea for a week or so. But when my laptop is returned I will definitely use this as a source of inspiration to finish it.
So, thanks a bunch for real, /ic/ y'all are dope
>>2487994
thank you based anon!
Can I get some help on this please? I know my anatomy is bad, but I don't know how bad. I'm tired from working on this today.
>>2488001
>>2487993
I tried to fix the depth issue through lineweight and colouring thumbnail (B/W value version added). Hope I did it! Thanks a lot for the advice. I'll clean up the colour pass.
>>2488089
Looking much better, maybe you should think about pushing your darker values? Also thinking that the colour pass might come off as a bit too saturated, but I can't really tell for sure right now - I guess it's something you could fix later though.
i learned how to do scales
AT LAST!
Can I get a crit on the values/colours. Anatomical problems aside
>tfw visiting /i/
why the board designed to teach n00bz how to draw is miles more skilled?
>>2488093
This is beautiful, whose is it?
>>2488218
reverse search
>>2488211
It's because people there actually draw and are challenged. You can also see drawthreads on other boards like /tg/. Here is a quick unfinished sketch that the drawfag called muju did from mine suggestion around 2011.
/tg/ also had some drawquests where OP basically shitted drawings after drawings in response to other anons. /ic/ doesn't have anything like that.
wip. CnC, paintover etc very much appreciated
>>2488207
you're just noodling without understanding the form. Go back and break the study down into 2 tones: light and shadow. this will force you to define the form. after that go back and toy with your edge consistency and add in midtones/bounce light/ fill light, etc ro fully flesh out the value drawing. don't move on to color until you have your values down in this regard. after you do, color will be easy.
>>2488073
figure isn't my forte but here's my 2p: you need to step back from your piece and work on a higher level right now. you haven't got your gesture, posture, or lighting really figured out. start a new layer, get a huge brush and paint in broad strokes over your piece. get your gesture down and then refer to what i wrote here: >>2488264
>>2488280
Agreed. Also, the redline shows nicely that the weighting of the pose is off. She keeps looking like she'll tip over. Might be one of the things bothering your eye.
>>2488264
Thanks so much man! everything you've written is really comprehensive
>>2487432
You are thinking too much in lines I think. Not all the lines you pencil out need to stay for inking. A thing that might be hard to figure out is the chin line. It easily frames the face too much and "cuts it off" from the neck.
Try working in reverse after a rough sketch; value and soft colouring to set the form first, then you see which (and how many) lines you need to keep.
Good going though. And as mentioned by the others, scan it next time so it will be easier to see what you've made.
Having problems with head drawing, I been studying Loomis but still having huge issues. I can't seem to point it out.
>>2488302
The neck is a bit long.
Other than that, your sketch is overcrowded with lines on different layers. Set the opacity down on what you have an make new lines over so you can hide your process for next steps.
Try making a head out of what you have, it's good enough. You are only practicing the helplines and grid for a finished drawing. That's no help if you don't know what they do to a finished sketch.
>>2488089
in concept art stuff like this is high supply/ low demand, unless if you're trying maybe to break into the mobile or social media markets. basically if I can google for this stuff, or find something on google that can replace your stuff, you haven't done your job. as it stands, the image i picked off google actually gives me more than your image. i have variation in the buildings and materials, a higher level of detail and it cost me nothing. if i had a rice paddy town in my game, i would rather have the google image than pay for your design.
really focus on the story of the town, design out the architecture and give me more than once house that has been stretched and rotated. ask yourself what your village eats (it doesnt have to be rice - maybe the villagers are aliens) , what its history is and what the inhabitants do for pleasure. then sketch out your ideas and build them up. then you can have something that can be considered concept.
Profile.
forgive me father for i have sinned
i didn't use a reference
>>2488337
Those eyes made me fucking giggle. Sorry.
Dude, breaking away from reference is good practice. Now you need to practice some croqis and/or anatomy construction. Go!
That face though.. love it.
>>2488337
looks like an alien - it's a compliment
I like it :D
>>2488342
no dude i totally get you
they look like fuckin cookie monster eyes
but yeah i need some practice haha
>>2488351
thanks senpai
>>2488353
Practice is both frustrating and fun. But as I said, construction. If you enjoy drawing from reference you could mix it up with drawing skulls. Great practice.
Just fill a small, really cheap sketchbook with your practice. Like, make a lot of mess and errors. Then look through it when you're done so you see that you've been learning. That's what I keep doing.
I haven't decided what those eyes remind me of yet, but it might be a good portion of my older sketches. Love it
>>2488280
But your redline doesn't solve the persons question. Your face is different from hers and your anatomy is unclear.
You are right about the lighting though
render
>>2488370
the person's face and anatomy aren't perfect but they're not what's throwing the piece off. gesture and lighting are the bigger problems.
Bic pen and Ps.
>>2488375
construction
>>2488379
Practice your eyes. These look flat like stickers. Focus on that. Also why Bic pen? What you had or what you wanted?
>>2488385
Jesus Christ.
>>2488375
It's really cool. But why don't you try and show of the inside of the cockpit? It would make it look a lot more interesting to see something showing through the tinted glass. You evidently have the skill to do it.
>>2488375
it's cute, anon
>>2488389
Thanks for your advice.
What I had I guess, I don't know what kind of pen you guys use. It's also my first draw. I'm a programmer so I don't know shit about this lol.
>>2486161
someone's been reading burn hogarth
>>2488410
Fineliners are what most use as an alternative to ballpoint pens. You can get them... anywhere basically. The quality differs, but just a basic one is good if you are just starting out.
Hit up an office supply store or a supermarket and get yourself one to try out :)
>>2487966
i cant find who drew this using reverse image search. can an anon give me a source?
>>2487966
texture brushes, color dodge, overlay layers, smudge tool
>>2488337
I'm this guy, I'm working on a re-do
hows this?
>>2488469
One hell of an improvement.
>>2488469
You used reference this time?
Looks good, but unless she's otherworldly, the eyes are too far apart.
>>2488505
>>2488501
thanks yo, here's it finished.
yea i used a ref, and she's supposed to be from like an ice planet or whatever.
im ass at costumes and color schemes though
>>2488539
Why is the chin pushed inward...
How is the composition and the general values?
I'd appreciate feedback
It was supposed to be a very quick painting but I ended up fiddling with this on and off the whole day T_T
>>2488478
looks like bible doodles mang
>>2488780
>that feel when strong handshake
>>2488836
your mom is a doodle
Fifth sketch this year, creepin on a couple sitting outside the coffee shop. She noticed every time i looked at her so i mostly focused on him in hopes i wouldn't scare them off. Too bad i didn't capture how pretty she was. I feel like my control of line quality has completely rusted away.
[resized, sorry]
>>2488813 #
More contrast on/around the bird pls
>>2488762
How much have I fucked it up?
bought some hard pencils a black oil pastel some crayons and a marker and was messing around with them
>>2488870
ok, I just deleted that bag that was doing noting
>>2488876
fuck...
>>2488337
AYYY
ref taken from the current ref thread
What do you fellas think
>>2488881
this is really great desu
having trouble wrapping up the ear
>>2488890
Lift some pigment off the lobe to create a plane where light is landing.
Gave up on this as soon as I noticed the proportions were off. At least it held still better than the coffeeshop couple.
>>2488840
You're*
>>2488907
you're mom is a your
I got antsy and started painting too soon. Do these legs feel too goofy? I always struggle with design.
eyes need work
gonna step away and regain perspective
>>2489113
Hips/thighs are worst part, they don't interlock correctly to the waist.
>>2488879
VINCENT IS THAT YOU
>>2489113
>Eyes need work
>Entire lower body
man you are not good at art directing yourself
>>2488118
Thanks.
>>2488093
Noted!
>>2488326
>give me more than once house
Okay. I thought the village and the mountain held up the design, but I actually didn’t even design a village. On the plus side, I did go through that process. I’ll put in some of the discarded house thumbnails for variety.
>really focus on the story of the town
Now I think the town also gets lost in this composition, while as you pointed out, it’s the selling point because rice paddies are plenty on google images. :/
Definitely an insightful post, I learned a lot. Thank you, anon. :)
Working on this.
Tear me down, please.
I'm self taught, which translates to 'I have no fucking idea what I'm doing'
>>2489110
blog?
progress
eyes hurt time for bed
I finished it! I don't do much 2D art so I would love feedback.
>>2489250
I don't have a blog but I have an artstation with some 3D art. Dunno if I want to post that here though
>>2488881
blog?
>>2489288
It's getting somewhere. Ease up on the white, use the paper more as your halftone. Depend less on line and more on bigger shapes of value. Be a little more mindful of the construction next time, some areas are a little wonky relative to the rest, his left eye (pur right) is a good example of this.
>>2489392
It's really boring, both pose-wise and colouring. I don't like how muddy your shadows are, the skin, cloth and even the bike pants she's wearing all read the same material, don't be afraid of hue changes and saturation.
>>2489392
it just looks like you painted over a model.
testing copics. and general shit scribbling.
>>2489392
I tried to make her skin a little less dead looking. I'm also not a fan of making everything look like tubes.
Haven't done a study in a long time, heres a simpler one to get things going
>>2489665
I'm going to be nitpicky since guys on your level don't often post their stuff here anyways.
The nose doesn't look glossy enough. The upper lip might have used some more shading as it looks comparatively flat. The neck feels a bit stiff, as if it was a metal girder. Shadow on the chin might be a bit too hard.
Also if her nose tip was that bulbous in the reference I would have shrunk it. Fuck big noses I have one and I hate it, at least I'm not a girl.
>>2489593
mobble.tumblr.com/ my dude.
I don't really post studies, though.
>>2489745
wow I didn't know you post on /ic/. Neat.
>>2489754
mobble is a classic /ic/ lurker
>>2488115
Reminds me of this part from Berserk.
>>2489355
I like this one much better anon, great use of crit.
Just gonna post my stuff I've drawn over weekend.
>>2489846
And this.
>>2487230
There's nothing grimdark about that.
>>2489846
some of those poses are really static, especially that girl with the shield and spear. instead of constructing the body as spheres and cylinders first, make sure to draw the gesture before and have a clear pose/direction you want the character to be posing in before you draw anything.
>>2489665
>muh texture brush
>muh photocopy
The shoulder girdle is JUST-tier. You're good at copying photos and even imparting features with form if the photo has it, but you're lacking an overall consideration of the main masses of your subject. Anywhere the info from the photo is ambiguous, you go all to shit (like the collar). Draw from life more and you'll be a serious contender. As it stands, you'll only impress the untrained eye.
>>2489243
try using more slow, controlled brush strokes.
limit your use of the really saturated red, and instead have it highlighting a few areas, such as maybe it poking out from waves of darker blood. if that blood is glowing, it should be reflecting off of some of the white figures and tendrils. maybe make the tentrils/whatever glossy and use more contrast with them. also edges my dude, refine that shit.
>>2489847
>monsters eating pussy
degenerate
>>2489243
looks pretty metal.
i did a landscape
>>2490033
Those brushstrokes looks really familiar, do you post often?
>>2490036
Brian Comfortizone reporting in
>>2490033
Not a fan of the weird, wavy, glossy look of the glass. Those white and dark greens shouldn't be horizontal, they should be vertical to portray the grass more clearly.
I'd like crits on this design of a soviet
>>2486367
the mouth is nice
Lines done, time to paint
